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Aimer - Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size)

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S h i o n
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月29日 at 0:24:21

Artist: Aimer
Title: Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size)
Source: No.6
Tags: ending bl yaoi Kiiwa
BPM: 144
Filesize: 2960kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.73 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Kiiwa's Hard (3.83 stars, 121 notes)
  3. Normal (2.91 stars, 91 notes)
Download: Aimer - Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size)
Download: Aimer - Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
No.6 ending song --- 六等星の夜

· xykbear's awesome SB and frankcons' nice video
· Kiiwa's guest diff
· Shirakawa Kotori's BG help
· Other interesting diffs:Megurine Luka's City and tutuhaha's Insane
· Also thanks to Nymph and those who have helped me with this map.
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 76 times in total.
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
蹲点。


EDIT：难度控制上这是我能办到的最难(大概
如果和kiiwa姑娘的冲掉了那就算了>.>总之用不用看你。

slider接四连打是什么我才不知道呢

Download: Aimer - Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size) (S h i o n) [Luka's City].osu
Last edited by Megurine Luka , edited 2 times in total.
Selee
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Selee
timing sounds fine to me..
for the last part you can just use a spinner...
S h i o n
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Selee wrote:

timing sounds fine to me..
for the last part you can just use a spinner...
thanks ~

And how about BPM ? It should be 144 or 144.12 ?
S h i o n
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S h i o n

Megurine Luka wrote:

SPOILER
蹲点。


EDIT：难度控制上这是我能办到的最难(大概
如果和kiiwa姑娘的冲掉了那就算了>.>总之用不用看你。

slider接四连打是什么我才不知道呢
恩，看了你的diff,节奏很丰富.. 但是这歌实在慢,感觉还是平缓一点的节奏比较适合~


moe Kiiwa chan 做了个Hard ~ , 然后我下午逃课做了个Insane(至少从星数上看是..)

还是非常感谢哈!>.<
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Here's the timing I've gotten

1. Offset: 795ms BPM: 144.00

Oh,don't forget to snap the 1/3 part manually
S h i o n
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S h i o n

kanpakyin wrote:

Here's the timing I've gotten

1. Offset: 795ms BPM: 144.00

Oh,don't forget to snap the 1/3 part manually
Thanks ~
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
0口0咦好帅本来我还想开这个坑的！
去你丫的Your message is too short.
Shirakawa Kotori
104 posts
Joined February 2010
Shirakawa Kotori
ganbare~
baka S h i o n~
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AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
·Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
于是决定好需要什么了么？
EDIT：视频压好了～

>Info:
  1. Link:http://puu.sh/6e0m
  2. Video Provider:Frankcons
  3. Encoder:h.264/mp4
  4. Scale:640x360
  5. File Size:5.97MB


also,here's the mod(你要Mod就不用去排queue了，直接找我
SPOILER
  1. Insane
    00:13:711 (7) - 最后加个finish
    00:15:586 (3,4) - 这里的基情还不够圆润
    00:19:128 (3,4,1) - 没有堆叠好，切成Grid Lv4仔细调节
    00:20:586 (5) - 这个点敢再坑爹点么
    00:33:086 (4) - 这里还不够纠结缠绵，顺带上下颠倒下吧～
    00:39:128 (3,4) - 看到这两条就想到啪啪啪>///<
    00:44:753 (7) - 自X好有乐趣，啊记得滑条最后用个finish
    01:08:711 (3) - 滑条开始加finish
    01:14:961 (5) - finish换成clap，背景音是个鼓点撒～
    01:23:295 (5) - 回转曲折，充满无尽的遐想，很好很好～
    //好基友一辈子
  2. Kiiwa's Hard
    00:01:836 (2) - 好基友被挡住了哦～
    00:04:961 (2) - 堆叠没弄好
    00:08:711 (2) - 挡住了
    00:15:378 (2) - 堆叠
    00:22:461 (2) - 又挡住了
    00:33:294 (2) - 堆叠
    00:42:878 (1,2) - 好有爱>///<
    00:48:711 (3) - 第二个滑条点上移一格
    00:52:878 (1) - 堆叠
    01:03:711 (1) - 这个的反转标志会被击打火焰遮挡，有可能会被挑刺
    //恩，真是基情满载的mapset
  3. Normal
    00:22:045 (5) - 有可能因挡住被挑刺
    00:44:753 (4) - 最后加finish
    00:59:128 (3) - finish（这雪球扔的真专业
    //SHION卖萌力度还不够
Last edited by AoiX , edited 2 times in total.
S h i o n
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xykbear wrote:

Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
Baka SHION
于是决定好需要什么了么？
All i need is you.Video please~~

Thanks ~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
Normal
00:22:042 (5) end in the 00:23:292 ?
00:39:125 (6) new combo ?
00:54:958 (3) not consistent spacing

Kiiwa's Hard
00:52:875 (1) stack make confused

Insane
01:21:208 (5) new combo ?

maybe, this is some suggestions from me~ sorry if my mod is bad <:3
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

but,i found little things...sorry :(

[Kiiwa]
0.15.375(2) - end:0.16.208
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
Red: If possible, change.

[Easy]
00:54:542　(2)　　　　　stack?

[Insane]
00:17:875　(7)　　　　　(432,272)?
00:26:208　(2)　　　　　(344,148)?
00:34:125　(1)　　　　　stack
00:50:167　(2)　　　　　(144,88)?
00:54:125　(3)　　　　　clap?
00:59:542　(6)　　　　　(192,336)?
01:06:625　(2)　　　　　clap?
01:12:250　(6)　　　　　(372,312)

Nice song,Nice map
Good Luck
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S h i o n
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S h i o n

Yasora-chan wrote:

SPOILER
Normal
00:22:042 (5) end in the 00:23:292 ? ok. and thus the spinner followed ends in 00:25:792
00:39:125 (6) new combo ? ok
00:54:958 (3) not consistent spacing ok

Kiiwa's Hard
00:52:875 (1) stack make confused no, it seems ok for hard to me,but I'll still ask Kiiwa for decision later

Insane
01:21:208 (5) new combo ? ok

maybe, this is some suggestions from me~ sorry if my mod is bad <:3Your mod is helpful ~
Thanks ~

frost-b-spec wrote:

SPOILER
thx reqs~

but,i found little things...sorry :(

[Kiiwa]
0.15.375(2) - end:0.16.208 no, it seems ok to me,but I'll still ask Kiiwa for decision later
Thanks anyway

terametis wrote:

SPOILER
Red: If possible, change.

[Easy]
00:54:542　(2)　　　　　stack? no

[Insane]
00:17:875　(7)　　　　　(432,272)? ok
00:26:208　(2)　　　　　(344,148)? no
00:34:125　(1)　　　　　stack ok
00:50:167　(2)　　　　　(144,88)? ok
00:54:125　(3)　　　　　clap? no , but i use whistle instead and thus vol. is raised to 70% instead
00:59:542　(6)　　　　　(192,336)? ok
01:06:625　(2)　　　　　clap? ok
01:12:250　(6)　　　　　(372,312) ok

Nice song,Nice map
Good Luck Really helpful mod ~
Thanks a lot~
tutuhaha
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Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
歌很好求GD>3<！
Insane 搞定了
附送音效一个假如要用的话你们俩的音效不用改把我这个放进去就OK了
0 0最近做这种慢曲子手感较好
P.S 记住一定要塞音效听哦要不然可能会比较难听反正我没听╮(￣▽￣")╭
有种哦擦感OTL....wav居然不给传.......我给你QQ离线传了就酱╮(￣▽￣")╭

Download: Aimer - Rokutousei no Yoru (TV Size) (S h i o n) [tutuhaha's Insane].osu
S h i o n
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tutuhaha wrote:

歌很好求GD>3<！
Insane 搞定了
附送音效一个假如要用的话你们俩的音效不用改把我这个放进去就OK了
0 0最近做这种慢曲子手感较好
P.S 记住一定要塞音效听哦要不然可能会比较难听反正我没听╮(￣▽￣")╭
有种哦擦感OTL....wav居然不给传.......我给你QQ离线传了就酱╮(￣▽￣")╭
恩 音效试过了，确实不错~

但这歌我还是倾向于跟vocal，太insane的话感觉太破坏抒情的感觉(nani kore ?)

把你和luka的diff放在creator's words里面吧。

怒谢!!.. :)
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo
你好~
Request from #modreqs >w<

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Nice!
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:542 (2,3,4) - 这几个note不加点音效么? 0.0 总感觉缺了什么。。
  2. 01:24:541 (1) - 这个spin消音吧？Sounds not good currently >_>
[Kiiwa's Hard]
  1. (This is 吐槽 only)为什么SV用1.09而不是1.1什么的。。。>_>
  2. 00:02:042 (3) - 这个一定会被MAT什么的挑的<_> 开始路径完全看不清（虽然应该不会有谁会miss。。）想办法改改。。
  3. 00:06:417 (5) - ^
  4. 00:12:875 (x) - 无用时间线，删掉删掉~
  5. 00:39:959 (x) - ^
  6. 00:56:208 (1) - 这是啥。。。我觉得应该对齐1/8吧。。。>_>
  7. 00:58:292 (2) - Unrankable slider.
  8. 01:02:459 (3,4,1) - Spacing？只是感觉不太美观<_>
  9. 01:16:000 (1) - 没有完美堆叠~.~
  10. 01:24:125 (1) - 一样~建议消音~
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:416 (6,7) - 没有完美堆叠~
  2. 00:46:972 (3) - Unsnapped!! >A<
  3. 01:10:375 (3) - 我不确定这个应该1/6snap还是1/8snap @.@
  4. 01:24:125 (1) - 消音？
以上~ >A<
S h i o n
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S h i o n

JoJo wrote:

SPOILER
你好~
Request from #modreqs >w<

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Nice!
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:542 (2,3,4) - 这几个note不加点音效么? 0.0 总感觉缺了什么。。想不出怎么加了= =.. 不加貌似还可以..
  2. 01:24:541 (1) - 这个spin消音吧？Sounds not good currently >_>
ok

[Kiiwa's Hard] 这个diff的修改只是我的想法，还要让Kiiwa决定~
  1. (This is 吐槽 only)为什么SV用1.09而不是1.1什么的。。。>_>我去问问Kiiwa为什么= =
  2. 00:02:042 (3) - 这个一定会被MAT什么的挑的<_> 开始路径完全看不清（虽然应该不会有谁会miss。。）想办法改改。。 同意
  3. 00:06:417 (5) - ^ 同意
  4. 00:12:875 (x) - 无用时间线，删掉删掉~ ok
  5. 00:39:959 (x) - ^ ok
  6. 00:56:208 (1) - 这是啥。。。我觉得应该对齐1/8吧。。。>_>个人认为原本的可以..
  7. 00:58:292 (2) - Unrankable slider. sure ?
  8. 01:02:459 (3,4,1) - Spacing？只是感觉不太美观<_> 不是一条弧线形嘛= =?
  9. 01:16:000 (1) - 没有完美堆叠~.~ yes
  10. 01:24:125 (1) - 一样~建议消音~
= =在normal我说了ok就是改到30%去了 不用完全静音吧?

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:416 (6,7) - 没有完美堆叠~ fixed
  2. 00:46:972 (3) - Unsnapped!! >A<用的1.8的DS
  3. 01:10:375 (3) - 我不确定这个应该1/6snap还是1/8snap @.@ 貌似是1/6...?
  4. 01:24:125 (1) - 消音？
同之前

以上~ >A<
谢谢你的mod,发现了不少问题.
再次感谢~
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Normal
00:22:042- this slider not symetric like this:
SPOILER

Nice mapset but hard diff should work on slider shapes :s
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
Mod as requested.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
Your offset should be 796

Normal Difficulty
00:14:546 (1,2,3,4) - You should stick to the vocal here. Background rhythm is hard to listen for beginner.
00:22:046 (5) - Make this slider look like this
SPOILER
01:01:629 (2,3) - Delete 3 and make 2 reverse slider instead. Its sound better

Kiiwa's Hard Difficulty
Slider shape is not look nice to play.

00:15:375 (2) - Isn't this slider supposed to end here? 00:15:792
00:52:042 (2) - Make it more symetrical
00:56:208 (1,1) - Put this closer
00:58:292 (2) - I recommended you to change this slider shape
01:12:875 (2) - This slider goes into the health bar

Insane Difficulty
Fine

Nice Job~ Star!
If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
Hello

謝謝ask for mod

[Normal]

00:22:042 (5) - 用成這樣如何
SPOILER
208,152,22042,2,0,B|232:280|408:216|304:72|240:120|264:168,1,270

01:04:542 (4) - 加一個circle?

[kiiwa's hard]

00:29:958 (4) - 和前面你放Combo的感覺 這邊應該去掉NC ?

00:55:792 (1) - 這個slider的擺放會被前面的hitburst蓋掉而會讓人以為這是circle

SPOILER

00:58:292 (2) - 這個slider是unrankable slider

01:24:125 (1) - 有加whistle所以感覺可以再降一點音量(10-20%)



[Insane]

00:59:958 (7,1) - 轉換下 NC ?

01:12:458 (1,2) - ^
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
S h i o n

HellDawn wrote:

SPOILER
Normal
00:22:042- this slider not symetric like this:
[spoilerbox]
yes

Nice mapset but hard diff should work on slider shapes :s[/spoilerbox]
Thanks ~

mercury2004 wrote:

SPOILER
[spoilerbox]Mod as requested.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
Your offset should be 796

Normal Difficulty
00:14:546 (1,2,3,4) - You should stick to the vocal here. Background rhythm is hard to listen for beginner.
00:22:046 (5) - Make this slider look like this [spoilerbox]ok
01:01:629 (2,3) - Delete 3 and make 2 reverse slider instead. Its sound betterok

Kiiwa's Hard Difficultywait for Kiiwa's answer~
Slider shape is not look nice to play.

00:15:375 (2) - Isn't this slider supposed to end here? 00:15:792
00:52:042 (2) - Make it more symetrical
00:56:208 (1,1) - Put this closer
00:58:292 (2) - I recommended you to change this slider shape
01:12:875 (2) - This slider goes into the health bar

Insane Difficulty
Fine

Nice Job~ Star!
If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Thanks a lot ~

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

SPOILER
Hello

謝謝ask for mod

[Normal]

00:22:042 (5) - 用成這樣如何 好，修了一下
[spoilerbox]
208,152,22042,2,0,B|232:280|408:216|304:72|240:120|264:168,1,270


01:04:542 (4) - 加一個circle? 需要一个停顿

[kiiwa's hard] 等Kiiwa来改吧 XD

00:29:958 (4) - 和前面你放Combo的感覺 這邊應該去掉NC ?

00:55:792 (1) - 這個slider的擺放會被前面的hitburst蓋掉而會讓人以為這是circle



00:58:292 (2) - 這個slider是unrankable slider

01:24:125 (1) - 有加whistle所以感覺可以再降一點音量(10-20%)



[Insane]

00:59:958 (7,1) - 轉換下 NC ? 好

01:12:458 (1,2) - ^ 好
感谢mod,很有用~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Modding ur map because of the request :)

Normal:
00:33:295(4) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fAX
00:34:128(5) - 1 grid down
01:22:461(1) - 1 grid up

Kiiwa's Hard:
00:07:461(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fBu
00:12:878(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6fBB
00:21:628(1) - x:312 y:344 for the last point
00:58:295(2) - i like the slider but can u move it somewhere else. the bottom is off the screen a bit
01:10:795(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fIR
01:16:628(3) - 5 grids up and 1 grid left for the end point

Insane:
00:24:961(7) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fJ7
01:20:586(3) - stack it on (5) at 01:18:920

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from in game~

General:
why video is short than mp3= =

Sorry to say that but Tag seems need to be more than 3 letters, if you search bl, you can't find anything... maybe try boys love or something?=A=

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:15:274 (5) - 2 timing lines here, delete one.

Hitsound
01:00:378 (5) - I suggest whistle instead of finish, I personally don't like too much finish.
01:15:378 (5) - don't sound good, try this: delete the finish on slider tail, and make the head finish 50 volumn, then listen, I think it is pretty good.
by the way, two timing lines between 01:14:961 (4) - and 01:15:378 (5) -. only one is ok.
01:19:545 (2) - delete the whistle, only one whistle here, little weird.
01:22:461 (1) - finish instead of clap, and make the finish louder.

Kiiwa's Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:55:795 (1) - this slider is totally totally hidden by comboburst that I can hardly know it is a slider not a note.
oops most of the slider have a surprising shape.. but plays well~

Hitsound
I suggest you use the custom slience sliderslide.

Insane:

Hitsound
01:03:503 (5) - I suggest to delete the whistle, can't find out a reason to add whistle here.
01:16:211 (8) - I think clap is better.



That is all and star~
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Byakugan249 wrote:

SPOILER
Modding ur map because of the request :)

Normal:
00:33:295(4) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fAX ok
00:34:128(5) - 1 grid down ok
01:22:461(1) - 1 grid up ok

Kiiwa's Hard: wait for Kiiwa's answer ~
[spoilerbox]00:07:461(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fBu
00:12:878(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6fBB
00:21:628(1) - x:312 y:344 for the last point
00:58:295(2) - i like the slider but can u move it somewhere else. the bottom is off the screen a bit
01:10:795(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fIR
01:16:628(3) - 5 grids up and 1 grid left for the end point

Insane:
00:24:961(7) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6fJ7changed,but not the shape you said, tried another one
01:20:586(3) - stack it on (5) at 01:18:920 no, but i put it in the center of the area

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Helpful mod ,Thanks ~

Nymph_ wrote:

SPOILER
Hi Nymph here and request from in game~

General:
why video is short than mp3= = hmm.. if possible i wil change it

Sorry to say that but Tag seems need to be more than 3 letters, if you search bl, you can't find anything... maybe try boys love or something?=A= really !

Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:15:274 (5) - 2 timing lines here, delete one.

Hitsound
01:00:378 (5) - I suggest whistle instead of finish, I personally don't like too much finish. ok
01:15:378 (5) - don't sound good, try this: delete the finish on slider tail, and make the head finish 50 volumn, then listen, I think it is pretty good. i use clap on (5)
by the way, two timing lines between 01:14:961 (4) - and 01:15:378 (5) -. only one is ok. fixed
01:19:545 (2) - delete the whistle, only one whistle here, little weird. ok
01:22:461 (1) - finish instead of clap, and make the finish louder. ok

Kiiwa's Hard:Waiting for Kiiwa's answer...
[spoilerbox]Issue/unrankable stuff
00:55:795 (1) - this slider is totally totally hidden by comboburst that I can hardly know it is a slider not a note.
oops most of the slider have a surprising shape.. but plays well~yes, i love these sliders~!

Hitsound
I suggest you use the custom slience sliderslide.

Insane:

Hitsound
01:03:503 (5) - I suggest to delete the whistle, can't find out a reason to add whistle here.using a clap instead
01:16:211 (8) - I think clap is better. yes



That is all and star~
Thannnnnnnnnnnnks
Nymph \神mapper/
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan
Hey :)

[General]
  1. Why does the video start later than the song? :S Feels a bit strange when playing Kiiwa's Hard (Only diff where the part without the video is mapped)
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:795 (4,5) - Add whistle on start
  2. 00:56:940 (4) - Spacing
[Kiiwa's Hard]
  1. 00:15:378 (2) - End on 00:16:107 (You'll have to change the beat snap divisor to 1/4) or 00:16:211. (First one sounds better imo)
  2. I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.
[Easy]
  1. Nice Diff, didn't find anything.
Nice map :3
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
S h i o n

L i d a N wrote:

SPOILER
Hey :)

[General]
  1. Why does the video start later than the song? :S Feels a bit strange when playing Kiiwa's Hard (Only diff where the part without the video is mapped)
i'm trying to dealing with this problem. T.T

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:795 (4,5) - Add whistle on starti add a whistle on end of 5
  2. 00:56:940 (4) - Spacing
fixed

[Kiiwa's Hard]Waiting for Kiiwa's anwser...
  1. 00:15:378 (2) - End on 00:16:107 (You'll have to change the beat snap divisor to 1/4) or 00:16:211. (First one sounds better imo)
  2. I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.
:(

[Easy]
  1. Nice Diff, didn't find anything.
Nice map :3 if you give a star i will be so happy :)
Thanks a lot ~
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.

L i d a N wrote:

I don't like those stange sliders, but I guess they're okay.
..OTZ
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
hi ~ S h i o n~ :)

我的一些建议~
做为慢歌节奏下的很不错了~继续努力~


[Insane]

00:27:253 (6) - 删除这个,空着的比较好听。
00:48:711 (6) - 建议这个改1/2。
01:16:628 (1,2,3) - 保持一致的距离。
01:24:128 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Kiiwa's Hard]

AR+1
00:15:378 (2) - 拉到白线节奏会更好些。
00:24:128 (4) - 建议加个折返。
00:32:045 - 这里加个slider怎么样？跟着VOCAL。
00:58:295 (2) - 这个形状改改吧，不建议这么画slider。
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - 这个间距改改。
01:24:128 (1) - 删除whistle,跟上面一样，多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Easy]

00:48:503 (5) - 建议加个折返。
00:59:961 (4) - 这里加NC 把后面1的COMBO删掉。
01:24:544 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


不错的歌~
good luck~ ;)
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Kawayi Rika wrote:

SPOILER
hi ~ S h i o n~ :)

我的一些建议~
做为慢歌节奏下的很不错了~继续努力~


[Insane]

00:27:253 (6) - 删除这个,空着的比较好听。 ok
00:48:711 (6) - 建议这个改1/2。 ok
01:16:628 (1,2,3) - 保持一致的距离。 ok
01:24:128 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。 这里时间很短 于是就降了最后一个finish~


[Kiiwa's Hard] i wil tell Kiiwa =.=

AR+1
00:15:378 (2) - 拉到白线节奏会更好些。
00:24:128 (4) - 建议加个折返。
00:32:045 - 这里加个slider怎么样？跟着VOCAL。
00:58:295 (2) - 这个形状改改吧，不建议这么画slider。
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - 这个间距改改。
01:24:128 (1) - 删除whistle,跟上面一样，多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


[Easy]

00:48:503 (5) - 建议加个折返。no
00:59:961 (4) - 这里加NC 把后面1的COMBO删掉。 ok
01:24:544 (1) - 建议多加几条绿线，渐渐降低声音效果会很好。


不错的歌~
good luck~ ;)
谢谢~~
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