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Noisestorm - Solar [Approval]

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Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 03 de septiembre de 2012 at 09:22:57 p.m.

Artist: Noisestorm
Title: Solar
Tags: eoin o' broin dnb drum and bass
BPM: 175
Filesize: 7549kb
Play Time: 04:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Burning Trance (5 stars, 946 notes)
Download: Noisestorm - Solar
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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LIKE A PHOENIX!

THIS IS TRULY GOING FOR APPROVAL (?) But I need a Taiko Diff, so I accept a Taiko Guest Diff /:D/
Last edited by Mercurial , edited 69 times in total.
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
timing check

BPM:175,000 (Current)
Offset: 73 (+12 on current)

listo, a ver cuantas diff puedes juntar
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Ni en pedo xD
obama-FTW
88 posts
Joined September 2010
obama-FTW
i thought the writing was Uuuh~
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
No.
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Este map va por buen camino :P. Me gusta, hiciste patterns curvos y eso.
Necesita ser pulido un poco, en algunas partes de la cancion, pero no vas mal :)
Solo eso muy general, cuando este terminado me dare una vuelta para modearlo.
Y buee... ya te deje 3 Estrellas. Suerte capo!! :D
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Finished... waiting for mods! o/
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Here's my mod, I hope it will be useful:
SPOILER
00:09:158 - add hit circle (?)
00:09:844 - ^
00:37:101 (5) - I think something like this would look nicer http://puu.sh/oMH5
01:01:101 (2) - put it higher? (3) - lower
01:02:473 (5,6) - ^
01:06:244 (2,3,4,5) - I would put a bigger distance here
01:52:701 (1) - remove hit cirlce (I think it's unnecessary, and it fits better to the music if you remove it)
01:53:730 - add hit circle
01:57:501 (4) - put it one grid to the right
02:00:758 (1) - wouldn't this be nicer? http://puu.sh/oMNo
02:04:701 - add hit circle
02:10:015 - ^
02:52:701 - add hit circle maybe
02:57:330 (5) - remove maybe
02:58:015 - add hit circle (it fits the music, cuz it's as if you missed this one from the melody)
03:28:530 - add hit circle (it would be nice if the break started after this)
03:56:473 (2) - one grid to the left (?)
04:20:473 - add hit cirlce (?)
04:49:444 (1) - put this further from 04:49:273 (8) (the previous hit circles had a bigger distance from each other so it would be nice if that continued here)
Nice map!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Stuff.

To Remember.

Memories.
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[burning]
00:12:244 (8,9,10) - make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287766
00:58:873 (8,1) - distance may not fit ,And make them more beauty
01:38:644 (6) - end at 01:38:987

other seems fine.Good job.
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Hello :O

[Burning Trance]
00:00:930 (6) - Place it higher
SPOILER
00:02:130 (2) - maybe move to 00:02:301? Sounds better
00:03:673 (x) - add?
00:06:415 (3) - I'm geek
SPOILER
00:07:615 (2) - move to 00:07:787
00:09:158 (x) - add?
00:12:244 (x) - add!
00:13:615 (x) - ^
00:14:987 (3) - ^
00:15:844 (3) - Place it higher like a 00:15:158 (1) -
00:17:730 (7) - in all such places you must add it
00:17:901 (9) - move to another place
00:47:901 (x) - u need it ._.
00:53:558 (1,2,3,4) - reduce the volume ;_;
00:59:387 (2) - =>
SPOILER
01:10:015 (6,8) - wry
01:36:073 (1) - clap in the middle
01:51:244 (x) - add?
01:52:187 (5) - ^
01:57:673 (5) - ^
02:03:672 (1) - spacing
03:02:130 (4) - closer

Sorry
It's very hard for me
To 'speak' in engleash(

Good luck with this :roll:
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
IRC Mod!

Chatlog
01:23 <Kei> : pan con manteca
01:23 <iMercurial> : Bigote con caca.
01:23 <Kei> : AJAJAJA WTF
01:26 <iMercurial> : Cuando quieras.
01:27 <Kei> : Ahora bigot :3
01:36 <Kei> : Bigot?
01:36 <iMercurial> : Se, decime.
01:37 <Kei> : MOD TIME
01:37 <iMercurial> : Yo pensé que no encontrabas nada.
01:37 <iMercurial> : La puta madre.
01:37 <Kei> : JAJAJAJAJ
01:37 <iMercurial> : Bue, fué.
01:37 <Kei> : Yo pense que estabas Afk
01:37 <Kei> : por eso no te hable
01:37 <iMercurial> : Nah, tranqui.
01:37 <iMercurial> : Dale.
01:37 <iMercurial> : Kei: Bueno, deberías re-mappear todo.
01:37 <iMercurial> : Bue, andate a cagar (?
01:38 <Kei> : xD Nah lol
01:38 <Kei> : bueno
01:38 <iMercurial> : Dame tu mejor golpe.
01:38 <Kei> : :c el principio ese antes de que uses las claps le faltan samples, talvez podrias ponerles whistles a las notas porque suena muy como.. vacio
01:38 <iMercurial> : Me gusta así
01:39 <iMercurial> : Además, me inspiré en el mapa de Shiirn.
01:39 <iMercurial> : Y él no le puso nada a esa parte.
01:39 <iMercurial> : So, I'll keep it up.
01:39 <Kei> : Okay :3
01:39 <Kei> : 00:14:987 (3) - Nota ahi? :o
01:40 <iMercurial> : Seh.
01:41 <Kei> : Entonces 00:20:473 (5) - ahi tambien
01:41 <Kei> : 00:22:015 - y creo que suena bien si agregas tambien una nota ahi
01:41 <Kei> : tal vez con nc
01:41 <iMercurial> : Sí y no.
01:41 <iMercurial> : Sí a lo primero. No a lo segundo.
01:42 <iMercurial> : Sencillamente porque no suena bien lo segundo.
01:42 <Kei> : o.o Okay, ahmm
01:42 <Kei> : 00:41:901 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : ahi creo que deberias poner NC porque en 00:48:073 (1) - hiciste lo mismo
01:43 <iMercurial> : Lo hice porque en todos los sliders 1/1 lo hice.
01:43 <iMercurial> : Fijate.
01:43 <iMercurial> : Por ende, lo dejo así.
01:43 <Kei> : Oh
01:45 <Kei> : 01:16:530 (5) -
01:45 <Kei> : Claps en el segundo repeat? :o
01:45 <Kei> : se me ocurrio de la nada
01:45 <iMercurial> : No.
01:45 <iMercurial> : No sería consistente con el otro kickback slider.
01:45 <Kei> : o.o...
01:45 <iMercurial> : Además, sigo el ritmo con los demás claps.
01:45 <iMercurial> : So, no.
01:45 <Kei> : eso no tiene nada que ver me parece
01:45 <Kei> : pero okay
01:46 <Kei> : ehmm
01:47 <Kei> : 01:38:644 (6) - Finish al final ya que la cancion tambien tiene como enfasis ahi?
01:47 <iMercurial> : Done.
01:49 <Kei> : 02:10:958 (6,1) - Esto es posible de cliquear o.o?
01:49 <iMercurial> : Cookiezi.
01:49 <iMercurial> : (?
01:49 <Kei> : xD
01:49 <iMercurial> : Ehm... xD
01:49 <iMercurial> : Sí, es posible.
01:49 <iMercurial> : Testeado por SapphireGhost
01:49 <iMercurial> : Hernan y Salvage.
01:50 <Kei> : 02:09:673 (3) -
01:50 <Kei> : Te faltaron claps o fue aproposito?
01:51 <iMercurial> : Siempre me pregunté ese misterio, ahora lo agrego.
01:52 <iMercurial> : Saved for justice.
01:53 <Kei> : ok
01:53 <Kei> : ahora..
01:54 <Kei> : 02:43:101 - nota o.o?
01:54 <Kei> : se siente como vacio
01:54 <iMercurial> : Yo no lo veo así.
01:54 <Kei> : 01:37:273 - ahi tambien
01:54 <Kei> : pero bueno
01:54 <iMercurial> : En varias partes hice lo mismo
01:55 <Kei> : Lo se
01:55 <iMercurial> : Si alguien me lo remarca, ya sabré que hacer.
01:57 <Kei> : 04:49:958 (2) - Me parece algo confuso esto porque este tipo de jumps los hiciste con sliders 1/1 antes si no me equivoco o.o
01:58 <iMercurial> : Esos sliders son únicos.
01:58 <iMercurial> : Hay varios sliders copy-paste.
01:58 <iMercurial> : Pero esos no.
01:58 <iMercurial> : Y sí.
01:58 <iMercurial> : En algunos casos varía el jump 1/1
01:59 <iMercurial> : Los complimo en cuanto al tiempo y les meto 1 slider 1/2 más.
01:59 <iMercurial> : Y queda lindo :3
01:59 <Kei> : Wiii :3
01:59 <Kei> : 04:56:301 (1) - no suena mejor un normal-hitfinsih?
02:00 <iMercurial> : As you wish, my lady.
02:00 <Kei> : 04:53:558 (1,2) - Y y y y, no falta agregar Claps en el repeat del slider y en la nota 2?
02:01 <iMercurial> : Done.
02:02 <Kei> : Ahmm y creo que nada más, si alguien más te dice algo mas largo seguro es nazi porque el mapa está bien asi como está
02:03 <iMercurial> : Es que son todos putos y no les gusta la caca con bigote.
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
M4M =w=

Burning Trance
00:00:758 (5,6) - Shouldn't 5 like go 2 grids down and 6 3 grids up and 1 grid left?
00:02:815 (2,1) - Distance spacing is too smal >< Fix it :3
00:16:530 (1) - Put this more down so it won't overlap with slider 4
00:47:387 (5,6) - These circles overlap with Slider 1 D: Put somewhere else
00:53:558 (7,1) - Fix DS ><
01:36:415 (1,2) - Where is the clap? D:
02:11:044 (6,1) - Distance spacing is waaay too big >< Fix :c
02:41:901 (1) - Euh, put this more to the right so it will fit with the other circles
02:43:701 (8,9) - How about here a circle and at 02:43:787 a 1/4 slider
02:44:388 (6,7) - ^
03:05:901 (5,1) - WHAAT O_O Fix DS D:
04:11:044 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^

Good luck c:
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix
Okay. FriendMod~

General:

  1. Change the PreviewTime to 142701.
  2. Find a Taiko mapper for make a Taiko Diff.. Maybe Hikato (?
[]
HitSounds:
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - Add a Whistle
  2. 00:00:587 (4) - ^
  3. 00:00:930 (6) - Add a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
  4. 00:01:444 (1) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider
  5. 00:02:130 (2) - ^
  6. 00:03:500 (5) - Add a Whistle
  7. 00:04:530 (3) - ^
  8. 00:04:873 (4) - Add a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
  9. 00:06:073 (2) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider
  10. 00:06:930 (1) - ^
  11. 00:07:615 (2) - ^
  12. 00:08:301 (1) - Add a Whistle
  13. 00:08:644 (3) - Add a Whistle to the End of the Slider
Burning Trance:
  1. 00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move this pattern to x:72|y:56 [Grid lvl: 4]. This is for make a symmetry with the note (6) & (2). After of this move the note 00:00:758 (5) to x:256|y:272 [Grid lvl: 3]
  2. 00:02:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern Nº1 [00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,5)] And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J - Don't forget add the NC And erase the Whistle from the note 00:03:329 (4).
  3. 00:05:730 (1,2,3) - This Pattern is B.A.D. Try This 
    00:05:730 (1) - x:204|y:268 / 00:06:073 (2) - x:128|y:208 / 00:06:415 (3) - x:96|y:120 [All in Grid lvl: 3]
  4. 00:06:415 (3) - Add a Repeat - If you will add It. put a Whistle in the Repeat and End of the Slider
  5. 00:09:158 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:10:015 (3) - Add NC
  7. 00:10:358 (4) - Move this note to x:256|y:328 [Grid lvl: 3]
  8. 00:10:701 (5) - Put a Copy-pasta with the note 00:10:015 (3) And make a Ctrl+H
  9. 00:11:044 (1,2) - Move this Notes to x:90|y:128 [Grid lvl: OFF] Is for make a Symmetry with the end of the Slider 00:09:330 (5). Look This
  10. 00:11:558 (x) - Add a note in x:256|y:136
  11. 00:11:730 (4,5,6,7,8) - If you make the Symmetry of the Previous-Previous Advice [00:11:044 (1,2)] Move this Pattern to x:345|y:68 [Grid lvl: OFF] After of have the pattern moved. put the notes in a Vertical row.. Like This But Don't use the Distance Snap. Because the first note are Unsgridded.
  12. 00:12:330 (9,10,1) - This is so Confused. Please try make This 
    00:12:330 (1,2) - x:448|y:280 / 00:12:587 (3) - x:344|y:248 [All in Grid lvl: 3]
  13. 00:13:101 (4,5,6,7,8) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:11:730 (4,5,6,7,8) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J
  14. 00:13:701 (9) - Move this note to x:168|y:64 [Grid lvl: 3]
  15. 00:13:958 (1) - Move this note to x:296|y:48 [Grid lvl: 3]
  16. 00:14:473 (2) - Move this note to x:456|y:304 [Grid lvl: 3]
  17. 00:14:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this Pattern to x:332|y:148 [Grid lvl: 3] And move the note 00:15:501 (3) To the center (x:256|y:192 [Grid lvl: 3])
  18. 00:16:530 (1) - Move this note to x:128|y:316 [Grid lvl: OFF] Is for make a Symmetry if you move the note 00:14:473 (2)
  19. 00:17:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make This
  20. 00:18:587 (2,3,4,5,6) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:17:215 (2,3,4,5,6) And put a Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R
  21. 00:20:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:14:987 (1,2,3,4,5) [Only if you changed to my Last Suggestion] And move the pattern to x:333|y:306
  22. 00:22:015 (x) - Add a note in the same place of the Last note. Put a NC and a Finish.
  23. 00:43:273 (10) - Erase this Slider And make a Copy-pasta with the Slider 00:42:587 (8) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+R
  24. 00:44:644 (2) - Erase this Slider And make a Copy-pasta with the Slider 00:43:958 (1) And put Ctrl+H & Ctrl+J
  25. 00:57:673 (1) - Move this note to x:360|y:64 [Grid lvl: 3]
  26. 00:58:016 (3) - Move this note to x:332|y:244 [Grid lvl: 4]
  27. 00:58:187 (4) - Move this note to The same place of the object 00:57:330 (6)
  28. 00:58:358 (5,6,7,8) - Erase this Pattern. And make a Copy-pasta with the pattern 00:57:673 (1,2,3,4) And put a Ctrl+H
  29. 01:01:444 (3) - Move this note to x:256|y:276 [Grid lvl: 4]
  30. 01:01:787 (4) - Move this note to x:176|y:192 [Grid lvl: 4]
  31. 01:02:473 (5) - Move this note to The same place of the object 01:01:444 (3)
  32. 01:37:958 (7) - lol, I think this note is Out the Stream. Move this more close from the previous note.
  33. 01:51:844 (3,4,2) - Dude' Why you never Centrate this.
  34. 02:20:644 (5,6) - Nope.
Todo lo que sigue seria lo mismo de mover notas everywhere de aqui para alla pero pienso que de ahora hasta el final los lugares estan bien para si. So...
Good map. Bad places. Good Patterns. Bad Symmetry.
Si tienes dudas o quieres que el Mod sea mas largo por IRC mandame un PM In-Game y hablaremos al respecto ^^
PD: Star~
como quisiera tener una GD aqui.
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
[BURNIN]
00:17:730 - You may want to add a note here, I don't see the off-rhythm here as beneficial.
00:19:101 - ^
00:20:473 - Yeah not mapping kicks is a bad idea.
00:32:473 (7) - I don't personally find these fun to read. If you're going for stream jumps might as well space them out then and then crl-r
00:44:644 (2) - try to space these two mirrored sliders out a bit more but retaining symmetry so 00:45:330 (3) isn't so close.
01:05:901 (1) - What happned to this hitsounds to this entire section?
01:27:844 (1,2) - Space these out for the reason previously mentioned.
02:22:015 (9,10,11) - Erm yeah.
03:26:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is not readable without a higher AR.

There are parts of the map that is really solid, but there are others where I don't really know what to say. Overall, a little too many mirrored sliders. I guess you were going for that circular "Solar" feel but there is a point where these get a little over-done.

Nothing else much to say.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Dax, quiero tener hijos con vos ♥
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Hmm, nada mal, solo no me gusta el hecho de que muchos patrones son similares a los usados en la version de shiirn, deberias diferenciar mas este map de los otros versiones :>
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
En realidad, me inspiré mucho en el mapa de Shiirn, pero todo lo que vez es obra de 5 o 6 días de puro esfuerzo y como 4 o 5 horas de mapping por día.

En cuanto al estilo, me gusta así, gracias por la reseña, pero me gustaría más que fuera un mod para hacer un poco más consistente lo que decís vos.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue~

Burning Trance
  1. 00:03:844 (1) - I'd like to add a slider following :), heard better
  2. 00:09:158 (4) - consider to remove it?
  3. 00:09:844 - and then add a note here?
  4. 00:32:301 (6) - add a nc here because of the change of rhythm ?
  5. 00:37:101 (5,6,7) - the beats here is weird because 00:37:787 - should be a note or start a slider, but now ur slider is cut by that.suggest to make a little change:
  6. 00:38:987 (4,5,1) - here's also the same problem that u beats is against the music. Pay attention to the downbeat at 00:39:844 (2) - , here should be a start but not middle of a combo, and listen to the main melody from 00:38:987, i suppose it's better to change the beat like:
  7. All right.. the following parts still has similar issues that i really don't recommend to overuse 1/2 beats, despite they're easy to put, that's not very suit for the music. Now when i mod through ur map, the sense u make me felt is " i wanna make a map hard enough, jumps and streams and blabla so on", but not "i wanna make a map which can express the feeling of music". Anyway, till here, it's a good map that if u wanna a rank that's really enough, even better than many others. However, imo, for app means make a map inspired but not only longer and harder than normal ranked map. Shiirn's solar is a great map not due to the difficulty but the sense he expressed. i'm not ask u to follow his beats or patterns but i think u can learn something from that.
  8. 00:48:587 - i'd like to add a note here, and also 00:49:273 -
  9. 01:00:930 - here're some blanks but no change in music, so maybe u'd better consider here again. Compared with, 01:05:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is really a good use of blanks.
  10. 01:21:501 - still suggest to add note and some other similar place, won't mention it again :)
  11. 01:37:273 - add a note?
  12. 02:09:673 (3) - i'd like to reduce 2 repeats and add note at 02:10:015 - & 02:10:187 -
  13. 02:35:730 (5,6) - imo, this stack may break ur flow so consider to make them like this?
  14. 02:41:215 (5,6,7,8) - two sliders is better than notes here imo.
  15. 03:05:558 (5,1) - omg this jmp is....it must be madness....
  16. 04:10:873 - add a note here?
  17. 04:54:758 - ^
that's all and gl :)
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
/from Queue

[General]

none

[Burning Trance]

00:00:758 (5,6) - try CTRL+R and adjust the place
00:11:730 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try http://puu.sh/pwgU and the same as following rhythm
00:59:387 (2) - try http://puu.sh/pwhK
01:00:073 (4) - try http://puu.sh/pwhS
01:26:473 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/pwih
01:29:215 (1,2,3,4) - leave with each other. Try not overlap


Basically I'm not going to continue. Just one advice and I hope you can change your map based on it. :)

"Try not overlap part of the notes." That will make your map looks messy. And what you need to do is to make your map clean. :P

That's all and good luck! :D
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi ^^ ;)

Burning Trance
00:01:958 - maybe add note
00:06:758 - ^
00:07:444 - ^
00:09:330 - make this slider double or add note on 00:09:673
00:15:844(4) make it symmetric to a slider *2*
00:17:044 - add note and blue section too
00:21:330(4) - make it symmetric to a slider *2*
00:30:930 - between 5 and 7 notes and 6 and 8 you have other distance rather than in all line ;)
00:44:473 - add note
00:45:330 - make distance identical http://puu.sh/pwHz
00:59:044(1,2) - i think this looks better http://puu.sh/pwIb
00:59:730(3,4) - ^
01:01:273 - add note
01:02:644 - ^
01:26:987 - ^
01:28:358 - ^
02:00:415(4,5,1) - correct spacing in this place
02:04:530 - add note or prolong slider
02:08:644 - add note
02:34:187 - ^
03:22:187 - ^
04:01:958 - ^
04:45:844 - ^

You have identical distance between notes on streams and usual notes. I would advise to make smaller distance on streams or bigger on usual notes. Bcz with the identical spacing it is very difficult to distinguish stream and usual notes
Good luck ^^
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
request from All map will be modded

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


Burning Trance

  1. 00:12:330 (9) - Pay attention to listen to the music,this note should be at 00:12:244
  2. 00:13:701 (7) - It is overmap,you can increase a reserve and move it to 00:13:615
  3. 01:01:101 (2,3) - I think they are not good because of the short spacing,maybe change to this pattern ?
  4. 01:02:473 (5,6) - change to this pattern ?
  5. 01:53:215 (3) - I think you should add NC because of the short spacing
  6. 02:33:673 (1,2) - I prefer you can change the pattern to this
  7. 02:43:444 (5) - move it to (x:152,y:280) will be prettier
  8. 02:43:701 (8) - I don't like this lol !! please change it to two notes.. orz
  9. 02:44:387 (6) - same as above
  10. 03:05:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - oh this part... orz,decrease spacing between them will be better...
  11. 03:50:473 (1) - orz orz orz orz orz,same as above
  12. 04:55:615 (1) - ....what the lol,don't make this kind of spacing here.It is too crazy... orz


good luck
:)
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hi o/

[Burning Trance]


00:12:244 (9,10,1) - I'm sure you did this on purpose,but still,this can confuse a lot of people with this antijump. Maybe it's better to make the spacing between these notes larger,without using the antijump
01:05:558 (3) - Put the start of this slider where the slider 01:04:530 (1) - ends
01:28:358 - Add a note right in the middle of the screen?
02:24:073 (2) - Uhh,this note is hidden,and the players may not see this because of the high speed of the map. It's only a suggestion,because y'know,I'm not really good at playing,but you can change the pattern to fix this.
04:19:615 (2,3) - Put this pattern 5 grids up?
04:28:187 (8) - Without using the grid snap,move this upper until its start matches with 04:27:501 (6) -

Good work,maybe you need just a bit of work on the pattern but for the rest good map!
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
Hi~ :)
These are all suggestion.

[Burning Trance]
Because these are AR9, somehow it is possible to read.
But spacing of them are very hard to read.

00:01:101 (6)　　　　　remove whistle on reverse arrow
00:06:687 (3)　　　　　add whistle on slider's end
00:12:244 (9)~(10)　Hard to read. I suggest stack to (1).
00:13:101 (2)　　　　　This anti-jumping is very confusing.
00:30:244 (1)~(8)　　How about this?
SPOILER
00:44:644 (2)　　　　　copy&paste (1). Ctrl+H Ctrl+J
02:23:901 (1),(2)　　Switch New combo. If possible I suggest design changes.
04:10:873 (x)　　　　　add note
That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXX.XXXBURNING TRANCE
SPOILER
  1. I think moving that ball (the sun probably) on your BG to the center of the screen would be better.

  2. 00:35:044 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is actually weird for me. I suggest you make other more.

  3. 01:12:244 (5,6) - CTRL + R.

  4. 01:22:358 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern again..

  5. 01:29:215 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Please fix them. (http://puu.sh/q3mU)

  6. 01:37:101 (2) - Please make the distance between the previous and next slider of this note equal.

  7. 01:52:873 (2) - This would be very hard to read, i mean the spacing.

  8. 01:54:244 (3) - Inconsistent spacing from previous and next note. Look at the spaces: http://puu.sh/q3o5

  9. 02:36:415 (Whole Combo) - Weird combo. Can't you think of a good one? :O

  10. 02:54:244 - ^

  11. 03:03:501 - Weird spacing for the next note.

  12. 03:24:073 - One grid to the right.

  13. 03:26:815 - The whole song part is easy, then suddenly this pattern.. O.O Try to scale these notes down.

  14. 04:04:187 - This pattern again..

  15. 04:37:101 - And again..

  16. 04:42:244 - I'm not really in favor on this pattern, but anyway, move this note 1 grid down.

  17. 04:49:273 - Move this away from the next note. Make the spacing consistent.

  18. 04:50:815 (1,2) - One grid down.

  19. 04:56:301 - I believe this kiai time should be at 04:56:387. lol
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