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Sun Rainbow

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2012-03-17T06:10:41+00:00

Mod(~~这叫MOD吗~~）
Easy XD
00:42:070 (2,3,4) - 对于EASY来说出现这个会不会太难了……
00:43:916 (2,1) - ^
00:49:455 (2,3,4) - ^
其他的有类似的问题就不说了你自己看着办吧
00:55:455 (4) - 要不要再考虑加个Clap?
01:51:300 (3) - 觉得这个好别扭（被打）

aesopl's Normal
00:22:108 - 老兄NORMAL不可以变速啊
其他有变速的自己看着办吧
其他的暂时没什么问题（Karen:为什么我的EASY的MOD多过Normal啊！看我一棒！
sun rainbow：啊救命啊冰峰！！！！）

H和I我不是很会MOD的……~~（Karen:不会MOD还来干嘛）~~

Shinki's Hard
00:21:993 (x) - 不加点什么吗感觉很空虚啊
00:43:916 (10) - 要不要考虑加个NC？
00:45:070 (4) - ^
00:45:532 (7) - ^

insane
不好意思这个我没办法MOD好难

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-03-17T07:31:58+00:00

我是來保護彩虹的冰峰

以下一點點建議

Easy
[00:05:147] 這個(2)可以再進去一點點嘛 ?!

[00:06:993] ^ 跟上面一樣
[00:22:685] 這個(1)跟(3) ... 其實不同吧 ( 這請無視 )

[00:25:916] (4) 改到這

[00:37:455] 轉盤改長

[00:42:070]

改成

[00:43:916]

滑條改短才對的上節奏 >___>

[00:49:455] 一樣刪一個note

[00:51:301]

一樣改短 >___>

[01:25:454] 滑條往上一點點對齊(2)

[01:38:377] 又來了兩個滑條其實不一樣對吧 ... ( 快無視 ! )

[01:53:147] 轉盤改長上面有相似情況 !!! ( 請仿照上面的方式 )

[01:57:762] 一樣刪note

[01:59:608] 滑條改短

[02:05:147] 刪note

[02:06:993] 滑條改短

[02:50:378] 滑條往下對齊 (3)

[03:00:532] 刪 note

[03:09:762] 一樣滑條改短

套一句話 :

站在初學著的立場上這個Easy太難了 !!!
---- By Sun Rainbow

--------------------
aesopl's Normal

[00:16:685] (4)請對齊(2) 不然亂亂的

[01:05:147] (3)往左邊移一點讓(3)(4)(5)變的一條斜線

[01:38:378] (1)往右邊一條一格 (2)往右邊條兩格讓(1尾)(2)(3頭)變一直線
另外 (3)往下一點點

[03:03:301] 天啊這四個note ... 改成

Normal很不錯喔

!!

完了我也要被打了

--------------
Shinki's Hard

[00:37:916] 滑條(2)往右移

[00:39:993] (3)和(2)對齊

[00:43:916] 這個(10)換成New Combo 吧 -A-

[00:45:532]

這什麼 !!! Hard不應該出現這種串燒吧 @A@ !! 神Mapper啊
(1,2,3)改成

(7,8,9)改成

[01:10:685] (3,5,7)每個滑條的前端都+Finish (和1一樣)
這邊的排列好美我喜歡>A<!!

[01:56:378] (3)對齊(2)

[02:30:762] 這個(2)要剛好壓到(1)和(3) 而且壓到的部分要一樣大 ( 像你現在的就是(1)太小(3)太大 )
^ 可能很難看出來不過修一修吧

[02:37:455] (3)對齊(2)

[02:38:341] ^ (3)對齊(2)

[02:42:993] 排菱形也要排的好 ! 對稱一點

[02:45:070] 對齊(1)

[02:47:608] (4)往左下角移一點 (4)壓到(3)的部份 = (1)壓到(2)的部分 (4)壓到(1)的部份 = (2)壓到(3)的部分

[03:07:685] (4)要比(3)高喔就像(1)比(2)高那樣

--------------
Insane

[00:04:685] (2)跑出來一點點了 .___. 請對齊(1)的尾巴

[00:05:608] ^ 同上

[00:06:532] ^ 同上

[00:14:839] 這邊變速不好吧 ? 請改掉

[00:48:070] 變速不好吧 wwww 請改掉

[00:55:455] 這邊可改可不改不過我還是不喜歡變速

之後有變速的問題我就不說了

[01:33:532] 怎麼讓一顆note躺在馬路(滑條)上呢 >___> 移走

[02:59:147] ... 這個滑條不要自己疊在自己身上orz ...

以上一點建議

Good Map !
彩虹我來保護你了

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2012-03-17T08:06:45+00:00

request from in-game PM

hard的countdown摘掉
kiai好像差蛮多的。。自己查下吧

[easy]
01:59:147 (1) - 这NC有用?
03:13:916 (4) - 这clap几乎都没听见。。考虑加音?
[normal]
01:23:608 (1) - 跟前面stack或者摆1.3吧。。总感觉低难度这样新手容易按早
[hard]
00:48:532 (1) - 头可以finish
[insane]
02:47:839 (2) - 意义不明
02:59:147 (1) - 遮的略多。不清楚会不会被蝙蝠吐槽
顺带H和I里面的1/3我觉得都off..个人认为这样是对的

哈哈看到这渣mod我就想哭

Shiki

271 posts

Joined April 2010

Shiki 2012-03-17T08:40:47+00:00

Hi~!

[Insane]
00:01:455 (4) - 我感觉(4)应该离(3)稍微再远一点即使editor里说间隔一样但是玩起来还是觉得间隔像1/2
01:10:455 (x) - 这里玩的时候觉得空了我认为应该在这加个note
01:58:224 (2) - 这个slider位置太高了很容易被看成一个点我第一次玩的时候也差点没看清

这个diff玩起来很有趣好喜欢

[Hard]
我感觉音效的部分听起来比较平淡
而且整个diff都没怎么看到clap

为了充实音效在一些音乐中clap比较明显的地方下24白线clap吧
00:54:070 (1,2,3) - 这三个我感觉不要叠起来比较好叠起来的话难度会比较高而且它们离(4)太近了我感觉拉到和(4)上下对称就差不多了
01:26:839 (x) - 这里我感觉不应该为了跟vocal而空着玩起来会觉得不协调
01:37:224 (4) - nazi一下这个(4)应该向左上各一格 (level 4)
01:41:608 (x) - 同01:26:839
02:09:762 (1,2,3) - 同00:54:070
03:13:455 (3) - 我感觉这个也是不要叠起来比较好

主要问题还是在音效加油~

[Normal]
纯nazi ><
00:16:685 (4) - 左移一格
03:06:301 (6) - 左移一格

实在找不到什么问题 GJ~

[Easy]

我感觉这个也可以了
给不出值得一提的建议了 ;_;

:> 加油~ 326&bakaying

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-03-17T09:14:47+00:00

能改的都改了 326音效那邊我先問問326
謝謝mod

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

bossandy 2012-03-24T09:30:27+00:00

Hi Bakaying~ request from my queue~

紅色 : 是我覺得一並要改的
藍色 : 建議但個人認為要改的
黑色 : 就單純建議
　
[ General ]
　
BG size要調整之前好像有人給過你了我就不幫你調了 >_<
Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit )
我覺得kiai time結束後又多閃一次有點多餘
　
[ Easy ]
　
00:43:455 (1) - 這裡NC沒意義
01:59:147 (1) - ^
02:11:147 (4) - 少加了clap?
02:44:378 (X) - 加個note感覺更好?
　
[ aesopl's Normal ]
　
00:33:301 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:224 (2) - NC
00:44:378 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:301 (2) - NC
00:51:762 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:224 (6) - NC
00:54:070 (4) - 結尾的finish改成clap或clap+finish?
01:26:839 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:762 (2) - NC
01:34:224 (1) - Remove NC
01:34:685 (2) - NC
01:48:993 (1) - Remove NC
01:49:455 (3) - NC
02:00:070 (1) - Remove NC
02:00:993 (2) - NC
02:07:455 (1) - Remove NC
02:07:916 (7) - NC
02:10:685 (9) - 這個slider的尾巴碰到HP Bar了~
SPOILER
03:03:301 (1) - finish
03:10:224 (1) - Remove NC
03:11:147 (2) - NC
03:12:532 (1) - Remove NC
　
[ Shinki's Hard ]
　
00:22:224 (1) - 去掉NC 這沒什麼必要
01:37:916 (1) - ^
02:01:685 (1) - 去掉NC 因為這段的spacing跟前面的一樣
02:58:685 (4) - 結尾除了finish再加個clap吧
　
[ Insane ]
　
01:29:839 (2) - 變成這樣的spacing不? 跟個音樂讓spacing變小>_<
SPOILER
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------

Insane的jump好舒服喔 xD Nice Map!!!
Have my Star ~ Good Luck :3

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2012-03-25T09:19:09+00:00

Short Mod~

Shinki's Hard
00:22:224 - I think it looks better if you put this circle more to the left
00:30:993 - Reverse this slider
00:31:455 - ^
00:43:916 - Instead of stacking them all, place them somewhere else
00:54:532 - This part is um,, xD Make only circles of it or only a slider
01:18:070 - Put it farther away
01:46:685 - I see you copied and pasted this, so reverse this slider too
01:47:147 - ^
01:59:608 - same as 00:43:916 -
02:10:108 - same as 00:54:532 -
02:38:147 - Distance spacing is waaay too big, place the slider closer or place the other slider closer

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2012-03-25T09:28:36+00:00

Shinki's Hard only

00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) - a bit hard while playing for hard diff
01:22:916 (7) - sorry for nazi but 1 grid up look better also I think last point of this slider , adding whistle may be full fill its sound for me
01:51:762 (1) - new combo looks better imo
02:09:762 (1,3,4) - same as 00:54:070 (1,2,3,4) -
02:37:455 (3,1) - too suddenly jump for me but whatever
02:39:762 (2) - sorry for nazi again but down 1 grid will make it balance compared to (1) and (3)
02:43:916 (5) - I prefer new combo this
02:56:147 (5) - just my opinion , new combo this make better fit to the vocal

just that :3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-03-25T09:30:32+00:00

mod4mod~

Hard

00:21:070 (3,4,5,6) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot293-0.jpg it fits music more ^^
00:25:916 (8) - add a note? i think it sounds good
00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r?
00:45:993 (1,2,3,4) - 这样摆 http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot294-0.jpg 跟歌词啊..
00:54:532 (3) - 这个slider是1/3拍
01:41:955 - add note~~多送一分多好~~
02:01:685 (1,2,3,4) - oo oo here
02:10:224 (3) - 1/3
02:54:301 (1) - 这个换1/4 slider+repeat吧... 然后 02:54:762 加个note

Last edited by [CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-03-25T09:34:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Regou

1,927 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-03-25T09:33:04+00:00

M4M~

Shinki's Hard
00:18:532 (6,1) - Spacing?...
00:54:416 (2,3,4) - 把他們combine成一個slider就好了啊
01:34:224 (7,1) - 跟00:18:532 (6,1)一樣
02:10:108 (2,3,4) - 跟00:54:416 (2,3,4)一樣
02:36:993 (x) - 加一個circle在這裡
02:48:070 (x) - ^
02:58:108 (2,3) - 一樣,combine成一個slider吧
03:00:993 (1,2,3,4) - 個人不太喜歡這樣,,,(1,2,3)換成circle吧
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把(1,2,3,4)弄成兩個slider吧

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

Joined March 2011

popner 2012-03-25T09:37:07+00:00

Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[Shinki's Hard]

00:13:916 (2) - ctrl R?
00:11:608 (1,2) - 这两个滑条略丑。。弯的角度小一点比较好
00:36:301 (x) - 不三连吗
00:54:070 (1,2,3) - 感觉节奏应该是两个1/3音折返滑条，类似03:12:532 (1,2)
01:14:839 (2) - ctrl R?
01:19:339 (4) - 可以考虑加note
01:29:608 (2) - ctrl R?
01:56:839 (1..) - 直接复制前面的转个方向不好吧。。现在容易产生即视感
02:47:608 (4) - nazi -往左一格，往下一格(grid 4)
02:57:762 (1,2) - 和00:54:070 (1,2,3)一样
03:07:685 (4) - nazi - 往下一格(grid 4)

That's all I can find. GL~

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2012-03-25T10:57:23+00:00

hello

[Shinki's Hard]

00:04:801 (2) - add note
00:18:532 (6) - finish
00:30:993 (3) - RM NC
00:45:070 (4,5,6) - change slider here. consecutive triple is very hard, for Hard player
00:54:416 (2,3) - spacing :d
02:10:108 (2,3) - ^
02:57:762 (1,2,3) - ^ Xd chage

test play result

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274332
miss point :d
00:54:416 (2,3)
02:58:108 (2,3)
03:08:378 (1,2,3,4)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274339
02:05:377 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
02:10:108 (2,3)

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2012-03-25T15:19:42+00:00

Hello ^^

General
~~BG pic supposed to be 1024 x 768...(it says 1000 x 722)~~ sorry then

Easy
00:42:301 (3) - Delete, less difficult for beginners
00:49:685 (3) - ^
01:10:685 (1) - Add whistle on reverse
01:57:993 (3) - Delete
02:05:377 (3) - ^
02:41:147 (3,1) - Delete break time between these

aesopl's Normal
00:17:608 (5) - Flip vertically http://puu.sh/mjIz
00:49:685 - Add note, follows vocals
00:54:070 (1) - NC and then delete NC on 00:55:916 (1)?
01:10:224 (5) - Add finish
01:20:839 (2) - Flip vertically, http://puu.sh/mjKq
01:30:070 (7,8) - Make a slider
02:00:070 (1) - Add whistle at end?
02:33:301 (4) - Add finish or whistle

Shinki's Hard
00:01:108 - Add note? If you do, then do the same with similar spots
00:06:301 (1) - Extend slider so that the reverse touches the blue tick
00:18:070 (5,6) - Make slider
00:21:070 (3,4,5) - Stream seems a bit random? idk lol
00:51:301 (5,6,7) - Don't stack, might make it easier for Hidden mod xD
02:06:993 (5,6,7) - ^
02:47:378 (3,4) - Design like this: http://puu.sh/mjQH
02:50:839 (3) - Add whistle

Insane
00:04:685 (2) - Not perfectly stacked
00:05:608 (2) - ^
00:06:532 (2) - ^? (sorry for nazi xD)
00:15:762 (2) - Use same slider as (1) http://puu.sh/mjTm
00:30:532 (2) - Place like this http://puu.sh/mjUt
00:55:455 (2) - NC here instead of at 00:55:224 (1)
01:30:532 (2) - ^
01:35:032 (4) - Something like this: http://puu.sh/mjW7
01:47:839 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:52:224 (6) - Whistle at beginning
02:34:224 (2) - Same as http://puu.sh/mjUt
03:09:185 (2,3) - Spread out?

Lovely song! xD Good luck!

Last edited by LunarSakuya 2012-04-01T18:19:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-04-01T07:56:19+00:00

The rules of BG is 4:3 and in 1024*768,so no need to change
Don't tell me resize the BG anymore
Changed something and updated.Thanks

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2012-04-18T08:37:24+00:00

from my queue

[General]
BG还是用4:3吧

[Easy]
AR+1?
03:00:762 - remove this note, or it is kinda hard to play as an Easy diff
02:43:224 - remove this break

[aesopl's Normal]
fine

[Shinki's Hard]
00:26:147 (1,1) - this newcombo is useless imo, remove it?
00:29:147 (1,3) - ctrl+r, flow much better
01:44:839 (1,3) - ^

[Insane]
01:26:378 (4) - 这个shape有点危险，最好修下
02:05:724 (2,3,4) - 我建议2折返，3跟4不折返，听起来打起来都好点
03:13:916 (1) - 这个shape也很危险0.0

改完了找我吧0.0

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2012-04-18T09:10:37+00:00

ok

edit: moved bubble from WIP to pending

Last edited by wcx19911123 2012-04-18T09:17:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-04-18T09:12:53+00:00

Thank you 長喜!

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2012-05-14T20:45:46+00:00

[General]
It'd be cool if you could get a 4:3 BG

[Easy]
00:33:762 (1,3) - These could be smoother if you used 5 points instead of 6
01:49:454 (1,3) - ^

[Normal]
02:33:762 (1,2) - Quite the jump out of nowhere.

[Insane]
01:42:070 (3,4) - This spacing felt off considering the 1/2 spacing right afterward and before

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Topic Starter

Kotone 2012-05-15T11:08:36+00:00

Thanks~all fixed

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2012-05-15T11:46:37+00:00

Lookin' good. Ranked!