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Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou

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KayeSara
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KayeSara
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月16日 at 0:23:58

Artist: Matsumoto Tamaki
Title: Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou
Tags: ertyukjh010 aabc271 Small Nature
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5625kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. aabc's Taiko (4.78 stars, 597 notes)
  2. ERT's Normal (2.35 stars, 184 notes)
  3. Hard (4.87 stars, 469 notes)
Download: Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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果然还是要rank才行么？不然太对不起guest diff了吧
ertyukjh010's Normal diff!
aabc271 for Taiko diff!
And Thanks for Kanon's sonuds effect.
Last edited by KayeSara , edited 24 times in total.
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
沙发/

[General]
删掉.osb
难度跨度有点大 中间加个等级?

[Normal]
00:28:265 (3) - 删除finish
00:31:958 (3) - 改成来回折中间放clap
01:54:573 (X) - 加note,clap
02:13:612 (1) - 从02:13:496开始?
02:17:188 (2) - finish违和
02:19:035 (1) - ^
02:20:881 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:27:112 (4) - NC
00:30:804 (4) - ^
00:33:804 (1) - 红线上的whistle删除 加在白线上
00:34:265 (2) - ^
00:34:727 (3) - ^
00:35:189 (4) - ^
00:49:496 (3) - NC
00:50:419 (5) - ^
01:07:958 (3) - ^
01:14:188 (11) - 删除note
01:26:419 (3) - NC
01:30:112 (3) - ^
01:33:804 (3) - ^
01:43:727 (6) - ^
01:44:419 (1) - 删除NC
02:10:727 (3) - NC
02:11:650 (5) - ^
02:12:573 (7) - ^
02:24:342 (7) - ^
02:27:342 (3) - ^
02:28:265 (5) - ^
02:35:419 (5) - ^
02:39:112 (6) - ^
02:41:188 (10) - ^
02:42:804 (14) - ^
02:44:881 (19) - ^
02:45:804 (21) - ^
02:46:727 (23) - ^

nice map :)
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Beren wrote:

沙发/

[General]
删掉.osb
难度跨度有点大 中间加个等级?
我懒人啊QAQ
[Hard]
00:27:112 (4) - NC
00:30:804 (4) - ^
00:33:804 (1) - 红线上的whistle删除 加在白线上
00:34:265 (2) - ^
00:34:727 (3) - ^
00:35:189 (4) - ^
00:49:496 (3) - NC
00:50:419 (5) - ^
01:07:958 (3) - ^
01:14:188 (11) - 删除note
01:26:419 (3) - NC
01:30:112 (3) - ^
01:33:804 (3) - ^
01:43:727 (6) - ^
01:44:419 (1) - 删除NC
02:10:727 (3) - NC
02:11:650 (5) - ^
02:12:573 (7) - ^
02:24:342 (7) - ^
02:27:342 (3) - ^
02:28:265 (5) - ^
02:35:419 (5) - ^
02:39:112 (6) - ^
02:41:188 (10) - ^
02:42:804 (14) - ^
02:44:881 (19) - ^
02:45:804 (21) - ^
02:46:727 (23) - ^
都改了，除了删除note那个XD

nice map :)
谢谢Beren师傅的modding~
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
wat a moe hnnnng
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>h3k1ru
~~~~Thx~~~
Minos2012
225 posts
Joined November 2011
Minos2012
wow~群主做新图啦~~~期待 :D
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Minos2012
马马虎虎马马虎虎的，谢谢星星啦~
Fumika
1,425 posts
Joined November 2011
Fumika
IRC Modded owo !

SPOILER
09:27 <KayeSara> : Of course I need help XD
09:27 <Netsukawa> : wwwww
09:31 <Netsukawa> : This song from Code Geass ?
09:31 <KayeSara> : Yes XD
09:31 <KayeSara> : Suprising
09:31 <KayeSara> : So I am
09:31 <KayeSara> : I can't believe XD
09:32 <Netsukawa> : Why ?
09:32 <KayeSara> : moe song from code geass
09:36 <Netsukawa> : Can be irc mod ?
09:37 <KayeSara> : Of course if you want XD
09:37 <Netsukawa> : owo !
09:38 <Netsukawa> : first , timming is not correct =w=
09:38 <KayeSara> : 。。。。。
09:38 <KayeSara> : so
09:40 <Netsukawa> : offset 6125
09:40 <Netsukawa> : orz
09:40 <Netsukawa> : change to 6125 2 dif
09:40 <Netsukawa> : and resnap all note
09:41 <KayeSara> : ~fix
09:42 <Netsukawa> : oh
09:42 <Netsukawa> : wait a min
09:42 <KayeSara> : let me resnap the timing
09:42 <Netsukawa> : Timming +13
09:43 <Netsukawa> : 00:48:586 (1) - stop first kiai here
09:45 <Netsukawa> : 01:51:355 (1) - second kiai stop here
09:47 <KayeSara> : OK
09:49 <Netsukawa> : orz thest map for friend
09:49 <KayeSara> : W?
09:49 <Netsukawa> : *test
09:49 <Netsukawa> : orz
09:50 <Netsukawa> : 02:15:355 (1) - delete kiai
09:50 <Netsukawa> : 02:22:740 (2) - start third kiai here
09:50 <Netsukawa> : 02:26:432 (1) - stop third kiai here
09:51 <Netsukawa> : 02:33:817 (1) - 4th kiai start here
09:51 <KayeSara> : ~ok
09:51 <Netsukawa> : 02:44:894 (1) - last kiai stop here
09:51 <Netsukawa> : =w=
09:52 <KayeSara> : ~
09:53 <KayeSara> : fix
09:53 <Netsukawa> : 00:35:894 (2,4,6) - add note ?
09:53 <Netsukawa> : its fit the song
09:54 <Netsukawa> : 00:37:278 (8) - this too
09:54 <Netsukawa> : 00:38:894 (7) - sound like clap here
09:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:40:740 (6) - this too
09:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:52:278 (1,2,3) - I love you >w<
09:55 <KayeSara> : ....I can't find it
09:55 <KayeSara> : wait
09:55 <KayeSara> : let me update it
09:57 <KayeSara> : Ok
09:58 <KayeSara> : You know the chinese " l love you " XD?
09:58 <Netsukawa> : Yes owo
09:59 <Netsukawa> : in my school grade 1-4 , study chinese
09:59 <Netsukawa> : so I didn't forget some words =w="
09:59 <KayeSara> : ...and the only thing you know is 我爱你 XD
09:59 <Netsukawa> : ; A ;
09:59 <Netsukawa> : 00:55:566 -
10:00 <Netsukawa> : wait
10:00 <KayeSara> : update
10:00 <Netsukawa> : http://puu.sh/dy9u
10:00 <Netsukawa> : ; A ;
10:00 <Netsukawa> : Hard diff not normal ; w ;
10:00 <KayeSara> : Orz
10:01 <Netsukawa> : you already edit only Normal ; w ;
10:01 <KayeSara> : No
10:01 <KayeSara> : also hard
10:01 <Netsukawa> : kiai ; w ;
10:01 <KayeSara> : I have change it
10:01 <Netsukawa> : = 3 =
10:01 <KayeSara> : update
10:02 <KayeSara> : Does the normal seems like Easy?
10:02 <Netsukawa> : http://puu.sh/dyab hard diff didn't change kiai ; w ;
10:02 <Netsukawa> : Nope
10:02 <Netsukawa> : It's Normal
10:02 <Netsukawa> : =w=
10:02 <KayeSara> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221070
10:03 <Netsukawa> : upload it again = 3 =
10:03 <Netsukawa> : I see latest version
10:03 <Netsukawa> : orz
10:04 <KayeSara> : Orz
10:04 <KayeSara> : baka imoto
10:05 <Netsukawa> : already upload ; w ; ?
10:05 <KayeSara> : yes
10:05 <KayeSara> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221071
10:06 <Netsukawa> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221072
10:07 <Netsukawa> : ; 3 ;
10:07 <KayeSara> : .....
10:07 <KayeSara> : why
10:08 *Netsukawa is editing (Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43100]
10:08 <Netsukawa> : let me ReDL
10:08 <Netsukawa> : orz
10:09 <Netsukawa> : oh !
10:09 <Netsukawa> : =w=
10:09 <Netsukawa> : now it's change
10:09 <Netsukawa> : which diff you want me mod first ?
10:10 <KayeSara> : hard
10:10 <Netsukawa> : ok
10:10 <KayeSara> : cuz normal is GD
10:10 <Netsukawa> : Haha
10:11 <Netsukawa> : =w=
10:12 <KayeSara> : ~haha
10:12 <Netsukawa> : 00:35:894 (2,4,6,8) - add note
10:13 <Netsukawa> : 00:52:278 (1,2,3) - Ai loved you again !!!
10:13 <Netsukawa> : >w<
10:13 <KayeSara> : ~I love imoto~
10:13 <Netsukawa> : Yaaay
10:13 <KayeSara> : I love you XD
10:13 <KayeSara> : You are my gift~
10:13 <Netsukawa> : really owo ?
10:13 <Netsukawa> : wwwwww
10:13 <KayeSara> : ~
10:14 <Netsukawa> : 01:05:201 (6) - New Combo
10:14 <Netsukawa> : 01:12:586 (8) - ^
10:15 <Netsukawa> : 01:16:278 (7) - ^
10:15 <Netsukawa> : 01:36:586 (5) - ^
10:15 <Netsukawa> : =w="\
10:16 <KayeSara> : XD
10:18 <Netsukawa> : 03:01:509 (5) - New combo
10:18 <Netsukawa> : 03:09:817 (8) - add note
10:18 <Netsukawa> : 03:09:817 (8) - after add note add spinner in blue line
10:19 <Netsukawa> : oh
10:19 <KayeSara> : blue?
10:19 <Netsukawa> : I think no spinner is better
10:19 <KayeSara> : end?
10:20 <Netsukawa> : 03:09:932 (1) - ; w ;
10:20 <Netsukawa> : no spinner is good
10:20 <Netsukawa> : =w=b
10:20 <Netsukawa> : and
10:20 <Netsukawa> : end of modding hard
10:21 <Netsukawa> : =w=a
10:21 <KayeSara> : ~
10:21 <Netsukawa> : let me post
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Netsukawa
Thx for my kawayi imoto~
Darcsol
277 posts
Joined January 2010
Darcsol
I was not expecting this song to be from Code Geass. Oh well. :|

[General]
  • - The full source is: Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2
    - Reduce the offset to 585. Remember to Resnap All Notes.
    - Find a background that relates to the source.
    - Add stuff to tags! Such as its Japanese name: Kodo Giasu Hangyaku no Rurushu Aru Tsu. Or the singer who voiced Tianzi in the anime.
    - Are you creating more difficulties?
[ERT's Normal]
  • Seems fine.
[Hard]
  • |Optional| 00:38:432 (5) Should the beat be raised 3 grid marks up, and 1 grid mark to the left?
    02:50:663 Remove the break

Not much problems going on. I personally don't like some elements in [Hard] but I can't criticize mapping styles like that. Otherwise you would have seen much more stuff in the [Hard] mod. It is playable though and fun for the most part. Have a star~
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Darcsol wrote:

I was not expecting this song to be from Code Geass. Oh well. :|
Anyway, it's from Code Geass XD. And at first time, even I can't believe that.

[General]
  • - The full source is: Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2 Fix
    - Reduce the offset to 585. Remember to Resnap All Notes. Well, I'll try to think about it.
    - Find a background that relates to the source. Tianzi is not moe like that XD, maybe I'll try to find a suitable one when it's moe enough.
    - Add stuff to tags! Such as its Japanese name: Kodo Giasu Hangyaku no Rurushu Aru Tsu. Or the singer who voiced Tianzi in the anime. Fix
    - Are you creating more difficulties? I'm lazy guy, I don't want do anything more

[Hard]
  • |Optional| 00:38:432 (5) Should the beat be raised 3 grid marks up, and 1 grid mark to the left? Seems fine, so no change.
    02:50:663 Remove the break Fix

Not much problems going on. I personally don't like some elements in [Hard] but I can't criticize mapping styles like that. Otherwise you would have seen much more stuff in the [Hard] mod. It is playable though and fun for the most part. Have a star~
Thx for your modding and star XD
Anyway, that's my new style for mapping, I'll try to ues different style in all of my map.
Rewrite
Rewrite
[Normal]

Nothing QAQ


[Hard]

00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
00:11:815 (4) - ^
00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
00:40:397 (2) - remove it
00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>LoliSora
Only fix 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
Thx for your modding and star XD
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ KayeSara ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Don't forgot Delete OSB file.
  2. Open ERT's Normal diff test file : SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999.
    Need fixed this error,change 1 it's ok.
  3. Oh,you are missing BG size it's 1024*768 (your size 1024*767).

[Hard]


  1. 00:24:586 (8) - Add new combo,vocal start to here.
  2. 00:33:817 - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  3. 00:52:278 (1,2,3) - You can add some note like this.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:55:278 - like this.
    SPOILER
  5. 00:55:971 (1) - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  6. 00:57:817 (5) - Add new combo,vocal start to here.
  7. 01:01:509 (7) - ^
  8. 01:06:471 - Add note will be better.
  9. 01:10:740 (1) - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  10. 01:18:125 - Add finish.
  11. 01:40:278 - ^
  12. 01:47:663 - ^
  13. 01:54:355 - Same as 00:55:278.
  14. 01:55:048 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:52:278.
  15. 02:30:124 (1,2,3) - ^
  16. 02:48:586 (1,2,3) - ^
  17. 02:00:586 (5) - Add new combo.
  18. 02:04:278 (5) - ^
  19. 02:13:048 - Add break time to here.
  20. 02:15:355 - Add finish.
  21. 02:38:201 (3) - Try move to here X:351 Y:111.
  22. 02:41:201 - Add finish.
  23. 02:57:817 (7) - Add new combo.
  24. 02:59:663 - Add finish and Remove whistle.
  25. 03:07:048 (9) - Add new combo,because this is a separate sound.

[ERT's Normal]


  1. AR+1 will be fun with me.
  2. 00:51:355 (5) - This sounds 1/2 will be better.
  3. 02:29:201 (3,4) - ^

That's all ~

Really Kawaii song and nice mapset ~ wo ai ni ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~ ;)
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
mod 4 mod here
general:简单来说。。其实。。就是感觉太简单了。。。吧
两个diff.不是我挑剔。。但是就是不够啊

HARD
slider tick 真的真的需要 2 现在巨长slider没有tick有点闷
00:08:201 (2) - 一进来的印象啊。。建议删去match vocal，效果更佳？这个note感觉是多余的
00:09:124 (4) - 不加音效吗
00:16:048 (3) - 删了whistle
00:19:048 (1) - 删了whistle
00:33:586 (6,1) - 这两个还是建议用之前的antijump...更愉快
哭了+6了
00:35:663 (1,2,3,4) - 不闷吗。。声量总可以调一调吧？
00:38:894 (x) - 这里有一个很天然的clap 声。。。不map有点可惜，建议用跳note
00:40:740 (x) - ^
00:47:663 (9) - 这个建议缩短一半（先跟vocal)然后加note，跳了他？
01:02:663 (x) - 红白线加note？前面只有一个note纳闷
01:17:201 (3) - 尾巴whistle
01:28:278 (6) - 那个弧度可以更好点
01:38:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议用星星pattern,可以重复使用不打紧
01:46:278 (2) - 两个巨长slider一起有点别扭。。？不如这个缩短一半，加note
01:48:355 (2,3,4) - spacing不舒服
02:13:509 (1) - 加spinner吧？建议end在214894
02:15:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 挺闷的。。造成这首歌听起来有6分钟之长
建议在每个combo的三四之间加一个note
02:30:124 (1,2,3) - 每一个‘我爱你’都用同一种pattern吗。。
02:50:432 (3) - 建议kiai在这里结束？
02:58:740 (9) - 后面红白线加note orz

晕了

normal
00:14:894 (4) - 加note
00:24:125 (2) - 不clap吗？
00:27:817 (2) - ^
00:31:971 (3) - head finish跟前面一样。。
00:38:894 (2) - 个人觉得这种slider最好在大白线start 后面还有不吐槽了
01:56:894 (3,4) - 这里节奏怪怪的？考虑换一下
02:18:124 (3) - 随便加个音效吧
02:52:278 (3) - 调大声吧。。。

晕了 +7
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

Beren wrote:

[General]
难度跨度有点大 中间加个等级? 是Kaye的錯（被打

[Normal]
00:28:265 (3) - 删除finish Done
00:31:958 (3) - 改成来回折中间放clap X
01:54:573 (X) - 加note,clap Done
02:13:612 (1) - 从02:13:496开始? X
02:17:188 (2) - finish违和 刪掉
02:19:035 (1) - ^ 刪掉
02:20:881 (3) - ^ 刪掉

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[ERT's Normal]

  1. AR+1 will be fun with me.
  2. 00:51:355 (5) - This sounds 1/2 will be better. [/color]
  3. 02:29:201 (3,4) - ^
[/notice]

L_P wrote:

normal
00:14:894 (4) - 加note Done
00:24:125 (2) - 不clap吗？ Done
00:27:817 (2) - ^ Done
00:31:971 (3) - head finish跟前面一样。。 Done
00:38:894 (2) - 个人觉得这种slider最好在大白线start 后面还有不吐槽了 我也很少用Slider帶過長白線，不過我覺得這個情況是適合
01:56:894 (3,4) - 这里节奏怪怪的？考虑换一下 還可以吧(??)
02:18:124 (3) - 随便加个音效吧 Done
02:52:278 (3) - 调大声吧。。。 Done
謝謝Mod :)

Download: Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou (KayeSara) [ERT's Normal].osu
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
野生的黑色香蕉出现了！

hard
ar8打不了dt了（喂
感觉mod可以无视
00:16:048 (3) - 感觉远- -
00:32:894 (3) - 打的时候当成四分拍了..稍微摆远一点？
01:52:278 (2) - 距离很短，靠的好近0 0把(1)顺时针转45度？
01:55:048 - 和前面一段一样的，打的有点腻了- -
02:03:125 (2,3) - 我的理解是把(3)放到现在(2)的位置，(2)和上一个重叠
02:07:048 (3) - 放到和(2,4)一条线上？(5)类似？感觉会好看一点- -
02:10:048 (2) - 改半拍滑条送点分吧（拍
02:20:663 - 想加个圈，放在下一个滑条开头边上
02:21:817 (4) - 感觉一拍滑条好一点- -
02:58:740 (1) - 作为开头把下一个滑条形状复制下来转一下？我的感觉是句子中间的空隙现在已经可以不用了
03:08:894 (7) - 已经有形状了吗- -感觉跳一下，懒得换就算了

normal
01:09:355 - 感觉break长（不知道新手是不是这么想...
不知道说什么了- -

edit：建议拿掉letterbox，hard的break好短，看着不爽
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Rika
谢谢modding和star 基本都改了XD
>L_P
你的图这两天我就去mod，话说modding里面的很多都想改，尤其是加note部分，但是我试了一下，因为突然变化后面变慢会受很大印象，所以音效什么的都改了，note那部分修理一部分,还有些跳。。。。真心太触了
还有就是谢谢你的modding和star啦XD
>Ert，CMN~
谢谢妹妹的star XD
>Banana
谢谢香蕉的star和modding~
间距什么的还是没变，感觉还比较合适吧？（雾
其它都改了XD
Last edited by KayeSara , edited 1 time in total.
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
:D 来看看哥哥的图

[ERT's Normal]
00.41.201 (1) 往右一格会更好看

[Hard]
00.24.586 (8) 弯的不够漂亮，再调整一下
00.54.125 (3) 我觉得和12做成等腰三角形比较好看呢
01.31.971 (4) 应该再放到右边一小格【level 3的小格
03.04.740 (4) 也是形状不太对

因为节奏很赞所以只找出样子方面的问题OTZ加上我是音效白痴
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara

eikkaleyd wrote:

:D 来看看哥哥的图

[ERT's Normal]
00.41.201 (1) 往右一格会更好看

[Hard]
00.24.586 (8) 弯的不够漂亮，再调整一下
00.54.125 (3) 我觉得和12做成等腰三角形比较好看呢
01.31.971 (4) 应该再放到右边一小格【level 3的小格
03.04.740 (4) 也是形状不太对

因为节奏很赞所以只找出样子方面的问题OTZ加上我是音效白痴
谢谢妹妹modding XD 都改了XD
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
打起来很舒服 没有什么大问题

加油=w=
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

eikkaleyd wrote:

:D 来看看哥哥的图

[ERT's Normal]
00.41.201 (1) 往右一格会更好看 Doen
謝謝 eikkaleyd :)

KayeSara wrote:

谢谢妹妹modding XD 都改了XD
您這個妹控原來到處收納妹妹++

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Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
液hentai（我这电脑有点问题……所以缺不少工具还有别的东西 mod质量可能会有差=_=


General:
我觉得soft-hit的音量有点太低了 打击感不足 强烈建议可以考虑提高音量或者选一个更有打击感的hit？

letterbox不选上么？ 又没有sb什么的（囧了前面香蕉让拿掉的letterbox么

diff spread什么的 我懂你的 液


Normal:
Issues
02:22:740 (1) - 这kiai线有2条重叠了 删一个

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:50:432 (3,4) - 这里依然还是跟前面2个一样红线有vocal的 用2个白线note就很奇怪
02:27:355 (1) - 这newcombo没啥意义吧

Hitsound
00:15:355 (1) - 这里我觉得并不适合finish 去掉finish可能会更好 MP3里虽然鼓声有一点 但是finish还是会显得突兀 当然这只是建议（其实finish加的位置并没什么不好 但是相比hit的音量的话.. 就建议finish都单独下绿线减一下音量吧 要不反差大了点
00:19:048 (1) - ^
00:19:048 (1) - 除了那个finish 我觉得转折的箭头上加clap可能会比whistle好 因为个人感觉clap到whistle音量不同 会有一个过渡的感觉
00:24:586 (3) - 这里与其空着开头 或者可以考虑加个whistle 不加的话还是觉得空了点 单加3还是加34就是见仁见智了 不加也没什么不可以
00:51:355 (5) - 如果是我可能会考虑slider头消音 效果感觉还不坏
后面跟前面基本一样 就不重复了 hitsound都是建议 可尽情无视



Hard:
Issue
节奏也不是很密集 所以还是建议掉血-1吧 OD可以+1

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:32:894 (3) - 最好这里newcombo一下 有助于读图
00:38:894 (X) - 像这里的红线MP3里面有拍手声 所以我觉得这里加一个note很适合（而且后面有很多跟这一样的地方 不加当然也可以 只是建议下
02:15:355 (1) - 从这开始到02:20:432 (4) - 同上了 那MP3里面那几个拍手声吧 我觉得稍微跟着那里加一下节奏应该比现在这样一个白线一个note更好 这一个白线一个note的方法太单调了 而且也不fit 因为vocal也不是跟你现在这节奏走的
03:08:894 (7) - 这之后很适合一个spinner吧 又何必在这里结束 又不像normal结束的那么早

Hitsound
00:14:432 (10) - hit声音太小 finish声音太大..反差太大了 插线单独弄下finish的音量吧
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - 像这里的几个whistle还有finish 我觉得特别浑浊不清 听起来很别扭 所以有个建议吧 反正你SC2是空着的 弄个静音的hit做soft-hitnormal2 然后再听这里的whistle 我个人感觉要强太多了 然后就是我觉得第五个note放whistle要强过finish。。
00:23:201 (3,6) - 这2个normal hit音量有点大啊 -10试试看
00:35:663 (1,2,3,4) - 也是觉得有点音量大了
00:37:509 (1) - finish？
00:44:894 (1) - ^
00:48:586 (1) - 这里就特别适合finish
00:49:509 (1) - 这也是
00:49:509 (1) - 还是
00:52:278 (1,2,3) - 一样还是适合 不知道你感觉如何 所以后面类似的我不提了 可以自己考虑下是加还是不加
01:40:278 (1) - 这种也是 KIAI的开头 不finish下么 所有kiai都同 不再提了（因为太多了……你要是还是不懂再问我把你个魂淡
03:08:894 (7) - 这里我觉得不放hitsound比放个clap要好一些 尤其是像我刚才提的静音hit 感觉很不同


大概就这些吧 给变态射星 液
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

Nymph wrote:

Normal:
Issues
02:22:740 (1) - 这kiai线有2条重叠了 删一个 這樣都看到++

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:50:432 (3,4) - 这里依然还是跟前面2个一样红线有vocal的 用2个白线note就很奇怪 DONE
02:27:355 (1) - 这newcombo没啥意义吧 DONE

Hitsound
00:15:355 (1) - 这里我觉得并不适合finish 去掉finish可能会更好 MP3里虽然鼓声有一点 但是finish还是会显得突兀 当然这只是建议（其实finish加的位置并没什么不好 但是相比hit的音量的话.. 就建议finish都单独下绿线减一下音量吧 要不反差大了点 DONE
00:19:048 (1) - ^ DONE
00:19:048 (1) - 除了那个finish 我觉得转折的箭头上加clap可能会比whistle好 因为个人感觉clap到whistle音量不同 会有一个过渡的感觉 DONE
00:24:586 (3) - 这里与其空着开头 或者可以考虑加个whistle 不加的话还是觉得空了点 单加3还是加34就是见仁见智了 不加也没什么不可以 DONE
00:51:355 (5) - 如果是我可能会考虑slider头消音 效果感觉还不坏 消音覺得有點怪，X
后面跟前面基本一样 就不重复了 hitsound都是建议 可尽情无视
謝謝MOD :)

Download: Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou (KayeSara) [ERT's Normal].osu
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Hi there !

This mod is just suggestions

General: Great !

ERT's Normal

00:21:355 (2) - Add finish at the reverse arrow
02:21:817 (5) - Add whistle

Nice mapset

Normal

00:37:509 (1) - Add finish
00:40:740 (6) - Maybe add a note
00:44:894 (1) - Add finish
00:49:048 (3) - Add note whit clap
00:49:971 (3) - ^
01:43:509 (6) - Maybe add a note
01:49:048 (5) - ^
01:50:894 (6) - ^
02:26:432 (1) - Add finish
02:27:355 (1) - ^
02:28:278 (1) - ^
02:44:432 (6) - Add a note
02:44:894 (1) - Add finish
02:45:817 (1) - ^
02:45:817 (1) - ^
02:48:586 (1) - ^
02:49:509 (3) - ^
02:50:432 (5) - ^

Wow :D

All suggestions due i think its ready to be ranked :D ! i Did my best so hope it was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star !
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>BakaHuang
居然没骗到高三党的modding，可恶

>Nymph
改！！！！！！！改！！！！！！！！全部都改！！！！！！！了！！！！！！！！
话说那个HP不是挺爽的么，免得XXXXXXXXX投黑票啊，死掉一半以后都是投10分的人了XD
还有泡芙无节操的modding和star！！！！！！！就不用谢了XD

>[Te][Amo]
Thx for your modding and star！
Almost fixed XD
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
mjw5150
这样也行？！？！？！？！
管它的，水货你别怪我了

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
there are some object out of screen in this diff,please make them inside a little~
00:11:054 - add a note to follow the vocal?
00:12:942 - ^
00:27:522 - remove new combo
00:33:186 (5) - spacing
00:44:305 - remove new combo
00:45:144 - ^
01:07:907 (2) - delete this note to make the stream more fit
01:09:585 (4) - ^
01:10:110 - add a note
01:28:047 - ^
01:28:047 - ^
01:39:900 - new combo

这次没有胖次看啊XD Star
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>mjw5150
谢谢水货啊XD 都改了怎么办
还没去跳富士康的楼么XD
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
Hi~
from my queue

[ERT's Normal]
00:44:432 (6) - Put in x:360 y:128
01:17:663-Add Circle?
01:45:817 (3) - Put in x:120 y:160
02:22:740 (1) - Put in x:280 y:232
02:48:586 (1) - Put in x:328 y:232
02:52:278 (3) - Put in x:416 y:176

[Hard]

I think Jump in difficulty is too hard :(

00:15:817 (2) - Put in x:256 y:272
00:22:278 (6) - Add Circle?
00:36:125 (2,3,4) - Add NC(Anti jump)
00:52:278 (1) - Put in x:256 y:80
00:53:201 (2) - Put in x:128 y:288
00:54:125 (3) - Put in x:384 y:288
00:54:355~00:55:509-Insert Break Time
01:02:894-Add circle?
01:07:971 (1,2) - Put in x:256 y:304
01:53:663~01:54:586-Insert Break Time
01:55:971 (3) - Add NC
01:56:894 (5) -^
02:31:048 (2,3) - ^
02:49:509 (3) - ^
02:50:432 (5) - ^

Good luck~
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>[Ranger]
Thx for your modding, almost fix XD
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

[Ranger] wrote:

[ERT's Normal]
00:44:432 (6) - Put in x:360 y:128 GJ
01:17:663-Add Circle? Done
01:45:817 (3) - Put in x:120 y:160 Done
02:22:740 (1) - Put in x:280 y:232 Done
02:48:586 (1) - Put in x:328 y:232 Done
02:52:278 (3) - Put in x:416 y:176 我都習慣弄成三角形：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/221924
謝謝MOD

Download: Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou (KayeSara) [ERT's Normal].osu
Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Kanon
General:
感觉新的S-clap听起来明显比S-whistle要轻一点，可能把whistle音量减小一点会好一点？ http://puu.sh/dKBF 减了30%

Normal:
00:25:509 (4) - 开头whistle去掉试试
01:57:817 (4) - 尾部finish


Hard:
00:38:894 (7) - 后面2个类似地方你都是跟vocal的，没有NOTE，只有这里有，我觉得可能的话为了保持一致，这里的NOTE可以删掉
当然音乐本身有个clap音在里面，也可以都+上。。
00:40:740 (6) - ^
00:57:817 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳比较突然，或者把3,4位置换一下？
02:16:740 (4) - 还是感觉4的距离太近了玩起来怪怪的，可以考虑放远点，后面同理
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Kanon
谢谢卡农叔叔的modding啊XD
不过note其实我也在考虑删不删，暂时保留吧，还有那个跳的突然的地方其实刚开始我也是顺着五角星做的，但是玩起来极容易断，所以就这样了，后面的都改了XD
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

Kanon wrote:

Normal:
00:25:509 (4) - 开头whistle去掉试试 OK
01:57:817 (4) - 尾部finish 這原本就有了0.0
Download: Matsumoto Tamaki - Tenshi Teki Kenpou Yonjou (KayeSara) [ERT's Normal].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

[normal]
00:11:663 (1) - finish略吵
00:19:048 (1) - ^
00:21:355 (2) - 开头和折返地方加whistle，结尾5%finish
01:14:432 (1) - finish略吵
01:21:817 (1) - ^
01:57:817 (4) - 开头normal的音效略凸，改成soft试试

[hard]
AR-1?
00:11:894 (2,4,6) - 没开grid snap吗0 0感觉还是修一下stack比较好
01:00:586 (5) - 这个包的不是很好
03:08:894 (7) - finish略凸

(:< 鲁鲁修怎么可能有这么萌的角色歌。。。
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>No_Gu
稍后就改XD 但是AR-1 我觉得就太慢了
我也不知道为什么就有这歌曲。。。反正有了，是那个中国天子的:3
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

KayeSara wrote:

我也不知道为什么就有这歌曲。。。反正有了，是那个中国天子的:3
咦原来是天子的角色歌啊……那既然这样怎么BG不是|||
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>eikkaleyd
找不到好看的怎么办？求妹妹帮忙啊QAQ
Edit:↓ 那先谢谢妹妹了XD
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eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

KayeSara wrote:

>eikkaleyd
找不到好看的怎么办？求妹妹帮忙啊QAQ
QAQ这几天K站维修，D站和pixiv都没有好看的……明天等K站修好了我再看看
Star Stream
2,037 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
hi~
from my modding queue..

eh..?
could find something.. <.<
and good song! :D

take my star plz~
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Star Stream
>_<~Thx~ (don't told the mat I have gave the Kudos XD
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[normal]
00:11:663 (1) - finish略吵
00:19:048 (1) - ^
00:21:355 (2) - 开头和折返地方加whistle，结尾5%finish Done
01:14:432 (1) - finish略吵
01:21:817 (1) - ^
01:57:817 (4) - 开头normal的音效略凸，改成soft试试 Done
其餘的之前已經改成40%的音量

謝謝mod :)

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YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

General:
No problems here

ERT's Normal:
no problems here

Hard:
00:22:509(6) - NC
00:31:740(4,1) - NC for (4) and remove the NC for (1)
00:52:509 - add a circle?
00:53:432 - ^
00:54:335,00:54:586 - ^ so that itd be like at 01:55:048-01:57:355
01:08:548 - get rid of the break and add a slider at 01:09:355 and end it 01:09:586. it should be like This
02:03:817(4) - move it down because its touching the Hp bar
02:13:509(1) - add a spinner and end it at 02:14:894
02:30:355 - same as 00:52:509
02:31:278 - ^
02:32:201,02:32:432 - ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>Byakugan249
Thx for your modding and star, I have fixed most of them.
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
:) 哥哥我又来了，以下是废话们尽管无视

Title我今天仔细想了想，翻译肯定是不对的。虽然我没看过原曲的名字，Teki想必是写成汉字的“的”的吧，而此处其实这个“的”和“の”的意思是一样的，是起名字的人为了表示天子的中国身份才使用的汉字。
日语里如果有汉字“的”读作“teki”，一般表示“…样的”或者“…般的”，那这样这个标题就变成《天子般的宪法4条了》肯定是不对的。

于是怎么办呢……个人觉得有2种办法，全都换成中文拼音，或者全都换成英语翻译。要不然还是“Tenshi no Kenpou Yonjou"比较合适。
所以希望哥哥考虑一下这个错误的说。


BG虽然没找到真的合适的……不过图片还是适当去看了看，这里是几张也许能用的图，有的图尺寸真是小的可怜……

Here they are.
http://puu.sh/ec0p
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>eikkaleyd
名字的话就不用改了哈，是因为日本朋友帮我找的，也有歌曲title的link
至于这个图。。。。。我发现天子为什么质量这么差啊。。。。同人都不能花好看么，唯一有选择性的就是最后一张了。。。才40KB

Edit: 不管怎么说都感谢妹妹了 :3
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eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

KayeSara wrote:

>eikkaleyd
名字的话就不用改了哈，是以为日本朋友帮我找的，也有歌曲title的link
至于这个图。。。。。我发现天子为什么质量这么差啊。。。。同人都不能花好看么，唯一有选择性的就是最后一张了。。。才40KB
T.T没帮上什么忙真是抱歉呢，主要是天子的名字和东方那位重了，导致很多TAG不能用……嘛Title如果不改也可以啦w加油吧w
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
我來晚了!
真抱歉! 不過這個mod的數量也夠多了吧?
:D!

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks? 好像也沒有用到

[Hard]
00:13:509 (6) - 這裡NC~
00:38:894 (7) - 這裡有clap, 加一下
00:40:509 (5,6) - ^
00:47:663 (9) - slider 尾巴
00:56:432 (2) - 這裡clap
01:08:663 - 這裡要不要加個beat? 玩起來感覺不錯 也是跟著音樂
01:30:817 (1,2) - 欸, 突然這個距離有點遠...~
01:50:894 (6) - clap~
02:22:740 (2) - finish這裡~
結尾不加個spinner嗎? :>

第一個kiai, 有clap的地方都有加beat. 之後的kiai就沒這樣了 是故意的??
沒了~ 很好 :>
有點太萌了

Nothing found in Normal...
等一下 這是code Geass?!?!
KayeSara
Topic Starter
KayeSara
>hoLysoup
哦液~感谢mod~基本都改了，只有01:08:663加beat。。。表示我太懒了
还有个spinner我也考虑过，但是不知道在哪结束。
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
I searched and asked some people, and apparently this song isn’t from code geass r2 soundtrack, convince me if I'm wrong, but if not, remove that from source. Also the name of the album is Small Nature, you might wanna add that to tags.

Hard
Maybe you want to add a spinner to this diff, to vary the scores.

Everything else is just perfect, really nice map<3
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