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Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN

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Kotone
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 15 May, 2012 at 19:07:09

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: HAMELN
Tags: aesopl19193 Shinki Seifuu Meigetsu Drop Seifuumeigetsu koisuru marionette
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5430kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. aesopl's Normal (3.1 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Easy (2.21 stars, 190 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 560 notes)
  4. Shinki's Hard (4.81 stars, 493 notes)
Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HAMELN from HAMELN~Koisuru Marionette CD
sorry for this really bad map;.;
Yura Project:(?)
HAMELN | Koisuru Marionette | The Secret Garden

Produce : SeifuuMeigetsu
Compose, Arrangement, Mix, Mastering : Drop
Lyrics, Vocal : Hatsuki Yura

Hentai CD and lyrics :<

Mapset:
Normal by aesopl19193
Hard by Shinki
Easy,Insane by me
Last edited by Kotone , edited 23 times in total.
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
:idea:

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [Normal].osu
Bakario
Bakario


sliders ftw asd

Edit: here i resized the bg to 1024x768 if you don't mind

SPOILER

im so bored ^_______________^

another edit: you could add "Hameln ~Koisuru Marionette~" to the source

omg,i need to go outside :cry:
Kotone
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Kotone
sorry...album name can't be the source...
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Large change

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [Normal].osu
Kotone
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OK.Moved to pending
S h i o n
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S h i o n
ok..

先占位

To 326
eveless
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Joined April 2009
eveless
Insane
  1. 00:29:608 (1,2,3) - 这个其实可以更跳一点比如ctrl+J什么的毕竟是重音
  2. 别和1重合在一起比较好吧...个人的意见是这样放,毕竟音乐上还有个递进的感觉
    SPOILER
  3. 01:23:147 (1) - 这个NC没有很大必要...我觉得不nc比较好看
  4. 01:36:301 (7) - 把它移到6和1的尾巴的中间位置?
  5. 01:58:224 (2) - 没放好
  6. 03:10:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - 这段音效呢
Shinki's Hard
  1. 00:39:301 (5) - new combo
    02:09:762 (8) - ^
    02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 这需要自重
    02:59:608 (1) - kiai呢
aesopl's Normal
  1. 02:33:301 (4) - spacing
Easy
  1. 02:51:762 (3) - 这里应该还是0.8spacing 下个1开始才是1.0才对
S h i o n
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S h i o n
:)

Easy
  1. 00:37:455 (1) - 后面的break要去掉吗~
  2. 00:55:455 (4) - 后面的break最好拉到最前面那根红线，然后在01:01:455结束. 02:11:147 (4) - 这个break同
  3. 03:12:993 (2) - clap换成finish
aesopl's Normal
  1. 01:16:224 (1) - 这个slidertick的声音..
  2. 01:34:224 (1) - 推荐这样：
  3. 02:35:608 (3) - NC
326's Hard
  1. 00:03:762 (5,6,1) - 一开始就那么鬼畜大丈夫?
  2. 00:33:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 超呆。 像后面一样在00:33:301和00:34:224分别加个NOTE还稍好些
  3. 01:18:532 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不舒服的自创连打
  4. 01:30:070 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  5. 01:55:455 (1) - 换成slider么
  6. 02:01:340 (8) - delete 02:41:955 (5) - delete
  7. 02:08:608 (3) - NC
  8. 02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 这需要自重+1
Insane
  1. 00:01:339 (4) - add note ? 加了感觉超棒啊= = 和后面的也搭
  2. 00:22:224 (3) - NC
  3. 00:47:147 (2) - 头放在(5)的尾巴~?
  4. 01:57:301 (3,4) - 第一次玩我就以为是3/4的组合了.. 不要叠(4) 放(3)左边去?
  5. 02:51:647 (6) - add note ?
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 这个不是很好看= =
Kotone
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Kotone
bump
Last edited by Kotone , edited 1 time in total.
Kotone
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@eve :all fixed ,thank you :>

S h i o n wrote:

:)

Easy
  1. 00:37:455 (1) - 后面的break要去掉吗~
  2. 00:55:455 (4) - 后面的break最好拉到最前面那根红线，然后在01:01:455结束. 02:11:147 (4) - 这个break同 改到白線
  3. 03:12:993 (2) - clap换成finish
Insane
  1. 00:01:339 (4) - add note ? 加了感觉超棒啊= = 和后面的也搭 不要..
  2. 00:22:224 (3) - NC 沒必要
  3. 00:47:147 (2) - 头放在(5)的尾巴~? 不要..
  4. 01:57:301 (3,4) - 第一次玩我就以为是3/4的组合了.. 不要叠(4) 放(3)左边去?
  5. 02:51:647 (6) - add note ? 不..
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 这个不是很好看= = 還好吧..
other fixed
Thanks tsundere
JoJo
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JoJo
As your request.

  1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. BG分辨率似乎不符合规定，麻烦resize到1024*768或者800*600.
  2. aesopl's Normal没有tags，请加上.
  3. Please disable useless countdown.
  4. 为什么只有normal是做到底的..
[Easy]
  1. 00:33:762 (1,3) - 难看...
  2. 00:39:532 (x) - 这个break太短感觉毫无意义，建议删掉.
  3. 00:55:916 (x) - Drug the break to here. 或者加个note试试.
  4. 02:11:147 (x) - Useless timing section.
  5. 02:11:608 (x) - 同上面的上面..
[aesopl's Normal]
  1. 00:16:685 (4) - 试试叠到00:15:301 (1)上面？
  2. 02:04:214 (x) - 麻烦resnap timing section.
[Shinki's Hard]
  1. 最后不设置kiai么？
  2. 00:53:839 (7,8,9,10) - 这里玩起来的时候很难读诶..全叠在一起哪个是note哪个是slider都分不清.（同02:09:531 (7,8,9,10)
  3. 00:54:070 (8) - 好长的串..来个new combo吧.
  4. 01:18:301 (2) - 1 grid right?
  5. 03:14:378 (x) - Add a circle ?
[Insane]
  1. 这个难度的mod均可看做纯吐槽.
  2. 00:00:531 (1) - Unsnapped.
  3. 00:12:993 (1) - 重新叠一下？
  4. 00:14:839 (1) - Holy shit...我知道你不会改但是我不得不说，这第一遍打的时候readable?
  5. 00:22:224 (3) - Again,至少new combo一下吧.后面还有的就不提了..
  6. 02:59:147 (1) - 看了半天也不知道这个slider的路线是什么...
  7. 02:59:955 (2,3) - 重新叠一下.
没了.
aesopl19193
572 posts
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aesopl19193
Thanks!
all fixed

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [aesopl's Normal].osu
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
IRC moded fight yingying ~ star ~ ;)

SPOILER
00:10 <Kawayi_Rika> : 等我重新下载
00:14 <Kawayi_Rika> : 把countdown 勾掉
00:14 <karenying> : 嗯
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:45:762 (6) -
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这加个NC?
00:18 <karenying> : I?
00:18 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:18 <karenying> : 沒必要吧..
00:19 <Kawayi_Rika> : 哦 好
00:20 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:54:993 - 加finish,whitstle 删掉？
00:20 <karenying> : 好
00:22 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:09:762 (1) - 可以考虑把这NC 去掉 不是大跳 应该没关系
00:23 <karenying> : nc了好像好看些
00:23 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯 喜欢就加
00:24 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:14:378 (1) - 加whistle
00:24 <karenying> : 好
00:25 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:18:993 - 加finish,whistle 去掉
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:20:378 -
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:21:301 -
00:26 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这里都加finish 我觉的好听 比clap 个个建议
00:27 <karenying> : 加finish好像太重了..
00:27 <Kawayi_Rika> : 减点音量试试
00:29 <karenying> : 唔..有點怪 先保留了
00:29 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:43:916 -
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 这里NC
00:31 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:44:839 - 删掉
00:32 <karenying> : ok
00:32 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:47:608 (1,2,3,4) -
00:33 <Kawayi_Rika> : 建议把1叠到5
00:33 <karenying> : 這個..故意的
00:33 <Kawayi_Rika> : 哈哈 好
00:34 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:53:147 (1) - 挪中间吧 ><
00:36 <karenying> : ok
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:01:685 (1) -
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : X:336 Y:88
00:36 <Kawayi_Rika> : 移这试试
00:37 <karenying> : ok
00:38 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:10:685 -
00:39 <Kawayi_Rika> : finish ，and remove whistle
00:39 <karenying> : k
00:39 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:26:378 - finish
00:40 <karenying> : k
00:41 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:34:685 (3) - Ctil+R ？
00:42 <karenying> : k
00:43 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:40:108 (4) - 大跳加个NC 建议
00:43 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:40:685 (6) - Ctil+R
00:44 <karenying> : 不要>A<
00:44 <Kawayi_Rika> : 嗯
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 03:09:301 (3) -
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 手动叠一下 没叠好
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 不对
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : 说错了 不好意思
00:46 <Kawayi_Rika> : ...
00:46 <karenying> : ..baka
00:47 <Kawayi_Rika> : sorry TT
00:47 <karenying> : 因為是baga 所以大丈夫
00:47 <Kawayi_Rika> : ...TT
00:48 <Kawayi_Rika> : Hard go
00:48 <karenying> : Hard的po吧
00:49 <karenying> : 我不好改
00:49 <Kawayi_Rika> : N 也是吗
00:49 <karenying> : nm也是
00:49 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好 那直接看看E
00:49 <karenying> : 好
00:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 放过新手吧 3连有压力 TT
00:52 <Kawayi_Rika> : 00:49:455 (2,3,4) - 同 3连就不要叠了 TT
00:53 <karenying> : bpm不高 而且不多 大丈夫
00:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好吧
00:53 <Kawayi_Rika> : 01:01:455 -
00:54 <Kawayi_Rika> : Break 怎么不一样 往后拉
00:54 <karenying> : k
00:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:11:608 -
00:58 <Kawayi_Rika> : Break 也不一样 往前拉
00:59 <Kawayi_Rika> : 02:24:532 - ^
01:00 <karenying> : k
01:01 <Kawayi_Rika> : 好就这些了 N H 我会POST
01:02 <karenying> : ok
01:02 <karenying> : thx:>

[Shinki's Hard]


  • Why not used finish hitsound? I feel better added.
    Arrangement as a whole is good.

    00:00:532 - Add finish.
    00:07:916 - ^
    00:14:839 - ^
    00:22:685 - ^
    00:30:070 - ^
    00:39:301 (5) - Add new comebo to here.
    00:41:147 - Add finish.
    00:48:070 - ^
    00:52:224 - ^
    00:55:455 - ^
    01:10:685 - ^
    01:16:224 - ^
    01:18:070 - ^
    01:23:608 - ^
    01:27:301 - ^
    01:38:378 - ^
    01:45:762 - ^
    01:49:455 (4,4,3) - ^
    01:56:839 - ^
    02:04:224 - ^
    02:26:378 - ^
    02:27:301 (1) - Not need new combo to here,Remove pls.
    02:33:647 - Add finish.
    02:42:993 (1) - Add finish and Remove whistle.
    02:44:839 - Add finish.
    02:52:224 - ^
    02:56:839 - ^
    02:57:762 - ^
    02:59:608 - ^
    03:06:532 - ^


[aesopl's Normal]


  • 01:30:532 - Add finish and Remove clap.
    01:40:224 (1) - Not need new combo to here,Remove pls.
    01:43:916 (1) - ^
wmfchris
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wmfchris
hahahaha

聽日我即場map [Taiko] 出黎
Nymph
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Nymph
General:
BG大小 you know

自己的难度的KIAI是要求一致的


Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 我觉得easy难度没有必要加中间那一下吧 后面也是相同的建议
没什么值得挑的了


Normal:
Issues
02:04:224 (1) - KIAI线没对齐
没了 挺好的


Hard:
Issue
也是同啾啾的意见 后面该加KIAI吧

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:15:993 (6,1) - 这样的间距我觉得不咋好看 想办法弄正常点？
01:19:455 (9,10) - 这两个摆同样的X坐标呗 不用非得错开一点吧

Hitsound
hitsound太缺乏了 好多可以加clap和finish的位置 不知道你的具体想法 所以我不mod音效了 不过还是建议加一下 单whistle真是太不给力了


Insane:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:22:224 (3) - 变速newcombo？
00:48:070 (5) - ^类似的建议都加上
00:55:455 (2) -
01:30:532 (2) -
02:11:147 (2) -
没别的可挑的

yoshi~彻底还完所有已知债务了 轻松~
Kotone
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Kotone
BG is 4:3 and in 1024*768 so this is ok
Don't say it anymore
其他等我上電腦
hoLysoup
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Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
bakaying~ :D!

[General]
BG前面的人都說過了 就不多說了~
不把koisuru marionette加到tags嗎?

[Aesopl's Normal]
00:12:532 (2) - why finish here? 聽起來很奇怪
00:42:762 (3) - I suggest, remove this beat, and add a beat here: 00:42:301.
02:04:224 - This kiai line is unsnapped
02:33:762 (1,2) - 這突然跳這麼遠 為什麼? :<
02:50:378 (4) - NC
03:28:224 (5) - NC

[Shinki's Hard]
為什麼不用clap? 整個difficulty玩起來感覺沒音效
00:07:455 (6) - add a clap on slider head?
00:17:147 (5) - NC
00:54:070 (8) - NC
02:09:762 (8) - NC
02:46:224 (1,2,3,4) - 這...可能對hard來說有點太難
02:52:224 (1) - Finish
02:59:608 - 這裡為甚麼沒有kiai?

[Insane]
00:42:878 (9,1) - 這個spacing, 玩得時候就變得不一樣了. manual stack? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230461
01:29:147 (1) - 這個NC去掉? 我覺得比較容易讀.
01:30:301 (1) - 這個NC也去掉? 因為前面也是2x slider才有NC
01:42:993 (6) - NC..?
02:46:224 (5) - 再加一個repeat? 或是beat? :>
03:08:724 (6,1) - 00:42:878 (9,1) 跟這裡一樣


沒了~ 無話可說
好圖
:D!
快教我怎麼做圖!
Kotone
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Kotone
fixed some desu!
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
All fixed!
Thanks!

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (karenying) [aesopl's Normal].osu
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