Erosion - Shinkai Shoujo-piano ver.- · forum

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2017-09-20T00:52:04+00:00

[

General]

How about changing diff name here to something that isn't the translation of the title. Something like Drowning Emotions would be cool
You could use a better sample for the hitwhistle, use this one that I used in my own map for this song https://celerih.s-ul.eu/meCPPmUU
Also there's an unused bg in the song folder, or that the hard diff doesn't have it set for some reason, might want to fix that
01:26:408 - Timing point here is late, your map needs to be perfectly timed, move it to 01:26:360 -

[

Normal]

00:08:168 (5) - NC here, combo gets a bit long afterwards
00:38:238 (4) - To make the pattern look cleaner move this up and reduce the curve of the slider
00:43:042 (2) - To follow the piano better move this to start on 00:42:741 - and have it end at the same place as it did before. This way both piano and vocals are followed better
01:07:958 - Would add a circle here since the all the other vocals in the kiai are followed except for this one
But I'd still make some more 1/1 gaps in this, rhythm is dense and should be made easier. It is lowest diff after all
01:11:858 (7) - make into 2 circles at the start and end of the slider and reduce density
01:07:058 (3) - Same thing as above, could even make 01:07:658 - a 1/2 slider from here to cover vocals and circle on 01:07:058 - instead of slider
Nice normal, good job

[

Jennglebell's Hard]

00:08:168 (1,2) - Would reduce distance here in favor of higher distance for 00:08:778 (2,3) - since there's much stronger piano there
00:24:769 (4,1,2) - Once again kinda backwards emphasis, 1 should get more spacing that 2 here
00:27:141 (4) - Note here is overmapped, there's no sound to support it as there is a break in both piano and vocals
00:42:741 (2,3,4) - Rhythm here could be improved upon since going for faint vocals over strong piano is confusing when playing. See box below for a suggestion
00:59:274 (2,3,4) - Overmapped note on 00:59:840 (3) - makes rhythm here improvable, mostly making a 1/1 slider on 00:59:543 - . See box below
01:02:852 (1) - Both vocals and piano hit on 01:03:155 - so shorten this by 1/4. It's a shame that the slider shape will have to be changed since it's really nice but the song just doesn't support it :/
01:08:258 (1) - Another case of a slider being 1/4 too long. If the vocals aren't being extended and just last 1/2, extended sliders won't fit
Main problem here is rhythm and overmapping imo. Apart from that I really like how this map looks and the fun use of slider movement

[

Deep Sea Girl]

00:09:084 (3) - Such strong piano on a slider reverse isn't the best. circle + 1/2 slider would be a better rhythm here
00:22:615 (1) - The very straight and "sharp" shape of the slider here clashes with the rest of the sliders as of yet, and there aren't any distinct sounds that really justify it
00:28:040 (2) - 00:37:639 (2) - Once again the reverses here could be make into something more appropriate, like 1/2 slider + circle
00:42:741 (2,3) - Here a reverse would actually work wonderfully, since you'd get the reverse on a pretty weak sound on 00:43:042 - instead of a clickable slider head. Something more passive would be better for a faint sound like this
01:01:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - A more clean progression of spacing would fit well into other patterns you did on 00:12:987 (4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:25:451 (2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
01:26:089 (1,1) - Would use a slider here, the random change in timing (btw fix timing I mentionned it earlier) would easily catch players off guard
That's all I'll touch on, nice diff overall

Good luck with the set!

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

defiance 2017-09-20T12:25:32+00:00

celerih wrote:
[ General]

How about changing diff name here to something that isn't the translation of the title. Something like Drowning Emotions would be cool ok mr deep sea rain
You could use a better sample for the hitwhistle, use this one that I used in my own map for this song https://celerih.s-ul.eu/meCPPmUU there's not much of a difference between this and the default soft whistle
Also there's an unused bg in the song folder, or that the hard diff doesn't have it set for some reason, might want to fix that guya
01:26:408 - Timing point here is late, your map needs to be perfectly timed, move it to 01:26:360 -battle

[ Normal]
00:08:168 (5) - NC here, combo gets a bit long afterwards combo's are usually this long anyways
00:38:238 (4) - To make the pattern look cleaner move this up and reduce the curve of the slider osu
00:43:042 (2) - To follow the piano better move this to start on 00:42:741 - and have it end at the same place as it did before. This way both piano and vocals are followed better animemapping.jpg
01:07:958 - Would add a circle here since the all the other vocals in the kiai are followed except for this one shinkai shoujo mada mada shizumu
But I'd still make some more 1/1 gaps in this, rhythm is dense and should be made easier. It is lowest diff after all
01:11:858 (7) - make into 2 circles at the start and end of the slider and reduce density downbeats are hate
01:07:058 (3) - Same thing as above, could even make 01:07:658 - a 1/2 slider from here to cover vocals and circle on 01:07:058 - instead of slider i prefer the 1/1 for the vocals her
Nice normal, good job

[ Jennglebell's Hard]
00:08:168 (1,2) - Would reduce distance here in favor of higher distance for 00:08:778 (2,3) - since there's much stronger piano there
00:24:769 (4,1,2) - Once again kinda backwards emphasis, 1 should get more spacing that 2 here
00:27:141 (4) - Note here is overmapped, there's no sound to support it as there is a break in both piano and vocals
00:42:741 (2,3,4) - Rhythm here could be improved upon since going for faint vocals over strong piano is confusing when playing. See box below for a suggestion
00:59:274 (2,3,4) - Overmapped note on 00:59:840 (3) - makes rhythm here improvable, mostly making a 1/1 slider on 00:59:543 - . See box below
01:02:852 (1) - Both vocals and piano hit on 01:03:155 - so shorten this by 1/4. It's a shame that the slider shape will have to be changed since it's really nice but the song just doesn't support it :/
01:08:258 (1) - Another case of a slider being 1/4 too long. If the vocals aren't being extended and just last 1/2, extended sliders won't fit
Main problem here is rhythm and overmapping imo. Apart from that I really like how this map looks and the fun use of slider movement

[ Deep Sea Girl]
00:09:084 (3) - Such strong piano on a slider reverse isn't the best. circle + 1/2 slider would be a better rhythm here agre
00:22:615 (1) - The very straight and "sharp" shape of the slider here clashes with the rest of the sliders as of yet, and there aren't any distinct sounds that really justify it it's matching the vocals, but i did a ctrl + g and adjusted the slider so it better follows it
00:28:040 (2) - 00:37:639 (2) - Once again the reverses here could be make into something more appropriate, like 1/2 slider + circle gang GANG
00:42:741 (2,3) - Here a reverse would actually work wonderfully, since you'd get the reverse on a pretty weak sound on 00:43:042 - instead of a clickable slider head. Something more passive would be better for a faint sound like this benis
01:01:367 (3,4,5,6,7) - A more clean progression of spacing would fit well into other patterns you did on 00:12:987 (4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:25:451 (2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i will attempt something
01:26:089 (1,1) - Would use a slider here, the random change in timing (btw fix timing I mentionned it earlier) would easily catch players off guard meh i don't like to incorporate a slider into that because it's just a single sound
That's all I'll touch on, nice diff overall

Good luck with the set!

ty for modding

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-09-23T04:05:39+00:00

celerih wrote:
General

Jennglebell's Hard
00:08:168 (1,2) - Would reduce distance here in favor of higher distance for 00:08:778 (2,3) - since there's much stronger piano there +
00:24:769 (4,1,2) - Once again kinda backwards emphasis, 1 should get more spacing that 2 here
00:27:141 (4) - Note here is overmapped, there's no sound to support it as there is a break in both piano and vocals im not exactly a big fan of keaving gaps especially when theres none in the song, so i will remove it and extend 3 instead;
00:42:741 (2,3,4) - Rhythm here could be improved upon since going for faint vocals over strong piano is confusing when playing. See box below for a suggestion went for something else to (maybe) follow the piano better
00:59:274 (2,3,4) - Overmapped note on 00:59:840 (3) - makes rhythm here improvable, mostly making a 1/1 slider on 00:59:543 - . See box below opt for a reverse instead
01:02:852 (1) - Both vocals and piano hit on 01:03:155 - so shorten this by 1/4. It's a shame that the slider shape will have to be changed since it's really nice but the song just doesn't support it :/ i did shorten it but i also raised sv by a bit in attempt to keep shape :sad:
01:08:258 (1) - Another case of a slider being 1/4 too long. If the vocals aren't being extended and just last 1/2, extended sliders won't fit +
Main problem here is rhythm and overmapping imo. Apart from that I really like how this map looks and the fun use of slider movement

osu crashed halfway so some things might be a little different

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Peter

786 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-10-06T14:10:11+00:00

Normal

00:35:842 (7) - the spacing here is so neutral make it closer http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253005
00:37:939 (3,4) - placement of these 2 is so weird place them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253023 or in other way
00:42:741 (2) - place it higher http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253027
00:53:863 (5) - weird this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253030 would have been better
01:00:467 (1) - hmm ctrr + h and rotate this to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253036
01:25:132 (5) - placing it like this feels unnatural move it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253041 or somewhere else

Hard

00:14:204 (5) - NC
00:17:807 (5) - prob same here but not sure
00:21:112 (6) - NC
00:40:637 (7) - ^
01:02:852 (1) - this slider is weird
01:11:858 (1) - NC

Sea Of Misery

00:05:727 (2,3) - why won't you place them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253089
00:28:040 (2) - isnt the same as previous slider ctr + c and ctr + shift +r previous one
00:46:048 (6) - place a little bit higher

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-10-07T00:58:42+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Hard
00:14:204 (5) - NC no thank you, but if you provided more reasoning i might reconsider
00:17:807 (5) - prob same here but not sure same as above, but i did went in and changed some after
00:21:112 (6) - NC adjusted in new change
00:40:637 (7) - ^
01:02:852 (1) - this slider is weird weird as in..? shape? speed? im sorry, but you'll need to be more specific than that -w-;
01:11:858 (1) - NC

thank you

update

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defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

defiance 2017-10-07T17:03:40+00:00

PeterEU wrote:
Normal
00:35:842 (7) - the spacing here is so neutral make it closer http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253005 nah, im trying not to have overlaps in this diff so i just moved it farther
00:37:939 (3,4) - placement of these 2 is so weird place them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253023 or in other way it's just following the curve of the pattern, i don't see the problem lol
00:42:741 (2) - place it higher http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253027 what i have is fine
00:53:863 (5) - weird this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253030 would have been better i prefer curved sliders over straight ones so i can accentuate the calm part of the song
01:00:467 (1) - hmm ctrr + h and rotate this to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253036 again, following the curve, nothing wrong with that
01:25:132 (5) - placing it like this feels unnatural move it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253041 or somewhere else why?, i don't see how it's unnatural to follow the curve of that pattern

Sea Of Misery
00:05:727 (2,3) - why won't you place them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9253089 because of the piano making a strong noise
00:28:040 (2) - isnt the same as previous slider ctr + c and ctr + shift +r previous one sure
00:46:048 (6) - place a little bit higherlooks ok to me

ty

-Hoshizora

6 posts

Joined February 2016

-Hoshizora 2017-10-11T21:46:35+00:00

Heyho:

My Mod for Sea of Misery

Slider velocity is a bit fast in general in my opinion.
00:09:084 (3,4) - could look better imo.
01:00:467 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for such an easy diff in my opinion, since the distance between 1-2 and 2-3 is the same, but there is a half beat gap between 2-3. Maybe new combo 01:01:367 (3) - to make it better readable or change distance.
01:24:835 (4,1) - a bit hard for such a low difficulty in my opinion. maybe make the slider from 4 - 1 and a circle on the sliderend of 1.
01:26:089 (1,1,1,1) - - for such an easy diff its a bit hard to click that in my opinion. since the bpm is changing, there will be tons of 100 for unexperienced people. probably work with sliders there.

My Mod for Hard

00:21:112 (7) - Maybe move this note a bit away from the previous one, to make it better readable
00:22:615 (3,4,5) - This flow looks a bit annoying to me. Maybe change it like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295387
00:26:243 (3) - I would cut this slider at the white tick and add a circle, since this slider skips a beat in my opinion.
00:44:244 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Flow doesnt fit to the music very good in my opinion. i would change the flow in base of the pitch of the voice maybe.
Maybe like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295461
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295480
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295487
01:03:458 (1) - could be spaced a bit more from the previous slider in my opinion.
01:13:074 (1,2,3) - Song is more intense here then 01:15:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. i would change the spacing in that part.
01:20:880 (3,4,5) - Maybe emphasize this part a bit more.
01:22:696 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - music is getting calmer with every note. maybe you could reflect this with the spacing.

My Mod for Normal

00:20:211 (2,3,4) - The spacing between those 3 object looks weird.
00:25:045 (5) - New combo?
00:35:243 (6,7) - This is the only overlap, looks a bit random for me.
00:39:435 (5) - New combo?
00:44:244 (4) - New combo?
I would put a few more new combos, but you have to decide that.

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

defiance 2017-10-11T22:34:24+00:00

-Hoshizora wrote:
Heyho:

My Mod for Sea of Misery
Slider velocity is a bit fast in general in my opinion.
00:09:084 (3,4) - could look better imo. ur right.
01:00:467 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for such an easy diff in my opinion, since the distance between 1-2 and 2-3 is the same, but there is a half beat gap between 2-3. Maybe new combo 01:01:367 (3) - to make it better readable or change distance. good suggestion
01:24:835 (4,1) - a bit hard for such a low difficulty in my opinion. maybe make the slider from 4 - 1 and a circle on the sliderend of 1. personally think that the current rhythm fits the song better
01:26:089 (1,1,1,1) - - for such an easy diff its a bit hard to click that in my opinion. since the bpm is changing, there will be tons of 100 for unexperienced people. probably work with sliders there. sliders wouldn't really match the song too well :/ plus this is the top diff and i want to make it the most rhythmically challenging

My Mod for Normal
00:20:211 (2,3,4) - The spacing between those 3 object looks weird. it looks fine to me, just a different kind of movement
00:25:045 (5) - New combo?
00:35:243 (6,7) - This is the only overlap, looks a bit random for me. i swear i fixed this
00:39:435 (5) - New combo?
00:44:244 (4) - New combo?
I would put a few more new combos, but you have to decide that.the nc's are supposed to be every 2 downbeats, i do follow a system in where to place them

ty for modding!

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-10-14T15:42:04+00:00

-Hoshizora wrote:
Heyho:
My Mod for Hard
00:21:112 (7) - Maybe move this note a bit away from the previous one, to make it better readable 6 and 7 are stacked, i'll restack them if they are not properly stacked x.x
00:22:615 (3,4,5) - This flow looks a bit annoying to me. Maybe change it like this for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295387 3 and 5 are paired, i'd rather not have them blanketed since the next note after 5 will have limited placement, 4 is also a bit too far from 5 by my likings
00:26:243 (3) - I would cut this slider at the white tick and add a circle, since this slider skips a beat in my opinion. shortened the slider but skipped the circle. theres no beat for the circle to be mapped to, originally the extended was a placeholder for better rhythm but now ive went in and adjusted some stuff
00:44:244 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Flow doesnt fit to the music very good in my opinion. i would change the flow in base of the pitch of the voice maybe.
Maybe like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295461
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295480
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9295487 this section gave me a very straight forward feeling with its clear 1/2s, so i mapped it without much turns to give it an easier flow to distinguish this part from the rest of the map
01:03:458 (1) - could be spaced a bit more from the previous slider in my opinion. +
01:13:074 (1,2,3) - Song is more intense here then 01:15:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. i would change the spacing in that part. spacing doesnt always make things more intense imo, in this case i used 01:14:274 (4,5) - to show its more intense since its in the opposite direction of 3, different from 01:15:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - which flows one direction
01:20:880 (3,4,5) - Maybe emphasize this part a bit more. remapped
01:22:696 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - music is getting calmer with every note. maybe you could reflect this with the spacing.vocal is still going at its peak, the following spinner slows down the song for both conclusion
thanks for the mod

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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2017-10-22T22:18:00+00:00

[General]
Tags in Hard are corrupted

you probably want to mute the slider sides, they are very disruptive for a quiet song like this

01:00:467 - this timing point feels like it should be -8ms
01:26:360 - -8ms
01:27:014 - -12ms

[Normal]
00:55:968 (8) - spacing
00:58:673 (5,6,7,1) - I understand there are timing changes here, but changing spacing like this may confuse some beginner players and generally doesn't look very clean
01:02:852 (4) - same here
01:19:977 (3,7) - spacing
diff is nice, just need to clean up the visual spacing over timing change sections and it should be solid

[Jennglebells' Hard]
a lot of your sliders go over red lines, that sadly won't be rankable so you have to map them out with circles or reduce the repeat sliders. Here are the places:
00:11:830 - Slider end
00:59:574 - Slider repeat
00:59:875 - Slider end
01:00:732 - Slider repeat
01:01:030 - Slider end
01:22:094 - Slider repeat
01:22:408 - Slider end

00:09:389 (3) - this map mainly follows the vocals so I felt a bit left out here skipping the vocals, see if you can break it up
00:47:701 - I'd add a circle here to catch the vocals as well
00:55:066 (5,6) - feel like you should map it similar to 00:53:863 (1,2,3) for consistency and vocal following
01:22:696 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - arguably the hardest part of the map with continuous circles over timing changes, I highly recommend you to swap some out for sliders to increase timing leniency for players

[Sea of Misery]
00:28:639 (3) - whistle?
00:53:863 (1,2,3) - spacing here should be consistent, looks better visually
00:56:268 (1) - whistle on start?
01:12:462 - did you forgot to change the sv here or is it intentionally 1.0x
01:17:874 (1,2,3) - no hitsounds?
01:26:711 (1) - unsnapped, should be on the red line

Yeah make sure you fix the timing and snapping issues, then you can call me back

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

defiance 2017-10-22T22:59:29+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
Tags in Hard are corrupted fixed

you probably want to mute the slider sides, they are very disruptive for a quiet song like this okay

01:00:467 - this timing point feels like it should be -8ms
01:26:360 - -8ms
01:27:014 - -12ms
did all of these, thank you for polishing the timing!

[Normal]
00:55:968 (8) - spacing
00:58:673 (5,6,7,1) - I understand there are timing changes here, but changing spacing like this may confuse some beginner players and generally doesn't look very clean
01:02:852 (4) - same here
01:19:977 (3,7) - spacing
diff is nice, just need to clean up the visual spacing over timing change sections and it should be solid i tried to fix all of these the best i could, the timing makes it sadfdsaf

[Sea of Misery]
00:28:639 (3) - whistle? yes
00:53:863 (1,2,3) - spacing here should be consistent, looks better visually yes
00:56:268 (1) - whistle on start? yes
01:12:462 - did you forgot to change the sv here or is it intentionally 1.0x it's intentional to give pressure on the held piano
01:17:874 (1,2,3) - no hitsounds? i put hitsounds on the heads
01:26:711 (1) - unsnapped, should be on the red line oof

Yeah make sure you fix the timing and snapping issues, then you can call me back

about jenn's diff, those sliders are allowed to go through red lines as long as they are snapped, which they weren't. so we snapped them

thank you for modding jonathan!!!

Last edited by defiance 2017-10-22T23:30:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-10-22T23:21:14+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Jennglebells' Hard]
a lot of your sliders go over red lines, that sadly won't be rankable so you have to map them out with circles or reduce the repeat sliders. Here are the places:
00:11:830 - Slider end
00:59:574 - Slider repeat
00:59:875 - Slider end
01:00:732 - Slider repeat
01:01:030 - Slider end
01:22:094 - Slider repeat
01:22:408 - Slider end

00:09:389 (3) - this map mainly follows the vocals so I felt a bit left out here skipping the vocals, see if you can break it upcircle+slider
00:47:701 - I'd add a circle here to catch the vocals as well
00:55:066 (5,6) - feel like you should map it similar to 00:53:863 (1,2,3) for consistency and vocal following
01:22:696 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - arguably the hardest part of the map with continuous circles over timing changes, I highly recommend you to swap some out for sliders to increase timing leniency for players replaced 5 and 6 with 1/2
all fix&thank you!

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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2017-10-23T00:19:38+00:00

hmm about the snapping i was mainly referring to the repeat sliders, since the repeats also have to be snapped, but there is no way to achieve that with how you set up some of your red lines

e.g. in Hard
00:10:610 (1) -
00:59:274 (2) -
01:21:780 (5) -

these are all unrankable as far as I'm aware :/

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-10-23T00:45:52+00:00

my mistake, i misread
went in and edited the rhythms

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