Feint - Outbreak (feat. MYLK) · forum

Kujinn

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kujinn 2017-09-23T14:49:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday 28 November 2018 at 20:04:50

Artist: Feint
Title: Outbreak (feat. MYLK)
Source: Rocket League
Tags: kujinn kergio _orange stingy monstercat monster cat drum and n bass dnb electro dubstep
BPM: 175
Filesize: 5678kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

_orange's Normal (2.06 stars, 190 notes)
Kergio's Insane (4.6 stars, 426 notes)
Stingy's Hard (3.43 stars, 235 notes)
Uprising (5.42 stars, 410 notes)

Download: Feint - Outbreak (feat. MYLK)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3

normal - _orange
hard - Stingy
insane - Kergio
extra - me

Check out Arutsuki's Map ~

Last edited by Kujinn 2018-11-30T11:13:58+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2017-11-26T18:26:27+00:00

Hi. Here for M4M from my queue. Hope this helps!

[General]

Imo, having a countdown doesn't complement a calm introduction of a song, and I would prefer not having one.

[Easy]

00:30:821 (2,3,1) – Don't you think this looks a bit misaligned? http://puu.sh/yu0BB/ce1e69b860.jpg I think there's more aesthetical connections you can make between these objects.

01:07:850 (1) – I got lectured by neonat on my map that my lowest difficulty didn't have enough moments of rest for new players. I do agree with that sentiment, and we worked together to find moments where 2/1 sliders would work. Do consider finding moments to take the player out of constant 1/1 rhythms. For instance, every other reverse slider starting at 01:10:592 (1) – and 01:16:078 (1) – could be turned to 2/1 sliders.

01:24:992 (2,3) – blanket is off

[_orange's Normal]

00:15:392 (3,4) – and 00:18:135 (5,1) – There's a little bit of jerky discomfort between these notes, which I think is totally fine, it's pretty easy to get adjusted to that, and it gives it a nice quirk. However, 00:12:992 (1,2) – is very smooth flow. I feel smooth flow isn't what this section is about, so try making the flow more jerky.

00:55:507 (3,4) – This rhythm felt unnatural and complicated. One reason is because sliderends are passive gameplay elements, so it didn't make sense that I was supposed to treat 00:55:678 – as a serious note. I'm sure you can think of some other rhythms that play a little nicer, but if you want my suggestion, I'd do this: http://puu.sh/yu0ho/aa205ac3a5.png

01:44:107 (2,3,4) – (3) is in a very unnatural places after a reverse slider. It feels kind of jerky to get to. Sometimes that's not so bad, but (4) is in such a natural place to be that it feels like I should click at (4) after the reverse. There's a big logical disconnect to me, and I don't think new players will be receptive to the complexity. Consider creating a different pattern here (it seems like you need more room) or rethinking what you want out of this.

[Stingy's Hard]

Map description says this is still WIP, and so let me know when you finish this and I'll mod it then. Just find me in game

01:51:735 (1) – It would make for a more cohesive mapset if you ended the map here like all the other difficulties. Additionally, I don't like the pacing of mapping this section out because it's so weak. Imagine if you were forced to watch the end credits of a movie.

[Kergio's ]

00:25:335 (1,2) – Explain what you're trying to do by making this a big jump. I was pretty confused why this note was supposed to be exciting. Instead of the current 2.88 spacing, I felt like 1.99 spacing like at 00:28:592 (2,3) – was a more natural way to play this part. If it's spaced this far for aesthetic reasons, I would prefer you use a different aesthetic.

00:32:021 – I know you're not going with the singer and that you want to express the downbeat and that I might not be the target audience, but I wish this strong vocal had more to it in the map. (Phew, glad I picked this one to show. Looking closer, some of these vocal syncopations are on a ¼ note which sounds like hell to emphasize so maybe just here since this vocal is strong)

01:07:850 (1) – Imo, the strong bass drop and start of the kiai should feel stronger than the drum build-up before this. It's possible that the 1/1 gap after 01:07:507 (1) – is causing me to feel too rested and not allowing enough emphasis on the bass drop. Consider making it a ½ slider.

[Uprising]

00:47:964 (3,4,5,6) – I like that there is a jump here, but this felt much more intense than the rest of this section. I didn't think this high intensity complemented the rest of the map or express anything in particular in the song, so I would prefer if the jump were smaller. Also, blankets like 00:47:621 (2,6) - are misaligned if you care.

01:07:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, the strong bass drop and start of the kiai should feel stronger than the drum build-up before this.

01:17:450 (1,2) – These notes are high-pitched. They feel different and special in the music. I like to think of osu! as a dance since movement is one of the key forms of engagement the game has to offer. I feel like the movement in the map does not go far enough to expressing the differences and unique sounds of the song. All of 01:15:221 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) – feel like the same pattern since the movement is the same clockwise flow, yet I feel there are more nuances like 01:17:450 (1,2) – that can be expressed by offering changes in direction and different flow structures. These details really help me connect with the experience.

01:30:650 (4,5) – I feel this is a hard way to introduce the new rhythm. (4) points up, but I'm supposed to move down, so it felt really jerky, and since I wasn't really sure of the rhythm yet, it felt pretty awkward. Compared to later parts like 01:36:135 (4,5,6) - , this part felt like too much.

Good luck!

HootOwlStar

764 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2017-11-27T03:02:02+00:00

general

this is probably one of the best background image i've ever seen in this game it's so impressive and fascinating
disabling the countdown would serve better due to reasons enlisted by @pinataman and the countdown doesn't even sync with the bpm at all + remember to add in the tags
starting from 00:34:935 - until 00:44:535 - consider to make a crescendo in hitsound volume for the lower difficulties since currently the introduction of the hitclap is too loud and out of the blue

easy

aesthetic nitpicks: 00:21:221 (1,2) - extremely triggered that this pattern isn't a perfect reflection + 00:26:707 (1) - slider shape is quite unimpressive imo and https://puu.sh/yuf8M/1e933140df.JPG + 01:00:992 (1) - accidental nc
01:07:507 - this beat is essential since it's the opening of the drop, but it seems like the current restriction will be the spinner recovery time. consider to shorten the spinner to 01:06:478 - or start the spinner at 01:02:364 - or map the spinner part with circles and sliders idk
01:51:392 (5) - would suggest to convert the slider to two circles with one beat gap in between in order to emphasize 01:51:735 -

normal

00:18:135 (5) - would suggest splitting the slider to a circle followed by a slider at 00:18:478 - for better beat/bar counts
this difficulty is relatively weak in selecting and portraying rhythm emphasis choices. the rhythm doesn't fit with the major sounds like in 01:11:964 (4,5) - 01:17:450 (4,5) - etc, and the way the beats are represented is confusing due to restrictions of distance snapping especially starting at 01:29:792 - . personally would suggest some reworks for the rhythm in the kiai sections

hard

00:44:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - suggestion for rhythm. placing a gap before 00:44:535 - would serve better in order for indication of lower rhythm intensity and the introduction of the pre-chorus
starting from 00:56:878 - until 01:02:107 - I would suggest to rework on the rhythm choices. the 1/4 introductions are too out of the blue and gimmicky for the players of this level + the rhythm are too vocal-based instead of using overall representation which includes the drumbeats etc
the spinners are ironically the let-down factor of this beatmap since the parts covered are so rich in rhythm and yet simply covered with spinners. consider to map those sections, it would be a plus overall
the kiai sections are really fun to play to be honest so props for that

insane

01:19:678 (1) - accidental nc + 00:49:678 (4,1) - consider to stack as similar notes before eg. 00:46:592 (3,4) - 00:47:964 (3,4) -
01:16:592 (3,4) - 01:21:050 (4,5) - stacking in these parts doesn't contribute well in rhythm emphasis and they would be misleading to read since players might interpret them as 1/4 like in other stacks of the kiai

I believe the set would be great after some more polishing. anyway tons of luck

NeilPerry

301 posts

Joined May 2011

NeilPerry 2017-11-27T05:23:42+00:00

Hello.

General:

add tags abt genre, gders, etc.
Recover widescreen supp from all diffs and count time(out of rythm) from yop diff easy and hard
And just my suggestion make 4-th combocolour more bright to fit more for bg and being not so lackluster (try something like this https://puu.sh/yuiRa/e153ce30fe.png)

Uprising:
Put volume on timing red line with 30%. Unrankable issue
00:23:621 - place soft whistle for consistency
00:33:564 (1) - if you wanted to emphaze vocal with this reverse then it snapped not correctly. vocal placed on 1\6 ticks (https://puu.sh/yuiVt/4aedd166d3.jpg) but better way keep it 1\1 for consistency with previous reverses https://puu.sh/yuj39/71fe3f1541.jpg
00:36:135 - Should be clickable cuz oof vocal emphazing. You starting ignore it very sharp and create resonance in rythmic. try just copy previous stuff(https://puu.sh/ytQ0c/5052235f77.jpg)So in that way you will create more smooth bridge from part with vocal emphazing to part with beats emphzing
00:46:935 (4) - mby place slider 1\2 here cuz sound which u emphazed ends perfectly on red tick 00:47:107 - it should give more sense at all
00:52:421 (4) - same
00:58:250 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:964 (2,3,4) - 01:02:707 (2,3,4) - 01:04:078 (2,3,4) - create more even ds for them. (http://puu.sh/ytQh9/512021bdb9.jpg) it will improve overall aesthetic xd
01:12:135 (2,3) - 01:17:621 (2,3) - 01:23:107 (2,3) - 01:24:907 (3,4) - 01:26:278 (3,4) - 01:31:335 (2,3) - 01:34:078 (2,3) - 01:36:821 (2,3) - 01:39:564 (2,3) - 01:42:307 (2,3) - 01:45:050 (2,3) - 01:47:792 (2,3) - 01:50:535 (2,3) - will be coll to add normal or soft whistle on that notes to make your hitsounds more brighter and emphazed background sound which they follow
01:46:592 (2) - move it right or blanket it with previous(i dont like how blanket will work tbh ) http://puu.sh/yujaj/2712c74ac9.jpg

Kergio's Insane:
Put 20% volume on red timing point.
00:33:564 (1) - this i mentioned in top diff. it's wrongly snapped. vocal on 1\6 ticks. better just place it on 1\1 rythmic as previous.
00:38:707 (4) - NC for consistency
00:48:478 - what abt make it clickable to show intensity of music better? 00:47:964 (3,4,5) - cuz all 1\2 ticks got progression in music
01:35:021 - dont see any reason to skip clap beat. u emphazed it previously somehow
01:45:992 - same idea
01:40:249 (7) - u emphazed it with NC previously
01:45:392 (4) - same

Stingy's Hard:
U should make volume control. All map in 48% volume but sound parts a bit different with dynamic and volume. so better take example from top diff
00:23:964 - in this part was bad idea to catch vocal rythm cuz it wrongly snapped.
00:25:507 (4) - this is out of music following. u dont catch vocal as well and miss background sound as well too. place it on white ticks. 00:26:707 (1) - also shodnt be extend to red tick http://puu.sh/yukai/6f883811cb.jpg just use simple rythm for it. for now it sounds rly weird.
00:34:764 (1) - should start on white tick. for now sliderhead placed on nothing
00:36:478 (3) - randomly emphazed. 00:37:678 (1) - this havnt any sense with start on red tick https://puu.sh/yukhV/ac8699ec9f.jpg try this
00:39:221 (5,1) - same for this https://puu.sh/yukjQ/18ed67ebb4.jpg
00:56:878 - rise ds some for this part. looks rly clatchy
01:42:478 (5) - make it reverse to follow rythm concept
01:47:964 (5) - same
02:07:850 - mute spinner end

Orange's Normal:
As i told in hard diff. it should be controlled with volume more.
00:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - should be restruct by NC (in that way should be fine https://puu.sh/yukyW/78a966f6f8.jpg)
00:36:307 (4) - extend it to white tick to make more sense
00:39:050 (4) - same
01:12:478 (5) - what abt try change rythm of slider to make more sense? and it will looks more rythm structured http://puu.sh/yukFB/a82c1fcb07.jpg
01:17:964 (5) - 01:23:450 (5) - same for this
01:27:735 - dont see any reason ti skip this

Easy:
VOLUMEEEEEEEEE xd it should be volume change won useless greenlines
00:26:707 (1) - i know u can make it more even and will be cool to make perfect blanket with next object as (00:32:192 (1,2) - )
00:40:421 (1) - 00:43:164 (1) - as it dnb stuff u can up low diff quality by hitsounding slider ticks. for now its sounds rly abruptly

best of luck o/

_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-11-28T17:33:10+00:00

NeilPerry wrote:
Hello.

Orange's Normal:
As i told in hard diff. it should be controlled with volume more. yeah. i copied volumes from top diff
00:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - should be restruct by NC (in that way should be fine https://puu.sh/yukyW/78a966f6f8.jpg) i thiink its okay, if anyone else suggests it then ill change
00:36:307 (4) - extend it to white tick to make more sense
00:39:050 (4) - same idk i want to follow the vocals
01:12:478 (5) - what abt try change rythm of slider to make more sense? and it will looks more rythm structured http://puu.sh/yukFB/a82c1fcb07.jpg maybe if someone else suggests to do this
01:17:964 (5) - 01:23:450 (5) - same for this
01:27:735 - dont see any reason ti skip this following synth

HootOwlStar wrote:
[notice]

normal
00:18:135 (5) - would suggest splitting the slider to a circle followed by a slider at 00:18:478 - for better beat/bar counts but it's the same as the others
this difficulty is relatively weak in selecting and portraying rhythm emphasis choices. the rhythm doesn't fit with the major sounds like in 01:11:964 (4,5) - 01:17:450 (4,5) - etc, and the way the beats are represented is confusing due to restrictions of distance snapping especially starting at 01:29:792 - . personally would suggest some reworks for the rhythm in the kiai sections could you be more specific? what do you want me to change about the rhythm? make it denser?

pinataman wrote:
[_orange's Normal]

00:15:392 (3,4) – and 00:18:135 (5,1) – There's a little bit of jerky discomfort between these notes, which I think is totally fine, it's pretty easy to get adjusted to that, and it gives it a nice quirk. However, 00:12:992 (1,2) – is very smooth flow. I feel smooth flow isn't what this section is about, so try making the flow more jerky.

00:55:507 (3,4) – This rhythm felt unnatural and complicated. One reason is because sliderends are passive gameplay elements, so it didn't make sense that I was supposed to treat 00:55:678 – as a serious note. I'm sure you can think of some other rhythms that play a little nicer, but if you want my suggestion, I'd do this: http://puu.sh/yu0ho/aa205ac3a5.png

01:44:107 (2,3,4) – (3) is in a very unnatural places after a reverse slider. It feels kind of jerky to get to. Sometimes that's not so bad, but (4) is in such a natural place to be that it feels like I should click at (4) after the reverse. There's a big logical disconnect to me, and I don't think new players will be receptive to the complexity. Consider creating a different pattern here (it seems like you need more room) or rethinking what you want out of this.

no reply = fixed
thanks everyone!

aaa

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beaw

637 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2017-11-29T06:07:54+00:00

pinataman wrote:
[Stingy's Hard]
01:51:735 (1) – It would make for a more cohesive mapset if you ended the map here like all the other difficulties. Additionally, I don't like the pacing of mapping this section out because it's so weak. Imagine if you were forced to watch the end credits of a movie. idk what else to do

HootOwlStar wrote:
hard
00:44:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - suggestion for rhythm. placing a gap before 00:44:535 - would serve better in order for indication of lower rhythm intensity and the introduction of the pre-chorus <3 nice
starting from 00:56:878 - until 01:02:107 - I would suggest to rework on the rhythm choices. the 1/4 introductions are too out of the blue and gimmicky for the players of this level + the rhythm are too vocal-based instead of using overall representation which includes the drumbeats etc fixed a tad bit
the spinners are ironically the let-down factor of this beatmap since the parts covered are so rich in rhythm and yet simply covered with spinners. consider to map those sections, it would be a plus overall okie <3
the kiai sections are really fun to play to be honest so props for that thanks a lot ;w;

NeilPerry wrote:
Stingy's Hard:
U should make volume control. All map in 48% volume but sound parts a bit different with dynamic and volume. so better take example from top diff
00:23:964 - in this part was bad idea to catch vocal rythm cuz it wrongly snapped. what
00:25:507 (4) - this is out of music following. u dont catch vocal as well and miss background sound as well too. place it on white ticks. 00:26:707 (1) - also shodnt be extend to red tick http://puu.sh/yukai/6f883811cb.jpg just use simple rythm for it. for now it sounds rly weird. I really think it's okaty because the whole point of the section is vocals ;w; and it does follow them?
00:34:764 (1) - should start on white tick. for now sliderhead placed on nothing vocal?
00:36:478 (3) - randomly emphazed. 00:37:678 (1) - this havnt any sense with start on red tick https://puu.sh/yukhV/ac8699ec9f.jpg try this ;w;?
00:39:221 (5,1) - same for this https://puu.sh/yukjQ/18ed67ebb4.jpg ;w;??
00:56:878 - rise ds some for this part. looks rly clatchy okay
01:42:478 (5) - make it reverse to follow rythm concept hmmm but I like how it is c; it adds variation
01:47:964 (5) - same
02:07:850 - mute spinner end

http://puu.sh/yvG95/371d002ab5.osu

Kujinn, please fix any hitsounding issues!

Last edited by beaw 2017-12-18T05:37:31+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-11-29T21:51:03+00:00

update for my normal diff bc HOS explained what he meant

a

osu file format v14

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Kergio

140 posts

Joined December 2014

Kergio 2017-11-30T00:46:20+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here for M4M from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Kergio's ]

00:25:335 (1,2) – Explain what you're trying to do by making this a big jump. I was pretty confused why this note was supposed to be exciting. Instead of the current 2.88 spacing, I felt like 1.99 spacing like at 00:28:592 (2,3) – was a more natural way to play this part. If it's spaced this far for aesthetic reasons, I would prefer you use a different aesthetic. Changed (I hope this is better)

00:32:021 – I know you're not going with the singer and that you want to express the downbeat and that I might not be the target audience, but I wish this strong vocal had more to it in the map. (Phew, glad I picked this one to show. Looking closer, some of these vocal syncopations are on a ¼ note which sounds like hell to emphasize so maybe just here since this vocal is strong) I'd rather leave it the way it is

01:07:850 (1) – Imo, the strong bass drop and start of the kiai should feel stronger than the drum build-up before this. It's possible that the 1/1 gap after 01:07:507 (1) – is causing me to feel too rested and not allowing enough emphasis on the bass drop. Consider making it a ½ slider. I think it's fine

Good luck!

NeilPerry wrote:
Hello.

Kergio's Insane:
Put 20% volume on red timing point. Ok
00:33:564 (1) - this i mentioned in top diff. it's wrongly snapped. vocal on 1\6 ticks. better just place it on 1\1 rythmic as previous.Ok
00:38:707 (4) - NC for consistency Ok
00:48:478 - what abt make it clickable to show intensity of music better? 00:47:964 (3,4,5) - cuz all 1\2 ticks got progression in music
01:35:021 - dont see any reason to skip clap beat. u emphazed it previously somehow Changed
01:45:992 - same idea Changed
01:40:249 (7) - u emphazed it with NC previously
01:45:392 (4) - same

best of luck o/

HootOwlStar wrote:
general
this is probably one of the best background image i've ever seen in this game it's so impressive and fascinating Tbh yeah

insane
01:19:678 (1) - accidental nc + 00:49:678 (4,1) - consider to stack as similar notes before eg. 00:46:592 (3,4) - 00:47:964 (3,4) - stacked and removed NC
01:16:592 (3,4) - 01:21:050 (4,5) - stacking in these parts doesn't contribute well in rhythm emphasis and they would be misleading to read since players might interpret them as 1/4 like in other stacks of the kiai Changed
I believe the set would be great after some more polishing. anyway tons of luck

Thanks you guys

Update

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Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2017-12-01T23:08:05+00:00

Hey. Continuation from my previous mod, so no kudosu. Also, remove the WIP label on the map description for Stingy's Hard to remove any confusion to modders since I didn't want to have to mod something twice in case this was going to be changed.

[Stingy's Hard]

Include a kiai

00:29:278 (1) – This is going with the vocals, so it feels weird that the strong vocal at 00:32:535 – isn't acknowledged. Can you end the slider there or change the rhythm up that draws attention to that vocals to stay consistent with 00:29:278 (1) – ?

00:58:421 (5,1) – This is going really strong with the vocals, but then 00:59:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) – is ignoring the vocals. There was a rhythmic disconnect with the song here for me. The problem is probably more with 00:58:421 (5,1) – since everything else is going with the drums.

01:07:850 (1) – This is overlapping the HP bar. http://puu.sh/yxvTP/aae1550bbd.jpg. Try bringing it down.

01:42:478 (5,6) – This ¾ gap felt pretty unintuitive. I really had to force myself to wait that extra amount of time which didn't feel right. You've been doing a reverse slider at similar places like 01:31:764 (6) - and I didn't understand why I was supposed to change my rhythm up, so I feel like that would play nicer for this part.

01:51:735 (1) – Following up from above, what you could do is delete all the objects after this and make the spinner end here instead. Or maybe put a circle here and then delete everything after this.

beaw

637 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2017-12-18T05:47:23+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hey. Continuation from my previous mod, so no kudosu. Also, remove the WIP label on the map description for Stingy's Hard to remove any confusion to modders since I didn't want to have to mod something twice in case this was going to be changed.

[Stingy's Hard]

Include a kiai ok

00:29:278 (1) – This is going with the vocals, so it feels weird that the strong vocal at 00:32:535 – isn't acknowledged. Can you end the slider there or change the rhythm up that draws attention to that vocals to stay consistent with 00:29:278 (1) – ? ok

00:58:421 (5,1) – This is going really strong with the vocals, but then 00:59:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) – is ignoring the vocals. There was a rhythmic disconnect with the song here for me. The problem is probably more with 00:58:421 (5,1) – since everything else is going with the drums. I'm confused because it does follow drums. I just have a note there for filler.

01:07:850 (1) – This is overlapping the HP bar. http://puu.sh/yxvTP/aae1550bbd.jpg. Try bringing it down. moved to the right, too.

01:42:478 (5,6) – This ¾ gap felt pretty unintuitive. I really had to force myself to wait that extra amount of time which didn't feel right. You've been doing a reverse slider at similar places like 01:31:764 (6) - and I didn't understand why I was supposed to change my rhythm up, so I feel like that would play nicer for this part. I'm really confused too because it's just a variation even though it's the same rhythm in the music.

01:51:735 (1) – Following up from above, what you could do is delete all the objects after this and make the spinner end here instead. Or maybe put a circle here and then delete everything after this. why was I the only one who mapped that lmao

http://puu.sh/yIQmQ/8e92792497.osu.

Kujinn

1,390 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kujinn 2018-03-01T11:53:41+00:00

Revived, will reply to mods soon.

_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2018-03-03T19:43:43+00:00

🎉

Kergio

140 posts

Joined December 2014

Kergio 2018-03-04T22:25:31+00:00

woah

beaw

637 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2018-03-04T23:03:00+00:00

yes

Kujinn

1,390 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kujinn 2018-04-28T10:45:26+00:00

should I switch to modv2?

Arutsuki

630 posts

Joined December 2015

Arutsuki 2018-05-06T14:13:24+00:00

don't go v2, only villains do that

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2018-05-23T17:03:54+00:00

hi

add tags >:

for all diffs:
hitsounding-wise its weird that every finish is placed with sacrificing the kick hitsound when you can easily use drum sampleset + soft additions to get the finish + the kick which is particularly obvious in places like 01:40:764 - (on the topdiff). there should be a kick here because every other pattern has one here, but because theres a finish somehow a kick isnt put here x_x

normal:
01:43:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole pattern looks out of place with the map, 1,2 is overlapped and 3,4 have the same visual distance from 2 which could be confusing to newer players. i think if you rearranged this a bit it could be more fitting and easier to understand, especially with rhythm this weird

00:34:935 - hitsounding here is weird with the rhythm you used. youre focusing vocals pretty hard which leaves random snares/kicks to sound on some beats. i think removing the drum hitsounds and replacing it with more whistles then starting the drums from 00:40:421 - where there's more density to support those hitsounds would be less jarring.

easy diff did this better by keeping the snares all covered by something, like 00:36:650 - 00:39:392 - are empty in this diff. if you want to cover those sounds it would be a lot better cuz the snare is usually the thing people keep constant in passive hitsounding anyways.. up to you what you want to do here

hard diff also suffers from this issue. same solutions are posed to it but it might be better to just remove the drum hitsounding and use more whistles since the rhythm heavily favors vocals

hard:
00:57:564 (3,4) - can you raise spacing to like 1.1x so these and similar patterns dont overlap?

01:22:250 (3) - implied flow says this should probably be straight, but up to you

01:36:392 - missing kick

01:49:078 (1) - honestly this seems like such a cop-out lol.. there's still stuff to map here even though theres a whirring sound in the back. really takes away from the full feeling of this part by just putting a spinner here. seems like more something i'd see in an easy/normal diff but definitely not in a hard diff (even the easy/normal mapped this out)

01:51:735 - this whole part has no hitsounds because nobody else mapped it, so add some whistles or something here

insane:

01:06:821 - would just continue the hitsounding on all 1/4, really weird to just hitsound 1/2 but be playing 1/4 especially when the song is doing 1/4

for all of these ncs 01:34:507 (1,2) - you could swap them because the blue tick doesnt really fit to be nc'd when the song emphasizes the white
for all of these triples 01:35:021 (4,5) - they seem exactly like 01:31:335 (2,3,4) - but dont have a drum on the 4, so a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/uaWDet6.png might fit if you want to follow the drums more. hitsound accordingly if you do

01:51:478 - skipped sound here that you mapped for 01:50:964 (1,2) - which seems weird. i get that you wanna keep the star pattern but it hurts the consistency. maybe try a 1/4 slider of some kind? or just a square pattern instead if you end up changing the rhythm

another:
00:02:021 (1,2,3,4) - vs. 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - contrast in density is way too high. i get the variation but going from circle + 1/1 reverse to 4 1/1 circles is too big of a change. it could be less contrasting if you replaced 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with 1/1 sliders instead like https://i.imgur.com/qSAWI1X.png which would fit way more imo

00:24:992 (6,7,8,9,1) - i wouldn't put full 5 note bursts in one of the calmest parts of the songs, even with this low spacing... it just feels like the calmness of the song isn't being represented well with having such high density spikes. i wouldn't do more than a triple for this part, and even then having too many triples in a row ruins the feel too so

00:36:307 - 00:37:421 - 00:44:535 (1) - 00:45:907 - kick hitsound

01:17:278 (2) - kinda expected this to be ctrl+g considering the rest of the pattern, even if 01:17:450 (1) - is further down it just plays better to me cuz its more expected and was done for 01:22:078 (2,2,2) - as well

speaking of 01:22:078 (2,2,2) -, 01:22:421 (2) - looks kinda out of place cuz of the overlap with 01:22:078 (2,2) - which makes it stand out a lot. maybe a pattern like https://i.imgur.com/1jKXXGi.jpg would be nice?

01:28:421 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is.. overkill imo. there's nothing significant on the white ticks to warrant a streamjump and not even the topdiff does any of this stuff. i can let the spaced 1/4 01:11:964 (1,2,3) - slide even though i don't think they are fitting either, but i cannot agree with the streamjumps here

01:41:792 - 01:43:164 - 01:44:535 - 01:47:278 - 01:48:650 - 01:50:021 - missing claps

uprising
00:39:907 - unsure why these are hitsounded with kicks and 00:34:935 - arent.. they're both kickdrums in the song so its probably worth covering both.

01:06:821 (1,2,1,2) - as i mentioned in the insane, the song does support 1/4 snares here so hitsounding that could be nice

double check your hitsounds cuz i found a lot of issues with them, and make sure they fit the rhythm of the diff you're copying to (if you use the copier) because with the normal and hard there's clear conflict between the rhythm mapped and the rhythm hitsounded

depending on the replies i get you may call me back for this.

Arutsuki

630 posts

Joined December 2015

Arutsuki 2018-05-23T19:01:52+00:00

Mir wrote:
hi

another:
00:02:021 (1,2,3,4) - vs. 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - contrast in density is way too high. i get the variation but going from circle + 1/1 reverse to 4 1/1 circles is too big of a change. it could be less contrasting if you replaced 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with 1/1 sliders instead like https://i.imgur.com/qSAWI1X.png which would fit way more imo i can change this if you really insist on it but it's literally just 1/1s... there's no real "contrast" apparent from it since it's so slow and mindless to play. it would be a whole different story with 1/2s for example but these slow rhythms don't really matter that much lol

00:24:992 (6,7,8,9,1) - i wouldn't put full 5 note bursts in one of the calmest parts of the songs, even with this low spacing... it just feels like the calmness of the song isn't being represented well with having such high density spikes. i wouldn't do more than a triple for this part, and even then having too many triples in a row ruins the feel too so I feel like they're justified cuz the background hi-hats go constantly and it's fitting to fill up rhythm gaps with it. like you said they're very low spacing which again makes it mindlessly simple to play compared to the other, more intense parts. even the part after puts the player more on edge with the rhtyhm complexity difference. density isn't the only factor

00:36:307 - 00:37:421 - 00:44:535 (1) - 00:45:907 - kick hitsound fixed

01:17:278 (2) - kinda expected this to be ctrl+g considering the rest of the pattern, even if 01:17:450 (1) - is further down it just plays better to me cuz its more expected and was done for 01:22:078 (2,2,2) - as well but then 01:11:792 (2) - wouldn't be consistent with those and there's no way it would play better ctrl+g. I can 01:22:764 (2) - ctrl+g this instead to keep it all consistent and well introduced

speaking of 01:22:078 (2,2,2) -, 01:22:421 (2) - looks kinda out of place cuz of the overlap with 01:22:078 (2,2) - which makes it stand out a lot. maybe a pattern like https://i.imgur.com/1jKXXGi.jpg would be nice? good point, i'll arrange it to overlap like 01:16:593 (2,2,2) -

01:28:421 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is.. overkill imo. there's nothing significant on the white ticks to warrant a streamjump and not even the topdiff does any of this stuff. i can let the spaced 1/4 01:11:964 (1,2,3) - slide even though i don't think they are fitting either, but i cannot agree with the streamjumps here yea i agree the difference isn't big enough for that spacing, changed so it keeps the quad formation but the jump isn't actually spaced with the exception of 01:29:364 (4,1) -

01:41:792 - 01:43:164 - 01:44:535 - 01:47:278 - 01:48:650 - 01:50:021 - missing claps wasnt too sure about it cuz it would just be giving feedback on something you don't click, but fixed now anyway

thank you for modding

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_orange

440 posts

Joined September 2015

_orange 2018-05-23T19:47:07+00:00

Mir wrote:
normal:
01:43:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole pattern looks out of place with the map, 1,2 is overlapped and 3,4 have the same visual distance from 2 which could be confusing to newer players. i think if you rearranged this a bit it could be more fitting and easier to understand, especially with rhythm this weird yeah i fixed this in a previous mod Reform/(or should i still say kujinn?) didn't see the post!!!11

reform said he was going to handle hs stuff
00:34:935 - hitsounding here is weird with the rhythm you used. youre focusing vocals pretty hard which leaves random snares/kicks to sound on some beats. i think removing the drum hitsounds and replacing it with more whistles then starting the drums from 00:40:421 - where there's more density to support those hitsounds would be less jarring.

easy diff did this better by keeping the snares all covered by something, like 00:36:650 - 00:39:392 - are empty in this diff. if you want to cover those sounds it would be a lot better cuz the snare is usually the thing people keep constant in passive hitsounding anyways.. up to you what you want to do here

@reform
APPLY THIS UPDATE FROM BEFORE p/6379894

Kergio

140 posts

Joined December 2014

Kergio 2018-05-23T20:48:09+00:00

Mir wrote:
hi

insane:

01:06:821 - would just continue the hitsounding on all 1/4, really weird to just hitsound 1/2 but be playing 1/4 especially when the song is doing 1/4
Reform is said he was gonna fix hitsounds and stuff

for all of these ncs 01:34:507 (1,2) - you could swap them because the blue tick doesnt really fit to be nc'd when the song emphasizes the white
Alright, Fixed NC's

for all of these triples 01:35:021 (4,5) - they seem exactly like 01:31:335 (2,3,4) - but dont have a drum on the 4, so a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/uaWDet6.png might fit if you want to follow the drums more. hitsound accordingly if you do. I think it's fine the way it is

01:51:478 - skipped sound here that you mapped for 01:50:964 (1,2) - which seems weird. i get that you wanna keep the star pattern but it hurts the consistency. maybe try a 1/4 slider of some kind? or just a square pattern instead if you end up changing the rhythm.
Alright fixed

Kujinn

1,390 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kujinn 2018-05-24T23:25:33+00:00

Mir wrote:
hi

add tags >:

for all diffs:
hitsounding-wise its weird that every finish is placed with sacrificing the kick hitsound when you can easily use drum sampleset + soft additions to get the finish + the kick which is particularly obvious in places like 01:40:764 - (on the topdiff). there should be a kick here because every other pattern has one here, but because theres a finish somehow a kick isnt put here x_x

normal:
01:43:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole pattern looks out of place with the map, 1,2 is overlapped and 3,4 have the same visual distance from 2 which could be confusing to newer players. i think if you rearranged this a bit it could be more fitting and easier to understand, especially with rhythm this weird

00:34:935 - hitsounding here is weird with the rhythm you used. youre focusing vocals pretty hard which leaves random snares/kicks to sound on some beats. i think removing the drum hitsounds and replacing it with more whistles then starting the drums from 00:40:421 - where there's more density to support those hitsounds would be less jarring.

easy diff did this better by keeping the snares all covered by something, like 00:36:650 - 00:39:392 - are empty in this diff. if you want to cover those sounds it would be a lot better cuz the snare is usually the thing people keep constant in passive hitsounding anyways.. up to you what you want to do here

hard diff also suffers from this issue. same solutions are posed to it but it might be better to just remove the drum hitsounding and use more whistles since the rhythm heavily favors vocals

hard:
00:57:564 (3,4) - can you raise spacing to like 1.1x so these and similar patterns dont overlap?

01:22:250 (3) - implied flow says this should probably be straight, but up to you

01:36:392 - missing kick

01:49:078 (1) - honestly this seems like such a cop-out lol.. there's still stuff to map here even though theres a whirring sound in the back. really takes away from the full feeling of this part by just putting a spinner here. seems like more something i'd see in an easy/normal diff but definitely not in a hard diff (even the easy/normal mapped this out)

01:51:735 - this whole part has no hitsounds because nobody else mapped it, so add some whistles or something here

insane:

01:06:821 - would just continue the hitsounding on all 1/4, really weird to just hitsound 1/2 but be playing 1/4 especially when the song is doing 1/4

for all of these ncs 01:34:507 (1,2) - you could swap them because the blue tick doesnt really fit to be nc'd when the song emphasizes the white
for all of these triples 01:35:021 (4,5) - they seem exactly like 01:31:335 (2,3,4) - but dont have a drum on the 4, so a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/uaWDet6.png might fit if you want to follow the drums more. hitsound accordingly if you do

01:51:478 - skipped sound here that you mapped for 01:50:964 (1,2) - which seems weird. i get that you wanna keep the star pattern but it hurts the consistency. maybe try a 1/4 slider of some kind? or just a square pattern instead if you end up changing the rhythm

another:
00:02:021 (1,2,3,4) - vs. 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - contrast in density is way too high. i get the variation but going from circle + 1/1 reverse to 4 1/1 circles is too big of a change. it could be less contrasting if you replaced 00:04:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with 1/1 sliders instead like https://i.imgur.com/qSAWI1X.png which would fit way more imo

00:24:992 (6,7,8,9,1) - i wouldn't put full 5 note bursts in one of the calmest parts of the songs, even with this low spacing... it just feels like the calmness of the song isn't being represented well with having such high density spikes. i wouldn't do more than a triple for this part, and even then having too many triples in a row ruins the feel too so

00:36:307 - 00:37:421 - 00:44:535 (1) - 00:45:907 - kick hitsound

01:17:278 (2) - kinda expected this to be ctrl+g considering the rest of the pattern, even if 01:17:450 (1) - is further down it just plays better to me cuz its more expected and was done for 01:22:078 (2,2,2) - as well

speaking of 01:22:078 (2,2,2) -, 01:22:421 (2) - looks kinda out of place cuz of the overlap with 01:22:078 (2,2) - which makes it stand out a lot. maybe a pattern like https://i.imgur.com/1jKXXGi.jpg would be nice?

01:28:421 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this is.. overkill imo. there's nothing significant on the white ticks to warrant a streamjump and not even the topdiff does any of this stuff. i can let the spaced 1/4 01:11:964 (1,2,3) - slide even though i don't think they are fitting either, but i cannot agree with the streamjumps here

01:41:792 - 01:43:164 - 01:44:535 - 01:47:278 - 01:48:650 - 01:50:021 - missing claps

uprising
00:39:907 - unsure why these are hitsounded with kicks and 00:34:935 - arent.. they're both kickdrums in the song so its probably worth covering both.

01:06:821 (1,2,1,2) - as i mentioned in the insane, the song does support 1/4 snares here so hitsounding that could be nice

double check your hitsounds cuz i found a lot of issues with them, and make sure they fit the rhythm of the diff you're copying to (if you use the copier) because with the normal and hard there's clear conflict between the rhythm mapped and the rhythm hitsounded

depending on the replies i get you may call me back for this.

fix hitsounds on all diffs and applied mods. Also added tags and stuff ~

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Mir 2018-05-25T20:41:12+00:00

hard
01:00:307 (3,4) - ds

insane
01:50:964 (1,2) - nc swap

another
yeah i still think the intro density switches too abruptly with 00:02:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - etc
the quints are.. in the wrong spot too i noticed after talking to lasse. https://i.imgur.com/hT6Wo9G.png should be https://i.imgur.com/pDmUdO1.png instead :/

01:29:364 (4,1) - spacing here should be similar to 01:28:678 (4,1) - cuz having the only streamjump in the map at the end of a 13 note stream 65% into the map is pretty cruel

01:30:821 (4,5) - also eehhh on second thought not really too much fan of these after looking more closely on the recheck. they feel a little too much in the context of the spread. for an insane these seem very forced into the map, it would fit more on an extra than an insane imo anyway cuz they just feel overdone. as i mentioned in my original post i dont really like them so much and thinking over it further, they're a core part of the structure of the map. i'll just leave it be assuming you aren't going to change them (which is kinda what i expect considering your previous reply)

anyways, since im basically saying im not particularly a fan of the concepts and density used in the another diff i'll take my leave. good luck with the set~

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Kujinn 2018-05-25T21:16:13+00:00

Arutsuki's Another removed as requested.

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Kergio 2018-05-25T21:24:12+00:00

Mir wrote:
insane
01:50:964 (1,2) - nc swap
yes

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Mir 2018-05-25T21:40:18+00:00

i didnt mean you had to remove it lol...

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Kujinn 2018-05-25T21:42:51+00:00

Mir wrote:
i didnt mean you had to remove it lol...

LOL, no, Arutsuki asked for it to be removed.

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Mir 2018-05-25T21:43:49+00:00

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also the hard diff.. would be nice if i had a reply so i know what changed @Stingy

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beaw 2018-05-25T22:24:18+00:00

Mir wrote:
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also the hard diff.. would be nice if i had a reply so i know what changed @Stingy

I’ve tried telling you twice that I remapped it and you modded before it updated but you never answered me

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Mir 2018-05-25T22:25:06+00:00

thats what the forums are for

so whats the status on it? is it remapped and up to date or..?

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beaw 2018-05-25T22:28:07+00:00

Mir wrote:
thats what the forums are for

so whats the status on it? is it remapped and up to date or..?

No I’m not at home and I haven’t sent it to Reform yet. ;/

Some parts of it are remapped though

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Mir 2018-05-28T20:25:43+00:00

stingy:
00:37:507 (1) - should be like this: https://i.imgur.com/MI7QTLj.png could just add a circle on 00:37:507 -
01:11:278 (3,2,3,4) - the stack is eww can you manually stack the triple underneath
01:34:935 (7) - could make these 1/4 reverses so you can capture the blue tick drum

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beaw 2018-05-29T17:44:41+00:00

Mir wrote:
stingy:
00:37:507 (1) - should be like this: https://i.imgur.com/MI7QTLj.png could just add a circle on 00:37:507 -
01:11:278 (3,2,3,4) - the stack is eww can you manually stack the triple underneath
01:34:935 (7) - could make these 1/4 reverses so you can capture the blue tick drum

fixed all will gib update when you inswer my ingame messages lmfao

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Kujinn 2018-05-30T22:31:14+00:00

Stingy wrote:
Mir wrote:
stingy:
00:37:507 (1) - should be like this: https://i.imgur.com/MI7QTLj.png could just add a circle on 00:37:507 -
01:11:278 (3,2,3,4) - the stack is eww can you manually stack the triple underneath
01:34:935 (7) - could make these 1/4 reverses so you can capture the blue tick drum
fixed all will gib update when you inswer my ingame messages lmfao

Updated ~

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Mir 2018-05-30T23:22:42+00:00

seems fine to me. tell me when you're ready to get this rolling

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Mir 2018-05-31T07:39:19+00:00

was told it's ready, lets go

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Kujinn 2018-06-25T18:41:42+00:00

self popped, fixed volumes on _orange's normal

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Strategas 2018-07-31T08:53:34+00:00

easy spinners needs more recovery time

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Kujinn 2018-07-31T19:26:16+00:00

Strategas wrote:
easy spinners needs more recovery time

Lowered both spinners to 1 measure rather than 1 and a half

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Strategas 2018-08-05T17:39:18+00:00

hard
00:18:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - first square with no emphasis on 4th note, the second is?

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DeRandom Otaku 2018-08-05T17:57:47+00:00

Normal and ex : 01:06:478 - Isn't the volume decrease too drastic here, The kick at 01:06:478 - is still really loud and 20% HS volume makes the hitobjects sound almost inaudible.

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Kujinn 2018-08-05T19:05:38+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Normal and ex : 01:06:478 - Isn't the volume decrease too drastic here, The kick at 01:06:478 - is still really loud and 20% HS volume makes the hitobjects sound almost inaudible.

Removed those points and have volume at 55%. It was initially for build up but now that I listen to the music, it isn't necessary.

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beaw 2018-08-06T01:50:19+00:00

Strategas wrote:
hard
00:18:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - first square with no emphasis on 4th note, the second is?

you explained in discord but I still don't understand

http://puu.sh/B9nhD/ae93935815.osu

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Kujinn 2018-08-06T10:48:59+00:00

updated stingy's diff

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Strategas 2018-08-06T20:09:21+00:00

for stingy
00:18:478 (1,2,3,4) - is a perfect square while 00:19:850 (1,2,3,4) - is not a perfect square - it has 00:20:878 (4) - spaced more than the rest. is there a reason for that?
can't really put it any other way

also kudosu my bub pop post ty

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beaw 2018-08-15T10:47:40+00:00

Strategas wrote:
for stingy
00:18:478 (1,2,3,4) - is a perfect square while 00:19:850 (1,2,3,4) - is not a perfect square - it has 00:20:878 (4) - spaced more than the rest. is there a reason for that?
can't really put it any other way

also kudosu my bub pop post ty

I really have no idea what you want but I already updated it so I hope it’s fine ;w; they’re all stacked now

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Strategas 2018-08-17T11:01:08+00:00

hmm lets try like this

00:19:850 (1,2,3) - has 0.85x ds spacing and 00:20:535 (3,4) - has 1.00x ds spacing making the square inperfect

it's really not a big deal just a thing I noticed and seems like a mistake, so would rather see that adjusted before nominating

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Mir 2018-08-17T11:17:03+00:00

maybe use pictures to illustrate what you mean..? xD

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Strategas 2018-08-17T11:36:00+00:00

thought about pictures, but I don't think it's obvious enough when it comes to polishing shapes

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