As requested
[
General]
- Kiai time should start at 01:28:943, don't see why you start it at the current place and end at 01:51:864 (don't understand why you end in the middle of a spinner.
- Preview point should be at 01:28:943 as well.
- Please keep end point the same for all diffs so either do a circle for 02:07:876 (Normal, Hard) or add spinner to Easy and Insane at that spot.
- If you're going to map this break at 01:52:369 for Insane, then map it for the other diffs as well. let beginners/casual player enjoy this part of the song as well and not just experienced player and this song isn't very long anyway so having no breaks is fine.
- Same with the beginning, if you're going to map it in Insane map it in the other diffs as well, the only time that it's fine to have a different begin / break time is when it's a guest diff imo.
- Combo colors are slightly different between diff, edit via notepad (File > open .osu in notepad), copy from one of the diff the combo colors, and paste it the other diffs.
- comboburst-1 & comboburst-2 exceed the 500px width limit, resize/crop so that it's lower than this.
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694- Just keep tick rate 1. 0.5x tick rate is unrankable now and I don't understand why you use slider tick 2 for Hard.
- Insane has an offset of 1339 which is different, not sure which timing is right so check it. Offset needs to be consistent between diffs in a mapset.
- I'll leave the timing check to someone, I'm not too good with timing, but it feel off to me.
Well I guess that's all, you should fix
all the issues.
[
Easy]
00:54:561 (4,5) - Stack like this are not nice to play at the current approach rate, please space it out.
01:02:482 (2,3) - I suggest doing a slider instead, this rhythm is a little hard to play for the easiest diff.
01:14:449 (4) - Don't do kick slider (repeating slider with more than one repeat) on the easiest diff. Do something else instead. Perhaps add a hit circle at 01:14:449 and a slider at 01:14:786 and end it at 01:15:460.
01:20:347 (2,3) - Similar to 01:02:482, feel a little difficult for the easiest diff.
01:31:977 (6) - Similar to 01:14:449, try something else. But this one isn't as bad as it points to the next note.
01:42:426 (5) - ^ please do something else.
02:07:201 (1,2,3) - Just do a repeating slider instead since this is the easiest diff.
Didn't mention the kick sliders at 01:58:606 since they play well enough. Pretty nice although I think more patterns could be simplify, feel a little too hard for Easy. Hitsound could be nicer, but I'll leave this to somewhere else. Slider as well.
[
Normal]
+1 approach rate, current approach rate make the screen feel clustered and your note density is quite high.
00:41:752 (1,2) - Slider fit nicer with the instruments.
00:52:538 (1,2) - It's a better idea to do short repeating slider instead. This pattern feel too hard for a Normal.
00:53:213 (3,4) - ^
00:53:887 (5,6) - ^
01:08:718 (1) - This kick slider doesn't play very well at all, there's nothing really saying there's going to be another repeat so do something else.
01:21:527 (1) - I would remove a repeat, this next note play weird like this and it's probably too hard for Normal.
01:22:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would definitely try to rework this. Add slider/repeating slider to this part. Too many hit circles in a row imo and you can easily add sliders here.
01:31:977 (2) - I don't really like this at all, do a mix of slider+ hit circle seems nicer to me.
01:42:426 (2,3) - Very confusing to play, you have to guest how many repeats the sliders are going to have and you don't have much time to react at all.
Perhaps try to find a custom hitsound, clap doesn't really fit too well with how you did the hitsounding imo.
[
Hard]
+1 ar please. Similar reason to Normal.
00:49:842 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider give a nicer feel.
00:51:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:54:561 (7) - The way you place the note, the extra repeat is confusing. removing the repeat feel nicer.
00:59:280 (5,6) - If you're going to do this, do a slider, (5) plays weird since I can hear a note on the red tick so I thought I had to hit it earlier.
01:40:404 (3,4,5) - Space this out, this part just feel very clustered and stacking this make it feel even worse. Very hard to read with current approach rate as well.
01:42:426 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider here give a nicer feel.
[
Insane]
00:43:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is quite an annoying pattern to play, doing shorts sliders instead works better so (1,2) a slider, (3,4) a slider and etc.
02:03:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ if you do short sliders for above, I would do it here too for consistency.
This is a lot better than the other diffs. Nice job!
Well this is good if this is your first beatmap. It still need work, but I'm sure with enough mods you'll get there.
No star because of this and sorry for lazy mod since I don't really like the song (It may not look lazy, but it really is, I usually show you a screenshot of what I mean, but here I don't so that's what I mean and I ignore some minor issues as well.)
Good luck!
