TRUE - DREAM SOLISTER (TV Size) · forum

gary00737

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-09-30T20:08:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月24日 at 22:13:35

Artist: TRUE
Title: DREAM SOLISTER (TV Size)
Source: 響け！ユーフォニアム
Tags: hibike! euphonium opening Maboyu walaowey Pata-Mon
BPM: 167
Filesize: 20699kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.22 stars, 287 notes)
Normal (2 stars, 170 notes)
Pata-Mon's Easy (1.53 stars, 114 notes)
Pata-Mon's Euphonium (5.09 stars, 328 notes)
Walao's Hard (3.21 stars, 242 notes)

Download: TRUE - DREAM SOLISTER (TV Size)
Download: TRUE - DREAM SOLISTER (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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31/10/2017 New Hitsound ,New Hitsound. Please download again

感謝 Maboyu 讓我使用他的資源

mp3 & video by Maboyu

Hard by walaowey

Easy & Euphonium by Pata-Mon

Last edited by gary00737 2017-12-25T20:38:29+00:00, edited 29 times in total.

Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-10-09T19:20:56+00:00

Insane
00:09:872 (2) - x56 y136 for linear visual trough (1,2,3)
00:17:417 (4) - x188 y124 where the head stack with 00:14:004 (1) - and ctrl+g it to emph the impact
00:24:602 (5) - stack with 00:22:087 (1) -
00:36:638 (1,2) - ctrl+g and move (1) to 00:35:740 (2) - tail. youll able to keep the circular but still get the jump rmph there
00:50:650 (1,3) - a bit miss stack
01:10:590 (6) - try x424 y0
01:27:297 (1) - at 01:24:602 (3) - tail instead

Hard
00:20:471 (6) - not repetating the beat where the stack supposed to be at (1)
00:31:069 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:21:729 (3) - ^
01:27:297 (3) - NCable

Normal
00:24:962 - why undermapped/?
00:53:884 (5) - you can just sparated it to get reduction from (4) reverse and last stacked
theres plently unsused green line, recheck and delete em

gl

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-10-14T17:02:51+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
Insane
00:09:872 (2) - x56 y136 for linear visual trough (1,2,3) fixed
00:17:417 (4) - x188 y124 where the head stack with 00:14:004 (1) - and ctrl+g it to emph the impact no change because i think it no problem

00:24:602 (5) - stack with 00:22:087 (1) - no change because 00:23:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a star
00:36:638 (1,2) - ctrl+g and move (1) to 00:35:740 (2) - tail. youll able to keep the circular but still get the jump rmph there no change , um,,,,,,, just don't want
00:50:650 (1,3) - a bit miss stack fixed
01:10:590 (6) - try x424 y0 no change , i think Back-and-forths will be better
01:27:297 (1) - at 01:24:602 (3) - tail instead fixed

Normal
00:24:962 - why undermapped/? um,,,,,,,,,,, i don't know , just feeling
00:53:884 (5) - you can just sparated it to get reduction from (4) reverse and last stacked sorry i don;t understand
theres plently unsused green line, recheck and delete em i think they not effect , but i will change

gl

thank you for modding

Faputa

osu! Alumni

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

Faputa 2017-10-15T03:12:57+00:00

o/
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/649973

[Normal]
⏩00:06:998 (2) - 關whistle?
⏩00:07:986 - 刪一啲冇用途嘅green lines?
⏩00:08:345 - ^ 還有很多其他地方。
⏩00:50:111 (3) - Clap?
⏩00:22:986 (6,1,2) - 嘗試令每個入射角度一樣？

[Walao's Hard]
⏩00:15:441 (2,3) - There’s the stacking making the blanket off, maybe move down (2,3)?

[Insane]
⏩00:15:620 (3) - 左移下？同(2)、(4)對位。
⏩00:17:417 (4) - 整到同(3)有同一個shape?
⏩00:29:273 (1,2,3) - 好似有少少凸兀，但係我又唔知點改會好啲 xD
⏩01:06:099 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 會唔會整到同其他burst一樣蛇仔形會好啲？

；－；我只能夠做到這些，map很好，大讚！

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-10-15T09:22:16+00:00

Faputa wrote:
o/
M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/649973

[Normal]
⏩00:06:998 (2) - 關whistle? 開了關了感覺沒分別所以跟了INSANE難度
⏩00:07:986 - 刪一啲冇用途嘅green lines?
⏩00:08:345 - ^ 還有很多其他地方。
⏩00:50:111 (3) - Clap? 加了在尾巴
⏩00:22:986 (6,1,2) - 嘗試令每個入射角度一樣？唔明

[Insane]
⏩00:15:620 (3) - 左移下？同(2)、(4)對位。這個我覺得沒什麼問題所以沒改
⏩00:17:417 (4) - 整到同(3)有同一個shape? 但我覺得這樣蠻好看耶
⏩00:29:273 (1,2,3) - 好似有少少凸兀，但係我又唔知點改會好啲 xD 這個有人也跟你一樣覺得有問題我想多看幾個MOD
⏩01:06:099 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 會唔會整到同其他burst一樣蛇仔形會好啲？這個先保留

；－；我只能夠做到這些，map很好，大讚！

謝謝MOD!~~

papapa213

152 posts

Joined November 2014

papapa213 2017-10-29T07:23:12+00:00

[normal]
00:09:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段强跟鼓点给人感觉不是很好，建议改成vocal，鼓点用音效去体现，00:10:411 (4) - 改成滑条，因为后面00:10:770 (5,6) - 音是相似的，所以让他打起来相似比较好，如果上面改了的话，00:11:848 (7) - 挪到00:11:848 - 试一试

前面vocal音量大的时候跟鼓点结果00:17:057 - 00:19:213 - 00:19:932 - 反而不跟了
首先00:16:878 (4) - 这里是个拖音，然后这里还有鼓点，滑条效果肯定比空着好
00:19:213 - 这里漏了倒是没什么，人声结束normal也需要适当空拍，但是00:19:934 - 这里的话我觉得不应该漏，这里既然没有人声了空这个鼓点会很明显违和，更何况你后面00:20:650 (1) - 也放了note

后面不太知道怎么下，你在00:25:141 - 加个折返滑条试试？空太多我觉得也不是很好

00:47:776 (3,5) - 建议删掉，后面是激烈的乐器段，00:46:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段去掉3和5作为前后的衔接是比较合适的

[hard]
00:36:279 (1,2) - i think use a 1/1 slider will be better
00:49:752 (2,3,4,5) - these positions are not stress , jump with this ds is not suitable

[insane]
00:55:860 (3,4,5) - 00:58:734 (3,4,5,6) - 相比后面间距有点小了
01:22:267 (1) - 我觉得放到右下角比较顺手，我感觉这里flow是这样的
00:12:566 (4) - 这里的音我觉得明显比后面两个放finish的地方00:13:285 (6,1) - 要重我是建议在4下finish

[pata-mon]
01:11:668 (3,4,1) - 这地方人声变大了间距变小不合适吧，再接后面大跳太突兀了

做得真好，膜拜

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-10-29T11:30:18+00:00

papapa213 wrote:
[normal]
00:09:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段强跟鼓点给人感觉不是很好，建议改成vocal，鼓点用音效去体现，00:10:411 (4) - 改成滑条，因为后面00:10:770 (5,6) - 音是相似的，所以让他打起来相似比较好，如果上面改了的话，00:11:848 (7) - 挪到00:11:848 - 试一试
我考慮過了現況是Normal火車不能開太長而做的折衷

前面vocal音量大的时候跟鼓点结果00:17:057 - 00:19:213 - 00:19:932 - 反而不跟了
首先00:16:878 (4) - 这里是个拖音，然后这里还有鼓点，滑条效果肯定比空着好
00:19:213 - 这里漏了倒是没什么，人声结束normal也需要适当空拍，但是00:19:934 - 这里的话我觉得不应该漏，这里既然没有人声了空这个鼓点会很明显违和，更何况你后面00:20:650 (1) - 也放了note
這個我也不懂...我忘了那時做這段時的想法 , 但這打起來除了音效都沒跟上之外其實還行

后面不太知道怎么下，你在00:25:141 - 加个折返滑条试试？空太多我觉得也不是很好改了用了自己的方法

00:47:776 (3,5) - 建议删掉，后面是激烈的乐器段，00:46:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段去掉3和5作为前后的衔接是比较合适的
改了

[insane]
00:55:860 (3,4,5) - 00:58:734 (3,4,5,6) - 相比后面间距有点小了不改不改不改 ...在找到解決方法前先維持...
01:22:267 (1) - 我觉得放到右下角比较顺手，我感觉这里flow是这样的如果FLOW本來很順突然有一個位置很不順,我猜我就能突出那個位置喇~~~~~ 我猜
00:12:566 (4) - 这里的音我觉得明显比后面两个放finish的地方00:13:285 (6,1) - 要重我是建议在4下finish 我在考慮要不要偷一波拍打萌音效

[pata-mon]
做得真好，膜拜

謝謝摸 ~~!!!

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,307 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-10-30T06:05:34+00:00

mod
General/Modding Assist

Why is Combo 4 so dark? Lighten it up a bit
Modding Assist is angery at your inconsistent video offset.
00:27:656 (1) - you add finish here it would only make sense to also add it here 00:30:530 (1) - . (Global Hitsound)

Pata-Mon's Insane

00:06:548 - I would recommend you silence sliderends like this with 5% volume
00:20:111 (5,6,7) - It would be cool if you could differentiate this pattern a bit better as it sounds different and is quite stronger. Giving it more spacing emphasis, changed patterns, or NC. Just something to emphasize it
00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - you were following the instruments since the section started but swtiched to vocal here. Which is fine but you suddenly switched back to instrument at 00:23:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - . My suggestion: either making 00:23:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - follow the vocal too OR 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5) -make follow the instruments like every other measures in the section. Doesn't make sense to switch the layer between the two so you should make it consistent.
00:55:411 - the silence sliderend thing again and it's pretty noticeable here due to high HS vol when u play with ping pong hitsounds
01:17:417 - would be really cool if you do some SV manipulation here tbh. at least it needs to be faster than normal 1/2 slider because the sounds are pretty strong.

Insane

00:09:153 (9) - should be a slider in my opinion, there is still some faint cymbal going on and holding it will represent the music better. Plus making it a circle means the map stops when the music clearly doesn't.
00:16:878 (2,3,4) - ctrl+G this rhythm, follows the vocal much better
00:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - you follow the vocal in this measure just to ditch it into instrument at 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . I think ctrl+G the rhythm here 00:22:447 (2,3) - works better.
00:59:273 (6,1,2,1,1) - I don't quite like how the kiai is not continuous. It is the climax of the song but there is still a lot of 1/1 gaps around. it should flow better at least.

Overall I feel like the map's rhythm is really anime. You just map both the instruments and vocal and you switch between them randomly. Which makes your rhythm sound really muddy (really hard to figure out what you're even following) that is only my main concern for this diff. I don't want to nitpick everything. You should hear more from other opinions as well.

Walao's Hard

00:01:069 - you shouldn't ignore this sound at all, constant 1/2 is what Hard diff is anyway so adding a circle here is a non issue. same for this 00:03:944 -
00:11:848 (5) - shouldn't this be a triplet
00:16:339 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing, take stacking into account when you spread objects apart because with stacking on the visual spacing is not even at all. I would suggest you break the distance snap at 00:16:878 (2,3) - to make the pattern look better

You should reexamine the intro rhythm a bit, I think it's the only part where I feel it's weird.

Normal

00:19:393 (3) - the rhythm here is really weird: because you're trying to follow a 1/4 rhythm with a 1/2 slider, and the sliderend ends on a rather strong sound too. I think this rhythm will work better https://i.imgur.com/rgw0tyy.png

The Normal is pretty solid, good job.

GL

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-10-30T17:54:00+00:00

timemon wrote:
mod
General/Modding Assist
Why is Combo 4 so dark? Lighten it up a bit follow the girl hair color
Modding Assist is angery at your inconsistent video offset. fixed
00:27:656 (1) - you add finish here it would only make sense to also add it here 00:30:530 (1) - . (Global Hitsound)
Insane
00:09:153 (9) - should be a slider in my opinion, there is still some faint cymbal going on and holding it will represent the music better. Plus making it a circle means the map stops when the music clearly doesn't. i think it can highlight 00:09:513 (1) - so ii keep it
00:16:878 (2,3,4) - ctrl+G this rhythm, follows the vocal much better yes it will better but i want follow the drum ,
00:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - you follow the vocal in this measure just to ditch it into instrument at 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . I think ctrl+G the rhythm here 00:22:447 (2,3) - works better. fxed
00:59:273 (6,1,2,1,1) - I don't quite like how the kiai is not continuous. It is the climax of the song but there is still a lot of 1/1 gaps around. it should flow better at least. but i don't want overmap it , so keep it ><
Overall I feel like the map's rhythm is really anime. You just map both the instruments and vocal and you switch between them randomly. Which makes your rhythm sound really muddy (really hard to figure out what you're even following) that is only my main concern for this diff. I don't want to nitpick everything. You should hear more from other opinions as well. maybe my mapping not mature , i try make it better.

Normal
00:19:393 (3) - the rhythm here is really weird: because you're trying to follow a 1/4 rhythm with a 1/2 slider, and the sliderend ends on a rather strong sound too. I think this rhythm will work better https://i.imgur.com/rgw0tyy.png
um,,i think it not better , and i think no problem with follow a 1/4 rhythm with a 1/2 slider ,so i wil keep it
The Normal is pretty solid, good job.

GL

thank you for modding !!

Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-10-30T18:36:19+00:00

(no kds)

pata's last diff
this will just be a bunch of ctrl+g stuff but ill try to come with proper reason as possible
00:04:662 (1) - cg trumpet increased volume also slightly make jump from (4) increased
00:27:656 (1) - cg due the low sv for slider it will absorb the jump and left direction preferred because the current angle just awkward
00:31:788 (6,7) - cg (7,1) jump not really necessary due the straight vocal, just make it anticlimax
00:53:974 - me personally will give jump here to make impact due the actual cymbal on slider head
01:13:644 (1) - ouch offscreen
01:13:644 (1) - add a circle on transtition, stacked on tail ofc

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2017-10-31T16:53:19+00:00

[Pata-Mon's Easy]

01:15:261 (1) - 好像忘了finish (最好還是從頭再重聽一下看有沒有漏的)

[Walao's Hard]

00:29:273 (1) - Have a heavy drum why not add a finish hitsound to express it?
00:40:770 (1) - Add a whistle ? You can follow this : 00:37:896 (1) - make regular in hitsound here.
01:15:261 (1) - The same as 00:29:273 (1)

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

00:26:039 (1) - 聽這旋律好像減速比較適合，加速好像玩的不太對勁。
00:30:530 (1) - 音效跟Easy不一樣
00:36:279 (6) - 同上
00:37:896 (1) - 同上
00:43:644 (1) - 同上
(不知道是不是故意加錯，後面好像還有一些不一致的(重音沒加挺明顯)，之後不再列舉)

blueloniess

364 posts

Joined February 2014

blueloniess 2017-11-01T15:02:15+00:00

[怕他萌]
00:26:039 (1) - 额，不是很明白为啥要NC

其他的我觉得海星

[insane]
00:58:734 (3,4,5,6) - 已经是kiai激烈部分了，我举得就不适合这种小跳了吧

kiai部分感觉可以激烈一点，歌曲激烈排列不激烈的话总感觉有点点怪，开头的部分，我觉得做的很好，而且中间段的跳的间距也挺不错的
但是一到kiai部分就突然都缩了，连打也几乎没了，跳也小了很多，感觉有点违和。

[walao]
00:01:069 - missing one note?
00:03:944 - ^

pretty nice

水完了

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-01T18:16:50+00:00

謝謝船神摸

@blueloniess

[insane]
00:58:734 (3,4,5,6) - 已经是kiai激烈部分了，我举得就不适合这种小跳了吧

kiai部分感觉可以激烈一点，歌曲激烈排列不激烈的话总感觉有点点怪，开头的部分，我觉得做的很好，而且中间段的跳的间距也挺不错的
但是一到kiai部分就突然都缩了，连打也几乎没了，跳也小了很多，感觉有点违和。

^我覺得KIAI還是難 >< 我把5移位了

謝謝摸

Yugu

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2013

Yugu 2017-11-02T01:46:41+00:00

咕了十分多天的摸

Pata-Mon

00:27:656 (1) - 想ctrl g
01:00:530 (4,1) - 01:12:028 (4,1) - 问下为啥他们间距要加大啊

摸不出啥摸多也不好

insane

00:03:045 (3,4,5,1) - 打起来感觉不太好我的话会摆点距离 http://puu.sh/ycJaO/122f768d19.jpg
00:03:405 (1) - 有点丑
00:05:560 (2) - ctrl j !!!
00:07:716 (1,2,3) - 有点远啊
00:13:285 (6,7,1) - 感觉也是远了，00:13:824 (7,1) - 的音乐听起来是变缓的，7摆到5下面就好了
00:29:992 (3,1) - overlap的也有点丑，把overlap的面积增加点试试
00:41:309 (2) - 弧度弯一点好看，和00:40:770 (1) - 相比
00:56:938 (2,3) - .............................................................................................................................你应该知道我想说什么
00:59:273 (6,1) - 00:59:812 (2,1) - 1/1的模式太多了我觉得，前面的1/1stack了，紧接着后面的1/1就又有间距了

~~总觉得可以DT~~

不太会摸低难度，就这样吧

EDIT:还有，1.53*不应该已经是Normal了吗

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-02T11:42:02+00:00

Yugu wrote:
咕了十分多天的摸 >_>

insane

00:03:045 (3,4,5,1) - 打起来感觉不太好我的话会摆点距离 http://puu.sh/ycJaO/122f768d19.jpg 改了點
00:03:405 (1) - 有点丑我...我......我覺得海星
00:05:560 (2) - ctrl j !!! 不要我想要做出那彎彎跳的感覺
00:07:716 (1,2,3) - 有点远啊這應該要漸增 , 但現在也可以我覺得
00:13:285 (6,7,1) - 感觉也是远了，00:13:824 (7,1) - 的音乐听起来是变缓的，7摆到5下面就好了主要突出的是00:13:285 (6,1) - 所以才這樣擺.
00:29:992 (3,1) - overlap的也有点丑，把overlap的面积增加点试试 ....我蠻喜歡的說...
00:41:309 (2) - 弧度弯一点好看，和00:40:770 (1) - 相比這個怎麼改都很奇怪 >< 先把他做回原本的想到更好方法再改
00:56:938 (2,3) - .............................................................................................................................你应该知道我想说什么我很喜歡這PETTEN耶 \ ./
00:59:273 (6,1) - 00:59:812 (2,1) - 1/1的模式太多了我觉得，前面的1/1stack了，紧接着后面的1/1就又有间距了因為不想用太多3/4 會搶了之後跟人聲那個部份

~~总觉得可以DT 你是對的~~

不太会摸低难度，就这样吧

EDIT:还有，1.53*不应该已经是Normal了吗

謝摸謝摸下次回你摸就用外星語

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-11-04T16:38:53+00:00

水摸
[Insane]

00:01:788 (5) - 再彎翻小小拉，呢個slider直得好突兀
00:05:560 (2) - 試下move到x:315 y:360個位置，視覺效果會好啲打起身都易啲
00:13:824 (7,1) - gap好似有啲太大。。
00:17:417 (4) - 不如同00:17:057 (3) - 一樣都係彎拉
00:36:638 (1,2) - 表達停頓效果不如將呢兩個ctrl+g一下會好啲表達
00:46:159 (3) - 都係，同前面兩個slider一樣彎拉

[巴达萌]

00:28:195 (3,4) - 这里的间距有点近，打起来有点微妙的感觉

越來越神了

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-04T17:37:16+00:00

Suzuki_1112 wrote:
水摸
[Insane]
00:01:788 (5) - 再彎翻小小拉，呢個slider直得好突兀 ((其實我好鐘意呢類直得黎少彎 >< 唔知點解
00:05:560 (2) - 試下move到x:315 y:360個位置，視覺效果會好啲打起身都易啲其實呢個係 https://i.imgur.com/GVaZv6K.png 加上打上黎果個左右跳感..我有感覺 ((唔知其他人有冇-.-
00:13:824 (7,1) - gap好似有啲太大。。呢個同樣 https://i.imgur.com/GVaZv6K.png 加上我覺得佢個音好大所以先比大D間距佢
00:17:417 (4) - 不如同00:17:057 (3) - 一樣都係彎拉唔制
00:36:638 (1,2) - 表達停頓效果不如將呢兩個ctrl+g一下會好啲表達 00:36:099 (3,4,1,2) - 成PART改左擺位
00:46:159 (3) - 都係，同前面兩個slider一樣彎拉唔制*2

[巴达萌]
越來越神了

感謝摸 ~

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2017-11-06T08:56:48+00:00

m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584661

[Insane]

00:52:806 (3,4) - ctrl+g 感觉会顺手一些

01:04:662 (5) - 建议在x:400 y:120

每次过来就摸不到东西了，我不太想水。。~~m4m你就摸我难度好了。~~

gl~!

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-06T10:32:57+00:00

[Kamiya] wrote:
m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584661

[Insane]

00:52:806 (3,4) - ctrl+g 感觉会顺手一些

01:04:662 (5) - 建议在x:400 y:120

每次过来就摸不到东西了，我不太想水。。~~m4m你就摸我难度好了。~~

gl~!

all fixed @@ 謝謝大佬

zhuizhui

188 posts

Joined January 2017

zhuizhui 2017-11-06T19:07:21+00:00

水摸

SPOILER

爷爷快飞图吧

Insane

00:25:141 (3) - 00:25:501 (6) - nc一下容易识别很多>>

00:40:051 (4) - 这个感觉可以再修修，我觉得可以做个1/1 的条。

01:05:022 (7) - 不如试下包下01:05:740 (9) - ？

Walao’s Hard

00:01:069 - 00:03:944 - 这里真的不用一个圈傻的吗。。。听着好别捏。。。 [spoiler]不过如果是什么想法或者鼓点上的不用在意我，我耳聋

01:20:111 (4) - 这个地方间距有点怪

01:26:399 (4) - nc一下？01:26:758 (1) - 然后这儿感觉不用nc 然后再在01:26:938 (1) - nc一下也行啊>>

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-07T11:05:32+00:00

Insane

00:25:141 (3) - 00:25:501 (6) - nc一下容易识别很多>>

我覺得有NC跟沒NC也一樣因為間距上好明顯地讓人這樣打,

00:40:051 (4) - 这个感觉可以再修修，我觉得可以做个1/1 的条。

不要 >< 00:40:231 () - 有顆音

01:05:022 (7) - 不如试下包下01:05:740 (9) - ？

不要..好醜XD

謝摸

leo16834

471 posts

Joined August 2011

leo16834 2017-11-08T16:18:28+00:00

Water Mod

[Pata-Mon's Easy]

00:37:177 (4) - 我觉得这个可以删掉留一点休息的空间因为看了一下几乎没有休息的地方这个地方大概是我觉得可以放掉的空拍了

[Normal]

01:17:417 (1) - 我知道這裡你NC的用意不過我覺得不需要耶會覺得這邊NC太突然了

主要是因為他沒有跟上一個物件疊在一起這是有移動的拍子不用NC也是可以讀出來的
01:02:327 (4) - 放 x306 y29 ?

[Insane]

00:19:393 (2,3) - 仔細看一下這個的折返的瞬間 Blanket沒有包好
01:07:357 (3,2) - 這兩個疊一起吧
01:27:297 (1) - 這一顆擺在正中間試試看應該比較好看

Hard的部分之前有請你跟gd說一下平行調整的部分就麻煩你跟他說一下了

edit: 晚點補上次跟你說的Hard的地方~

水摸完畢逃xd

Last edited by leo16834 2017-11-08T18:09:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-08T16:26:00+00:00

leo16834 wrote:
Water Mod

[Normal]

01:17:417 (1) - 我知道這裡你NC的用意不過我覺得不需要耶會覺得這邊NC太突然了主要是因為他沒有跟上一個物件疊在一起這是有移動的拍子不用NC也是可以讀出來的不~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~((其實我覺得是因為整張第1個3/4拍所以才NC
01:02:327 (4) - 放 x306 y29 ? 改了

[Insane]

00:19:393 (2,3) - 仔細看一下這個的折返的瞬間 Blanket沒有包好 fixed
01:07:357 (3,2) - 這兩個疊一起吧不要
01:27:297 (1) - 這一顆擺在正中間試試看應該比較好看不要

Hard的部分之前有請你跟gd說一下平行調整的部分就麻煩你跟他說一下了我忘了= =....((能點一下嗎?

水摸完畢逃xd

謝謝摸~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-11-13T12:26:52+00:00

@啪啪啪俩音是一个pattern 不一定每个音都要用ds表现强弱的

timemon wrote:
General/Modding Assist
00:27:656 (1) - you add finish here it would only make sense to also add it here 00:30:530 (1) - . (Global Hitsound) added in the top diff
Pata-Mon's Insane
00:06:548 - I would recommend you silence sliderends like this with 5% volume ok, changed for all 3/4 and 1/4 slider
00:20:111 (5,6,7) - It would be cool if you could differentiate this pattern a bit better as it sounds different and is quite stronger. Giving it more spacing emphasis, changed patterns, or NC. Just something to emphasize it this part of music is soft, I don't really want to emphasis them (using circle instead of slider is enough)
00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - you were following the instruments since the section started but swtiched to vocal here. Which is fine but you suddenly switched back to instrument at 00:23:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - . My suggestion: either making 00:23:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - follow the vocal too OR 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4,5) -make follow the instruments like every other measures in the section. Doesn't make sense to switch the layer between the two so you should make it consistent. I'm following the drum sound lol, the drum sound changed here too
00:55:411 - the silence sliderend thing again and it's pretty noticeable here due to high HS vol when u play with ping pong hitsounds
01:17:417 - would be really cool if you do some SV manipulation here tbh. at least it needs to be faster than normal 1/2 slider because the sounds are pretty strong. I think rhythm changed is enough, sv changed is not really needed.

smallboat wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Easy]

01:15:261 (1) - 好像忘了finish (最好還是從頭再重聽一下看有沒有漏的) 加了也查了一遍

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

00:26:039 (1) - 聽這旋律好像減速比較適合，加速好像玩的不太對勁。这里是有一个明显的cymbal音，并且从轻段过度到重段，我还是觉得加速更合适一些~
00:30:530 (1) - 音效跟Easy不一樣这个再easy是滑条折返感觉不加更舒服
00:36:279 (6) - 同上这个类似，在esay是尾巴
00:37:896 (1) - 同上这里是easy那边漏了，加了
00:43:644 (1) - 同上也是easy漏了
(不知道是不是故意加錯，後面好像還有一些不一致的(重音沒加挺明顯)，之後不再列舉) E和主难度我不是复制的，而是分别加的，因为我觉得两边所强调的细节并不完全相同.不过这难度我也重新听了一下，有些是确实漏掉了的

@blueloniess 变速
@yugu 第一个现在是三角跳，也并不会因为这方向就卡手，keep；后面因为1是下一个小节下一句了啊，分开放，后面01:12:387 (1) - 也是这样
@1112 那里是标准间距啊，因为不是重音（没鼓点）没必要拉开的样子
@leo16834 感觉无所谓吧，并不需要非得加休息啊

谢谢大家~
更新：https://puu.sh/yl3Eu/919dab5712.rar

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-11-13T13:53:53+00:00

Fixed all expect mention

no fix stuff

@Time Capsule 00:31:069 (2) - ctrl+g? they're fine here imo
01:21:729 (3) - ^^

papapa213 00:36:279 (1,2) - i think use a 1/1 slider will be better 00:36:638 (2) - they're sound here
00:49:752 (2,3,4,5) - these positions are not stress , jump with this ds is not suitable the beat is getting stronger here, so i think jump will be nice

-Kyouka- 01:20:111 (4) - 这个地方间距有点怪不会怪啊，有很强的cymbal声音

01:26:399 (4) - nc一下？01:26:758 (1) - 然后这儿感觉不用nc 然后再在01:26:938 (1) - nc一下也行啊>>我感觉我的nc没问题

Thanks for the mod xD

update

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Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-11-23T19:48:20+00:00

@pata change last spinner to euph shape slider
its long enough to make clear pattern //run

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2017-11-24T04:44:21+00:00

說不出什麼問題了所以就 Bubbled

papapa213

152 posts

Joined November 2014

papapa213 2017-11-24T05:58:46+00:00

靠，原来walao会汉语

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

gary00737 2017-11-24T07:31:27+00:00

感謝船神 <3

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2017-12-23T10:16:11+00:00

insane
applies to your lower diffs too probably
00:12:566 (4) - should use a whistle instead of a finish. makes the finishes covering cymbals at 00:13:285 (6) - 00:14:004 (1) - stand out more (which is good)
00:37:896 (1) - should have a finish like 00:40:770 (1) - 00:43:644 (1) - . song is same. 00:46:519 (1) - 00:49:393 (1) - 00:52:267 (1) - 01:23:884 (1) - could use finishes too tbh

walao
p/6121813 what i said about your diff here basically. using S:C1 will have sound the same aside from claps, which dont use the gross default sound sample
01:10:590 (3) - also missing a clap here

call me back!!

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2017-12-23T12:49:37+00:00

pishifat wrote:
walao
p/6121813 what i said about your diff here basically. using S:C1 will have sound the same aside from claps, which dont use the gross default sound sample errr i dont remember custom hitsound being there when i mapped this lol..agree btw
01:10:590 (3) - also missing a clap here ok

call me back!!

@gary help me fix it xD

gary00737

593 posts

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gary00737 2017-12-23T15:20:52+00:00

pishifat wrote:
insane
applies to your lower diffs too probably
00:12:566 (4) - should use a whistle instead of a finish. makes the finishes covering cymbals at 00:13:285 (6) - 00:14:004 (1) - stand out more (which is good)
00:37:896 (1) - should have a finish like 00:40:770 (1) - 00:43:644 (1) - . song is same. 00:46:519 (1) - 00:49:393 (1) - 00:52:267 (1) - 01:23:884 (1) - could use finishes too tbh

walao
p/6121813 what i said about your diff here basically. using S:C1 will have sound the same aside from claps, which dont use the gross default sound sample
01:10:590 (3) - also missing a clap here

call me back!!

all fixed

thank you for the mod > _<

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2017-12-24T20:21:39+00:00

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gary00737

593 posts

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gary00737 2017-12-24T20:24:45+00:00