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- 00:01:416 (1416|3) - shouldn't this be a LN like 00:00:696 (696|2) - ? They are the same sound so I dont see a reason why the other one is not a LN
00:00:286 - column 2 is really empty on the start, consider adding some notes to it
00:03:984 - same goes here for the 3rd column, its really empty 00:05:833 - move
00:09:943 (9943|1) - move to 4 for pitch since 00:09:327 (9327|3) - is the same soundmove
00:10:149 - 00:12:614 - column 1 dead, Id really suggest that you move/add notes to it because it can bring to some really weird unbalanced pattern
00:24:943 - column 3 dead
00:37:888 (37888|0,38299|0,38710|0,39121|0) - anchor, avoid it sicne you have alot of room to move those notes too so there is no reason to have that kind of anchor
00:43:231 - missed note here? check 00:39:943 -
00:44:875 - ^
00:46:518 - ^ and so on
00:47:546 (47546|2,47957|2) - those shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same pitch, why don't you move this note to 4? 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
00:50:833 - missing note? check 00:47:546 (47546|2) -
01:10:149 (70149|1,71792|3,73436|0) - kinda weird imo that you have mixed LNs, for example you here have 01:07:272 (67272|2) - 1/1 LNs and then you suddenly have some long ones. You should follow 01:10:559 - this sound with 1/1 LNs to stay consistent
01:17:135 (77135|1) - this should be double note like 01:11:381 (71381|2,71381|0) -[Hard]
- 00:00:286 - 00:06:861 - this part is very similar to hard, consider to snipe down normal a bit
00:09:121 - 00:10:149 - on this part I'd suggest that you only have doubles on claps 00:09:121 (9121|0,9121|1,9532|1,9532|0,9943|1,9943|3) - and singles on Claps and cymbals 00:09:327 (9327|2,9327|3,9738|3,9738|2) - so that you dont have the same density pattern as hard difficulty https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893868 reagereeded
00:20:012 - 00:21:655 - unbalanced, column 4 is unused and left hand does most of the work
00:23:299 (23299|1,23505|0) - not consistent with 00:21:244 (21244|0,21450|0) - they should be in the same column
00:24:018 - missed note here, check 00:21:861 (21861|3) - 00:21:861 - deleted
00:27:203 (27203|0,27409|0) - well you dont have any jacks on column 2 so meybe move those?
00:39:327 (39327|0,39738|0,40149|0,40559|0) - anchor, avoid it so that it does not cause unbalancing
00:42:614 (42614|3,42820|2,43025|3,43231|2,43436|3) - this trill-ish pattern si quite weird because there is no repetitive sound that can support it. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893903, that would aslo remove anchor on column 4
00:46:724 (46724|3,46724|1,46929|2,47135|1) - 00:48:368 (48368|0,48368|2,48573|1,48779|0) - 00:45:080 (45080|0,45080|2,45286|1,45491|2) - quite repetitive don't you think, why don't you rearange some? rearrange
00:48:984 (48984|2,49190|1,49190|3,49395|2,49806|2,50012|1,50012|3,50217|2) - ^
00:59:669 (59669|1,60080|1,60491|1,60902|1) - anchor
01:07:272 - 01:08:505 - consider moving notes to column 4, same reason as before
01:15:080 (75080|2,75286|1,75491|0,75491|2,75696|1,76313|2,76518|1,76724|0,76724|2,76929|1) - you could change some to avoid repetitive gameplaygood luck
- 00:14:155 - 00:14:258 - you could definetly add notes on 4 and 3 for the drums since they are very clear
00:15:799 - ^ and so on
00:19:806 (19806|2) - this should be double like 00:19:601 (19601|0,19601|2) - since they are the same sound
00:31:005 - 00:31:416 - add a note for drum like at 00:30:388 (30388|1) -
00:33:368 - do the same here as above ^
00:55:970 (55970|0,56176|0,56381|0) - you could rearange this handstream a bit since you have alot of place to avoid it, try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9893963
01:10:149 (70149|3,70149|1,70354|1,70354|3) - these shouldn't be in the same column since they are not the same sound, you could move those 01:10:354 (70354|1,70354|3) - to 1 and 2 for a better PR
01:11:587 (71587|0,71792|0,71998|0,72306|0) - anchor
oh thank you very much ^^ glad you here