Beren wrote:

[General]
难度跨度有点大 中间加个等级? 是Kaye的錯（被打

[Normal]
00:28:265 (3) - 删除finish Done
00:31:958 (3) - 改成来回折中间放clap X
01:54:573 (X) - 加note,clap Done
02:13:612 (1) - 从02:13:496开始? X
02:17:188 (2) - finish违和 刪掉
02:19:035 (1) - ^ 刪掉
02:20:881 (3) - ^ 刪掉

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[ERT's Normal]

1. AR+1 will be fun with me.
2. 00:51:355 (5) - This sounds 1/2 will be better. [/color]
3. 02:29:201 (3,4) - ^

[/notice]

L_P wrote:

normal
00:14:894 (4) - 加note Done
00:24:125 (2) - 不clap吗？ Done
00:27:817 (2) - ^ Done
00:31:971 (3) - head finish跟前面一样。。 Done
00:38:894 (2) - 个人觉得这种slider最好在大白线start 后面还有不吐槽了 我也很少用Slider帶過長白線，不過我覺得這個情況是適合
01:56:894 (3,4) - 这里节奏怪怪的？考虑换一下 還可以吧(??)
02:18:124 (3) - 随便加个音效吧 Done
02:52:278 (3) - 调大声吧。。。 Done

eikkaleyd wrote:

:D 来看看哥哥的图

[ERT's Normal]
00.41.201 (1) 往右一格会更好看

[Hard]
00.24.586 (8) 弯的不够漂亮，再调整一下
00.54.125 (3) 我觉得和12做成等腰三角形比较好看呢
01.31.971 (4) 应该再放到右边一小格【level 3的小格
03.04.740 (4) 也是形状不太对

因为节奏很赞所以只找出样子方面的问题OTZ加上我是音效白痴

eikkaleyd wrote:

:D 来看看哥哥的图

[ERT's Normal]
00.41.201 (1) 往右一格会更好看 Doen

KayeSara wrote:

谢谢妹妹modding XD 都改了XD

Nymph wrote:

Normal:
Issues
02:22:740 (1) - 这kiai线有2条重叠了 删一个 這樣都看到++

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:50:432 (3,4) - 这里依然还是跟前面2个一样红线有vocal的 用2个白线note就很奇怪 DONE
02:27:355 (1) - 这newcombo没啥意义吧 DONE

Hitsound
00:15:355 (1) - 这里我觉得并不适合finish 去掉finish可能会更好 MP3里虽然鼓声有一点 但是finish还是会显得突兀 当然这只是建议（其实finish加的位置并没什么不好 但是相比hit的音量的话.. 就建议finish都单独下绿线减一下音量吧 要不反差大了点 DONE
00:19:048 (1) - ^ DONE
00:19:048 (1) - 除了那个finish 我觉得转折的箭头上加clap可能会比whistle好 因为个人感觉clap到whistle音量不同 会有一个过渡的感觉 DONE
00:24:586 (3) - 这里与其空着开头 或者可以考虑加个whistle 不加的话还是觉得空了点 单加3还是加34就是见仁见智了 不加也没什么不可以 DONE
00:51:355 (5) - 如果是我可能会考虑slider头消音 效果感觉还不坏 消音覺得有點怪，X
后面跟前面基本一样 就不重复了 hitsound都是建议 可尽情无视

[Ranger] wrote:

[ERT's Normal]
00:44:432 (6) - Put in x:360 y:128 GJ
01:17:663-Add Circle? Done
01:45:817 (3) - Put in x:120 y:160 Done
02:22:740 (1) - Put in x:280 y:232 Done
02:48:586 (1) - Put in x:328 y:232 Done
02:52:278 (3) - Put in x:416 y:176 我都習慣弄成三角形：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221924

Kanon wrote:

Normal:
00:25:509 (4) - 开头whistle去掉试试 OK
01:57:817 (4) - 尾部finish 這原本就有了0.0

KayeSara wrote:

我也不知道为什么就有这歌曲。。。反正有了，是那个中国天子的:3

KayeSara wrote:

>eikkaleyd
找不到好看的怎么办？求妹妹帮忙啊QAQ

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[normal]
00:11:663 (1) - finish略吵
00:19:048 (1) - ^
00:21:355 (2) - 开头和折返地方加whistle，结尾5%finish Done
01:14:432 (1) - finish略吵
01:21:817 (1) - ^
01:57:817 (4) - 开头normal的音效略凸，改成soft试试 Done

KayeSara wrote:

>eikkaleyd
名字的话就不用改了哈，是以为日本朋友帮我找的，也有歌曲title的link
至于这个图。。。。。我发现天子为什么质量这么差啊。。。。同人都不能花好看么，唯一有选择性的就是最后一张了。。。才40KB

1. As Lizbeth already mentioned, this song isn't from Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2 (Matsumoto Tamaki is just Tianzi's voice). You need to remove the source (and remove everything which is related to Code Geass in the tags).

1. As Lizbeth already said, you should add a spinner somewhere in the map.
2. 01:01:278 (6) - This circle is too close from the previous slider track, the spacing isn't "wrong" however the this circle is sticked with the slider is kinda confusing and ugly. Space them like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:02:432 (3) - If you have fixed the previous line (I hope), don't forget to restack this circle correctly ~
4. 01:23:663 (9) - This note need a new combo (because of the music and the "tu tudu tudu tum"
5. 02:20:894 (1) - This slider is too close from the previous circle. You should keep the same spacing there is between 02:19:971 (3,4). Otherwise it may be confusing for the player.
6. 02:31:048 (3) - You have added a new combo on the previous similar patterns, so do it here too.
7. 02:31:971 (5) - Same as above.

1. 00:55:971 (4) - You shouldn't stack this circle with the end of the slider because as the rhythm change here it will not be obvious (who is a beginner) to know when he has to click the circle, the spacing will help him for this, that's why you shouldn't stack it.
2. 02:13:624 (1) - This slider shouldn't start on this blue tick but on the downbeat (the tall white tick)
   Start it at 02:13:509 please.
3. Map this diff till the end like the Hard diff ?

KuraiPettan wrote:

ERT's Normal :

1. 00:55:971 (4) - You shouldn't stack this circle with the end of the slider because as the rhythm change here it will not be obvious (who is a beginner) to know when he has to click the circle, the spacing will help him for this, that's why you shouldn't stack it. Done
2. 02:13:624 (1) - This slider shouldn't start on this blue tick but on the downbeat (the tall white tick)
   Start it at 02:13:509 please. Done
3. Map this diff till the end like the Hard diff ? I will discuss with members

Lizbeth wrote:

I searched and asked some people, and apparently this song isn’t from code geass r2 soundtrack, convince me if I'm wrong, but if not, remove that from source. Also the name of the album is Small Nature, you might wanna add that to tags.

Hard
Maybe you want to add a spinner to this diff, to vary the scores.

Everything else is just perfect, really nice map<3

KuraiPettan wrote:

General :

1. As Lizbeth already mentioned, this song isn't from Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2 (Matsumoto Tamaki is just Tianzi's voice). You need to remove the source (and remove everything which is related to Code Geass in the tags).

Fix it as Lizbeth said :3

Hard :

1. As Lizbeth already said, you should add a spinner somewhere in the map.
2. 01:01:278 (6) - This circle is too close from the previous slider track, the spacing isn't "wrong" however the this circle is sticked with the slider is kinda confusing and ugly. Space them like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:02:432 (3) - If you have fixed the previous line (I hope), don't forget to restack this circle correctly ~
4. 01:23:663 (9) - This note need a new combo (because of the music and the "tu tudu tudu tum"
5. 02:20:894 (1) - This slider is too close from the previous circle. You should keep the same spacing there is between 02:19:971 (3,4). Otherwise it may be confusing for the player.
6. 02:31:048 (3) - You have added a new combo on the previous similar patterns, so do it here too.
7. 02:31:971 (5) - Same as above.

Fix all of them, besides the spinner.....I can' find any room for that.

The map is pretty nice and very fun to play, really. Nonetheless I'm kinda sad that there are only 2 difficulties, you could make more, plus a Taiko difficulty would fit pretty nice this song, You should consider asking someone to make a taiko diff (or maybe make it yourself ?) and making a new diff :/
Sure, I'll try to ask someone to make a Taiko :3 And it seems you are fond of Taiko

KayeSara wrote:

>Lizbeth
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you can't do that, because the most important thing is I can't find the ending time. Orz

1. 00:09:124 (4) - im dont like to point on overlaps at slider tails, but notes on slider head should be stacked perfectly ==!
   (btw for some reason i want this note to be http://puu.sh/fcvW stacked on the head 00:09:817 (6) - )
2. 01:25:278 - note
3. 01:26:201 - note
4. 01:29:894 - note
5. 01:33:586 - note
   (^ all this notes for better flow, + folowing vocal, was little bit surprised because 00:26:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - u folowed the vocal and here u suddensly changed ur pattern )
6. 01:34:509 - u can also + note but this time both fine for me
7. 01:53:663 - note
8. 02:22:740 (2) - all ur NC folowing vocal, so u guess NC should starts here ~
9. 02:28:740 - note
10. 02:47:201 - note

KanaRin wrote:

Irc modded.

1. Don't put the album name in the source. Album name must go to the tags, always !
2. I already said it, but please remove everything which is related to Code Geass from the tags since this song isn't related with this anime.

1. Use Hpdroin 5 please
2. 03:02:201 (3) - d here, like you did at 02:53:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2). (Consistency)
3. Nice taiko ~

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
Sounds a bit loud. Otherwise fine. It sounds OK for me. But I think reducing all green & red lines by ~ 10% volume is also fine too, if KayeSara wants to ? I'll let her decide :3

Anyway, thanks for your modding

KayeSara wrote:

OMG.... why you call me H sala....

1. approachcircle.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 , current one is 135x135, please fix it.
2. Please change to tick rate 2 in Taiko diff.

1. 00:19:048 (1) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider because it breaks the hitclap flow seriously.
2. I would like to change it to default whistle rather than S1 whistle here. Please rise the volume if you change it.
3. 00:22:740 (1) - (nazi) The shape of this slider isn't that perfect here, I tried to make it smooth and let you decide to use it or not.
   
   
   

   256,184,22740,6,0,B|203:239|264:336|336:320,1,200,4|4

4. 00:30:125 (1,2) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider.
5. 01:23:663 (5) - ^
   
   
   

   120,200,83663,2,0,B|67:257|136:349|202:329,1,200,4|0

6. 01:25:509 (1,2) - I think you should change it to normal hitsound at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound there.
7. 02:50:894 (2) - Nothing support the reverse of the slider, so I would remove the slider and then add a note at 02:50:894 - and 02:51:817 - if I were you.
8. 03:09:817 (1) - Probably just change to 5% volume at the end of the spinner or just treat it like hard.

1. Volume is too loud for me, I prefer 60% here
2. 00:14:894 (2,3,4) - Triplet sounds weird here indeed. They don't fit the music well during gameplay, I think simple 1/2 should be enough.
3. 00:15:817 (6,1,1) - k d k here to follow the drum sound?
4. 00:20:432 (4,1) - I would say k d here because the pitch of 00:20:432 (4) - is lower than 00:20:663 - also the drum sound.
5. 00:32:432 (1,2) - Please remove the finish here, I can't hear any accent there.
6. 00:51:125 (1) - Please move this note to 00:51:355 - because there are no vocal/instrument/drum sound to support it, thus it sounds superfluous.
7. 00:52:855 (4,5) - Remove it? It doesn't fit the music that much imo
8. 00:53:778 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:02:894 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:14:894
10. 01:49:048 (1) - k here?
11. 01:53:894 (1) - Move this to 01:54:125 - ?
12. 02:11:663 (2) - I would change this to big kat to fit the music.
13. 02:47:432 (1) - Remove this note because it doesn't correspond the music.
14. 02:49:163 (3,4) - Remove it?
15. 02:50:086 (3,4) - ^
16. 02:51:355 (1) - Same as 00:52:855
17. 03:02:663 - I would add a note here with a kat for fitting the clap sound from the music.

1. 00:31:740 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These look weird and flow bad imo, I would say change to another pattern would be nice.
2. 00:35:663 (1,2,3,4) - Why? I think it should follow the vocal here since you have followed the vocal in previous part.
3. 00:42:586 (x) - I feel like a note here or you can use a slider from 00:42:355 - to 00:42:817 - and then remove 00:42:817 (1) - .
4. 00:45:817 (5) - I would remove the slider and then add a note at 00:45:817 - , 00:46:048 - , 00:46:278 - . I would suggest some similar pattern like you have done it before 00:37:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
5. 00:54:355 - Add a spinner here and end it at 00:55:509 - ?
6. 00:56:432 (2) - I guess you forgot to place a clap here because it a clap can consummate the hitsound flow.
7. 01:12:355 (7) - Please stack this to the end of 01:11:663 (5) - properly.
8. 01:41:663 - Add a note here with a clap sound?
9. 01:43:509 - ^
10. 01:45:355 - ^
11. 01:49:048 - ^
12. 01:53:663 (5) - Same as 00:56:432- I guess you were missing a clap here.
13. 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 - Since you were following the drum sound before so I think you better to follow the drum sound here.
14. 02:06:817 (2,3,4,5,6) - Inperfect pentagon, you can use the 'Create polygon circle' to make a perfect pentagon.
15. 02:29:201 ~ 02:29:894 - Same as 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 -
16. 02:33:817 - After here, add a note with a clap resembles 01:41:663 -
17. 02:47:663 ~ 02:48:355 - Same as 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 -

kanpakyin wrote:

let's check this.

[General]
[*]Please change to tick rate 2 in Taiko diff. I wonder if there's a special reason for that. Anyway, fixed ~

[Taiko]

1. Volume is too loud for me, I prefer 60% here OK~
2. 00:14:894 (2,3,4) - Triplet sounds weird here indeed. They don't fit the music well during gameplay, I think simple 1/2 should be enough. Deleted all notes
3. 00:15:817 (6,1,1) - k d k here to follow the drum sound? I guess it should be better now ?
4. 00:20:432 (4,1) - I would say k d here because the pitch of 00:20:432 (4) - is lower than 00:20:663 - also the drum sound. Why do I think the opposite ? I'll say in 00:20:432, the vocal rises for 2 times ( Once every 1/2 )
5. 00:32:432 (1,2) - Please remove the finish here, I can't hear any accent there. But the 1-by-1 emphasis on vocal is significant enough to add finish imo :<
6. 00:51:125 (1) - Please move this note to 00:51:355 - because there are no vocal/instrument/drum sound to support it, thus it sounds superfluous. I admit my older diffs are not that good > < Fixed
7. 00:52:855 (4,5) - Remove it? It doesn't fit the music that much imo OK~
8. 00:53:778 (3,4) - ^ ^
9. 01:02:894 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:14:894 Changed to k only
10. 01:49:048 (1) - k here? But I don't think the instrument is high-pitched enough . . .
11. 01:53:894 (1) - Move this to 01:54:125 - ? OK~
12. 02:11:663 (2) - I would change this to big kat to fit the music. Actually I'm trying to express the feeling of fall -> rise ( As seen in dd k d dk kk ). So I think I'll keep this unchanged ~
13. 02:47:432 (1) - Remove this note because it doesn't correspond the music. OK~
14. 02:49:163 (3,4) - Remove it? OK~
15. 02:50:086 (3,4) - ^ ^
16. 02:51:355 (1) - Same as 00:52:855 OK~
17. 03:02:663 - I would add a note here with a kat for fitting the clap sound from the music. OK~