Kajiura Yuki - Credens justitiam

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Sync
Quick check. Great song, the skin is very pleasing to the eyes, and the map is solid all around.

[Insane]
00:15:621 (2) - Totally a nazi, but seeing as the rest of your sliders are pretty much beautiful, make this one less ugly.
00:39:445 (2) - You need to add a new combo here so that the spinner can end properly.
00:48:930 (6,1,2) - Despite that this is an insane, this stack is hard to read and is a miss waiting to happen. I'd unstack.

[Tiro Finale]
00:30:952 (2) - This doesn't follow your current beat placement pattern -- it's random. Remove it.
00:49:592 (5,6) - This is kind of a bastard stack. Technically, there's nothing wrong here but it's unpleasant to play ;_; I'd unstack it but do as you wish.

[Hard]
You -should- follow these, but if you don't want to ruin your patterns you don't have to.
00:35:033 (5) - The player won't be able to read that this slider 2 repeats -- it's the first of it's kind and it's slow. I'd suggest removing one of the repeats for intuitiveness.
00:50:916 (3) - Same thing. There's nothing hinting at the fact that the slider is going to have an extra repeat. Here's what I would do: remove one of the repeats, add a hit circle at 00:51:577 (4), stack it under the slider, and vertically flip 00:51:798 (5).
01:12:092 (6), 01:13:857 (5), 01:15:621 (3) - Again, not liking these repeats. I think you're better off with a single repeat.

01:20:033 (4) - Gah, another x-amount of repeats slider. This would work better as a long slider. Definitely change this.

[yuca's Normal]
Looks great!

Call me back (PM me) when you're ready for me to check once again.
Topic Starter
kyuten

Sync wrote:

Quick check. Great song, the skin is very pleasing to the eyes, and the map is solid all around.

[Insane]
00:15:621 (2) - Totally a nazi, but seeing as the rest of your sliders are pretty much beautiful, make this one less ugly.→fixed
00:39:445 (2) - You need to add a new combo here so that the spinner can end properly. →here is the same rythm as yuca's normal lol and the spinner is already end properly 0 0?
00:48:930 (6,1,2) - Despite that this is an insane, this stack is hard to read and is a miss waiting to happen. I'd unstack.→its ok i think ._. actually i like the stack here XD

[Tiro Finale]
00:30:952 (2) - This doesn't follow your current beat placement pattern -- it's random. Remove it.→fixed
00:49:592 (5,6) - This is kind of a bastard stack. Technically, there's nothing wrong here but it's unpleasant to play ;_; I'd unstack it but do as you wish. →its ok i think ;_;

[Hard]
You -should- follow these, but if you don't want to ruin your patterns you don't have to.
00:35:033 (5) - The player won't be able to read that this slider 2 repeats -- it's the first of it's kind and it's slow. I'd suggest removing one of the repeats for intuitiveness.→fixed
00:50:916 (3) - Same thing. There's nothing hinting at the fact that the slider is going to have an extra repeat. Here's what I would do: remove one of the repeats, add a hit circle at 00:51:577 (4), stack it under the slider, and vertically flip 00:51:798 (5).
01:12:092 (6), 01:13:857 (5), 01:15:621 (3) - Again, not liking these repeats. I think you're better off with a single repeat.→u-n...i tried some ways but still no change l_l
01:20:033 (4) - Gah, another x-amount of repeats slider. This would work better as a long slider. Definitely change this.→i made a circle slider ww

[yuca's Normal]
Looks great!

Call me back (PM me) when you're ready for me to check once again.
thanks for modding >w</~
Sync
After clearing some stuff up via IRC, rebubbled!
Topic Starter
kyuten
Thank you Sync >w<////
happy30
[yuca's Normal]

Seeing this being the easiest difficulty I think you should really cut down the amount of spinners a bit.
New players find spinners usually to be very tiresome ^^

Maybe replace these spinners:

00:08:563 (1) - maybe
00:18:269 (1) - maybe (or make it start a bit later)
00:33:820 (1) - remove this please
00:37:680 (1) - ^
00:46:504 (1) - maybe (or make it start a bit later)
00:57:974 (1) - maybe

[Tiro Finale]
01:29:298 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this plays a bit awkward. It's the calmest part of the song yet it has the biggest jumps? :D

[Hard & Insane]
00:25:327 - Add a normal-hitnormal sound here?
01:04:151 - ^
01:16:504 - ^ (Insane only)

Maybe add a few more whistles on both diffs? it will sound much better :)
y u c a
thanks mod :)
i removed the spinner that you said and i put a circle instead
Download: Kajiura Yuki - Credens justitiam (kyuten) [yuca's Normal].osu

がんばれ ⑨姐ー!!
Topic Starter
kyuten

happy30 wrote:

[Tiro Finale]
01:29:298 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this plays a bit awkward. It's the calmest part of the song yet it has the biggest jumps? :Dno change ._.

[Hard & Insane]
00:25:327 - Add a normal-hitnormal sound here?→added in Insane
01:04:151 - ^→added in Insane
01:16:504 - ^ (Insane only)→no change

Maybe add a few more whistles on both diffs? it will sound much better :)
I made the hitsound in the second part in Insane same as the first part :D
and replaced some notes in Hard diff. now its more beautiful and comfortable to eyes maybe XD

Ready~thanks happy30 <333
happy30
bubble restored :D
wmfchris
- Tag y_u_c_a

[Insane]
00:18:710 (2) - I guess this is misplaced. up 1 grid lv4.
00:37:680 (1) - Not really prefer a finish here because it's quiet in the background, and you might want to emphasize 00:39:445 - more than the spinner.
01:18:269 (1,1) - Hitsound suggestion: I'll suggest you to remove clap on the second (1) corresponding to the quiet beat at 01:22:460 - . Also imo 01:22:460 - can be muted like the sound during slider.

[Trio Finale]
technically fine... but considering a large number of sudden jumps this is actually an insane with hard config...

[Hard]
00:37:680 (1) - same as insane

[Normal]
00:40:327 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning? imo if you set whistle for both (1) ending and (2) beginning the pitch of the notes is way above the pitch of vocal, and removing the whistle would eliminate the problem.
00:50:916 (2) - ^
01:15:621 (2) - this is highly covered by previous slider, and maybe you'll want to move (1,2,1,2) into a different pattern.

[Taiko]
N 80% is too loud for the song. 60~70% would be enough.

that should be all. In overall I think each of the hitsound (whistle, clap, etc.) sound nice and used nicely, but whistle is kinda odd with clap and the soft-hit and actually be even softer than now.
y u c a

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
00:40:327 (2) - remove whistle at the beginning? imo if you set whistle for both (1) ending and (2) beginning the pitch of the notes is way above the pitch of vocal, and removing the whistle would eliminate the problem. sound weird for me! so i removed 00:40:107-whistle
00:50:916 (2) - ^ ^
01:15:621 (2) - this is highly covered by previous slider, and maybe you'll want to move (1,2,1,2) into a different pattern.fixed
thanks mod!
/me eats wtfchris

fixed version here :arrow:http://puu.sh/AFoc
Topic Starter
kyuten

wmfchris wrote:

- Tag y_u_c_a→added

[Insane]
00:18:710 (2) - I guess this is misplaced. up 1 grid lv4.→fixed
00:37:680 (1) - Not really prefer a finish here because it's quiet in the background, and you might want to emphasize 00:39:445 - more than the spinner.→removed finish and made the volume during the spin at 70%
01:18:269 (1,1) - Hitsound suggestion: I'll suggest you to remove clap on the second (1) corresponding to the quiet beat at 01:22:460 - . Also imo 01:22:460 - can be muted like the sound during slider.→fixed but its just a little weird at 01:22:901 (1) imo ww


[Hard]
00:37:680 (1) - same as insane→^

[Taiko]
N 80% is too loud for the song. 60~70% would be enough.→changed to 70%

that should be all. In overall I think each of the hitsound (whistle, clap, etc.) sound nice and used nicely, but whistle is kinda odd with clap and the soft-hit and actually be even softer than now.
thank you wmf >3<
wmfchris
sound fine now.

ranked!
Topic Starter
kyuten
wow thank you wmf <333333
y u c a
omedetoooooooooooooooooooooooo⑨姐!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
spboxer3
wowowowowow!!!!!!!!!!!!
終於Ranked了阿 ((淚
Akemi_Homura
OMGratz~ O.O
Rare
gratz ><
Mei_coN
终于rank了,泪流满面,又抱大腿rank一张了=w=
Beren
恭喜
YTYuyu
You did it o.o. congratz on your 1st ranked map ;)
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