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HHHxMMxST - Oboro

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 4월 5일 목요일 at 오후 10:15:00

Artist: HHHxMMxST
Title: Oboro
Source: pop'n music 20 fantasia
Tags: FASCINATION Ryu* Dai. VJ Halka 森永真由美 Morinaga Mayumi moimoi senya Starving Trancer Dailycare Satellite Dagger-Gazel
BPM: 149
Filesize: 4132kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blurred (5.34 stars, 579 notes)
  2. Easy (1.49 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Insane (4.38 stars, 378 notes)
  4. Normal (1.87 stars, 158 notes)
  5. Satellite's Hard (3.34 stars, 277 notes)
Download: HHHxMMxST - Oboro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Bye

Hard by Satellite
Uberzolik
this map is really fun!
Akiyama Mizuki
very cool pattern composition

good luck!
Topic Starter
Dailycare
Wow thanks for stars
Enon
갓맵........떴다............
Beomsan
!Why?
HonKAn
modding
insane
20:17 HonKAn: 00:18:784 (4) -
20:17 HonKAn: 이거
20:17 HonKAn: 소리
20:17 HonKAn: 너무 없어짐.
20:17 HonKAn: 00:24:523 (1,2,3) -
20:18 HonKAn: 이거
20:18 HonKAn: 저라면..
20:18 Dailycare: dz
20:18 Dailycare: 소리올렷슴
20:18 HonKAn: 00:24:825 (2) - 이걸
20:18 HonKAn: 3번 슬라에다
20:18 HonKAn: 겹쳣을꺼같에요 .
20:18 HonKAn: 지금
20:18 Dailycare: 아
20:18 HonKAn: 저거는. .너무 퀄떠러지는거같음
20:18 Dailycare: 그건좀먼가
20:18 Dailycare: 컨셉트라서
20:18 Dailycare: 2그러면
20:18 Dailycare: 조금만
20:18 Dailycare: 밑으로
20:18 Dailycare: 내려볼까요?
20:19 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033583
20:19 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033584
20:19 HonKAn: ㅋㅋㅋ
20:19 Dailycare: 띠용
20:19 HonKAn: 둘다 같은생각 ㅋ
20:19 HonKAn: 찌찌뽕.
20:19 Dailycare: 이렇게
20:19 Dailycare: 아
20:19 Dailycare: ㅁㅊ다언제적거야
20:19 HonKAn: ㅈㅅ;;
20:19 HonKAn: 자제 할께요 .
20:19 Dailycare: 아
20:19 Dailycare: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:19 HonKAn: 00:27:140 (4) -
20:19 HonKAn: 이거
20:20 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033588
20:20 HonKAn: 이런게
20:20 HonKAn: 더 나을꺼같은..
20:20 Dailycare: 아하
20:20 Dailycare: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
20:20 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033592
20:20 HonKAn: 이런것도
20:20 HonKAn: 있고
20:21 Dailycare: 전차라리
20:21 Dailycare: 리피트슬라
20:21 Dailycare: 조금손본게
20:21 Dailycare: 나은거같아요
20:21 HonKAn: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
20:21 Dailycare: 맨첨에올리신거처럼
20:21 HonKAn: 00:35:194 (4,5,6) -
20:21 HonKAn: 예전에
20:21 HonKAn: 노트가
20:21 HonKAn: 완젼 겹쳐질땐
20:21 HonKAn: 좋았는대
20:21 HonKAn: 지금은 패치되고 나서
20:21 HonKAn: 이런건. .
20:21 HonKAn: 저는 퀄떨어진다고생각해요 .
20:22 Dailycare: 음
20:22 Dailycare: 그러면
20:22 Dailycare: 위에서 아래로 내려가는흐름 말고
20:22 Dailycare: 밑에서 위로올라가는
20:22 Dailycare: 그런건 괜찮을것같나요?
20:22 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033597
20:22 HonKAn: 이런?
20:22 Dailycare: 아
20:22 Dailycare: 아뇨
20:22 Dailycare: ㄱㄷㄱㄷ
20:23 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033601
20:23 Dailycare: 이런식으로
20:23 HonKAn: 음 .
20:24 HonKAn: 이거는
20:24 HonKAn: 차이를
20:24 HonKAn: 못느끼겟음.
20:24 HonKAn: 그냥 이대로 가죠 .
20:24 HonKAn: 지금 보니까
20:24 Dailycare: 앗
20:24 Dailycare: ㅇㅋ..
20:24 HonKAn: 이거 이맵 스타일인듯.
20:25 Dailycare: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:25 Dailycare: 스타일까진아니고 뭔가
20:25 Dailycare: 좁은 디스턴스 3연타가
20:25 Dailycare: 어울릴거같아서 여기는
20:25 HonKAn: 00:40:630 (1,2) - 굳굳
20:25 Dailycare: 헉
20:25 HonKAn: 저런게 .
20:25 HonKAn: 정말
20:25 HonKAn: 칠때
20:25 HonKAn: 부드러운 느낌이남.
20:26 Dailycare: ㄹㅇ..
20:26 HonKAn: 는 .다른 패턴도 힛트소리랑 번속 만지만
20:26 HonKAn: 강제로 부드럽게 할수있지만.
20:26 HonKAn: 기본기는 저거네요 .
20:26 HonKAn: 00:55:127 (1,2) -
20:26 HonKAn: 이거
20:26 HonKAn: 아까랑
20:26 HonKAn: 같은
20:26 HonKAn: 선상에있는대
20:26 HonKAn: 자리를
20:26 HonKAn: 이동하는것도
20:26 HonKAn: 좋을까해요 .
20:26 Dailycare: 점프 이후에
20:27 Dailycare: 흐름이 뭔가
20:27 Dailycare: 어색해져서
20:27 Dailycare: 이대로뒀는데
20:27 Dailycare: 어따가 두면 좋을까요??
20:27 HonKAn: 랄까 ..
20:27 HonKAn: 저는 이패턴
20:27 HonKAn: 안쓰니까 ..
20:27 HonKAn: 옴긴다면.
20:27 Dailycare: 흠
20:27 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033612
20:27 HonKAn: 이렇게
20:28 HonKAn: 할듯하네요 .
20:28 Dailycare: 오
20:28 Dailycare: 괜찮은듯이거
20:28 HonKAn: ㅋㅋ
20:28 HonKAn: 인정합니까 ?
20:28 HonKAn: 01:12:845 (1,2,3,4) - 이거
20:28 HonKAn: 엑스트라는
20:28 HonKAn: 어떻게 되어있는지
20:28 HonKAn: 모르겟는대
20:28 HonKAn: 엑스트라에서
20:28 HonKAn: 연타로 되어있다면
20:28 HonKAn: 지금 이것도 괜찮은대 .
20:29 HonKAn: 치기조금 그렇네요.
20:29 Dailycare: 이건
20:29 Dailycare: 솔직히
20:29 Dailycare: 치기어려운 흐름이었으면하고
20:29 Dailycare: 넣은거라
20:29 HonKAn: 치기어렵진
20:29 HonKAn: 않음.
20:29 Dailycare: 흠..
20:29 HonKAn: 치기어려운건
20:30 Dailycare: 치기 어색한?
20:30 Dailycare: 그런느낌을
20:30 Dailycare: 원했음
20:30 HonKAn: http://puu.sh/xtGbv/568b21df7e.osz
20:30 HonKAn: 이런게
20:30 HonKAn: 치기어려운거
20:31 HonKAn: 그리고
20:31 HonKAn: 저는 이 박자는 엑스트라랑 달랏음 해요 .
20:31 HonKAn: 이부분 박자는
20:31 Dailycare: ㄷㄷ
20:31 Dailycare: 어떻게다르면좋을까요??
20:32 HonKAn: 음.
20:32 HonKAn: 엑스트라는
20:32 HonKAn: 노트도
20:32 HonKAn: 작네요 .
20:32 Dailycare: 넵
20:33 HonKAn: 박자를
20:33 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033640
20:33 HonKAn: 이렇게잡는다면
20:34 Dailycare: 아이건좀
20:34 Dailycare: 너무 어려울거같은데
20:34 Dailycare: 차라리
20:34 Dailycare: 앞에는 9노트
20:34 Dailycare: 스트림으로
20:34 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033643
20:34 Dailycare: 뒤에는
20:34 Dailycare: 1/4 네개로
20:34 Dailycare: 이런거도 괜찮을거같음
20:34 HonKAn: 이런?
20:34 Dailycare: 이거
20:34 Dailycare: 솔직히
20:34 Dailycare: 이 인세인이
20:35 Dailycare: 저 정도의 노트리딩력을
20:35 Dailycare: 요구하진않앗으면하거든요
20:35 HonKAn: ㅈㅅ;;
20:35 HonKAn: 막 던지지
20:35 Dailycare: 패턴이나 리듬자체는괜ㅊ나은데
20:35 HonKAn: 않을게요 .
20:35 Dailycare: 먼가
20:35 Dailycare: 아
20:35 Dailycare: 저거
20:35 Dailycare: ㄱㅊㄱㅊ
20:35 Dailycare: 근데 저거보니까 확실히
20:35 Dailycare: 뭔가
20:35 Dailycare: 리피트슬라만쓰면
20:35 Dailycare: 단조롭구나 하고 생각되긴하네요
20:35 HonKAn: ㅇㅇ..
20:35 HonKAn: 포장하면
20:35 HonKAn: 그렇게됨.
20:35 HonKAn: 이것도
20:35 HonKAn: 되강
20:35 HonKAn: 대강찍은거라.
20:36 HonKAn: 좀더 수정하면.
20:36 HonKAn: 더 잘찍히기는 하는대 .
20:36 HonKAn: 는 다음으로 가죠 .
20:36 Dailycare: 저
20:36 Dailycare: 연타랑
20:36 Dailycare: 1/4 ㄴ네개로
20:36 Dailycare: 고칠게요
20:36 HonKAn: 넹.
20:36 HonKAn: 너무 ,저의말만 ..
20:36 HonKAn: 듣고 고치시는건?
20:37 HonKAn: 저가 말하는게 답은 ..아닌 지라 ..
20:37 Dailycare: ㄴㄴ그냥
20:37 Dailycare: 지금거
20:37 Dailycare: 좀
20:37 Dailycare: 단조로워보여서 ㅋㅋ
20:37 HonKAn: ㅋㅋ
20:37 HonKAn: 01:24:120 (1,2,3) -
20:37 HonKAn: 이거
20:37 HonKAn: 다음에 나오는
20:37 HonKAn: 패턴보다
20:37 HonKAn: 2로 넘어가는
20:37 HonKAn: 거리가김.
20:38 Dailycare: 너무 긴가요??
20:38 Dailycare: 의도한거긴한데
20:38 HonKAn: 너무는
20:38 HonKAn: 아닌대.
20:38 Dailycare: 느린파트에선
20:38 HonKAn: 그냥
20:38 HonKAn: 보기에
20:38 HonKAn: 길어보인다
20:38 HonKAn: 라는.
20:38 Dailycare: 아
20:38 HonKAn: 아마
20:38 Dailycare: ㅇㅋ먼느낌인지알겟슴
20:38 HonKAn: 논모드에서
20:38 HonKAn: 는
20:38 HonKAn: 모를지도모르는대
20:38 HonKAn: 더타나
20:39 HonKAn: 하락걸면
20:39 HonKAn: 차이날듯
20:39 HonKAn: 01:36:603 (1) - 이거
20:39 HonKAn: 밋밋함.
20:39 HonKAn: 01:40:630 (2,3) - 굳굳.
20:40 Dailycare: 음
20:40 HonKAn: 01:36:200 (5) - 인세인이라 이부분 뺀듯..
20:40 Dailycare: 01:36:603 (1) -
20:40 Dailycare: 여긴
20:40 Dailycare: 어떻게해야할까요
20:40 Dailycare: 모양
20:40 HonKAn: 저라면
20:40 HonKAn: 이위치에
20:40 HonKAn: 안두고
20:40 HonKAn: 중간으로
20:40 HonKAn: 옴길듯
20:40 Dailycare: 위치는그대로두고
20:40 Dailycare: 모양만좀 손보고싶은데
20:40 Dailycare: 아이디어가 마땅히 안떠오르네요..
20:42 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033672
20:42 HonKAn: 이런?
20:42 Dailycare: 8아
20:42 Dailycare: ㄱㄷㄱㄷ
20:42 HonKAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9033674이런거라던지 ?
20:42 Dailycare: 저
20:42 Dailycare: ㅇㅋ
20:43 HonKAn: 근대
20:43 HonKAn: 저거만
20:43 HonKAn: 그대로 가져다쓰면
20:43 HonKAn: 다른거랑
20:43 HonKAn: 스타일
20:43 HonKAn: 확차이나는건
20:43 HonKAn: 아시죠 ?
20:43 HonKAn: 저거쓸꺼면
20:43 HonKAn: 전채적으로
20:43 HonKAn: 만져야함.
20:43 Dailycare: 이 부분만
20:43 Dailycare: 저거써도
20:43 Dailycare: 괜찮을거같아요
20:43 HonKAn: ㅇㅋ
20:44 HonKAn: 는
20:44 HonKAn: 저는 ..
20:44 HonKAn: 이정도인거같아요 .
ailv
<3
Exclusives
Good luck.

Notes
- Patterns seem a tad odd. (Don't really worry about it.)

- Circles/Sliders constantly going out of 4:3 main frame. http://prntscr.com/ifsgc7

- (Easy) Out of frame. http://prntscr.com/ifsh0n

- (Easy) Out of frame. http://prntscr.com/ifshfj

I generally think I could do that forever, just move it in, it'll overall be a better map.

Good job with your four difficulties hope you get ranked. ;-)
Satellite
waiting hard


a......................... T T
Topic Starter
Dailycare
hard to wait hard ww
Hey lululu
your mom said hey you should M4M with me

Easy
00:29:355 - there need a note here emphasising the heavy sound
01:22:509 - break time move to here?

Normal
00:20:496 (2) - reverse too much,you can change to two 1/2 slider
01:03:180 (4) - new combo color start here 01:03:180 (4) - not 01:03:583 (1) -
01:12:039 (3) - reverse too much
01:22:509 - break time move to here?
01:48:281 (1) - reverse too much

Insane
00:23:315 (3) - little out of screen or my screen too small
01:35:395 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make this symmetry

Blurred
00:26:737 (3,1,2,3) - I think rythem can be this,heavy sound on 00:27:039 (2) - &00:27:140 (3) - and no sound on 00:26:939 (1) -
00:28:348 (3,1,2,3) - ^
00:36:603 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:39:825 (4,1) - why different,same as piano sound
00:46:670 (3,4,1) - I think stream would be better

man u gud
Sonnyc
easy
01:34:791 (2) - song weak, rhythm here strange
01:41:838 (7,8) - only 1/2, looks too hard compared to song

hard.
00:18:482 (2,3) - i think rhythm is a bit off with the song since previous rhythms were following the vocals.

blur.
00:26:939 (1) - 00:28:550 (1) - because (2) more stronger, (1) being circle feels little awkward in emphasis
01:36:200 (1,1,1,1) - weak sound huge spacing look off with song
Eir_DELETED
ye


Easy

  1. 00:28:952 - u likely forget to add Addctions:Soft on the slider end cuz of consistency with 00:27:341 -
  2. 00:43:046 (1) - oh what? why did u add nc here?

Normal

  1. 00:20:496 (2) - i wanna suggest you would avoid the multiple reverse slider in normal since it's kinda hard for players who are like newbie to read it correctly on 1/2 sliders in my thought. can you replace to 2 1/2 sliders instead??? same mention as others multiple reverse sliders on 1/2 ones.
  2. 00:27:140 (2) - hmm i suppose u would make more sense to beat 00:27:341 - some kind of objects.
  3. 00:39:825 - remove sampleset: soft? it's kinda weird in your hitsound pattern as i could hear.

Satellite's Hard

  1. 00:22:106 (1) - ここにNCいらないような気がします。ほかの同じような1/4リバーススライダーでこのようにNCはいってるパターンは見受けられなかったのでのけてみてはいかがでしょう?
  2. 01:03:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - これは完全に僕の好みなんですが、先に5連打をもってきてそのあとにリバーススライダーを持ってくるほうがplayableという面では、Hardをプレイするようなプレイヤーにとっては優しいかもしれません。おそらくサテライトさんはこの中の01:03:986 - ~ 01:04:388 - までが特徴的に音が大きくなっているのでこっちをclickableにさせたいんだろうなとは思いましたが、僕はHardという難易度においてはそれよりもplayableを優先させたほうがいいかぁ、なんて勝手に思っただけなので、一向に無視していただいてもかまいません!
  3. 01:54:825 (1) - えっと、このスピナーはボーカルの伸びを表現しているように思えたのでそれであれば、スピナーの終点をmuteさせるほうがより曲に合うんじゃないかなぁと勝手に思いました!

Insane


  • 01:55:731 (1) -

gonna continue after i have a lunch
milr_
osu! needs more &$#*@
Topic Starter
Dailycare
osu! needs more mappers who are saying osu! needs more &$#*@
YooA
I LOVE YOU
Beomsan

LOLI JOA wrote:

I LOVE YOU

[General]
  1. the gap between normal and hard is quite large imo, I think it would be nice if there is a map to complement it.
[Easy]
  1. 00:29:355 - 노트 하나 두는거도 썩 나쁘지 않게 보이는데, 비워도 무방하긴함
  2. 01:37:006 (1) - 힛사 ㅇㄷ
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:825 - 뭔진 몰라도 힛사 하나 빠진거같음
  2. 01:37:006 (1) - 힛사 ㅇㄷ(2)
[Satellite]
  1. n0thing
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:355 (1) - ds좀 작은거아닌가 00:28:147 (2,3) - 이런거랑 비교해서
  2. 00:33:382 (3,4,5,1,2) - 동선이 좀 애매해보이는데 https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/B9r7B39.jpg 이런식으로 해서 뒤에 슬라도 좀 만져보고 하는게 어떨지
  3. 01:37:006 (1) - 님 혹시 힛사 복붙충? ㄷㄷ
[Blurred]
sugo
C O I N

Blurred

  1. 00:34:992 (1) - 00:41:435 (1) - NC ㄱ? 이 두 부분 외에는 그닥 뉴콤 주기가 긴것같진않아서요

  2. 01:56:335 (1) - 스핀 추가 ㄲ?



Insane

  1. 01:11:637 (2) - 노트 하나 추가 ㄱ? 이거 소리 좀 큰듯
Topic Starter
Dailycare

Hey lululu wrote:

Normal
01:48:281 (1) - reverse too much // it's same as 01:09:623 (1) - so i want to keep it

Blurred
00:36:603 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:39:825 (4,1) - why different,same as piano sound // cuz 00:36:603 (3,4,5,6) - has 1/6 sounds
00:46:670 (3,4,1) - I think stream would be better // i guess jumps would be better for consistency.

Sonnyc wrote:

blur.
01:36:200 (1,1,1,1) - weak sound huge spacing look off with song // 피아노 소리?에 중점을 두고 노트 놓아보았습니다

joker- wrote:

Normal

  1. 00:27:140 (2) - hmm i suppose u would make more sense to beat 00:27:341 - some kind of objects. // it seems fine cuz the rhythm is simplified as starting at 00:27:140 - .
fixed everything other than what i mentioned. thanks for mods~~
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