Very late mod,
As requested
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General]
Don't see a problem and other modders probably have caught everything that is unrankable. Mod will be "nazi" stuff as the map seems fine.
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Normal]
00:03:295 (4) - Move the slider more down, and spread the anchor points a little more.
http://puu.sh/6Zt2. It gives a nicer flow.
00:05:795 (2) - Why did you put a red point for this slider? Make it a white instead. My suggestion is to move it a bit more to the right and use 3 anchor points like this
http://puu.sh/6Ztw so that it points to the next note. This gives better flow.
00:10:795 (4) - Look a lot nicer if you put it here
http://puu.sh/6ZtN.
00:16:628 (3) - Please change to a short slider (start at 00:16:420 and end at 00:16:628). It feel really weird since I can hear vocal and you didn't map it. I understand you're following the piano so, a short slider will make it feel less weird, while letting you still follow the piano. If you need a suggestion on where to put it...
http://puu.sh/6Zu9.
00:19:961 (2) - ^ Start at 00:19:753 and end at 00:19:961.
http://puu.sh/6Zuz.
00:20:795 (4.5) - I'm sure you can make these two sliders better.
00:55:795 (4.5) - (5) is touching end of slider (4) a bit, try to place it so they don't touch, will look cleaner.
01:01:628 (4) - Rotate 90 degree clockwise, then ctrl + H. Then place at x:280 y:96
http://puu.sh/6Zv8. I keep thinking this slider was going to be a kick slider.
01:07:878 (4) - This slider can be better.
01:17:461 (2.3) - If you change these sliders to something else. It would be more interesting. One suggestion is to just curve them.
01:19:961 (3) - ^
Everything seem good, some part at the beginning felt weird since you're following the instrument and not the vocal. They can easily be fix by following my suggestion. One thing I suggest you do if you want this difficulty to be perfect is to self-mod and work on the sliders a bit more as some sliders doesn't look that great. You don't have to, but it will make this difficulty "perfect."
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Kiiwa's Hard]
- Why does this diff have sv 1.09? Guess you can keep it since it doesn't make much of a difference.
- Try a higher stack leniency so stack looks a bit better.
01:02:045 (1.2.3.4) - (1) was annoying to play. I would prefer if you space it out instead. I suggest double stacking like this
http://puu.sh/6Zy9.
I was a bit worried about some overlapping like at 00:01:836 as I thought it would be covered by the default skin hit burst. However, everything seem to play fine and this difficulty is quite nice actually.
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Insane]
00:34:961 (2.3.4) - Maybe place like this,
http://puu.sh/6ZA6 and
http://puu.sh/6ZAb00:49:544 (1.3) - Maybe add a red point to these two sliders?
http://puu.sh/6ZAy Tweak it a bit. Play a bit nicer and more interesting.
Not much to say, only the two things above annoyed me.
This beatmap looks good enough for rank. No star since this beatmap doesn't need it, but good luck on rank.