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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, October 24, 2017 at 11:36:38 PM

Artist: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
Title: Sendan Life
Source: ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags: vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World xLolicore- Rumia-
BPM: 227
Filesize: 3064kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Affection (5.97 stars, 358 notes)
  2. Easy (1.81 stars, 122 notes)
  3. Hard (3.23 stars, 268 notes)
  4. Loli's Extra (5.28 stars, 332 notes)
  5. Normal (2.37 stars, 188 notes)
  6. Rumi's Insane (4.44 stars, 278 notes)


Download: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Done.

Affection: Me
Extra: xLolicore-
Insane: Rumi-chan
Hard, Normal, Easy: Me
posted
fuck yea a tv size gd im actually proud of LUL
posted
hello! from your queue here
sorry the pics are huge bc my monitor is huge

[Affection]
00:07:324 (1,1) - consider doing this differently as the sound the repeat slider is mapping extends into the red tick. maybe have the repeat slider do the same?

00:11:288 (3,4,5) - im thinking that a jump like this might better reflect the music and be a lil more interesting.



00:11:421 (4) - is blanketed with 00:11:686 (1)
00:11:553 (5) - is stacked with 00:10:760 (1)

00:20:012 (7,8) - move (7) 1 pixel down to be on the same y as (8), or move (8) 1 pixel up

00:20:144 (8,1) - also here, since (1) is 71 pixels above (8) a better structured jump might have (9) being 71 pixels below (8), so move 00:20:276 (9) - 71 pixels down

then to solve the overlap with this 00:19:747 (4,5,6) - you could move the triple to x:310 to be on the same x as 00:19:615 (3)

the jump pattern you get from this whole process ends up looking a whole lot cleaner:



00:22:655 (2,5,6) - consider moving (6) and aligning (2), (5), and (6) in a straight line. might be a better pattern



00:28:470 (5,6) - it may play better if you make a bigger jump between (5) and (6) here

00:34:945 (5,1,2,3) - for better vocal emphasis maybe move the triple farther and make it a bigger jump?

00:44:725 (4) - consider adding whistle here maybe.. I think it sounds really good with the section

01:01:377 (5) - would maybe move somewhere to the left for a better angle into 01:01:509 (1) -


01:10:100 (1,2,3) - this sudden killing of all the tensity is too much I think, instead of doing this you could just start decreasing the distance snap between the jumps. I think (2) should definitely not be so close to (1) or (3) though.

01:19:351 (8,9) - ctrl g for better flow imo

01:18:426 (1,2) - structure of this is much different from this 00:19:219 (1,2) - but they appear to be similar in rhythm. i think it would be worth looking back and copying (1,2) from this mark

01:19:483 (9,1) - look at what i said in loli's mod, im not sure if this is a big deal or not, you definitely did make spacing decrease here

[Loli's]

00:21:862 (2) - this slider could look cleaner, not sure if you were going for this look or not. maybe copy paste and rotate this? 00:25:694 (1) -
it seems like you reuse this slider more.. etc etc 00:32:038 (1) -
im assuming you didnt intend for the slider to look like that since you use a differently structured slider throughout the map instead

00:28:338 (3,4) - this kind of pattern is not seen anywhere else in the map, which leads me to say it is not structured, maybe try something else like stacking (3) and (4)? you do a lot of stacks throughout the map

00:36:796 (1,1,2,3) - what is the concept behind these NCs?

01:09:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - this jump doesnt really look as clean as your others, i'd advise going back and fixing this. perhaps something involving stacking 01:09:835 (3) - with 01:10:100 (1) - this sliderend?

01:19:615 (1) - actually, im now realizing this for the affection diff, but 01:19:483 (9) - is so much stronger than 01:19:615 (1) - therefore I think they should stack or the spacing should severely decrease between them

[Rumi's]

00:12:743 (5,6) - why is spacing here so strong but by here 00:15:650 (3,4,5) - its low DS linear jumps

00:19:879 (3,4,5,6) - same deal here. these should be larger jumps if you have notes 00:12:743 (5,6) - this spaced this early on

I recommend going back and fixing 00:12:743 (5,6) - and 00:13:536 (3,4) - and 00:14:593 (3,4,5) - to fit with the linear structuring you start doing later

00:21:069 (2,3) - i dont really like this pause, maybe stack (3) with 00:21:465 (1) - ???

00:46:575 (4,5) - stacked... 00:48:690 (4,5) - not stacked... whats the difference in rhythm that makes you driven to do this?

00:56:091 (5,1) - maybe partially stack this? it is so hard to see the reverse slider haha it killed me bruv, altho that just could be my horrible skin

01:09:042 (1,2,3) - pls dont make these start on the red ticks the claps on sliderends are noticeable here since the rhythm changes

[Hard]

00:51:069 (1) - maybe turn this into a slider without repeat and put a note 00:51:333 - here... could stack it with 00:51:465 (5) -

other than that this diff looks pretty brilliantly put together

[Normal]

00:19:615 (5,6,7,1) - would this maybe sound better mapped as reverse sliders to cover the 1/2 sounds?

[Easy]

got nothin for ya

nice set dude, hope this helps u. if anything was confusing about my explanation, let me know and ill elaborate
posted
easy

00:10:760 (2) - I think this would be way cooler as a repeat like 00:08:646 (2) - even if you end up skipping that one beat.
00:37:324 (1) - 00:39:439 (1) - 00:41:553 (1) - are these legal? if so can you make the tick land on the point of the bump thing (increase tick rate temporarily if need be :eyes: )
00:43:668 (1) - why no bumpy like before ;w;
would also be cool if you had lower nc frequency overall minus kiai stuffs

normal

00:11:950 - 01:11:157 - boring. I think you could add something to it.
00:45:254 (5) - I would be careful with this because the reverse looks like something a newbie would click since its the "next object thing"

hard/insane

1/4 spread stuff. 00:53:712 -
posted

Gus wrote:

hello! from your queue here
sorry the pics are huge bc my monitor is huge

[Affection]
00:07:324 (1,1) - consider doing this differently as the sound the repeat slider is mapping extends into the red tick. maybe have the repeat slider do the same? - it doesn't to me im just trying to get the 1/8 sound so this works fine imo

00:11:288 (3,4,5) - im thinking that a jump like this might better reflect the music and be a lil more interesting.



00:11:421 (4) - is blanketed with 00:11:686 (1)
00:11:553 (5) - is stacked with 00:10:760 (1)

00:20:012 (7,8) - move (7) 1 pixel down to be on the same y as (8), or move (8) 1 pixel up

00:20:144 (8,1) - also here, since (1) is 71 pixels above (8) a better structured jump might have (9) being 71 pixels below (8), so move 00:20:276 (9) - 71 pixels down

then to solve the overlap with this 00:19:747 (4,5,6) - you could move the triple to x:310 to be on the same x as 00:19:615 (3)

the jump pattern you get from this whole process ends up looking a whole lot cleaner:



00:22:655 (2,5,6) - consider moving (6) and aligning (2), (5), and (6) in a straight line. might be a better pattern - makes a wide angle and i dont want that



00:28:470 (5,6) - it may play better if you make a bigger jump between (5) and (6) here

00:34:945 (5,1,2,3) - for better vocal emphasis maybe move the triple farther and make it a bigger jump? - triple has enough emphasis as a triple so increasing distance is unnecessary imo

00:44:725 (4) - consider adding whistle here maybe.. I think it sounds really good with the section - mm i'd rather not

01:01:377 (5) - would maybe move somewhere to the left for a better angle into 01:01:509 (1) -


01:10:100 (1,2,3) - this sudden killing of all the tensity is too much I think, instead of doing this you could just start decreasing the distance snap between the jumps. I think (2) should definitely not be so close to (1) or (3) though.

01:19:351 (8,9) - ctrl g for better flow imo

01:18:426 (1,2) - structure of this is much different from this 00:19:219 (1,2) - but they appear to be similar in rhythm. i think it would be worth looking back and copying (1,2) from this mark

01:19:483 (9,1) - look at what i said in loli's mod, im not sure if this is a big deal or not, you definitely did make spacing decrease here - kinda intended for 1 to be less strong since it's weaker to me in the song than 8,9

[Hard]

00:51:069 (1) - maybe turn this into a slider without repeat and put a note 00:51:333 - here... could stack it with 00:51:465 (5) -

other than that this diff looks pretty brilliantly put together

[Normal]

00:19:615 (5,6,7,1) - would this maybe sound better mapped as reverse sliders to cover the 1/2 sounds? - would rather have more tapping than holding here

[Easy]

got nothin for ya

nice set dude, hope this helps u. if anything was confusing about my explanation, let me know and ill elaborate
Thanks!!

_83 wrote:

easy

00:10:760 (2) - I think this would be way cooler as a repeat like 00:08:646 (2) - even if you end up skipping that one beat. - would rather not since it's more a transition into the next part so hitting that note is kinda more important to me
00:37:324 (1) - 00:39:439 (1) - 00:41:553 (1) - are these legal? if so can you make the tick land on the point of the bump thing (increase tick rate temporarily if need be :eyes: ) - they already bump on the snare
00:43:668 (1) - why no bumpy like before ;w; - cuz rhythm after changes
would also be cool if you had lower nc frequency overall minus kiai stuffs - it's already 2 downbeats so i think fine

normal

00:11:950 - 01:11:157 - boring. I think you could add something to it. - dunno what, i think it's fine cuz song is super repetitive here
00:45:254 (5) - I would be careful with this because the reverse looks like something a newbie would click since its the "next object thing"

hard/insane

1/4 spread stuff. 00:53:712 - i dont get it
Thanks!!
posted

Mir wrote:

_83 wrote:

1/4 spread stuff. 00:53:712 - i dont get it
cuz in the hard there is almost no 1/4 and in the insane 1/4 is super hard stuff timestamp relevant
posted

_83 wrote:

cuz in the hard there is almost no 1/4 and in the insane 1/4 is super hard stuff timestamp relevant
wakarimashita i changed
posted
wow suddenly M4M XD

I just plan to go to JP tomorrow , seems I need to mod today :O
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:694 (3,4) - I think you can set the rhythm like 00:32:038 (3,4) - it's more stable and kind to easy player imo
  2. 00:37:324 (1) - red anchor can increase some spacing , will be better look like 00:39:439 - and 00:41:553 (1) -


[Normal]
  1. 01:18:690 (4,5,6,7,1) - too many overlapping and 1/2 slider this part , I feel a little bit hard for normal :/


[Hard]
  1. 00:45:254 (6,7,8,1) - 4 overlapping note here seems a litle bit board and tired , maybe take 2 note out? something like


[Rumi's Insane]
  1. 00:12:743 (5,6,1) - why not just make these spacing average like other part did :/ ?
  2. 00:59:932 (2) - hum , I think slider with straight and angle like 00:59:527 (1) - will be better in this part , symmetry with slider around


[Affection]
  1. 00:16:708 (3,4) - it can be better overlapping with 00:15:915 -'s slider head , you set the notes perfect overlapping most I guess
  2. 00:23:580 (1) - horizontal with 00:23:976 (3) - is neat enough I think.
  3. 00:33:888 (6) - two 1/2 note will be more fit imo , the durm sound is clear here
    just like you do at 00:28:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:24:637 (3,4,5,6,7) -
    they are similar part and can be symmetry I think.
  4. 00:44:857 (5) - consider setting a 1/2 slider here ?
yaaay , so nice map

Thanks for M4M and Good luck ~ :)
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Hiiiii m5m!!

Easy
  1. Not a big problem imo, but you can delete unnecesary inherited timing points.
  2. It's good. :o
Nornal
  1. Again the unnecesary green lines. :P
  2. 00:20:408 (1) - Place this circle out from the circular flow to emphasize it. https://puu.sh/xj9Zs/cac430c934.png
  3. 00:25:166 (2,3) - This blanket not perfect.
Rumi
  1. 00:09:835 (1,3) - I think you should move them further from each other.
  2. Just realized that every diff has the same unherited timing points, keep them if u want i guess..
  3. 01:19:615 (6) - You can end it with a NC.
Affection
  1. 00:15:915 (5,3,4) - Stack?
  2. 00:17:236 (1,2) - Blanket not perfect.
  3. 00:22:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern slightly off.
  4. 01:14:064 (5,1) - Fix blanket.
  5. 01:14:329 (1,3,4) - Stack?
  6. 01:15:386 (1,3,4) - ^


This set is so good. :3 Good luck!
posted

Gus wrote:

[Loli's]

00:21:862 (2) - this slider could look cleaner, not sure if you were going for this look or not. maybe copy paste and rotate this? 00:25:694 (1) -
it seems like you reuse this slider more.. etc etc 00:32:038 (1) -
im assuming you didnt intend for the slider to look like that since you use a differently structured slider throughout the map instead Looking at it again, it does feel out of place - changed the slider

00:28:338 (3,4) - this kind of pattern is not seen anywhere else in the map, which leads me to say it is not structured, maybe try something else like stacking (3) and (4)? you do a lot of stacks throughout the map did the stack

00:36:796 (1,1,2,3) - what is the concept behind these NCs? oh wow I thought I nc'd each individual note, fixed the NCs

01:09:571 (1,2,3,4,1) - this jump doesnt really look as clean as your others, i'd advise going back and fixing this. perhaps something involving stacking 01:09:835 (3) - with 01:10:100 (1) - this sliderend? No change to that one as it would have to make me change a lot of objects' placements to make that jump work, might need some suggestions on this

01:19:615 (1) - actually, im now realizing this for the affection diff, but 01:19:483 (9) - is so much stronger than 01:19:615 (1) - therefore I think they should stack or the spacing should severely decrease between them Fixed
thanks for the mod ^^

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osu file format v14

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Title:Sendan Life
TitleUnicode:センダンライフ
Artist:Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
ArtistUnicode:リモ Prototype[CV:花守ゆみり]
Creator:Mir
Version:Loli's Extra
Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags:vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World
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posted

Xinchii wrote:

wow suddenly M4M XD

I just plan to go to JP tomorrow , seems I need to mod today :O
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:694 (3,4) - I think you can set the rhythm like 00:32:038 (3,4) - it's more stable and kind to easy player imo
  2. 00:37:324 (1) - red anchor can increase some spacing , will be better look like 00:39:439 - and 00:41:553 (1) - i find this one fine imo


[Normal]
  1. 01:18:690 (4,5,6,7,1) - too many overlapping and 1/2 slider this part , I feel a little bit hard for normal :/ - hmm we'll see, I'll keep this in mind


[Hard]
  1. 00:45:254 (6,7,8,1) - 4 overlapping note here seems a litle bit board and tired , maybe take 2 note out? something like


[Rumi's Insane]
  1. 00:12:743 (5,6,1) - why not just make these spacing average like other part did :/ ?
  2. 00:59:932 (2) - hum , I think slider with straight and angle like 00:59:527 (1) - will be better in this part , symmetry with slider around


[Affection]
  1. 00:16:708 (3,4) - it can be better overlapping with 00:15:915 -'s slider head , you set the notes perfect overlapping most I guess - mhm, they're done like this on purpose
  2. 00:23:580 (1) - horizontal with 00:23:976 (3) - is neat enough I think. - I don't think it's really necessary to change that much
  3. 00:33:888 (6) - two 1/2 note will be more fit imo , the durm sound is clear here - slider for vocals here
    just like you do at 00:28:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:24:637 (3,4,5,6,7) -
    they are similar part and can be symmetry I think.
  4. 00:44:857 (5) - consider setting a 1/2 slider here ? - hmm i think this is okay as it is
yaaay , so nice map

Thanks for M4M and Good luck ~ :)

Lorkee wrote:

Hiiiii m5m!!

Easy
  1. Not a big problem imo, but you can delete unnecesary inherited timing points. - it's no biggie :3c
  2. It's good. :o
Nornal
  1. Again the unnecesary green lines. :P
  2. 00:20:408 (1) - Place this circle out from the circular flow to emphasize it. https://puu.sh/xj9Zs/cac430c934.png - did something slightly different
  3. 00:25:166 (2,3) - This blanket not perfect.
Rumi
  1. 00:09:835 (1,3) - I think you should move them further from each other.
  2. Just realized that every diff has the same unherited timing points, keep them if u want i guess..
  3. 01:19:615 (6) - You can end it with a NC.
Affection
  1. 00:15:915 (5,3,4) - Stack?
  2. 00:17:236 (1,2) - Blanket not perfect.
  3. 00:22:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern slightly off.
  4. 01:14:064 (5,1) - Fix blanket.
  5. 01:14:329 (1,3,4) - Stack?
  6. 01:15:386 (1,3,4) - ^

^ custom stacks and the blankets are fine for the most part so didn't really apply anything here :?

This set is so good. :3 Good luck!
Thanks you both!!
posted
add gders to tags

nice hitsounds

Affection
00:11:686 (1) - how about using a buzz slider instead, would fit better
overall map is ok but some patterns tilt me a lot because you basically give up flow and focus on aesthetics instead so most parts look so strange, example like 00:26:355 (4,1) - usually sliders are easier to catch so mappers don't use such small spacings between sliders but you just did it here because of the blanket
00:28:470 (5,6) - you should emphasize (6) like you did on (4) but you want to stack 00:27:941 (2,5) - this ;;
00:38:514 (4,5) - this is a really weird slider flow, just move your cursor and follow the 2 sliders you'll know how strange it is
00:49:615 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/xjj3z/28edbffbde.png the circle flow is not comfortable at all just care more about the actual flow, suggestion: http://puu.sh/xjj5M/dab2984a19.jpg

some other stuff
00:51:730 (4) - sounds like 2 circles for the vocals here
00:53:051 (1,2) - usually it's fine but all other stacks like this are 3/4 sliders so it's confusing
01:02:434 (6,7) - 1/2 slider instead? a new part of lyrics here

there are still some detailed problems like 01:04:152 (3,1,2) - 01:08:514 (3,4,1) - turn on stacking and go through the map again

Loli's Extra
00:11:686 (1) - same with the top diff
00:11:421 (4) - circles would be better due to the sound on the red tick
00:17:501 (2,3) - like why do you not use slider anymore so inconsistent
00:21:862 (1) - why nc
00:28:470 (4,5) - 00:28:866 (1) - can you enlarge spacing i don't get why 00:28:073 (2,3) - this could be harder than this
01:10:364 - hitsound?

Rumi's Insane
sl2 isn't so necessary in an insane diff
00:16:443 (2,4) - aesthetics zz the visual spacing is too bad
00:56:091 (5,1) - i don't think it's acceptable

Hard
00:20:144 (4) - move this to right a bit so it doesn't blanket with 00:19:879 (3) - and looks consistent with 00:19:615 (2,3) - this
00:24:373 (1) - 00:24:901 (2) - swap nc?
00:45:386 (7,8) - how about stacking them for emphasizing 00:45:650 (1) - this beat
00:52:390 (2,3) - same with the first point

lower diff are fine, but i suggest to hitsound some slider ticks since you ignored a lot of claps :s

good luck
posted

Karen wrote:

add gders to tags

nice hitsounds

Affection
00:11:686 (1) - how about using a buzz slider instead, would fit better
overall map is ok but some patterns tilt me a lot because you basically give up flow and focus on aesthetics instead so most parts look so strange, example like 00:26:355 (4,1) - usually sliders are easier to catch so mappers don't use such small spacings between sliders but you just did it here because of the blanket
00:28:470 (5,6) - you should emphasize (6) like you did on (4) but you want to stack 00:27:941 (2,5) - this ;;
00:38:514 (4,5) - this is a really weird slider flow, just move your cursor and follow the 2 sliders you'll know how strange it is
00:49:615 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/xjj3z/28edbffbde.png the circle flow is not comfortable at all just care more about the actual flow, suggestion: http://puu.sh/xjj5M/dab2984a19.jpg

some other stuff
00:51:730 (4) - sounds like 2 circles for the vocals here - hmm i'm not hearing it so i'll keep it as a slider
00:53:051 (1,2) - usually it's fine but all other stacks like this are 3/4 sliders so it's confusing - woops made it 3/4 x.x
01:02:434 (6,7) - 1/2 slider instead? a new part of lyrics here - drums are still going so it'd be weird if i stopped mapping them as 1/2 imo

there are still some detailed problems like 01:04:152 (3,1,2) - 01:08:514 (3,4,1) - turn on stacking and go through the map again - mapped it with stacking on so i should have seen those.. well I fixed it anyways xd

Hard
00:20:144 (4) - move this to right a bit so it doesn't blanket with 00:19:879 (3) - and looks consistent with 00:19:615 (2,3) - this
00:24:373 (1) - 00:24:901 (2) - swap nc?
00:45:386 (7,8) - how about stacking them for emphasizing 00:45:650 (1) - this beat
00:52:390 (2,3) - same with the first point

lower diff are fine, but i suggest to hitsound some slider ticks since you ignored a lot of claps :s - i really don't like slider-tick hitsounds because they make slider tails have less feedback, i think it's fine if i ignored the snares as long as it's consistent and the vocals are quite noticeable and rhythmic too

good luck
Thanks Karen!!

@Lolicore + Rumi-chan, please update before applying!!
posted

Karen wrote:

Loli's Extra
00:11:686 (1) - same with the top diff changed
00:11:421 (4) - circles would be better due to the sound on the red tick changed
00:17:501 (2,3) - like why do you not use slider anymore so inconsistent just wanted that part to be different before the end of that section but alright, changed
00:21:862 (1) - why nc whoops
00:28:470 (4,5) - 00:28:866 (1) - can you enlarge spacing i don't get why 00:28:073 (2,3) - this could be harder than this oh true lo
01:10:364 - hitsound? fixed
ty for mod xd

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posted
@Lolicore + Rumi-chan, please update before applying!! did!!
fixed all lurkee's n karen's mod
@gus fixed earlier spacing and unstacked the slider reverse , other stacks that was pointed out are either contradicted idea between my understandings of vocal or i just dont see it as a problem , i stacked them due to same level of pitch and it doesnt really confuse me or testplayers that tested this.

thanks for mods!!

uwu
osu file format v14

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Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags:vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World xLolicore- Rumia-
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61,305,34549,2,0,P|139:310|233:337,1,160,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
302,269,34945,2,0,P|292:219|296:178,1,80,10|2,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
350,70,35210,5,0,0:2:0:0:
350,70,35474,2,0,P|406:80|468:69,1,120,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
493,61,35738,1,2,0:2:0:0:
457,160,35871,2,0,P|445:209|448:262,1,80,2|8,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
469,347,36135,5,2,3:2:0:0:
469,347,36399,1,2,0:2:0:0:
375,323,36531,1,0,0:2:0:0:
399,231,36663,1,2,0:2:0:0:
492,253,36796,2,0,L|501:158,1,80,10|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
269,339,37060,2,0,L|253:246,1,80,10|10,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
137,95,37324,6,0,P|182:134|213:177,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
347,235,37721,2,0,P|290:254|237:259,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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395,145,39439,6,0,P|442:147|489:137,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
395,145,39835,1,10,0:2:0:0:
392,300,40232,2,0,P|341:293|279:309,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,29,41553,6,0,L|219:140,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
300,231,41950,1,10,0:2:0:0:
300,231,42082,2,0,P|350:228|407:210,1,95.9999970703126,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
271,328,42611,2,0,P|224:315|176:312,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,248,43007,1,10,0:2:0:0:
50,248,43139,2,0,P|101:234|137:205,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
203,49,43668,5,2,3:2:0:0:
203,49,43932,2,0,L|268:56,1,47.9999985351563,0|10,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
341,65,44197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,195,44461,1,2,3:2:0:0:
412,201,44725,5,0,0:2:0:0:
317,195,44857,2,0,L|426:202,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,195,45254,2,0,L|328:135,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
337,57,45518,1,8,0:2:0:0:
122,40,45650,6,0,L|138:207,1,160,6|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
108,299,46047,2,0,P|63:299|19:284,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
137,199,46311,2,0,P|199:199|232:210,1,80,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
303,297,46575,1,10,0:2:0:0:
303,297,46708,1,0,0:2:0:0:
356,380,46840,6,0,P|391:338|367:230,1,160,2|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
295,198,47236,2,0,L|215:204,1,80,0|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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152,136,47765,6,0,P|123:208|156:278,1,160,6|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
255,346,48161,2,0,P|264:299|262:259,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
259,140,48426,2,0,P|316:151|350:150,1,80,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
429,166,48690,1,10,0:2:0:0:
363,38,48822,1,0,3:2:0:0:
358,242,48954,6,0,P|429:267|514:233,1,160,6|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
358,242,49351,2,0,L|268:247,1,80,0|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
216,66,49615,2,0,L|210:148,1,80,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
159,315,49879,6,0,P|105:328|17:246,1,160,6|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
79,154,50276,1,10,0:2:0:0:
190,232,50408,1,0,0:2:0:0:
284,138,50540,2,0,L|272:47,1,80,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
421,66,50804,2,0,L|410:145,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
288,238,51069,6,0,P|354:217|455:257,1,160,2|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
346,345,51465,2,0,L|251:335,1,80,0|2,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
190,252,51730,2,0,L|197:164,1,80,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
210,66,51994,1,0,3:2:0:0:
210,66,52126,6,0,L|317:75,1,80,14|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
355,273,52390,2,0,L|275:266,1,80,10|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
429,185,52655,2,0,L|429:105,2,80,8|0|8,0:2|3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
185,312,53051,2,0,P|183:243|268:165,1,160,4|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
185,312,53448,2,0,L|103:306,1,80,8|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
16,172,53712,1,8,0:2:0:0:
54,179,53778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,168,53844,1,8,0:2:0:0:
123,142,53910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,105,53976,2,0,L|136:39,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,89,54108,2,0,L|247:141,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,257,54241,6,0,P|297:242|386:295,1,143.999995605469,6|4,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
383,293,54505,2,0,L|381:197,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
491,120,54769,2,0,L|474:318,1,191.999994140625,2|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
240,129,55166,6,0,P|291:127|351:116,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
240,129,55430,2,0,P|192:121|144:119,1,95.9999970703126,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
255,31,55694,1,2,0:2:0:0:
240,129,55826,2,0,P|236:190|236:243,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
383,312,56091,2,0,P|382:264|378:216,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
184,340,56355,6,0,L|380:325,2,191.999994140625,2|10|2,3:2|0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
63,310,57016,1,0,3:2:0:0:
63,310,57148,1,10,0:2:0:0:
72,193,57280,6,0,L|77:98,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,16,57545,2,0,L|237:111,1,95.9999970703126,2|8,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,196,57809,1,2,0:2:0:0:
416,188,57941,2,0,P|446:154|468:92,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
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304,277,58734,2,0,L|199:267,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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138,197,59263,2,0,L|36:189,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,267,59527,6,0,B|229:214|229:214|217:136|217:136|238:80,1,191.999994140625,2|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
492,140,59923,2,0,B|449:158|394:121|394:121|342:121|298:146,1,191.999994140625,0|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
151,54,60320,2,0,L|256:45,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,157,60584,5,2,3:2:0:0:
176,157,60849,2,0,L|195:353,1,191.999994140625,10|2,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
297,333,61245,2,0,L|302:228,1,95.9999970703126,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
434,182,61509,6,0,P|372:112|277:138,1,191.999994140625,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,261,61906,2,0,P|465:269|500:252,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
284,130,62170,2,0,L|187:125,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
168,305,62434,1,10,0:2:0:0:
168,305,62699,6,0,L|263:309,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,230,62963,1,10,0:2:0:0:
284,130,63095,1,0,0:2:0:0:
364,38,63227,2,0,L|361:238,1,191.999994140625,2|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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256,44,63888,2,0,P|212:72|191:124,1,95.9999970703126,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
173,275,64152,1,2,0:2:0:0:
173,275,64285,2,0,L|283:269,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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297,353,66267,1,2,0:2:0:0:
297,353,66399,2,0,L|282:253,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
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421,289,67324,2,0,L|318:269,1,95.9999970703126,0|2,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
242,194,67589,1,0,3:2:0:0:
242,194,67721,2,0,L|345:174,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
150,104,67985,6,0,P|126:169|159:297,2,191.999994140625,2|10|2,3:2|0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,68646,1,0,3:2:0:0:
248,60,68778,2,0,L|371:57,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
432,208,69042,6,0,L|229:192,1,191.999994140625,6|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
424,21,69439,2,0,P|430:73|417:124,1,95.9999970703126,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
241,193,69703,2,0,P|235:245|248:296,1,95.9999970703126,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
417,354,69967,1,0,3:2:0:0:
417,354,70100,6,0,L|283:344,1,95.9999970703126,10|2,0:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
145,200,70364,2,0,L|279:190,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
330,246,70628,1,10,0:2:0:0:
348,62,70760,2,0,L|361:157,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
477,196,71025,1,8,0:2:0:0:
356,329,71157,6,0,P|317:332|279:321,1,80,4|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,166,71421,2,0,P|322:154|361:157,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
477,196,71686,1,0,3:2:0:0:
474,93,71818,1,0,3:2:0:0:
477,196,71950,2,0,L|462:286,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,166,72214,6,0,L|297:87,1,80,0|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
110,192,72478,2,0,L|202:209,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
53,110,72743,1,0,3:2:0:0:
26,230,72875,1,0,3:2:0:0:
107,323,73007,2,0,L|191:308,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,166,73271,6,0,L|274:260,1,80,0|0,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
489,167,73536,2,0,L|481:77,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
395,34,73800,1,0,3:2:0:0:
386,171,73932,1,0,3:2:0:0:
378,308,74064,2,0,P|437:306|468:288,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
386,171,74329,6,0,L|219:177,1,160,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
150,105,74725,1,0,0:2:0:0:
150,105,74857,2,0,L|154:16,1,80,0|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
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74,327,75386,6,0,P|116:303|242:323,1,160,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
341,337,75782,1,0,0:2:0:0:
341,337,75915,2,0,P|400:309|418:289,1,80,0|0,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
393,122,76179,2,0,P|387:187|396:212,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
393,122,76443,6,0,L|223:117,1,160,0|10,3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
163,229,76840,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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222,54,77501,5,0,3:2:0:0:
163,229,77633,1,0,0:2:0:0:
340,148,77765,2,0,L|251:154,1,80,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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478,233,78293,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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260,330,79615,5,2,0:2:0:0:
posted
M4M - Sayonara Memories

pleasee school works go away :<

My Shame Mods :>
[Affections]
  1. 00:15:782 (4,5) - space this more for consistency and balance (00:12:611 (4,5) -; 00:13:536 (3,4,5) -; 00:14:593 (3,4,5) -; 00:18:954 (4,5,1) -.)
  2. 00:24:373 (5,1) - thinking that the hype is gone, space this for flow
  3. 00:26:884 (2,4) - stack this
  4. 00:40:232 (1) - 00:40:232 (1) - tbh.. its not my type that this slider is kinda harsh for me
  5. 00:42:611 (1) - remove snare?
  6. 00:45:915 (2,5) - is this stack or no?
  7. 00:51:069 (1) - straight this might be better for less curve slider
  8. 01:14:064 (5) - remove snare


[Loli's]
  1. 00:09:571 (5) - clap this part
  2. 00:10:496 (4,1) - blanket on 2 for good structure
  3. 00:25:562 (5,1) - ds is really low, space this between
  4. 00:30:320 (2,3) - 2 is out of place but somehow 3 is out of place but i realize that you copied 1 so, i suggest that 2 is curve for flow[
  5. 00:46:840 (1,2) - make a line of sliderstart (1) and the sliderend and sliderstart (2) for structure patterns
  6. 00:49:615 (4,5) - they make a good ds, somehow 00:49:747 (5,1) - feels that they need more distance so move more this more like a finish/new pattern that needs more distance snap. as the big leap smh
  7. 00:58:998 (3,4,1) - blanket are too close for 1.1x section. wide more
  8. 00:59:791 (2,1) - weird overlap tbh


[Rumi]
  1. 00:12:478 (4) -; 00:17:765 (3) - 2 circles for consistency and flow (00:13:536 (3,4,5) -; 00:14:593 (3,4,5) -; 00:15:650 (3,4,5) -; )
  2. 00:21:201 (2) - feels that clap is important than make a space/blank
  3. 00:51:465 (2,3) - making 2 straight but not like a back n fort, smh makes something that doesnt fit. So I suggest that 3 is curve
  4. 00:53:051 (1) - nc
  5. 01:05:738 (1,4) - blanket
  6. 01:10:364 (2) - sliderstart add simpleset: drum
  7. 01:19:615 (6) - nc


[Hard]
  1. 00:23:976 (2,3) - blanket?
  2. 00:40:628 (5) - uhh curve for 00:39:835 (2) - is straighted
  3. why 00:53:051 (1) - is not a 1/1 song is holding tbh
  4. 01:15:122 (4,1) - blanket?


[Normal]
  1. Fix AiMod: Distance Snaps


[Easy]
  1. Fix AiMod: Object's end is offscreen etc.


Good Luck !
posted

Zallies wrote:

M4M - Sayonara Memories

pleasee school works go away :<

My Shame Mods :>
[Affections]
  1. 00:15:782 (4,5) - space this more for consistency and balance (00:12:611 (4,5) -; 00:13:536 (3,4,5) -; 00:14:593 (3,4,5) -; 00:18:954 (4,5,1) -.)
  2. 00:24:373 (5,1) - thinking that the hype is gone, space this for flow - im not sure what you mean by that
  3. 00:26:884 (2,4) - stack this
  4. 00:40:232 (1) - 00:40:232 (1) - tbh.. its not my type that this slider is kinda harsh for me - it's my style.. actually xD
  5. 00:42:611 (1) - remove snare?
  6. 00:45:915 (2,5) - is this stack or no? - nono there's a snare there
  7. 00:51:069 (1) - straight this might be better for less curve slider
  8. 01:14:064 (5) - remove snare - wha but there is a snare there


[Hard]
  1. 00:23:976 (2,3) - blanket?
  2. 00:40:628 (5) - uhh curve for 00:39:835 (2) - is straighted - it's fine
  3. why 00:53:051 (1) - is not a 1/1 song is holding tbh - for a hard diff it certainly seems like it
  4. 01:15:122 (4,1) - blanket?


[Normal]
  1. Fix AiMod: Distance Snaps


[Easy]
  1. Fix AiMod: Object's end is offscreen etc.


Good Luck !
Thanks for the mod!
posted
m5m!!

Easy
  1. 00:08:646 (2,2) - Why is the rhythm different?
  2. 00:28:866 (1) - Why did not you pick up vocals?
    00:20:408 (1,2) - Should be done like this
  3. 00:37:324 (1,1) - I would make this a blanket Image
  4. 00:41:553 (1) - 00:41:950 - How about bending the slider according to the sound of this drum Image


Normal
  1. 00:10:760 (3) - I think the shape of Ctrl+J is better
    00:19:219 (4,5) - Just like this flow
  2. 00:20:672 (2,3) - Is this rhythm picking up a vocal?
    If I pick up a vocal 00:21:069 - here I think it is a 1/1 slider
  3. 00:27:016 (2,3) - I think that it is easier for beginners to change this to a slider
  4. 00:35:210 (1) - Why not pick up vocals?
    00:34:152 (3,4,5) - you am picking up a vocal so far 00:35:210 (1) - It is strange not to pick up vocals here
    00:35:342 - 1/1 Slider is better
  5. 00:41:950 (2) - Why is rhythm different here only from here?
    00:37:324 (1,2,3) - 00:39:439 (1,2,3) - 00:43:668 (1,2,3) - I think the same rhythm is good here
  6. 00:42:611 - Why did you pick up this sound at the end of the slider?
    I think that Circle is better because it sounds like a very loud sound to me
  7. 00:50:937 - Add Circle?
    It is better to pick up the vocals here
  8. 00:59:923 - Why can not you put a whistle here?
    00:59:527 - I think that it is the same as the whistle here
  9. 01:16:972 (4) - 01:18:690 (4,5) - Can not stack


Hard
  1. 00:19:219 (1,1) - stack?
  2. 00:23:051 (3,4,5) - I think that slider reverse is better
    00:25:166 (2,3) - 00:29:395 (3,4) - just like here
  3. 00:45:254 (6,7,8) - This arrangement is likely to get confused as BPM of songs is early
  4. 01:10:364 - 01:10:496 - You should pick up the sound here


Rumi's Insane
  1. 00:08:249 (2,3) - 00:09:175 (5,6) - Why are the distances different?
    In the same combo, you should keep distance to some extent
  2. 00:08:249 (2,3,2,3) - This is not a combo but the same sound is ringing with the same rhythm so it is better to keep the distance
  3. 00:38:910 (5,1) - Can not stack?
  4. 00:53:051 (4) - Add NC?
  5. 01:09:439 (2,3,4) - The rhythm of Ctrl+G is better


Loli's Extra
  1. 00:19:615 (2) - In consideration of the next flow, it is better to stack with Ctrl+H


Affection
  1. 00:15:122 (1,5) - Can not stack
  2. 00:20:276 (9) - I think it is easier to play this that it is on the top
    00:19:219 (1) - How about trying to stack at the beginning of this slider?
  3. 00:30:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If it looks like an image it looks beautiful Image
  4. 01:01:906 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that aim in parallel movement is very difficult
    01:02:038 (3,7) - How about trying Ctrl+G
    01:09:307 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - just like here
  5. 01:10:100 (1,2) - I think that the distance is close.
    01:09:307 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that it is better to keep this distance


Thank you for choosing me! :)
Good luck!
posted

Zallies wrote:

[Loli's]
  1. 00:09:571 (5) - clap this part k
  2. 00:10:496 (4,1) - blanket on 2 for good structure ???
  3. 00:25:562 (5,1) - ds is really low, space this between oh true
  4. 00:30:320 (2,3) - 2 is out of place but somehow 3 is out of place but i realize that you copied 1 so, i suggest that 2 is curve for flow[ seems alright, applied
  5. 00:46:840 (1,2) - make a line of sliderstart (1) and the sliderend and sliderstart (2) for structure patterns I don't get it
  6. 00:49:615 (4,5) - they make a good ds, somehow 00:49:747 (5,1) - feels that they need more distance so move more this more like a finish/new pattern that needs more distance snap. as the big leap smh seems alright, done
  7. 00:58:998 (3,4,1) - blanket are too close for 1.1x section. wide more ok
  8. 00:59:791 (2,1) - weird overlap tbh overlapped for a reason - they're copypasted patterns and that section is meant to look like it's going back and forth

Yasaija 714 wrote:

Loli's Extra
  1. 00:19:615 (2) - In consideration of the next flow, it is better to stack with Ctrl+H good idea
ty for mods ^^

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Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
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posted

Yasaija 714 wrote:

m5m!!

Easy
  1. 00:08:646 (2,2) - Why is the rhythm different? - wanted to pick up the snare
  2. 00:28:866 (1) - Why did not you pick up vocals? - adjusted differently
    00:20:408 (1,2) - Should be done like this
  3. 00:37:324 (1,1) - I would make this a blanket Image - i like what i have better, it's barely noticeable so much later
  4. 00:41:553 (1) - 00:41:950 - How about bending the slider according to the sound of this drum Image - doesn't this already do it


Normal
  1. 00:10:760 (3) - I think the shape of Ctrl+J is better- I think this is fine lol it's pretty subjective
    00:19:219 (4,5) - Just like this flow
  2. 00:20:672 (2,3) - Is this rhythm picking up a vocal? - i don't wanna skip 00:21:201 - and 00:21:465 (4) - is different in the sense it's longer than the ones that come up later so i wanted to put some rhythm contrast to show that
    If I pick up a vocal 00:21:069 - here I think it is a 1/1 slider
  3. 00:27:016 (2,3) - I think that it is easier for beginners to change this to a slider - mm i don't think it's that hard, the polarity switches quite fluidly here imo and i do it in a lot of places 00:29:923 (3,4,5,1) -
  4. 00:35:210 (1) - Why not pick up vocals? - you're right, i changed some stuff here
    00:34:152 (3,4,5) - you am picking up a vocal so far 00:35:210 (1) - It is strange not to pick up vocals here
    00:35:342 - 1/1 Slider is better
  5. 00:41:950 (2) - Why is rhythm different here only from here? - because these try to put more emphasis on vocals with the last note being a slider
    00:37:324 (1,2,3) - 00:39:439 (1,2,3) - 00:43:668 (1,2,3) - I think the same rhythm is good here
  6. 00:42:611 - Why did you pick up this sound at the end of the slider?
    I think that Circle is better because it sounds like a very loud sound to me
  7. 00:50:937 - Add Circle?
    It is better to pick up the vocals here
  8. 00:59:923 - Why can not you put a whistle here?
    00:59:527 - I think that it is the same as the whistle here
  9. 01:16:972 (4) - 01:18:690 (4,5) - Can not stack


Hard
  1. 00:19:219 (1,1) - stack?
  2. 00:23:051 (3,4,5) - I think that slider reverse is better - there are 3 distinct vocals here so i wanted all 3 clickable unlike the others you mentioned
    00:25:166 (2,3) - 00:29:395 (3,4) - just like here
  3. 00:45:254 (6,7,8) - This arrangement is likely to get confused as BPM of songs is early - will keep in mind
  4. 01:10:364 - 01:10:496 - You should pick up the sound here - i don't think they are necessary to map


Affection
  1. 00:15:122 (1,5) - Can not stack
  2. 00:20:276 (9) - I think it is easier to play this that it is on the top
    00:19:219 (1) - How about trying to stack at the beginning of this slider?
  3. 00:30:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - If it looks like an image it looks beautiful Image
  4. 01:01:906 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that aim in parallel movement is very difficult
    01:02:038 (3,7) - How about trying Ctrl+G - I think that makes it harder, which is why i used it later x.x
    01:09:307 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - just like here
  5. 01:10:100 (1,2) - I think that the distance is close.
    01:09:307 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that it is better to keep this distance - i think it's okay because it follows the sudden stop of the vocals and then the continuation of it through the slider


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Sorry for being so late zz I was busy with other sets
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