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Not really a fan of the intro but, not much you can do about it if you dont want it to be skippable
00:40:051 (5,6) - not too sure about making this a jump, doesnt really feel like its warranted since it is a bit sudden.
01:13:262 (5) - i think whistles here a bit better since the claps are pretty noisy
01:16:834 (4) - im guessing this is for the vocals, so why do these get ignored? 01:20:941 - 01:22:369 - ? I think its fine to just keep it as a note imo, dont really see the need to overcomplicate it
01:30:226 (5) - i think it would be nice if this was deleted so you get a pause between 01:29:691 (4,1) - since the vocal here is rather quiet and not very noticeable. it'll emphasise 01:30:405 (1) - very nicely
01:35:048 (2,3,4) - you have same ds here 01:32:191 (2,3,4) - but why not here as well ? 01:35:048 (2,3,4) -
01:43:976 (4) - split this into 2 notes? vocals on slider ends is a bit mm, if you change it, it'll be more consistent with 01:41:476 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm wise and contrasts with 01:42:548 (4,5,6) -
01:45:405 (2,6) - these arent symmetrical if your intending them to be
02:12:195 (3) - same thing as earlier, i still think keeping the section entirely whistles is better but up to you
02:48:804 (8,1) - not too sure about the jump here, its like the biggest jump so far in such a calm section
02:54:518 (9) - unecessary note? not sure what its mapped to. Besides i think a pause is a nicer feeling here
02:56:661 (2,3,4,5) - be cool if you made this similar to 02:45:232 (7,8,9,10) - 02:50:947 (6,7,8,9) -
03:03:268 (1) - is slider tail meant to be snapped to blue tick?
03:03:269 the transition to the undermapping here is a bit strange, cause to me, the sectionw before to this is basically the same, yet the transition is very sudden, its not like the music disappeared
03:05:411 (2,3) - i think it would be better if u change 3 to a slider and delete 2 if your trying to follow vocals since theres nothing on the white tick
03:08:269 (2) - same here about the white tick thing, nothing happens here but you hitsounded a clap on it
03:29:340 (3) -03:30:768 (7) - would be cool if you ctrl+g this maybe
03:48:982 (1,2) - maybe extend the slider to where 2 is or delete 2? i dont think it really needs to be clickable
03:49:697 (3,4,8) - the fact that this isnt a triangle but 03:50:054 (5,6,8) - is tilts me
03:51:840 (1,2,3) - why is this so different to 03:53:268 (5,6,7) - with regards to spacing? i noticed you kinda repeat it a bit later too , but i do think having similar spacing would be better
04:08:268 (2) - whats happening on this beat? would follow piano if it was on the blue or vocal on the red..
05:13:394 (3,4,5,6) - not really a fan of how this is a curve after all the triangle/linear patterns it seems a bit inconsistent, maybe something like this is better slightly?
http://puu.sh/xIczD/98a8dbe8f6.pnghmm 2nd half of the last kiai seems a bit rushed..
your long sliders at the end are unrankable since u cant tell which direction it goes, try and unstack the head/tail slightly
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cool style