FelixSpade wrote:
bismillah bisa membantu :v
Column prefs : 0|1|2|3SV Suggestion00:01:688 - 0.8x
00:02:516 - 0.82x
00:04:171 - 0.84x
dst.
00:14:930 - 1.00x
01:34:378 - 0.8x
01:36:033 - 0.82x
01:37:689 - 0.84x
dst.
01:45:964 - 1.00x
lebih menghayati lagunya klo mulai dari 0.8x - 1.0x daripada 0.9x - 1.0x
all acceptedBintang Nyasar ftw02:06:861 (126861|3,127068|3,127275|3,127482|3) - harusnya ini anchor bisa dihindari how? =w=
02:20:102 (140102|0,140309|0,140516|0,140723|0) - ^ ^
02:26:930 (146930|0,146930|1,147137|2,147137|3,147344|1,147344|2) - mungkin bisa ditambah SV? kek 03:06:654 - 03:07:068 - added
04:20:309 (260309|3) - pindah ke col 2 biar sama untuk selanjutnya moved
hadeh, rata2 dah bagus tuh patternnya :v go speedrank my brudda :v
EDIT : have a star from meeee~ lagu aslinya fav gw, apalagi di remix + vocal kek gini ehehehe~
AlisceaSparku wrote:
halo vir-chan~ HI HI >W<
short mod here (sorry for late and short one ;w;)
col. 1/2/3/4
- 00:28:171 - 00:52:999 - to make the map more challenging, you could add jacks for that new sound that occurs at 00:28:999 - , then again at 00:29:206 - , 00:29:309 - , and so on. Streaming with hands and jumps for almost 30 seconds is quite repetitive and subjectively easy, so adding those jacks in some parts will make it more challenging, at the same time more variation in terms of patterns. umm.. can you give me some examples? cause im suck at making jacks lol =w=
- 00:54:654 - maybe it's only me, but I find it disturbing that all sliders in this section onward have the same length, when for example at 00:55:895 - , the guitar sounds longer than the rest. This is also noticeable for parts such as 00:57:137 - and 00:57:551 - , when the LNs could be rearranged to make a shield pattern instead, which follows more accurately in my opinion. Additionally, parts like 00:56:930 (56930|0) - doesn't seem to be a guitar sound, but considering how the beat "echoes", it's better to put a 1/4 slider. dunno how to respond this, but the sliders is for the guitar are actually in the same length and for the 00:56:930 (56930|0) - its not an "echoes" why? i assume that you already know the pitch between "echoes" and the original. i mean,
the sound itself its the same as the other, how would i become an "echoes"?
----these ones can actually be applied to other parts, so do consider this.- 01:26:930 - a short 1/4 burst could be added here for that weaker sound. nope, i already put those LNs for the vocal
- 03:36:861 (216861|1) - perhaps you can remove this and make 1/4 sliders for that fluctuating guitar sound? the fluctuation here seems very, very audible compared to the rest. If you're trying to differentiate it with the 1/4 sliders at 03:40:171 - , then I suggest to make 1/4 slider one hand trill. Literally, it's not accurate, but it feels more accurate (hope you get it xd) yeah i know what you meant xD but im gonna keep this since the sound is pitch is different owo
- 03:45:964 (225964|1) - same with the above suggestion ^
tbh I don't really have to suggest anything else, since there are parts that are copypasted and mirrored only (example, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9459943 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9459950
i don't know, but maybe half of it are copypasted and mirrored only actually, yes. i copypasta on that part, but i make it different somehow.
dont worry xD
anyway good luck to your map!
THANK YOU FOR THE MOD GUYS >W<deadbill wrote:
RNGesus bless you
00:26:723 (26723|2,26775|3,27033|1,27085|0) - kurang nyaman nih.. coba di CTRL+H, CTRL+G, biar sesuai sama bagian sini
00:27:137 (27137|3,27189|2,27240|1,27292|0,27344|3,27395|2,27447|0,27499|1,27551|2,27602|3,27654|0,27706|1) - nope, w berusaha untuk membuat semuany berbeda owo jadilah kek gini wkwk
00:54:240 - 2 3 3 mungkin mau dipertimbangkan lagi konsistensinya. sama suaranya dengan bagian sini, tapi bagian sini pakai 2 2 4 00:27:757 -
saran ane sih, hapus 00:54:447 (54447|2) - tambah satu note di 00:54:654 - fixed wkwkw mabok gua :'v
oiye, ini bagian 00:54:654 - sampai 01:21:137 - LNs nya ngikutin apa? berasa out of place banget ikutin gitar
01:23:620 (83620|1) - kepanjangan nih klo ngikutin vokal re-arranged
01:23:930 - tambah LN
01:24:240 - tambah LN
01:30:240 (90240|1) - sama ini juga
untuk kedua LN itu, w mauny tuh biar g ad yg pake 1/4 makany w rada maksain kek gitu wkwk, cmn udh w re-arranged kok (tambahin 1 LN)
kalo gak ya jangan ngikutin vokal, napa gak ngikutin melodi gitar? .-.
01:32:723 - sama kasus dengan 00:26:723 same as above
01:38:102 (98102|1) - deleted 01:38:620 (98620|1) - ? disitu ada perkusi wkwk
perkusi mulai dari sini 01:38:723 -
01:47:620 - eeeh... normal notesnya ngikutin apa nih? hihat yg paling kenceng
tambahin LNs di
01:54:551 -
01:54:861 -
01:55:378 -
ini buang 01:55:482 (115482|2) - harusnya mulai dari 01:55:378 - udh w jelasin ya diatas wkwk
02:27:344 - sama kasus dengan 00:54:240 - same as above
tambahin satu note 02:27:344 - g konsisten dong jadiny, masa yg laen triple ini quad sendirian :'v
welp.. ini juga out of place LNs nya.. 02:27:344 - sampai 02:53:826 - udh di jelasin diatas wkwk
02:56:309 (176309|2) - kepanjangan, sesuaikan dengan vokal
02:56:620 - tambah LN
03:00:447 (180447|0) - kepanjangan
03:00:861 - tambah LN
03:02:930 (182930|2) - kepanjangan
03:03:240 - tambah LN
03:03:551 - tambah LN
udh di jelasin diatas wkwk
03:34:171 (214171|2,214792|2) - beda nada jangan di satu kolom welp, sebenerny g terlalu beda since orang" juga ngiranya ini sama .
jadi tuh ni 2 suara kek bedany cmn 20-30% doang makanya g gitu kedengeran bedany
bandingin deh
03:35:413 (215413|0,215516|1,215620|3) - bend release
03:37:482 (217482|3,217585|2,217689|0) - normal picking
ga paham mksdny apa ;w;
bedain mendingan patternya. 03:37:482 (217482|3) - pendekin dah nope, sengaja bikin gitu untuk "visual"
03:43:068 (223068|3,223068|2,223137|1,223206|0,223275|3,223344|2,223413|1,223482|0) -
pickingnya belum beres, masih pakai ketukan yang sama, tiba2 ganti pattern .-. buat gitarny uy wkwkwk
03:45:964 (225964|1) - ini let ring sampai sini 03:46:585 - wut?
03:46:378 (226378|3) - berhenti di 03:46:585 - biar apa? =w=
03:46:585 - tambah LN nope
03:49:895 (229895|2,229999|1) - normal notes, tapi bagian sini 03:40:171 - pakai LNs .-. changed to LN
bagian sini 03:50:930 - sampai sini 03:52:585 - coba panjang pendek LNs nya disesuaikan dengan sustain dan mute -.- itu udah sesuai wkwkwk
aaaa lanjut aja melodinyaaa 03:58:378 - ga enak tiba2 ganti begitu ya w kan mauny ngikutin burstny =w=
04:24:033 - sama kasus 00:26:723 udh di jelasin diatas wkwk
goodluck o/