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Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN

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Kotone
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 15 May, 2012 at 19:07:09

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: HAMELN
Tags: aesopl19193 Shinki Seifuu Meigetsu Drop Seifuumeigetsu koisuru marionette
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5430kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. aesopl's Normal (3.1 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Easy (2.21 stars, 190 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 560 notes)
  4. Shinki's Hard (4.81 stars, 493 notes)
Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HAMELN from HAMELN~Koisuru Marionette CD
sorry for this really bad map;.;
Yura Project:(?)
HAMELN | Koisuru Marionette | The Secret Garden

Produce : SeifuuMeigetsu
Compose, Arrangement, Mix, Mastering : Drop
Lyrics, Vocal : Hatsuki Yura

Hentai CD and lyrics :<

Mapset:
Normal by aesopl19193
Hard by Shinki
Easy,Insane by me
Last edited by Kotone , edited 23 times in total.
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
:idea:

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [Normal].osu
Bakario
Bakario


sliders ftw asd

Edit: here i resized the bg to 1024x768 if you don't mind

SPOILER

im so bored ^_______________^

another edit: you could add "Hameln ~Koisuru Marionette~" to the source

omg,i need to go outside :cry:
Kotone
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Kotone
sorry...album name can't be the source...
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Large change

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [Normal].osu
Kotone
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OK.Moved to pending
S h i o n
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S h i o n
ok..

先占位

To 326
eveless
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eveless
Insane
  1. 00:29:608 (1,2,3) - 这个其实可以更跳一点比如ctrl+J什么的毕竟是重音
  2. 别和1重合在一起比较好吧...个人的意见是这样放,毕竟音乐上还有个递进的感觉
    SPOILER
  3. 01:23:147 (1) - 这个NC没有很大必要...我觉得不nc比较好看
  4. 01:36:301 (7) - 把它移到6和1的尾巴的中间位置?
  5. 01:58:224 (2) - 没放好
  6. 03:10:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - 这段音效呢
Shinki's Hard
  1. 00:39:301 (5) - new combo
    02:09:762 (8) - ^
    02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 这需要自重
    02:59:608 (1) - kiai呢
aesopl's Normal
  1. 02:33:301 (4) - spacing
Easy
  1. 02:51:762 (3) - 这里应该还是0.8spacing 下个1开始才是1.0才对
S h i o n
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S h i o n
:)

Easy
  1. 00:37:455 (1) - 后面的break要去掉吗~
  2. 00:55:455 (4) - 后面的break最好拉到最前面那根红线，然后在01:01:455结束. 02:11:147 (4) - 这个break同
  3. 03:12:993 (2) - clap换成finish
aesopl's Normal
  1. 01:16:224 (1) - 这个slidertick的声音..
  2. 01:34:224 (1) - 推荐这样：
  3. 02:35:608 (3) - NC
326's Hard
  1. 00:03:762 (5,6,1) - 一开始就那么鬼畜大丈夫?
  2. 00:33:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 超呆。 像后面一样在00:33:301和00:34:224分别加个NOTE还稍好些
  3. 01:18:532 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不舒服的自创连打
  4. 01:30:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  5. 01:55:455 (1) - 换成slider么
  6. 02:01:340 (8) - delete 02:41:955 (5) - delete
  7. 02:08:608 (3) - NC
  8. 02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 这需要自重+1
Insane
  1. 00:01:339 (4) - add note ? 加了感觉超棒啊= = 和后面的也搭
  2. 00:22:224 (3) - NC
  3. 00:47:147 (2) - 头放在(5)的尾巴~?
  4. 01:57:301 (3,4) - 第一次玩我就以为是3/4的组合了.. 不要叠(4) 放(3)左边去?
  5. 02:51:647 (6) - add note ?
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 这个不是很好看= =
Kotone
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bump
Last edited by Kotone , edited 1 time in total.
Kotone
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@eve :all fixed ,thank you :>

S h i o n wrote:

:)

Easy
  1. 00:37:455 (1) - 后面的break要去掉吗~
  2. 00:55:455 (4) - 后面的break最好拉到最前面那根红线，然后在01:01:455结束. 02:11:147 (4) - 这个break同 改到白線
  3. 03:12:993 (2) - clap换成finish
Insane
  1. 00:01:339 (4) - add note ? 加了感觉超棒啊= = 和后面的也搭 不要..
  2. 00:22:224 (3) - NC 沒必要
  3. 00:47:147 (2) - 头放在(5)的尾巴~? 不要..
  4. 01:57:301 (3,4) - 第一次玩我就以为是3/4的组合了.. 不要叠(4) 放(3)左边去?
  5. 02:51:647 (6) - add note ? 不..
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 这个不是很好看= = 還好吧..
other fixed
Thanks tsundere
JoJo
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JoJo
As your request.

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. BG分辨率似乎不符合规定，麻烦resize到1024*768或者800*600.
  2. aesopl's Normal没有tags，请加上.
  3. Please disable useless countdown.
  4. 为什么只有normal是做到底的..
[Easy]
  1. 00:33:762 (1,3) - 难看...
  2. 00:39:532 (x) - 这个break太短感觉毫无意义，建议删掉.
  3. 00:55:916 (x) - Drug the break to here. 或者加个note试试.
  4. 02:11:147 (x) - Useless timing section.
  5. 02:11:608 (x) - 同上面的上面..
[aesopl's Normal]
  1. 00:16:685 (4) - 试试叠到00:15:301 (1)上面？
  2. 02:04:214 (x) - 麻烦resnap timing section.
[Shinki's Hard]
  1. 最后不设置kiai么？
  2. 00:53:839 (7,8,9,10) - 这里玩起来的时候很难读诶..全叠在一起哪个是note哪个是slider都分不清.（同02:09:531 (7,8,9,10)
  3. 00:54:070 (8) - 好长的串..来个new combo吧.
  4. 01:18:301 (2) - 1 grid right?
  5. 03:14:378 (x) - Add a circle ?
[Insane]
  1. 这个难度的mod均可看做纯吐槽.
  2. 00:00:531 (1) - Unsnapped.
  3. 00:12:993 (1) - 重新叠一下？
  4. 00:14:839 (1) - Holy shit...我知道你不会改但是我不得不说，这第一遍打的时候readable?
  5. 00:22:224 (3) - Again,至少new combo一下吧.后面还有的就不提了..
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 看了半天也不知道这个slider的路线是什么...
  7. 02:59:955 (2,3) - 重新叠一下.
没了.
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193
Thanks!
all fixed

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [aesopl's Normal].osu
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
IRC moded fight yingying ~ star ~ ;)

SPOILER
00:10 <Kawayi_Rika> : 等我重新下载
00:14 <Kawayi_Rika> : 把countdown 勾掉
00:14 <karenying> : 嗯
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:45:762 (6) -
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这加个NC?
00:18 <karenying> : I?
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:18 <karenying> : 沒必要吧..
00:19 <Kawayi_Rika> : 哦 好
00:20 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:54:993 - 加finish,whitstle 删掉？
00:20 <karenying> : 好
00:22 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:09:762 (1) - 可以考虑把这NC 去掉 不是大跳 应该没关系
00:23 <karenying> : nc了好像好看些
00:23 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯 喜欢就加
00:24 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:14:378 (1) - 加whistle
00:24 <karenying> : 好
00:25 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:18:993 - 加finish,whistle 去掉
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:20:378 -
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:21:301 -
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这里都加finish 我觉的好听 比clap 个个建议
00:27 <karenying> : 加finish好像太重了..
00:27 <Kawayi_Rika> : 减点音量试试
00:29 <karenying> : 唔..有點怪 先保留了
00:29 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:43:916 -
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这里NC
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:44:839 - 删掉
00:32 <karenying> : ok
00:32 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:47:608 (1,2,3,4) -
00:33 <Kawayi_Rika> : 建议把1叠到5
00:33 <karenying> : 這個..故意的
00:33 <Kawayi_Rika> : 哈哈 好
00:34 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:53:147 (1) - 挪中间吧 ><
00:36 <karenying> : ok
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:01:685 (1) -
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : X:336 Y:88
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : 移这试试
00:37 <karenying> : ok
00:38 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:10:685 -
00:39 <Kawayi_Rika> : finish ，and remove whistle
00:39 <karenying> : k
00:39 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:26:378 - finish
00:40 <karenying> : k
00:41 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:34:685 (3) - Ctil+R ？
00:42 <karenying> : k
00:43 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:40:108 (4) - 大跳加个NC 建议
00:43 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:40:685 (6) - Ctil+R
00:44 <karenying> : 不要>A<
00:44 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 03:09:301 (3) -
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 手动叠一下 没叠好
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 不对
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 说错了 不好意思
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : ...
00:46 <karenying> : ..baka
00:47 <Kawayi_Rika> : sorry TT
00:47 <karenying> : 因為是baga 所以大丈夫
00:47 <Kawayi_Rika> : ...TT
00:48 <Kawayi_Rika> : Hard go
00:48 <karenying> : Hard的po吧
00:49 <karenying> : 我不好改
00:49 <Kawayi_Rika> : N 也是吗
00:49 <karenying> : nm也是
00:49 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好 那直接看看E
00:49 <karenying> : 好
00:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 放过新手吧 3连有压力 TT
00:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:49:455 (2,3,4) - 同 3连就不要叠了 TT
00:53 <karenying> : bpm不高 而且不多 大丈夫
00:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好吧
00:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:01:455 -
00:54 <Kawayi_Rika> : Break 怎么不一样 往后拉
00:54 <karenying> : k
00:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:11:608 -
00:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : Break 也不一样 往前拉
00:59 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:24:532 - ^
01:00 <karenying> : k
01:01 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好就这些了 N H 我会POST
01:02 <karenying> : ok
01:02 <karenying> : thx:>

[Shinki's Hard]


  • Why not used finish hitsound? I feel better added.
    Arrangement as a whole is good.

    00:00:532 - Add finish.
    00:07:916 - ^
    00:14:839 - ^
    00:22:685 - ^
    00:30:070 - ^
    00:39:301 (5) - Add new comebo to here.
    00:41:147 - Add finish.
    00:48:070 - ^
    00:52:224 - ^
    00:55:455 - ^
    01:10:685 - ^
    01:16:224 - ^
    01:18:070 - ^
    01:23:608 - ^
    01:27:301 - ^
    01:38:378 - ^
    01:45:762 - ^
    01:49:455 (4,4,3) - ^
    01:56:839 - ^
    02:04:224 - ^
    02:26:378 - ^
    02:27:301 (1) - Not need new combo to here,Remove pls.
    02:33:647 - Add finish.
    02:42:993 (1) - Add finish and Remove whistle.
    02:44:839 - Add finish.
    02:52:224 - ^
    02:56:839 - ^
    02:57:762 - ^
    02:59:608 - ^
    03:06:532 - ^


[aesopl's Normal]


  • 01:30:532 - Add finish and Remove clap.
    01:40:224 (1) - Not need new combo to here,Remove pls.
    01:43:916 (1) - ^
wmfchris
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wmfchris
hahahaha

聽日我即場map [Taiko] 出黎
Nymph
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Nymph
General:
BG大小 you know

自己的难度的KIAI是要求一致的


Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 我觉得easy难度没有必要加中间那一下吧 后面也是相同的建议
没什么值得挑的了


Normal:
Issues
02:04:224 (1) - KIAI线没对齐
没了 挺好的


Hard:
Issue
也是同啾啾的意见 后面该加KIAI吧

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:15:993 (6,1) - 这样的间距我觉得不咋好看 想办法弄正常点？
01:19:455 (9,10) - 这两个摆同样的X坐标呗 不用非得错开一点吧

Hitsound
hitsound太缺乏了 好多可以加clap和finish的位置 不知道你的具体想法 所以我不mod音效了 不过还是建议加一下 单whistle真是太不给力了


Insane:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:22:224 (3) - 变速newcombo？
00:48:070 (5) - ^类似的建议都加上
00:55:455 (2) -
01:30:532 (2) -
02:11:147 (2) -
没别的可挑的

yoshi~彻底还完所有已知债务了 轻松~
Kotone
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Kotone
BG is 4:3 and in 1024*768 so this is ok
Don't say it anymore
其他等我上電腦
hoLysoup
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Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
bakaying~ :D!

[General]
BG前面的人都說過了 就不多說了~
不把koisuru marionette加到tags嗎?

[Aesopl's Normal]
00:12:532 (2) - why finish here? 聽起來很奇怪
00:42:762 (3) - I suggest, remove this beat, and add a beat here: 00:42:301.
02:04:224 - This kiai line is unsnapped
02:33:762 (1,2) - 這突然跳這麼遠 為什麼? :<
02:50:378 (4) - NC
03:28:224 (5) - NC

[Shinki's Hard]
為什麼不用clap? 整個difficulty玩起來感覺沒音效
00:07:455 (6) - add a clap on slider head?
00:17:147 (5) - NC
00:54:070 (8) - NC
02:09:762 (8) - NC
02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 這...可能對hard來說有點太難
02:52:224 (1) - Finish
02:59:608 - 這裡為甚麼沒有kiai?

[Insane]
00:42:878 (9,1) - 這個spacing, 玩得時候就變得不一樣了. manual stack? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230461
01:29:147 (1) - 這個NC去掉? 我覺得比較容易讀.
01:30:301 (1) - 這個NC也去掉? 因為前面也是2x slider才有NC
01:42:993 (6) - NC..?
02:46:224 (5) - 再加一個repeat? 或是beat? :>
03:08:724 (6,1) - 00:42:878 (9,1) 跟這裡一樣


沒了~ 無話可說
好圖
:D!
快教我怎麼做圖!
Kotone
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Topic Starter
Kotone
fixed some desu!
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193
All fixed!
Thanks!

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [aesopl's Normal].osu
Sun Rainbow
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Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Mod(这叫MOD吗）
Easy XD
00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 对于EASY来说出现这个会不会太难了……
00:43:916 (2,1) - ^
00:49:455 (2,3,4) - ^
其他的有类似的问题就不说了你自己看着办吧
00:55:455 (4) - 要不要再考虑加个Clap?
01:51:300 (3) - 觉得这个好别扭（被打）

aesopl's Normal
00:22:108 - 老兄NORMAL不可以变速啊
其他有变速的自己看着办吧
其他的暂时没什么问题（Karen:为什么我的EASY的MOD多过Normal啊！看我一棒！
sun rainbow：啊救命啊冰峰！！！！）

H和I我不是很会MOD的……（Karen:不会MOD还来干嘛）

Shinki's Hard
00:21:993 (x) - 不加点什么吗感觉很空虚啊
00:43:916 (10) - 要不要考虑加个NC？
00:45:070 (4) - ^
00:45:532 (7) - ^

insane
不好意思这个我没办法MOD好难
Flask
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Flask
我是來保護彩虹的冰峰

以下一點點建議 :D

Easy
[00:05:147] 這個(2)可以再進去一點點嘛 ?!

[00:06:993] ^ 跟上面一樣
[00:22:685] 這個(1)跟(3) ... 其實不同吧 ( 這請無視 )

[00:25:916] (4) 改到這

[00:37:455] 轉盤改長

[00:42:070] 改成

[00:43:916] 滑條改短 才對的上節奏 >___>

[00:49:455] 一樣刪一個note

[00:51:301] 一樣改短 >___>

[01:25:454] 滑條往上一點點 對齊(2)

[01:38:377] 又來了 兩個滑條其實不一樣對吧 ... ( 快無視 ! )

[01:53:147] 轉盤改長 上面有相似情況 !!! ( 請仿照上面的方式 )

[01:57:762] 一樣刪note

[01:59:608] 滑條改短

[02:05:147] 刪note

[02:06:993] 滑條改短

[02:50:378] 滑條往下對齊 (3)

[03:00:532] 刪 note

[03:09:762] 一樣 滑條改短

套一句話 :

站在初學著的立場上 這個Easy太難了 !!!
---- By Sun Rainbow

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aesopl's Normal

[00:16:685] (4)請對齊(2) 不然亂亂的

[01:05:147] (3)往左邊移一點 讓(3)(4)(5)變的一條斜線

[01:38:378] (1)往右邊一條一格 (2)往右邊條兩格 讓(1尾)(2)(3頭)變一直線
另外 (3)往下一點點

[03:03:301] 天啊這四個note ... 改成

Normal很不錯喔 :D !!

完了我也要被打了

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Shinki's Hard

[00:37:916] 滑條(2)往右移

[00:39:993] (3)和(2)對齊

[00:43:916] 這個(10)換成New Combo 吧 -A-

[00:45:532] 這什麼 !!! Hard不應該出現這種串燒吧 @A@ !! 神Mapper啊
(1,2,3)改成 (7,8,9)改成

[01:10:685] (3,5,7)每個滑條的前端都+Finish (和1一樣)
這邊的排列好美我喜歡>A<!!

[01:56:378] (3)對齊(2)

[02:30:762] 這個(2)要剛好壓到(1)和(3) 而且壓到的部分要一樣大 ( 像你現在的就是(1)太小(3)太大 )
^ 可能很難看出來 不過修一修吧

[02:37:455] (3)對齊(2)

[02:38:341] ^ (3)對齊(2)

[02:42:993] 排菱形也要排的好 ! 對稱一點

[02:45:070] 對齊(1)

[02:47:608] (4)往左下角移一點 (4)壓到(3)的部份 = (1)壓到(2)的部分 (4)壓到(1)的部份 = (2)壓到(3)的部分

[03:07:685] (4)要比(3)高喔 就像(1)比(2)高那樣

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Insane

[00:04:685] (2)跑出來一點點了 .___. 請對齊(1)的尾巴

[00:05:608] ^ 同上

[00:06:532] ^ 同上

[00:14:839] 這邊變速不好吧 ? 請改掉

[00:48:070] 變速不好吧 wwww 請改掉

[00:55:455] 這邊可改可不改 不過我還是不喜歡變速

之後有變速的問題我就不說了

[01:33:532] 怎麼讓一顆note躺在馬路(滑條)上呢 >___> 移走

[02:59:147] ... 這個滑條不要自己疊在自己身上orz ...



以上一點建議 :D Good Map !
彩虹我來保護你了
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from in-game PM

hard的countdown摘掉
kiai好像差蛮多的。。自己查下吧

[easy]
01:59:147 (1) - 这NC有用?
03:13:916 (4) - 这clap几乎都没听见。。考虑加音?
[normal]
01:23:608 (1) - 跟前面stack或者摆1.3吧。。总感觉低难度这样 新手容易按早
[hard]
00:48:532 (1) - 头可以finish
[insane]
02:47:839 (2) - 意义不明
02:59:147 (1) - 遮的略多。不清楚会不会被蝙蝠吐槽
顺带H和I里面的1/3我觉得都off..个人认为这样是对的
哈哈看到这渣mod我就想哭
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
Hi~! :)

[Insane]
00:01:455 (4) - 我感觉(4)应该离(3)稍微再远一点 即使editor里说间隔一样 但是玩起来还是觉得间隔像1/2
01:10:455 (x) - 这里玩的时候觉得空了 我认为应该在这加个note
01:58:224 (2) - 这个slider位置太高了 很容易被看成一个点 我第一次玩的时候也差点没看清
:) 这个diff玩起来很有趣 好喜欢

[Hard]
我感觉音效的部分听起来比较平淡
而且整个diff都没怎么看到clap :o 为了充实音效 在一些音乐中clap比较明显的地方下24白线clap吧
00:54:070 (1,2,3) - 这三个我感觉不要叠起来比较好 叠起来的话难度会比较高 而且它们离(4)太近了 我感觉拉到和(4)上下对称就差不多了
01:26:839 (x) - 这里我感觉不应该为了跟vocal而空着 玩起来会觉得不协调
01:37:224 (4) - nazi一下 这个(4)应该向左上各一格 (level 4)
01:41:608 (x) - 同01:26:839
02:09:762 (1,2,3) - 同00:54:070
03:13:455 (3) - 我感觉这个也是不要叠起来比较好
:) 主要问题还是在音效 加油~

[Normal]
纯nazi ><
00:16:685 (4) - 左移一格
03:06:301 (6) - 左移一格
:D 实在找不到什么问题 GJ~

[Easy]
:P 我感觉这个也可以了
给不出值得一提的建议了 ;_;

:> 加油~ 326&bakaying
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone
能改的都改了 326音效那邊我先問問326
謝謝mod
bossandy
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2010
bossandy
  • Hi Bakaying~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. 紅色 : 是我覺得一並要改的
  2. 藍色 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
  3. 黑色 : 就單純建議
    　
    [ General ]
    　
  4. BG size要調整 之前好像有人給過你了 我就不幫你調了 >_<
  5. Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit )
  6. 我覺得kiai time結束後又多閃一次有點多餘
    　
    [ Easy ]
    　
  7. 00:43:455 (1) - 這裡NC沒意義
  8. 01:59:147 (1) - ^
  9. 02:11:147 (4) - 少加了clap?
  10. 02:44:378 (X) - 加個note感覺更好?
    　
    [ aesopl's Normal ]
    　
  11. 00:33:301 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 00:34:224 (2) - NC
  13. 00:44:378 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 00:45:301 (2) - NC
  15. 00:51:762 (1) - Remove NC
  16. 00:52:224 (6) - NC
  17. 00:54:070 (4) - 結尾的finish改成clap或clap+finish?
  18. 01:26:839 (1) - Remove NC
  19. 01:27:762 (2) - NC
  20. 01:34:224 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 01:34:685 (2) - NC
  22. 01:48:993 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 01:49:455 (3) - NC
  24. 02:00:070 (1) - Remove NC
  25. 02:00:993 (2) - NC
  26. 02:07:455 (1) - Remove NC
  27. 02:07:916 (7) - NC
  28. 02:10:685 (9) - 這個slider的尾巴碰到HP Bar了~
    SPOILER
  29. 03:03:301 (1) - finish
  30. 03:10:224 (1) - Remove NC
  31. 03:11:147 (2) - NC
  32. 03:12:532 (1) - Remove NC
    　
    [ Shinki's Hard ]
    　
  33. 00:22:224 (1) - 去掉NC 這沒什麼必要
  34. 01:37:916 (1) - ^
  35. 02:01:685 (1) - 去掉NC 因為這段的spacing跟前面的一樣
  36. 02:58:685 (4) - 結尾除了finish再加個clap吧
    　
    [ Insane ]
    　
  37. 01:29:839 (2) - 變成這樣的spacing不? 跟個音樂讓spacing變小>_<
    SPOILER
    　
    　　--------------------------------------------------------
Insane的jump好舒服喔 xD Nice Map!!!
Have my Star ~ Good Luck :3
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
Short Mod~

Shinki's Hard
00:22:224 - I think it looks better if you put this circle more to the left
00:30:993 - Reverse this slider
00:31:455 - ^
00:43:916 - Instead of stacking them all, place them somewhere else
00:54:532 - This part is um,, xD Make only circles of it or only a slider
01:18:070 - Put it farther away
01:46:685 - I see you copied and pasted this, so reverse this slider too
01:47:147 - ^
01:59:608 - same as 00:43:916 -
02:10:108 - same as 00:54:532 -
02:38:147 - Distance spacing is waaay too big, place the slider closer or place the other slider closer
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Shinki's Hard only :D

00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) - a bit hard while playing for hard diff
01:22:916 (7) - sorry for nazi but 1 grid up look better also I think last point of this slider , adding whistle may be full fill its sound for me
01:51:762 (1) - new combo looks better imo
02:09:762 (1,3,4) - same as 00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) -
02:37:455 (3,1) - too suddenly jump for me but whatever
02:39:762 (2) - sorry for nazi again but down 1 grid will make it balance compared to (1) and (3)
02:43:916 (5) - I prefer new combo this
02:56:147 (5) - just my opinion , new combo this make better fit to the vocal

just that :3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
mod4mod~

Hard

  1. 00:21:070 (3,4,5,6) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot293-0.jpg it fits music more ^^
  2. 00:25:916 (8) - add a note? i think it sounds good
  3. 00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r?
  4. 00:45:993 (1,2,3,4) - 这样摆 http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot294-0.jpg 跟歌词啊..
  5. 00:54:532 (3) - 这个slider是1/3拍
  6. 01:41:955 - add note多送一分多好
  7. 02:01:685 (1,2,3,4) - oo oo here
  8. 02:10:224 (3) - 1/3
  9. 02:54:301 (1) - 这个换1/4 slider+repeat吧... 然后 02:54:762 加个note
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Regou
1,927 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
M4M~

Shinki's Hard
00:18:532 (6,1) - Spacing?...
00:54:416 (2,3,4) - 把他們combine成一個slider就好了啊
01:34:224 (7,1) - 跟00:18:532 (6,1)一樣
02:10:108 (2,3,4) - 跟00:54:416 (2,3,4)一樣
02:36:993 (x) - 加一個circle在這裡
02:48:070 (x) - ^
02:58:108 (2,3) - 一樣,combine成一個slider吧
03:00:993 (1,2,3,4) - 個人不太喜歡這樣,,,(1,2,3)換成circle吧
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把(1,2,3,4)弄成兩個slider吧
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[Shinki's Hard]

00:13:916 (2) - ctrl R?
00:11:608 (1,2) - 这两个滑条略丑。。弯的角度小一点比较好
00:36:301 (x) - 不三连吗
00:54:070 (1,2,3) - 感觉节奏应该是两个1/3音折返滑条，类似03:12:532 (1,2)
01:14:839 (2) - ctrl R?
01:19:339 (4) - 可以考虑加note
01:29:608 (2) - ctrl R?
01:56:839 (1..) - 直接复制前面的转个方向不好吧。。现在容易产生即视感
02:47:608 (4) - nazi -往左一格，往下一格(grid 4)
02:57:762 (1,2) - 和00:54:070 (1,2,3)一样
03:07:685 (4) - nazi - 往下一格(grid 4)

That's all I can find. GL~
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
hello

[Shinki's Hard]

00:04:801 (2) - add note
00:18:532 (6) - finish
00:30:993 (3) - RM NC
00:45:070 (4,5,6) - change slider here. consecutive triple is very hard, for Hard player
00:54:416 (2,3) - spacing :d
02:10:108 (2,3) - ^
02:57:762 (1,2,3) - ^ Xd chage

test play result

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274332
miss point :d
00:54:416 (2,3)
02:58:108 (2,3)
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274339
02:05:377 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
02:10:108 (2,3)
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
Hello ^^

General
BG pic supposed to be 1024 x 768...(it says 1000 x 722) sorry then

Easy
00:42:301 (3) - Delete, less difficult for beginners
00:49:685 (3) - ^
01:10:685 (1) - Add whistle on reverse
01:57:993 (3) - Delete
02:05:377 (3) - ^
02:41:147 (3,1) - Delete break time between these

aesopl's Normal
00:17:608 (5) - Flip vertically http://puu.sh/mjIz
00:49:685 - Add note, follows vocals
00:54:070 (1) - NC and then delete NC on 00:55:916 (1)?
01:10:224 (5) - Add finish
01:20:839 (2) - Flip vertically, http://puu.sh/mjKq
01:30:070 (7,8) - Make a slider
02:00:070 (1) - Add whistle at end?
02:33:301 (4) - Add finish or whistle

Shinki's Hard
00:01:108 - Add note? If you do, then do the same with similar spots
00:06:301 (1) - Extend slider so that the reverse touches the blue tick
00:18:070 (5,6) - Make slider
00:21:070 (3,4,5) - Stream seems a bit random? idk lol
00:51:301 (5,6,7) - Don't stack, might make it easier for Hidden mod xD
02:06:993 (5,6,7) - ^
02:47:378 (3,4) - Design like this: http://puu.sh/mjQH
02:50:839 (3) - Add whistle

Insane
00:04:685 (2) - Not perfectly stacked
00:05:608 (2) - ^
00:06:532 (2) - ^? (sorry for nazi xD)
00:15:762 (2) - Use same slider as (1) http://puu.sh/mjTm
00:30:532 (2) - Place like this http://puu.sh/mjUt
00:55:455 (2) - NC here instead of at 00:55:224 (1)
01:30:532 (2) - ^
01:35:032 (4) - Something like this: http://puu.sh/mjW7
01:47:839 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:52:224 (6) - Whistle at beginning
02:34:224 (2) - Same as http://puu.sh/mjUt
03:09:185 (2,3) - Spread out?

Lovely song! xD Good luck!
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Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone
The rules of BG is 4:3 and in 1024*768,so no need to change
Don't tell me resize the BG anymore
Changed something and updated.Thanks
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
BG还是用4:3吧

[Easy]
AR+1?
03:00:762 - remove this note, or it is kinda hard to play as an Easy diff
02:43:224 - remove this break

[aesopl's Normal]
fine

[Shinki's Hard]
00:26:147 (1,1) - this newcombo is useless imo, remove it?
00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r, flow much better
01:44:839 (1,3) - ^

[Insane]
01:26:378 (4) - 这个shape有点危险，最好修下
02:05:724 (2,3,4) - 我建议2折返，3跟4不折返，听起来打起来都好点
03:13:916 (1) - 这个shape也很危险0.0

改完了找我吧0.0
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
ok

edit: moved bubble from WIP to pending
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Kotone
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Kotone
Thank you 長喜!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
It'd be cool if you could get a 4:3 BG

[Easy]
00:33:762 (1,3) - These could be smoother if you used 5 points instead of 6
01:49:454 (1,3) - ^

[Normal]
02:33:762 (1,2) - Quite the jump out of nowhere.

[Insane]
01:42:070 (3,4) - This spacing felt off considering the 1/2 spacing right afterward and before
Kotone
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Kotone
Thanks~all fixed
Garven
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Lookin' good. Ranked!
kanpakyin
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I love you gratz~ : D/
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Thabk you Garven<3~
and kpy I love you too
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wmfchris

kanpakyin wrote:

I love you gratz~ : D/
congrat QAQ
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哇～恭喜莹莹 :)
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gratz~! :D
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bakaying~ \:D/
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液你們都會rank圖, 恭喜!
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恭喜rank~
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恭喜了~
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恭喜!~
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congratz my wife
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Congrats Karenying~
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恭喜恭喜～～超好听啊～～
Kotone
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Thanks all \:D/
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yay
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恭喜笨蛋ying&笨蛋326
AkiShizuha
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congratz!! very nice map:D
Flask
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哇rank了好快>.>
Regou
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恭喜 :)
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yey gratz
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grats/
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喔~! 恭喜!! baka營
:D
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Hurray back to ranking :P. congratz on the rank Karen-chan ;)
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More Yura! <3
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GRats on ranked map!
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Andrea
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Really awesome map/song, loved every moment of it <3
NatsumeRin
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great map!
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Oh thanks<333
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好玩 好听 好map
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这歌真好听啊 终于rank了 // @shinki
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Congratz~
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