As requested
[
General]
- Consider adding
opening to tags since this is the opening to the anime.
- Please include video considering there is a ranked map with video and you can't add video to already ranked map (while you can always play without video in a ranked map).
- Change the audio lead in for Taiko Oni from 993 to 1000. Just for cleanliness.
- And no BG for taiko? Maybe you forgot to full submit? Either way, please full submit if there is a taiko BG for the taiko. If not please include one.
[
Easy]
- Quite a high star rating.
00:11:437 (5) - Perhaps remove this note, but I guess you did since it would be boring to just play 1/1 sldiers here.
00:14:670 (1,2,3,4) - I'm more fond of a repeating slider here starting on (1), repeat on (2) and end at (3) and just removing (4) to make it more clear that a spinner is coming. I would also make the spinner start where (4) was. This pattern feel more fitting for a Norma than an Easy.
00:21:497 (4) - I strongly discouraging doing 1/2 stack like this on Easy since they are not nice to play with this approach rate. Since just removing the note will make this play weird, I suggesting changing the beat rhythm to like this
http://puu.sh/beb3 (making 3 end on the white tick, moving 5 to the white tick). Sound good and make this part more simple. Ideas for placement
http://puu.sh/bebl.
00:46:287 (1) - The clap on the red tick (repeat) sound really weird to me, I would just remove it. Since it sound a little empty, perhaps a lowered volume finish would be good. If you remove the clap, also remove from (2) on the first repeat to keep the claps consistent.
00:47:724 (2) - Don't feel this kick slider is intuitive considering slider speed, length and bpm of song, I would do a hit circle > repeating slider (one repeat) instead.
00:56:347 (2) - A little nazi here, but this overlap with (1) just a bit, adjust so they don't? This doesn't look intentional compare to the other overlaps.
01:07:485 (2) - Same comment about this 1/2 stack. I also find the rhythm here a little weird in general. How about this
http://puu.sh/bedB (it's harder. but considering the overall difficulty of this diff, fits perfectly imo). Ideas for placement
http://puu.sh/bedO.
01:22:933 (1,2) - You could just delete (2) and add a repeat to (1)
Feel a bit like a Normal due to note density, but I guess rhythm is easy enough to follow.
[
Normal]
00:13:233 (3) - Kinda feel like saying curve this slider, so how about copying 00:11:078 (4), Ctrl+H and R it and fix spacing?
00:18:443 (2) - This slider feel offbeat to me, doesn't really feel like it's following anything although I guess you could argue it follow the ticks sound. This instead for rhythm?
http://puu.sh/begk and placement
http://puu.sh/begq.
00:22:395 (5) - Really don't think the red point on this slider looks good.
00:26:527 (6,7) - I think a short slider fits better with the vocal and to give it more of an "end" feel since you use stack like this at the start of patterns so I feel like there is going to be more notes.
00:45:389 (1,2,3) - Thought this was a stream :S Space out perhaps? Don't really feel like this part should be stack.
00:47:365 (2) - Highly recommend to change, I was surprise by the repeat and nothing in the map/music really say there is going to be another repeat. I suggesting repeating slider > hit circle.
00:52:869 (3) - Remove, I'm sure this note was put here by accident.
Not too fond of the 1/2 double stacks, but I guess it's fine.
[
Hard]
00:48:982 (1,2) - Quite a big jump for Hard, reduce a bit perhaps.
00:52:844 (5) - ??? Not stack properly?
Really nice diff.
[
Insane]
*read previous mod post/replies* I agree that ar 9 fits much better until I saw these stream jumps (like 00:11:078 (1,2,3,4), this is when I'm thankful it's ar 8. Well I guess it's your choice, if you ever feel like doing ar 9 again, I would prefer if you remove these stream jumps or do something else if possible, really hard to play for me.
00:17:006 (4,5) - I dislike how this goes from anit jump then jump then stream, you have barely any time to react. I guess it'd feel better if you make the jump between these two a little smaller so you have more time to react?
00:26:706 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What's the reason for this big jump here? Would be nicer for more sliders (to fits with how the singer is holding a note here).
00:36:946 (1,2,3,4) - Similar comment here about the jump.Weird to have a big jump on the hit circles that are following soft sounds in the background.
00:40:718 (2,3) - This pattern doesn't fit because of the reduce spacing here. The music doesn't feel like the spacing is reduced here. The most accented note here is (3) and not (2) or (4) so if you can come with a pattern where the jump is on (3) and (1) in the next combo, would be much better.
00:49:880 (1,2,3,4) - 2.5x plays better for me. Jump feel just a little too big.
01:13:593 (1,2,3,4) - Accent is on (1) and (3), but jump is on all the note so this felt a little weird. Try to rework it perhaps. You could try stacking (2) with (1) and (4) with (3), but then playing the next stream feel really weird.
01:20:060 (1,2) - I think the clap hitsounds sound a bit weird on these slider.
01:23:473 (5,1) - The transition from playing a 1.2x slider to 0.5x is really bad. I suggestion making the slider speed for (5) 1.0x instead and just use 0.75x for (1).
Well I guess it's overmapped/overjumpy, but pretty fun and plays pretty well.
Think your Hard/Insane is better than Easy/Normal. No real issues really so starred.
Good luck!