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Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size)

posted 2008-11-05T16:08:04+00:00

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Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-18T01:59:37+00:00

Haha wow, what happened to the offset.

I guess you can change the offset to 17211, then press ctrl+A and drag all the circles over by 1 tick using the 1/4 divisor.
Then move 00:39:11 (7) - closer to slider 6 on the timeline and on the map. (Again.)
Then move all of your beats that are after the second offset, move it back 1 tick to match it up with the offset marker once again. These are for the Vocals Difficulty.

For Easy-Normal, do the same with the first offset (changing it to 17211) then resnap.
Then move 00:17:10 (1) - to 00:17:21.
00:21:95 (2) - Possibly make this slider 1 tick shorter.
00:37:82 (4) - Move to 00:37:93.
00:41:70 (2) - Move to 00:41:81.
00:42:13 (3) - Move to 00:42:24, then shorten the slider a little bit.
00:50:55 (3) - Move back to 00:50:44.
00:52:60 (1) - Shorten slider to 00:54:76
00:56:16 (3) - Move back to 00:56:05, then shorten the slider a little bit.
I suggest either removing the second offset in this one to better get those circles on the beat or you can change the BPM to 69.5 which is half of 139.00 BPM. Then fix some issues that you find after resnapping. Maybe even shorten the sliders to your liking.

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-18T16:46:54+00:00

Done. Ty again

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-19T00:34:53+00:00

I see that you wanted another difficulty from someone else. Well here it is! Omg, have fun with this one!
Just stick this in with your other .osu files for this song and do a full submission If you didn't know already!
That is a really nice video. I was blown away. I've never seen Clannad but that video leaves me speechless.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

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Jeffro 2008-11-19T06:03:49+00:00

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Al-Azif

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Al-Azif 2008-11-19T10:59:18+00:00

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Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-19T21:13:13+00:00

Thank you! Think this beatmap is ready for being ranked?

Rolled

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Rolled 2008-11-19T21:25:45+00:00

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Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-19T22:07:49+00:00

Hey Jeffro, do you want me to fix those errors on my difficulty, or do you got it?

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-19T22:08:32+00:00

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Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-19T23:17:57+00:00

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Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-19T23:21:05+00:00

Uploaded

James

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James 2008-11-20T02:43:29+00:00

sigh.. i mean, hi!

easy-normal:
tickrate = 1
01:09:86~end - change this, i dont want newbies to sightread. im forced to sightread this part since you placed notes on awkward positions (blue/red tick) on the timeline.

vocals:
nothing wrong

mafiamaster's:
00:57:34 (3) - yuck!

all difficulties could use some hitsounds..

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-20T03:39:34+00:00

Added hitsounds and fixed the yucky slider.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-20T08:30:38+00:00

Added and I added hitsounds myself

and made the last part in easy normal better

James

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James 2008-11-21T13:47:50+00:00

ok heres my suggestion on the last part of easy-normal: remove them.
you did not make it easier, its still the same. if you dont want to remove the last part just slap bunch of sliders to it~

mafiamaster's slider: still yuck, why do people like sliders crossing each other? oh well i guess its better than the other one~

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-21T14:40:20+00:00

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Zerostarry

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Here since the beginning

Zerostarry 2008-11-21T22:49:35+00:00

I didnt find anything wrong with it, and i can't bubble this anyways so..im gonna comment on something VERY minor

[Vocals]
00:56:05 (3) - fix the slider endpoint. </nazi>

Oh yeah, you might want to change [Easy-Normal] to Easy, and [Vocals] to Normal. x__X

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-21T22:51:40+00:00

Made it a tick longer. Sounds better now

Ty

James

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James 2008-11-22T12:38:38+00:00

difficulty name is OK. dont change it.

easy:
imo you should have halfed the bpm for the whole song, with slidertick rate 2. those ugly long sliders... *shakes fist*
but oh well. anyways,
00:30:15 (4) - shorten it by 1/4 beat, sounds 300x better
01:09:86 (1) - spacing

p.s. use distance snapping, you used it at the last part, so why not at the beginning~3/4 of the song

vocals:
tick rate 1
00:27:56 (8) - 1/2 beat longer
00:47:20 (4) - "
01:04:25 (2) - closer
01:26:27 (2) - 1/4 beat shorter (same ending in easy)

mafiamaster's
WHISTLE SOUND OVERLOAD!!! *dies*
and that slider really irritates me, haha. but its fine, don't change it.

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

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Jeffro 2008-11-22T13:32:03+00:00

Done all that

Ty for your advice and help

Sidenote: Next song I'm doing: T.M Revolution - Invoke

I think it will be a good experience for me to make a fast paced song (Beginning with insane difficulty

)

James

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James 2008-11-22T13:46:12+00:00

starred for now until Mafiamaster fixes his whistles of ugliness~

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-22T15:51:05+00:00

Hit sounds of beautifulness fixed.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Download: Mafia - master (Mafiamaster) [Normal].osu

Zerostarry

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Here since the beginning

Zerostarry 2008-11-22T19:35:56+00:00

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Sinistro

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Sinistro 2008-11-23T13:04:42+00:00

All difficulties
Add a background for No Video.

Vocals
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Move 2 a bit to the left so it falls exactly between 1 and 3.
01:06:41 (1) - Space it farther than the slider before. Remember to move everything after it as needed.

James

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James 2008-11-23T17:33:52+00:00

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Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-23T18:42:28+00:00

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James

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James 2008-11-23T19:02:48+00:00

BOOBS

~~*bubbles*~~

i forgot mafiamaster's difficulty to reduce those overused whistle hitsound~

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2008-11-24T21:36:46+00:00

Ah damn, I totally forgot. Got whistles and finishing sounds mixed up... -_-

I hope this is better.

Download: Lia - Toki wo Kizamu Uta (TV Size) (Jeffro) [Mafiamaster's Difficulty].osu

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-11-27T01:02:05+00:00

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James

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James 2008-11-27T02:52:27+00:00

BOOBS--- i mean BUBBLE

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-12-06T09:54:45+00:00

w00h, ty james

here boobs in return XD

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2008-12-06T15:48:55+00:00

*reluctant pop*

There's a lot I love about this map. It plays beautifully for the most part, it's generally a great example of inconsistent spacing, and I love the time signature it's written in (alternating 6/4 and 7/4, going into a 4/4 section then 5/8). </musicnerd>

But I nazi it because I love it <3

[Vocals]:
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too far apart.
01:00:15 (2) - This slider's ugly. :<
01:19:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The new combos should be on the opposite hits.

And I'd like to see the difficulties renamed:
[Easy-Normal] -> [Easy]
[Vocals] -> [Normal]
[Mafiamaster's Difficulty] -> [Mafiamaster's Hard]

But I wouldn't call it unrankable because of that.

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

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Jeffro 2008-12-06T16:34:48+00:00

CheeseWarlock wrote:
*reluctant pop*

There's a lot I love about this map. It plays beautifully for the most part, it's generally a great example of inconsistent spacing, and I love the time signature it's written in (alternating 6/4 and 7/4, going into a 4/4 section then 5/8). </musicnerd>

But I nazi it because I love it <3

[Vocals]:
00:28:42 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too far apart.
01:00:15 (2) - This slider's ugly. :<
01:19:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The new combos should be on the opposite hits.

And I'd like to see the difficulties renamed:
[Easy-Normal] -> [Easy]
[Vocals] -> [Normal]
[Mafiamaster's Difficulty] -> [Mafiamaster's Hard]

But I wouldn't call it unrankable because of that.

Done all that

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-12-08T19:05:45+00:00

Poke Poke, get up I'm softbumping you

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2008-12-09T03:16:07+00:00

Aaaactually, I wanted the new combos on the opposite hits. So that the notes timed closer together have the new combos. Everything else looks fine.

Edit: Bubbled.

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

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Jeffro 2008-12-09T04:24:46+00:00

You mean keep switching isn't that like overlapping i na repetitive way?

Edit: Went in on your advice @ irc.

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Orkel

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Orkel 2008-12-09T14:53:28+00:00

There are few maps which make smile in happiness and joy when I play them, and this certainly is one of those. Great job, man.

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2008-12-09T17:10:48+00:00

Thank you ^_^

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Sinistro

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Sinistro 2008-12-09T22:48:41+00:00

Jeffro decided to follow Seibei's suggestion on multiple timing sections to change sample set volumes throughout the map, so I'm withholding ranking at the moment and protecting this from ranking with a star.

Jeffro

Joined October 2008

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Jeffro 2008-12-09T23:02:19+00:00

Already done

Only took 1 extra timing section for the chorus as it gets louder there

But indeed it sounds so much better now so Thank You to both

and to the rest who helped me of course

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