ORESKABAND - Pinocchio · forum

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2017-09-28T07:45:21+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October 9, 2017 at 5:14:18 AM

Artist: ORESKABAND
Title: Pinocchio
Source: NARUTO -ナルト-
Tags: doormat akitoshi corinn sahuang my angel azusa snownino_ naruto uzumaki ska ending 14 ed
BPM: 202
Filesize: 5326kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Normal (2.24 stars, 249 notes)
Doormat's Easy (1.78 stars, 176 notes)
NiNo's Insane (4.15 stars, 512 notes)
Rasengan (4.68 stars, 500 notes)
sahuang's Hard (3.59 stars, 384 notes)

Download: ORESKABAND - Pinocchio
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Open for GD's. You can Collab with someone if you wish. I want to rank this October 10th so please be able to map fast and reply to mods. Also please have at least 3 ranked maps or GD's.

Easy - Doormat
Normal - Akitoshi
Hard - sahuang
Light Insane - SnowNino_
Insane - Me.
Hitsounds - Me

Last edited by Monstrata 2017-10-09T12:14:36+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2017-09-28T08:21:47+00:00

monstrata and naruto in the same sentence. im orgasming in my boots

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2017-09-28T08:22:11+00:00

also this thread is aspirant mapper only thread locked for others

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2017-09-28T08:22:50+00:00

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2017-09-28T08:27:03+00:00

Dattebayo!!

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-09-29T09:25:39+00:00

Locked

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Pinocchio
TitleUnicode:Pinocchio
Artist:ORESKABAND
ArtistUnicode:ORESKABAND
Creator:Monstrata
Version:sahuang's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pinocchio.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,65162,69707
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-10-01T06:25:07+00:00

I'm aspirant

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,307 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-10-02T15:56:58+00:00

stack mod owo
[General]
sahuang's Hard diff ends a bit earlier

[Rasengan]
00:19:071 (2,3) - too visually close to each other
00:23:526 (2) - stack

00:36:447 (1,2,3) - this is one pattern of sound but 00:37:338 (4) - is clearly not, I think you should differentiate 00:36:447 (1,2,3) - from 00:37:338 (4) - more

00:48:031 (7) - stack

01:10:011 - green line to lower volume?

01:12:239 (2) - stack
01:56:348 (2) - stack

02:09:714 (1) - what the

[NiNo's Insane]
01:05:853 (5) - stack

rhythm inconsistency between this 01:06:150 (1,2,3) - and 01:08:526 (1,2,3,4,5) -

02:03:477 (2) - stack

[sahuang's Hard]
00:34:071 - should be clickable
01:12:833 - lol why is there no note here

01:15:358 - should be mapped imo 2 beat gap is too big

02:09:714 (2) - NC for spinner maybe

[Akitoshi's Normal]
01:52:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think ctrl + G the 01:54:120 (5,6) - rhythm works better here

[Doormat's Easy]
01:15:358 - why not add a note here it fits perfectly for 1/1 gap

02:09:714 (2) - NC for spinner maybe

Good luck!

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2017-10-03T08:39:57+00:00

Almost 24 hours, where are my other two mods D:

DeRandom Otaku

2,142 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-10-03T12:21:06+00:00

I thought the deadline was 48 hours rip
[Easy]

00:21:744 (4) - Are you sure about ending this note at 00:22:190 - because i would'nt prefer doing that because new stanza is starting from here. Could try rhythm like this http://puu.sh/xOjno/44aedaec80.jpg
00:48:328 (1) - The slider itself is being a questionable rhythm here. The song is emphasizing these sounds http://puu.sh/xOjs4/0d2927ee07.jpg while you are emphasizing these sounds http://puu.sh/xOjt2/59a55a390f.jpg
02:00:804 (1) - Do you really need this NC?
02:06:744 (3) - Also could NC this because you nc'd these notes in previous patterns

[Normal]

01:11:497 (2) - Since you are tryin to follow vocals distinctively here , i guess its gonna be a good idea to not ignore 01:11:645 - this beat. You can easily change 01:11:497 (2) - to a 1/2 reverse

[Hard]

00:19:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This whole rhythm is just really weird since the sounds you are emphasizing are'nt being emphasized in the song at all. The song emphasized 00:19:962 - 00:20:556 - 00:21:150 - 00:21:744 - 00:22:041 - But you mapped these with slider ends/reverses and let other non-emphasized sounds have a clickable object
00:34:368 (1) - Why is this different than 00:31:695 (1) - and 00:36:447 (1) - while the song is same? Generally you are supposed to have 00:34:368 (1) - start from 00:34:071 - like in the other two patterns
01:12:833 - Circle (?)(?)(?)(?)

[Insane]

00:08:378 (2,3,4) - Comparing space between 2,3 and 3,4. Isnt the spacing between 3 and 4 supposed to be bigger ? because of that sound at 00:09:120 -
02:09:120 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/xOXYo/58af248d5d.jpg yes?

[Ex]

01:29:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing is really small compared to the intensity of those drums growing here

neat map! gl!
i will pm you my map in 4-5 days if thats ok.

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-10-03T19:47:40+00:00

sry for delay, something bad happens irl
I'll mod it within 24 hours

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-10-03T20:06:14+00:00

timemon wrote:
[Doormat's Easy]
01:15:358 - why not add a note here it fits perfectly for 1/1 gap want to give break for beginners, and also vocal emphasis

02:09:714 (2) - NC for spinner maybe don't think it's necessary to put two NCs so close to each other like that

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Easy]
00:21:744 (4) - Are you sure about ending this note at 00:22:190 - because i would'nt prefer doing that because new stanza is starting from here. Could try rhythm like this http://puu.sh/xOjno/44aedaec80.jpg yeah, i'm pretty sure. i still want to emphasize the downbeat due to the finish on it, as well as keep polarity here
00:48:328 (1) - The slider itself is being a questionable rhythm here. The song is emphasizing these sounds http://puu.sh/xOjs4/0d2927ee07.jpg while you are emphasizing these sounds http://puu.sh/xOjt2/59a55a390f.jpg well actually, i'm following the vocal emphasis. i believe the main vocal emphasis points here are 00:48:328 - 00:48:922 - and 00:49:516 - which is what the repeat slider lands on
02:00:804 (1) - Do you really need this NC? accident lol
02:06:744 (3) - Also could NC this because you nc'd these notes in previous patterns ok

thanks- https://drmt.s-ul.eu/aioJZ4L5

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-10-04T04:41:35+00:00

timemon wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]
01:52:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think ctrl + G the 01:54:120 (5,6) - rhythm works better here vocals

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Normal]
01:11:497 (2) - Since you are tryin to follow vocals distinctively here , i guess its gonna be a good idea to not ignore 01:11:645 - this beat. You can easily change 01:11:497 (2) - to a 1/2 reverse that might work but it's so awkward to see 3 reverse in a row since 01:11:942 (3,4) - is reverse too lol

thanks for looking bois
shamelessly copied hitsound from Rasengan :eyes:

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SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2017-10-04T06:43:27+00:00

timemon wrote:
[NiNo's Insane]
01:05:853 (5) - stack

rhythm inconsistency between this 01:06:150 (1,2,3) - and 01:08:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - both are different part since the build up sound

02:03:477 (2) - stack

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Insane]
00:08:378 (2,3,4) - Comparing space between 2,3 and 3,4. Isnt the spacing between 3 and 4 supposed to be bigger ? because of that sound at 00:09:120 - prefer to keep the structure tho, since is a calm part so i think is pretty fine here
02:09:120 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/xOXYo/58af248d5d.jpg yes? nope the extended slider is expressing the drum sound which end at 02:09:566 -

thx

will fix the stack in the next reply

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-10-04T11:30:05+00:00

@DeRandom
00:19:813 - 00:20:407 - 00:21:002 - im trying to catch these sounds, i feel like this place is fine because of the repeated rhythm.
The reverse slider ends are indeed downbeats, which is a bit meh, ill change if there're more opinions. Right now i wanna keep for the pattern
00:32:437 - a drum sound here but 00:34:813 - quiet. Thats why i map differently.

Others fixed

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Pinocchio
TitleUnicode:Pinocchio
Artist:ORESKABAND
ArtistUnicode:ORESKABAND
Creator:Monstrata
Version:sahuang's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1429328
BeatmapSetID:674401

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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@monstrata can you help me copy hs thxxx

Kawashiro

1,525 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-10-04T12:08:42+00:00

From your Q.

[Doormat]

00:40:903 - Skipping here seems weird to me. it has pretty strong drums. If you want to skip here, 00:39:714 (2) - Delete this and follow only trumpet is better.
00:57:833 (1) - Delete repeat. I think you should put clickable object at 00:59:021 - here. Similar as 00:38:823 (1) - here.
01:47:140 (2) - ^

[Akitoshi]

It seems fine.

[sahuang]

00:37:932 (2,3,4) - How about change beats like this? I think you should put clickable object at 00:38:229 - here because of drum sound.
01:01:472 (1) - I know it is following vocal, but you should map here imo. you skipped too many good sounds.
That break also weird. it seems too long. I think you can start map at 01:06:150 - here.

[NiNo]

It seems fine.

[Rasengan]

HP 3 seems too low. Ranking Criteria recommend Insane diff to set HP over 5. It's just Guideline but you should follow this if there is nothing admittable reason.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Insane

Difficulty Setting Guidelines

Approach Rate should be between 7 and 9.3
Overall Difficulty should be between 7 and 9.
HP Drain Rate should be between 5 and 8.
00:31:250 (2,3) - I think you should put jumps at here. you put jump every 2nd circle in 00:30:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here and there is no reason to break this pattern.
00:50:259 (4,5) - I don't think it is good beat. because at first, there is no sounds in each sliderend imo. And it seems too strong so it doesn't fit at the mood. And even if there is a sound, it is pretty weak and low so skip these sounds will better. how about change them to circle?
01:41:348 (6,7) - How about put jumps between these circles? at least 7 has same sound as 01:41:200 (5) - here and it just seems fun to me.

My Map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597797

Sorry for delay, GL

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-10-08T06:13:09+00:00

[rasengan]
sage art: super tailed beast rasenshuriken

00:33:180 (3,4,1) - kinda weird to play imo

00:37:338 (4,1) - also a bit weird cuz the spacing out of 4 is so small. plays like a tiny 1/1 gap

01:15:655 (1) - tbh i think 1/1 slider fits better here
[nino]
00:11:942 (4) - ctrl g plays better imo.
01:14:021 (4,1) - looks messy cuz weird visual spacing
[sahuang]
01:14:467 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks really confusing for hard level players. try to make this more spread out

01:16:249 (2) - circle+slider?

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2017-10-08T06:53:28+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[nino]
00:11:942 (4) - ctrl g plays better imo. it will make the spacing 3>4 too large which is not what i want
01:14:021 (4,1) - looks messy cuz weird visual spacing cant do much since i want to keep the structure, adjust a bit might looks better

thx

a

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Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-10-08T07:41:50+00:00

Hello.

General

Nothing to point out here.

Rasengan

HP 6
00:51:002 (2,2) - Stacks.
00:54:566 - I think you're missing a clap here.
01:29:912 (1,2) - Stacks.
01:51:744 - And missing whistle here too.

NiNo's Insane

How about OD 7 instead?
00:46:546 (3,4) - This blanket is off.

sahuang's Hard

OD 6. Current OD is too high for Hard.
02:04:368 (1,2) - Fix this blanket too.

Doormat's Easy

01:46:546 (1,2) - The spacing here could be more consistent.

Dattebayo.

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-10-08T13:48:52+00:00

ok

Kawashiro wrote:
From your Q.

[Doormat]
00:40:903 - Skipping here seems weird to me. it has pretty strong drums. If you want to skip here, 00:39:714 (2) - Delete this and follow only trumpet is better. feels fine to me; there's no distinct drum pattern on 00:40:903 - unlike 00:39:714 (2) - so i think it's fine to skip this note. i feel the skip also adds a separation between the chorus and second verse
00:57:833 (1) - Delete repeat. I think you should put clickable object at 00:59:021 - here. Similar as 00:38:823 (1) - here. don't feel that is necessary; the main vocals here line up with the white ticks here. there's a 1/1 gap in between 00:57:833 (1,2) - because there's a break in the vocals there; by breaking up this repeat slider it'll make the vocals feel a bit more separated. dunno if this makes sense s:
01:47:140 (2) - ^

Gero wrote:
Hello.

Doormat's Easy

01:46:546 (1,2) - The spacing here could be more consistent. oops
Dattebayo.

thanks, dattebayo
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Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-10-08T19:53:25+00:00

Kawashiro wrote:
From your Q.

[sahuang]
00:37:932 (2,3,4) - How about change beats like this? I think you should put clickable object at 00:38:229 - here because of drum sound.
Fixed it similar to your suggestion.
01:01:472 (1) - I know it is following vocal, but you should map here imo. you skipped too many good sounds. I really think it's fine,
the spinner is a good outro from the section.
That break also weird. it seems too long. I think you can start map at 01:06:150 - here. ^
[Rasengan]
HP 3 seems too low. Ranking Criteria recommend Insane diff to set HP over 5. It's just Guideline but you should follow this if there is nothing admittable reason. yea fixed
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Insane

Difficulty Setting Guidelines

Approach Rate should be between 7 and 9.3
Overall Difficulty should be between 7 and 9.
HP Drain Rate should be between 5 and 8.
00:31:250 (2,3) - I think you should put jumps at here. you put jump every 2nd circle in 00:30:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here and there is no reason to break this pattern. Prefer not to, its more fun to have just a jump on 4.
00:50:259 (4,5) - I don't think it is good beat. because at first, there is no sounds in each sliderend imo. And it seems too strong so it doesn't fit at the mood. And even if there is a sound, it is pretty weak and low so skip these sounds will better. how about change them to circle? There are 1/4 hihats here though.
01:41:348 (6,7) - How about put jumps between these circles? at least 7 has same sound as 01:41:200 (5) - here and it just seems fun to me. I prefer current arrangement xP.
My Map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597797

Sorry for delay, GL

Naotoshi wrote:
[rasengan]
sage art: super tailed beast rasenshuriken

00:33:180 (3,4,1) - kinda weird to play imo I think its fine. also its one of the more unique jumppatters.

00:37:338 (4,1) - also a bit weird cuz the spacing out of 4 is so small. plays like a tiny 1/1 gap ehh, i think i use this kind of spacing a lot in my map so it should be fine.

01:15:655 (1) - tbh i think 1/1 slider fits better here Agree and disagree, 1/1 fits yes, but I need a "release" to happen on 01:16:101 - otherwise the vocal on 3 doesn't feel unique anymore.

[sahuang]
01:14:467 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks really confusing for hard level players. try to make this more spread out Fixed the stack o the end and made them spaced out. I think now its reasonable for Hard players. there's still a 1/1 stack but its the only one in the section so theres nothing to confuse it with now.

01:16:249 (2) - circle+slider? I prefer the symmetrical slider, and sahuang uses this patterning a lot in the map so i'll keep it.

@Gero fixed all!

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2017-10-08T20:00:20+00:00

Just clarifying, sahuang gave me permission to fix. and I fixed Gero's mod for NiNo since it was just a blanket, and diff settings.

Metadata from: (First track)

The band uses both ORESKABAND and オレスカバンド. For this particular album, they had their name in Japanese instead of just in English as seen on the album cover, so thats why the artist field is in Japanese.

Gero

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Gero 2017-10-08T20:27:39+00:00