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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, December 25, 2017 at 10:10:56 PM

Artist: ClariS
Title: SHIORI -TV size mix-
Source: 終物語
Tags: Fii -wwwww Spectator Owarimonogatari Ougi ending
BPM: 176
Filesize: 2569kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (1.44 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Kaitlin & Spec's Rain (4.28 stars, 292 notes)
  3. Platter (2.93 stars, 253 notes)
  4. Rain (3.99 stars, 282 notes)
  5. Salad (1.9 stars, 168 notes)


Download: ClariS - SHIORI -TV size mix-
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Hitsounds from kunka's set
Owari Season 1 ED


posted
M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  1. 00:02:134 (2) - This slider is awkward. May be make this 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the voice on this timeline 00:02:305
  2. 00:13:725 (2,3,4,5) - make this curver to fit with the violin sound
  3. 00:27:020 (3,4,5,6) - this is weird. try ctrl+g then move to x:216
  4. 00:27:617 - i feel there should be a note here.
  5. 00:45:430 (1,2) - awkward distance between these two. make 2 a little distant from 1.
  6. 00:52:930 (1,2) - i prefer circles than sliders. what do you think?
  7. 01:08:526 - add note here. similar with 01:05:714 (4) -

beautiful

Rain
  1. 00:05:799 - add note here, maybe?
  2. 00:08:611 (1) - this slider is too long. move the tail on to the red tick and add note at 00:09:293 -? It sounds better.
  3. 00:27:191 (4,5,6) - move 5 at x:392, then move 6 at x:232 and make it slighty diagonal.
  4. 00:45:089 (4) - move 4 at x:392
  5. 00:48:668 (2,3) - hdash seems not recommended at this moment.

Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!
posted

Hi_Hello wrote:

M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Rain
  1. 00:05:799 - add note here, maybe? Didn't hear that till now, but can't add since 00:07:077 (5) - would also need and 1/4 hyper to antiflow is a bit much
  2. 00:08:611 (1) - this slider is too long. move the tail on to the red tick and add note at 00:09:293 -? It sounds better. yes
  3. 00:27:191 (4,5,6) - move 5 at x:392, then move 6 at x:232 and make it slighty diagonal. done
  4. 00:45:089 (4) - move 4 at x:392 seems good, but always give a reason for why
  5. 00:48:668 (2,3) - hdash seems not recommended at this moment. 1/4 violin is interesting so i added + better flow

Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!

thanks, I'll get to your set this week
posted
zzz forum logs me out once i finished my mod aaaaaaa
Will get the mod done later in the day

[General]
  1. Colours where
  2. 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


[Kaitlin & Spec's Rain]
  1. 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  2. 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  3. 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  4. 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis.
  5. 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  6. 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally.


[Rain]
  1. 00:03:839 (3,1) - Pretty sure this is intended to be a dash ain't it? Feels quite short for it being 1 if so. Increase the distance.
  2. 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - Tbh this movement's very tight and precise to pull off. With the stopflow created by (1) and (2), a dash needs to be made towards (3) and (4) - then a set of hypers need to be carried out, which is increasing in distance everytime. For players just starting out on Rain, missing 1 note here can be quite punishing as it will mean missing all the other notes, which would most probably lead to a fail due to the long pause after this. I would just use 1/1 sliders to simplify this, but make it simple as you see fit.
  3. Is it just me or the kiai feels lacking in dashes? All I see much of are hypers and there are a very few clear dashes, and from 01:14:066 - it feels like there are none at all. it might be just me playing bad What I suggest to do is tone down some hypers which could have easily been dashes (say 01:18:498 (2,3) - ) or add in places to emphasize anything further (say 01:21:395 (4,5) - as a part of build-up), but hey, I might be off the wrong foot here xd


[Platter]
  1. Difficulty has too much hypers - it's fine on paper but having it on every measure is just overdoing it. Say for example from 00:27:702 - to 00:38:611 - , while that bell sound should be emphasized consistently, it doesn't necessarily have to mean every one of those have to be hypers - they can just be dashes. Besides, the song feels more calm during this part so having hypers regularly just doesn't seem to fit. Even in build-ups like 00:05:884 - to 00:11:339 - could have been toned down on the earlier parts by using dashes at 00:07:077 (4,1) - and etc.. In the kiai there's a possibility to have dashes on non-important downbeats (like 01:04:520 (1) - , 01:05:884 (1) - ) and have hypers only on downbeats with special instruments/vocals (like 01:07:248 (1) - , 01:08:611 (1) - , 01:09:975 (1) - ) which will reduce the amount of hypers used.
    Tl;dr reduce those hypers, it's making everything much more harder than it should be.
  2. 00:15:430 (1,2) - Dash where
  3. That's all tho, other than that long ass first point which is major


[Salad]
  1. 00:28:895 (3,4) - Dash distance feels abnormally lower than others, would increase a bit.
  2. 00:49:520 (1) - Da hell is this slider
  3. 01:00:941 (4,5) - (5)'s head doesn't land on anything really, would rather make (4) 1/1 slider than follow it up with a circle instead.
  4. 01:18:157 (4,5) - The bell's sound is increasing, so just overlapping 2 same sliders feels plain. Would use 2 circles in place of (5) and increase their distance a bit compared to (4)'s gap between head and tail.


[Cup]
  1. 00:02:475 (2) - Distance here feels a little too low compared to the notes after, would increase this a bit.
  2. 00:08:100 (3,1) - Increase the distance here so that you are following the build-up.
  3. 00:15:600 (2,3) - Compared to 00:14:066 (1,2) - , the intensity of the movement here doesn't seem to fit the song here too much. Try to increase the distance a bit to reflect the energy of the song.
  4. 00:24:293 (5,1) - More emphasis here would be great for the vocals.
  5. 00:35:202 (5,1) - Here too, for the downbeat instead. Srsly most of the important beats are not emphasized strongly enough lol
  6. 00:36:736 (2,3) - You get the idea
  7. 00:41:339 (5,1) - NC should be swapped. Cause of this, later the NC becomes kinda messy lul
  8. 00:50:202 (2,3) - Increase distance blablabla, same goes for 00:51:907 (4,1) - , 01:06:907 (3,4) - , 01:21:566 (4,1) - , 01:22:930 (2,3) - (last 2 for build-up).
  9. 01:18:839 (6,7) - Instead of increasing distance here, I would put (7) on the left of (6) so that the emphasis on the strongest sound of the bell is there. Also while at it you can increase the distance too heh


Good luck :)
posted

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

zzz forum logs me out once i finished my mod aaaaaaa
Will get the mod done later in the day

[General]
  1. Colours where
  2. 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


[Rain]
  1. 00:03:839 (3,1) - Pretty sure this is intended to be a dash ain't it? Feels quite short for it being 1 if so. Increase the distance. small buff
  2. 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - Tbh this movement's very tight and precise to pull off. With the stopflow created by (1) and (2), a dash needs to be made towards (3) and (4) - then a set of hypers need to be carried out, which is increasing in distance everytime. For players just starting out on Rain, missing 1 note here can be quite punishing as it will mean missing all the other notes, which would most probably lead to a fail due to the long pause after this. I would just use 1/1 sliders to simplify this, but make it simple as you see fit. did that
  3. Is it just me or the kiai feels lacking in dashes? All I see much of are hypers and there are a very few clear dashes, and from 01:14:066 - it feels like there are none at all. it might be just me playing bad What I suggest to do is tone down some hypers which could have easily been dashes (say 01:18:498 (2,3) - ) or add in places to emphasize anything further (say 01:21:395 (4,5) - as a part of build-up), but hey, I might be off the wrong foot here xd removed dash at 1:18, but i prefer not using dashes in dense/fast sections because they're much harder to read compared to hypers.


[Platter]
  1. Difficulty has too much hypers - it's fine on paper but having it on every measure is just overdoing it. Say for example from 00:27:702 - to 00:38:611 - , while that bell sound should be emphasized consistently, it doesn't necessarily have to mean every one of those have to be hypers - they can just be dashes. Besides, the song feels more calm during this part so having hypers regularly just doesn't seem to fit. Even in build-ups like 00:05:884 - to 00:11:339 - could have been toned down on the earlier parts by using dashes at 00:07:077 (4,1) - and etc.. In the kiai there's a possibility to have dashes on non-important downbeats (like 01:04:520 (1) - , 01:05:884 (1) - ) and have hypers only on downbeats with special instruments/vocals (like 01:07:248 (1) - , 01:08:611 (1) - , 01:09:975 (1) - ) which will reduce the amount of hypers used.
    Tl;dr reduce those hypers, it's making everything much more harder than it should be. wip on that and applied
  2. 00:15:430 (1,2) - Dash where k
  3. That's all tho, other than that long ass first point which is major


[Salad]
  1. 00:28:895 (3,4) - Dash distance feels abnormally lower than others, would increase a bit. fixed
  2. 00:49:520 (1) - Da hell is this slider cancer droplets
  3. 01:00:941 (4,5) - (5)'s head doesn't land on anything really, would rather make (4) 1/1 slider than follow it up with a circle instead. vocal
  4. 01:18:157 (4,5) - The bell's sound is increasing, so just overlapping 2 same sliders feels plain. Would use 2 circles in place of (5) and increase their distance a bit compared to (4)'s gap between head and tail. yes


[Cup]
  1. 00:02:475 (2) - Distance here feels a little too low compared to the notes after, would increase this a bit.
  2. 00:08:100 (3,1) - Increase the distance here so that you are following the build-up. not too much since also antiflow
  3. 00:15:600 (2,3) - Compared to 00:14:066 (1,2) - , the intensity of the movement here doesn't seem to fit the song here too much. Try to increase the distance a bit to reflect the energy of the song. adjusted
  4. 00:24:293 (5,1) - More emphasis here would be great for the vocals. i'm just going to say ok for the rest here
  5. 00:35:202 (5,1) - Here too, for the downbeat instead. Srsly most of the important beats are not emphasized strongly enough lol
  6. 00:36:736 (2,3) - You get the idea
  7. 00:41:339 (5,1) - NC should be swapped. Cause of this, later the NC becomes kinda messy lul fix
  8. 00:50:202 (2,3) - Increase distance blablabla, same goes for 00:51:907 (4,1) - , 01:06:907 (3,4) - , 01:21:566 (4,1) - , 01:22:930 (2,3) - (last 2 for build-up).
  9. 01:18:839 (6,7) - Instead of increasing distance here, I would put (7) on the left of (6) so that the emphasis on the strongest sound of the bell is there. Also while at it you can increase the distance too heh prefer current pattern


Good luck :)
posted
Hello! M4M
  • [Cup]
  1. 00:20:543 - How I saw - you mapped a lot of ticks and skipped it, why? It`s strong beat, You can added note
  2. 00:24:975 (1) - Strong beat and start of vocal, maybe increase spacing?
  3. 00:27:020 (4,1) - ^ beat how ^ but spacing lower, why?
  4. 01:02:305 - You can mapped lyrics but it only my opinion
  5. 01:08:270 (6,1) - Increase spacing, strong beat but low spacing
    Good cup, it`s all
    [Salad]
  6. 00:02:816 - why you skip this sound?
  7. 00:06:907 - ^
  8. 00:16:111 (2,1) - reduce spacing. Song have a lot of sounds with loudy sound but they moments have lower distance
  9. 00:24:634 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:39:805 (3,4) - reduce distance, it`s can be hard for newbie player
  11. 01:17:475 (3,4) - ^
    I think on salad a lot of moments with far distance on quiet sound
    [Platter]
  12. 00:07:077 (4,1) - Added HDash strong beat
  13. 00:08:441 (4,1) - ^
  14. 00:09:464 (2,3) - ^
  15. 00:09:464 (2,3) - You can mapped vocal part
  16. 00:37:930 (5,1) - HDash maybe?
  17. 01:02:475 - 01:02:816 - you can added short spiner if you not mapped vocal part
  18. 01:27:702 (1) - added here note how on lower diff

It`s all. I think you skiped a lot of vocal part which you can mapped but it`s your map. Good luck.
posted

Shirokane Rinko wrote:

Hello! M4M
  • [Cup]
  1. 00:20:543 - How I saw - you mapped a lot of ticks and skipped it, why? It`s strong beat, You can added note Added a note since it was the only 2/1 gap
  2. 00:24:975 (1) - Strong beat and start of vocal, maybe increase spacing? increased a little, but it's already further than previous gap
  3. 00:27:020 (4,1) - ^ beat how ^ but spacing lower, why? changed slider angle to emphasize 1
  4. 01:02:305 - You can mapped lyrics but it only my opinion no need on cup
  5. 01:08:270 (6,1) - Increase spacing, strong beat but low spacing increased a bit
    Good cup, it`s all
    [Salad]
  6. 00:02:816 - why you skip this sound? no strong sound to follow, eg vocal drum unique sounds
  7. 00:06:907 - ^
  8. 00:16:111 (2,1) - reduce spacing. Song have a lot of sounds with loudy sound but they moments have lower distance did a little
  9. 00:24:634 (6,1) - ^ this is low enough
  10. 00:39:805 (3,4) - reduce distance, it`s can be hard for newbie player applied
  11. 01:17:475 (3,4) - ^
    I think on salad a lot of moments with far distance on quiet sound
    [Platter]
  12. 00:07:077 (4,1) - Added HDash strong beat would add too many hypers, check sc4v's mod
  13. 00:08:441 (4,1) - ^
  14. 00:09:464 (2,3) - ^
  15. 00:09:464 (2,3) - You can mapped vocal part vocal is background here, drums are more important
  16. 00:37:930 (5,1) - HDash maybe? too many
  17. 01:02:475 - 01:02:816 - you can added short spiner if you not mapped vocal part too much for platter
  18. 01:27:702 (1) - added here note how on lower diff there's a spinner though lol

It`s all. I think you skiped a lot of vocal part which you can mapped but it`s your map. Good luck.
posted

Hi_Hello wrote:

M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  1. 00:02:134 (2) - This slider is awkward. May be make this 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the voice on this timeline 00:02:305 current slider also fits with the vocal as well
  2. 00:13:725 (2,3,4,5) - make this curver to fit with the violin sound okay!
  3. 00:27:020 (3,4,5,6) - this is weird. try ctrl+g then move to x:216
  4. 00:27:617 - i feel there should be a note here.
  5. 00:45:430 (1,2) - awkward distance between these two. make 2 a little distant from 1.
  6. 00:52:930 (1,2) - i prefer circles than sliders. what do you think?
  7. 01:08:526 - add note here. similar with 01:05:714 (4) - added!

beautiful thank you <3

Rain
  1. 00:05:799 - add note here, maybe?
  2. 00:08:611 (1) - this slider is too long. move the tail on to the red tick and add note at 00:09:293 -? It sounds better.
  3. 00:27:191 (4,5,6) - move 5 at x:392, then move 6 at x:232 and make it slighty diagonal.
  4. 00:45:089 (4) - move 4 at x:392
  5. 00:48:668 (2,3) - hdash seems not recommended at this moment.

Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

zzz forum logs me out once i finished my mod aaaaaaa
Will get the mod done later in the day

[General]
  1. Colours where
  2. 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


[Kaitlin & Spec's Rain]
  1. 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  2. 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  3. 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  4. 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis.
  5. 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  6. 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally.


all fixed from my part, thanks for the mod!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62305
Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:SHIORI -TV size mix-
TitleUnicode:SHIORI -TV size mix-
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Sinnoh
Version:Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
Source:終物語
Tags:Kaitlin Fii -wwwww Spectator Owarimonogatari Monogatari
BeatmapID:1385265
BeatmapSetID:653495

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posted

Hi_Hello wrote:


Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  1. 00:02:134 (2) - This slider is awkward. May be make this 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the voice on this timeline 00:02:305
  2. 00:13:725 (2,3,4,5) - make this curver to fit with the violin sound
  3. 00:27:020 (3,4,5,6) - this is weird. try ctrl+g then move to x:216 moved them, didn't ctrl g. i don't think it's that weird at all.
  4. 00:27:617 - i feel there should be a note here. added
  5. 00:45:430 (1,2) - awkward distance between these two. make 2 a little distant from 1. ? distance seems fine
  6. 00:52:930 (1,2) - i prefer circles than sliders. what do you think? i really prefer sliders. i think they have a nice aesthetic and aren't totally ruined by hardrock
  7. 01:08:526 - add note here. similar with 01:05:714 (4) -

beautiful

thank you for the mod and compliment :D

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

[Kaitlin & Spec's Rain]
  1. 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  2. 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  3. 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  4. 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis. you're right, this was unintentional. fixed!
  5. 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  6. 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally. ur right. fixed!

thanks for the mod!

@sinnoh: use this .osu code as it contains spectator's updated parts as well. also, "kaitlin" doesn't need to be in the tags

osu file format v14

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Artist:ClariS
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Creator:Sinnoh
Version:Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
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posted
if you're using Kaitlin in the diff name then it should really be in the tags, removed anyway
updated
posted
Kaitlin is in the diff name, therefore it can be searched without it being a tag. So she's right :P
posted
I was planning on completing the mod but studying got the best of me so I'll post what I did yesterday. If in a week or two I'm less busy I could always come back and mod both rains.

add "opening op second season 2" to tags
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Cup
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  1. 00:16:111 (3,1) - Reduce distance here a bit, it's high even compared to
  2. 00:26:339 (3) - Maybe increase distance here a tad bit, since the low movement before it makes it easy to overwalk this
  3. 01:05:032 (4,5) - Increase this distance so that distance is equal between 01:04:520 (3,4,5) - like on 01:07:248 (4,5,6) -
  4. 01:18:839 (6,7) - I'd keep this distance consistent here
  5. 01:19:180 (7,1) - and increase distance here to 1.3x for a better contrast
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Salad
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  1. 00:00:430 (1,2) - Maybe give these a small angle to make it more interesting
  2. 00:04:520 (3) - Have this as a 1/1 reverse like 00:01:793 (3) - ?
  3. 00:17:986 (3,4) - Increase distance here so some more contrast. Same can be done on similar things in the map
  4. 00:22:248 (1) - Move this a bit to the left since it's easy to hit the wall dashing
  5. 00:53:057 (4,5) - Shouldn't this just be snapped to 1/3? I might be wrong tho
  6. 01:16:793 (1,2,3) - 2-3 should have a higher spacing than 1-2
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Platter
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  1. 00:02:134 (2) - Shouldn't this mapped as a 1/1?
  2. 00:11:680 (2,3) - and 00:12:020 (3,4) - should increase the 2-3 is walkable and 3-4 feels pretty week
  3. 00:59:748 (2,3) - With the vocals joining in here it would be nice to have a dash
Sorry the platter mod had to be cut a bit short ): I'm a bit too busy. Hopefully I was still of some help
posted

celerih wrote:

I was planning on completing the mod but studying got the best of me so I'll post what I did yesterday. If in a week or two I'm less busy I could always come back and mod both rains.

add "opening op second season 2" to tags I really don't think anyone is going to specifically search for season two to find this set
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Cup
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  1. 00:16:111 (3,1) - Reduce distance here a bit, it's high even compared to yes
  2. 00:20:543 (2) - Move to ???
  3. 00:26:339 (3) - Maybe increase distance here a tad bit, since the low movement before it makes it easy to overwalk this fix stuff
  4. 01:05:032 (4,5) - Increase this distance so that distance is equal between 01:04:520 (3,4,5) - like on 01:07:248 (4,5,6) - ok
  5. 01:18:839 (6,7) - I'd keep this distance consistent here decreased a little
  6. 01:19:180 (7,1) - and increase distance here to 1.3x for a better contrast did that
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Salad
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  1. 00:00:430 (1,2) - Maybe give these a small angle to make it more interesting low movement good for slow part
  2. 00:04:520 (3) - Have this as a 1/1 reverse like 00:01:793 (3) - ?
  3. 00:17:986 (3,4) - Increase distance here so some more contrast. Same can be done on similar things in the map bit overdoing it for salad, keeping basic spacing + snares aren't too important here
  4. 00:22:248 (1) - Move this a bit to the left since it's easy to hit the wall dashing not sure how but ok
  5. 00:53:057 (4,5) - Shouldn't this just be snapped to 1/3? I might be wrong tho yup, snapping issue when changing offset
  6. 01:16:793 (1,2,3) - 2-3 should have a higher spacing than 1-2 adjusted
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Platter
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  1. 00:02:134 (2) - Shouldn't this mapped as a 1/1? vocal has more variation here
  2. 00:11:680 (2,3) - and 00:12:020 (3,4) - should increase the 2-3 is walkable and 3-4 feels pretty week increased a little
  3. 00:59:748 (2,3) - With the vocals joining in here it would be nice to have a dash that's too many dashes for platter
Sorry the platter mod had to be cut a bit short ): I'm a bit too busy. Hopefully I was still of some help thanks for help :)
posted
a free moddd cos i liek the song
  1. Hmmm you arent gonna colorhax dis? xd
Platter
00:09:975 (3) - Pretty sure this should end here 00:10:486 - sounds like it ends a bit too early imo
00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - hmmm movement here feels a little bit too stacked here maybe move to x:303?
00:16:793 (1) - and if u took my suggestion earlier move this to x:173 to trigger the h-dash
00:17:305 (2) - annnnd this one to make the spacing a little bit equal between 00:16:793 (1,3) -
00:52:248 (1) - feels a little bit too hard to catch in a platter imo. maybe reduce the distance here a little bit here and move it to x:383?
00:52:759 (2) - if you took my suggestion above move this to x:284 so it would still continue the flow and would not be stacked
00:52:930 (3) - also this one by x:185 00:53:270 (4) - annnddd lastly 00:53:270 (4) - x:268

aaa i like this diff has that smooth flow that i would look for and enjoy pleyin.
So far dont really have that much to say since there isnt any other detectable issues i could find here xd
Rain
00:53:270 (4) - wouldctrl j and ctrl h then ofc replace cos the it kinda plays awkardly here imo

nicc pp map probs gonna be my fav rain from u here xd
Collab Rain dessss
Would suggest to point out ur parts so it can be easier for me and you to manage but e xd

00:02:134 (2) - Undermapped imo since theres still sounds that can be mapped in 00:02:305 - which can be both the vocals and piano here
00:27:020 (3,4,5) - not sure if having h-dash then go with a sort of a stacked pattern here is a good idea in movement imo maybe moving 00:27:191 (4) - to x:76 would atleast make the pattern a little bit more comfortable to play here

not much to say but imo the other sort of stream patterns in the 2nd calm section in the song needs a little bit more movement imo
but overall guddd



gl bud
posted

JeirYagtama wrote:

a free moddd cos i liek the song
  1. Hmmm you arent gonna colorhax dis? xd
Platter
00:09:975 (3) - Pretty sure this should end here 00:10:486 - sounds like it ends a bit too early imo oops
00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - hmmm movement here feels a little bit too stacked here maybe move to x:303? pattern seems fine tbh
00:16:793 (1) - and if u took my suggestion earlier move this to x:173 to trigger the h-dash
00:17:305 (2) - annnnd this one to make the spacing a little bit equal between 00:16:793 (1,3) - There's a stronger sound on 3, so the gap is slightly larger. Spacing doesn't need to be 100% exact
00:52:248 (1) - feels a little bit too hard to catch in a platter imo. maybe reduce the distance here a little bit here and move it to x:383? yup, fixed
00:52:759 (2) - if you took my suggestion above move this to x:284 so it would still continue the flow and would not be stacked i can adjust stuff ty
00:52:930 (3) - also this one by x:185 00:53:270 (4) - annnddd lastly 00:53:270 (4) - x:268 I just changed slider shape instead of moving the whole pattern,
easier to apply


aaa i like this diff has that smooth flow that i would look for and enjoy pleyin.
So far dont really have that much to say since there isnt any other detectable issues i could find here xd
Rain
00:53:270 (4) - wouldctrl j and ctrl h then ofc replace cos the it kinda plays awkardly here imo this is my go to pattern for small 1/3 sections

nicc pp map probs gonna be my fav rain from u here xd




gl bud ty


small mod
Collab Rain
00:27:361 (5,6) - There's too much of a spacing increase on the slider tail, increase the distance of 5,6 to make this flow better
00:37:248 (4) - NC? Usually done on downbeats
01:14:748 (4,5) - This is pretty much an edge dash
01:20:543 (4) - In the last section, all 1/2 sliders are facing towards the center, which is a bit repetitive. Could you change one or two of them so that there's slider shape variety?
posted
Hey here with a mod as requested
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Cup
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  1. 00:16:111 (3,1) - I'd increase the distance here a little as it feels noticeably weaker than other strong walks in this diff. Try moving the head of 00:16:793 (1) - to x:136
  2. 00:28:384 (2,3,1) - Lowering the distance between 00:28:384 (2,3) - would help 00:30:430 (1) - to stand out a bit more as the difference in the distances is quite small. Try moving 00:28:384 (2) - to x:328 and also consider tilting 00:28:384 (2) - a bit to add some variance and contrast with 00:29:407 (3) -
  3. 00:37:930 (4,1) - Distance is a little lacking here for a sound like this, try adjusting 00:38:611 (1) - to x:296
  4. 00:53:611 (3,4) - Distance is a little high here but my main worry is that 00:54:293 (4) - is quite far to the left of the playfield. Considering the time and distance between these notes it would be quite easy to not notice where 00:54:293 (4) - is until it's too late. Try moving 00:54:293 (4) - to around x:88, the distance still feels impactful but gives the player a bit more leniency


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Salad
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  1. 00:53:611 (1,2) - Same idea as the cup, there's quite a gap in distance and time so it would be easy to miss this, reducing the distance a bit would be nice
  2. 01:03:157 (1) - Starting this on the complete opposite side of the screen from 01:01:793 (1) - could easily catch a player out at this level. Would be great to adjust the placement or slider shape so this starts a little closer to the centre of the playfield
  3. 01:08:441 (4) - Could delete this note, there's nothing too strong here and I think it would suit the rest of the timeline better without this. It also allows for a more comfortable 1/1 dash to 01:08:611 (1) - rather than a faster 1/2 dash


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Platter
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  1. 00:02:134 (2,3) - Timeline sounds a little off to me, there's certainly a change in the vocal at 00:02:305 - but it's still the same vocal being held here. I think a better fit here would be a 1/1 slider instead. As for 00:02:645 (3) - the vocal is only held until 00:02:816 - so I'd make this a 1/2 repeater instead
  2. 00:16:111 (3,4) - Distance between these is a little lower than the rest of the walks here, would be nice to up this a little. Try 00:16:282 (4) - at x:320 and adjusting the spacing between 00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - to be about 0.80x ds
  3. 00:37:930 (5) - Considering the direction changes on this the distance on this feels a bit high. I'd tilt this a little more to make this movement a little more comfortable or point this the other way to keep the larger distance but use flowing movements instead.
  4. 00:38:441 - You could get away with adding a note here and creating a hyperdash to 00:38:611 (1) -, would be a good fit though obviously you'd have to rework 00:38:611 (1,2,3) - a little so this isn't an antiflow hyper
  5. 01:07:930 (3,4) - Lower distance between these compared to the earlier notes is really noticeable. Try moving 01:08:270 (4) - to about x:444
  6. 01:22:759 (2,3) - Distance here feels a little ambiguous to play, clarifying this with more/less distance would be great
  7. 01:25:486 (4,5) - Distance between these is a bit uncomfortable. It's a little low for a dash and is pretty much the only place in the song where there is a dash in to a hyperdash which coupled with the direction change is a bit tricky and rather cruel to have at the end of the map. I'd suggest to rework 01:24:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - in to a smooth curve shape and then do a quick Ctrl+H on 01:25:827 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
  8. 01:27:702 (1) - Sounds to me like the guitar sound comes in a little early on 01:27:617 - or somewhere between that and the white tick. Maybe a better to fit to start this on 01:27:532 - with the vocal?


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Rain
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  1. 00:02:134 (2,3) - Same idea here as mentioned in the Platter essentially swapping the timeline of these around
  2. 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think this would be a better fit for the difficulty and nicer to play with just dashes here and a sole hyperdash to 00:12:702 (1) -
  3. 00:20:714 (5,1) - Distance on this hyper is a bit high, 00:20:884 (1) - is weaker than some other sounds in this section but has a quite a strong hyper. Try move the head on 00:20:884 (1) - to around x:400 to bring it in line
  4. 00:41:850 (2,3,4) - There's a long time spent here just moving in the same direction with no variance in distance, it's a little uninteresting to play. Moving 00:42:532 (4) - to around x:184 and adjusting the shape and position of 00:42:702 (1) - would make this a bit more interesting to play
  5. 00:43:895 (4) - I'd move this closer to 00:43:384 (3) - to increase the intensity of the hyper to 00:44:066 (1) -
  6. 00:50:032 (2,3,4) - Again these series of notes move in the same direction, the distancing is a little more varied this time but still rather bland to play. You could try flipping 00:50:543 (4) - to x:372 and flip 00:50:884 (1) - over to x:96
  7. 00:57:702 (1,2,3,1) - Try starting off with shallow movement on these sliders and increase the movement on each slider to match the buildup here
  8. 01:13:725 (5,6) - Sure you want to use this pattern? It doesn't look too pretty and all the other little stream patterns you've used are much nicer
  9. 01:27:702 (1) - Same as mentioned in the Platter


[
Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
]
Not sure who did what on this but it's a small mod so shouldn't be hard to work with
  1. 00:16:793 (1) - I think a 1/1 c shaped slider would be a better fit here. I can't hear anything on 00:16:964 -
  2. 00:23:952 (2) - SV feels high on this, I often feel like I need to dash to catch the end of this slider. Would be nice to reduce the effective SV on this a little
  3. 00:49:180 (4) - Maybe make this a more vertical slider? Currently feels like this note is emphasised more than the stronger 00:49:520 (1) -
  4. 01:14:748 (4,5) - That's quite a hard dash! This certainly needs a nerf
  5. 01:27:702 (1) - Gonna do a cheeky copy and paste from what I wrote for the Platter. Sounds to me like the guitar sound comes in a little early on 01:27:617 - or somewhere between that and the white tick. Maybe a better to fit to start this on 01:27:532 - with the vocal?
Good luck with your map!
posted

JeirYagtama wrote:

a free moddd cos i liek the song
  1. Hmmm you arent gonna colorhax dis? xd
Collab Rain dessss
Would suggest to point out ur parts so it can be easier for me and you to manage but e xd

00:02:134 (2) - Undermapped imo since theres still sounds that can be mapped in 00:02:305 - which can be both the vocals and piano here fixed
00:27:020 (3,4,5) - not sure if having h-dash then go with a sort of a stacked pattern here is a good idea in movement imo maybe moving 00:27:191 (4) - to x:76 would atleast make the pattern a little bit more comfortable to play here

not much to say but imo the other sort of stream patterns in the 2nd calm section in the song needs a little bit more movement imo
but overall guddd



gl bud


Thanks for the mods!

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posted

Sorcerer wrote:

Hey here with a mod as requested
[
Cup
]
  1. 00:16:111 (3,1) - I'd increase the distance here a little as it feels noticeably weaker than other strong walks in this diff. Try moving the head of 00:16:793 (1) - to x:136
  2. 00:28:384 (2,3,1) - Lowering the distance between 00:28:384 (2,3) - would help 00:30:430 (1) - to stand out a bit more as the difference in the distances is quite small. Try moving 00:28:384 (2) - to x:328 and also consider tilting 00:28:384 (2) - a bit to add some variance and contrast with 00:29:407 (3) - Done, but I prefer symmetry so keeping the angle
  3. 00:37:930 (4,1) - Distance is a little lacking here for a sound like this, try adjusting 00:38:611 (1) - to x:296
  4. 00:53:611 (3,4) - Distance is a little high here but my main worry is that 00:54:293 (4) - is quite far to the left of the playfield. Considering the time and distance between these notes it would be quite easy to not notice where 00:54:293 (4) - is until it's too late. Try moving 00:54:293 (4) - to around x:88, the distance still feels impactful but gives the player a bit more leniency


[
Salad
]
  1. 00:53:611 (1,2) - Same idea as the cup, there's quite a gap in distance and time so it would be easy to miss this, reducing the distance a bit would be nice
  2. 01:03:157 (1) - Starting this on the complete opposite side of the screen from 01:01:793 (1) - could easily catch a player out at this level. Would be great to adjust the placement or slider shape so this starts a little closer to the centre of the playfield
  3. 01:08:441 (4) - Could delete this note, there's nothing too strong here and I think it would suit the rest of the timeline better without this. It also allows for a more comfortable 1/1 dash to 01:08:611 (1) - rather than a faster 1/2 dash


[
Platter
]
  1. 00:02:134 (2,3) - Timeline sounds a little off to me, there's certainly a change in the vocal at 00:02:305 - but it's still the same vocal being held here. I think a better fit here would be a 1/1 slider instead. As for 00:02:645 (3) - the vocal is only held until 00:02:816 - so I'd make this a 1/2 repeater instead Added more 1/1 sliders, but keeping the original 1/1s because it's just a pattern to lower density
  2. 00:16:111 (3,4) - Distance between these is a little lower than the rest of the walks here, would be nice to up this a little. Try 00:16:282 (4) - at x:320 and adjusting the spacing between 00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - to be about 0.80x ds
  3. 00:37:930 (5) - Considering the direction changes on this the distance on this feels a bit high. I'd tilt this a little more to make this movement a little more comfortable or point this the other way to keep the larger distance but use flowing movements instead.
  4. 00:38:441 - You could get away with adding a note here and creating a hyperdash to 00:38:611 (1) -, would be a good fit though obviously you'd have to rework 00:38:611 (1,2,3) - a little so this isn't an antiflow hyper
  5. 01:07:930 (3,4) - Lower distance between these compared to the earlier notes is really noticeable. Try moving 01:08:270 (4) - to about x:444
  6. 01:22:759 (2,3) - Distance here feels a little ambiguous to play, clarifying this with more/less distance would be great
  7. 01:25:486 (4,5) - Distance between these is a bit uncomfortable. It's a little low for a dash and is pretty much the only place in the song where there is a dash in to a hyperdash which coupled with the direction change is a bit tricky and rather cruel to have at the end of the map. I'd suggest to rework 01:24:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - in to a smooth curve shape and then do a quick Ctrl+H on 01:25:827 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
  8. 01:27:702 (1) - Sounds to me like the guitar sound comes in a little early on 01:27:617 - or somewhere between that and the white tick. Maybe a better to fit to start this on 01:27:532 - with the vocal? imo fine as is


[
Rain
]
  1. 00:02:134 (2,3) - Same idea here as mentioned in the Platter essentially swapping the timeline of these around I prefer this pattern
  2. 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think this would be a better fit for the difficulty and nicer to play with just dashes here and a sole hyperdash to 00:12:702 (1) - hyperdashes are clearer to follow than edge dashes
  3. 00:20:714 (5,1) - Distance on this hyper is a bit high, 00:20:884 (1) - is weaker than some other sounds in this section but has a quite a strong hyper. Try move the head on 00:20:884 (1) - to around x:400 to bring it in line
  4. 00:41:850 (2,3,4) - There's a long time spent here just moving in the same direction with no variance in distance, it's a little uninteresting to play. Moving 00:42:532 (4) - to around x:184 and adjusting the shape and position of 00:42:702 (1) - would make this a bit more interesting to play
  5. 00:43:895 (4) - I'd move this closer to 00:43:384 (3) - to increase the intensity of the hyper to 00:44:066 (1) -
  6. 00:50:032 (2,3,4) - Again these series of notes move in the same direction, the distancing is a little more varied this time but still rather bland to play. You could try flipping 00:50:543 (4) - to x:372 and flip 00:50:884 (1) - over to x:96 this one is fine
  7. 00:57:702 (1,2,3,1) - Try starting off with shallow movement on these sliders and increase the movement on each slider to match the buildup here great suggestion
  8. 01:13:725 (5,6) - Sure you want to use this pattern? It doesn't look too pretty and all the other little stream patterns you've used are much nicer
  9. 01:27:702 (1) - Same as mentioned in the Platter
Good luck with your map!


Thank you! Sorcerer for bn pls :)
posted

JeirYagtama wrote:

Collab Rain dessss
Would suggest to point out ur parts so it can be easier for me and you to manage but e xd

00:02:134 (2) - Undermapped imo since theres still sounds that can be mapped in 00:02:305 - which can be both the vocals and piano here
00:27:020 (3,4,5) - not sure if having h-dash then go with a sort of a stacked pattern here is a good idea in movement imo maybe moving 00:27:191 (4) - to x:76 would atleast make the pattern a little bit more comfortable to play here i think the flow using the curve is comfortable already :(

Sinnoh wrote:


small mod
Collab Rain
00:27:361 (5,6) - There's too much of a spacing increase on the slider tail, increase the distance of 5,6 to make this flow better ok
00:37:248 (4) - NC? Usually done on downbeats
01:14:748 (4,5) - This is pretty much an edge dash fixed
01:20:543 (4) - In the last section, all 1/2 sliders are facing towards the center, which is a bit repetitive. Could you change one or two of them so that there's slider shape variety? i don't think there's an appropriate place to use a slider facing outwards that i haven't already done

Sorcerer wrote:

[
Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
]
Not sure who did what on this but it's a small mod so shouldn't be hard to work with
  1. 00:16:793 (1) - I think a 1/1 c shaped slider would be a better fit here. I can't hear anything on 00:16:964 - ok
  2. 00:23:952 (2) - SV feels high on this, I often feel like I need to dash to catch the end of this slider. Would be nice to reduce the effective SV on this a little made the slider curve more at the end
  3. 00:49:180 (4) - Maybe make this a more vertical slider? Currently feels like this note is emphasised more than the stronger 00:49:520 (1) - okie dokie
  4. 01:14:748 (4,5) - That's quite a hard dash! This certainly needs a nerf fixed from sinnoh's mod :))
  5. 01:27:702 (1) - Gonna do a cheeky copy and paste from what I wrote for the Platter. Sounds to me like the guitar sound comes in a little early on 01:27:617 - or somewhere between that and the white tick. Maybe a better to fit to start this on 01:27:532 - with the vocal? sinnoh didn't change his, so keeping ours like this for consistency


Good luck with your map!


thank you all for the mods!

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