1. Survival (4.82 stars, 1432 notes)

What Did You Leave Me With ...


by ailv
by squirrelpascals


#2

Hakura wrote:

req

00:04:915 (1,2) - perhaps a lower spacing concept such as https://gabepower.s-ul.eu/pKjgA4d0 could work here, the guitar-ish sound here doesn't really stand out as much as the other sounds in the section I disagree with you saying it doesn't stand out as much as the other sounds here, the guitar is something really audible in this section that hasn't came up before, hence why i wanted to space it so much
00:11:812 (3) - rip no emphasis on this note (this counts for all 3s in this section) following the other sounds a
00:33:191 (1) - perhaps finish hitsound instead of clap would fit better here instead to signal the ending of the section better Because of the strong bass ending the section I'd rather have a strong hitsound going with it
00:52:674 (1) - unrankable issue occured! note seems to be accidentally moved over too much making it overlap with a circle. adviced to move the slider back on the timeline to 00:52:501 - OImg!, nice catch i didn't see that. I wonder how that might have happened Ow~o
00:55:260 (1,1) - leaving so many notes unmapped here makes this waiting rly boring when the song was just about to build up a bit, perhaps add a note somewhere inbetween to make it more funsies! (applies for other pattern too) Reason why I don't want to add a note is the fact that the held sound from 00:55:260 (1) - is something so strong that I wanted to underline how strong it is by leaving a gap between it and the next object. After the blue tick the initial held sound gets softer but thats the effect that i wanted to underline, strong effect gets hit rest is a sort of break, hence why sv lol!
01:06:294 (1,2) - shouldnt there be some overlapping pattern between these two cause u do it for on the rest of the same sound stuff too so it kinda looks inconsistent now (talking about patterns like 01:11:812 (1,2) - ) also UNRANKABLE offscreen Meh overlaps really add little to no effect imo about consistency, the part that matters most is that spacing and flow is kept to the standards also omg! nice catch on the offscrenn man :OOO fixed straight away
01:16:553 (2,4) - please mute the tails since they don't exist in the song n-word
01:37:329 (1) - dont rly think waveslider fits well together with the rest of your slider design concept as sound is still harsh so it'd be better to have some sharp corners i use quite a lot of waves and less sharpish angles : o, i think its fine. Mostly due to how it flows
01:44:915 (1) - could be done more with, special sound in the music so i think it could deserve some extra emphasis
02:01:467 (1,2) - again should be overlapping Doge Doge cOin
02:39:743 (2,3) - maybe something buildup related can be given here? its a bit bland to stack notes when a pitch is steadily increasing yah done
03:17:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - dunno if these should be clickable i mean the sound is almost not be heard anymore so to decrease density a bit overall i think slider with repeats would work here well again Wanted to keep a steady pattern going alongside the rest of the similar ones 03:13:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - plus there are sounds there to which it would feel weird to just randomly break a steady pattern for, i decreased the spacing which in my eyes is sufficient enough for it to work
03:46:294 (1) - maybe dont make this note look like it has to fit in with 03:46:639 (2,3,4,5) - ? sound is very very different ya ok fair
04:07:674 (4) - shouldnt be a reverse slider as later on in the section you don't put those in anymore so this looks like random filler rhythm same for 04:29:743 (4) - btw They're put in at the section beginnings to add a bit more a intro to the rhythm because of the large gap. In doing a repeat slider I'm showing the player the gap with the similar sounds that appear later, not doing so will result in possible missreads because of the spacing. Treat it as sort of an introduction to the gaps that i've created with the similar sounds
04:58:536 (1,2) - oopsie i think you meant to make a double here! move 04:58:536 (1) - to the right blue tick for better rhythms o o o o o o o Oo o, how did that happen, im foning microphone to fix my pc!
05:56:467 (1) - this slider actually feels inconsistent as it's the only one with a loop ever so it kinda throws the whole slider concept out of the window 01:20:605 (1) - 02:04:743 (1) - HE Lo
06:13:018 (3) - i find this slider a bit strange cause the tail feels way more impactful than the head, maybe try out making this place a circle and making 06:13:191 - a kickslider so you can follow more wubwubs the slider head follows the deep bases to which all these are mapped to 06:12:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - heh

deadpon3 wrote:

00:52:674 (1,2) - jak to jest w tym samym miejscu sliderend z kółkiem naprawione :OO

00:52:501 - ja myślę że tu jest spoko miejsce na kółko jak najbardziej, niepotrzebny break i trochę psuje pattern bo 00:51:812 (1,2,1) - wygląda jak jednostajny rytm bez brejka mapuje do tej gitarki na ktorej nie ma dzwieku takiego na ktorym chcialbym cos zmapowac xd

00:55:260 (1) - jak masz tą melodyjkę w tle to ją dopiero mapujesz na 00:56:294 (1) - a ona się zaczyna właśnie tu gdzie tego kickslidera zrobiłeś, a tam odkąd zacząłeś to mapować to to tak naprawdę zmienia ton tylko, weź na 00:55:260 - daj kółko albo jakiś krótki sliderek a potem powolny slider zacznij od 00:55:432 -

no i to samo tu 01:00:777 (1) - tak samo jak powiedzialem hakurze chce podkreslic jak mocny jest ten dzwiek na 00:55:260 (1) - po niebieskim ticku staje sie on mniej mocny wiec taka dluga przerwa dziala perfekcyjnie jako podkreslenie

01:11:812 (1,2) - a czemu taki overlap jak masz zajebiste miejsce na blanket? xD https://i.imgur.com/2wQ7WVe.png za duzy spacing :p czasami sa overlapy czasami blankety, najbardziej mi zalezalo o emphasis na nutkach

01:28:881 (2,3,4,5,6) - jak ten burst powinien też lecieć przez niebieski tick o tu 01:29:312 - tak to prawda, pominalem to specjalnie. Moze to zabrzmiec dziwnie ale chcialem to ominac z tego powodu ze mapa sama w sobie nie jest ciezka, tylko robiac ten stream section zmapowany w calosci sprawia ze wuby (ktore chcialem podkreslic najbardziej) nie wystawaly by tak bardzo jak wystaja teraz, ta roznica kolka jest dosc duza w stosunku do intensity. Plus bass jest na kazdej koncowce przed nastepnym objektem, plus pozwala mi to dac o wiele bardziej mocny emphasis na objecktach jak 01:29:398 (1,2) -

01:30:260 (1,2,3,4,5) - tu też, czemu olewasz cały burst i ucinasz ostatnie kółko lol

no i dużo tego jest z tymi burstami jeny ale będzie remap chociaż pewnie i tak to zostawisz xD phat dab

02:56:984 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - ale poszalałeś z gimmickami na tych burstach, ja nie wiem jak to jest z playablility takiego czegoś więc nie oceniam z tego co widzialem dobrze to pokazalem i dlatego ze 02:57:846 (1) - jest repeatem sprawia ze jest duzo miejsca na przyzwyczajenie sie do patternow w tej sekcji

04:14:570 (1) - możesz usunąć ten self-overlap pls? fajniej wyglada moim zdaniem DD

06:09:398 (2,3) - jak dla mnie to jump>stack w tym miejscu jak najbardziej troche taki MEGA jump zrobilem

06:26:036 (2) - czego ten ostatni dźwięk to jest sliderend a nie clickable object??? :vvvvvvvv nie jest tak mocny jak 02:56:639 (1) - na przyklad heh

super wub mapa gościu ez rank dzinks ^^

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00:14:570 (3,4,6) - make these into a triangle to make it more consistent with 00:12:846 (6) - spacing wise I would rather prefer keeping the overlap i have with 00:14:570 (3,4,5) - mostly because it's a repetition for the remainder of the patterns

00:40:777 (3) - 00:42:501 (4) - 00:43:536 (3) - could be sliders like 00:39:743 (4) - for more interesting rhythm I really don't want to overcomplicate the rhythm here, i think it's fine how it is right now, mostyl because its on a calm section

00:46:294 (2) - could be a 1/2 slider too for consistency on this kind of sound there's no guitar on it (( so I wanted to keep a gap instead

01:11:812 (1) - blanket it with 1 instead of overlapping, these overlaps don't really fit imo Again i don't want to overlap since it'll create a huge difference compared to the other patterns in terms of emphasis, sometimes its overlaps sometimes its blankets just depends on how strong the note ends up being

01:14:915 (2) - same as above, you could put it somewhere like x:120 y:153 01:14:312 (3) - that then overlaps with tih sew

01:55:950 (1,2) - ^ u do it a few more times later but yeah ye

02:29:398 (2,1) - stacks like this are throughout the map but they are either completely overlapped or just barely stacked, you could change them all to either one of those for the map to look way cleaner oh they should have been all stacked i see the barely overlapped thing doe ill fix all of those!

ailv wrote:

05:04:570 (2,3) - this is nc'd but not 05:48:708 (2,1) - , clean up all occurances of this don

06:08:880 (1,2,3) - I really don't like the times you use this it's kind of hard to read, and imo it's not really fitting, since they're not a specifc emphasis or anything. It's really not hard to read, the previous instance where they were a bit spaced was a bit hard to read, when it's stacked it's fine,
also specific emphasis goes onto 06:09:743 (1) - the most because 06:09:398 (2,3) - is a movement killer (to account for this sound here)

04:18:708 (4) - There's no gap here either, so it doesn't really make any sense to leave one, the bass is still active. I wanted to variate the stronger wubby sounds 04:19:053 (1,1) - from that one where it's kinda not noticable because of the strong kicks, doing that again adds emphasis onto the next notes because of that pause

04:00:088 - Can you drag this break, I don't think you need to keep the blue I want to keep the break drag for the effect of the vocals and all music stop

00:55:260 (1) - Imo the sound is on the red tick, can you extend and then not mute? i don't think it's needed I've answered this to hightec as well the strong pitch sound ends at the blue tick and the rest is just a weak continuation of that sound, wanted to emphasise that by keep the slider short like this

A major issue is with the hs here, I can't see any reason why only the kiai's are hitsounded to be reflective of the breaks, and not the entire song the entire dnb break is essentially constant, I'd heavily hevily suggest that you change this, The current hs sounds really weird when all of a sudden break related hs disspears and the kicks are just mapped with soft-hs DUDE YOURE SO CONFUSEING SADIN!!

02:34:570 - see this section vs 02:12:501 - dabs