KayeSara wrote:

OMG.... why you call me H sala....

1. approachcircle.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 , current one is 135x135, please fix it.
2. Please change to tick rate 2 in Taiko diff.

1. 00:19:048 (1) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider because it breaks the hitclap flow seriously.
2. I would like to change it to default whistle rather than S1 whistle here. Please rise the volume if you change it.
3. 00:22:740 (1) - (nazi) The shape of this slider isn't that perfect here, I tried to make it smooth and let you decide to use it or not.
   
   
   

   256,184,22740,6,0,B|203:239|264:336|336:320,1,200,4|4

4. 00:30:125 (1,2) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider.
5. 01:23:663 (5) - ^
   
   
   

   120,200,83663,2,0,B|67:257|136:349|202:329,1,200,4|0

6. 01:25:509 (1,2) - I think you should change it to normal hitsound at the end of the slider to fit the drum sound there.
7. 02:50:894 (2) - Nothing support the reverse of the slider, so I would remove the slider and then add a note at 02:50:894 - and 02:51:817 - if I were you.
8. 03:09:817 (1) - Probably just change to 5% volume at the end of the spinner or just treat it like hard.

1. Volume is too loud for me, I prefer 60% here
2. 00:14:894 (2,3,4) - Triplet sounds weird here indeed. They don't fit the music well during gameplay, I think simple 1/2 should be enough.
3. 00:15:817 (6,1,1) - k d k here to follow the drum sound?
4. 00:20:432 (4,1) - I would say k d here because the pitch of 00:20:432 (4) - is lower than 00:20:663 - also the drum sound.
5. 00:32:432 (1,2) - Please remove the finish here, I can't hear any accent there.
6. 00:51:125 (1) - Please move this note to 00:51:355 - because there are no vocal/instrument/drum sound to support it, thus it sounds superfluous.
7. 00:52:855 (4,5) - Remove it? It doesn't fit the music that much imo
8. 00:53:778 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:02:894 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:14:894
10. 01:49:048 (1) - k here?
11. 01:53:894 (1) - Move this to 01:54:125 - ?
12. 02:11:663 (2) - I would change this to big kat to fit the music.
13. 02:47:432 (1) - Remove this note because it doesn't correspond the music.
14. 02:49:163 (3,4) - Remove it?
15. 02:50:086 (3,4) - ^
16. 02:51:355 (1) - Same as 00:52:855
17. 03:02:663 - I would add a note here with a kat for fitting the clap sound from the music.

1. 00:31:740 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These look weird and flow bad imo, I would say change to another pattern would be nice.
2. 00:35:663 (1,2,3,4) - Why? I think it should follow the vocal here since you have followed the vocal in previous part.
3. 00:42:586 (x) - I feel like a note here or you can use a slider from 00:42:355 - to 00:42:817 - and then remove 00:42:817 (1) - .
4. 00:45:817 (5) - I would remove the slider and then add a note at 00:45:817 - , 00:46:048 - , 00:46:278 - . I would suggest some similar pattern like you have done it before 00:37:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
5. 00:54:355 - Add a spinner here and end it at 00:55:509 - ?
6. 00:56:432 (2) - I guess you forgot to place a clap here because it a clap can consummate the hitsound flow.
7. 01:12:355 (7) - Please stack this to the end of 01:11:663 (5) - properly.
8. 01:41:663 - Add a note here with a clap sound?
9. 01:43:509 - ^
10. 01:45:355 - ^
11. 01:49:048 - ^
12. 01:53:663 (5) - Same as 00:56:432- I guess you were missing a clap here.
13. 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 - Since you were following the drum sound before so I think you better to follow the drum sound here.
14. 02:06:817 (2,3,4,5,6) - Inperfect pentagon, you can use the 'Create polygon circle' to make a perfect pentagon.
15. 02:29:201 ~ 02:29:894 - Same as 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 -
16. 02:33:817 - After here, add a note with a clap resembles 01:41:663 -
17. 02:47:663 ~ 02:48:355 - Same as 01:54:125 ~ 01:54:817 -

kanpakyin wrote:

let's check this.

[General]
[*]Please change to tick rate 2 in Taiko diff. I wonder if there's a special reason for that. Anyway, fixed ~

[Taiko]

1. Volume is too loud for me, I prefer 60% here OK~
2. 00:14:894 (2,3,4) - Triplet sounds weird here indeed. They don't fit the music well during gameplay, I think simple 1/2 should be enough. Deleted all notes
3. 00:15:817 (6,1,1) - k d k here to follow the drum sound? I guess it should be better now ?
4. 00:20:432 (4,1) - I would say k d here because the pitch of 00:20:432 (4) - is lower than 00:20:663 - also the drum sound. Why do I think the opposite ? I'll say in 00:20:432, the vocal rises for 2 times ( Once every 1/2 )
5. 00:32:432 (1,2) - Please remove the finish here, I can't hear any accent there. But the 1-by-1 emphasis on vocal is significant enough to add finish imo :<
6. 00:51:125 (1) - Please move this note to 00:51:355 - because there are no vocal/instrument/drum sound to support it, thus it sounds superfluous. I admit my older diffs are not that good > < Fixed
7. 00:52:855 (4,5) - Remove it? It doesn't fit the music that much imo OK~
8. 00:53:778 (3,4) - ^ ^
9. 01:02:894 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:14:894 Changed to k only
10. 01:49:048 (1) - k here? But I don't think the instrument is high-pitched enough . . .
11. 01:53:894 (1) - Move this to 01:54:125 - ? OK~
12. 02:11:663 (2) - I would change this to big kat to fit the music. Actually I'm trying to express the feeling of fall -> rise ( As seen in dd k d dk kk ). So I think I'll keep this unchanged ~
13. 02:47:432 (1) - Remove this note because it doesn't correspond the music. OK~
14. 02:49:163 (3,4) - Remove it? OK~
15. 02:50:086 (3,4) - ^ ^
16. 02:51:355 (1) - Same as 00:52:855 OK~
17. 03:02:663 - I would add a note here with a kat for fitting the clap sound from the music. OK~