Melophobia wrote:

[Extream]
01:08:472 (5) - This note cannot be muted, move green line to 01:08:553 - Fix
01:08:553 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. OK I use soft sampleset.
01:30:526 (1) - Better to use 0.75x instead. this is pretty confusing imo not only because change of slider speed is sudden but because 0.5x looks the same as 1.0x sliders. anyway it's fitting very well with the song so it's up to you. hm.. keeping now
01:35:715 (1) - ^ ^

[Adcanced]
00:51:445 - Since there's an extra bass drum in this section, add a note here? add note :3
01:08:472 (1) - Since spinner end doesnt follow anything, it would be better to remove finish. also use soft sampleset instead. same as above
01:48:364 (5,6,7,8) - Change them into a kick slider? there's no long stream like this elsewhere so it's much harder than the rest of difficulty~ Fix ~

[Basic]
00:21:769 (1) - This spinner is too loud compared with other diffs. try to mute it OK

[Beginner]
00:13:985 (3) - This combo is kinda long, so how about adding newcombo here? OK add newcombo
00:37:337 (1,2,3) - Considering that This difficulty is based on 1/1 of whitetick, This is too hard for beginners imo, change them into a slider or at least change (2,3) to a slider. hm.. keeping now.
00:41:229 (2,3) - for the same reason as above, CTRL+G for better rhythm and adjust placement. there wont be much difference but it will be much easier for beginners to get 300 well.. Fix that

Nice first map. Fix whatever you want and call me back for a recheck

Melophobia wrote:

Rechecked via IRC, and we added a spinner in the Beginner diff and fixed some minor stuff. And now everything looks fine to me! great first map :3

log

21:46 Melophobia: Hello :3
21:46 Dark Fang: Hello
21:46 Melophobia: i would like to ask you a quiestion before rechecking
21:47 Melophobia: there's no spinner in Beginner diff, but i think it would be best if you could find a way to add one
21:47 Melophobia: what do you think?
21:47 Dark Fang: hm...
21:48 Dark Fang: OK I will add spinner in Beginner diff
21:48 Melophobia: Thanks :3
21:48 Melophobia: i will rebubble after rechecking
21:48 Melophobia: i think Garven will do the rest
21:48 Dark Fang: i think too
21:57 Melophobia: sorry, i would like to recheck via irc now
21:57 Melophobia: do you have some time to do?
21:57 Dark Fang: OK
21:58 Melophobia: in Extreme
21:58 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (4) - Finish is too loud, whistle is better imo
22:00 Melophobia: in Basic
22:00 Melophobia: 00:01:013 (1) - Finish
22:00 Melophobia: 00:06:202 (1) - ^
22:01 Melophobia: everything else looks fine now, i will recheck again after fixes
22:02 Dark Fang: OK all fix
22:02 Melophobia: update please :3
22:02 Dark Fang: upload ~.
22:03 Dark Fang: wut.. I got an error
22:03 Dark Fang: stopping at 22.2%
22:03 Melophobia: maybe restart osu!?
22:03 Dark Fang: OK
22:03 Melophobia: i have gotten it once
22:03 Melophobia: yeah
22:04 Dark Fang: Finish ~
22:04 Melophobia: ok!
22:04 Dark Fang: btw I really thank you ~ :3
22:04 Melophobia: my pleasure :3
22:05 Melophobia: ah
22:05 Melophobia: 00:21:769 (1) -
22:05 Melophobia: need to be muted
22:05 Melophobia: in Beginner
22:05 Dark Fang: oh
22:06 Dark Fang: update ~ thank you for checking sound xD
22:06 Melophobia: hm
22:07 Melophobia: i think the following notes appear too suddenly
22:07 Melophobia: considering the level of this difficulty
22:07 Melophobia: i mean 00:24:364 (1) -
22:08 Dark Fang: Can I replace near by spinner?
22:08 Melophobia: nah just uneasy about recovery time
22:08 Melophobia: maybe
22:08 Melophobia: end the spinner at 00:23:067 - instead?
22:09 Dark Fang: hmm.. that's great
22:09 Melophobia: update it once again please
22:10 Dark Fang: update
22:11 Melophobia: ok

Rebubbled!
Enjoy my first bubble

W h i t e wrote:

congratz~ :3

haha5957 wrote:

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