This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 10 december 2008 at 1:02:21

Artist: Lia
Title: Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size)
Source: Raw
BPM: 69,5
Filesize: 9820kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,6 stars, 66 notes)
2. Mafiamaster's Hard (4,68 stars, 182 notes)
3. Normal (3,07 stars, 107 notes)

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size)
Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (no video)
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Added notes again

Going steady

Added notes Again.

Need advice Please reply

Added another part

I needs advice pl0x!

Thank you, Resnapped

Made a few changes again Need advice
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Followed some advice again to use distance snapping. (Thanks Pasonia)

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I am finally nearing the end of this beatmap I just need some advice on the final parts and then I need to add the video for full resubmission. If anyone wants too they can make Easy and any other difficulty Hope people will enjoy this.

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Resubmitted.

Added video and better quality mp3

Just needs some checking from some experts and I'm all set for getting a ranked beatmap

Added youtube video (Video from before the latest fixes)


I think its pretty much great now. I thank EVERYONE who has helped me these last days with this beatmap. I am really satisfied with how the map is now

Hope the rest enjoys it too.
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I have to have 2 - 4 difficulties to get in the ranking so I made this easier version.

Please comment on it

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Edited for better timing

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Added MafiaMaster Difficulty (thank you )

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Awaiting approval/ranking :/

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Fixed stuff

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Fixed James' stuff.

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Changed the last part into sliders

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Made last sliders some originaler
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Redid most of Easy-Normal following James his advice
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Added MafiaMasters fixed difficulty
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Fixed Sinistro's suggestions and added a background I made in photoshop

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Uploaded MafiaMasters fixed difficulty

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Renamed all difficulties. Fixed the ugly slider and did the rest of CheeseWarlock's recommendations.

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With the help of Sinistro and Seibei4211 I added another timing section to change the sample volumes

It sounds nicer now.

ok dont do slow japanese songs that fast, especially this one because you can barely hear the song and the beats take most of the sound. I say you should get an American song to start out and go with the beat, then try to listen to more beats and make that song harder. Once you have accomplished that I would go to a fast already made japanese song like hyadain and try redo-ing it yourself

If you decide to do this song again get a skinned (modded whatever) .wav sounds that beats with a light touch of sound so most of the actual song you can hear and tune up your song louder. Make a video or backround with custom color beats too.

For the stars and difficulty, this song has low amount of difficulty for the amount of beats. Try to level your difficulty

Hope this helps

its fast because i try to match with the voacal

Change offset to 17,104 and resnap. And fix any major problems you find.
Afterwards, i'll check it out again!

Resnapped and made a few edits. I need some opinions about the mapping

Mafiamaster's Suggestions~
Move 00:39:01 (7) to 00:38:90. Then move it closer to slider 6.
00:53:79 (3) - Seems a tad bit too long, maybe make it one tick shorter but it'll mess up the symmetric thing. But i'm sure you can make another one.
00:57:24 (1) - Extend this slider 00:58:97.

Your map is going fairly well imo.

Done those and finished map for now

Just need some advice on final timing section. That was really a bitch.

And maybe somehow make easy and hard

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Finished this at school. Will upload when I'm home!

Ok uploaded and ready for approval (I hope)

Please play it and tell me if you guys like it

Good job!
after changing the notes timing at the second timing section.
from 1:09.873 to The end, that specing need to fix too, it's easy.

click on the distance snap, hold down the Alt, look at the top right.. set ( Distance spacing 0.8x )

then move all the notes at correct position.

happy mapping

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Done that and I really enjoyed mapping it ;3

Haha wow, what happened to the offset.
I guess you can change the offset to 17211, then press ctrl+A and drag all the circles over by 1 tick using the 1/4 divisor.
Then move 00:39:11 (7) - closer to slider 6 on the timeline and on the map. (Again.)
Then move all of your beats that are after the second offset, move it back 1 tick to match it up with the offset marker once again. These are for the Vocals Difficulty.

For Easy-Normal, do the same with the first offset (changing it to 17211) then resnap.
Then move 00:17:10 (1) - to 00:17:21.
00:21:95 (2) - Possibly make this slider 1 tick shorter.
00:37:82 (4) - Move to 00:37:93.
00:41:70 (2) - Move to 00:41:81.
00:42:13 (3) - Move to 00:42:24, then shorten the slider a little bit.
00:50:55 (3) - Move back to 00:50:44.
00:52:60 (1) - Shorten slider to 00:54:76
00:56:16 (3) - Move back to 00:56:05, then shorten the slider a little bit.
I suggest either removing the second offset in this one to better get those circles on the beat or you can change the BPM to 69.5 which is half of 139.00 BPM. Then fix some issues that you find after resnapping. Maybe even shorten the sliders to your liking.

Done. Ty again

I see that you wanted another difficulty from someone else. Well here it is! Omg, have fun with this one!
Just stick this in with your other .osu files for this song and do a full submission If you didn't know already!
That is a really nice video. I was blown away. I've never seen Clannad but that video leaves me speechless.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

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Thank you! Think this beatmap is ready for being ranked?

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Hey Jeffro, do you want me to fix those errors on my difficulty, or do you got it?

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Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Uploaded

sigh.. i mean, hi!

easy-normal:
tickrate = 1
01:09:86~end - change this, i dont want newbies to sightread. im forced to sightread this part since you placed notes on awkward positions (blue/red tick) on the timeline.

vocals:
nothing wrong

mafiamaster's:
00:57:34 (3) - yuck!


all difficulties could use some hitsounds..

Added hitsounds and fixed the yucky slider.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Added and I added hitsounds myself and made the last part in easy normal better

ok heres my suggestion on the last part of easy-normal: remove them.
you did not make it easier, its still the same. if you dont want to remove the last part just slap bunch of sliders to it~


mafiamaster's slider: still yuck, why do people like sliders crossing each other? oh well i guess its better than the other one~

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I didnt find anything wrong with it, and i can't bubble this anyways so..im gonna comment on something VERY minor

[Vocals]
00:56:05 (3) - fix the slider endpoint. </nazi>

Oh yeah, you might want to change [Easy-Normal] to Easy, and [Vocals] to Normal. x__X

Made it a tick longer. Sounds better now Ty

difficulty name is OK. dont change it.

easy:
imo you should have halfed the bpm for the whole song, with slidertick rate 2. those ugly long sliders... *shakes fist*
but oh well. anyways,
00:30:15 (4) - shorten it by 1/4 beat, sounds 300x better
01:09:86 (1) - spacing
p.s. use distance snapping, you used it at the last part, so why not at the beginning~3/4 of the song

vocals:
tick rate 1
00:27:56 (8) - 1/2 beat longer
00:47:20 (4) - "
01:04:25 (2) - closer
01:26:27 (2) - 1/4 beat shorter (same ending in easy)

mafiamaster's
WHISTLE SOUND OVERLOAD!!! *dies*
and that slider really irritates me, haha. but its fine, don't change it.

Done all that Ty for your advice and help

Sidenote: Next song I'm doing: T.M Revolution - Invoke



I think it will be a good experience for me to make a fast paced song (Beginning with insane difficulty )

starred for now until Mafiamaster fixes his whistles of ugliness~

Hit sounds of beautifulness fixed.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Download: Mafia - master (Mafiamaster) [Normal].osu

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All difficulties
Add a background for No Video.

Vocals
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Move 2 a bit to the left so it falls exactly between 1 and 3.
01:06:41 (1) - Space it farther than the slider before. Remember to move everything after it as needed.

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BOOBS

*bubbles*

i forgot mafiamaster's difficulty to reduce those overused whistle hitsound~

Ah damn, I totally forgot. Got whistles and finishing sounds mixed up... -_-

I hope this is better.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

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BOOBS--- i mean BUBBLE

w00h, ty james

here boobs in return XD

*reluctant pop*

There's a lot I love about this map. It plays beautifully for the most part, it's generally a great example of inconsistent spacing, and I love the time signature it's written in (alternating 6/4 and 7/4, going into a 4/4 section then 5/8). </musicnerd>

But I nazi it because I love it <3

[Vocals]:
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too far apart.
01:00:15 (2) - This slider's ugly. :<
01:19:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The new combos should be on the opposite hits.

And I'd like to see the difficulties renamed:
[Easy-Normal] -> [Easy]
[Vocals] -> [Normal]
[Mafiamaster's Difficulty] -> [Mafiamaster's Hard]

But I wouldn't call it unrankable because of that.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

*reluctant pop*

There's a lot I love about this map. It plays beautifully for the most part, it's generally a great example of inconsistent spacing, and I love the time signature it's written in (alternating 6/4 and 7/4, going into a 4/4 section then 5/8). </musicnerd>

But I nazi it because I love it <3

[Vocals]:
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too far apart.
01:00:15 (2) - This slider's ugly. :<
01:19:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The new combos should be on the opposite hits.

And I'd like to see the difficulties renamed:
[Easy-Normal] -> [Easy]
[Vocals] -> [Normal]
[Mafiamaster's Difficulty] -> [Mafiamaster's Hard]

But I wouldn't call it unrankable because of that.

Done all that

Poke Poke, get up I'm softbumping you

Aaaactually, I wanted the new combos on the opposite hits. So that the notes timed closer together have the new combos. Everything else looks fine.

Edit: Bubbled.

You mean keep switching isn't that like overlapping i na repetitive way?

Edit: Went in on your advice @ irc.

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There are few maps which make smile in happiness and joy when I play them, and this certainly is one of those. Great job, man.

Thank you ^_^

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