Nevo wrote:
henlo
remove "Mitsuha is such a qt" from tags lol maybe add like "your name nandemonaiya kimi no na wa"
00:14:846 (2) - this slider looks super pretty but doesn't really have a clear path to where it's going like I couldn't tell where from a glance in play. Fix00:37:551 (1) - I say stack the head of this slider to 00:37:194 (3) - since you kinda do the same thing with 00:30:408 (1) - fix
00:40:229 (5,1) - I say just extend the slider to 00:40:229 - since the circle may be kinda confusing to play.white tick is too significant imo
00:41:834 (2) - I say nc this if you do the point above ^
00:43:262 (2) - remove the nc on this one since its not the downbeat )b
00:44:691 (2) - NC this since it's a downbeat (and you can tell it's more important than the piano key before) )b
00:45:405 (2) - remove this nc since the nc before )b
00:47:548 (2) - I think should be nc'd aswell since its a downbeat )b
01:11:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know your trying to build up but the jumps literally seem random placed to me increasing in spacing each time, sharp angle for similar sounds and obtuse and awkward for significant shifts in piano pitch
01:47:548 (4) - I dont really understand why you made the slider like this like maybe just copy and replace 01:46:476 (6) - different sounds,
so different slider shape
01:53:619 (1) - I say make this a straight slider to keep consistency with 01:50:762 (1) - straight, curve, curve straight sorta symmetry pattern
01:56:476 (1) - same with this one ^
01:50:762 - this timing point isn't snapped to anything (doesn't really matter but still) it is?
02:08:619 - place a circle here and start the spinner 02:08:708 - so you give some feedback to the beat on 02:08:619 - )b
02:11:838 (1,2,3) - I say increase the spacing between these notes for consistency beginning of a new section, no real intensity, its to distinguish it from the rest
02:19:695 (7,8,9) - I say copy these and rotate them 180 degrees for 02:20:409 (1,2,3) - for a more clean look and stack 02:20:766 (3) - to 02:19:516 (6) - (hope that made sense ye lol fixed
02:22:730 (8,9) - spacing change here seems kinda overkill in comparison to rest of the section. fix
02:11:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Throughout this section it feels like you are trying to be super organized but then kinda forgot in some spots.
Like with things like 02:28:088 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - are different than 02:30:945 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - even tho they are basically the same thing in the song.
02:17:909 (3) - why is this a reverse slider when 02:15:052 (3) - isn't? its just some small inconsistencies fix that one in particular, looking for other ones
02:37:145 (1,1,1,1) - having nc's on all of these is completely unnecessary imo 1/3
same here 02:38:216 (1,1,1,1) - 1/3
03:03:268 (1) - I say the sv change here is kinda a lot imo maybe make this slider the same .75 sv as the sliders before I made all violins slow sliders
03:14:697 (1) - I think this slider could be more like smooth or less points maybe try a wave slider or something (basically I think it's ugly I "it's subjective but still:( ) fix
03:40:054 (8,9) - I get your trying to build up but this jump is kinda big imo. spacing isn't too buff so I'll keep it
03:40:411 (1,2,3) - tis flow hurts meh. coming out of the reverse slider just to go back and then back again isn't really comfortable fix
maybe just stack 03:41:304 (2) - to 03:41:482 (3) -
03:45:769 (1,1,1) - nc thing again also I think having the jump to the slider is to much especially since the diff is only 4.2 stars lo with such a slow bpm, i don't think it's even that too difficult to hit
03:47:554 (1) - nc this for consistency with 03:48:982 (1) - since I'm guessing you going off vocals so this too 03:53:268 (5) - and so on fix
03:49:518 (2) - t h e r e ' s n o t h i n g o n t h i s x d (i say just delete it) piano sound tho
03:49:697 (3,4,5,6) - find the spacing here to be kinda big especially in comparison to the stuff around it seems fine
03:52:375 (2,3) - this jump is um kinda w i d e maybe make the jump to 3 a smaller angle sweeping motion was intentional
04:08:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - <3 <3
04:06:125 (1) - checkmark (just had to say it :^) ) :^)
anyway imma wrap the mod up here. All in all i think the map is very inconsistent with what you are trying to follow, like sometimes you do only instruments and sometimes you only do vocals. The first kiai is a heavy diff spike when it truthfully doesn't have to have jumps are triple the size as the parts before. Also i think you break flow to much will work on that
good luck with the mapset~~tyty