tyjack1817 wrote:
Hi my half of the M4M from your queue,
blue: opinions
red: suggestions
[Normal]
>00:14:537 (1) - I think it is not a good thing for sliderends land on the big white ticks for this minimum difficulty as new players who downloaded it would be able to try normal for their very first experience of the map; Another is that 00:14:989 - definitely have a larger sound than 00:14:537 - . both beats are at the same intensity in sound so the rhythm is fine, and i do this a lot cause that's how the melody plays out.
>00:18:146 (1) - same as above ^ merely transitional, did the same on 00:03:485 (1,2) -
>00:21:304 (6,1) - this can be done better, move down the 1 a little bit to make player moves straight from 6 to 1 what, 6's slider end is leading straight into 1, it's not a like a normal player can't follow sliders
>00:22:883 (3,4) - this feels visually unsatisfied, maybe the whole thing moves down and make the 4 to a better position, to at least not 90 degree turn of cursor movement. adjusted
>00:34:162 (3,4) - this makes me a feeling of "wait, something missing here or what?" Maybe you should rethink about this pattern there is nothing missing here, and that's about as advanced as i can make a rhythm on a normal other than 3 circles.
>00:35:966 (7,8) - same as above ^ ^
>00:43:410 (5) - you can move the red anchor to make it a symmetric shape if you are talking about til the next point, that's in a completely different pattern
>00:45:665 (4) - same as above ^
dakini
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