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Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size)

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ertyukjh010
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ertyukjh010
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月11日 at 19:05:10

Artist: Misato Aki
Title: Spread Wings. (TV Size)
Source: Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai
Tags: Opening KayeSara Saya-honmei 12BARRY21
BPM: 144
Filesize: 9566kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Barry's Normal (4.1 stars, 123 notes)
  2. Easy (2.1 stars, 86 notes)
  3. Hard (4.79 stars, 200 notes)
  4. Insane (4.99 stars, 258 notes)
  5. KS's Taiko (4.83 stars, 472 notes)
  6. Saya (4.96 stars, 244 notes)
Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size)
Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Beatmap @_@

Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai OP

Mapset
Easy : Done
Barry's Normal by 12BARRY21 : Done
Hard : Done
Saya's Insane by Saya-Honmei : Done
Insane : Done
KS's Taiko by KayeSara : Done

Thank Saya-Honmei for provide hitSound(.wav) ^_^
Last edited by ertyukjh010 , edited 55 times in total.
ertyukjh010
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ertyukjh010
Old Forums and mod: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=44296

補上大家之前還沒改的mod

Last edited by ertyukjh010 , edited 5 times in total.
Ulysses
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Ulysses
wow good map!!
Ulysses
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Ulysses
wow awesome map!!
Ulysses
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Ulysses
wow #4!!
Ulysses
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Ulysses
fuck why so many posts?
Ulysses
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Ulysses
I modded it before?
Ulysses
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Ulysses
yeah I'm nold!
Ulysses
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Ulysses
SPOILER
mod: 22:21 : Yo~~ 22:22 : 我要刪掉wings裡那個slidertick的靜音，因為"sliderslide和slidertick不允许同时静音"~ 22:22 : YOYO 22:22 : 有沒有問題（？ 22:22 : SLIDERTICK? 22:22 : 嗯 22:22 : for我沒有影響 22:22 : Ok 22:36 : ~ 22:36 : viewtopic.php?f=10&t=44296 22:36 : 刪掉了 22:36 : 不過post還在www 22:36 : 如何del的,-- 22:36 : oh...+0 22:36 : 叫BAT del 22:36 : star... 22:36 : oh... 22:36 : 對 22:36 : 沒了 22:36 : 哂哂人地d kd 22:36 : 好，重新賺過吧 22:36 : 你太頑皮 22:36 : =3= 22:36 : 呢家唔敢洗舊圖 22:36 : why唔可以連埋star一起... 22:37 : 我先重dl 22:37 : 我還沒上傳 22:37 : 等等 22:37 : 依加dl唔到ge= = 22:37 : 刪左= = 22:37 : -,- 22:37 : 重傳就是以新檔案上傳 22:37 : -,- 22:38 : 放心我有備份才刪= = 22:38 : ww 22:39 : 我發現 22:39 : ?? 22:39 : 你有gd戈張圖個superable 22:39 : taiko同osu mode 22:39 : 都係神人先fc到 22:39 : 55 22:40 : = = 22:40 : ctb岩岩hinex miss左小小 22:40 : 超快的？ 22:40 : miss左2個 22:40 : 如果唔係fc 22:40 : 係-,-快到睇唔到 22:40 : Hin都miss= = 22:40 : 都係神人玩啦 22:40 : =3= 22:40 : 佢話rank左同我hd玩 22:40 : 給力 22:40 : 仲有,.,有幾個人同我留左言. 22:41 : 對 22:41 : 泡了之後 22:41 : 恩./. 22:41 : 一堆人恭喜 22:41 : 我指map 留言... 22:41 : 不是thread 22:41 : 還有fav一天上到5個 22:41 : 甚麼map留言 22:41 : 喔喔 22:41 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240958 22:42 : 這留言 22:42 : 咁快有= = 22:42 : 恩 22:44 : 張圖惦左叫我 22:44 : 我去fix mod 22:46 : -,-miu咁老.. 22:46 : 27 ages... 22:46 : 張圖惦左? 22:46 : Ok 22:46 : 我0 age=3= 22:46 : -, 22:47 : 之前6個Favourited 冇晒=3= 22:47 : wwww 22:47 : so sorry to hear that 22:47 : 因為我"www"習慣係 "= ="咁用 22:47 : 所以你要清楚我唔係笑= = 22:47 : 習慣左www= "= =" 22:47 : 不要緊啦~~ 22:47 : 我都不在意這些 22:48 : 淆底，重載一次先 22:48 : -,- 22:48 : 得閒就多D回覆，廢話都Ok 22:48 : dl到 22:48 : -,.- 22:48 : 整到個post好多人睇過咁 22:49 : 廢到= = 22:50 : 喂= = 22:50 : 1個好 22:50 : 小心比人鬧 22:50 : 最多比你話- - 22:53 : -,-岩岩開VIDEO 22:53 : 都冇h野睇-,- 22:53 : .....= = 22:54 : OP咁o岩冇（攤手 22:54 : www 22:54 : 要睇載ATX（炸 22:54 : - - 22:55 : 怎麼現在找普通人mod都沒有 22:55 : 找mat吧 22:55 : 越來越多人做圖啊 22:55 : 不能= =沒星星吧 22:55 : 也不夠post 22:55 : 根本上你張map都唔使mod-,- 22:55 : 自己放8顆星跟住找mat-,- 22:55 : 都得既~~貼翻之前個post 22:55 : 我這鬼畜mapper都找不到任何問題= = 22:55 : 不過都係搵多D mod先 22:55 : -,-唔好傻na... 22:55 : 對呢張圖冇信心 22:56 : 我都穩唔到錯,你出去穩埋哂d modder 好多好低質素 22:56 : 一定比我更低 22:57 : 重點是 22:57 : mat都唔係個個高質素na 22:57 : 我不捨得KD=3= 22:57 : -,- 22:57 : 咁冇野 22:57 : 好心痛QAQ 22:57 : 你留住d kd有咩用啊咁= = 22:57 : 睇 22:57 : 同埋串您冇KD 22:57 : -,-你用左都唔會冇... 22:57 : www 22:57 : 的確 22:57 : 佢唔會寫你有幾多kd用左 22:58 : 好吧，夠4~5顆星星我補夠8個 22:58 : = = 22:58 : 會寫 22:58 : 我依加一粒kd都冇.. 22:58 : 因為mapper味比我-,- 22:58 : nold_1702 kudosu > Kudosu Available: 0 22:58 : http://osu.ppy.sh/u/515967 22:58 : -,- 22:59 : 冇人會去你戈度睇你lo= = 22:59 : =3= 22:59 : osuplayer111 我就話會姐.. 22:59 : 其實唔補8顆星星得唔得=w= 23:00 : 冇8粒mat唔mod... 23:00 : 0 Star rank超帥 23:00 : -,- 23:00 : 唔得架 23:00 : rule泥 23:00 : 係喎，之前刪晒 23:00 : 唔記得左添 23:00 : ?? 23:00 : 之前既星星 23:00 : -,- 23:00 : 舊討論區都冇晒 23:00 : -,- 23:01 : 你張insane都幾overmap下.. 23:02 : 雖然卵支持overmap 23:02 : 雖然我支持overmap 23:02 : 是嗎:P 23:02 : 係 23:02 : 有D抄呢張 23:02 *ertyukjh010 is listening to (Hommarju feat. Latte - masterpiece)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12483] 23:02 : 我幫你mod次-,-穩到一個錯 23:02 : 比返粒星你 23:02 : 正方形跳~~ 23:02 : 講黎聽聽 23:02 : 唔好比星 23:02 : 我想講呢張圖其實唔好.. 23:02 : 55 23:03 : 我承認我隨便做 23:03 : 00:23:507 (2) - del...打落去唔順手 23:03 : 因為趕著做下張圖=3= 23:03 : 00:29:444 (2,3,4,5) - 你之前跳左呢度都跳下 23:03 : 29秒減速好了 23:04 : 23s http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240978 23:04 : 咁呢 23:04 : 00:47:257 (2) - add note聽落去會好好聽 23:04 : 是但你 23:04 : 47.257有野 23:04 : 點add 23:04 : ? 23:04 : 有個Slider係度 23:04 : 點加野 23:04 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240980 23:05 : or 23:05 : 其實insane你唔使咁著重distance snap 23:05 : 我map insane 長期都唔開 23:05 : 沒信心 23:05 : 人家新人mapper QAQ 23:05 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240982 23:05 : -,-你叫新我叫味map個 23:06 : 這張圖4個GD mapper 23:06 : 個個經驗都豐富過我 23:06 : 我屎mapper 23:06 : =3= 23:06 : 01:05:277 (1,2,3,4,5) - 23:07 : 係鬼蓄左d 但係咁打順手d http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240983 23:07 : 不要 23:07 : 太難了 23:07 : 01:17:257 (3) - add note打落去好d 23:07 : [easy] 23:08 : 00:10:278 (2) - end at 00:11:319 is the way better than better 23:08 : 轉頭有空的話，幫我測下Offset 23:08 : 我試個 23:08 : 我map咩gd都有試offset 23:08 : 幾準...但係bat可能有更好offset 23:08 : 情況是這樣 23:09 : ? 23:09 : Sara話-16 23:09 : -,- 23:09 : 不對 23:09 : 現在278是Sara說的 23:09 : CH說+10 23:09 : -,-咁咪岩... 23:09 : gav說+20 23:09 : -,- 23:09 : 278我上兩日改= = 23:09 : 等 23:10 : +20 23:10 : 298？ 23:10 : yes 23:10 : 因為Sara他說298，taiko會打出很多100，我再跟他討論一下 23:11 : 其實我比較偏向298 23:11 : 好吧，繼續mod? 23:12 : 298 is better 23:12 : 55 23:12 : 最初我測的是294 23:12 : 01:00:277 (1,2,1) - 我想講 23:12 : 你一定會比人捉 23:13 : 有錯嗎 23:13 : 音樂的確是這樣 23:13 : 佢唔會捉 23:13 : 唔係 23:13 : 冇錯,只係唔順手 23:13 : 的確有點不順手 23:13 : 同怪怪地 23:13 : 放心我都唔搵ice 23:13 : 次次搵佢 23:13 : 佢都無視我 23:13 : easy唔順手好大問題 23:13 : -,- 23:13 : 你試下pm佢 23:14 : 點解一定要找他wwww 23:14 : 佢好好人= = 23:14 : that's all for your diffs 23:14 : 其實不要緊啦，TVsize的話111會rank的了



added nc
http://puu.sh/gvLq
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
[Barry's Normal]

Lacks hitsounds, sounds plain.

[Nlold's Wings]

Gameplay:
00:10:089 (6) - Unexpected Anti-Jump.
01:13:631 (1) - Unexpected Anti-Jump.

Lacks hitsounds, sounds so plain.

[Insane]

Gameplay:
00:48:631 (1) - That was unexpected slowdown, perhaps you could add a warning? (Or don't change speed?)
00:58:464 (5-6) - This Jump is not fun. :(

It lacks hitsounds, it sounds so plain.

Timing Section:
00:53:631 - Isn't it a bit too silent? Maybe increase the volume to 80% or something.

[Saya]

Gameplay:
00:25:298 (4) - New Combo
00:50:298 (1-4) - Ugly-looking Pattern, use a more neat pattern.
00:55:923 (1-6) - ^
01:09:464 (5) - New Combo

Timing Section:

00:53:531 - Volume 75%. This is to emphasize the beat in kiai mode, so you can feel the beat.
01:06:964 - Delete this, it's for the same purpose as ^
01:07:068 - Delete this, it's for the same purpose as ^
Ulysses
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Joined September 2010
Ulysses
No change.
@Ain053:If I have many custom hitsound to use,it'll not be plain.But this idea is not allowed.
ertyukjh010
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Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Ain053 wrote:

[Insane]

Gameplay:
00:48:631 (1) - That was unexpected slowdown, perhaps you could add a warning? (Or don't change speed?) Pls look the Slidertick :)
00:58:464 (5-6) - This Jump is not fun. :( oh, Sorry~

It lacks hitsounds, it sounds so plain.

Timing Section:
00:53:631 - Isn't it a bit too silent? Maybe increase the volume to 80% or something. Done.
Thank you for your modding :D
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
General

delet "Opening" in tags


[Easy]
nothing to say

[Normal]
nothing to say

[wing]
00:23:631 (1) - delet new combo
00:24:048 (1) - same
00:23:631 (5) - add new combo
00:53:006 (1) - delet new combo
01:03:631 (4) - add new combo
01:14:047 (2) - too confuse.

[Insane]
AR-1? is better.

[Saya]
00:20:298 (3) - add normal hitsound end
00:50:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not good jump. it very confusing jump.
ertyukjh010
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Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

General

delet "Opening" in tags X

[Insane]
AR-1? is better. I think AR8 is okay.
no change but thank you for your modding :)
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Hi~ A request from Mod Queue ~ :D

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing to said.

[Easy]
Approach Rate + 1

[Barry's Normal]
Circle Size - 1

[KS's Taiko]
00:45:298 = add finish + clap?
00:48:631 = ^
00:53:631 = why there is no Kiai Time here?? add Kiai Tiime please ~

[Saya]
HP Drain + 2
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:38:631(1) = add whistle?
00:45:298(2) = ^
00:53:631(3) = ^
00:56:964(6) = ^
01:00:298(1) = ^
01:06:443(2,3) = remove whistle and use clap
01:06:964(1) = add whistle
01:08:631(1) = add clap
01:19:881(6) = ^
01:23:423(4) = add finish

Okay ! That's all! :D
Good Luck! :)
Ulysses
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Ulysses
http://puu.sh/h05l
ertyukjh010
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Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi~ A request from Mod Queue ~ :D

[Easy]
Approach Rate + 1 for new players to get into more easy to play

Okay ! That's all! :D
Good Luck! :)
Thank you for your modding :)
safawu
61 posts
Joined September 2009
safawu
嘛,那我发了哦....
SPOILER
[insane]
00:37:778 (3) - 这个slider改成直的?前后都是对称的,这个往左歪有点破坏对称?
00:48:611 (1) - 重新拉下?有点不大好看感觉
00:51:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉还是排成一排整齐(DS适当减小点?)的比较好,这里note比较多,长的串左右间隔感觉不大美观
00:59:652 (6) - 往上移2格,后面2个note也跟着适当调整?

[Saya]
00:08:611 (5) - NC在这是不是比较好?
00:25:278 (4) - NC

[Nlold's Wings]
00:23:611 (1) - 就一个note的NC,还是去掉吧?
00:54:861 (4) - 这个难度定位是hard么?这样的DS大丈夫?
01:11:111 (3,4) - ^

时间有限,只看三个吧...(最近比较懒...

Good luck~

可恶写了一半家里停电了 :<

这回可以射星了吧:3
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ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
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Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

safawu wrote:

[insane]
00:37:778 (3) - 这个slider改成直的?前后都是对称的,这个往左歪有点破坏对称? Done
00:48:611 (1) - 重新拉下?有点不大好看感觉 這種形狀我最喜歡QAQ
00:51:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉还是排成一排整齐(DS适当减小点?)的比较好,这里note比较多,长的串左右间隔感觉不大美观 我再後慮一下怎樣改~直線有點單調的感覺
00:59:652 (6) - 往上移2格,后面2个note也跟着适当调整? 上移2格好像有點偏了~我再看看:3
謝謝Modding了 :)
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
M4M request from in-game ~ :)

Nlold's Wings

  1. 我是應010要求而來的，先做好被挑一堆音效的準備，你敢不改人家就不理你了 ~ ! (以上純屬賣萌)
  2. 00:03:631 (1) - 結束在[00:04:881]會有一種「開始了 ! 」的感覺喔 ~ :3
  3. 00:10:089 (6) - 很沒有必要的縮短距離，而且還會導致誤判(跟前面的1/2拍距離相同而太晚按)，調回一般距離吧
  4. 00:11:964 - 從這裡開始的音效我不喜歡，白線上全填滿的結果就是 ─ 完全沒辦法使用clap的變化，只有呆板且固定的鼓聲
    跟隨歌曲
  5. 00:39:256 (2) - 尾部的whistle去掉，比較好聽
  6. 00:39:881 (3) - ^，唔，濫用了呢...
  7. 00:41:964 (1) - 頭和尾的clap很不好，頭部的clap讓前三個的(clap)的效果減低；尾部的(clap)完全是多餘的東西。於是都
    刪掉。這時頭部的音效感覺很空，放個whistle就解決了\-w-/
  8. 00:46:547 (3) - whistle刪掉，1/4拍連續三個很不好聽的
  9. 00:43:839 (3) - 多餘的whistle，這個讓這一段顯得有些吵雜
  10. 00:45:297 (1) - 頭部不要whistle啊，理由什麼的不想說了lol，去掉比較好聽就對了
  11. 00:47:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 你憑良心說說看這些好不好聽...
  12. 00:50:714 (3) - whistle加錯地方了，改到[00:50:922 (4)]
  13. 00:52:589 (2) - 加new combo，去掉下一個NC，比較符合音樂
  14. 00:53:631 - 這個kai噴個煙火任務就結束 ? 不是吧...快把它設定地跟其他難度一樣吧
  15. 01:14:047 (2) - 強烈建議放在[01:13:631 (1)]的下面，完全重疊。請你想想看玩家提早按、combo斷、臥了個嘈的機率
  16. 01:16:339 (7) - 這slider完全不符合節奏了，反而是[01:15:922 (6)]的時間點要跟它互換
  17. 01:23:631 (1) - 這spinner上的綠線參照Insane的放法設定
  18. 令人費解的是 ─ 副歌之前，經過很長的時間才加一次NC；進副歌之後就變很短
  19. 音效艇多問題的呢...嘛，譜本身還是不錯的 ~

Insane

  1. 00:10:923 (5,6) - (5)頭上加clap，(6)尾部的clap移到頭上。這裡不用管「慣例的clap設法」，只要強調音樂中那兩個很重
    的聲音為主
  2. 00:37:798 (3) - 除了身體之外，clap全下下去吧。這樣能有個「進入緩慢區的轉折點(唔...這名詞用得不好)」，能更加豐富
    音效以及強化效果，可以的話加個60%音量的綠線在尾部以便區分後面的finish的存在
  3. 00:50:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考慮一下這樣的距離，距離過遠打起來不太舒服，而且(2)明顯歪了
  4. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4) - 這不是一個跳的時機，沒有理由
  5. 01:09:256 (2,3) - 該跳的卻沒跳啊 ~ !
  6. 01:23:423 (11) - 缺了個finish
  7. 這音效是以安全為優先設定的吧 ? 我聽得好不爽lol，多加點什麼進去啊 ! T.T

Saya

  1. 00:10:714 (1) - new combo去掉移到[00:10:923 (2)]吧，你想強調音樂中的那兩個聲音就用徹底點，而且這樣設，3連和另一
    個note也能做明顯的區別，看得比較舒服
  2. 00:18:006 (4) - 加個new combo，去掉上一個的NC。在這裡加一個的目的是為了強調這漸寬的間距；去掉上一個是因為這樣的
    顏色分配較符合歌曲轉換點
  3. 00:23:423 (6) - 頭上加個clap ? 感覺比較能配合到前一個的以致於聽起來不會太違和
  4. 00:36:339 (6) - 往左和上各一格(grid level 4)，有點歪了
  5. 00:37:798 (7) - 加new combo在這嗎 ? 這樣可以強調前面的跳躍，也增加美觀程度
  6. 00:51:131 (5) - 加new combo。既符合歌曲行進，也強調連打本身的存在(讓人明顯感覺到這裡有一串連打)，而且也比較漂亮
    (不管是顏色，還是數字)
  7. 01:09:464 (5) - 這裡NC會不會比較好呢 ? 讓人容易分辨這裡有個跳，對玩家的讀譜也有幫助
  8. 01:22:798 (3,5) - 如果不想太大聲幹嘛還用normal的音效呢 ? (3)的頭上和(5)加個soft-whistle不是挺好的嗎 ? :3
    話說，(5)那邊可以用滿大聲的normal-finish呢:O
  9. 01:23:631 (1) - 這spinner上的綠線參照Insane的放法設定
  10. 這難度比前一個稍簡單了點，而且兩個diff的難度太相近，總覺得有阻礙到難度的遞進性

剩下的明天再說
總覺得這m4m不公平啊lol


話說
我第一次聽到這首歌
讓我想到AIR的鳥之詩
ertyukjh010
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DarknessAngel wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:10:923 (5,6) - (5)頭上加clap，(6)尾部的clap移到頭上。這裡不用管「慣例的clap設法」，只要強調音樂中那兩個很重
    的聲音為主 Done
  2. 00:37:798 (3) - 除了身體之外，clap全下下去吧。這樣能有個「進入緩慢區的轉折點(唔...這名詞用得不好)」，能更加豐富
    音效以及強化效果，可以的話加個60%音量的綠線在尾部以便區分後面的finish的存在 Done
  3. 00:50:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考慮一下這樣的距離，距離過遠打起來不太舒服，而且(2)明顯歪了 我眼殘了lol 不過我挺喜歡這星星=3=我再後慮會不會縮小圖案
  4. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4) - 這不是一個跳的時機，沒有理由 純粹是無意義正方形跳（炸
  5. 01:09:256 (2,3) - 該跳的卻沒跳啊 ~ ! 整體上有減速感覺，雖然這裡的確適合做跳~
  6. 01:23:423 (11) - 缺了個finish Done
  7. 這音效是以安全為優先設定的吧 ? 我聽得好不爽lol，多加點什麼進去啊 ! T.T 我音效白痴QAQ
剩下的明天再說
總覺得這m4m不公平啊lol 笨蛋，現在才發現被騙~

話說
我第一次聽到這首歌
讓我想到AIR的鳥之詩 喔，鳥之詩鏡音版好像我有打過~
謝謝專業的音效modding :)
KayeSara
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Shana Aisaka wrote:

[KS's Taiko]
00:45:298 = add finish + clap?
00:48:631 = ^
00:53:631 = why there is no Kiai Time here?? add Kiai Tiime please ~
Sure

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Done~
Ulysses
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Done~
-s u i r e n-
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-s u i r e n-
hi!!

Nice~MAP~:) (*´д｀*)
ertyukjh010
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Thx suirenn05 ><
DarknessAngel
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Barry's Normal

  1. 01:19:464 (5) - 如果是我，我會把尾部的clap去掉，感覺比較有起伏變化
  2. 根本沒啥好挑的，great job ~

Easy

  1. 00:06:964 (3) - 這finish不符合音樂，刪掉它
  2. 00:17:797 (4) - 尾部放上whistle，感覺比較好
  3. 00:21:964 (3) - 比照你之前設定的方式，箭頭上加whistle
  4. 00:43:631 (4) - 第一個箭頭上加whistle嗎 ? 這裡感覺有點空
  5. 00:48:631 (1) - ^
  6. 我現在才發現你的拉長條方式可以既簡單又漂亮，我也來學學...(我拉長條總是拉很久OAQ)



恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~ :)
ertyukjh010
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DarknessAngel wrote:

Easy

  1. 00:06:964 (3) - 這finish不符合音樂，刪掉它 Done
  2. 00:17:797 (4) - 尾部放上whistle，感覺比較好 Done
  3. 00:21:964 (3) - 比照你之前設定的方式，箭頭上加whistle Done
  4. 00:43:631 (4) - 第一個箭頭上加whistle嗎 ? 這裡感覺有點空 Done
  5. 00:48:631 (1) - ^ Done
  6. 我現在才發現你的拉長條方式可以既簡單又漂亮，我也來學學...(我拉長條總是拉很久OAQ) 誇獎了>< 不過到Ins我就拉得很醜了~ 所以將來您給GD我接的話，我比較擅長接Easy :P
[/notice]

恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~ :)
謝謝modding~ :)
Backfire
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Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?

Anyways.
Taiko -
00:51:964 (3) - kat
00:53:631 (1) - finish
01:06:964 (2) - ^
01:13:631 (1) - ^
01:20:298 (1) - ^
You used way too much kkd ddk and such. Try using some more variety next time.
It was still good though. :X
ertyukjh010
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Backfire wrote:

Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?
Creator's requirement :)

Thank you for your modding.
KayeSara
KayeSara
>Backfire
Fix all of them :3
I'll pay attention next time.
Thanks for your modding!

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了，我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。

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KayeSara wrote:

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了，我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。
這樣啊
我改天再找KPY和Kana測一下Timing看看
kanpakyin
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Timing:

  1. 1. Offset: 5,284ms
    BPM: 144.00
ertyukjh010
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OFFSET減少14ms

謝謝KPY ^^
Kawayi Rika
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Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove video audio pls.
  2. Using same KIAI time pls.
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.

[Saya]


  1. 00:10:909 (2) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here,and Remove 00:10:700 (1).
  2. 00:18:617 (7) - ^,00:18:825 (1).
  3. 00:25:284 (4) - ^
  4. 00:51:117 (5) - ^

[Nlold's Wings]


  1. 00:41:533 (3) - Ctrl+R flow much better.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
ertyukjh010
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Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

[General]


  1. Remove video audio pls. 這個影片我放進我的軟件轉檔後，會加速一倍= =神奇啊。所以這個饒了我啦，因為都不是必要的
  2. Using same KIAI time pls. 統一中....
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. Done

謝謝日卡的mod :)

話說日卡是用甚麼轉影片程式，能介紹我嗎
AstroniX_old
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From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了，70%或许更好些，结尾处音量最好也高些

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish
00:21:950(3)- ^
00:26:950(3)- ^
00:30:284(5)- ^
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...)

[Barry's Normal]
00:24:450(5)- new combo

[Nlold's Wings]
00:48:617(1)- remove new combo

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider，不然让人感觉很疑惑~~

[Saya]
00:10:700(8)- remove new combo and at 00:11:325 add it
nice!

很好的一张map,希望早日能RANK,good luck!
ertyukjh010
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AstroniX wrote:

From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了，70%或许更好些，结尾处音量最好也高些 額，但是我的Easy是用80% 0.0

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish Done
00:21:950(3)- ^ Done
00:26:950(3)- ^ Done
00:30:284(5)- ^ Done, 我還真的腦殘的放多了1倍的Finish www
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...) general其實是放一些地圖版面以外的東西:3 例如Timing、setup之類的

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo 不用，這個NC是必須的
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider，不然让人感觉很疑惑~~ 突然用Slider反然讓人不能適應Jump~雖然也有可能誤讀成1/4就是
謝謝modding :)
Loneight
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M4M~
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以)

[Easy]
沒有我可以建議的了...QAQ

[Barry's Normal]
01:08:617 (3) - slider頭加個finish?!

[Nlold's Wings]
找不到可以建議的了 OTZ

[Insane]
同上...OTZ

[Saya]
01:18:617 - 這綠線是不是多了?!

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~
ertyukjh010
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l1106188 wrote:

M4M~

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以) 我軟件無能~將這個影片轉檔不知道怎麼會自動加速一倍=口=不過反正影片有聲音也可以Rank，所以饒了我吧

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
不要緊^^我主要是想找人充回覆數（被打）
因為要4、5頁 MAT才願意過來
TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~
謝謝modding ^^
Ulysses
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No change
Fenya
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Hi :)

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o

Barry's Normal:
00:50:908 (5) - And if you take away the repetition and end up where it ended? http://puu.sh/iS0B According to me, sounds better o.o
01:00:908 (2) - And if you remove the unnecessary slidertick? http://puu.sh/iS2B
01:14:867 (3) - (personal opinion) And if you start at 01:14:867 and end up in 01:15:284 ?

Nlold's Wings:
Why so short that the kiai? o.o
Some Inherited point are unsnapped D:
I feel this bad spacing... Although it is a "Hard"... This very uneven... imo
00:32:784 (4) - End slidertick 1 grid up

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck :)
ertyukjh010
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Fenya wrote:

Hi :)

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o :3

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o Yes, It's not symmetric.
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down Good idea, Done
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up Done
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right Done
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right Done

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck :)
Thank you for your modding :)
MMzz
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Nlold's Wings:

00:06:950 (1,2,3,4) - mark these anti jumps with new combos or something, without I thought they were a stream at first.
00:10:075 (6) - stack this ontop of 00:10:284 (1)?
00:40:908 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:283 (1) - add a finisher to the start?
00:53:200 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:

OD 6 maybe?

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:450 (1) - ^
00:26:117 (1) - ^
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.)
00:55:908 (1) - ^

KS's Taiko:

HP Drain 6-7, OD 6. Never leave settings in the middle, makes things to easy.

Why does the BPM rate change? Keep it at a constant rate the whole song, x1.0 or x1.2, pick one. What you should do though is keep it x1.0 until the kiai, and let the whole kiai have a speed up. That's how speed up are formaly done and noticed in taiko. The points after the kiai should be a constant rate aswell.



Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star.
ertyukjh010
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MMzz wrote:

Insane:

OD 6 maybe? Yes but I have to wait and after consider "Saya" diff's score

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:24:450 (1) - ^ X
00:26:117 (1) - ^ X
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.) X
00:55:908 (1) - ^ X, 1 color 1 distance :3 This is to facilitate the player to read

Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star. Thank your Star :3
Thank you for your modding :)
AlphaXT_old
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Saya

  • 00:16:742 (1) - 這裡開始都是紅線NC，為何
Nlold's wings

  • 00:53:200 (1) - 這個位置NC只是在使讀譜更困難
Barry's Normal

  • 00:33:200 (3,4) -
That all :)
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