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Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2012-03-25T09:28:36+00:00

Shinki's Hard only

00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) - a bit hard while playing for hard diff
01:22:916 (7) - sorry for nazi but 1 grid up look better also I think last point of this slider , adding whistle may be full fill its sound for me
01:51:762 (1) - new combo looks better imo
02:09:762 (1,3,4) - same as 00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) -
02:37:455 (3,1) - too suddenly jump for me but whatever
02:39:762 (2) - sorry for nazi again but down 1 grid will make it balance compared to (1) and (3)
02:43:916 (5) - I prefer new combo this
02:56:147 (5) - just my opinion , new combo this make better fit to the vocal

just that :3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-03-25T09:30:32+00:00

mod4mod~

Hard

00:21:070 (3,4,5,6) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot293-0.jpg it fits music more ^^
00:25:916 (8) - add a note? i think it sounds good
00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r?
00:45:993 (1,2,3,4) - 这样摆 http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot294-0.jpg 跟歌词啊..
00:54:532 (3) - 这个slider是1/3拍
01:41:955 - add note~~多送一分多好~~
02:01:685 (1,2,3,4) - oo oo here
02:10:224 (3) - 1/3
02:54:301 (1) - 这个换1/4 slider+repeat吧... 然后 02:54:762 加个note

Last edited by [CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-03-25T09:34:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Regou

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Regou 2012-03-25T09:33:04+00:00

M4M~

Shinki's Hard
00:18:532 (6,1) - Spacing?...
00:54:416 (2,3,4) - 把他們combine成一個slider就好了啊
01:34:224 (7,1) - 跟00:18:532 (6,1)一樣
02:10:108 (2,3,4) - 跟00:54:416 (2,3,4)一樣
02:36:993 (x) - 加一個circle在這裡
02:48:070 (x) - ^
02:58:108 (2,3) - 一樣,combine成一個slider吧
03:00:993 (1,2,3,4) - 個人不太喜歡這樣,,,(1,2,3)換成circle吧
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把(1,2,3,4)弄成兩個slider吧

popner

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popner 2012-03-25T09:37:07+00:00

Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[Shinki's Hard]

00:13:916 (2) - ctrl R?
00:11:608 (1,2) - 这两个滑条略丑。。弯的角度小一点比较好
00:36:301 (x) - 不三连吗
00:54:070 (1,2,3) - 感觉节奏应该是两个1/3音折返滑条，类似03:12:532 (1,2)
01:14:839 (2) - ctrl R?
01:19:339 (4) - 可以考虑加note
01:29:608 (2) - ctrl R?
01:56:839 (1..) - 直接复制前面的转个方向不好吧。。现在容易产生即视感
02:47:608 (4) - nazi -往左一格，往下一格(grid 4)
02:57:762 (1,2) - 和00:54:070 (1,2,3)一样
03:07:685 (4) - nazi - 往下一格(grid 4)

That's all I can find. GL~

Abe Nana

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Abe Nana 2012-03-25T10:57:23+00:00

hello

[Shinki's Hard]

00:04:801 (2) - add note
00:18:532 (6) - finish
00:30:993 (3) - RM NC
00:45:070 (4,5,6) - change slider here. consecutive triple is very hard, for Hard player
00:54:416 (2,3) - spacing :d
02:10:108 (2,3) - ^
02:57:762 (1,2,3) - ^ Xd chage

test play result

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274332
miss point :d
00:54:416 (2,3)
02:58:108 (2,3)
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274339
02:05:377 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
02:10:108 (2,3)

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2012-03-25T15:19:42+00:00

Hello ^^

General
~~BG pic supposed to be 1024 x 768...(it says 1000 x 722)~~ sorry then

Easy
00:42:301 (3) - Delete, less difficult for beginners
00:49:685 (3) - ^
01:10:685 (1) - Add whistle on reverse
01:57:993 (3) - Delete
02:05:377 (3) - ^
02:41:147 (3,1) - Delete break time between these

aesopl's Normal
00:17:608 (5) - Flip vertically http://puu.sh/mjIz
00:49:685 - Add note, follows vocals
00:54:070 (1) - NC and then delete NC on 00:55:916 (1)?
01:10:224 (5) - Add finish
01:20:839 (2) - Flip vertically, http://puu.sh/mjKq
01:30:070 (7,8) - Make a slider
02:00:070 (1) - Add whistle at end?
02:33:301 (4) - Add finish or whistle

Shinki's Hard
00:01:108 - Add note? If you do, then do the same with similar spots
00:06:301 (1) - Extend slider so that the reverse touches the blue tick
00:18:070 (5,6) - Make slider
00:21:070 (3,4,5) - Stream seems a bit random? idk lol
00:51:301 (5,6,7) - Don't stack, might make it easier for Hidden mod xD
02:06:993 (5,6,7) - ^
02:47:378 (3,4) - Design like this: http://puu.sh/mjQH
02:50:839 (3) - Add whistle

Insane
00:04:685 (2) - Not perfectly stacked
00:05:608 (2) - ^
00:06:532 (2) - ^? (sorry for nazi xD)
00:15:762 (2) - Use same slider as (1) http://puu.sh/mjTm
00:30:532 (2) - Place like this http://puu.sh/mjUt
00:55:455 (2) - NC here instead of at 00:55:224 (1)
01:30:532 (2) - ^
01:35:032 (4) - Something like this: http://puu.sh/mjW7
01:47:839 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:52:224 (6) - Whistle at beginning
02:34:224 (2) - Same as http://puu.sh/mjUt
03:09:185 (2,3) - Spread out?

Lovely song! xD Good luck!

Last edited by LunarSakuya 2012-04-01T18:19:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kotone

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Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-04-01T07:56:19+00:00

The rules of BG is 4:3 and in 1024*768,so no need to change
Don't tell me resize the BG anymore
Changed something and updated.Thanks

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-04-18T08:37:24+00:00

from my queue

[General]
BG还是用4:3吧

[Easy]
AR+1?
03:00:762 - remove this note, or it is kinda hard to play as an Easy diff
02:43:224 - remove this break

[aesopl's Normal]
fine

[Shinki's Hard]
00:26:147 (1,1) - this newcombo is useless imo, remove it?
00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r, flow much better
01:44:839 (1,3) - ^

[Insane]
01:26:378 (4) - 这个shape有点危险，最好修下
02:05:724 (2,3,4) - 我建议2折返，3跟4不折返，听起来打起来都好点
03:13:916 (1) - 这个shape也很危险0.0

改完了找我吧0.0

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-04-18T09:10:37+00:00

ok

edit: moved bubble from WIP to pending

Last edited by wcx19911123 2012-04-18T09:17:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kotone

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Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-04-18T09:12:53+00:00

Thank you 長喜!

Garven

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Garven 2012-05-14T20:45:46+00:00

[General]
It'd be cool if you could get a 4:3 BG

[Easy]
00:33:762 (1,3) - These could be smoother if you used 5 points instead of 6
01:49:454 (1,3) - ^

[Normal]
02:33:762 (1,2) - Quite the jump out of nowhere.

[Insane]
01:42:070 (3,4) - This spacing felt off considering the 1/2 spacing right afterward and before

Kotone

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Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-05-15T11:08:36+00:00

Thanks~all fixed

Garven

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Garven 2012-05-15T11:46:37+00:00

Lookin' good. Ranked!