Inori Minase - Aimaimoko · forum

Rizen

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-08-16T06:26:50+00:00

Movement should be fine; it's a Hard diff not an Easy/Normal
Slight adjustment to blanket/circle placement in specified time

thanks!

code

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 41154
Countdown: 1
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Aimai Moko
TitleUnicode:アイマイモコ
Artist:Inori Minase
ArtistUnicode:水瀬いのり
Creator:DakiniBrave
Version:Rizen's Hard
Source:徒然チルドレン
Tags:Tsuredure Children Tsurezure Chirudoren TV Size OP Opening osuskrub Rizen aqpw a_q_p_w -_Rain_- -Rain-
BeatmapID:1382739
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-08-16T06:52:53+00:00

cococolaco wrote:
[Confession]
00:12:282 (5) - sliderend on stronger beat It's barely noticeable since its not a snare + vocals
00:16:342 (7) - ^ Starts on a snare and ends on a weaker
00:12:056 (3,4,5) - weird rhythm choice (y not 1/2 slider + circle) The drums provide support for a triple while the slider follows the vocal
00:15:665 (4,5,6) - ^ There is a sound supporting this triple too + even if there wasnt, consistency & vocal for slider
[Insane]
00:18:598 (1,2) - slider instead? I like the pattern + they are 2 distinct vocals
00:19:500 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:33:034 (1) - y diff from 00:34:838 (1,2)While i agree that could work, im still kind of torn since 00:33:034 (1) - is on a cymbal crash which gives it priority over the snare while the 2nd doesnt, ill think about this.

Thanks for the mod

Accidently clicked on rizen for kds zzz

jack1817 wrote:
Song name!! Song name!!
The song name is Aimai Moko, not Aimaimoko!!
No kds of course

Checked metadata with IamKwan and she said it was Aimaimoko and so does the discography for her album state as such

IamKwaN wrote:
曖昧模糊 is a word so romanised title should be Aimaimoko

other fields (except tags which i didn't check) seem to be fine, good luck!

Last edited by Saileach 2017-08-16T09:36:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Faputa

osu! Alumni

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

Faputa 2017-08-16T08:03:54+00:00

DakiniBrave wrote:
Checked metadata with IAmKwan and she said it was Aimaimoko and so does the discography for her album state as such

I don't know, because her album doesn't have official English romanized name, so I go for the meanings of the word and thinking that they should separate (Aimai = ambiguous and Moko = blurry, which is some synonym so they should not join together when romanized)
I am sorry if that's not true

DakiniBrave wrote:
I will inquire further

Edit: Have asked various people and they all agree that it is Aimaimoko

If that is so I apologize to my greatest for causing the nonsense here

Last edited by Faputa 2017-08-16T10:41:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-08-16T08:56:08+00:00

I will inquire further

Edit: Have asked various people and they all agree that it is Aimaimoko

fieryrage

osu! Champion / Elite Nominator II

1,402 posts

Joined November 2013

fieryrage 2017-08-16T18:39:13+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639633 m4m

50 second set for a 50 second set Aw Yea Bro

top diff

ar 8.2 but od 8.5 can u like actually not

00:00:553 (1) - this spinner hitsound hurts my ears can u reduce it (this goes for all diffs besides normal btw)
00:07:771 (1,2,1,2) - bro adding the pp jumps in the beginning isnt how u get to most played besides this isn't even that intense of a section, i'd nerf a bit
00:27:620 (1,2) - maybe curve 1 a bit more? it feels like 2 is way too far up atm
00:37:996 (1,2) - y does this one just randomly decrease in spacing i feel like it should still be emphasized like 00:37:545 (1,2) - this one
00:40:477 - this could totally be mapped tho
00:49:951 (5,6,7) - kinda an overmapped triple, if you wanna keep this rhythm id say make this a slider
00:52:883 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - haitai for 5 digits
00:56:492 (1) - add note here first?

insane

00:06:643 (1) - remove nc
00:07:319 (1) - ^
00:19:274 (1) - move nc 00:19:500 (3) - here instead
00:52:883 (1) - maybe make this a jump instead?

pretty straightforward diff, i like

hard

00:06:417 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is a pretty stupid pattern to be putting in a hard tbh especially at ar 7, i'd make 00:06:643 (3,4,5) - just a triple instead of a spaced out one
00:09:575 (1,2,3) - same deal here, spaced out triples don't rly work with this low of an AR
00:35:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels way too spaced out

idk the triples are like the only issue i have with the map cuz of their spacing but you also only used DS so idk
fuck modding hards tbh i cant do this shit

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-08-17T13:24:39+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/639633 m4m

50 second set for a 50 second set Aw Yea Bro

top diff
ar 8.2 but od 8.5 can u like actually not It's been done before since increasing the AR makes everything look disconnected while the OD i feel is fitting :eyes:

00:00:553 (1) - this spinner hitsound hurts my ears can u reduce it (this goes for all diffs besides normal btw) Done for all
00:07:771 (1,2,1,2) - bro adding the pp jumps in the beginning isnt how u get to most played besides this isn't even that intense of a section, i'd nerf a bit Fine
00:27:620 (1,2) - maybe curve 1 a bit more? it feels like 2 is way too far up atm Sure
00:37:996 (1,2) - y does this one just randomly decrease in spacing i feel like it should still be emphasized like 00:37:545 (1,2) - this one Changed the pattern
00:40:477 - this could totally be mapped tho Felt mapping it would be a little awkward being the only 1/1 gapped thing in the entire map
00:49:951 (5,6,7) - kinda an overmapped triple, if you wanna keep this rhythm id say make this a slider There is a drum supporting this, if you mean the triple before it, vocals support it
00:52:883 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - haitai for 5 digits :eyes:
00:56:492 (1) - add note here first?
Map literally does a sudden drop in intensity, represented that with a lack of a clickable objects

insane
00:06:643 (1) - remove nc sure
00:07:319 (1) - ^ sure
00:19:274 (1) - move nc 00:19:500 (3) - here instead moving nc makes the pattern look bad imo and emphasises the new vocal section
00:52:883 (1) - maybe make this a jump instead? Sure

pretty straightforward diff, i like Thanks

Well fk i spent a bit responding and i accidentally didnt post, time to spend more time trying to remember what i said...

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-08-20T02:05:22+00:00

Confession

00:22:207 (1) - Idk why but this just feels too uncurved for your aesthetic lol. 00:24:688 (4) - is good.
00:31:229 (1,2) - Spacing seems inconsistent to how you usually manage your 1/4 gaps like 00:29:425 (1,2) -
00:36:643 (1,2) - Make this smaller and have it increase to bigger spacing. Makes more sense since the drums become louder towards the end.
00:56:492 (1) - How about adding a circle on 00:56:492 - and beginning the spinner 1/4 of a beat later?

Insane

00:08:447 (2) - How about something like this: to help support the overlap you have with the other two circles

~

00:33:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wish this rhythm reflected the 3/4 rhythms in the vocals a bit better.
00:56:492 - Same as highest diff.

Rizen's Hard

00:09:913 (2,3) - Try stacking 3 on circle 2. The idea is that the blue tick becomes the focus of the jump which reflects the bluetick emphasis in the song a bit better.
00:55:026 - You could probably add a circle here. But ehh its fine either way.
00:56:492 - Circle and spinner 1/4 a beat later?

skrub's Normal

00:03:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't ignore the downbeats dude D:. Use this rhythm: Also NC on 00:04:162 - because thats when the new measure starts.

~

00:09:349 (4) - This is unnecessary, you can skip here and have a 1/1 gap.
00:11:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay rhythm needs work. You aren't focusing on the red tick which is the stronger beat. Use a rhythm structure like this:

~

00:18:146 (1) - Make this a circle or a 1/2 slider and make the dowbeat clickable please.
00:21:756 (1) - ^
00:33:034 - 00:40:026 - Is good. since you have downbeats clickable its a lot clearer what your rhythm is. You aren't confusing strong beats with clicks and releases.
00:42:056 - Please no,.

Okay this difficulty needs serious work with rhythm structure xP.

[]

Yea, get more mods on Normal. I can still help with pushing it forward eventually, but right now the normal really needs attention.

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-08-20T04:17:47+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Confession

00:22:207 (1) - Idk why but this just feels too uncurved for your aesthetic lol. 00:24:688 (4) - is good. made curvier
00:31:229 (1,2) - Spacing seems inconsistent to how you usually manage your 1/4 gaps like 00:29:425 (1,2) - increased to 1.3 ds
00:36:643 (1,2) - Make this smaller and have it increase to bigger spacing. Makes more sense since the drums become louder towards the end. Sure
00:56:492 (1) - How about adding a circle on 00:56:492 - and beginning the spinner 1/4 of a beat later? I'm kind of torn on this, since it's a little abrupt on how it ends, I feel that the sudden spinner skipping the downbeat kind of emphasises that

Insane

00:08:447 (2) - How about something like this: to help support the overlap you have with the other two circles Sure
~
00:33:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wish this rhythm reflected the 3/4 rhythms in the vocals a bit better. Made 00:33:034 (1) - a 3/4 slider with a circle on the end but not gonna lie, while mapping i couldn't even tell they were 3/4 vocals, if i did something like 00:36:643 (1) - I feel this section would slightly less unique so to speak
00:56:492 - Same as highest diff. Same as highest diff.

Yea, get more mods on Normal. I can still help with pushing it forward eventually, but right now the normal really needs attention. Will do

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2017-08-20T22:58:41+00:00

shit i love the song so much
is there still chance to do insane for it? uwu

my diffs usually don't need any mods lol

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-20T23:34:03+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
skrub's Normal

00:03:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't ignore the downbeats dude D:. Use this rhythm: Also NC on 00:04:162 - because thats when the new measure starts.
~
i did change most of it, though i don't really like 3's rhythm because it ignores the drum beat on the white tick, which seems fairly inconsistent with how i mapped the beginning.
00:09:349 (4) - This is unnecessary, you can skip here and have a 1/1 gap. fixed
00:11:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay rhythm needs work. You aren't focusing on the red tick which is the stronger beat. Use a rhythm structure like this:
~
fixed
00:18:146 (1) - Make this a circle or a 1/2 slider and make the dowbeat clickable please. fixed
00:21:756 (1) - ^ fixed
00:33:034 - 00:40:026 - Is good. since you have downbeats clickable its a lot clearer what your rhythm is. You aren't confusing strong beats with clicks and releases.
00:42:056 - Please no,. fixed

Okay this difficulty needs serious work with rhythm structure xP.

[]

Yea, get more mods on Normal. I can still help with pushing it forward eventually, but right now the normal really needs attention.

i am currently in the process of restructuring the rhythm, once it is updated hopefully it is better now! sorry to rizen and dakini for slowing the process down

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-08-21T12:14:23+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
hard
00:06:417 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is a pretty stupid pattern to be putting in a hard tbh especially at ar 7, i'd make 00:06:643 (3,4,5) - just a triple instead of a spaced out one it's fine, bpm slow enough to follow
00:09:575 (1,2,3) - same deal here, spaced out triples don't rly work with this low of an AR this one i'll change
00:35:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels way too spaced out it's fiine, short stream

idk the triples are like the only issue i have with the map cuz of their spacing but you also only used DS so id it's fine
fuck modding hards tbh i cant do this shit

Monstrata wrote:
Rizen's Hard

00:09:913 (2,3) - Try stacking 3 on circle 2. The idea is that the blue tick becomes the focus of the jump which reflects the bluetick emphasis in the song a bit better. done
00:55:026 - You could probably add a circle here. But ehh its fine either way. should be fiiine, want to continue this rhythm idea from 00:33:034 (1,2) -
00:56:492 - Circle and spinner 1/4 a beat later? just to improve mapset cohesion, I won't apply cos dakini isn't

thanks

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-09-04T20:53:51+00:00

[General]

Remove osuscrub from tags, and add Corinn/Akitoshi/etc...

Corinn's Normal

00:47:244 (4,5,6) - I think mapping the vocal on 00:48:146 - is more important. It's more stressed than 00:47:695 - . Maybe try a 3/2 slider and then a 1/1 slider?

~

Okay that's all.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-05T03:34:03+00:00

@Monstrata the rhythm will bit different than what you suggested but it's more focused on vocals now, thanks!

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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-09-05T06:20:53+00:00

fixed tags & applied akitoshi changes

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-09-05T08:29:26+00:00

nominate

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-09-05T08:33:14+00:00

yolole

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2017-09-17T17:42:47+00:00

General
use .jpg format for your bg file so it can make your file size smaller
disable countdown and widescreen support for all diffs as they are obviously useless

00:25:816 - recommend a finish instead for the cymbals
00:52:883 - need finish as well, you can have the clap and finish together if you want
00:55:590 - add finish here just like 00:54:688 -
I wrote these in the General because it's obvious you copied hitsounds throughout diffs so the setowner should be fixing them for all diffs

Corinn's Normal
fine as it is apart from the hitsounding

Rizen's Hard
00:36:079 (2) - the beat here is much much more softer than the other 4 drums in the music and I don't really take it as map-worthy for a Hard diff. it'd be better to remove it to change this stream into a triple instead, it also makes this pattern not too hard for this diff
00:37:094 (2,4) - plz have clap on head of these two, don't simply rely on a hitsounder copier and never recheck again

Insane
the OD is currently kinda too high for a diff at this level, try to reduce it to 7.5 at most
00:24:688 (4) - this doesn't flow really nice from the former jumps imo, maybe somehow make it horizontal like this or you can change in other way
00:34:387 (5,6,1) - quite uncomfortable flow as well, may try to flip 00:34:838 (1,2) - together like this and do some adjustments to the following notes
00:55:590 (2) - plz remove the whistle on the sliderbody you probably misused it and it doesn't sound nice

Confession
00:08:673 (1,2,1) - honestly I think this is a flow killer, it's better fi you put 00:09:124 (1) - down to carry on the back and forth flow from 00:07:771 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and then start to change direction from 00:09:349 (2) - on maybe like this . if you really want to the current structure or anything you could at least try to lower the spacing between 00:08:898 (2,1) - to make the jump friendlier
00:55:026 (2,3) - recommend to switch their order, slider goes first from 00:55:026 - and circle follows at 00:55:365 - , this will work better with the strong beats as well as the vocals. of course you need to change the placement after doing so, such as moving the circle down under

generally acceptable I think. call me back after the above is addressed.

Last edited by Zero__wind 2017-09-21T17:09:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-09-22T12:38:05+00:00

applied all (except for general hitsounding part, Dakini will handle that)

thanks!

code

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Saileach

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Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-09-22T13:20:22+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
General
use .jpg format for your bg file so it can make your file size smaller
disable countdown and widescreen support for all diffs as they are obviously useless both applied

00:25:816 - recommend a finish instead for the cymbals
00:52:883 - need finish as well, you can have the clap and finish together if you want
00:55:590 - add finish here just like 00:54:688 -
I wrote these in the General because it's obvious you copied hitsounds throughout diffs so the setowner should be fixing them for all diffs done

Insane
the OD is currently kinda too high for a diff at this level, try to reduce it to 7.5 at most sure
00:24:688 (4) - this doesn't flow really nice from the former jumps imo, maybe somehow make it horizontal like this or you can change in other way sure
00:34:387 (5,6,1) - quite uncomfortable flow as well, may try to flip 00:34:838 (1,2) - together like this and do some adjustments to the following notes sure
00:55:590 (2) - plz remove the whistle on the sliderbody you probably misused it and it doesn't sound nice oops

Confession
00:08:673 (1,2,1) - honestly I think this is a flow killer, it's better fi you put 00:09:124 (1) - down to carry on the back and forth flow from 00:07:771 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and then start to change direction from 00:09:349 (2) - on maybe like this . if you really want to the current structure or anything you could at least try to lower the spacing between 00:08:898 (2,1) - to make the jump friendlier Fixed
00:55:026 (2,3) - recommend to switch their order, slider goes first from 00:55:026 - and circle follows at 00:55:365 - , this will work better with the strong beats as well as the vocals. of course you need to change the placement after doing so, such as moving the circle down under I feel the blue tick slider ignores the beat on the white which im not a fan of

generally acceptable I think. call me back after the above is addressed.