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Topic Starter
YukiZura-
sorry :? ... i be sure to credit you in my map :) ... btw thanks for the mp3 :o
samosita
hello from #modreqs

short mod only :D
[General]
  1. add (TV size) to the title


[Last Game]
  1. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i personally think that the rising intensity of jumps here is weird because it does not reflect on the song
  2. 00:06:412 (5,1) - woops i think these two should be farther
  3. 00:06:896 (3,4) - adjust jump distance. might want to consider using distance snap (2.0x maybe?)
  4. 00:17:057 (1) - curve this like you did with 00:14:476 (1) with that synth sound
  5. 00:29:315 (2) - the end of this kick is a vocal and i think a circle is more fitting to emphasize the sound. maybe replace this with 1/2 slider + circle?
  6. 01:00:606 (1,2,3,4) - fix :o
  7. 01:07:219 (5,1,2) - weird flowbreak. adjust rotation of 01:07:380 (1)
  8. 01:12:864 (1,2) - distance should be farther
  9. 01:16:574 (5,6) - should be a large jump since there is a strong guitar sound
  10. 01:17:703 (7) - curve
  11. 01:20:284 (1) - ^^
  12. 01:22:542 (5,6) - farther distance


[Insane]
  1. 00:19:477 (8,1) - maybe stack because slider starts on a strong sound?
  2. 00:17:057 (1) - curve
  3. 00:21:090 (1,2,3,4) - distance between these objects should be larger
  4. 01:13:187 (3,4) - larger distance

good luck!
Jonis221
Hey, trying M4M

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You could make this pattern more organised, because placement doesn't look neat.
  2. 00:04:154 (1,2,3) - Strange looking overlap.
  3. 00:14:477 (1,4) - pretty sure you can avoid overlaps like this.
  4. 00:17:864 (4,1) - 00:20:444 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:22:380 (8,1) - Slidertail is overlaped a bit.
  6. 00:28:670 (1,2) - You can make a parallel here.
  7. 00:30:122 (6,2,3) - Overlapping again.
  8. 00:31:412 (5,7) - You can improve this blanket.
  9. 00:33:186 (3,4) - You can parallel them something like this. http://i.imgur.com/g02seRX.png
  10. 00:36:574 (2,3,4) - Overlap.
  11. 00:37:380 (1,2,3) - Looks like distance isn't similar between objects in this 1/4 pattern.
  12. 00:27:057 (1,2,3) - ^
  13. 00:41:735 (5,7) - You can improve blanket between sliders.
  14. 00:43:025 (3,4,6) - Try to avoid overlapping.
  15. 00:55:767 (1,2) - You can make blanket here. Here's guide on blankets t/208596
  16. 00:59:638 (3,4) - 01:06:090 (1,2) - ^
  17. 01:00:606 (7,1) - Do not overlap this with sliderbody just make something more simple. like this http://i.imgur.com/kz3NLif.png
  18. 01:10:929 (7,1) - ^
  19. 01:24:638 (3,5) - Slidertail is overlaped a bit.
  20. 01:25:606 (3,4,5,6) - Sliders are overlapping each other.

    [Insane]
  21. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Again Pattern doesn't look that neat.
  22. 00:04:477 (2,3) - You can make this pattern symmetrical.
  23. 00:05:122 (1,2,3) - Try something different to avoid overlapping.
  24. 00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Make this stream neat, just convert it from slider. with ctrl+shift+f
  25. 00:15:283 (4,5) - Yea, sliderbows like this pretty much not rankable, cause slider body is overlapping slidertail.
  26. 00:13:186 (1,3) - You can parallel them.
  27. 00:22:380 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
  28. 00:34:477 (1,2) - Pretty much overlap.
  29. 00:55:122 (3,4) - Why this jump have different spacing than previous one 00:54:799 (1,2,3) -
  30. 01:18:186 (3,4) - You can make parallel more perfect.
  31. 01:26:090 (2,3,4) - You can try to make a symmetrical design here.
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

samosita wrote:

hello from #modreqs

short mod only :D
[General]
  1. add (TV size) to the title yeah,why not


[Last Game]
  1. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i personally think that the rising intensity of jumps here is weird because it does not reflect on the song i will consider this
  2. 00:06:412 (5,1) - woops i think these two should be farther consider
  3. 00:06:896 (3,4) - adjust jump distance. might want to consider using distance snap (2.0x maybe?) at this part i changing the jump from square to angle jump that why it distance a little bit much
  4. 00:17:057 (1) - curve this like you did with 00:14:476 (1) with that synth soundfixed with some arragement :)
  5. 00:29:315 (2) - the end of this kick is a vocal and i think a circle is more fitting to emphasize the sound. maybe replace this with 1/2 slider + circle? nice idea
  6. 01:00:606 (1,2,3,4) - fix :owhy?? no .. that stream was meant to be like that xD
  7. 01:07:219 (5,1,2) - weird flowbreak. adjust rotation of 01:07:380 (1) i dont think that is a weird flow because what i did is a circle flow >.<
  8. 01:12:864 (1,2) - distance should be farther nah .. that part is not that intense to make it much distance :?
  9. 01:16:574 (5,6) - should be a large jump since there is a strong guitar sound will consider
  10. 01:17:703 (7) - curve why?
  11. 01:20:284 (1) - ^^ nah
  12. 01:22:542 (5,6) - farther distance why? i think the most suitable to distance at this part 01:22:703 (6,1) - cuz the sudden high sound


[Insane]
  1. 00:19:477 (8,1) - maybe stack because slider starts on a strong sound? if a lot people complaining about that part i will change .. for now i will let it be :)
  2. 00:17:057 (1) - curve nah
  3. 00:21:090 (1,2,3,4) - distance between these objects should be larger changed
  4. 01:13:187 (3,4) - larger distancefixed

good luck! Thanks for the mod >.<

EggsGone wrote:

Hey, trying M4M

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You could make this pattern more organised, because placement doesn't look neat. fixed
  2. 00:04:154 (1,2,3) - Strange looking overlap.will consider
  3. 00:14:477 (1,4) - pretty sure you can avoid overlaps like this. why?
  4. 00:17:864 (4,1) - 00:20:444 (4,5) - ^ will consider .. for now i let it be
  5. 00:22:380 (8,1) - Slidertail is overlaped a bit.fixed
  6. 00:28:670 (1,2) - You can make a parallel here.fixed
  7. 00:30:122 (6,2,3) - Overlapping again.you do sure h8 overlap lol ..that part, it meant to overlap .. if more people complain i will change
  8. 00:31:412 (5,7) - You can improve this blanket. fixed
  9. 00:33:186 (3,4) - You can parallel them something like this. http://i.imgur.com/g02seRX.png ir just a rotation of the first slider i made .. so i dont think changing the shape would make it better sorry
  10. 00:36:574 (2,3,4) - Overlap. same reasons as above
  11. 00:37:380 (1,2,3) - Looks like distance isn't similar between objects in this 1/4 pattern. made something
  12. 00:27:057 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above
  13. 00:41:735 (5,7) - You can improve blanket between sliders. fixed
  14. 00:43:025 (3,4,6) - Try to avoid overlapping. nah
  15. 00:55:767 (1,2) - You can make blanket here. Here's guide on blankets t/208596 fixed it and i always use that forum lmao
  16. 00:59:638 (3,4) - 01:06:090 (1,2) - ^ damn did realised how bad that blanket was .. fixed
  17. 01:00:606 (7,1) - Do not overlap this with sliderbody just make something more simple. like this http://i.imgur.com/kz3NLif.png fixed
  18. 01:10:929 (7,1) - ^ fixed
  19. 01:24:638 (3,5) - Slidertail is overlaped a bit. yeah ik .. i purpose do like that
  20. 01:25:606 (3,4,5,6) - Sliders are overlapping each other. i meant to be like that lol

    [Insane]
  21. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Again Pattern doesn't look that neat. nah it look neat to me
  22. 00:04:477 (2,3) - You can make this pattern symmetrical. fixed
  23. 00:05:122 (1,2,3) - Try something different to avoid overlapping.no
  24. 00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Make this stream neat, just convert it from slider. with ctrl+shift+f fixed
  25. 00:15:283 (4,5) - Yea, sliderbows like this pretty much not rankable, cause slider body is overlapping slidertail. oh.. thanks for the info
  26. 00:13:186 (1,3) - You can parallel them. fixed
  27. 00:22:380 (1,2) - Blanket maybe? yeah why not
  28. 00:34:477 (1,2) - Pretty much overlap. consider
  29. 00:55:122 (3,4) - Why this jump have different spacing than previous one 00:54:799 (1,2,3) - changed
  30. 01:18:186 (3,4) - You can make parallel more perfect. hmmm i think i parallel it enough
  31. 01:26:090 (2,3,4) - You can try to make a symmetrical design here.will consider
makisokk
Hello from your q
M4M
[General]

[Normal]
  • 00:06:251 (4) - Broke flow, trythis
    00:10:767 - Take a break here
    00:13:509 (2,3) - Hmm, i think bad overlap for normal
    00:28:348 (2,3) - Don't stack , it's hard to read
    00:30:122 (2,3) - ^
    00:31:735 (3,4) - ^
    00:38:670 (2,3) - ^
    00:54:799 (1,2) - ^
    00:46:896 (5) - hmm, NC?
    01:04:799 (5,2,1) - Fix overlap
    01:14:800 (4,1) - ^

[Hard ]
  • 00:07:541 (1,2,3) - Stream need do so 00:08:912 - here not have sound
    00:10:767 - Take a break here
    00:42:219 (7,1) - hmm, do blanket
    00:44:961 (2,1) - fix blanket
    00:52:702 (3,1) - ^
    00:56:251 (2,3,4,5) - Bad flow, trythis

[Insane]
  • 00:23:832 (5,6,7,8) - In my opinion, you need to make a distance between them in decreasing order, because it's audible in music, but you can not do it
    01:01:412 (3) - Do three nore, easy to read

[Last Game]
  • 00:21:412 (4,5) - By reducing the distance you quickly take away the inertia when play jump, increase the distance spacing
    01:00:606 (1,2,3,4) - i think you can do this better
    01:05:928 (5,6,1) - Bad flow from stream

sorry, simple mod
good mappset
Good luck with map
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

makisokk wrote:

Hello from your q
M4M
[General]
  • hmm i think you can add video
    Use metadate from this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645591 yeah sure but first i need his permission to use the vid :lol:
    00:55:767 - 01:16:251 - Kiai only here fixed

[Normal]
  • 00:06:251 (4) - Broke flow, trythis seems good
    00:10:767 - Take a break here it is already a break?
    00:13:509 (2,3) - Hmm, i think bad overlap for normal fixed somehow
    00:28:348 (2,3) - Don't stack , it's hard to read
    00:30:122 (2,3) - ^
    00:31:735 (3,4) - ^
    00:38:670 (2,3) - ^
    00:54:799 (1,2) - ^ fixed all
    00:46:896 (5) - hmm, NC? nah
    01:04:799 (5,2,1) - Fix overlap fixed
    01:14:800 (4,1) - ^ hmm .. will consider

[Hard ]
  • 00:07:541 (1,2,3) - Stream need do so 00:08:912 - here not have sound 100% sure there is a sound there lol ... i will take the arragement tq xD
    00:10:767 - Take a break here it is already a break
    00:42:219 (7,1) - hmm, do blanket done
    00:44:961 (2,1) - fix blanket nah .. already blanket enough
    00:52:702 (3,1) - ^ already blanket
    00:56:251 (2,3,4,5) - Bad flow, trythis nice idea

[Insane]
  • 00:23:832 (5,6,7,8) - In my opinion, you need to make a distance between them in decreasing order, because it's audible in music, but you can not do itif more people complain i will change ..for now i let it be
    01:01:412 (3) - Do three nore, easy to read changed

[Last Game]
  • 00:21:412 (4,5) - By reducing the distance you quickly take away the inertia when play jump, increase the distance spacing sure
    01:00:606 (1,2,3,4) - i think you can do this better nah i think that is better :?
    01:05:928 (5,6,1) - Bad flow from stream hmmm but i testplay it feel so comfortable to me .. will change if a lot people complain

sorry, simple mod i dont mind ^^
good mappset
Good luck with map Thank you :D
Topic Starter
YukiZura-
can somebody help me with the gif .. idk how to minimize the size :?
Jemzuu
hello from Q

  • General
  1. lo mayb add something on tags?
  2. remove letterbox during breaks lol is this 2009 mapping
  3. 50% volume is p low also the other volumes as well increase em a bit
  4. preview time should be at 55691 edit it on notepad
  5. remove "(TV Size)" on title its not needed
Last Level

i'd change the diff name for this, the word level here is already redundant with the other diffs lol its not aesthetic. i'd suggest like game over or last game or whatever lol
00:05:121 (6,1) - blanket dem pls
00:06:412 (5,1) - adjust the spacing of em a bit maybe place (1) in middle of 00:05:928 (2,3,4,5) -
00:21:573 (5) - adjust ds its quite far imo
00:30:122 (4) - nc? or (5)?
00:33:509 (4) - ctrl g would fit here imo
00:45:283 (6) - better if seperated for better emphasis tho x236 y248 perhaps
00:53:509 (2) - adjust ds a bit to make perfect triangle
00:55:121 (3) - id rather overlap this to 00:55:767 (1) - 's slider end insted spacing is quite stiff imo
00:57:703 (4,2) - blanket these insted ik u overlapped 00:57:057 (1,2) - but it wont be noticed in gameplay anyway so i suggest blanket :>
00:59:315 (1,2) - adjust ds pls
01:00:928 (5) - NC perhaps
01:03:993 (2) - could get more space imo
01:07:219 (5) - blanket this with 01:07:380 (1) - insted, its quite far imo and doesnt fit with the flow xd id do something like this i also stacked (2) with (5) and adjusted ds of (3) as well to make gud triangle with 2 and 4
01:09:316 (3,3) - blanket pls
01:10:445 (4) - adjust ds
01:15:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream could be better mayb follow like what u did on 01:05:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - insted it has same sound anyway
01:17:703 (7,1) - swap their ncs for consistency
01:19:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - overspaced compared to others why
01:21:251 (5,2) - blanket this insted' 01:20:768 (3,3) - stack these insted and 01:20:928 (4,4) - overlap these insted looks way cleaner and neater yeeeeeeet
01:27:541 - make it look like this notice the timeline too i ncd the last note and ye also adjust the triple to make it more fit to the flow and i think the last note needs more space as well btw i also overlapped (1) with 01:26:735 (3) -

das all ill not be modding level 3 lol
GL~ dont forget to put me in modder box
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

AJamez wrote:

hello from Q

  • General
  1. lo mayb add something on tags? i will later
  2. remove letterbox during breaks lol is this 2009 mapping oh .. i thought i already off letterbox hmm
  3. 50% volume is p low also the other volumes as well increase em a bit will consider
  4. preview time should be at 55691 edit it on notepad ahh i see.. that's how you changed it
  5. remove "(TV Size)" on title its not needed lol okey
Last Level

i'd change the diff name for this, the word level here is already redundant with the other diffs lol its not aesthetic. i'd suggest like game over or last game or whatever lol before i named it last game .. just today i changed it to Last level ..idk why lmao .. guess i will change it back :o
00:05:121 (6,1) - blanket dem pls fixed
00:06:412 (5,1) - adjust the spacing of em a bit maybe place (1) in middle of 00:05:928 (2,3,4,5) - did something .. i guess
00:21:573 (5) - adjust ds its quite far imo stack it?
00:30:122 (4) - nc? or (5)? hmmm .. maybe not
00:33:509 (4) - ctrl g would fit here imo i guess .. changed
00:45:283 (6) - better if seperated for better emphasis tho x236 y248 perhaps will consider.. if more people complain i will changed
00:53:509 (2) - adjust ds a bit to make perfect triangle done
00:55:121 (3) - id rather overlap this to 00:55:767 (1) - 's slider end insted spacing is quite stiff imo nah i think it is better that way cuz at that part player already make a huge jump , if i overlap it , it will easy to broke a combo
00:57:703 (4,2) - blanket these insted ik u overlapped 00:57:057 (1,2) - but it wont be noticed in gameplay anyway so i suggest blanket :> hmm wat? sorry but i dont understand :(
00:59:315 (1,2) - adjust ds pls why?
01:00:928 (5) - NC perhaps done
01:03:993 (2) - could get more space imo nah .. the sound is about to reduce .. i think better make the distance decrease
01:07:219 (5) - blanket this with 01:07:380 (1) - insted, its quite far imo and doesnt fit with the flow xd id do something like i guess it work out .. tqthis i also stacked (2) with (5) and adjusted ds of (3) as well to make gud triangle with 2 and 4
01:09:316 (3,3) - blanket pls nah.. i purposely not blanket that
01:10:445 (4) - adjust ds why?
01:15:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream could be better mayb follow like what u did on 01:05:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - insted it has same sound anyway will consider
01:17:703 (7,1) - swap their ncs for consistency yeaj
01:19:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - overspaced compared to others why idk.. just want to make it more intense .. i guess lol
01:21:251 (5,2) - blanket this insted' 01:20:768 (3,3) - stack these insted and 01:20:928 (4,4) - overlap these insted looks way cleaner and neater yeeeeeeet
01:27:541 - make it look like this notice the timeline too i ncd the last note and ye also adjust the triple to make it more fit to the flow and i think the last note needs more space as well btw i also overlapped (1) with 01:26:735 (3) -

das all ill not be modding level 3 lol it's okey.. atleast you already mod my map than mod nothing xD
GL~ dont forget to put me in modder box of course .. thanks for the mod ;):D
Milar001
Hi, from my queue

[Hard]
00:15:122 (4) - Because of stack hard to read
00:22:380 (8,1) - With this spacing player may think it's a 1/4 gap
00:33:993 (2,3) - ^
00:58:025 (1,2) - Snap more
01:08:348 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:15:283 (4,5) - Snap more
00:26:090 (1,1) - Remove ncs
00:28:670 (1,1) - ^
00:30:122 (4) - Nc here and 00:31:412 (2) -
00:31:251 (1,1) - Remove ncs
00:32:703 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:32:380 (1) -
00:34:477 (1) - Remove nc
00:36:573 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:36:412 (1) -
00:39:154 (2) - ^ 00:38:992 (1) -


[Last Game]
00:06:412 (5,1) - Too close
00:19:638 (1,2) - In previous parts there was 1/1 slider so here should be too
00:23:186 (1,1) - Ncs are unnecessary
00:25:445 (3,4) - Start sliders on white ticks
00:28:026 (3,4) - ^
00:30:606 (6,7) - ^
00:36:574 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:36:412 (1,1) -
00:39:155 (2) - ^ 00:38:993 (1,1) -
00:41:735 (2) - ^ 00:41:574 (1) -
00:42:703 (2) - ^ 00:42:219 (1) -

Hope it will be helpful :)
Hectic
Hello, m4m from your queue
  1. unused hs: soft-hitclap.wav

last game:
  1. preview point is not set for this diff
  2. aimod tells a few unsnapped things
  3. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i didn't really get it why these are getting further away, making them spaced out the same and pointing to different directions would make more sense i guess (it would emhasize different pitch of guitar chords)
  4. 00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - hm, this stream represents drums, which are getting louder, but when they are louder, you put this slider 00:08:348 (1) - , which feels much less intense then just stream. Try to do the opposite - start stream with buzzslider and make notes spaced out more as drums are getting louder, seems pretty cool
  5. 00:08:912 - there should be note probably
  6. 00:10:444 (6,1) - i didn't really get why these are jumps, maybe make them spaced like this stuff 00:09:799 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? because this 00:10:605 (1) - sound is not stronger
  7. 00:13:509 (2) - why you changed sv here? this sound is exactly the same as 00:13:186 (1) -. This sv change is barely even noticable, i think better remove it
  8. 00:42:219 (1,2) - these look too close visually, catches the eye
  9. 00:45:606 - this place doesn't feel like break, honestly
  10. 01:00:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - this could look better
  11. 01:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  12. 01:15:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this was really hard to read, probably because you didn't stack notes like this 01:15:928 (1,3) - previously

    I'm not really good at describing flow, but you probably need to work on that also, because movement sometimes feels a bit weird (since map seems like it based around smooth flow, making it awkward doesn't seem like a good idea, focus on moments when you break circular flow, when and why you keep it, etc.)


level 4:
  1. 00:05:122 (1,2,3) - maybe just stack them to make more readable?
  2. 00:24:961 (1) - unsnapped
  3. 00:39:961 (1) - ^
  4. 01:08:348 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ummm, why these are in groups of 3, i didn't get it, should be more like 01:08:348 (1,2,3,1) - this is one combo 01:08:993 (2,3,4) - this is another
  5. 01:26:090 (2,3,4) - this looks like its 1/4 gaps between them, should look more like 00:13:186 (1,2,3) - since sounds are very similar

    Didn't copy same stuff from previous highest diff, i guess you know that it applies to this one also


level 3:
  1. 00:10:122 - add break here
  2. 00:33:993 (2,3) - this doesn't feel natural at all
  3. 00:40:445 (4,2) - they touch awkwardly
  4. unsnapped stuff:
    00:52:037 - Slider end
    00:52:359 - Slider repeat
    00:52:500 - Slider end
    00:52:772 - Slider repeat
    00:52:843 - Slider repeat
    00:52:913 - Slider repeat
    00:52:984 - Slider end
  5. 01:00:928 (1,2) - these are too close


Ok, that's kinda all from me. Map for m4m - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/654575. Any of 3 highest diff is fine. Good luck!
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Hard]
00:15:122 (4) - Because of stack hard to read made it better i guess .. changed a bit
00:22:380 (8,1) - With this spacing player may think it's a 1/4 gap because this is hard.. make it hard for new player to react?
00:33:993 (2,3) - ^ this one .. changed it somehow
00:58:025 (1,2) - Snap more hmm bur it already snapped
01:08:348 (1,2) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:15:283 (4,5) - Snap more nope
00:26:090 (1,1) - Remove ncs why?
00:28:670 (1,1) - ^ why?
00:30:122 (4) - Nc here and 00:31:412 (2) -
00:31:251 (1,1) - Remove ncs
00:32:703 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:32:380 (1) -
00:34:477 (1) - Remove nc
00:36:573 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:36:412 (1) -
00:39:154 (2) - ^ 00:38:992 (1) - mostly my combo is to exprese my patern to player


[Last Game]
00:06:412 (5,1) - Too close it changing from square to triangle jump
00:19:638 (1,2) - In previous parts there was 1/1 slider so here should be too will conider
00:23:186 (1,1) - Ncs are unnecessary yeah your right
00:25:445 (3,4) - Start sliders on white ticks why?
00:28:026 (3,4) - ^ why?
00:30:606 (6,7) - ^ why?
00:36:574 (2) - Nc here, not on 00:36:412 (1,1) -
00:39:155 (2) - ^ 00:38:993 (1,1) -
00:41:735 (2) - ^ 00:41:574 (1) -
00:42:703 (2) - ^ 00:42:219 (1) - im nc there cuz want to show player my patern .. so that player easy to react and read

Hope it will be helpful :)

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, m4m from your queue
  1. unused hs: soft-hitclap.wav

last game:
  1. preview point is not set for this diff oh didnt realise that
  2. aimod tells a few unsnapped things
  3. 00:00:445 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i didn't really get it why these are getting further away, making them spaced out the same and pointing to different directions would make more sense i guess (it would emhasize different pitch of guitar chords)hmm let see what i can do .. rearraged
  4. 00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - hm, this stream represents drums, which are getting louder, but when they are louder, you put this slider changed i guesswhat if i just incre00:08:348 (1) - , which feels much less intense then just stream. Try to do the opposite - start stream with buzzslider and make notes spaced out more as drums are getting louder, seems pretty cool
  5. 00:08:912 - there should be note probably hmm nah .. changed drum to voice :?
  6. 00:10:444 (6,1) - i didn't really get why these are jumps, maybe make them spaced like this stuff 00:09:799 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? because this 00:10:605 (1) - sound is not stronger shorter them
  7. 00:13:509 (2) - why you changed sv here? this sound is exactly the same as 00:13:186 (1) -. This sv change is barely even noticable, i think better remove it just want to make slider more long
  8. 00:42:219 (1,2) - these look too close visually, catches the eye mean? i dont get it
  9. 00:45:606 - this place doesn't feel like break, honestly why?
  10. 01:00:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - this could look better nope i really purposely make that part ..
  11. 01:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ hurm
  12. 01:15:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this was really hard to read, probably because you didn't stack notes like this 01:15:928 (1,3) - previously nah .. it not that hard in fact that partern is the same as tengaku song

    I'm not really good at describing flow, but you probably need to work on that also, because movement sometimes feels a bit weird (since map seems like it based around smooth flow, making it awkward doesn't seem like a good idea, focus on moments when you break circular flow, when and why you keep it, etc.) that noted .. but this map i not focusing on circular flow :D


level 4:
  1. 00:05:122 (1,2,3) - maybe just stack them to make more readable? nah i already a readable part.. hmm if more people complain i will change
  2. 00:24:961 (1) - unsnapped fixed
  3. 00:39:961 (1) - ^ fixed
  4. 01:08:348 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ummm, why these are in groups of 3, i didn't get it, should be more like 01:08:348 (1,2,3,1) - this is one combo 01:08:993 (2,3,4) - this is another i want to show player my patern . so that make it easy for player to react ? or not?
  5. 01:26:090 (2,3,4) - this looks like its 1/4 gaps between them, should look more like 00:13:186 (1,2,3) - since sounds are very similar changed

    Didn't copy same stuff from previous highest diff, i guess you know that it applies to this one also


level 3:
  1. 00:10:122 - add break here done
  2. 00:33:993 (2,3) - this doesn't feel natural at all consider
  3. 00:40:445 (4,2) - they touch awkwardly i changed the shape
  4. unsnapped stuff:
    00:52:037 - Slider end
    00:52:359 - Slider repeat
    00:52:500 - Slider end
    00:52:772 - Slider repeat
    00:52:843 - Slider repeat
    00:52:913 - Slider repeat
    00:52:984 - Slider end fixed all
  5. 01:00:928 (1,2) - these are too close fixed


Ok, that's kinda all from me thank you :). Map for m4m - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/654575. Any of 3 highest diff is fine. Good luck!
Thank you ;)
Kyousukee
13:06 Kyousukee: hui
13:06 Kyousukee: nak pastikan jap dekat easy diff kau ni
13:06 *Kyousukee is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1402223 Kanemoto Hisako & Iwami Manaka & Ookubo Rumi - GAMERS! [Level 1]]
13:06 YukiZura-: hi
13:07 Kyousukee: 00:17:057 (1,3) - sengaja eh buat stacked macam ni ? not stacked properly
13:07 YukiZura-: ok
13:08 YukiZura-: stack?
13:08 YukiZura-: ouh
13:08 YukiZura-: yup
13:09 YukiZura-: it already stacked properly
13:09 Kyousukee: okk
13:10 Kyousukee: 00:50:606 (1) - slider ni aku rasa end dekat white tick
13:10 Kyousukee: buang reverse pastu letak circle dekat white tick tu
13:11 Kyousukee: new player biasa susah nak main reverse-ii ni
13:13 YukiZura-: hmm will consider .. kalau ramai complain aq ubah
13:13 Kyousukee: 00:54:799 (3) - lain macam je aku tgk
13:14 Kyousukee: macam tak kena dgn ryhthm
13:14 Kyousukee: 2 circle okay aku rasa dekat situ
13:14 YukiZura-: hahaha kindda
13:14 Kyousukee: sebab ada double sound kan dekat situ
13:14 YukiZura-: yeah sure
13:16 Kyousukee: 01:20:283 (1) - not properly stacked macam tadi
13:19 YukiZura-: fixed
13:20 *Kyousukee is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1400596 Kanemoto Hisako & Iwami Manaka & Ookubo Rumi - GAMERS! [Level 2]]
13:20 Kyousukee: 00:26:251 (3,1) - purposely ?
13:21 YukiZura-: distance snap might be the case here
13:21 YukiZura-: fixed
13:21 Kyousukee: i see
13:23 Kyousukee: 01:15:929 (2,1) - okay ke kalau leave gap macam ni
13:23 Kyousukee: tambah circle would be nice imo
13:24 YukiZura-: hurm i aq rasa ok since this is normal
13:25 Kyousukee: 01:27:057 (1,2) - ?
13:26 YukiZura-: why?
13:26 Kyousukee: stacked issue ?
13:26 YukiZura-: ouh .. fixed
13:26 *Kyousukee is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1399844 Kanemoto Hisako & Iwami Manaka & Ookubo Rumi - GAMERS! [Level 3]]
13:27 Kyousukee: bg untuk level 3 ni macam lewd ja
13:27 Kyousukee: tapi nak tukar bg memang annoying
13:27 YukiZura-: hahaha nah i like the bg :3
13:27 Kyousukee: damn
13:27 YukiZura-: not that lewd
13:28 Kyousukee: boleh tak aku nak gd level 3 ni
13:29 YukiZura-: hurm very sorry .. sbb map ni aq nk buat solo.. as the description said .. my first full mapset
13:30 Kyousukee: alaaaa
13:30 YukiZura-: hahaha sorry2 ><
13:31 Kyousukee: 00:31:251 (4,5) - kenapa tak buat reverse macam ni 00:28:670 (1) - ?
13:31 Kyousukee: variation eh ?
13:31 YukiZura-: yup .. baru nk tulis xD
13:36 Kyousukee: 00:44:799 (1) - okay ke letak circle ni belakang reverse ?
13:38 YukiZura-: okey .. x kacau ranking criteria pon
13:39 Kyousukee: 00:19:638 (1,4) - tak secantik ni 01:20:283 (1,4) - xP
13:39 YukiZura-: fixed
13:40 *Kyousukee is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1399845 Kanemoto Hisako & Iwami Manaka & Ookubo Rumi - GAMERS! [Level 4]]
13:41 Kyousukee: letak circle dekat sini would be nice 00:45:606 -
13:42 YukiZura-: nah .. that is a break part .. x perlu circle
13:45 Kyousukee: 00:23:186 (1) - nc sebab tukar speed ?
13:46 Kyousukee: 00:31:412 (2) - not properly stacked
13:47 Kyousukee: 00:58:509 (1) - overmap
13:49 Kyousukee: not properly stacked 01:02:864 (3) -
13:49 Kyousukee: 01:07:703 (3,4,5) - stacked issue
13:50 Kyousukee: 01:23:186 (2) - ^
13:51 Kyousukee: 01:23:993 (3) - ^
13:51 Kyousukee: nc this would be good 01:27:702 (6) -
13:52 YukiZura-: nah .. dont want to spam to much nc
13:52 YukiZura-: too*
13:53 *Kyousukee is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1399846 Kanemoto Hisako & Iwami Manaka & Ookubo Rumi - GAMERS! [Last Game]]
13:53 YukiZura-: weh whe
13:53 YukiZura-: weh
13:53 YukiZura-: dah kot
13:53 YukiZura-: aq nk perg makan xD
13:53 Kyousukee: aku pun
13:54 Kyousukee: last game aku buat kat forum eh
13:54 YukiZura-: sure ..
13:54 Kyousukee: okay ~ gl with the set
Topic Starter
YukiZura-
Thank you! for the star kyousuke :D
coco
from q
[top diff]
00:06:251 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find mixing acute and obtuse angle jumps r uncomfortable but maybe i just suck
00:11:896 (1) - y break flow here to emphasize and not 00:10:605 (1) as well? former goes higher but latter goes lower so should have same emphasis
00:20:121 (3,4,5) - 4 should start on 3 to match the others. also the sliders start on off beats end on strong beats which make no sense
01:20:768 (3,4,5) - ^
01:23:348 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:573 (5) - should start on white tick after it to match with the others
00:20:605 (5) - should be <> to match the others?
00:34:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - turn this into stream?
00:41:251 (6,1,2,3) - the rest of these in the section arent overlapped anymore so why are these
01:06:090 (1) - buzz slider? the stream has so much build up then it gets kinda ruined cuz it's just a 1/1 slider
01:16:412 (4) - so spaced why? drums do their thing 01:16:574 (5,6)
01:22:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - idk if i like switching instruments here since the 1/2s are so much more dominant. also the same sounds played before, but u ignored those
01:28:025 (5) - nc

*as i exit this diff it tells me to update so maybe some things r outdated
[4]
00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - low effort
00:13:832 (3) - further away than 00:13:186 (1,2). if intentional for emphasis, space it more and nc cuz rn it just looks like a dirty pattern

00:16:251 (3,4) - y is this so much smaller than 00:15:928 (1,2) when playing the same thing
00:18:670 (2,3) - bruh
ok so generally in this section and the same one in the end check ur spacing to make sure they make sense and jumps r consistent
00:53:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:27:863 (2,3) - stacked when the rest arent
00:35:605 (2,3) - ^ either stack them all or vice versa
00:31:896 (2,1) - overlaps
00:43:670 (5,6,7,8) - make them jumps?
00:56:412 (4,5,6) - <>
00:59:316 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:735 (6,7) - ^
00:58:348 (3) - is circle and 00:58:993 (1) is slider?
01:01:412 (3,4,5) - if these were to emphasize 3 u did it wrong

what i said applies to all other instances of it happening i just got lazy and stopped mentioning them

p.s. i did this before updated so
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

cococolaco wrote:

from q
[top diff]
00:06:251 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find mixing acute and obtuse angle jumps r uncomfortable but maybe i just suck hmm will consider this
00:11:896 (1) - y break flow here to emphasize and not 00:10:605 (1) as well? former goes higher but latter goes lower so should have same emphasisdid something
00:20:121 (3,4,5) - 4 should start on 3 to match the others. also the sliders start on off beats end on strong beats which make no sense
01:20:768 (3,4,5) - ^
01:23:348 (3,4,5) - ^ hmm the sound is actually a bit late at that part..that why it is not the same as the other one.. try heard it once again
00:21:573 (5) - should start on white tick after it to match with the others keep .. good idea
00:20:605 (5) - should be <> to match the others? it is already a match but i put a little distance and blanket it so it make the map more harder and nice arrangement .. i guess xD
00:34:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - turn this into stream? lmao it already a stream
00:41:251 (6,1,2,3) - the rest of these in the section arent overlapped anymore so why are these variation ?
01:06:090 (1) - buzz slider? the stream has so much build up then it gets kinda ruined cuz it's just a 1/1 slider nah .. the stream was so satisfied to hit with the 1/1 slider there .. i already tried it a bunch of time :3
01:16:412 (4) - so spaced why? drums do their thing 01:16:574 (5,6) the sound is getting slower .. no need to jump it or space it with that patern
01:22:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - idk if i like switching instruments here since the 1/2s are so much more dominant. also the same sounds played before, but u ignored those no i not ignoring it .. it has 3stack note before .. 00:19:154 (5,6,7) - see.. i just extended the stream to make it more intense toward the ending of the map :D
01:28:025 (5) - nc no.. why tho?

*as i exit this diff it tells me to update so maybe some things r outdated
[4]
00:07:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - low effort what do you mean by low effort? this is insane diff so spacing up stream would be unnecessary for certain part
00:13:832 (3) - further away than 00:13:186 (1,2). if intentional for emphasis, space it more and nc cuz rn it just looks like a dirty pattern that patern is just a same as the top diff patern lmao .. dirty? why? ><

00:16:251 (3,4) - y is this so much smaller than 00:15:928 (1,2) when playing the same thing make it a little bit bigger
00:18:670 (2,3) - bruh no bruh
ok so generally in this section and the same one in the end check ur spacing to make sure they make sense and jumps r consistent
00:53:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ you know .. making same spaced jump over and over make the map feel boring ..that why i did like that .. it is not that much spacing to be clear

00:27:863 (2,3) - stacked when the rest arent why?
00:35:605 (2,3) - ^ either stack them all or vice versa it is already a stack?
00:31:896 (2,1) - overlaps i purposely do that
00:43:670 (5,6,7,8) - make them jumps? did something
00:56:412 (4,5,6) - <> why
00:59:316 (2,3,4,5) - ^ why
01:01:735 (6,7) - ^ why.. hmm you know explaination would be grateful
00:58:348 (3) - is circle and 00:58:993 (1) is slider? nah .. dont want to make it that starightforward
01:01:412 (3,4,5) - if these were to emphasize 3 u did it wrong sadly i not trying to emphasize that part .. sorry

what i said applies to all other instances of it happening i just got lazy and stopped mentioning them

p.s. i did this before updated so
Thank you ! :D:)
Reynolduh
hihi from my (useless) q!

General
There should be a bpm reset at 00:55:767 - (for all diff)


Level 1
i feel like making 00:13:186 (1) - 3 circles instead would be better as all the sounds are equally important.
Btw 2 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod
NC 00:58:348 (4) -
01:03:348 (4) - ^
01:08:670 (4) - ^
01:13:670 (4) - ^


Level 2
Btw 3 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod


Level 3
00:57:057 (1) - remove NC
00:59:315 (1) - ^
01:02:541 (1) - ^
01:03:832 (1) - ^
01:07:380 (1) - ^
01:09:638 (1) - ^
01:12:864 (1) - ^
01:14:155 (1) - ^
01:18:993 (1) - ^
01:21:574 (1) - ^
01:24:154 (1) - ^
Nc 01:00:606 (7) -
01:03:186 (4) - ^
01:05:122 (6) - ^
01:10:929 (7) - ^
01:13:509 (4) - ^


k me done no level 4 and last game mod cuz it's gud lol.

btw maybe change last game to final boss maybe? lol
Topic Starter
YukiZura-

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi from my (useless) q!

General
There should be a bpm reset at 00:55:767 - (for all diff) i dont think it is necessary


Level 1
i feel like making 00:13:186 (1) - 3 circles instead would be better as all the sounds are equally important.will consider
Btw 2 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod ooh yeah your right
NC 00:58:348 (4) -
01:03:348 (4) - ^
01:08:670 (4) - ^
01:13:670 (4) - ^ hmm all this.. why tho?


Level 2
Btw 3 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod fixed all


Level 3
00:57:057 (1) - remove NC no
00:59:315 (1) - ^ no
01:02:541 (1) - ^ hmm i guess
01:03:832 (1) - ^ aight
01:07:380 (1) - ^ nah
01:09:638 (1) - ^ nah
01:12:864 (1) - ^ok
01:14:155 (1) - ^ ok
01:18:993 (1) - ^ nope
01:21:574 (1) - ^ nope
01:24:154 (1) - ^ and nope
Nc 01:00:606 (7) -hmmm
01:03:186 (4) - ^ ok
01:05:122 (6) - ^ ok
01:10:929 (7) - ^ maybe no
01:13:509 (4) - ^ ok


k me done no level 4 and last game mod cuz it's gud lol. >,<

btw maybe change last game to final boss maybe? lol hmm i will keep my old diff name i think .. thanks for the nc mod xD
Reynolduh

YukiZura- wrote:

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi from my (useless) q!

General
There should be a bpm reset at 00:55:767 - (for all diff) i dont think it is necessary


Level 1
i feel like making 00:13:186 (1) - 3 circles instead would be better as all the sounds are equally important.will consider
Btw 2 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod ooh yeah your right
NC 00:58:348 (4) -
01:03:348 (4) - ^
01:08:670 (4) - ^
01:13:670 (4) - ^ hmm all this.. why tho?


Level 2
Btw 3 of your objects are not snapped so you know... do that... open ai mod fixed all


Level 3
00:57:057 (1) - remove NC no
00:59:315 (1) - ^ no
01:02:541 (1) - ^ hmm i guess
01:03:832 (1) - ^ aight
01:07:380 (1) - ^ nah
01:09:638 (1) - ^ nah
01:12:864 (1) - ^ok
01:14:155 (1) - ^ ok
01:18:993 (1) - ^ nope
01:21:574 (1) - ^ nope
01:24:154 (1) - ^ and nope
Nc 01:00:606 (7) -hmmm
01:03:186 (4) - ^ ok
01:05:122 (6) - ^ ok
01:10:929 (7) - ^ maybe no
01:13:509 (4) - ^ ok


k me done no level 4 and last game mod cuz it's gud lol. >,<

btw maybe change last game to final boss maybe? lol hmm i will keep my old diff name i think .. thanks for the nc mod xD
Ok but I really feel like the bpm offset should be reset cause the metronome is really out of sync
Topic Starter
YukiZura-
Ok but I really feel like the bpm offset should be reset cause the metronome is really out of sync
hmm for now i will let it be..if i see one more people complaining about this i will do something :)
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