Mitsuha Miyamizu(CV: Kamishiraishi Mone) - Nandemo Nai ya (m

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Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Cris_1 wrote:

Hi, NM from #modreqs

Just a Little More
Check the AiMod, if you see this had a few problems that should be fixed (Kiai, audio and size of the beatmap) )b
  1. 00:00:877 (1,2) - This patterns at the start don't represet correctly the vocals, imo you can put more notes here instead of a 1/2 and a loong slider I'm working on a permanent fix for this issue, as I'm thinking of moving slider arts to the big break and putting in ur suggestion in the beginning, or maybe some other ideas idk for now but something will be done
  2. 01:25:895 (1) - This ruins the low intensity of this section, try to keep more consistency hopefully fixed by using 1/12 reverse slider instead of 1/18
  3. 01:27:502 (2) - NC )b
  4. 01:27:502 (2,3,4,5) - Imo you can do a better pattern here I think it's fine as it is
  5. 01:31:430 (5,1) - Stack? I think looks nice because the piano I'll keep it as it is to emphasize the sound and timing pattern change
  6. 01:40:359 (7) - NC fixed nc problem in that whole area
  7. 01:41:609 (3,4,5,6) - The flow here is really bad :/ intentional for the change in vocal syntax (to which vocals I mapped in a horizontal motion flow)
  8. 02:37:145 (1,1,1) - In this streams please reduce the space between this will keep for now until more people complain
  9. 02:40:359 - In this point you follow the piano but 03:03:216 - here you follow the fiddle when the piano is most predominant I followed fiddle since it was the most dominant imo with sliders, and circles with significant vocals because the song slows down there
  10. 03:43:216 (8) - NC )b
  11. 03:40:359 (1) - Imo a 1/2 slider here and a circle 03:41:073 here sounds better nah, start of a new measure want to keep a long slider
  12. 03:45:716 (1,1,1,1) - Same as above same as above as well
  13. 03:47:502 (5) - This slider up looks better looks better this way
  14. 05:06:251 (7,1) - Add space between this notes please spaced a little more
  15. 05:44:644 - 5% volume inhirited here)b
GL~

Mou sukoshi dake de ii ato sukoshi dake de ii mou sukodhi dake de ii kara
Mou sukoshi dake de ii ato sukoshi dake de ii mou sukoshi dake kuttsuite iyou yo~<333
Thanks for the mod!


Asuka_- wrote:

nm
im not good at english sorry xd

General
uncheck countdown
pls set custom combocolor

you have meta sourse..?? thank you!~~

UniArtist:上白石萌音
Artist:Kamishiraishi Mone
UniTitle:なんでもないや(movie ver.)
Title:Nandemo Nai ya (movie ver.)

refs
http://kamishiraishimone.com/discography/cd.html
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/514204
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/515939

01:25:359 (7,8,1) - spacing issue fixed, I hope
01:44:823 (6) - if you follow vocal, remove this better because there is a big vocal at 01:45:002 - , so 01:44:823 (6) - before big vocal does not good work. fixed
02:25:538 - why did you skip big piano? xd (i think you follow piano mainy in this part) fixed
02:46:073 (1) - move to down better, because players may confuse 1/4 gap at 02:45:716 (4,1) - fixed i hope again
04:31:966 (1) - start at 04:31:788 - better imo. )b
05:03:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - tbh, placement of these dont match kiai time. I think that aim will not move so players will get bored. pls consider rework placement. fixed all of it, hope it's good
05:06:251 (7) - why did you follow not vocal only here? fixed, but idk if this is better. Both seem okay so I'll stick the changed one

[]
short mod. i think the diff need more mod. but not bad map. good luck.>w<//
Thank you~~~
makisokk
Hello from my que
[Just a Little More]
  • 00:29:645 (4) - hmm i think you can use here nc
    00:34:645 (1) - delete nc
    00:39:823 (4,5) - In my opinion it's better to swap them, because it's a quiet moment, and it's not so necessary jump 5-6
    00:54:645 (1,2,3,4,5) - I do not really understand this moment, I certainly saw what you did in the beginning for vocals, but almost in the whole part of the map you use the instrumental, so I think that you need to do here either one note or a slider
    01:25:954 (1) - Extend this slider by one tick, the sound ends here 01:26:133 -
    02:11:788 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here you have the wrong arrangement of the notes, you need to do this either in 1/12 or you do not have the correct timing/In my opinion, this is true throughout the map. Ask someone who knows this
    02:44:645 (6) - Raise the note above, for a better flow
    02:50:180 (4,5) - Do blanket?
    02:52:145 (3) - Raise Up, for a Straight Line
    02:52:859 (5,7) - fix blaket
    02:58:930 (6) - Move to the left
    03:28:930 (1,2,3) - before you did straight lines, why did you decide to do it differently this time?
    03:45:954 (1,1) - why big space?
    03:47:502 (5) - make the curve the other way
    04:18:216 (2,3,4) - move down
    05:01:787 (4,5,6) - In my opinion this is a bad flow
    05:11:430 (6) - maybe crtl+G?

okay it's all
Good luck
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que
[Just a Little More]
  • 00:29:645 (4) - hmm i think you can use here nc sure
    00:34:645 (1) - delete nc ok
    00:39:823 (4,5) - In my opinion it's better to swap them, because it's a quiet moment, and it's not so necessary jump 5-6 the jump isn't so big that it's very surprising to the player, and i want a faster cursor movement before the piano triple
    00:54:645 (1,2,3,4,5) - I do not really understand this moment, I certainly saw what you did in the beginning for vocals, but almost in the whole part of the map you use the instrumental, so I think that you need to do here either one note or a slider fixed
    01:25:954 (1) - Extend this slider by one tick, the sound ends here 01:26:133 - done
    02:11:788 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here you have the wrong arrangement of the notes, you need to do this either in 1/12 or you do not have the correct timing/In my opinion, this is true throughout the map. Ask someone who knows this will look into this
    02:44:645 (6) - Raise the note above, for a better flow fine as it is since 5 is lowered from 4
    02:50:180 (4,5) - Do blanket? soft blanket is fine
    02:52:145 (3) - Raise Up, for a Straight Line check again, it is a straight line already
    02:52:859 (5,7) - fix blaket edged over 2 pixels
    02:58:930 (6) - Move to the left no need for such a soft curve
    03:28:930 (1,2,3) - before you did straight lines, why did you decide to do it differently this time? 03:29:288 (3) - was placed like so instead of following a straight path so that I can make a triangle out of the shapes 03:29:109 (2,3,4) -
    03:45:954 (1,1) - why big space? to emphasize 03:46:073 (1) -
    03:47:502 (5) - make the curve the other way fine as it is imo
    04:18:216 (2,3,4) - move down done
    05:01:787 (4,5,6) - In my opinion this is a bad flow ok to me
    05:11:430 (6) - maybe crtl+G? sure

okay it's all
Good luck
Thanks for the mod~~
Avenora
from my mod queue

Ask AiMod first

00:34:645 (6,1) - switch NC (downbeat/long white tick reason)
03:46:125 (1) - move this closer to others so it makes a straight line
02:45:232 (1) - no NC
02:50:947 (1) - ^
05:38:132 - Red line here and move note here to sync with piano

that's all I can get, not enough skill to mod this beautiful map, sorry :s
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

C-Yuyuko wrote:

from my mod queue

Ask AiMod first )b

00:34:645 (6,1) - switch NC (downbeat/long white tick reason))b
03:46:125 (1) - move this closer to others so it makes a straight line fine as it is, as the next notes follow a straight line
02:45:232 (1) - no NC )b
02:50:947 (1) - ^ )b
05:38:132 - Red line here and move note here to sync with piano Fixed whole area, as I noticed a mistake there as you mentioned that. :p

that's all I can get, not enough skill to mod this beautiful map, sorry :s it's ok <3
Thanks for the mod!!~~
blueloniess
00:20:560 (1) - 00:14:846 (1) - wired slider
00:28:931 (1) - 01:25:954 (1) - Add flow in this part pls. too straight forward,maybe add some curved slider
01:27:680 (2,3) - why jump
01:46:430 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:48:930 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I think you can set a break time here to enjoy the music
02:11:838 - 02:33:980 - no flow here, too straight forward.
02:34:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make these six slider into two Triangle,that may looks better.you can make sliders like this one:02:40:768 (3,4,5) -
02:37:264 (1,1) - why nc here?
02:38:335 (1,1) - ^
02:46:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad blanket
03:46:840 (3,4,5) - you want to make a triangle here? Well this part is wired, I can hardly find flow here. use ctrl+G at 03:47:197 (4,5) - . then I think it can make much more sense

05:15:001 (10) - Ctrl+G. I can hardly get your thought at here. IDK why you break your flow here
05:17:901 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - maybe separate a little
05:23:640 (11) - Ctrl+G
05:32:144 (3) - nice slider.

Good luck!!! :)
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

blueloniess wrote:

00:20:560 (1) - 00:14:846 (1) - wired slider ?
00:28:931 (1) - 01:25:954 (1) - Add flow in this part pls. too straight forward,maybe add some curved slider straight sliders = piano there.
as u see in 00:54:645 (1,2,3) - , only these are curved in that section because that followed the distinct vocals there

01:27:680 (2,3) - why jump 01:27:502 (1,2) - and 01:27:859 (3,4) - are in pairs. thus a jump between the two
01:46:430 (7) - Ctrl+G ok
01:48:930 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I think you can set a break time here to enjoy the music the slider only part is calm enough to let the player enjoy the music
02:11:838 - 02:33:980 - no flow here, too straight forward. rhythm is simple, and what do you mean no flow?
02:34:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make these six slider into two Triangle,that may looks better.you can make sliders like this one:02:40:768 (3,4,5) - fine as it is
02:37:264 (1,1) - why nc here? the quad is 1/3 rhythm
02:38:335 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:46:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad blanket wasn't blanketing, i was making symmetry
03:46:840 (3,4,5) - you want to make a triangle here? Well this part is wired, I can hardly find flow here. use ctrl+G at 03:47:197 (4,5) - . then I think it can make much more sense I just wanted to emphasize 03:47:554 (5) -

05:15:001 (10) - Ctrl+G. I can hardly get your thought at here. IDK why you break your flow here flow is consistent before the new combo.
after new combo, i wanted that flow break because look at the timing on the NC slider...

05:17:901 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - maybe separate a little no. i don't want a big diff spike like that. This is big enough
05:23:640 (11) - Ctrl+G ok
05:32:144 (3) - nice slider.<3

Good luck!!! :)
Thanks for the mod >w<//
Jemzuu
hi from my Q (quite late but better late than never)

optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change

General
  1. i approve the tags :^)
  2. increase ar by .1 pls
  3. please change combo colors D: choose something that blends with the bg
Just a Little More
  1. 00:29:823 (2,3) - i feel like u could ctrl g these to be consistent with 00:35:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  2. 00:36:073 (5) - nc would fit here
  3. 00:36:788 (4) - ^
  4. 01:05:716 - ur missing the sound here :c i'd make this repeat instead
  5. 01:13:216 (5) - idk but i feel like u could emphasize the blue tick as well by making it a slider instead to acoid repititiveness for this part lo then make nescessary spacing adjustments after
  6. 01:16:788 (4) - same as what i pointed out on 01:05:716 -
  7. 01:27:859 (3,5) - i'd nc for emphasis
  8. 01:29:109 (2) - delet this note to follow the music like what u did on 01:31:609 - and other parts
  9. 01:45:002 (1,2) - swap ncs for consistency
  10. 01:48:216 (5) - u could overlap this to 01:47:145 (2) - imo for better spacing emphasis
  11. 01:56:131 - u could add a note here to make the transition of the music more emphasized
  12. 02:00:059 - here u could emphasize the bass of the violin whynot add a note here as well
  13. 02:12:195 (3) - quite underspaced imo make it simillar as 02:14:695 (1,2,3) -
  14. 02:33:266 (5,6) - would prefer a 1/2 slider instead
  15. 03:49:518 (2) - delet note to avoid overmapping
  16. 03:51:304 (10) - i'd delete this note too and make a repeat instead make necessary adjustments after
  17. 03:52:375 (2) - pls delet note here and extend the slider instead make adjustments for the next sliders after
  18. 03:55:232 (2) - like what i mentioned before delet this note cus there's no specific sound on this part that supports the music at all and to avoid overmapping
  19. 03:59:518 (6) - ^
  20. 04:03:804 (2) - ^
  21. 04:20:054 (1) - place this on the right side instead to emphasize the spacing
  22. 04:27:554 - missing note add circle here then stack it as well
  23. 04:54:518 (1) - add a timing point here and lower the volume to emphasize the piano sound
  24. 04:55:054 - spinner should start here and end 04:57:554 - here
  25. 05:07:680 (2,5) - these notes seems unncessary for me tbh cus it doesnt emphasizes nor clicks a specific sound cus the most prominent sound here is the vocals delet thiese two instead
  26. 05:08:930 (4) - make this a repeat slider instead then add 2 circles for 05:09:466 (5) -
  27. 05:09:823 (1) - delete this note after
  28. 05:17:723 (6) - pls delete this too
  29. 05:17:902 - aaaaaaaa i love this part <3
  30. 05:34:286 (1) - overlap the sliderend of this to 05:32:144 (3) -
  31. 05:38:130 (2) - remove finish sounds better imo or just add a timing point here and lower the volume

    1. 01:35:895 (5) -
    2. 02:41:840 (6) -
    3. 02:16:480 (6) - nc perhaps cus it has different sound
    4. 02:19:338 (5) - ^
    5. 02:21:838 (5) - ^
    6. 02:30:409 (5) -
    7. 02:41:840 (6) -
    8. 02:44:697 (6) -
    9. 02:58:982 (6) -
    10. 03:56:125 (6) -
    11. 04:04:697 (6) -
    12. 05:02:501 (7) -
    13. 05:10:358 (1) - remove nc
    14. 05:10:001 (7) -
    15. 05:13:930 (6) -
    16. 05:22:568 (7) -

welp that's about it I hope i helped!! <3
goodluck~~
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru
Idk why but I can't reply to you @AJamez so I'll do a budget reply :3



hi from my Q (quite late but better late than never)

optional to change | unrankable | suggested to change

General
i approve the tags :^) :^)
increase ar by .1 pls hmmm I'll ask around for more opinions on that
please change combo colors D: choose something that blends with the bg I don't think that's a good idea, since people playing with dim (myself included) will have trouble reading if the circles are similar colors to the bg

Just a Little More
00:29:823 (2,3) - i feel like u could ctrl g these to be consistent with 00:35:359 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the pitch pattern changes from climbing to falling, so a rotational flow change is warranted
00:36:073 (5) - nc would fit here sure
00:36:788 (4) - ^ mmm ok
01:05:716 - ur missing the sound here :c i'd make this repeat instead I dont hear anything there
01:13:216 (5) - idk but i feel like u could emphasize the blue tick as well by making it a slider instead to acoid repititiveness for this part lo then make nescessary spacing adjustments after I think it's fine as it is
01:16:788 (4) - same as what i pointed out on 01:05:716 - it's just the "eto" part is a vocal that pops out more to the listener
01:27:859 (3,5) - i'd nc for emphasis hmm, it'll also help with reading, yeah that's a good idea
01:29:109 (2) - delet this note to follow the music like what u did on 01:31:609 - and other parts fine as it is
01:45:002 (1,2) - swap ncs for consistency ok
01:48:216 (5) - u could overlap this to 01:47:145 (2) - imo for better spacing emphasis nah, I'm avoiding overlaps
01:56:131 - u could add a note here to make the transition of the music more emphasized i'm only following violin here
02:00:059 - here u could emphasize the bass of the violin whynot add a note here as well eh ,it's fine as it is
02:12:195 (3) - quite underspaced imo make it simillar as 02:14:695 (1,2,3) - 02:14:695 - is stronger, thus a change from before. Also it's right after a spinner, so i want to ease into spacing and start small after the "break" (ie where i was just following violin with slow sliders)
02:33:266 (5,6) - would prefer a 1/2 slider instead mmm the slider end would land on a pretty significant note
03:49:518 (2) - delet note to avoid overmapping kiai justifies it
03:51:304 (10) - i'd delete this note too and make a repeat instead make necessary adjustments after fine as it is
03:52:375 (2) - pls delet note here and extend the slider instead make adjustments for the next sliders after ^
03:55:232 (2) - like what i mentioned before delet this note cus there's no specific sound on this part that supports the music at all and to avoid overmapping as said before, and deleting that is awkward as the pause can be weird in the kiai
03:59:518 (6) - ^ .
04:03:804 (2) - ^
04:20:054 (1) - place this on the right side instead to emphasize the spacing it's ok as it is
04:27:554 - missing note add circle here then stack it as well no violin sound there
04:54:518 (1) - add a timing point here and lower the volume to emphasize the piano sound ok
04:55:054 - spinner should start here and end 04:57:554 - here ok
05:07:680 (2,5) - these notes seems unncessary for me tbh cus it doesnt emphasizes nor clicks a specific sound cus the most prominent sound here is the vocals delet thiese two instead kiai filler rhythm
05:08:930 (4) - make this a repeat slider instead then add 2 circles for 05:09:466 (5) - sliders follow vocals, it's good as it is
05:09:823 (1) - delete this note after ^
05:17:723 (6) - pls delete this too ^
05:17:902 - aaaaaaaa i love this part <3 :D
05:34:286 (1) - overlap the sliderend of this to 05:32:144 (3) - it's already overlapping?
05:38:130 (2) - remove finish sounds better imo or just add a timing point here and lower the volumegood as it is, aka i really dont want to change every finish volume

the NC i I think as long as I'm consistent I'm fine, so no changes as of yet


Thanks for the mod!~~ >w<//
Einja
highlight all green and red lines at once and switch the sample to S:C1

enjoy your muted slider sound
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Einja wrote:

highlight all green and red lines at once and switch the sample to S:C1

enjoy your muted slider sound
:eyes:
Time Capsule
the timing killed me with how unorganized it is

[TimingPoints]
810,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
7410,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
13990,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
20740,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
28960,714.285714285714,4,2,1,60,1,0
337174,923.076923076923,4,2,1,60,1,0

if you does apply that new timing section I may back and give some words
btw its only bpm points
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Time Capsule wrote:

the timing killed me with how unorganized it is

[TimingPoints]
810,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
7410,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
13990,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
20740,810.810810810811,4,2,1,60,1,0
28960,714.285714285714,4,2,1,60,1,0
337174,923.076923076923,4,2,1,60,1,0

if you does apply that new timing section I may back and give some words
btw its only bpm points
I didn't copy paste your timing points, but some of the sections u noted were mistimed, so I fixed them with the help of a couple other mappers >w<//

Thanks!
Hari
kwk
q
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Not really a fan of the intro but, not much you can do about it if you dont want it to be skippable
00:40:051 (5,6) - not too sure about making this a jump, doesnt really feel like its warranted since it is a bit sudden.
01:13:262 (5) - i think whistles here a bit better since the claps are pretty noisy
01:16:834 (4) - im guessing this is for the vocals, so why do these get ignored? 01:20:941 - 01:22:369 - ? I think its fine to just keep it as a note imo, dont really see the need to overcomplicate it
01:30:226 (5) - i think it would be nice if this was deleted so you get a pause between 01:29:691 (4,1) - since the vocal here is rather quiet and not very noticeable. it'll emphasise 01:30:405 (1) - very nicely
01:35:048 (2,3,4) - you have same ds here 01:32:191 (2,3,4) - but why not here as well ? 01:35:048 (2,3,4) -
01:43:976 (4) - split this into 2 notes? vocals on slider ends is a bit mm, if you change it, it'll be more consistent with 01:41:476 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm wise and contrasts with 01:42:548 (4,5,6) -
01:45:405 (2,6) - these arent symmetrical if your intending them to be
02:12:195 (3) - same thing as earlier, i still think keeping the section entirely whistles is better but up to you
02:48:804 (8,1) - not too sure about the jump here, its like the biggest jump so far in such a calm section
02:54:518 (9) - unecessary note? not sure what its mapped to. Besides i think a pause is a nicer feeling here
02:56:661 (2,3,4,5) - be cool if you made this similar to 02:45:232 (7,8,9,10) - 02:50:947 (6,7,8,9) -
03:03:268 (1) - is slider tail meant to be snapped to blue tick?
03:03:269 the transition to the undermapping here is a bit strange, cause to me, the sectionw before to this is basically the same, yet the transition is very sudden, its not like the music disappeared
03:05:411 (2,3) - i think it would be better if u change 3 to a slider and delete 2 if your trying to follow vocals since theres nothing on the white tick
03:08:269 (2) - same here about the white tick thing, nothing happens here but you hitsounded a clap on it :?:
03:29:340 (3) -03:30:768 (7) - would be cool if you ctrl+g this maybe
03:48:982 (1,2) - maybe extend the slider to where 2 is or delete 2? i dont think it really needs to be clickable
03:49:697 (3,4,8) - the fact that this isnt a triangle but 03:50:054 (5,6,8) - is tilts me
03:51:840 (1,2,3) - why is this so different to 03:53:268 (5,6,7) - with regards to spacing? i noticed you kinda repeat it a bit later too , but i do think having similar spacing would be better
04:08:268 (2) - whats happening on this beat? would follow piano if it was on the blue or vocal on the red..
05:13:394 (3,4,5,6) - not really a fan of how this is a curve after all the triangle/linear patterns it seems a bit inconsistent, maybe something like this is better slightly? http://puu.sh/xIczD/98a8dbe8f6.png
hmm 2nd half of the last kiai seems a bit rushed..
your long sliders at the end are unrankable since u cant tell which direction it goes, try and unstack the head/tail slightly
~
cool style
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

kwk wrote:

q
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Not really a fan of the intro but, not much you can do about it if you dont want it to be skippable I will look for fix when I get ideas uwu
00:40:051 (5,6) - not too sure about making this a jump, doesnt really feel like its warranted since it is a bit sudden. ctrl+g 4 and 5
01:13:262 (5) - i think whistles here a bit better since the claps are pretty noisy )b
01:16:834 (4) - im guessing this is for the vocals, so why do these get ignored? 01:20:941 - 01:22:369 - ? I think its fine to just keep it as a note imo, dont really see the need to overcomplicate it )b
01:30:226 (5) - i think it would be nice if this was deleted so you get a pause between 01:29:691 (4,1) - since the vocal here is rather quiet and not very noticeable. it'll emphasise 01:30:405 (1) - very nicely imo instead of emphasizing, i think the dead air is just awkward
01:35:048 (2,3,4) - you have same ds here 01:32:191 (2,3,4) - but why not here as well ? 01:35:048 (2,3,4) - 01:32:191 (2,3,4) - the slider is different in this pattern that the other ones with bigger spacing (vocal is softer)
01:43:976 (4) - split this into 2 notes? vocals on slider ends is a bit mm, if you change it, it'll be more consistent with 01:41:476 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm wise and contrasts with 01:42:548 (4,5,6) - )b i don't know why i ignored the vocal when I mapped it, as I was following the vocals :/
01:45:405 (2,6) - these arent symmetrical if your intending them to be no i was just following a honeycomb structure
02:12:195 (3) - same thing as earlier, i still think keeping the section entirely whistles is better but up to you mm this section i think the claps are fine
02:48:804 (8,1) - not too sure about the jump here, its like the biggest jump so far in such a calm section fixed
02:54:518 (9) - unecessary note? not sure what its mapped to. Besides i think a pause is a nicer feeling here filler rhythm
02:56:661 (2,3,4,5) - be cool if you made this similar to 02:45:232 (7,8,9,10) - 02:50:947 (6,7,8,9) - changed
03:03:268 (1) - is slider tail meant to be snapped to blue tick? sv change didnt register D: i fixed the sv so its good now
03:03:269 the transition to the undermapping here is a bit strange, cause to me, the sectionw before to this is basically the same, yet the transition is very sudden, its not like the music disappeared ^
03:05:411 (2,3) - i think it would be better if u change 3 to a slider and delete 2 if your trying to follow vocals since theres nothing on the white tick
03:08:269 (2) - same here about the white tick thing, nothing happens here but you hitsounded a clap on it :?:short sliders are violin oscillations, circles are vocals
03:29:340 (3) -03:30:768 (7) - would be cool if you ctrl+g this maybe will keep that in mind, but for now I like the pattern i have
03:48:982 (1,2) - maybe extend the slider to where 2 is or delete 2? i dont think it really needs to be clickable filler rhythm since the slider being that long is a bit awkward imo
03:49:697 (3,4,8) - the fact that this isnt a triangle but 03:50:054 (5,6,8) - is tilts me 8 is supposed to be right in the center between 03:50:232 (6,7) - , just coincidence it makes a triangle lol
03:51:840 (1,2,3) - why is this so different to 03:53:268 (5,6,7) - with regards to spacing? i noticed you kinda repeat it a bit later too , but i do think having similar spacing would be better im emphasizing the finishes
04:08:268 (2) - whats happening on this beat? would follow piano if it was on the blue or vocal on the red.. i tried both options, and everyone that playtested said it was weird af since it doesnt follow rhythm (the song itself is weird as it doesnt follow music intuition). Just having equal timing space between the sliders and the circle sounds best
05:13:394 (3,4,5,6) - not really a fan of how this is a curve after all the triangle/linear patterns it seems a bit inconsistent, maybe something like this is better slightly? http://puu.sh/xIczD/98a8dbe8f6.png )b
hmm 2nd half of the last kiai seems a bit rushed.. uwu
your long sliders at the end are unrankable since u cant tell which direction it goes, try and unstack the head/tail slightly )b
~
cool style
Thanks for the mod!~~~
Eir_DELETED
mitsuha ver.

Just a Little More

  1. default soft finish and clap are clearly improper stuffs with the song like composed one. i suggest you prepare custom hitsounds for them at least.
     
  2. 00:00:877 - ~ 00:25:638 - the section prob runs the risk of unrankable issue cuz the sliders arent audible according to Raking Criteria. should avoid to mute slider slide and slider tick both to use 5% volume of green lines.
     
  3. 00:07:410 (1) - the slider shape doesnt look nice in my view. if you aim for ranked, you care of aesthetics stuff even long sliders. in case you have a reasonable intention as the slider, this shall not apply tho. 00:20:638 (1) - same
     
  4. 01:16:834 (4) - i prefer to replace a circle instead since there are only quite weak vocal on blue tick and i seem you focus to beat piano sound at the whole.
     
  5. 01:23:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the concept is really my preference! Good Job!! but you would be better to raise the distance a bit on 01:25:405 (7,8) - not same distance with 01:25:048 (6,7) - since through the 01:23:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - placement, there is most emphasized piano on here.
     
  6. 01:25:048 (6,1) - doesnt look nice on editor since your placement pattern basically doesnt overlap in my view
     
  7. 01:26:000 (1) - reduce a reverse only once cuz 01:26:179 - doesnt follow anything imo
     
  8. 02:40:412 - 03:03:269 - the section has too much intense like last kiai part despite of not a excited section. i recommend you remove the objects that are following vocal mainly for consistent with 00:40:408 - ~ 01:03:262 - as a tip. i assume you have not to remove objects extremely like a former part tho
     
  9. 02:40:412 - inconsistent volume green line and red line each other. it's an unrankable issue. 05:21:140 - 05:25:716 - same
     
  10. 03:45:887 (1,1) - what sound are you following to use 1/6's rhythm for the song? it makes more sense to snap 1/4 accurately as far as i could hear
     
  11. 04:58:216 - 05:27:680 - plz check "kiai mode" on red lines same time.
     
  12. 05:25:068 (5,1) - completely unfit stack with your map cuz you havent been used any else.
     
  13. 05:32:144 (3) - should avoid the slider shape cuz it doesn't entirely sure the direction of movement according ranking criteria. 05:35:001 (2) - 05:38:130 (2) - same.

as far as i could see, you would need effort on hitsounding and the intense that i pointed out. and find more effective opinions from mappers or modders.but it's fun for me in terms of playable stuff! if you have some question about my suggestion, dont hesitate to ask me~
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

joker- wrote:

mitsuha ver.

Just a Little More

  1. default soft finish and clap are clearly improper stuffs with the song like composed one. i suggest you prepare custom hitsounds for them at least. I'm looking for hitsounds uwu
     
  2. 00:00:877 - ~ 00:25:638 - the section prob runs the risk of unrankable issue cuz the sliders arent audible according to Raking Criteria. should avoid to mute slider slide and slider tick both to use 5% volume of green lines. mmmm people have told me it's still rankable. I'll ask around more and decide then
     
  3. 00:07:410 (1) - the slider shape doesnt look nice in my view. if you aim for ranked, you care of aesthetics stuff even long sliders. in case you have a reasonable intention as the slider, this shall not apply tho. 00:20:638 (1) - same I'll fix it when I get ideas uwu
     
  4. 01:16:834 (4) - i prefer to replace a circle instead since there are only quite weak vocal on blue tick and i seem you focus to beat piano sound at the whole. fixed
     
  5. 01:23:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the concept is really my preference! Good Job!! but you would be better to raise the distance a bit on 01:25:405 (7,8) - not same distance with 01:25:048 (6,7) - since through the 01:23:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - placement, there is most emphasized piano on here.
    fixed
     
  6. 01:25:048 (6,1) - doesnt look nice on editor since your placement pattern basically doesnt overlap in my view ^
     
  7. 01:26:000 (1) - reduce a reverse only once cuz 01:26:179 - doesnt follow anything imo ok
     
  8. 02:40:412 - 03:03:269 - the section has too much intense like last kiai part despite of not a excited section. i recommend you remove the objects that are following vocal mainly for consistent with 00:40:408 - ~ 01:03:262 - as a tip. i assume you have not to remove objects extremely like a former part tho I think the simple jump patterns make up for the spacing. Don't think it's too intense.
     
  9. 02:40:412 - inconsistent volume green line and red line each other. it's an unrankable issue. 05:21:140 - 05:25:716 - same fixed
     
  10. 03:45:887 (1,1) - what sound are you following to use 1/6's rhythm for the song? it makes more sense to snap 1/4 accurately as far as i could hear I'm following the violin oscillations
     
  11. 04:58:216 - 05:27:680 - plz check "kiai mode" on red lines same time. fixed
     
  12. 05:25:068 (5,1) - completely unfit stack with your map cuz you havent been used any else. used to help differentiate the timing oddity,
    as the song suddenly changes beat with the vocals

     
  13. 05:32:144 (3) - should avoid the slider shape cuz it doesn't entirely sure the direction of movement according ranking criteria. 05:35:001 (2) - 05:38:130 (2) - same. fixed

as far as i could see, you would need effort on hitsounding and the intense that i pointed out. and find more effective opinions from mappers or modders.but it's fun for me in terms of playable stuff! if you have some question about my suggestion, dont hesitate to ask me~ <3
Good Luck!
Thanks for the mod!~~~ >w<//
Lilyanna
from my queue

general
04:34:340 - 04:54:519 - maybe leave this a break if u want
tags lmao
idk what the combo colors yellow and red has to do with but i assume the twilight maybe try pastel colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,100
Combo2 : 85,225,255
Combo3 : 253,255,255
Combo4 : 255,100,100

not general
00:20:638 (1) - this slider art can be confusing in the end the path is not so clear like this http://puu.sh/xNn0R/25ecc0a7fc.jpg
01:27:905 (1,2) - if u ctrl g these it will fit better the intens music
02:12:909 (1) - the sound of her vocal on blue tick sound stronger maybe make it clickable like here 02:11:838 (1,2,3) - and stack them on head of 02:13:266 (2) -
02:51:840 (1,4) - avoid this small overlap is not appealing
03:08:625 (3) - ctrl for the flow break here to emphasize more the finish sound here 03:08:983 (1) -
03:11:840 (3) - nc should be here to be consistent
03:20:054 (3) - same as before
03:21:840 (3) - a 1/2 repeat here can do better because of the sound that the slider body ignores here 03:22:197 -
03:25:947 (3,4) - u mapped 1/8 stacks differntly as 03:45:769 (1,1,1) - and same as 1/4 that way these 03:25:947 (3,4,1) - can be confused of 1/4 so maybe keep mapping them diffrent
03:46:006 (1,1) - dont think its needed to space the 1/8 here this is the only time u did it
04:06:125 (1) - this slider art can look lot smoother maybe smth like this http://puu.sh/xNmvp/94e70f1327.jpg
04:08:269 (2) - this note is overmapped there not audible clickable sound there
05:29:287 - this vocals feels need to be mapped maybe try add 1/2 slider there http://puu.sh/xNmHu/d58130b9bb.jpg

neat map over all good luck.
Topic Starter
Hishiro Chizuru

Lilyanna wrote:

from my queue

general
04:34:340 - 04:54:519 - maybe leave this a break if u want nu it'd be a pretty big break.
tags lmao :3
idk what the combo colors yellow and red has to do with but i assume the twilight maybe try pastel colors )b
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,100
Combo2 : 85,225,255
Combo3 : 253,255,255
Combo4 : 255,100,100

not general
00:20:638 (1) - this slider art can be confusing in the end the path is not so clear like this http://puu.sh/xNn0R/25ecc0a7fc.jpg )b
01:27:905 (1,2) - if u ctrl g these it will fit better the intens music )b maybe a bit too spaced but I'll change it to that
02:12:909 (1) - the sound of her vocal on blue tick sound stronger maybe make it clickable like here 02:11:838 (1,2,3) - and stack them on head of 02:13:266 (2) - not mapping to vocals, only to piano, sure it's clickable, but if I mapped it I wouldn't be being consistent
02:51:840 (1,4) - avoid this small overlap is not appealing )b
03:08:625 (3) - ctrl for the flow break here to emphasize more the finish sound here 03:08:983 (1) - want to keep the "sweeping" motion to emphasize the violin sweep
03:11:840 (3) - nc should be here to be consistent )b
03:20:054 (3) - same as before same explanation as before
03:21:840 (3) - a 1/2 repeat here can do better because of the sound that the slider body ignores here 03:22:197 - mmm vocals aren't being followed in this section so...
03:25:947 (3,4) - u mapped 1/8 stacks differntly as 03:45:769 (1,1,1) - and same as 1/4 that way these 03:25:947 (3,4,1) - can be confused of 1/4 so maybe keep mapping them diffrent fine as it is imo, different timing = different spacing so . . .
03:46:006 (1,1) - dont think its needed to space the 1/8 here this is the only time u did it emphasis is required for the slider
04:06:125 (1) - this slider art can look lot smoother maybe smth like this http://puu.sh/xNmvp/94e70f1327.jpg )b
04:08:269 (2) - this note is overmapped there not audible clickable sound there keeping it for now as without it the beat is killed. Am looking for a solution tho so I'll change it soon probably
05:29:287 - this vocals feels need to be mapped maybe try add 1/2 slider there http://puu.sh/xNmHu/d58130b9bb.jpg the vocals are custom hitsounds btw xd

neat map over all good luck. <3
Thank you for the mod!~~ >w<//
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