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Haruka Shimotsuki - Kazahane

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Leyka
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2008年11月5日 at 下午 06:57:19

Artist: Haruka Shimotsuki
Title: Kazahane
Source: H2O
Tags: Haruka Shimotsuki
BPM: 120
Filesize: 11268kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (4.34 stars, 264 notes)
  2. Hard (4.41 stars, 461 notes)
Download: Haruka Shimotsuki - Kazahane
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Edit1 10/28/2008:longlonglonglong
Edit2 02/11/2008:normal,fixed full ver.add some"not only vocal"
Edit3 03/11/2008:m980
Edit4 04/11/2008:awp
Edit5 04/11/2008:smoothhh slider..fixed what seibei point out
Edit6 05/11/2008:normal "fixed"or that dont call fix it is remap
Edit7 05/11/2008:stupid problem..
Last edited by Leyka , edited 19 times in total.
Leyka
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Leyka
bump..of offset
chaltier_old
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chaltier_old
wanna give an opinion...

03:06:240 to 03:53:740 -> hard keep up with the drain rate... maybe it's wiser if use more map like 03:13:740 to 03:19:240 or use the slider... or maybe the break...

btw, I seems to agree with James about this one... It's rather boring for beatmap just follow the vocal... xD
m980
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Hi

Normal
01:08:24 (1,2,3) - Move these just abit up. (Spacing)
01:33:24 (3,4,5) - Move these away from 2. (Spacing)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:24 (1) - Move this so it's closer to the previous combo's 6. (Spacing)

Full Ver.
00:32:49 (4,5,6,7) - Rearrange this combo so that 4 is closer to 3 and spacing is fine. (Spacing)
00:36:99 (4,5) - Move away from the end of 2, (Spacing)
01:09:99 (3) - Move away from 2. Just abit. (Spacing)
01:27:99 (6) - I don't like it when sliders are concealed by things to make it unfair. (Unfairness)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:86 (3) - Move away from the end of 2. Move 4 afterwards. (Spacing)
02:39:86 (6,7) - Move closer to 5. (Spacing)
04:13:74 (5,6) - Uhh.... (Playing Problem)

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Leyka
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m980 wrote:

Hi

Normal
01:08:24 (1,2,3) - Move these just abit up. (Spacing)
01:33:24 (3,4,5) - Move these away from 2. (Spacing)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:24 (1) - Move this so it's closer to the previous combo's 6. (Spacing)

Full Ver.
00:32:49 (4,5,6,7) - Rearrange this combo so that 4 is closer to 3 and spacing is fine. (Spacing)
00:36:99 (4,5) - Move away from the end of 2, (Spacing)
01:09:99 (3) - Move away from 2. Just abit. (Spacing)
01:27:99 (6) - I don't like it when sliders are concealed by things to make it unfair. (Unfairness)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:86 (3) - Move away from the end of 2. Move 4 afterwards. (Spacing)
02:39:86 (6,7) - Move closer to 5. (Spacing)
04:13:74 (5,6) - Uhh.... (Playing Problem)
all fixed :lol:
awp
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Leyka
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awp wrote:

I think offset is 17250 - it feels beautifully timed at that for me.

[Normal]
No major issues jumped out at me, so I'm going to pick on a few minor nitpicks.
00:35:25 (3) - This slider has too many vertecies in it imo making the slider not-smooth looking. If that's the look you're going for, then kudos~

The distance snap is really modest, often making it difficult to infer how far apart notes should be timing-wise based on the distance separating them.

[Full ver]
00:17:87 (1) - This should fall on the whole-beat, yes?
01:55:50 (5) - I could predict the repeat on this slider based on the music and flow of the map, but it's somewhat hidden due to score explosions, so redirect the end-point such that it's clearly visible during play
02:33:75 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A bit messy here. Try moving the 5-9 so that they don't cross over the 3 and 4.
done :lol:
m980
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hallo
Seibei4211
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Leyka
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Seibei4211 wrote:

Normal
00:56:00 (8) - New combo.
01:23:75 (7) - Move this 1/4 to the left. For these notes, you could just combine them into a short slider.
01:28:25 (7) - ^
01:33:75 (5) - ^
02:11:50 (5) - New combo.
02:22:50 (5) - ^
02:33:25 (3) - Same as 01:23:75
02:36:75 (1) - Delete this one.
02:46:75 (7) - New combo.
02:54:75 (7) - ^
02:56:50 (1,2,3,4) - I'd say delete these. I really wasn't expecting those notes there. They feel out of place.
03:01:75 (6) - This spot is a perfect place for a spinner. One that ends at 03:04:000.

Full ver. (You could just call this Hard. Easier difficulties often don't fully map the song, so you can just say Hard.)
01:12:00 (5,6) - Move these 1/4 to the left.
02:26:25 (6) - This would be a lot better as a slider that ended at 02:27:750.
02:43:50 (8,9) - I think you could make these a little more parallel. They look a little weird currently.
02:46:75 (7) - New combo.
02:54:75 (7) - ^
03:16:75 (7) - ^
03:30:25 (5) - I think this one should be 1/4 to the right.
03:32:12 (5) - ^
03:51:75 (1) - This sounds better if it ends a beat earlier.
04:04:75 (6) - New combo.
04:05:75 (10,11) - Move these 1/4 to the left, then readjust the slider so it ends on the same spot as before.
04:24:87 (7) - Sounds better 1/4 to the right.
04:25:75 (9) - New combo.
04:27:62 (14) - Move 1/4 to the right. Also, this spot is a perfect place for a spinner. One that ends at 04:29:75.
fixed all but only this two
03:30:25 (5) - I think this one should be 1/4 to the right.
03:32:12 (5) - ^
i dont argree and i just change it to slider
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Hard
03:51:75 (1) - When I said "1/2 beat", I meant 1/2 of a 1 beat. Move this back by 1/4 beat. (3:53:250, to be exact)
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Leyka
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Seibei4211 wrote:

On second thought, this does bug me. Normal has a lot of streams that I don't like. They should be broken up with some sliders to make things easier and more interesting overall. Places such as these.

00:32:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
01:00:25 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:05:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:08:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:51:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:22:50 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5)
02:26:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5)
02:33:75 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:38:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:44:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Holy crap. Not one slider.

Some of these places are less urgent than others. This is just to point out the large lack of sliders in Normal.
remap normal,you will be happy now :|
James
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m980
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Normal
00:29:62 (8) - Move to the right abit.
02:22:50 (1,2,3,4) - Move this combo up.

Not much. This looks pretty close to ranking.
Seibei4211
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Normal
01:11:87 (2) - Move this 1/4 beat to the left.
01:23:50 (6) - This would sound a little better if it had a finish like the other sliders in that combo. Just so it completes the pattern. Not to mention the other slider like that has a Finish sound.
02:24:62 (3) - Move this 1/4 beat to the right, then shorten it by 1/4 beat.
02:48:75 (1,2,3,4) - This part just looks kinda ugly. I thought they'd be stacked on top of each other when watching it, but they weren't. Then I thought the 4 was under the slider end on 3, but no. It's just weird.

m980, if you're doing a mod post on a bubbled map, unbubble.
m980
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ay aprub!
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Ok, NOW I'm satisfied.
Leyka
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Seibei4211 wrote:

Ok, NOW I'm satisfied.
finally :cry:

awp
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Okay, I'm gonna go ahead and rank this, but I wanna say something as well.

Judging by the layout, you used distance snap very religiously. This is a very good approach when you're first starting out, but as your beatmap experience grows, I'd recommend you experiment with spacing a bit. Even if you keep distance snap on, let some sections (typically faster-paced sections) have a greater distance snap multiplier to mix it up a bit. Just something to keep in mind in the future.

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