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Marika - Soul Release short ver.

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Kocari US
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Kisses wrote:

normal
00:48:110 (1) - delete NC? I dont see a special reason to break pattern length here Yeah I can see why

00:58:322 (5) - ^ same as above. Though this kinda makes sense with the way you structured the rhythm in the measures I still feel you could get rid of this NC Yeah this one was made that way. Had a lot of vocal changes and wanted to keep it simple

00:51:939 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion. I feel like it would ideal to follow the vocals here as you have been doing throughout the kiai. I also feel like following the vocals here would then give the drum beats later 00:53:216 (4,5) - more emphasis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897712 Weird I didn't even recognize that 1st time through

01:04:705 (1,2) - ^ Same

01:17:471 (7) - an NC here would be nice to give a bit more hp before the final spinner Sure no harm in that
Thanks for mod Kisses
Modem ID
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M4M~

  • General


  1. Maybeeee crop the bg into 1366 x 768?



    Well, 1920 x 1080 is also fine though xd

  2. Just a pure suggestion, but how about adding another kiai time at 01:04:705 ? It would give a nice flashy effect over there xd

  3. Other than that, very good owob. Nice bg btw. I'm drooling :v
  • Normal


  1. 01:06:780 (5) - Probably change this 1/4 slider into a circle at 01:06:939 instead? Since this is the Normal diff and up to this point, the only reversed sliders that you used were 1/2 reversed sliders, which is why the sudden placement of 1/4 reversed slider on the red tick would be a kind of surprise for the beginner players

  2. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~ Since the main music suggests it

  3. 01:10:450 (2) - This slider's reversed part touched the hp bar above for a little bit



    Maybe consider moving it few grids downward?

  4. 01:17:471 (7) - Add NC to this circle please~!

  5. 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion

  6. I found nothing more. Neat diff :)
  • Lasse's Hard


  1. 00:02:950 (1) - This NC is kinda unnecessary in my opinion. Would be best to remove it

  2. 00:12:844 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look very nice in my opinion. It kinds of covering almost 85% part of 00:13:163 (4), and the gap required to make 00:12:844 (3) completely disappear after being hit so that the player wouldn't get confused about the placement of the next object isn't enough (and I also missed it during the test play even if I used the transparent hit circle skin, because the approach circle of 00:12:844 (3) kind of blending in with the approach circle of 00:13:163 (4) , which gave me the 'Eh? Where's the next object's kind of feeling :?) . Would be best to remove it somewhere else to make 00:13:163 (4) more visible during the play, like somewhere around x:404 y:280



    Because it would make the jump from 00:12:844 (3) to 00:13:163 (4) and 00:13:163 (4) to 00:13:322 (5) have an equal distance

  3. 00:23:535 (2,3,4,5) - Probably isn't a very good idea to add streams at the Hard diff right after the 2.09 stars Normal diff even if the distance snap used for this stream is small, since not only it would make the difficulty gap between these two diffs a bit too far, but so is the playability. Would be better to settle with the 1/4 repeated slider instead since it is easier to follow because the density of the objects from 00:14:599 (2) ~ 00:23:376 (1) is kinda low



    Or, stacking this streams instead of spacing it with the low distance snap would be better as well since the distance snap you were using for this stream is almost the same as these 1/2 notes -> 00:33:429 (3,4,5) which might make the players mistaking them as the triple clicks instead of 1/2 notes



    But using a 1/4 repeated slider still a better option in my opinion owob

  4. 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  5. 00:43:961 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:23:535 (2,3,4,5)

  6. 00:54:971 (2) - The reversed part of this slider doesn't get stacked properly with the head of 00:56:088 (3)


  7. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  8. 00:59:599 (1) - Their spacing is slightly different



    Please fix it

  9. 01:01:195 (4) - Add whistle at the head of this slider please, to make it consistent with 01:02:471 (3)

  10. 01:04:705 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  11. 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion
  • Insane


  1. 00:13:641 (10) - Add NC here and remove the one at 00:13:961 (1)

  2. 00:23:535 (2) - Might be best not to stack it with 00:23:376 (1)

  3. 00:25:769 (3,4) - Adjust the placement like this?



    Because its placement right now makes the distance of 00:25:929 (4) to 00:26:088 (5) is slightly closer than the distance between 00:25:769 (3) to 00:25:929 (4)

  4. 00:35:184 (4) - Adjust the placement of this circle for a little bit by disabling the grid snap to make it properly stacked with the tail of 00:34:227 (2). Or just input this -> x:332 y:289


  5. 00:38:056 (4) - Missing clap

  6. 00:40:290 (5) - Add NC here to keep the consistency of 1~5 NC at the previous sections

  7. 00:40:610 (6) - Missing clap

  8. 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  9. 00:45:556 (7) - Add NC here as well~!

  10. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  11. 01:04:705 (1) - ^

  12. 01:17:551 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% please~!
  • Kibb's Extra


  1. 00:02:790 (3,1,2,3) - Their placements are too crowded. Even some pro players might not be able to recognize that there were triple clicks going on at 00:02:950 (1,2,3) since 00:03:030 (2) and 00:03:110 (3) were completely hidden by 00:02:790 (3) :? . Would be best to adjust their placement instead of leaving them as they were now. How about moving 00:02:790 (3) into x:192 y:281 ?




  2. 00:05:024 (2) - This note doesn't get stacked properly with the tail of 00:04:227 (3)



    Move it to x:258 y:120 in order to fix it
  3. 00:35:503 (2) - Maybe move this slider a bit further away from 00:35:024 (1) ? Since its placement now makes the distance between 00:35:024 (1) and 00:35:503 (2) with 1/1 gap is the same as the distance between 00:34:705 (2) and 00:35:024 (1) with 1/4 gap, which would make the rhythm at this section a little bit confusing. How about moving 00:35:503 (2) to x:264 y:128?






  4. 00:38:056 (2) - Same ^ How about moving this slider to x:241 y:267 ?



    Or make 00:38:056 (2) into a straight slider along the way to give some aesthetical values in it


  5. 00:40:610 (2) - ^ x:163 y:169




  6. 00:46:514 (1) - In my opinion, this SV change is quite unnecessary, because it kinds of breaking the rhythm excitement at the kiai time. Moreover, you don't even change the SV of 00:51:939 (1) and 01:04:705 (1) with the same rhythm as 00:46:514 (1) . Just saying :p

  7. 00:56:727 (1) - ^

  8. 01:17:471 (1) - Move this to x:179 y:146 to make it get stacked properly with 01:16:354 (2) . Cute slider btw <3



Okay that's all~!

Good Luck
Kocari US
posted
  1. Just a pure suggestion, but how about adding another kiai time at 01:04:705 ? It would give a nice flashy effect over there xdI'll keep it as is otherwise having this would kill where the break in kiai would be.

  2. Other than that, very good owob. Nice bg btw. I'm drooling :v
  • Normal


  1. 01:06:780 (5) - Probably change this 1/4 slider into a circle at 01:06:939 instead? Since this is the Normal diff and up to this point, the only reversed sliders that you used were 1/2 reversed sliders, which is why the sudden placement of 1/4 reversed slider on the red tick would be a kind of surprise for the beginner players - I've changed it to something different hope its easier for players
  2. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~ Since the main music suggests it I can do that was worried it may not work

  3. 01:10:450 (2) - This slider's reversed part touched the hp bar above for a little bit I think it's because of your skin https://puu.sh/xfvXy/0d7092e7b8.jpg
  4. 01:17:471 (7) - Add NC to this circle please~!

  5. 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion Lowered it to 45% Don't really adjust spinners that often
  6. I found nothing more. Neat diff :)
  • Insane


  1. 00:13:641 (10) - Add NC here and remove the one at 00:13:961 (1) Woops might've messed up during last mod

  2. 00:23:535 (2) - Might be best not to stack it with 00:23:376 (1) Sure
  3. 00:25:769 (3,4) - Adjust the placement like this? Blanket is cool but I wanted to match it with sliderend instead

    Because its placement right now makes the distance of 00:25:929 (4) to 00:26:088 (5) is slightly closer than the distance between 00:25:769 (3) to 00:25:929 (4)

  4. 00:35:184 (4) - Adjust the placement of this circle for a little bit by disabling the grid snap to make it properly stacked with the tail of 00:34:227 (2). Or just input this -> x:332 y:289 Might be editor bug problems
  5. 00:38:056 (4) - Missing clap

  6. 00:40:290 (5) - Add NC here to keep the consistency of 1~5 NC at the previous sections

  7. 00:40:610 (6) - Missing clap

  8. 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  9. 00:45:556 (7) - Add NC here as well~!

  10. 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!

  11. 01:04:705 (1) - ^

  12. 01:17:551 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% please~! Rest Fixed


Okay that's all~!

Good Luck
Thanks for Mod
Kibbleru CA
Quality Assurance Team
posted
all fix

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Artist:Marika
ArtistUnicode:真里歌
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Version:Kibb's Extra
Source:ハロー・レディ！
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Lasse DE
Quality Assurance Team
posted
ClickMyCircle: sorry, but none of your points makes any sense to me, even less so cause they lack reasoning
Modem: can you not post images like that, just add the link or something, makes it a paint to navigate the page/read the mod
00:02:950 (1) - change in song +snapping makes it fit
00:12:844 (3,4) - but it looks nice in my opinion lol, map uses lots of these anyways
will keep the streams for now, they are low spacing and fit the song and at this spacing also stacking makes no real difference

other things fixed
blame kocari for the hitsound stuff

thanks
https://0paste.com/14976.txt
Kocari US
posted
Updated All
Lorkee RO
posted
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
  1. Perfect kek
  1. 00:11:088 (1,2) - Spacing too big.
  2. 00:25:450 (4,5) - Blanket not perfect.
  3. 00:32:790 (4,5) - Maybe you could use 1/2 reverse sliders both times.
  1. 00:04:705 - Strong sound.
  2. 00:05:663 (6) - 1/2 slider that ends on 00:05:822 - ?
  3. 00:10:769 (6) - ^
  4. 00:13:322 (5) - ^ k i won't mention these :P
  5. 01:06:461 (2,1) - Larger spacing would be cool since here 01:04:386 (5,1) - you have a lot bigger jump.
  1. Since you have a structure like here: (it's a bit off tho) 00:05:184 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like you want the same at 00:03:429 (1,2,3,4) -
  1. Why that big spacing change from 00:04:865 (1,2,3) - to 00:05:344 (1,2,3) - ?
  2. 00:04:865 (1,2,3,1) - I don't think it's a good thing to overlap with previous notes, but since you do this a lot idk xd
  3. Maybe you want 00:16:514 (1) - in the middle of 00:15:876 (1,2) -
  4. 00:20:982 (1,2,1) - ^ idk
  5. 00:46:514 (1) - Emphasize dis.
  6. 01:08:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as first.


It's cool rank this plox
Kocari US
posted
  1. 00:11:088 (1,2) - Spacing too big. Woops
  2. 00:25:450 (4,5) - Blanket not perfect. Sure I guess
  3. 00:32:790 (4,5) - Maybe you could use 1/2 reverse sliders both times. Can't do that on norma diffs
  1. Since you have a structure like here: (it's a bit off tho) 00:05:184 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like you want the same at 00:03:429 (1,2,3,4) - They are the same rhythm wise and patterns are almost the same, no change here.


It's cool rank this plox. Thanks for mod[/quote]
Hikan VN
posted
00:00:876 (1) - small stuff but maybe you could probably get the slidertick placed at the middle https://puu.sh/xilMO/65cc3a88b1.png
00:23:376 (4,5) - reverse slider is fine tho, this rhythm is a bit dense where it doesnt need to
00:48:748 (7,1,2) - visual spacing
01:06:780 - 1/2 here? It is still better than 3/2 gap after all
01:17:152 (6,1) - probably 1/1 is better here because the red tick sounds overmapped, end it with slidertail instead of circle would make it cooler as well imo
00:05:663 (5) - Isnt ctrl g this will just better? 00:04:227 (4,5) - seems you did it here and changed that somehow, the current spacing at 00:05:663 (5,1) - is super far and feels awkward af
00:08:535 (1,2,3) - this linear flow is a bit hard to catch imo, you didnt 00:11:407 (2,3,4) - do it here, maybe try putting (3) at 420 160, casual flow is still better than linear flow
00:12:684 (3) - just a suggestion how about making this symmetrical with 00:12:046 (5) -
00:33:748 (8) - 3/4 for vocal would be cool idk
00:47:152 (1) - ctrl g for better flow? It isnt this far at the 2nd kiai
00:54:173 (7) - try ctrl g this to keep consistent spacing with 5,6
00:58:322 (1,2,3,5) - am I wrong or those visual blanket are inconsistent
00:59:599 - velocity 1.4x seems a bit overrated lol, where it should be a bit slow to highlight the part after it (01:04:705 - here i mean)
01:10:450 (3,4) - ctrl g for nice flow but up to you

rest too good cant mod
gl
Kocari US
posted

Hikan wrote:

00:00:876 (1) - small stuff but maybe you could probably get the slidertick placed at the middle https://puu.sh/xilMO/65cc3a88b1.png It's fine people don't see red see anchor points in game anyways
00:23:376 (4,5) - reverse slider is fine tho, this rhythm is a bit dense where it doesnt need to Yeah helps with the buildup a repeat would just make things strange
00:48:748 (7,1,2) - visual spacing I think it's correct.
01:06:780 - 1/2 here? It is still better than 3/2 gap after all 3/2 is fine here. I had it has 1/2 before but it was too hard for beginners so I just skipped over the triplet sound and simplified it
01:17:152 (6,1) - probably 1/1 is better here because the red tick sounds overmapped, end it with slidertail instead of circle would make it cooler as well imo Wanted to end it on a strong note, red ticks are used for these kind of things. It's only overmapped if I added more on that red tick
00:05:663 (5) - Isnt ctrl g this will just better? 00:04:227 (4,5) - seems you did it here and changed that somehow, the current spacing at 00:05:663 (5,1) - is super far and feels awkward af You're probably right but Ctrl+G would destroy the rotation pattern I was going for here.
00:08:535 (1,2,3) - this linear flow is a bit hard to catch imo, you didnt 00:11:407 (2,3,4) - do it here, maybe try putting (3) at 420 160, casual flow is still better than linear flow I made sure that the linear line was perfectly evened out and it would make sense to do something casual but then have something like this on there 00:09:493 (5,6,1) -
00:12:684 (3) - just a suggestion how about making this symmetrical with 00:12:046 (5) - Wanted to keep blankets, don't wanna ruin by making them straight sliders 00:12:046 (5) -
00:33:748 (8) - 3/4 for vocal would be cool idk yeah does sound a lot better, but I've already simplified the map would be strange to add it
00:47:152 (1) - ctrl g for better flow? It isnt this far at the 2nd kiai But it'll make these too far 00:47:471 (2,3) -
00:54:173 (7) - try ctrl g this to keep consistent spacing with 5,6 Oh I didn't care about consistent spacing here
00:58:322 (1,2,3,5) - am I wrong or those visual blanket are inconsistent Made some tweaks
00:59:599 - velocity 1.4x seems a bit overrated lol, where it should be a bit slow to highlight the part after it (01:04:705 - here i mean) Made some changes
01:10:450 (3,4) - ctrl g for nice flow but up to you Feels the same either way

rest too good cant mod
gl
Thanks For Mod
Ohwow US
posted
m4m

[Kibb's Extra]
00:29:918 (1) - sounds weird because the vocal is missed out on the red tick. Also believe that you can curve it a bit more so it blankets the next slider better.
00:24:812 (1) - ^
00:46:514 (1) - tbh I feel like you can make this slider better to blanket better: https://i.gyazo.com/36c1b3e959c81550c86 ... 0e4fba.jpg
also applies to other similar sliders like 00:41:248 (2) - 00:38:695 (2) -

[Insane]
00:49:067 (8,1) - no spacing emphasis, but interesting to play i guess
00:56:727 (1,1) - these have no spacing, but 00:46:514 (1,1) - has huge spacing. Same part of the music.

[Lasse's Hard]
Looks hard to read with slightly low AR and some trippy stacks. Buff up teh AR 7.8 to a 7.9 pls. :p

[Normal]
00:00:876 (1) - Looks uneven and off, especially when rotated 90 degrees. Use grid snapping to help make it more symmetrical?
00:24:493 (2,3,4,5) - why no perfect squares?
00:31:514 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:088 (3,4,5,1) - ^

Stacks are popping the DS like 01:01:514 (5,6) - 01:02:790 (2,3) -

[Doormat's Easy]
00:00:000 (1) - undermapped, remap please.

Looks pretty cool. I personally disagree with some ideas and stuff, but it's just difference in taste i guess. Good luck!
rohasshiki US
posted
M4M

  1. Not really much here, it looks good aside from some weird stylistic timing and spacing that's perfectly fine
  1. 00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This might be a bit hard for an Insane diff? Im probably just high
  2. 00:56:727 (1,1) - This feels out of place since the music doesn't change that much yet the spacing is off despite having different timing than the two equally spaced parts next to it
  3. 01:02:631 (4) - I almost feel like this note isn't necessary, doesn't really follow the pattern of the two parts before it and I'm not sure there's a significant change
  1. 00:23:535 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe make this straight or just stack? I know it blankets but it looks a little cluttered to me
  1. 00:41:407 (6) - Angle this down just a hair and it looks a bit better to me


Great set, looking forward to seeing its progress! M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651083
Kocari US
posted

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

[Insane]
00:49:067 (8,1) - no spacing emphasis, but interesting to play i guess
00:56:727 (1,1) - these have no spacing, but 00:46:514 (1,1) - has huge spacing. Same part of the music. Made changes

[Normal]
00:00:876 (1) - Looks uneven and off, especially when rotated 90 degrees. Use grid snapping to help make it more symmetrical? yeah looks like shit made a different easier slider
00:24:493 (2,3,4,5) - why no perfect squares? Oh didn't plan to make a square here.
00:31:514 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:088 (3,4,5,1) - ^ Made some tweaks

Stacks are popping the DS like 01:01:514 (5,6) - 01:02:790 (2,3) -

[Doormat's Easy]
00:00:000 (1) - undermapped, remap please. I agree

Looks pretty cool. I personally disagree with some ideas and stuff, but it's just difference in taste i guess. Good luck!

rohasshiki wrote:

M4M

  1. 00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This might be a bit hard for an Insane diff? Im probably just high Compared to extra it's pretty lenient
  2. 00:56:727 (1,1) - This feels out of place since the music doesn't change that much yet the spacing is off despite having different timing than the two equally spaced parts next to it Same as 00:46:195 (3,4,1) -
  3. 01:02:631 (4) - I almost feel like this note isn't necessary, doesn't really follow the pattern of the two parts before it and I'm not sure there's a significant change Had to keep it consistent to (3)(4) because they have the same sounds.
  1. 00:41:407 (6) - Angle this down just a hair and it looks a bit better to me I'll keep it to my taste for now


Great set, looking forward to seeing its progress! M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651083
Thanks for mods from both you. Will be modding both your maps on Sunday as well as others
Doormat CA
Beatmap Nominator
posted

Ohwow wrote:

[Doormat's Easy]
00:00:000 (1) - undermapped, remap please. all fixed, thanks
https://drmt.s-ul.eu/YPVYgB3B
kunka JP
posted
Hi
From your Q
Kibb's Extra

  1. Difficulty configuration item is all the same as the insane diff. I'll recommend AR9.2 and OD8.
  2. 00:13:163 (2,3) - I think ctrl+G will also be a guitar follow. Merit can click a cymbal sound of 00:13:322 -
  3. 00:34:227 - I think it is not necessary because inherited points of the same setting is in 00:23:854 -
Insane

  1. 00:09:173 (4) - This is the same phrase as 00:03:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Why did you change the snap method? I think the same way is good because it feels unnatural.
  2. 00:48:907 (7) - This is my opinion, so it's no problem to ignore it. I really can't recommend 1/2stack right after triplet or stream. This is a trap and a lot of people will cut the combo here. I recommend remove of the stack.
  3. 00:49:067 (8,1) - I think the overlap of the slider can cause confusion. It's a good to move a little bit so that it can be clearly visible.
  4. 00:58:801 (3,2) - Fix stack
Lasse's Hard

  1. 00:34:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was really confused. This method can be understood if it is more than insane diff. I don't think it's a necessary technique in the hard diff.
  2. 00:59:599 - End of kiai time,,,All diff ends with 01:07:258 -
Normal

  1. Inherited points is in some places with by same settings. Is it by Hitsounds copy? If so, I can understand it.
  2. 00:34:067 (6,1) - It is the only NC that is out of consistency. I think it's better to switch.

    Good
Doormat's Easy

  1. Inherited points is in some places with by same settings. Is it by Hitsounds copy? If so, I can understand it.
  2. 00:37:897 (3) - Because it's not parallel, I feel sense of incongruity.
Good Luck!
Lasse DE
Quality Assurance Team
posted
Lorkee: I'm following guitar for this part, so your rhythm suggestions don't really fit
1/1 spacing doesn't really matter as long as it's readable, doesn't really change how this pattern comes across and symmetry makes it stand out more

Ohwow: 0.1 change in ar doesn't really do anything lol

kunka: the 1/1 concept was introduced before so I think it's fine
different kiai on gd is fine and the next part sounds too different to me

no changes, but thanks for modding!
Kocari US
posted

kunka wrote:

Hi
From your Q

Insane

  1. 00:09:173 (4) - This is the same phrase as 00:03:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Why did you change the snap method? I think the same way is good because it feels unnatural. I would disagree (4) sounds more like 00:09:812 (1) - because the basis on those long sliders was for guitars, but this section was different in guitar strums so I mixed it up a bit.
  2. 00:48:907 (7) - This is my opinion, so it's no problem to ignore it. I really can't recommend 1/2stack right after triplet or stream. This is a trap and a lot of people will cut the combo here. I recommend remove of the stack. Yeah changed it to what it was before
  3. 00:49:067 (8,1) - I think the overlap of the slider can cause confusion. It's a good to move a little bit so that it can be clearly visible. Yeah did something different.
  4. 00:58:801 (3,2) - Fix stack Sure

Normal
Inherited points is in some places with by same settings. Is it by Hitsounds copy? If so, I can understand it.
00:34:067 (6,1) - It is the only NC that is out of consistency. I think it's better to switch. Yeah
Thanks for mod, Fixed the inheriting points issues for normal and easy
Sotarks FR
Beatmap Nominator
posted
M4M

[Kibb]
00:17:790 (3) - clap instead the whistle ?
01:02:072 (3,1) - could maybe have those stacked like you did previously 00:56:088 (5,6,1) - like here

nothing to say, pretty clean.

[Insane]
00:17:790 (4) - clap
00:38:695 (2,3) - could be nice to have a 1/2 slider here like you did previously
00:44:918 (5) - slider 1/2 + circle here would fit better the vocals
00:48:110 (1,2,3) - sharp flow here, try avoid linear flow here, this is just personnal opinion, ebcause i'd rather chose to give more impact 00:48:429 (3) - on this clap.
01:15:716 (3) - reverse feels out of place, i'd consider using same rhytmn as section like 01:10:610 (4,5,1) - tbh

[Lasse]
00:03:110 (3,1) - stack like that feels unconfortable for hards
00:12:844 (3,4) - you're kinda doing harsh overlaps for hards, try maybe smth like this ?
00:33:748 (5,1,3) - unconfortable rhythm here, this can be fixed by making 00:34:227 (2,3) - those 1/1 slider
00:35:024 (5,1) - maybe try rhythm like this ?

rest is fine!

gl
Kocari US
posted
@Sotarks Changed some stuff
-NanoRIPE- ID
posted
yo m4m

[general]
noething

[easy]
00:39:812 (2) - its kinda weird if you put 3/2 reverse slider here since you always put 2/1 slider to represent the calm part.even though you emphasized the drum bass/vocal here but still its unbalanced for me

[normal]
00:56:727 (1) - it seems you tried to emphasize the vocal break here but it makes the rhythm a bit awkward imo.what about put 3/2 slider here? for the vocal breaks here

[hard]
00:33:429 (3,4,5) - maybe increase the ds? so people can really tell that you emphasize the drum here (you used this kind of pattern for the vocal,like you did at 00:05:344 (4,5) - etc)
00:38:056 (2) - better if you stack this with 00:37:578 (1) - on the head for represent the vocal more
00:41:567 (5) - ^ (but this one on the tail slider (3) )
01:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - its kinda wrong if you used this kind of pattern to emphasize the drum since you always used this pattern to the vocal

[insane]
00:11:727 (4,5) - maybe just make the shape same each other? for better pattern i guess
00:54:971 (5,8) - idk about this,its kinda unblanace imo.i know you tried to emphasize the vocal but its too far (i mean the ds) so maybe just stack this circle with (8)?
01:05:982 (1,1,1) - i rather making a big jump pattern here instead cuz the drum ~
01:06:780 (2,3,4) - its quite confusing if you emphasize the lil sound (idk what is that sound tho) with these pattern,ehh i just feel wrong abou this ~ (maybe stack it would solve the problem i guess)
01:12:205 (5) - 74,358? for the guitar?? cuz stack its not quite enough ~

[extra]
00:08:056 (1,2) - 351,211? the guitar's sound is not really strong tho so why you have to make a big ds here? (not the stronger one as 00:06:461 (2,3) - )

ok thats it ~ (sorry for terrible english xd)
GL! (about my map's you just had to mod the top diff ~ )
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