Overall this one felt random. Patterns were use either once, and forgotten about, which makes them stick out in a part of a song which shouldn't, and other parts of the song weren't clear with their spacing, and what the song is following.Thanks for mod
It was hard to write a mod since ideas were not so clear. This although maybe due to me being sleep deprived, but even so, please make ideas stand out more, by repeating them.
An idea said twice is over thrice the strength of an idea said once. Though I agree I wouldn't prefer to keep using same patterns. I actually have for a lot of rhythms if you looked at it again. I was quite repetitive with the pattern choices as well since it was mostly copy paste from one another.
Maybe use an NC here > 00:02:950 (3) , or here > 00:02:790 (2) to show difference inn rhythm in the same spacing. Did something different
00:23:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is an example of a patter never used again. This stands out because it is very obviously sliders on top of each other. Please repeat patterns in the section of the song, so they don't feel placed there for "variety", disregarding the song. I wouldn't be so sure, even though it may not seem like it this could be interpreted as the same pattern 00:27:684 (1,2,3.4,5) -
00:28:322 (3,4,5) - Spacing needs contrast in order to stand out. With linear jumps, it was obvious to the player if objects were spaced differently. This triangleish pattern doesn't emphasize object 5 correctly. Make spacing between 3 and 4 smaller to show this off. Slight tweaks but object 5 doesn't have any impact because nothings really on it.
01:12:365 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This entire part of the map feels too crowded. Maybe space objects more? This was already mapped a lot at but mentioned only at the end? 01:01:673 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'll keep it
01:16:195 (1,2) - Object placements used too rarely stand out when they really shouldn't. This pattern stands out since it is structured so much differently than anything else in this section. This is not what should be done since the song doesn't change enough to justify this. Try and match 01:12:205 (5,1) , since it sound pretty similar. Even though that could be the case the one you mentioned is for a strong individual beat. The one I did at 01:16:195 (1,2) - is to make out the two consecutive drum beats that play on one another. I'll keep it in mind if anyone asks about it
Thanks for Modtimemon wrote:
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[General]
It seems like at 01:21:939 - on all diffs the green lines are not working properly to silence the spinner Yeah weird I thought I was the only one who noticed that. I thought it was probably a glitch
[Kibb's Extra]
01:04:705 (1,2,3,4) - map broke
[Insane]
00:48:907 (7,8,1) - this would be fine if you would put 7 as where imo, looks incredibly hard to read because of the circle on top of both sliders As the approach circle makes it weird Moved 7 somewhere else for now
00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - everything follows vocal EXCEPT this one at 00:55:769 (1) - imo that circle on the downbeat really makes everything else in the same rhythm sound like it's not properly following the music. You can either stack the 00:55:769 (1) - under the vocal to make it less significant OR convert the 00:55:610 (8,1) - into one slider Yeah I stacked it
01:15:397 (2) - remove the reverse and move the 01:15:876 (3) - to that tick and just add a circle or something because I like the 1/2 to follow the guitar better I just made the 2nd one a repeat follows the guitars as well
01:21:939 - m8 the green line isn't working properly, it's not silencing the spinner at all in fact it's playing at a really loud volume (you can test this by putting a circle after green line, it's silent)
[Normal]
00:13:641 - why is this section so dense in terms of object density? It's even weirder that harder diffs (everyone of them) have less density..... yeah you're right I fixed a lot after this portion to make it easier
01:05:982 (3,4) - I suggest 1/2 with a reverse and a circle, fits better imo. This one ends on a slider tail which is really anticlimatic I agree but I'll keep it for now
just throw 12 SP and just rank it, who needs Easy diff (oh wait your normal exceeds 2* ANGERY)
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[ClickMyCircle] wrote:
Insane
00:02:471 (2,3,1) - increase the spacing It's a quirk I wouldn't say it's a bad thing
00:13:641 (10,1) - placing objects like this is baitable for player Only baitable for 12k and up imo it's fairly simple since they are two separate parts
00:49:067 (8,1) - sliders like these doesn't match with ranking criteria Got a long way to go my friend
01:05:184 (3) - this slider ends too high Alright I'll move it out more
01:12:365 (1) - https://gyazo.com/72b8d235ce003dcd13af83717cf6b061 imo it's better Wouldn't follow correct rhythm choice and how it's previously mapped
Kisses wrote:
normal
00:48:110 (1) - delete NC? I dont see a special reason to break pattern length here Yeah I can see why
00:58:322 (5) - ^ same as above. Though this kinda makes sense with the way you structured the rhythm in the measures I still feel you could get rid of this NC Yeah this one was made that way. Had a lot of vocal changes and wanted to keep it simple
00:51:939 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion. I feel like it would ideal to follow the vocals here as you have been doing throughout the kiai. I also feel like following the vocals here would then give the drum beats later 00:53:216 (4,5) - more emphasis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8897712 Weird I didn't even recognize that 1st time through
01:04:705 (1,2) - ^ Same
01:17:471 (7) - an NC here would be nice to give a bit more hp before the final spinner Sure no harm in that
- Just a pure suggestion, but how about adding another kiai time at 01:04:705 ? It would give a nice flashy effect over there xdI'll keep it as is otherwise having this would kill where the break in kiai would be.
- Other than that, very good owob.
Nice bg btw. I'm drooling :v
Normal
- 01:06:780 (5) - Probably change this 1/4 slider into a circle at 01:06:939 instead? Since this is the Normal diff and up to this point, the only reversed sliders that you used were 1/2 reversed sliders, which is why the sudden placement of 1/4 reversed slider on the red tick would be a kind of surprise for the beginner players - I've changed it to something different hope its easier for players
- 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~ Since the main music suggests it I can do that was worried it may not work
- 01:10:450 (2) - This slider's reversed part touched the hp bar above for a little bit I think it's because of your skin https://puu.sh/xfvXy/0d7092e7b8.jpg
- 01:17:471 (7) - Add NC to this circle please~!
- 01:17:631 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% would be nice, since having a 85% spinner at the end of the song is pretty loud in my opinion Lowered it to 45% Don't really adjust spinners that often
- I found nothing more. Neat diff
Insane Okay that's all~!
- 00:13:641 (10) - Add NC here and remove the one at 00:13:961 (1) Woops might've messed up during last mod
- 00:23:535 (2) - Might be best not to stack it with 00:23:376 (1) Sure
- 00:25:769 (3,4) - Adjust the placement like this? Blanket is cool but I wanted to match it with sliderend instead
Because its placement right now makes the distance of 00:25:929 (4) to 00:26:088 (5) is slightly closer than the distance between 00:25:769 (3) to 00:25:929 (4)- 00:35:184 (4) - Adjust the placement of this circle for a little bit by disabling the grid snap to make it properly stacked with the tail of 00:34:227 (2). Or just input this -> x:332 y:289 Might be editor bug problems
- 00:38:056 (4) - Missing clap
- 00:40:290 (5) - Add NC here to keep the consistency of 1~5 NC at the previous sections
- 00:40:610 (6) - Missing clap
- 00:41:727 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 00:45:556 (7) - Add NC here as well~!
- 00:59:599 (1) - Add finish at the head of this slider please~!
- 01:04:705 (1) - ^
- 01:17:551 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 30% ~ 40% please~! Rest Fixed
Good Luck
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Hikan wrote:
normal00:00:876 (1) - small stuff but maybe you could probably get the slidertick placed at the middle https://puu.sh/xilMO/65cc3a88b1.png It's fine people don't see red see anchor points in game anyways
00:23:376 (4,5) - reverse slider is fine tho, this rhythm is a bit dense where it doesnt need to Yeah helps with the buildup a repeat would just make things strange
00:48:748 (7,1,2) - visual spacing I think it's correct.
01:06:780 - 1/2 here? It is still better than 3/2 gap after all 3/2 is fine here. I had it has 1/2 before but it was too hard for beginners so I just skipped over the triplet sound and simplified it
01:17:152 (6,1) - probably 1/1 is better here because the red tick sounds overmapped, end it with slidertail instead of circle would make it cooler as well imo Wanted to end it on a strong note, red ticks are used for these kind of things. It's only overmapped if I added more on that red tickInsrest too good cant mod00:05:663 (5) - Isnt ctrl g this will just better? 00:04:227 (4,5) - seems you did it here and changed that somehow, the current spacing at 00:05:663 (5,1) - is super far and feels awkward af You're probably right but Ctrl+G would destroy the rotation pattern I was going for here.
00:08:535 (1,2,3) - this linear flow is a bit hard to catch imo, you didnt 00:11:407 (2,3,4) - do it here, maybe try putting (3) at 420 160, casual flow is still better than linear flow I made sure that the linear line was perfectly evened out and it would make sense to do something casual but then have something like this on there 00:09:493 (5,6,1) -
00:12:684 (3) - just a suggestion how about making this symmetrical with 00:12:046 (5) - Wanted to keep blankets, don't wanna ruin by making them straight sliders 00:12:046 (5) -
00:33:748 (8) - 3/4 for vocal would be cool idk yeah does sound a lot better, but I've already simplified the map would be strange to add it
00:47:152 (1) - ctrl g for better flow? It isnt this far at the 2nd kiai But it'll make these too far 00:47:471 (2,3) -
00:54:173 (7) - try ctrl g this to keep consistent spacing with 5,6 Oh I didn't care about consistent spacing here
00:58:322 (1,2,3,5) - am I wrong or those visual blanket are inconsistent Made some tweaks
00:59:599 - velocity 1.4x seems a bit overrated lol, where it should be a bit slow to highlight the part after it (01:04:705 - here i mean) Made some changes
01:10:450 (3,4) - ctrl g for nice flow but up to you Feels the same either way
gl
Ohwow wrote:
m4m
[Insane]
00:49:067 (8,1) - no spacing emphasis, but interesting to play i guess
00:56:727 (1,1) - these have no spacing, but 00:46:514 (1,1) - has huge spacing. Same part of the music. Made changes
[Normal]
00:00:876 (1) - Looks uneven and off, especially when rotated 90 degrees. Use grid snapping to help make it more symmetrical? yeah looks like shit made a different easier slider
00:24:493 (2,3,4,5) - why no perfect squares? Oh didn't plan to make a square here.
00:31:514 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:088 (3,4,5,1) - ^ Made some tweaks
Stacks are popping the DS like 01:01:514 (5,6) - 01:02:790 (2,3) -
[Doormat's Easy]
00:00:000 (1) - undermapped, remap please. I agree
Looks pretty cool. I personally disagree with some ideas and stuff, but it's just difference in taste i guess. Good luck!
rohasshiki wrote:
M4MInsane
- 00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This might be a bit hard for an Insane diff? Im probably just high Compared to extra it's pretty lenient
- 00:56:727 (1,1) - This feels out of place since the music doesn't change that much yet the spacing is off despite having different timing than the two equally spaced parts next to it Same as 00:46:195 (3,4,1) -
- 01:02:631 (4) - I almost feel like this note isn't necessary, doesn't really follow the pattern of the two parts before it and I'm not sure there's a significant change Had to keep it consistent to (3)(4) because they have the same sounds.
Normal
- 00:41:407 (6) - Angle this down just a hair and it looks a bit better to me I'll keep it to my taste for now
Great set, looking forward to seeing its progress! M4M map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/651083
https://drmt.s-ul.eu/YPVYgB3BOhwow wrote:
[Doormat's Easy]
00:00:000 (1) - undermapped, remap please. all fixed, thanks
kunka wrote:
Hi
From your QInsane
- 00:09:173 (4) - This is the same phrase as 00:03:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Why did you change the snap method? I think the same way is good because it feels unnatural. I would disagree (4) sounds more like 00:09:812 (1) - because the basis on those long sliders was for guitars, but this section was different in guitar strums so I mixed it up a bit.
- 00:48:907 (7) - This is my opinion, so it's no problem to ignore it. I really can't recommend 1/2stack right after triplet or stream. This is a trap and a lot of people will cut the combo here. I recommend remove of the stack. Yeah changed it to what it was before
- 00:49:067 (8,1) - I think the overlap of the slider can cause confusion. It's a good to move a little bit so that it can be clearly visible. Yeah did something different.
- 00:58:801 (3,2) - Fix stack Sure
NormalInherited points is in some places with by same settings. Is it by Hitsounds copy? If so, I can understand it.
00:34:067 (6,1) - It is the only NC that is out of consistency. I think it's better to switch. Yeah
Thanks for the mod sorry I didn't change anything, but I feel they weren't quite necessary for me. I'll definitely keep them in mind if asked again.-NanoRIPE- wrote:
yo m4m
[general]
noething
[normal]
00:56:727 (1) - it seems you tried to emphasize the vocal break here but it makes the rhythm a bit awkward imo.what about put 3/2 slider here? for the vocal breaks here I'll keep as is, matches a lot with 01:00:716 (3,4) - but I do understand. Just wanted to make them stronger by having them as single notes.
[insane]
00:11:727 (4,5) - maybe just make the shape same each other? for better pattern i guess I see what you mean but I was trying to balance out 00:11:088 (1) - more than the curved slider
00:54:971 (5,8) - idk about this,its kinda unbalance imo.i know you tried to emphasize the vocal but its too far (i mean the ds) so maybe just stack this circle with (8)? If that spacing is far same can be said for 00:54:971 (4) - 00:56:088 (3) - I'll keep them for now, I was very precise when making these jumps but this is kiai so I wanted to do something more.
01:05:982 (1,1,1) - i rather making a big jump pattern here instead cuz the drum ~ See that's what everyone would expect that's why I wanted to add a twist instead and just make them shorter distance. I've done this is my other GDs on Nishino Kana map
01:06:780 (2,3,4) - its quite confusing if you emphasize the lil sound (idk what is that sound tho) with these pattern,ehh i just feel wrong abou this ~ (maybe stack it would solve the problem i guess) The drum sounds are very clear here. They don't resemble 00:48:588 (4,5,6) - one bit because this one doesn't have much sound but adds more to play. So I'm not sure what you mean here
01:12:205 (5) - 74,358? for the guitar?? cuz stack its not quite enough ~ Had to keep them consistent with 01:15:716 (3,4,1,2) -
ok thats it ~ (sorry for terrible english xd)
GL! (about my map's you just had to mod the top diff ~ )
kunka wrote:
Doormat's Easy Good Luck!
- Inherited points is in some places with by same settings. Is it by Hitsounds copy? If so, I can understand it. yeah hitsound copier lol, fixed
- 00:37:897 (3) - Because it's not parallel, I feel sense of incongruity. made it parallel
-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[easy]
00:39:812 (2) - its kinda weird if you put 3/2 reverse slider here since you always put 2/1 slider to represent the calm part.even though you emphasized the drum bass/vocal here but still its unbalanced for me did a thing to 00:34:067 (1,2,3) - , should be more balanced now
-Kazuto wrote:
[Doormat uwu]00:04:546 (3,1) - Is there any way to make it not overlap? flipped the shape i guess
00:05:982 (1,1) - i think for those 2, cymbals are not needed i'll leave this to kocari since i just copied hitsounds
Sotarks wrote:
[Lasse]
00:03:110 (3,1) - stack like that feels unconfortable for hards how so, 1/4 -> 1/1 is easy
00:12:844 (3,4) - you're kinda doing harsh overlaps for hards, try maybe smth like this ? it's fine to read
00:33:748 (5,1,3) - unconfortable rhythm here, this can be fixed by making 00:34:227 (2,3) - those 1/1 slider prefer following the song
00:35:024 (5,1) - maybe try rhythm like this ? weird with vocals
-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[hard]
00:33:429 (3,4,5) - maybe increase the ds? so people can really tell that you emphasize the drum here (you used this kind of pattern for the vocal,like you did at 00:05:344 (4,5) - etc) don't think that matters, rather keep the overlap spacing structure
00:38:056 (2) - better if you stack this with 00:37:578 (1) - on the head for represent the vocal more
00:41:567 (5) - ^ (but this one on the tail slider (3) )
why would I put big jumps in a calm part lol. antijumps work similar but fit much better
01:05:982 (1,2,1,2) - its kinda wrong if you used this kind of pattern to emphasize the drum since you always used this pattern to the vocal how,
I don't think that matters it's in a different part anyways
Waiting for other Cucks then full updateBattle wrote:
[Normal]
01:06:939 (6,1) - idk, if possible try to move 6, a lot of your previous stacks like this indicate that it was 1/2, but here is a 1/1 gap Alright did some tweaks
[Insane]
00:43:322 (2,3,4) - i think you could space out 2,3 and maybe 4 if u wanted to, contrary to the building intensity of the song, this is kinda just what you would see in a normal section lol Did some stuff
00:47:471 (2,3) - ya this is way to easy to misread as a triplet, u should probs moves 3 Aight Ctrl+G stuff here
00:53:854 (5,6,7) - it'd be really cool if you incorporated a back and forth motion like you did for 00:53:216 (1,2,3) - just to draw parallels to similar kind of things going on in the song For whatever I did rhythm didn't feel right if I tried to make it parallel. With the triplet being in there it's not identical to the previous back and forth which makes things awkward for me.
00:54:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a little exaggerated in comparison to all your other jumps, maybe tone the 3,4,5 part down a bit Smoothed this part out made things more consistent but PP
01:03:429 (4) - really should make the red tick on this clickable tbh, a lot of time for slow sections, it's the drums that feel the most satisfying if they're the most focused on instrument to hit in game Only part of the music that really dies down and rhythmically sounds like this compared to the rest of the song. If I tried notes it'll really kill the subtleness of the sliders in this section. I think this is the only time it's passable in the song imo
01:05:982 (1,1,1,1) - even though it's nc'd it's kinda weird to have them as anti-jumps considering you didn't really use antijumps for emphasis for the most part Probably true but I like this one more than other patterns that I do https://puu.sh/xxbwv/d26f732c9f.jpg So I'll keep this as is just for my preferences. I don't see anything wrong with playability as well as misreading this so I believe it should be ok. People may not like it because music freaks but I like it.