1. Blossom (3.27 stars, 307 notes)
2. Bud (2.67 stars, 275 notes)
3. Sprout (1.73 stars, 152 notes)

SPOILER

sodarose wrote:

inso炸了能不能直接传图给我啊

有点不会摸..
[Hana]
02:31:905 (1,2,3) - 00:21:169 (1,2,3) - 节奏错了，这个音的位置在1/16，有点迷 timing吧
02:07:936 (2,1) - 这里我听到有3个音 三个没法打啊 能不能装个傻
01:54:686 (1,2) - 节奏没听懂啊，跟人声也不对啊，人声在1/8 这得等timing了
02:05:353 (1,2) - ^
这个Hp8充满了恶意

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

我也来混个2KDS

[Hana]
00:19:336 (2) - CTRL+G 不想切flow
00:50:711 (1) - ↑ 不了吧 贪吃蛇统一一下
00:21:169 (1,2,3) - 00:21:679 (1) - 感觉有点off 是的 需要timing
02:31:905 (1,2,3) - 02:32:413 (1) - ↑
01:55:020 (2) - 非要说的话た压在01:55:102 是这个毛病啊
01:55:186 (3) - い和钢琴也是压在01:55:269
02:07:936 (2,1) - 3个1/16 没法打 装作没听见
这歌好蛋疼啊vocal很多off的
后半的speedup太难了 中间要个hard过渡一下

[Normal]
01:43:378 (4,1) - nazi 改了

跪一地

Len wrote:

hello! from q


General:

increasing the bolume even song is calm. will do after hitsounding
add some hitsounds more will be make awesome.

as u can see, diffs gap is terrible

1

2

going to add a hard diff


Normal:

01:33:348 (1,2) - ignore vocal and follow piano is a bit awkward for this section imo but idk feels too hard for beginners


Hana:

00:12:018 (3) - i hope change to slow it doesnt fit here it plays better than slow sliders here imo
01:27:378 - i was surprised when i see this sections sv changin. you dont follow the vocal and piano at all. just put sliders no matter what the songs are imo.. yeah, used very personal aesthetics


gl

pw384 wrote:

[General]

1. Timing明显有问题，找个会timing的人搞一搞吧，00:40:045 (1) - 这里已经偏得很明显了 我希望会有
   
2. 两个难度差距有点大...Hana难度已经偏向insane了（滑条那么快） 是的

[Hana]

1. 01:28:045 (1,1,1) - 滑条尾巴的音量调低一点 等set搞定了我加个静音音效
   
2. 01:35:903 (3) - 非常难读 打着还凑合吧 需要记一下
   
3. 01:46:353 (1,2,3) - 这里应该再放开一点，和01:46:020 (3) - 擦着总感觉不太好 猴
   
4. 02:44:927 (1) - 按照全图风格的话，这个改成一个弯的滑条比较好？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9250802 算了吧 我感觉过了break玩家都忘了
   
5. 挺有意思的

[Normal]

1. 01:52:019 (3,4) - blanket歪了 oo
   
2. 没了

+Star

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Hana]
00:08:004 (1,2,3,4) - The sounds on the sliders' ends are pretty strong, so I would recomend giving a click there would be nice, but too hard for this diff
00:09:004 - There's a piano sound you should notice yeah, from another track
00:45:711 - 00:46:045 - ^
00:51:378 - 00:51:378 - ^ (If you follow the vocals, they start on 00:50:878 - ) need some timing later
01:00:711 (3,4,1) - Really uncomfortable didn't notice, I feel it's fine
01:22:711 (1) - End it on 01:23:878 - as vocals end there blame the timing. rhythm is fine
01:28:045 (1,1,1) - I can't see any reason why it's like this because I changed rhythm choice from here
01:31:205 (2) - Why it's so fast? I mean there's no vocals and piano isn't very high-pitched it follows natural flow imo
01:34:007 - Better filled not really practical
01:48:352 - ^
01:49:019 - ^


Hope will be helpful

Sinnoh wrote:

hello

General
Skin is incomplete but you knew that
00:08:004 (3) - This offset is early
00:39:378 (2) - This object is early
02:43:464 (1,1,1,2) - This section needs to be manually timed
There are no hitsounds
will fix after better timing is done

Hana
01:35:326 (2) - Not really a fan of sliders shaped like this, its very un-natural to stop moving while following a slider. Overlapping them less would help this issue. it will plays better if you don't stop on lt
00:21:679 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think NC is needed but opinion following points would be a pain to see
You're a bit inconsistent with whether you're following vocals or piano. eg. 00:48:045 (1,2,1) - (and that section in general) is ignoring many piano sounds to follow vocal. 01:48:020 (1) - 01:50:353 (1,1) - 01:53:020 (1) - Ignore many vocals for piano. I think the map would be more interesting if the first half had piano mapped, it has more variety than vocals. the rhythm choice on first half is intended to be contrast to the second half, that's why I skipped some pianos
I really don't agree with how fast the SV is for the chorus. It really feels like it's overdoing a very quiet/mellow song
Don't have anything specific to point out, this looks well polished for what you were trying to do. I don't agree with how it was done, but it was done well. yeah, this is a really personally mapped one

Hard
this diff corrupts itself whenever i open it lol
00:09:337 (2,1,2,1) - These could probably have a bit less space between them, bit far will consider, a bit conscious about it too
o wait it's not done

Normal
00:53:045 (2,3) - Decrease the distance between these, bit above the DS fixed

Kibbleru wrote:

ooh i played this in a multi lobby

general
imo hitsound a bit inaudible in the beginning around 00:24:045 - 5% is way to little raised to 8%
a couple of parts with weird timing
00:42:317 - vocals here
00:52:984 -
01:55:247 - vocals and piano here
these are the ones that really stand out, the rest are more minor

also it seems like your hard diff is bugged. when i download it, it asks me to update, and when i update, the diff glitches out o_O, might want to contact a QAT or something about this problem

hana
01:22:711 (1,2) - maybe you could try blanketing this part? also make the first part of the slider a bit smoother xD ummmm I feel current is better

this set is really cool, but before i bubble i want to get the timing and hard diff bug sorted out.

Fushimi Rio wrote:

Fixed and updated

Kibbleru wrote:

Fushimi Rio wrote:

Fixed and updated

oh, i think there was a misunderstanding, i meant for the entire section like 00:24:045 - 00:42:322 -
actually i think a better way of doing this is
using a higher volume on the head of the sliders, like here 00:24:045 - 15-20%
and then lowering it for the sliderticks, like here 00:24:211 - put a 10% vol, and then repeat for the next sliders, 00:25:378 (1,1) - and so on
I see. Fixed.

also why is this slider end silenced when there is a piano on it o-o 00:46:375 - looks like a mistake

also about the diff names i forgot to mention i actually just copied it from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/118494 LOL so idk.. if you don't mind u can keep as i can't really think of a better alternative.

tbh i think 'Sprout Bud Blossom' would be better I feel use Sprout as lowest diff's name seems a little strange... But it does looks better.

idk if this is useful https://www.hunker.com/13426298/the-sta ... d-to-bloom will consider add to cw

Sinnoh wrote:

02:29:377 (1,1,1) - these slider ends really sound like they should be snapped to 1/3 tbh,

Garden wrote:

Sinnoh wrote:

02:29:377 (1,1,1) - these slider ends really sound like they should be snapped to 1/3 tbh,

Fixed this

https://puu.sh/yiUGn/35898b6a56.png check last paragraph
for further reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/Skin_Set_List/ 有点懒 直接给删了
反正不好看

00:10:670 - 这里offset差得比较明显，25%听上去早了几十ms，前面两组也有一点不过基本可忽略 改了一下这里的timing

sprout:
01:43:378 (4,1) - spacing fixed
02:34:800 - move break here? same to higher diffs 挪到了稍微靠前一点的位置 钢琴有个渐入

bud:
01:27:378 (1,2,1) - 01:32:689 (5,6,1) - 01:35:326 (4,5,1) - 02:07:352 (5,6,1) - t r i g g e r e d 这太傻逼了
01:47:186 (2) - inaudible, 还有这里虽然人声应该在蓝线但有点歪了听不出来是跟啊，不如删了 删了
01:56:352 (4,5,6) - 忽然太轻了，另外俩难度同一个地方也是 改了

blossom:
why is od even lower? raised to 7
01:48:686 (1,2) - more like 1/8 it seems 但是听着感觉还是离1/6更近一点
02:04:018 (1,1,1) - 这组好别手，考虑 02:05:018 (1) - ctrl-g? 呃 我打着感觉还挺舒服的 g了感觉差点事……

S o h wrote:

So I think the title should be romanized Suisouka（すいそうか） following the modified hepburn rules, did you have any references for the romanization?