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Tsukasa - Accelerator

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meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 01, 2012 at 2:34:28 AM

Artist: Tsukasa
Title: Accelerator
Source: Touhou
Tags: colors utsuho reiuji nuclear fusion techno redalice lunarsakuya
BPM: 186
Filesize: 9453kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Maximum (5 stars, 724 notes)
  2. Moderate (3 stars, 236 notes)
  3. Sakuya's Heavy (4.98 stars, 499 notes)
Download: Tsukasa - Accelerator
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you everyone

Moderate - Done !
Sakuya's Heavy - Done !
Maximum - Done !

- wallpaper & skin edited by me
- thanks LunarSakuya for hard guest diff.

Last Full Submit: 7/1
Last edited by meiikyuu , edited 48 times in total.
Makar
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Makar

[General]

  1. There is no need for two acceleratorbg1.pngs. You can just delete the SB folder then edit the storyboard so that it uses the main bg instead of the bg in the SB folder.
  2. Kiai needs to be consistent is all diffs... there is no Kiai in Moderation o.o
  3. Disable letterboxing during breaks because of the SB.

[Moderation]

  1. The SV seems a bit high for the easiest diff... But that's not worth the trouble to fix. For easier difficulties, 1.0 spacing is best, using something lower can be confusing because your mouse moves faster on sliders than it does between circles if you know what I mean. No need to change but you should keep that in mind for future reference.
  2. 00:34:268 (3) - In general its a bad idea to use more than one repeat on the easiest diff because its unexpected to most people, even experienced players.
  3. 00:51:687 (1,3,7,4) - You can add some white points to these to make neat looking sliders http://puu.sh/lCYJ http://puu.sh/lCZm
  4. 01:42:010 (4) - Same as mentioned before about multi-repeat sliders (By the way, the longer ones that happen after the break are fine in my opinion because there is plenty of time for the player to see the next repeat).
  5. 02:33:623 (2) - Change to a spinner? I'm sure this will cause a lot of combo breaks ._.

[Maximum]

  1. 03:32:333 (5) - This slider is hidden by (3). This is considered unrankable in most cases, so I would suggest shifting it a few grids right/down so its visible while playing.
  2. Overall I like this diff, so nothing really to point out from me =w=
Rare
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Joined August 2010
Rare
All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

no kds pls. this modding is free gift lol

Moderation
  • AR-1
    00:35:558 (3,4) - very hard to see stack on easy
    01:24:913 (5,1) - ^
    01:39:752 (1) - remove new combo
    01:53:784 - I felt low volume. I prefer to higher 50%.
    02:19:349 (1) - move to 02:19:429 -
    02:28:462 (2) - spacing
    02:29:752 (1,2,3) - very hard to see stack on easy
    02:31:042 (1,2,3) - ^
Maximum
  • 00:18:945 (6) - add new combo
    00:23:945 (1) - remove new combo
    00:29:752 (5) - add new combo
    00:56:526 (2) - add whistle
    01:27:816 (6) - add new combo then 01:28:784 (1) - remove new combo
    01:30:397 (5) - copy next slider then Ctrl+V,H,J
    01:31:929 (x) - add note?
    01:36:526 (3) - this end slider has touched HP bar
    02:31:042 (5) - add new combo
    02:33:623 (9) - add new combo then 02:33:865 (1) - remove new combo
    02:40:881 (1) - removen new combo
    03:15:800 (1) - remove new combo then 03:16:204 (6) - add new combo
    03:12:494 - 03:14:752 - you should use slider. too many notes i think.
    03:33:945 (6) - spacing
Faust
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Faust
Doesn't look too bad.
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

R a r e wrote:

All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

no kds pls. this modding is free gift lol

Moderation
  • AR-1
    00:35:558 (3,4) - very hard to see stack on easy
    01:24:913 (5,1) - ^
    01:39:752 (1) - remove new combo
    01:53:784 - I felt low volume. I prefer to higher 50%.
    02:19:349 (1) - move to 02:19:429 -
    02:28:462 (2) - spacing
    02:29:752 (1,2,3) - very hard to see stack on easy
    02:31:042 (1,2,3) - ^
Maximum
  • 00:18:945 (6) - add new combo
    00:23:945 (1) - remove new combo
    00:29:752 (5) - add new combo
    00:56:526 (2) - add whistle
    01:27:816 (6) - add new combo then 01:28:784 (1) - remove new combo
    01:30:397 (5) - copy next slider then Ctrl+V,H,J
    01:31:929 (x) - add note?
    01:36:526 (3) - this end slider has touched HP bar
    02:31:042 (5) - add new combo
    02:33:623 (9) - add new combo then 02:33:865 (1) - remove new combo
    02:40:881 (1) - removen new combo
    03:15:800 (1) - remove new combo then 03:16:204 (6) - add new combo
    03:12:494 - 03:14:752 - you should use slider. too many notes i think.
    03:33:945 (6) - spacing
u sure no kd? D: ..well thanks a lot for the mod ^^ i will follow ur rules completely next time ~
StarStream
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Joined October 2010
StarStream
Maximum:
01:18:945 a bit louder? I can barely hear the hits ...
01:20:074 Maybe change to fallow the music like you did @01:17:494
02:45:236 nothing serious, but transition from soft to normal sounds a bit sudden.
02:59:429 mapping seems a bit plain. Go for something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/mEa2
03:36:526 You always map a pair of triples, why not here?
03:33:786 adjust for equal spacing?
I might be wrong here, but KIAI time has to be equal in all diffs iirc
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Shadoras wrote:

Maximum:
01:18:945 a bit louder? I can barely hear the hits ...
01:20:074 Maybe change to fallow the music like you did @01:17:494
02:45:236 nothing serious, but transition from soft to normal sounds a bit sudden.
02:59:429 mapping seems a bit plain. Go for something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/mEa2
03:36:526 You always map a pair of triples, why not here?
03:33:786 adjust for equal spacing?
I might be wrong here, but KIAI time has to be equal in all diffs iirc
thanks a lot for the mod ^^, the puush was useful too. i didnt change anything on that part for now but i will take that into consideration :)
Tshemmp
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Joined June 2011
Tshemmp
General:
Wow! All the skin elements look really cool! Great job!

Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.
So set the kiai time in Moderation the same way as in Maximum (or vice versa, but this wouldn't actually make sense). I don't see any reason why you shouldn't do that.

This is a song from Touhou. There are so many tags you could add, i.e. "Touhou 11 Subterranean Animism Final Stage Utsuho Reiuji Nuclear Fusion". You should really add some.

Maximum:
OD +1?

00:28:139 - (6) and (7) you should either stack them directly under the end of (5) or use normal distance spacing. It is playable without problems, but it looks uggly imo.
00:33:381 - (3) delete, neither does this stream fit to the song, nor is it fun to play after all the circles before
00:37:655 - (3), (4), (5) you should move this stream somewhere else, it is too close to (6). You can place it on the head of (6), too.
00:40:881 - (7) waaah, this jump out of nowhere. I suggest selecting (7), (8), (9), (10), hitting ctrl+r and adjusting the spacing.
02:35:236 - meh, why a break here? I want to play this part of the song. Would be nice, if you could map something here.
03:44:268 - same as the first point I mentioned
03:53:784 - same as the third point I mentioned

I like that diff really much (probably because of AR 9). Good job.

Moderation:
This is a Normal diff, right (patterns and SV look so)? Set AR 5 then. An AR of 2 with a SV of 1.0x on 186 bpm plays really bad. You shouldn't underestimate normal players. For most of them normal AR is easier to read than slow AR.
Also increase HP-Drain and OD to 4.

00:34:268 - (3) sliders with 2 repeats play bad nearly in all cases. Especialy for normal players the second repeat will come to surprising. You could change it to this for example: http://puu.sh/nqPN.
00:51:687 - (7) NC
00:56:849 - (11) maybe NC here, but I am not sure
01:19:591 - (1) again a double repeat that doesn't play well. I know, it fits perfectly to the music and I can't think of something else, but I just wanted to point out that this could be a problem for normal players.
01:23:623 - (2) move to x=168 y=92 (it looks better together with (1) then)
01:34:913 - (1) remove NC?
01:53:784 - unused Ineriting Section
02:19:429 - spacing between (4) and (1) is too low, between (1) and (2) it is too high
02:30:397 - (1) remove NC
02:31:687 - ^
03:11:849 - (1) This might be too hard to play (note is on a red tick). I suggest this on 03:10:720: http://puu.sh/nqZr.

The sliders in this diff look very nice.
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
thanks, updated :)
Faust
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Faust
Please note that tags update only with a full-submission.
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

Faust wrote:

Please note that tags update only with a full-submission.
ok. thanks ~
popner
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popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

You'd better to add a Normal or Hard with about 4.5☆ and 7-9M score, so the diff spread will be more smooth. Many player can not pass Maximum, but they will find Moderation too easy for them.

[Moderation]

Why not fully map it?
01:31:042 (1) - put it to 304,148 so it will near the center of screen? (because it close to spinner end)
01:51:687 (1) - ^

[Maximum]

Not so many jumps so use AR8?
00:34:752 (1) - move 2 grid left? http://puu.sh/qam1
01:02:978 (7,8) - unexpected change in distance
01:50:397 (5,6) - change to this rhythm? http://puu.sh/qanq
02:41:365 (4) - use 2 white point with long slider? so it will get a better shape: http://puu.sh/qaoR
03:14:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - manually unstack the long stack stream? like this: http://puu.sh/qaqV

That's all I can find. GL~
those
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Joined November 2010
those
m4m? \:3/

[General]
You can delete the SB folder and that 1.25MB picture that's in it to save some space, since you're using the same picture just scaled down to 5/8 of the size. Try this for the few lines in the storyboard:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"acceleratorbg1.png",320,240
 F,0,113623,114913,1,0
 S,0,113623,114913,0.625,1.25
 F,0,154913,156849,1,0
 S,0,154913,156849,0.625,1.875
Though, you might want to consider more than two sets of events if you're going to storyboard :3 I recommend you have this pulse at the following times in addition to what you already have:
00:20:720,
01:12:333,
01:32:978,
03:16:204,
03:57:494.
If you need help to storyboard this pulse at these times, you can ask me anytime :D/
Tags aren't consistent across all difficulties, please fix.
Combo colours aren't the same across all difficulties - intentional?

[Moderation]
00:31:042 (5) - NC
00:32:978 (1) - RNC
01:07:816 (2) - Sticks to (1) a bit. Consider rotating (1) so that the sliders don't touch?
01:11:042 (1) - Really should start this at 01:12:333 for the synth.
01:15:881 (2) - Pull off the grid to x:146 y:186 for better spacing? Stack 01:17:171 (1) - with this though.
01:17:171 (1) - RNC
01:17:494 (2) - NC
01:22:655 (1) - nazi about blanketing, try middle white point at x:80 y:144 for a better blanket.
02:32:333 (4) - NC
02:32:978 (1) - RNC
03:04:913 (1) - RNC
03:05:881 (2) - NC

[Maximum]
00:31:042 (6) - NC
00:31:849 (1) - RNC
00:32:171 (3) - NC
00:33:139 (1) - RNC
00:33:623 (4) - NC
00:36:204 (6) - NC
00:41:365 (10) - Clap really stands out and is kinda awkward. Consider removing, or turning into a Finish.
00:50:397 (8,9,10,11) - The pattern right down the middle is kinda awkward, try something like this: http://puu.sh/qhOc. You may have to rearrange 00:51:687 (1,2) - to flow better afterwards, however.
00:53:945 (1) - RNC
00:54:268 (2) - NC
00:56:204 (1) - RNC
00:56:849 (3) - NC
00:58:139 (10) - NC
00:58:784 (1) - RNC
01:00:720 (5,6,7,8) - A pattern like this may be more interesting: http://puu.sh/qhQO.
01:09:429 (1) - RNC
01:09:752 (3) - NC
01:11:365 (1) - RNC
01:14:591 (1) - RNC
01:14:913 (3) - NC
01:16:849 (1) - RNC
01:17:494 (3) - NC
01:20:074 (8) - NC
01:23:300 (1) - RNC
01:25:236 (7) - NC
01:26:365 (1) - RNC
01:38:139 (8) - NC
01:40:720 (8) - NC
01:41:204 (1) - RNC
01:41:526 (2) - NC {based on 01:38:945 (1,2,3) - }
01:42:171 (5) - NC
02:40:881 (1) - RNC
02:42:655 (5) - NC
02:50:397 (7) - NC
03:15:558 (9) - NC
03:15:800 (1) - RNC
03:16:204 (6) - NC
03:17:171 (1) - RNC
03:23:945 (10) - NC
03:29:107 (9) - NC
03:40:397 (2,3) - Reverse rhythm (make (2) circle and (3) slider)) and rearrange for spacing.
03:52:333 (6) - NC

Sorry for pestering you about combos, but these are strong suggestions based on 4/4 rhythm.
Good luck :3
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
P-P-P-P-P-PILLBUGS?!

General
- The bg is 1.25 mb, recompress it so that it's under 1mb
- Do the same for pause-overlay
- The gray color feels dull, the map is all sparkly and shit
- Kiai times need to be the same for every diff, looks like Normal is missing the end
- Only 2 diffs? Get another one

Moderation
00:31:042 (5) - Have the slider end at 00:32:010, then start a new slider at 00:32:333 and end at 00:32:978 (1) delete the note btw
00:40:558 (2) - Add finish at end
01:07:816 (2) - Move away so it's not touching the other slider
01:16:204 (3) - Replace by copy and pasting (1), and adjust
01:36:526 (3,4) - Make a slider instead, use (2)
01:52:655 (3) - Make more even, grid view of 3 helps
02:09:107 (5) - NC
02:11:687 (1) - Delete NC
02:28:462 (2) - Spacing, Ctrl + R and adjust
02:32:978 (1) - Delete NC
02:53:945 (4) - Delete note, doesnt fit this part
03:12:333 (6) - Try to make more even
01:43:945 (2,3) - Spacing
03:09:107 (2,3) - Spacing, too far

Maximum
- lots of notes could be spaced out more, i feel like you're restricting your self to distance snap or something

00:31:042 (6) - NC, and delete NC from the next note
00:32:333 (4,5,6) - Triplet sounds and feels funny
00:32:816 (8,9,1,2) - Try to make a perfect diamond out of these
00:33:623 (4) - Put farther away, vary your spacing to match the song tone
00:36:204 (6,7,8,1) - Ctrl + R these separately
00:41:365 (10) - Delete clap, add finish instead
00:50:236 (7) - Move out to the left more so that it doesnt touch that slider
00:50:397 (8) - NC
00:53:945 (1) - Delete NC and put NC on next note
00:56:849 (3) - NC
00:59:429 (4) - NC and remove NC on the next note
01:01:284 - Add note somehow
01:02:816 (6) - NC to indicate sudden spacing change
01:08:784 (10) - Ctrl + R, better flow
01:12:171 - Add note
01:20:074 (8) - NC?
01:24:752 (5) - Use the same shape as (4)
01:30:397 (5) - move down more so that it blankets (4) http://puu.sh/qiij
01:32:978 (1) - Don't angle this, looks kinda retarded
01:52:171 (3) - Add finish
02:01:365 (2) - NC
02:04:107 (1) - Extend slider to 02:06:526
02:27:171 (5) - NC
02:33:623 (9) - NC here instead of in the middle of the stream
02:44:913 (9) - Move out a little more
02:50:397 (7) - NC
02:58:139 (10) - ^
02:59:429 (1) - Delete NC
03:08:462 (9) - NC
03:09:107 (1) - Delete NC
03:13:623 (8) - NC
03:19:752 (1) - Move a bit further away

we need to make bubble tea
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu
thanks for the mods !
Unknownable_old
Unknownable_old
Hello...
Modding from My Queue

[General]
Background is more than 1MB, so try this

[Moderation]
OD +1 (or Change it to Beginner)

[Maximum]
00:39:913 (3) NC
02:59:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) This note make me confused, lol
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
From mod queue.

[General]
If I remember correctly, a storyboard image should be at least at the size of 800x600. One thing is background and another is Storyboard, so yeah, change that.
I would add the countdown in double time.

[Moderation]
02:40:074 Put a finisher there... maybe.
I don't see anything but you need to add some hit sounds.

[Maximum]
02:04:107 Make that spinner have a low volume since that part of the song is kind of quite, lower the volume almost to the point that you can't hear it.
... T-T...
_________________________

Damn, your map is too god to mod... I'm sorry for this... T-T. I don't deserve the kudosu. In any case, good luck with getting this ranked.
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Unknownable wrote:

Hello...
Modding from My Queue

[General]
Background is more than 1MB, so try this

[Moderation]
OD +1 (or Change it to Beginner)

[Maximum]
00:39:913 (3) NC
02:59:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) This note make me confused, lol
thanks for the new bg :)!
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Crok425 wrote:

From mod queue.

[General]
If I remember correctly, a storyboard image should be at least at the size of 800x600. One thing is background and another is Storyboard, so yeah, change that.
I would add the countdown in double time.

[Moderation]
02:40:074 Put a finisher there... maybe.
I don't see anything but you need to add some hit sounds.

[Maximum]
02:04:107 Make that spinner have a low volume since that part of the song is kind of quite, lower the volume almost to the point that you can't hear it.
... T-T...
_________________________

Damn, your map is too god to mod... I'm sorry for this... T-T. I don't deserve the kudosu. In any case, good luck with getting this ranked.
thanks xD and np u did help :) i fixed up the spinner~

and storyborad has been updated~
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

Inconsistency Tags
colors utsuho reiuji nuclear fusion techno
colors

[Moderation]

OD-1 is more suitable normal

[Maximum]

01:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Some like a 1/4 beat......
02:23:300 (4) - NC
02:27:171 (5) - NC
03:44:268 (6,7) - Wrong distance

That all
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[Moderation]
00:24:591 (3) - seems not very beautiful
Feels end not very perfect....May choose another time to stop

[Maximum]
01:02:655 (5,1) - distance changes not feel good
01:16:849 (8,9) - not fun for play
01:30:397 (5) - hard to look um....
01:52:655 (5,6,7) - may think place them as a circle

seems you need pay more attention to design.yeh...Good.job
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Haii~
You requested in my queue^^


[General]
- Tags are not the same:
Maximum: colors utsuho reiuji nuclear fusion techno
Moderation: colors
- From 03:57:574 - 04:44:943, it is left unmapped, maybe cut the rest of the .mp3 or map the rest?

[Moderation]
00:33:623 (3) - New combo?

[Maximum]
- Distance Spacing 1 is better then 0.8 for this diff ><
- Overall Difficulty +1
00:50:397 (8) - New combo.
00:51:042 (1) - Remove new combo.


Really well mapped! >w<
Star~
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello, :)

[General]

Inconsistency Tags
colors utsuho reiuji nuclear fusion techno
colors

[Moderation]

OD-1 is more suitable normal

[Maximum]

01:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Some like a 1/4 beat......
02:23:300 (4) - NC
02:27:171 (5) - NC
03:44:268 (6,7) - Wrong distance

That all
thanks for pointing out the tags problem :) and fixed some other things ~
meiikyuu
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Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Moderation]
00:24:591 (3) - seems not very beautiful
Feels end not very perfect....May choose another time to stop

[Maximum]
01:02:655 (5,1) - distance changes not feel good
01:16:849 (8,9) - not fun for play i NC instead so ppl will look easier
01:30:397 (5) - hard to look um.... fixed, good suggestion lol
01:52:655 (5,6,7) - may think place them as a circle fixed

seems you need pay more attention to design.yeh...Good.job
thank u very much, good mod x3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Moderation

  1. 01:52:655 (3) - move 2,3,4th slider point 2 grids up, I think that's better>_<
  2. 02:09:107 (1) - new combo instead of next ?
  3. 03:35:074 - add note ?
  4. 03:35:397 (1) - end 1/2 earlier ?
Maximum

  1. 00:15:881 (2) - slider path is not so clear...
  2. 00:27:010 (3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot462.jpg this ? looks better imo.
  3. 00:33:462 (13) - stacking 2 notes breaks the flow here I think.. how about http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot467.jpg
  4. 00:56:526 (8) - move right 2 grid..?
  5. 01:06:526 (10) - remove 1 repeat? fits the music better imo
  6. 01:11:849 (4) - stack under 3?
  7. 03:04:591 (8,1) - 1/2 slider + repeat ? feels better to me
  8. 03:13:623 (1) - add new combo?
  9. 03:25:236 (3,4) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot465.jpg ?
  10. 03:44:268 (6,7) - move down a little ? it's stacking together
  11. 03:54:429 (7,8,9) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot466.jpg ?
nice map, good luck on ranking it ~
Kurokami
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Kurokami
Hi from my queue.
Your map is too good for me, but here are some suggestion.

Maximum

  1. 00:23:139 (9,1) - move to x:168, y:136, this one they are stack at the previous slider
  2. 02:43:462 (2,3,4) - move one grid down
  3. 03:39:268 (9,1) - move to x:344, y:136
Thats all what I able to find. ._. Star because I like this song. ^^
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Moderation

  1. 01:52:655 (3) - move 2,3,4th slider point 2 grids up, I think that's better>_<
  2. 02:09:107 (1) - new combo instead of next ?
  3. 03:35:074 - add note ?
  4. 03:35:397 (1) - end 1/2 earlier ?
Maximum

  1. 00:15:881 (2) - slider path is not so clear...
  2. 00:27:010 (3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot462.jpg this ? looks better imo.
  3. 00:33:462 (13) - stacking 2 notes breaks the flow here I think.. how about http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot467.jpg
  4. 00:56:526 (8) - move right 2 grid..?
  5. 01:06:526 (10) - remove 1 repeat? fits the music better imo
  6. 01:11:849 (4) - stack under 3?
  7. 03:04:591 (8,1) - 1/2 slider + repeat ? feels better to me
  8. 03:13:623 (1) - add new combo?
  9. 03:25:236 (3,4) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot465.jpg ?
  10. 03:44:268 (6,7) - move down a little ? it's stacking together
  11. 03:54:429 (7,8,9) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot466.jpg ?
nice map, good luck on ranking it ~
very helpful ^^ ty!

btw @ xXCrystalMoonAnime: ty for the star :)

@Kurokami: ty for the mod & star!
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
Add RedAlice to the tags?
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Konnichiha

[General]
* 2 diff with Normal and Insane? I think the diff spread seems unbalanced. I suggest you to add a hard diff so the average players are enough to play this map.


[Moderation]
00:32:333 (2) - Perhaps snap the tail slider to 00:32:816 and add 1 repeating slider like 00:31:042 (1)?
00:50:397 - I was expecting having a note here.....
00:57:494 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider? Like 01:00:074 (4)? And don't forget to remove 00:58:784 (1) if you want to change it!
01:11:042 (1) - Why not end this spinner to 01:12:333?
01:31:042 (1) - Using orange combo after spinner makes beginners are hard to see the approach rate, because the approach rate is blend with spinner (if using a default skin). The default spinner are red-orange-yellow, and it might be blend it something. I suggest you to colorhax it by changing the combo color, just click the right arrow beside new combo icon
03:03:623 (4,1) - Swap a new combo for your combo pattern
03:11:042 (5) - New combo here for your combo pattern


[Maximum]
00:23:139 (9,1) -Stack with head slider on 00:22:010 (6)? It looks better when you stacked (Nazi)
00:24:268 (4) - Why not move this slider to 00:24:429 and add note at 00:24:268? It does makes following the synth, even the slider (00:23:300 (1,2,3)) are following synth too
01:14:429 (10,11) - Sudden jump in star pattern makes breaking a flow while gameplay. I suggest you to reverse place for 01:14:591 (11,12)
02:33:623 (9,1) - Please swap this new combo, since this both object are in the stream pattern
03:39:268 (9,1) - Same suggestion as 00:23:139 (9,1)
03:40:397 (2) - Same suggestion as 00:24:268 (4)


My long mod, sorry~
Aeonnen
21 posts
Joined March 2012
Aeonnen
A mod request from my queue.

[Moderation]:
00:20:720 (1) - Finish (First note)
00:23:300 (1) - ^
00:26:204 (4) - ^
00:31:042 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^
This difficulty just needs some hitsounds. Nothing wrong with the actual map though.

[Maximum]:
00:39:268 (1) - Remove NC
02:55:881 (3,8) - Bring down more to create a better star

That's about it. I like [Maximum] a lot. All of these, are just suggestions.
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
ヽ（´ー｀）┌

[General]
You're awesome :>

[Moderation]
00:33:300 - Wheres the note!?
00:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a circle with these? seems really random
00:59:429 (2) - NC here instead~
02:27:171 (1,2) - Curve these up more so that you can put them closer, its almost twice the original spacing which is a big jump~
02:32:978 (2) - Move up a little so it doesn't overlap 02:31:687 (3)
03:54:591 (1) - Remove NC

[Maximum]
OD - 7?
00:37:171 (4) - Remove NC
01:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about using whistles on the parts where that melody plays?
Try whistles on 2,4,6,7,8 and repeat for the next ones.
02:01:365 (2) - Add NC and either keep or remove the one on 02:00:720 (1)
02:47:010 (5) - Unstack this please~
02:55:558 (2) - NC here instead
03:00:720 (5) - Maybe go counter-clockwise from here?
02:58:139 (10) - NC here
02:59:429 (1) - Remove this one
03:00:720 (5) - NC here
03:02:655 (1) - Remove NC
03:03:300 (4) - NC
03:08:462 (9) - NC here instead of 03:09:107 (1)

ok bye~
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiha

[General]
* 2 diff with Normal and Insane? I think the diff spread seems unbalanced. I suggest you to add a hard diff so the average players are enough to play this map.


[Moderation]
00:32:333 (2) - Perhaps snap the tail slider to 00:32:816 and add 1 repeating slider like 00:31:042 (1)?
00:50:397 - I was expecting having a note here.....
00:57:494 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider? Like 01:00:074 (4)? And don't forget to remove 00:58:784 (1) if you want to change it!
01:11:042 (1) - Why not end this spinner to 01:12:333?
01:31:042 (1) - Using orange combo after spinner makes beginners are hard to see the approach rate, because the approach rate is blend with spinner (if using a default skin). The default spinner are red-orange-yellow, and it might be blend it something. I suggest you to colorhax it by changing the combo color, just click the right arrow beside new combo icon
03:03:623 (4,1) - Swap a new combo for your combo pattern
03:11:042 (5) - New combo here for your combo pattern


[Maximum]
00:23:139 (9,1) -Stack with head slider on 00:22:010 (6)? It looks better when you stacked (Nazi)
00:24:268 (4) - Why not move this slider to 00:24:429 and add note at 00:24:268? It does makes following the synth, even the slider (00:23:300 (1,2,3)) are following synth too
01:14:429 (10,11) - Sudden jump in star pattern makes breaking a flow while gameplay. I suggest you to reverse place for 01:14:591 (11,12)
02:33:623 (9,1) - Please swap this new combo, since this both object are in the stream pattern
03:39:268 (9,1) - Same suggestion as 00:23:139 (9,1)
03:40:397 (2) - Same suggestion as 00:24:268 (4)


My long mod, sorry~

Aeonnen wrote:

A mod request from my queue.

[Moderation]:
00:20:720 (1) - Finish (First note)
00:23:300 (1) - ^
00:26:204 (4) - ^
00:31:042 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^
This difficulty just needs some hitsounds. Nothing wrong with the actual map though.

[Maximum]:
00:39:268 (1) - Remove NC
02:55:881 (3,8) - Bring down more to create a better star

That's about it. I like [Maximum] a lot. All of these, are just suggestions.
thanks a lot leorda & aeonenn :D! fixed a bunch of things
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Mythol wrote:

ヽ（´ー｀）┌

[General]
You're awesome :>

[Moderation]
00:33:300 - Wheres the note!?
00:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a circle with these? seems really random
00:59:429 (2) - NC here instead~
02:27:171 (1,2) - Curve these up more so that you can put them closer, its almost twice the original spacing which is a big jump~
02:32:978 (2) - Move up a little so it doesn't overlap 02:31:687 (3)
03:54:591 (1) - Remove NC

[Maximum]
OD - 7?
00:37:171 (4) - Remove NC
01:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - How about using whistles on the parts where that melody plays?
Try whistles on 2,4,6,7,8 and repeat for the next ones.
02:01:365 (2) - Add NC and either keep or remove the one on 02:00:720 (1)
02:47:010 (5) - Unstack this please~
02:55:558 (2) - NC here instead
03:00:720 (5) - Maybe go counter-clockwise from here?
02:58:139 (10) - NC here
02:59:429 (1) - Remove this one
03:00:720 (5) - NC here
03:02:655 (1) - Remove NC
03:03:300 (4) - NC
03:08:462 (9) - NC here instead of 03:09:107 (1)

ok bye~
<3
Ryu_old
Ryu_old
DAISUKIIIIIIIIII REIUJI >/////////<

Some Ryu's queue~ :3

Moderation:

00:24:591 - without repeat.

00:25:558 - circle

00:26:204 - NC

00:36:204 - without repeat

00:37:171 - 00:37:816 1 repeat

Sakuya's Heavy MITOL:

00:32:171 - 00:32:816 - Slideruu~

00:32:978 - delete

MAXIMUM IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME.

Good Luck with map ;3/
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Ryu wrote:

DAISUKIIIIIIIIII REIUJI >/////////<

Some Ryu's queue~ :3

Moderation:

00:24:591 - without repeat.

00:25:558 - circle

00:26:204 - NC

00:36:204 - without repeat

00:37:171 - 00:37:816 1 repeat

Sakuya's Heavy MITOL:

00:32:171 - 00:32:816 - Slideruu~

00:32:978 - delete

MAXIMUM IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME.

Good Luck with map ;3/
thanks~
Starry_old
Starry_old
Ok here your mod


SPOILER
13:22 <Starry> : OK
13:22 <Starry> : I can mod now
13:22 <Starry> : if you want
13:23 <meiikyuu> : sure :) ty
13:23 <meiikyuu> : oh btw, u can skip the Sakuya's Heavy diff
13:23 <Starry> : XD
13:24 <Starry> : did you make the bg?
13:24 <Starry> : its nice
13:24 <meiikyuu> : yeah :)
13:24 <meiikyuu> : thanks
13:24 <Starry> : Hey
13:25 <Starry> : can you add a new combo here
13:25 <Starry> : 00:33:623 (4) -
13:26 <meiikyuu> : ok
13:26 <Starry> : that combo felt long
13:26 <meiikyuu> : xd
13:27 <Starry> : Can you make this look nicer?
13:27 <Starry> : 01:52:655 (3) -
13:28 <meiikyuu> : lol ok
13:29 <Starry> : 02:54:268 (4) -
13:30 <Starry> : Can you do a blanket like this
13:30 <Starry> : http://puu.sh/uaHo
13:31 <meiikyuu> : o
13:31 <Starry> : and guess what.
13:31 <Starry> : Thats all for that
13:31 <Starry> : diff
13:31 <meiikyuu> : yeah?
13:31 <Starry> : XD
13:31 <meiikyuu> : xD
13:31 <meiikyuu> : kk
13:32 <Starry> : woah...
13:32 <Starry> : Big combo is big.
13:32 <Starry> : 00:24:913 (6) -
13:32 <Starry> : New combo here.
13:33 <meiikyuu> : kk
13:34 <Starry> : Can you make a pattern?
13:34 <Starry> : for this
13:34 <Starry> : 00:40:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:35 <meiikyuu> : i think i like it that way xD..
13:35 <Starry> : 00:52:333 (3,4,5,6,7) -
13:35 <Starry> : Same for this.
13:36 <Starry> : Woah...
13:36 <Starry> : 01:08:784 (10) -
13:36 <Starry> : New combo here.
13:37 <meiikyuu> : ok
13:38 <Starry> : 01:49:591 (2) - Can you put new combo here instead?
13:38 <meiikyuu> : ill think about that one~
13:39 <Starry> : Ok so.
13:39 <Starry> : I think whistles should be added to this whole thing
13:39 <Starry> : 01:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:39 <Starry> : same for this
13:39 <Starry> : 01:58:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:40 <meiikyuu> : oh
13:40 <Starry> : Hm..
13:40 <Starry> : These can all be 1 combo
13:40 <Starry> : 02:33:623 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
13:41 <Starry> : 02:51:042 (3) - Can you make this face down.
13:41 <Starry> : It will make it more readable and flow more.
13:43 <Starry> : 03:34:107 (1) - Finish the beginning.
13:43 <meiikyuu> : k
13:43 <Starry> : 03:34:591 (2) -
13:43 <Starry> : FInish where it reverses.
13:44 <meiikyuu> : ok
13:44 <Starry> : FInish this
13:44 <Starry> : 03:35:074 (3) -
13:44 <Starry> : Too.
13:44 <meiikyuu> : k
13:45 <Starry> : Hmm.
13:45 <Starry> : http://puu.sh/uaTp
13:45 <Starry> : 03:51:365 (2) -
13:45 <Starry> : Please.
13:46 <meiikyuu> : lol
13:46 <Starry> : you did that pattern so many times
13:46 <Starry> : XD
13:46 <Starry> : I just wanted to change it
13:47 <meiikyuu> : i will consider it lol
13:47 <Starry> : XD
13:47 <Starry> : omg
13:47 <Starry> : This map is fun
13:47 <Starry> : to map
13:47 <Starry> : XD
13:48 <Starry> : Hmm.
13:48 <Starry> : I'll see what I can do
13:48 <Starry> : and give you some surprise.
13:49 <meiikyuu> : thanks x)
13:50 <Starry> : wait.
13:50 <Starry> : I still need to check the Diffuculty stuff.
13:50 <meiikyuu> : lol ok
13:51 <Starry> : what?
13:51 <Starry> : OD should be 7 or 8
13:51 <meiikyuu> : ill change to 7
13:52 <Starry> : uhm.
13:52 <Starry> : I consider putting Drain 8.
13:52 <Starry> : The notes go pretty fast.
13:52 <Starry> : and you want the diff to be hard
13:52 <meiikyuu> : xD
13:53 <Starry> : Yeah.
13:53 <Starry> : this diff is 5 stars
13:53 <Starry> : 8 will be no prob.
13:54 <meiikyuu> : ok ill try it out
13:57 <Starry> : OK
13:57 <Starry> : Guess i'll savelog now
iiko_old
iiko_old
good map :)
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

iiko wrote:

good map :)
♥
Nitojgrem
765 posts
Joined March 2011
Nitojgrem
Here is my mod as promised ^^
Contains only suggestions so feel free to follow them or not :D

General
  1. Add "LunarSakuya" to tags
  2. Iconsistency in Combo colours (If it's on purpose, please explain to me why):
    SPOILER
    - [Maximum] 
    Combo1 : 255,128,0 
    Combo2 : 128,0,255 
    Combo3 : 252,14,67  

    - [Moderation] 
    Combo1 : 128,0,255 
    Combo2 : 223,0,79 
    Combo3 : 255,128,0  

    - [Sakuya's Heavy]
    Combo1 : 255,128,0
    Combo2 : 128,0,255  
    Combo3 : 252,14,67
  3. Oh and I dislike the Stack Legniency of 10. Mostly in Sakuya's Heavy it looks sometimes "ugly" imo .-.
Moderation
  1. 00:27:171 (2,3) - Just as a question, why are they not equal? :o
  2. 00:28:462 (3,4) [Nazi] - Doesn't look well how they overlap... D:
  3. 00:50:397 (7) - It feels like there is maybe a hitsound needed, add finish?
  4. 01:03:945 (4) - Add whistle?
  5. 01:06:526 (4) - ^?
  6. 01:09:107 (4) - ^?
  7. 01:14:913 (1,2,3) [Nazi] - D: Overlapping looks ugly. Make it like this. (At least it look quite symmetrical... or so...)
  8. 01:27:816 (1) - Add clap?
  9. 01:44:591 (3) [Nazi] - Move it one to the right... then it is in the middle of 1 and 2 ;) u-u-ltra naziing xD...
  10. 01:48:784 (1) - Add finish? It supports the background drum imo :D
  11. 02:03:945 (1) - Add whistle
  12. 02:33:623 (1) - Add finish?
  13. 02:50:397 (1,2,3,4) - Idk why but the positions of this sliders look... scattered or kind of disarranged :/
  14. 03:52:333 (1,2) [Nazi] - uhh... they're not the same ._. Maybe make them being the same? (ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+r :D)
    Sorry if it looks a bit picky but... yeah when I see somethign I mention it, lol
Sakuya's Heavy
  1. OD+1?
  2. 00:33:945 (2,3) [Nazi] - I mention this right here, when you want to make something 100% symmetrical, copy&past it and then use ctrl+r. These two circles are as an example not symmetrical although they seem to be that.
  3. 00:35:558 (7,8) [Nazi] - ^Same
  4. 00:41:365 (1) - Add finish?
  5. 00:53:623 - Add circle (because of 00:56:204 (7) )
  6. 01:29:268 (6,7) [Nazi] - Oh well... non-symmetrical :P
  7. 01:51:042 (2) - I suggest to make two sliders out of this one (instead of the repeats)
    That's all here~ Good hard but you should look at some more points about the symmetrie. I pointed out just a few^^
Maximum
  1. OD+1?
  2. 00:15:236 (9,1,2) - I really dislike how 2 is covered by the hit of 9. It's really hard to see while playing IMO D: Please change that
    SPOILER
  3. 00:23:139 (9,1) - Dis anti-jump, lol...
  4. 01:18:945 (1,2) - It looks strange that all circles overlapp in this pattern except this two, please change that :)
  5. 01:22:333 (6) - Maybe move this one to x:364 y:80?
  6. 02:41:365 (5) - Idk... I would like this one more if it looked similiar 02:40:074 (1) (from the style)
    That's all here, interesting jumps ~ (although it's sometimes kind of boring when you repeat them :/)
I hope the mod will help^^
Hf, Gl then :D
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
don't know why those weren't symmetrical lol thxs for mod

Download: Tsukasa - Accelerator (meiikyuu) [Sakuya's Heavy].osu
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hi ~

General
fine

Moderation
- Sound : I think some point you miss adding hitsound some points. It's my opinion. You can ignore them if you don't agree. I hope you will check overall again if you agreed~~
For example :
00:20:720 (1) - miss a finish at the start ?
00:22:655 (4) - swap a clap here (tail should be the head)
01:05:881 (3) - miss a clap here~
01:23:623 (2) - ^
01:24:268 (4) - swap a clap same as 00:22:655 ?
01:40:397 (1) -
01:41:687 (3) -
02:33:623 (1) - finish ? , It sounds very loud
03:16:204 (1) - finish at the start

00:39:268 (4) - add new combo it instead of next note (remove next note) from its position and sound , I think it's better to new here
00:39:913 (2,3) - (2) is under 00:38:462 (3) - , It looks a bit hard to see. It's better to avoid this placement in easiest diff
SPOILER
02:11:687 (2) - remove new combo here ~~ , It doesn't need to add here because it doesn't follow sound
02:55:236 (1) - remove new combo and add next note instead
03:35:397 (1) - no, it isn't necessary to add new combo here
03:48:784 (3,4) - try moving (3) and (4) avoid overlap from (1)'s slider, will make it better (don't forget to set the position again)
SPOILER

Sakuya's Heavy
I suggest you to add finish sound in this diff. It's kinda empty sound in this diff, adding finish will make it more fun.
00:27:010 (3) - move down 1 grid for complete stacking with 00:25:397 (5) -
00:34:591 (4) - you must add note here , because it runs from (2) and (3) with 1/2 beat. It cuts the flow, people will get miss from this slider (test played). Maybe you add at (4)'s position
00:52:978 (6) - honestly, you can remove a note here. It hasn't any sound here = =''
00:55:559 (6) - ^
01:01:284 (2) - in my opinion, starting 1/4 note at blue tick is not good for hard diff, It should start with slider (It won't make x100 from the slider). Also from its spacing , I think you should move 01:01:687 (4) - to other position which is more far than this.
suggestion here
SPOILER
01:01:849 (5) - ^ remove note here if you did above
01:13:623 (5) - try moving here to x:208 y:272 , also use ctrl+shift+r , selection centre and add 7 , it will make better spacing compare to 01:14:429 (6,7,8) -
01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - please move a bit in every note and fix these spacing (I see you use wrong spacing in other note (maybe I'm wrong D: but I'd say)
for example : 01:19:591 (1,2,3) - , 00:32:171 (4) - , if you meant to accelerate spacing , you must make it more obvious :3
01:31:849 (4) - new combo here please~
01:34:268 (3) - here too ^
01:42:010 (3) - ^ :D
01:51:042 (2) - a bit hard for some player. imo, ppl would miss from not holding this note.
try making something like this will be easier and better flow for these note.
SPOILER
03:20:720 (4) - add new combo here~
03:40:074 (5) - spacing (should be 1.3)
03:57:494 (1) - move down 2 grid ~ , same reason , for complete stacking

Maximum
00:40:559 (3) - you should add new combo here if you would like to add as (1) (2) (1) (2) like previous notes
00:50:236 (7) - just imo, It suddenly appear this one , maybe you can remove this note (it isn't necessary. The reason is you have used 1/2 notes in this part.
01:11:365 (2) - I'm not sure it's rankable or not. Slider has complete stacking with 01:10:720 (5) -
01:14:591 (11) - only whistle here and remove all sound next note (it's kinda weird sound o.o'')
01:17:494 (1) - move right 1 grid for complete stacking
01:34:913 (4) - how does this finish come ? = ="
01:51:204 (7) - new combo should start here ~ , 01:51:365 (1) - remove here
01:52:655 (5) - you can choose to add here too ,this will follow the sound better
02:53:784 (4) - I suggest adding slider here instead of note and end at 02:54:268
02:58:139 (9) - add new combo
03:00:720 (5) - ^
03:05:881 (3) - ^

overall, It's good ! but you can still improve it better either !

Good luck for ranking ! :D
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there~

General:

-add "LunarSakuya" to tags

Moderation:

00:20:720 (1) - add finish on start
00:58:784 (1) - remove NC
00:59:429 (2) - add NC
01:02:010 (1) - finish on start
01:11:042 (1) - add finish
01:43:945 (2) - too far from (1)
01:52:655 (3) - finish on end. I'll stop here for now, if you like the idea add finishe
02:03:945 (1) - finish
02:04:591 (2,3) - remove whistle from (2) and add whistle on (3)
02:11:687 (1) - remove NC
02:40:074 (1) - end it at 02:44:591?
02:55:558 (2) - finish on start
03:16:204 (1) - finish on start
03:23:300 (1) - remove NC
03:23:945 (2) - add NC
03:25:236 (1) - remove NC. also, finish on end?
03:26:849 (2) - add NC
03:28:462 (5) - maybe change into a slider ending at 03:28:784 ?
03:36:849 (1) - finish on start
03:47:171 (1) - ^

Sakuya's Heavy:

00:34:591 - add a note?

Maximum:

-if you liked the idea of adding finishes in Moderation, I'd recommend doing the same thing in this diff :P

00:23:220 - add a note?
00:23:300 (1) - stack under (9)
02:58:139 (9) - add NC
02:59:429 (1) - remove NC
03:00:720 (5) - add NC
03:04:913 (1) - remove NC?
03:05:881 (3) - add NC
03:15:558 (1) - remove NC
03:24:913 (1) - remove NC
03:31:042 (1) - remove NC
03:31:687 (3) - add NC
03:32:333 (1) - remove NC

nice map :)
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Heya.

Maximum
00:32:333 (5,6,7) - this triplet doesn't feel right. no similar sound in the music. I say remove (6).
00:50:236 (7) - move here: X:168 Y: 100 (those are coordinates, all right.)
01:16:849 (1,2) - I don't like this. Turn them into jump sliders - like this: http://puu.sh/vR9I
02:31:042 (5) - add New combo
02:59:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - care to arrange them another way?
03:20:074 (2) - ugly slider
03:23:945 (1) - unnecessary triplet
03:33:623 (3,4,5) - ^

Sakuya
Oh god. AR+1. Impossible to play it like this.

00:32:978 (5,6,7,8) - ugly overlap
03:19:752 - this beat wants to be clicked - add a circle!

Moderation
Nothing worthy of being noted.
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu
thanks for the mods everyone (: fixed a lot

Tenshi-nyan: as for the jumpsliders u suggested, i will think about it
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Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri
[general]
you have almost 1 minute of unmapped song, try fading out the end.
add 'lunarsakuya' to tags in all diffs
the combo colors between difficulties are different and you use the same bg, is that inttentional?

[moderating]
03:47:171 (1,3) - i suggest you to not let objects touch each other this way.

[sakuya's something]
00:33:139 (6,7,8) - don't make them overlap this way, it may look a bit ugly, try http://puu.sh/vTly
good

[maximum]
00:39:268 (1) - this new combo marks nothing, remove?
00:49:107 (5) - ads new combo? new instrumental part. if you do remove from 00:50:397 (1) -
Dai
1,632 posts
Joined April 2010
Dai
Okuu <3
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
Hi~ Banana here from my queue~

Maximum

00:15:478 - pattern suggestion, jump (9) seems more nature to me to start a new section. and it well be nice if you try to make some patterns with following sliders
00:22:010 (6) - you jump this note, and to me, the jump should at (5) for at that time have the same sound with (1), where have a jump. maybe you can use jump at both (5) and (6)
00:22:655 (8) - jump after this repeat slider? for at the end of the slider that sound show up, and be more smooth to me
00:28:784 (2) - imo, your 1/2 sliders curverd too much, here is my [urlhttp://puu.sh/wgG0]suggestion[/url]. you may not fix them in this map for they are ok now, though i think you can pay some attaintion on these issue in your next map XD
00:36:204 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here is increasing, and to me they are not suit the music well, change the place between (2) & (4)? (you may need to move (2,3,4) in next combo if you follow this)
00:38:462 (7,1) - stack these two?
00:50:236 (3) - place this circle right part of the playfield
01:13:784 (7) - jump? in consistancy with (3)
01:21:204 (5) - circle? in consistancy with 01:18:623 (4)
01:36:042 (2) - not stack well with the former (2)
01:42:171 (T) - 45% volume?
01:44:591 (5) - (6) start the music, and i suggest you jump (5)
02:06:526 - break is more than enough around here..
02:52:171 (6) - Ctrl+R? spacing here is small
03:19:752 (1) - spacing here is a bit confusing, suggestion
03:37:978 (5) - same issue as 00:22:010 (6)

Sakuya's Heavy

00:30:074 (2) - place at right top of the playfield?
00:34:268 (3) - spacing after this silder is confusing, for you use jump in this diff., and i suggest you to move (2,3) avay from the middle
00:51:687 (1) - you use soft hitsound here, and i think soft-whistle is not suit the music well, maybe you can use some clap
01:13:300 (4) -how about make these sliders like this
01:24:107 (1) - i prefer stack here
01:51:687 (3) - split this repeat slider to a circle and a repeat slider following? thus the two repeat sliders can cover the same sound
03:12:333 (1) - this stack is not plays well, maybe to use a jump here?
03:50:236 (2) - add a circle?

Moderation

00:50:074 (6,7) - as this is the easist diff. over the mapset, may be use slider would be better
03:09:752 (3) - keep the spacing?

GL~
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
meiikyuu

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here from my queue~

Maximum

00:15:478 - pattern suggestion, jump (9) seems more nature to me to start a new section. and it well be nice if you try to make some patterns with following sliders
00:22:010 (6) - you jump this note, and to me, the jump should at (5) for at that time have the same sound with (1), where have a jump. maybe you can use jump at both (5) and (6)
00:22:655 (8) - jump after this repeat slider? for at the end of the slider that sound show up, and be more smooth to me
00:28:784 (2) - imo, your 1/2 sliders curverd too much, here is my [urlhttp://puu.sh/wgG0]suggestion[/url]. you may not fix them in this map for they are ok now, though i think you can pay some attaintion on these issue in your next map XD
00:36:204 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here is increasing, and to me they are not suit the music well, change the place between (2) & (4)? (you may need to move (2,3,4) in next combo if you follow this)
00:38:462 (7,1) - stack these two?
00:50:236 (3) - place this circle right part of the playfield
01:13:784 (7) - jump? in consistancy with (3)
01:21:204 (5) - circle? in consistancy with 01:18:623 (4)
01:36:042 (2) - not stack well with the former (2)
01:42:171 (T) - 45% volume?
01:44:591 (5) - (6) start the music, and i suggest you jump (5)
02:06:526 - break is more than enough around here..
02:52:171 (6) - Ctrl+R? spacing here is small
03:19:752 (1) - spacing here is a bit confusing, suggestion
03:37:978 (5) - same issue as 00:22:010 (6)

Sakuya's Heavy

00:30:074 (2) - place at right top of the playfield?
00:34:268 (3) - spacing after this silder is confusing, for you use jump in this diff., and i suggest you to move (2,3) avay from the middle
00:51:687 (1) - you use soft hitsound here, and i think soft-whistle is not suit the music well, maybe you can use some clap
01:13:300 (4) -how about make these sliders like this
01:24:107 (1) - i prefer stack here
01:51:687 (3) - split this repeat slider to a circle and a repeat slider following? thus the two repeat sliders can cover the same sound
03:12:333 (1) - this stack is not plays well, maybe to use a jump here?
03:50:236 (2) - add a circle?

Moderation

00:50:074 (6,7) - as this is the easist diff. over the mapset, may be use slider would be better
03:09:752 (3) - keep the spacing?

GL~
ty ^^
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No kds please \:D/
[Moderation]
01:11:042 (1) NC
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
lol ty
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