1. Since hoLysoup has done this difficulty, you should rename it "hoLysoup's Normal".
2. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :
   
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3. 01:00:765 (1) - I'd not do a 2/1 slider here. Like what you did for other patterns, you should follow the vocals and use a 1/1 slider (or circles, depending on what you want to do). Like this :
   
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4. 01:16:428 (1) - For the same reason as before, I would end this spinner 1/1 earlier. (and start the break at the spot where the spinner ended before).
   
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5. 03:04:080 (1) - Same as 01:00:765 (1).

1. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :
   
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2. 01:16:346 (1) - ^
3. 01:57:285 (5) - I see why you put its end on a blue tick, but it actually plays and sounds quite awkward. You should end it at 01:57:616. ( 1/4 earlier ). It fits really better.

1. In my opinion, AR9 doesn't fit for this song so I'd use AR8.
2. 00:09:716 (6) - There is nothing that need to be mapped at 00:09:882. So I don't see why you have done a slider here, just remove it and put a circle at 0:09:716.
3. 01:16:346 (1) - As in Normal and Hard, reduce this spinner by 1/1 and start the break at 01:18:998.

Kurai wrote:

Hello ~ !

[Hard]

1. 00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this : sorry.. but I really think it sounds better ending where it does now..
   
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2. 01:16:346 (1) - ^ ^
3. 01:57:285 (5) - I see why you put its end on a blue tick, but it actually plays and sounds quite awkward. You should end it at 01:57:616. ( 1/4 earlier ). It fits really better. ok changed~

[Insane]

1. In my opinion, AR9 doesn't fit for this song so I'd use AR8. I want to keep AR 9
2. 00:09:716 (6) - There is nothing that need to be mapped at 00:09:882. So I don't see why you have done a slider here, just remove it and put a circle at 0:09:716. im mapping the vocal "na" here..
3. 01:16:346 (1) - As in Normal and Hard, reduce this spinner by 1/1 and start the break at 01:18:998. :(

Kurai wrote:

Hello ~ !

[Normal]
Since hoLysoup has done this difficulty, you should rename it "hoLysoup's Normal". I don't really mind. If Mythol wants to change the diff name he's free to do it. I have other Guest Diffs that just say 'hoLysoup'
00:10:047 (1) - Since there is a "drum stream" 1/1 earlier you should end this spinner here (00:12:368). Otherwise its end sounds too late. You should also start the break at 00:10:047 like this :

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ok no that makes the spinner very awkward when it doesn't end on the downbeat.
01:00:765 (1) - I'd not do a 2/1 slider here. Like what you did for other patterns, you should follow the vocals and use a 1/1 slider (or circles, depending on what you want to do). Like this :

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This is true. However, if I wanted to follow the vocals here it would break the beautiful symmetrical slider that comes after AND I would have to use 4 circles instead of 3 because the vocals stretches out to 4 syllables. so no change here. Plus, it's much easier to play this simple diff when simply tracing sliders.
01:16:428 (1) - For the same reason as before, I would end this spinner 1/1 earlier. (and start the break at the spot where the spinner ended before). same reason as above

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03:04:080 (1) - Same as 01:00:765 (1). same reason as above
sorry, no changes made.