1. Hard (2.71 stars, 164 notes)
2. Insane (3.46 stars, 212 notes)
3. Normal (1.64 stars, 88 notes)

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  Firis Mistlud wrote:

1. normal同hard嘅spread會唔會太大，可能要填個advanced

• 00:58:102 (1,2) - For better expression of this moment, you can use this rhythm!

• 00:10:479 (1) - do this slider, He looks much better, which you have now
  01:00:409 (2) - maybe try this? I do not know why, but in my opinion when the slider is different, the flow is bad

• 00:06:284 (1,2) - In the last two diffs, you made a stack here, why did you decide not to do it here?
  00:10:479 (2,3) - Fix stack 00:10:479 (2,3,4) - He is some strange here and a curve
  00:47:193 (3,1) - avoid overlap

Firis Mistlud wrote:

m4m req from qq
Map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596487

[General]

1. 00:19:710 - 最好比 00:06:284 - volume大聲啲，畢竟係明顯唔同部份，並且 00:18:032 (1) - 嘅spinner可以降返去40%，感覺無咩特別
2. 落custom嘅話建議加埋一個比較靜嘅finish，而家嘅唔係幾合歌
3. normal同hard嘅spread會唔會太大，可能要填個advanced

[Normal]

1. 開頭感覺成張圖都係似easy多啲，冇normal嘅感覺。。。
2. 如果硬係要用normal嘅角度嘅話冇咩問題，雖然 00:32:297 (4,1) - 轉做1/2 rhythm會太過突然

[Hard]

1. fine

[Insane]

1. 00:06:284 - 綠線同紅線撞volume
2. 00:12:367 (7,8) - 感覺唔overlap嘅話好啲，咁樣嘅話感覺flow會好一啲 其實咁既spacing已經做到flow
3. 00:16:983 (2) - 唔係幾需要finish，感覺太突出
4. 00:42:997 (1) - 建議跟埋大白線嘅bass，雖然係跟人聲帶係嚮insane嘅話格硬ignore嘅話有啲怪 但呢度比較prefer人聲
5. 00:45:829 - 漏咗鼓聲，00:45:724 (1,2,3,4) - 應該係五連 特登 隔左一段空時間我覺得出個五連會唔太友好
6. 00:57:682 (6,7) - 咁樣擺感覺會好打啲，因為這裡可以繼續back-and-fourth嘅motion 唔太喜歡呢種擺法 加上人聲個flow已經變左
   
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good luck

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que
Sorry for late, just i'm dead
[General ]

• Fix bitrate audio to 192 kbs
  

  Firis Mistlud wrote:

1. normal同hard嘅spread會唔會太大，可能要填個advanced

[/notice]

• 00:58:102 (1,2) - For better expression of this moment, you can use this rhythm!

• 00:10:479 (1) - do this slider, He looks much better, which you have now I prefer current one
  01:00:409 (2) - maybe try this? I do not know why, but in my opinion when the slider is different, the flow is bad same

• 00:06:284 (1,2) - In the last two diffs, you made a stack here, why did you decide not to do it here?
  00:10:479 (2,3) - Fix stack 00:10:479 (2,3,4) - He is some strange here and a curve
  00:47:193 (3,1) - avoid overlap

gary00737 wrote:

widescreen support 不用就關掉吧

Insane

00:10:479 (2,3,4) - 看要不要手動疊 因為https://i.imgur.com/47Qr1QB.png 有點不好看
00:17:612 - hitsound 有種奇怪的感覺
00:45:829 - 是不是miss note 故意

根據上面留言說N 跟H GAP有點大 其實打起上來我覺得可以不用補


太水了圖太好.......

Kibbleru wrote:

cute anime

insane
00:17:612 - finish doesn't really sound good for me here
00:45:724 (1,2,3,4) - i think this is supposed to be just one stream i prefer circcle+triple
00:58:941 - whistle?
01:24:925 - i would stop the kiai here imo

hard
same kiai thing

normal
same kiai thing
i think the you need more rhythm density, at least in the kiai. spread gap is kind of big here

1. New offset is needed at 00:06:252 - because the circle is placed too late. Add one at 00:07:962 to reset it again.

1. 00:43:207 (1) - Finish on head? It sounds very good with those set on 00:39:850 (1) - and the upcoming at 00:44:465 (2) - ;
2. 01:04:186 (2) - Add whistles on head and reverse to emphasize the vocals and the change of rhythm (also, it looks too loud atm without any kind of hitsounding on it);
3. 01:09:221 (3) - Is the clap on the head intentional? It shouldn't be there, same on 01:12:577 (5) - ;
4. Just hitsounding stuff, good map! Just apply these to other diffs as well I won't mention them again

1. 00:42:997 (1) - I know you are mapping the vocal but the sound on the downbeat is really strong and I would map it if I was you. So, I would change this circle 00:42:787 (3) - with an 1/2 slider (or just add a circle at 00:42:997 - but the slider would fill better for this kind of diff) and move this slider 1/2 after and reduce it by 1/2 as well. To be short: https://puu.sh/yu9Pn.png (Same for Insane);
2. 00:45:724 (1) - I think this slider has too much repeats.. I would remove one so you can make the last white tick clickable with a circle or with an 1/2 slider by removing the next circle;

1. 00:28:102 (1,2,3) - How come did you suddenly decided to change the rhythm here? I mean, it should be the same of 00:24:745 (1,2,3) - and 00:21:388 (1,2) - for consistency, with that 3/4 snapping;
2. 00:31:039 (4) - Would change this with two circle so the piano sound at 00:31:249 - would be clickable as it should be being the sound enough strong;
3. 00:42:997 (1) - Same of Hard;
4. 01:00:619 (3,4,5,6) - I would reduce the spacing between 01:00:619 (3,4) - by moving the whole pattern 01:00:829 (4,5,6) - left so that the (5) makes a triangle together with 01:00:409 (2,3) - and than placing the (6) on 01:01:458 (1) - 's tail: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9633175 much better and good pattern to play imo;
5. 01:25:030 (1) - Snap the green line properly because the spinner is actually not silenced xD

Chewin wrote:

General

1. New offset is needed at 00:06:252 - because the circle is placed too late. Add one at 00:07:962 to reset it again.

Normal

1. 00:43:207 (1) - Finish on head? It sounds very good with those set on 00:39:850 (1) - and the upcoming at 00:44:465 (2) - ; ok
2. 01:04:186 (2) - Add whistles on head and reverse to emphasize the vocals and the change of rhythm (also, it looks too loud atm without any kind of hitsounding on it); ok, same as other diff
3. 01:09:221 (3) - Is the clap on the head intentional? It shouldn't be there, same on 01:12:577 (5) - ; yes
4. Just hitsounding stuff, good map! Just apply these to other diffs as well I won't mention them again

Hard

1. 00:42:997 (1) - I know you are mapping the vocal but the sound on the downbeat is really strong and I would map it if I was you. So, I would change this circle 00:42:787 (3) - with an 1/2 slider (or just add a circle at 00:42:997 - but the slider would fill better for this kind of diff) and move this slider 1/2 after and reduce it by 1/2 as well. To be short: https://puu.sh/yu9Pn.png (Same for Insane);
2. 00:45:724 (1) - I think this slider has too much repeats.. I would remove one so you can make the last white tick clickable with a circle or with an 1/2 slider by removing the next circle; i would prefer holding between two white tick

Insane

1. 00:28:102 (1,2,3) - How come did you suddenly decided to change the rhythm here? I mean, it should be the same of 00:24:745 (1,2,3) - and 00:21:388 (1,2) - for consistency, with that 3/4 snapping; ok
2. 00:31:039 (4) - Would change this with two circle so the piano sound at 00:31:249 - would be clickable as it should be being the sound enough strong; ok
3. 00:42:997 (1) - Same of Hard; ^^^^
4. 01:00:619 (3,4,5,6) - I would reduce the spacing between 01:00:619 (3,4) - by moving the whole pattern 01:00:829 (4,5,6) - left so that the (5) makes a triangle together with 01:00:409 (2,3) - and than placing the (6) on 01:01:458 (1) - 's tail: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9633175 much better and good pattern to play imo; change a bit on this jump pattern
5. 01:25:030 (1) - Snap the green line properly because the spinner is actually not silenced xD oops

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