1. Insane (4.73 stars, 139 notes)
2. Kiiwa's Hard (3.83 stars, 121 notes)
3. Normal (2.91 stars, 91 notes)

Selee wrote:

timing sounds fine to me..
for the last part you can just use a spinner...

Megurine Luka wrote:

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蹲点。


EDIT：难度控制上这是我能办到的最难(大概
如果和kiiwa姑娘的冲掉了那就算了>.>总之用不用看你。

slider接四连打是什么我才不知道呢

kanpakyin wrote:

Here's the timing I've gotten

1. Offset: 795ms BPM: 144.00

Oh,don't forget to snap the 1/3 part manually

1. Link:http://puu.sh/6e0m
2. Video Provider:Frankcons
3. Encoder:h.264/mp4
4. Scale:640x360
5. File Size:5.97MB

xykbear wrote:

Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
于是决定好需要什么了么？

Yasora-chan wrote:

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Normal
00:22:042 (5) end in the 00:23:292 ? ok. and thus the spinner followed ends in 00:25:792
00:39:125 (6) new combo ? ok
00:54:958 (3) not consistent spacing ok

Kiiwa's Hard
00:52:875 (1) stack make confused no, it seems ok for hard to me,but I'll still ask Kiiwa for decision later

Insane
01:21:208 (5) new combo ? ok

maybe, this is some suggestions from me~ sorry if my mod is bad <:3Your mod is helpful ~

frost-b-spec wrote:

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thx reqs~

but,i found little things...sorry

[Kiiwa]
0.15.375(2) - end:0.16.208 no, it seems ok to me,but I'll still ask Kiiwa for decision later

terametis wrote:

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Red: If possible, change.

[Easy]
00:54:542　(2)　　　　　stack? no

[Insane]
00:17:875　(7)　　　　　(432,272)? ok
00:26:208　(2)　　　　　(344,148)? no
00:34:125　(1)　　　　　stack ok
00:50:167　(2)　　　　　(144,88)? ok
00:54:125　(3)　　　　　clap? no , but i use whistle instead and thus vol. is raised to 70% instead
00:59:542　(6)　　　　　(192,336)? ok
01:06:625　(2)　　　　　clap? ok
01:12:250　(6)　　　　　(372,312) ok

Nice song,Nice map
Good Luck Really helpful mod ~

tutuhaha wrote:

歌很好求GD>3<！
Insane 搞定了
附送音效一个假如要用的话你们俩的音效不用改把我这个放进去就OK了
0 0最近做这种慢曲子手感较好
P.S 记住一定要塞音效听哦要不然可能会比较难听反正我没听╮(￣▽￣")╭
有种哦擦感OTL....wav居然不给传.......我给你QQ离线传了就酱╮(￣▽￣")╭

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

1. Nice!

1. 00:54:542 (2,3,4) - 这几个note不加点音效么? 0.0 总感觉缺了什么。。
2. 01:24:541 (1) - 这个spin消音吧？Sounds not good currently >_>

1. (This is 吐槽 only)为什么SV用1.09而不是1.1什么的。。。>_>
2. 00:02:042 (3) - 这个一定会被MAT什么的挑的<_> 开始路径完全看不清（虽然应该不会有谁会miss。。）想办法改改。。
3. 00:06:417 (5) - ^
4. 00:12:875 (x) - 无用时间线，删掉删掉~
5. 00:39:959 (x) - ^
6. 00:56:208 (1) - 这是啥。。。我觉得应该对齐1/8吧。。。>_>
7. 00:58:292 (2) - Unrankable slider.
8. 01:02:459 (3,4,1) - Spacing？只是感觉不太美观<_>
9. 01:16:000 (1) - 没有完美堆叠~.~
10. 01:24:125 (1) - 一样~建议消音~

1. 00:21:416 (6,7) - 没有完美堆叠~
2. 00:46:972 (3) - Unsnapped!! >A<
3. 01:10:375 (3) - 我不确定这个应该1/6snap还是1/8snap @.@
4. 01:24:125 (1) - 消音？

JoJo wrote:

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你好~
Request from #modreqs >w<

1. Red-You must fix it.
2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
3. Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

1. Nice!

[Normal]

1. 00:54:542 (2,3,4) - 这几个note不加点音效么? 0.0 总感觉缺了什么。。想不出怎么加了= =.. 不加貌似还可以..
2. 01:24:541 (1) - 这个spin消音吧？Sounds not good currently >_>

ok

[Kiiwa's Hard] 这个diff的修改只是我的想法，还要让Kiiwa决定~

1. (This is 吐槽 only)为什么SV用1.09而不是1.1什么的。。。>_>我去问问Kiiwa为什么= =
2. 00:02:042 (3) - 这个一定会被MAT什么的挑的<_> 开始路径完全看不清（虽然应该不会有谁会miss。。）想办法改改。。 同意
3. 00:06:417 (5) - ^ 同意
4. 00:12:875 (x) - 无用时间线，删掉删掉~ ok
5. 00:39:959 (x) - ^ ok
6. 00:56:208 (1) - 这是啥。。。我觉得应该对齐1/8吧。。。>_>个人认为原本的可以..
7. 00:58:292 (2) - Unrankable slider. sure ?
8. 01:02:459 (3,4,1) - Spacing？只是感觉不太美观<_> 不是一条弧线形嘛= =?
9. 01:16:000 (1) - 没有完美堆叠~.~ yes
10. 01:24:125 (1) - 一样~建议消音~

= =在normal我说了ok就是改到30%去了 不用完全静音吧?

[Insane]

1. 00:21:416 (6,7) - 没有完美堆叠~ fixed
2. 00:46:972 (3) - Unsnapped!! >A<用的1.8的DS
3. 01:10:375 (3) - 我不确定这个应该1/6snap还是1/8snap @.@ 貌似是1/6...?
4. 01:24:125 (1) - 消音？

同之前

以上~ >A<

HellDawn wrote:

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Normal
00:22:042- this slider not symetric like this:
[spoilerbox]

yes

Nice mapset but hard diff should work on slider shapes :s[/spoilerbox]

mercury2004 wrote:

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[spoilerbox]Mod as requested.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
Your offset should be 796

Normal Difficulty
00:14:546 (1,2,3,4) - You should stick to the vocal here. Background rhythm is hard to listen for beginner.
00:22:046 (5) - Make this slider look like this [spoilerbox]ok
01:01:629 (2,3) - Delete 3 and make 2 reverse slider instead. Its sound betterok

Kiiwa's Hard Difficultywait for Kiiwa's answer~
Slider shape is not look nice to play.

00:15:375 (2) - Isn't this slider supposed to end here? 00:15:792
00:52:042 (2) - Make it more symetrical
00:56:208 (1,1) - Put this closer
00:58:292 (2) - I recommended you to change this slider shape
01:12:875 (2) - This slider goes into the health bar

Insane Difficulty
Fine

Nice Job~ Star!
If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

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Hello

謝謝ask for mod

[Normal]

00:22:042 (5) - 用成這樣如何 好，修了一下
[spoilerbox]

208,152,22042,2,0,B|232:280|408:216|304:72|240:120|264:168,1,270

01:04:542 (4) - 加一個circle? 需要一个停顿

[kiiwa's hard] 等Kiiwa来改吧 XD

00:29:958 (4) - 和前面你放Combo的感覺 這邊應該去掉NC ?

00:55:792 (1) - 這個slider的擺放會被前面的hitburst蓋掉而會讓人以為這是circle



00:58:292 (2) - 這個slider是unrankable slider

01:24:125 (1) - 有加whistle所以感覺可以再降一點音量(10-20%)



[Insane]

00:59:958 (7,1) - 轉換下 NC ? 好

01:12:458 (1,2) - ^ 好

Byakugan249 wrote:

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Modding ur map because of the request

Normal:
00:33:295(4) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fAX ok
00:34:128(5) - 1 grid down ok
01:22:461(1) - 1 grid up ok

Kiiwa's Hard: wait for Kiiwa's answer ~
[spoilerbox]00:07:461(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fBu
00:12:878(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6fBB
00:21:628(1) - x:312 y:344 for the last point
00:58:295(2) - i like the slider but can u move it somewhere else. the bottom is off the screen a bit
01:10:795(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fIR
01:16:628(3) - 5 grids up and 1 grid left for the end point

Insane:
00:24:961(7) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fJ7changed,but not the shape you said, tried another one
01:20:586(3) - stack it on (5) at 01:18:920 no, but i put it in the center of the area

Alright this is the best i can do. GL

Nymph_ wrote:

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Hi Nymph here and request from in game~

General:
why video is short than mp3= = hmm.. if possible i wil change it

Sorry to say that but Tag seems need to be more than 3 letters, if you search bl, you can't find anything... maybe try boys love or something?=A= really !

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:15:274 (5) - 2 timing lines here, delete one.

Hitsound
01:00:378 (5) - I suggest whistle instead of finish, I personally don't like too much finish. ok
01:15:378 (5) - don't sound good, try this: delete the finish on slider tail, and make the head finish 50 volumn, then listen, I think it is pretty good. i use clap on (5)
by the way, two timing lines between 01:14:961 (4) - and 01:15:378 (5) -. only one is ok. fixed
01:19:545 (2) - delete the whistle, only one whistle here, little weird. ok
01:22:461 (1) - finish instead of clap, and make the finish louder. ok

Kiiwa's Hard:Waiting for Kiiwa's answer...
[spoilerbox]Issue/unrankable stuff
00:55:795 (1) - this slider is totally totally hidden by comboburst that I can hardly know it is a slider not a note.
oops most of the slider have a surprising shape.. but plays well~yes, i love these sliders~!

Hitsound
I suggest you use the custom slience sliderslide.

Insane:

Hitsound
01:03:503 (5) - I suggest to delete the whistle, can't find out a reason to add whistle here.using a clap instead
01:16:211 (8) - I think clap is better. yes



That is all and star~

1. Why does the video start later than the song? :S Feels a bit strange when playing Kiiwa's Hard (Only diff where the part without the video is mapped)

1. 00:35:795 (4,5) - Add whistle on start
2. 00:56:940 (4) - Spacing

1. 00:15:378 (2) - End on 00:16:107 (You'll have to change the beat snap divisor to 1/4) or 00:16:211. (First one sounds better imo)
2. I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

1. Nice Diff, didn't find anything.

L i d a N wrote:

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Hey

[General]

1. Why does the video start later than the song? :S Feels a bit strange when playing Kiiwa's Hard (Only diff where the part without the video is mapped)

i'm trying to dealing with this problem. T.T

[Insane]

1. 00:35:795 (4,5) - Add whistle on starti add a whistle on end of 5
2. 00:56:940 (4) - Spacing

fixed

[Kiiwa's Hard]Waiting for Kiiwa's anwser...

1. 00:15:378 (2) - End on 00:16:107 (You'll have to change the beat snap divisor to 1/4) or 00:16:211. (First one sounds better imo)
2. I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

[Easy]

1. Nice Diff, didn't find anything.

Nice map :3 if you give a star i will be so happy

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

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hi ~ S h i o n~

我的一些建议~
做为慢歌节奏下的很不错了~继续努力~


[Insane]

00:27:253 (6) - 删除这个,空着的比较好听。 ok
00:48:711 (6) - 建议这个改1/2。 ok
01:16:628 (1,2,3) - 保持一致的距离。 ok
01:24:128 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。 这里时间很短 于是就降了最后一个finish~


[Kiiwa's Hard] i wil tell Kiiwa =.=

AR+1
00:15:378 (2) - 拉到白线节奏会更好些。
00:24:128 (4) - 建议加个折返。
00:32:045 - 这里加个slider怎么样？跟着VOCAL。
00:58:295 (2) - 这个形状改改吧，不建议这么画slider。
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - 这个间距改改。
01:24:128 (1) - 删除whistle,跟上面一样，多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Easy]

00:48:503 (5) - 建议加个折返。no
00:59:961 (4) - 这里加NC 把后面1的COMBO删掉。 ok
01:24:544 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


不错的歌~
good luck~

Copter-kun wrote:

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Oh hai

Green=Bobo's post

General

The video is bugged. Try fixing this by redownloading the vid or get a different vid instead. ok

Normal

00:22:045 (5) - Ugly slider
00:28:294 (3) - should curve out more, new combo ok
00:54:128 (1) - This combo travels under the previous onei think it is ok
01:15:378 (5) - another ugly slider

Hard Let's wait Kiiwa's answer


00:02:045 (3) - ugly slider
00:03:711 (1) - Should be moved so it doesn't start to go off the screen
00:06:420 (5) - ugly slider
00:15:378 (2) - ^
00:29:961 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:545 (1) - Ugly slider
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - This part is just bunched up. Move it somewhere
00:59:545 (2) - These jumps are too hard for the song since the pace of this slow song.
01:01:211 (3) - another ugly slider
01:02:878 (1) - ugly combo
01:12:878 (2) - Slider going offscreen. Move it

Insane

00:19:128 (3,4,5) - Ugly sliders
00:22:045 (2) - New combo should start here ok
00:33:086 (4) - Another ugly slider
00:34:545 (2) - New combo should start here ok
00:39:128 (3,4) - ugly slider
00:44:753 (7) - ^
01:10:378 (3) - Changing this to a 1/3 snap divisor would sound betterit is a 1/3 snap
01:23:295 (3) - Ugly slider
01:20:795 (4) - Sudden weird jump

This is about it.

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:045 (5) - 可以试着花点心思搞一个这样的slider.... 另外最好不要有和上一个slider重叠的部分 fixed


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:42:878 (1) - 这样放会比较好听... 这样和2个slider其实是一样的= = 都好听哈:)

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[Insane]
00:43:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不应该1-5对称 用1-6对称 no
00:52:461 (8) - 左移1格 上移2格 ye, fixed
01:10:378 (3) - 这种很短的slider尽量直 中间一个点可以试着稍微偏移下 别这样偏移太过.. ok , fixed
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就这点了..
加油@.@

1. [Normal]:
   00:17:045 (5) - whistle B, hitfinish E (volumed reduced to 20% only for this note)
   00:22:045 (5) - whistle, E
   00:26:628 (1) - whistle, B
   00:27:461 (2) - clap
   00:34:128 (5) - ^
   00:37:461 (4) - ^
   00:38:295 (5) - whistle
   00:40:795 (1) - clap
   00:44:128 (3) - ^
   00:47:461 (3) - ^
   01:03:711 (3) - HF, E
   01:07:045 (3) - clap B, HF E
   01:10:378 (2) - whistle
   
2. [Kiiwa's Hard]:
   So many overlooping sliders, this diff gonna be unbearable being played with hidden =\
   
   00:26:628 (3) - what about making this bit S:C1 and put clap B
   00:27:461 (1) - HF, B
   00:28:711 (2) - whistle
   00:34:128 (1) - HF, B
   00:40:795 (2) - ^
   00:43:503 (2) - ^
   00:47:461 (2) - ^
   00:49:545 (1) - HF, E
   00:54:128 (1) - I'd swap it to soft-finish
   
3. [Insane]:
   01:22:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look nice, what if place it like this?

Route 99 wrote:

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Hey there :3 Here's just a bunch of suggestions on hitsounds, hope you'll find some of them useful.
HF = hitfinish, B = beginning, E = End

1. [Normal]:
   00:17:045 (5) - whistle B, hitfinish E (volumed reduced to 20% only for this note)
   00:22:045 (5) - whistle, E
   00:26:628 (1) - whistle, B
   00:27:461 (2) - clap
   00:34:128 (5) - ^
   00:37:461 (4) - ^
   00:38:295 (5) - whistle
   00:40:795 (1) - clap
   00:44:128 (3) - ^
   00:47:461 (3) - ^
   01:03:711 (3) - HF, E
   01:07:045 (3) - clap B, HF E
   01:10:378 (2) - whistle
   I changed some hitsounds~
   
2. [Kiiwa's Hard]:
   So many overlooping sliders, this diff gonna be unbearable being played with hidden =\
   
   00:26:628 (3) - what about making this bit S:C1 and put clap B
   00:27:461 (1) - HF, B
   00:28:711 (2) - whistle
   00:34:128 (1) - HF, B
   00:40:795 (2) - ^
   00:43:503 (2) - ^
   00:47:461 (2) - ^
   00:49:545 (1) - HF, E
   00:54:128 (1) - I'd swap it to soft-finish
   
3. [Insane]:
   01:22:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't look nice, what if place it like this?

pretty good

Aaaand there goes the staww.

Giorgos wrote:

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Hello!

General:
I understand that Kiiwa's Hard is a guest difficulty,but since it's mapped from the beginning of the song,I HIGHLY suggest to you to map your other 2 diffs from the beginning too,because different map starts look bad :/ I won't

Normal:
00:44:128 - put this circle a bit lower for symmetry no
01:24:545 - better to finish this spinner in : - 01:27:253 01:27:461 is fine to me

Kiiwa's Hard:
Put Audio Lead-in for 1,5 seconds..3 is too much.
00:02:045 - I really think that you can make this slider look MUCH better
00:06:420 - ^
00:15:378 - ^
00:49:545 - ^
00:52:045 - ^
01:01:211 - ^
01:24:545 - maybe you should end this spinner in : - 01:27:253

Insane:
HP Drain 7 is pretty high for such a calm song..6 is better yes,fixed
Better to put Circle Size between Large and Normal no

That is all!

EvianBubble wrote:

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Hi! It's me ... hope I can help you somewhat lol

General
The video offset is way off ... I suggest putting it at 7900, it works well for me (PS. Are these Hatsuyuki's fansubs? The karaoke looks familiar haha XD)The video offset is ok imo
Might as well add "BL" into the tags if you have "boys love" As Nivalis says,only 2-letter words can be searched as a tag.
Maybe add "ED" into tags since you have "ending"? ^
Are you sure your video is full? It seems like it starts really randomly IMO be about to change it
Consider starting each difficulty in the same place ok

Normal
Why are the hitsounds so quiet? Pump 'em up to 50% at least? D: Nah
Maybe do AR-1? ok
00:14:545 (end of 1) - Add whistle? ok
00:27:461 (2) - Add finish here maybe 40% volumeno
00:28:294 (1) - Whistleno
00:31:211 - Consider mapping like this? I think it flows better (Look at timeline)sorry ,no
00:34:128 (4,5,1) - Whistle ok
00:40:795 (1,2) - Whistle on (1) and beginning of (2), finish at 30% on end of (2) ok with the finish
00:44:128 (3,4) - Maybe do the same as above? no, here vocal is quite
00:56:628 (5) - Think this would play better as a half beat repeating slider starting at 00:56:420 (repeats 2 or 3 times)no
01:00:795 (end of 3) - Don't really think finish fits here yes
01:03:711 (end of 3) - This, on the other hand, is practically BEGGING for a finish yes!

Kiiwa's hard
00:11:420 (end of 2) - Consider changing to finish
00:15:378 (2) - Extend until 00:16:211?
00:19:961 (3,4) - I would delete (3), put (4) to where (3) was and extend for half beat until it ends at 00:20:795 (same as before). I think this flows much better
00:22:461 (2) - Move this, it looks ugly with the overlap and the spacing is kind of weird. Consider this placement of (2 - 4):
00:27:461 (1) - Change whistle to finish
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - I found this really confusing. The first slider has its tracks covered by the previous note so I thought it was just a circle. Also the spacing going from the second to third is really confusing AND the third slows down. Even if you don't remap this entirely that's fine but I would really recommend removing the random slowdown on the third slider >_<
00:57:461 - I don't really think fast slider speed fits here, but meh
00:58:295 (2) - Clap?
01:24:128 (1) - End at 01:27:461 like in Normal diff?

Insane
00:27:461 (1) - Finishok
00:28:920 (3) - Move 2 grid left and 1 grid down (level 3) so it's consistent with earlier spacingok
00:40:794 (1,2,3) - Add finish on beginning of (1, 2) and 3? Maybe a bit quieter though (like 35% ish)no
00:43:295 (2) - Whistleok
00:56:906 (4,5) - I would lessen the volume here or else it sounds kind of strange, since the music basically stops at this part. Maybe lower to 30% ish? yes , gradually

Interesting song. I meant to start watching the anime but somehow never did lol. Good luck

OzzyOzrock wrote:

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[Normal]
00:47:878 (4) - This would look better straight, looking to the right.Nah

But good job!
[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - Make this not overlap
00:02:045 (3) - Doesn't look nice. At all.
00:06:420 (5) - WHAT IS THIS
00:08:711 (2) - Try to not overlap
00:15:378 (2) - Try not to loop. at this SV it's bad.
00:22:461 (2) - You can make this not overlap.

00:55:795 (1) - Unrankable here, as the hitbursts don't let you see if it's a slider or a circle. I saw it as a circle, which is WRONG.
And the combos you do at these parts seem unnecessary.

This diff needs the most work, but it's still fine.
[Insane]
01:02:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hard to read that it's 1/2 dont think so
01:09:128 (1) - lol remove NC sure

But it's good! I thought some of the jumps were strange, but they play nice.

Nivalis wrote:

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Mod request via our queue

Hi S h i o n ~
Miya assigned me to mod this map

[General]
-> Remove the extra space between "ending" and "Kiiwa" in tags sure
-> Also in tags, the osu! searcher doesn't support searching 2 letters word, so idk if "bl" is needed. But if you want to add it just go ahead~ yes
-> Try using silver sliderborder? Your combocolors remind me of Almagest's combocolors, and that map looks awesome with silver sliderborder :3 Good idea.I will try ?
-> Offset sounds late for me (not too sure though), 791 plays better for me >< but fine to me
-> I suggest to end the last spinner on 01:26:940 as in Kiiwa's Hard yes,i think so

[Normal]
00:17:045 (5) - Add whistle at the start?Nah
00:15:378 (2) - Change into a repeating 1/2 slider?Nah
00:31:628 (1) - This isn't distance snapped? o.o - Plays well, but I don't like how it touches 00:29:961 (2). Maybe place like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156393 ?i snap it =.=
00:34:961 (6) - Add whistle for hitsound consistency?ok
00:39:128 (1) - You can form a triangle between (5,6,1) like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156394Nah
00:53:295 (3) - The curve is forced imo, if you want flow you can map like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156395you're right
00:56:211 (x) - Add note here?no
01:07:878 (4) - Try this slider code :How to use this ...?


[Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - I feel placing this beneath (1)'s path is weird, this plays better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156401
00:15:378 (2) - I'd prefer adding a repeat here and adjust (3), but current one is fine too
00:20:170 (4) - Uh... Weird slider curving technique >< , btw the second-to-last waypoint should be few grids up and right
00:22:461 (2) - I'd rather place it perfectly beneath (1)'s path rather than in an awkward position like this ><
00:24:753 (x) - Add note? Maybe a silent note here
00:32:461 (1) - Will be tricky for flashlight players orz, people will think this note is placed far away from the previous note orz
00:35:794 (2) - I'm sure this could be curved neater ><
00:48:711 (3) - I don't like the path overlap personally, change (3)'s direction like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156404 will play better imo
00:58:295 (2) - Clap in the slider's start?
01:12:461 (1,2) - This jump is weird imo, maybe try use this jump : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156407

[Insane]
-> Try AR8?Hesitating for that
00:23:920 (4) - Try to place few grids left for flowok
00:33:086 (4,5,6) - This stack looks weird in play mode imoyes,but i can't find other way...
00:43:294 (2) - Move the whistle here instead of (4) ?fixed
00:59:128 (5) - Clap on slider's end?yes,sounds great and vol.60%
00:59:544 (6) - If you added clap, remove whistle here?sure
01:10:794 (4) - Unexpected jump ><

..That's it :3
Good luck with this map ~

Thanks~

M a n a wrote:

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Love this song~x3
But there're some part that bothering me.

[Normal]

01:01:211 (3) - Remove Finishfixed

[Kiiwa's Hard]

00:15:378 (2) - Make it longer to 00:16:211
00:52:045 (2) - Make it longer to 00:52:461
00:56:628 (1) - Bad spacing

[Insane]

I think it's good enough

This is my first mod. Sorry if it's ugly >.<
Hope useful

Thanks~~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

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Mod Request
General:
In your difficulties I see some inherited time wnsnapped please check this

Normal:
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2
Circle Size -1
HP Drain +1
Overall difficulty +1 If someone else thinks so,I will do that
00:41:420 (2): Move this slider to 00:41:211.This slider finish in 00:42:045 Nah
00:55:795 (4): The slider finish in 00:56:211Nah
00:56:628 (5): Delete this kick slider and add 2 circles Nah
First circle Start here
Second circle in 00:57:045Nah

Kiiwa's Hard:
Be careful with the overlapping
Looks fine but some sliders could be better

Insane:
Approach Rate+1
Circle Size -1
01:09:128 (1): Remove New Combosure...

Well, That's all.
Good Luck with your beatmap [/color]

Thanks!~

1. Tags: "eme" add

1. AR+1
2. 00:49:128 (x) - circle add
3. 01:16:628 (1) - Confuses the novice ( Use slider 2 pieces)
4. 01:18:295 (3) - slider remove. 01:18:295 (x) AND 01:18:711 (x) - circle add

1. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in
   
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2. AR+1. OD+1
3. 00:15:378 (2) - 00:16:211 prolong(end)
4. 00:32:045 (x) - circle add
5. 00:35:378 (x) - ^
6. 01:13:711 (x) - ^

1. fine~

-Gamu- wrote:

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hi-

All suggestions

[General]

1. Tags: "eme" add

what's that ? a music company ?

[Normal]

1. AR+1no...i've just added 1 T.T
2. 00:49:128 (x) - circle addno
3. 01:16:628 (1) - Confuses the novice ( Use slider 2 pieces)no
4. 01:18:295 (3) - slider remove. 01:18:295 (x) AND 01:18:711 (x) - circle add

no
i don't wanna add or remove notes/sliders in this diff .sorry

[Kiiwa's Hard]

1. Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in
   
2. AR+1. OD+1
3. 00:15:378 (2) - 00:16:211 prolong(end)
4. 00:32:045 (x) - circle add
5. 00:35:378 (x) - ^
6. 01:13:711 (x) - ^

[Insane]

1. fine~

Good map!!!!!!

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:48:503 (5) - whistle hereadded
00:50:170 (2) - though it's not a problem for insane players, but placing it around (152,80) makes both spacing and out-looking better.yes
01:20:586 (3,2) - stack the notes wellfixed

nice diff!

[Hard][Kiiwa's Hard]
00:01:836 (2) - this kind of stacking is not preferred...
00:07:045 (5) - remove whistle to fit with the soft piano sound
00:12:045 (2) - ^
00:13:711 (1,2) - ^, ending of (1) and (2)
[0:14 A quite vocal solo. Even a soft hitsound sounds noise to me. Try to make it softeR? :3]
00:30:795 (1) - remove whistle here
00:55:795 (1,1,1) - Even though you warned the spacing change, this is still unrankable as the first (1,1) has a 1/2 beat seperation but the second (1,1) has much fewer seperation.
01:08:920 (3) - feel that we don't need a note here unless you stream it up with next phrases

Some excess whistles, and more efforts is need on slider arranging. orz

good luck~