Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Home Run]
Object at 00:04:292 - should be placed at: [276, 226] currently at: [277, 227] to move in line with slider at time 00:04:463 -
Object at 00:04:377 - should be placed at: [289, 225] currently at: [290, 226] to move in line with slider at time 00:04:463 -
Object at 00:30:692 - should be placed at: [239, 147] currently at: [240, 148] to move in line with slider at time 00:30:863 -
Object at 00:30:777 - should be placed at: [239, 147] currently at: [240, 148] to move in line with slider at time 00:30:863 -
Object at 00:58:463 - should be placed at: [201, 248] currently at: [199, 255] to blanket slider body at time 00:58:806 -
Object at 00:59:235 - should be placed at: [201, 248] currently at: [204, 244] to blanket slider body at time 00:58:806 -
Object at 01:31:549 - should be placed at: [290, 131] currently at: [294, 128] to blanket slider body at time 01:31:206 -
Object at 01:33:606 - should be placed at: [307, 294] currently at: [308, 295] to move in line with slider at time 01:33:949 -
Object at 02:22:635 - should be placed at: [355, 103] currently at: [359, 103] to blanket slider body at time 02:22:977 -
Object at 02:35:835 - should be placed at: [335, 272] currently at: [336, 273] to move in line with slider at time 02:35:663 -
Object at 02:48:606 - should be placed at: [237, 248] currently at: [238, 249] to move in line with slider at time 02:48:863 -
Object at 02:48:692 - should be placed at: [237, 248] currently at: [238, 249] to move in line with slider at time 02:48:863 -
Object at 02:49:892 - should be placed at: [236, 247] currently at: [237, 248] to move in line with slider at time 02:50:235 -
Object at 02:50:406 - should be placed at: [374, 330] currently at: [373, 331] to move in line with slider at time 02:50:063 -
Object at 02:51:349 - should be placed at: [223, 123] currently at: [228, 126] to blanket slider body at time 02:51:092 -
Object at 02:51:435 - should be placed at: [223, 123] currently at: [228, 126] to blanket slider body at time 02:51:092 -
Object at 03:45:606 - should be placed at: [244, 146] currently at: [242, 150] to blanket slider body at time 03:45:949 -
Object at 03:50:406 - should be placed at: [277, 132] currently at: [279, 136] to blanket slider body at time 03:50:749 -
Object at 03:54:692 - should be placed at: [435, 127] currently at: [436, 126] to move in line with slider at time 03:54:863 -
Object at 04:07:892 - should be placed at: [118, 189] currently at: [119, 190] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:063 -
Object at 04:08:406 - should be placed at: [397, 295] currently at: [398, 296] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:577 -
Object at 04:08:492 - should be placed at: [397, 295] currently at: [398, 296] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:577 -
Object at 04:18:177 - should be placed at: [312, 343] currently at: [313, 344] to move in line with slider at time 04:18:520 -
Object at 04:23:320 - should be placed at: [109, 102] currently at: [114, 106] to blanket slider body at time 04:23:492 -
Object at 04:28:206 - should be placed at: [68, 25] currently at: [69, 24] to move in line with slider at time 04:28:292 -
Object at 04:29:149 - should be placed at: [366, 252] currently at: [364, 249] to blanket slider body at time 04:29:663 -
Object at 04:42:692 - should be placed at: [301, 114] currently at: [306, 113] to blanket slider body at time 04:42:177 -
Object at 04:46:635 - should be placed at: [183, 180] currently at: [184, 181] to move in line with slider at time 04:47:149 -
Object at 04:48:006 - should be placed at: [37, 307] currently at: [35, 309] to blanket slider body at time 04:47:663 -
Object at 04:48:349 - should be placed at: [425, 277] currently at: [426, 278] to move in line with slider at time 04:48:177 -
Object at 04:48:692 - should be placed at: [319, 285] currently at: [320, 286] to move in line with slider at time 04:48:177 -
Object at 04:53:664 - should be placed at: [220, 97] currently at: [223, 99] to blanket slider body at time 04:53:149 -

I hope I didn't malfunction!

Also I'm not lazy! I spent over a week coding this and I'm always updating with future outputs BAKA

Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Home Run]
Object at 00:04:292 - should be placed at: [276, 226] currently at: [277, 227] to move in line with slider at time 00:04:463 -
Object at 00:04:377 - should be placed at: [289, 225] currently at: [290, 226] to move in line with slider at time 00:04:463 -
Object at 00:30:692 - should be placed at: [239, 147] currently at: [240, 148] to move in line with slider at time 00:30:863 -
Object at 00:30:777 - should be placed at: [239, 147] currently at: [240, 148] to move in line with slider at time 00:30:863 -
Object at 00:58:463 - should be placed at: [201, 248] currently at: [199, 255] to blanket slider body at time 00:58:806 -
Object at 00:59:235 - should be placed at: [201, 248] currently at: [204, 244] to blanket slider body at time 00:58:806 -
Object at 01:31:549 - should be placed at: [290, 131] currently at: [294, 128] to blanket slider body at time 01:31:206 -
Object at 01:33:606 - should be placed at: [307, 294] currently at: [308, 295] to move in line with slider at time 01:33:949 -
Object at 02:22:635 - should be placed at: [355, 103] currently at: [359, 103] to blanket slider body at time 02:22:977 -
Object at 02:35:835 - should be placed at: [335, 272] currently at: [336, 273] to move in line with slider at time 02:35:663 -
Object at 02:48:606 - should be placed at: [237, 248] currently at: [238, 249] to move in line with slider at time 02:48:863 -
Object at 02:48:692 - should be placed at: [237, 248] currently at: [238, 249] to move in line with slider at time 02:48:863 -
Object at 02:49:892 - should be placed at: [236, 247] currently at: [237, 248] to move in line with slider at time 02:50:235 -
Object at 02:50:406 - should be placed at: [374, 330] currently at: [373, 331] to move in line with slider at time 02:50:063 -
Object at 02:51:349 - should be placed at: [223, 123] currently at: [228, 126] to blanket slider body at time 02:51:092 -
Object at 02:51:435 - should be placed at: [223, 123] currently at: [228, 126] to blanket slider body at time 02:51:092 -
Object at 03:45:606 - should be placed at: [244, 146] currently at: [242, 150] to blanket slider body at time 03:45:949 -
Object at 03:50:406 - should be placed at: [277, 132] currently at: [279, 136] to blanket slider body at time 03:50:749 -
Object at 03:54:692 - should be placed at: [435, 127] currently at: [436, 126] to move in line with slider at time 03:54:863 -
Object at 04:07:892 - should be placed at: [118, 189] currently at: [119, 190] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:063 -
Object at 04:08:406 - should be placed at: [397, 295] currently at: [398, 296] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:577 -
Object at 04:08:492 - should be placed at: [397, 295] currently at: [398, 296] to move in line with slider at time 04:08:577 -
Object at 04:18:177 - should be placed at: [312, 343] currently at: [313, 344] to move in line with slider at time 04:18:520 -
Object at 04:23:320 - should be placed at: [109, 102] currently at: [114, 106] to blanket slider body at time 04:23:492 -
Object at 04:28:206 - should be placed at: [68, 25] currently at: [69, 24] to move in line with slider at time 04:28:292 -
Object at 04:29:149 - should be placed at: [366, 252] currently at: [364, 249] to blanket slider body at time 04:29:663 -
Object at 04:42:692 - should be placed at: [301, 114] currently at: [306, 113] to blanket slider body at time 04:42:177 -
Object at 04:46:635 - should be placed at: [183, 180] currently at: [184, 181] to move in line with slider at time 04:47:149 -
Object at 04:48:006 - should be placed at: [37, 307] currently at: [35, 309] to blanket slider body at time 04:47:663 -
Object at 04:48:349 - should be placed at: [425, 277] currently at: [426, 278] to move in line with slider at time 04:48:177 -
Object at 04:48:692 - should be placed at: [319, 285] currently at: [320, 286] to move in line with slider at time 04:48:177 -
Object at 04:53:664 - should be placed at: [220, 97] currently at: [223, 99] to blanket slider body at time 04:53:149 -

I hope I didn't malfunction!

Also I'm not lazy! I spent over a week coding this and I'm always updating with future outputs BAKA
Should have said nazi blanket mod instead :^)
Fixed mostly everything that wasn't too stupid

Shad0w1and wrote:

00:42:520 - nc maybe no
00:43:892 - same no
01:11:663 (6) - same okay there
01:38:063 (3,4,1) - the flow will mislead people to read 01:38:577 - as 1/4, better ctrl+< 01:38:577 (1,2,3,4) - hum.. fine, fixed
02:49:549 (7) - unlike 02:55:035 (7) - , jump does not work here imo, better stack idk stacking kills flow here
uhm.. good map i guess xc

PoNo wrote:

00:05:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern semble super compact et plutôt désordonné je pense que tu devrait soit l’espacer d'avantage ou bien simplement structurer un square ok

00:09:949 (3) - Pourquoi ne pas commencer des 1/4 ici ? (proposition) très peu spaced ou bien des reverses ! je vais laisser comme ça
00:10:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - de plus je verrais plus un DS increase sur ce stream genre ça rendrait super bien genre quelque chose de ce genre https://i.imgur.com/zWuHwcz.png ok

00:20:920 (3,4) - J'entend plus un 1/4 que deux sliders personnellement ça reste au choix ! je laisse comme ça pour la baisse d'intensité

00:21:606 (1) - Faudrait extend ça jusqu'à 00:22:892 (2) - imo pas necessaire

00:31:720 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Refait correctement la symétrie pleaseeee ; -; c'est fixé je crois

01:19:549 (2) - De mon avis, vu que les paroles sont les mêmes tu devrait refaire la même forme que le pattern d'avant, mais increase un tout petit peu le spacing pour avoir un rendu sympa ! fix

01:33:263 (2,3) - Pourquoi skip tant de magnifiques 1/4 https://i.imgur.com/f9UYauC.jpg 2 reverses suivi d'un stream à la fin follow tellement plus ça me parait dur a read, enfin j'ai apply quand meme, moins spaced par contre

01:34:806 (2,3) - ce sont des 1/8 pas des 1/4, je te conseil de faire des petits reverses du coup en 1/8 ! je sais mai les 1/8 rendent degueulasse je trouve je changerais pas

01:54:177 (9) - Il faut un changement qui emphases plus le changement de son imo genre kickslider ou reverses idk je laisse pour rester consistant

02:16:806 (1) - pareil qu'au début :p fix

02:44:920 (3) - un slider qui fini à la place du 4 serait mieux, car le son est vraiment super faible, sans 25% je l'entendais pas (02:45:177 (4) - ) je laisse pour introduire aux doubles

04:51:092 (5) - On dirait qu'il manque un truc après cet objet, idk, maybe un autre slider ou autre, ça me parait juste vide j'ai extend du coup

C'est pas mal, je trouve juste dommage que tes slider shapes sont très simpliste, y'a pas beaucoup de complexification dans la map au niveau aesthetic, sinon ça va c'est cool ! j'aime rester simple (c'est surtout car j'ai du mal à faire bien et compliqué a la fois)

- AzRaeL - wrote:

M4M back from here

01:33:263 (2,3,4,5) - It's a little bit hard to read. How about this. hum, removed this pattern to stay consistant with every kiai beginning, couldn't find any good way to place this anyway
01:47:492 (5,6) - I think this is hard to move imo. I think it's fine for a map that difficult, also emphasing high pitched sound with somewhat uncomfortable flow
02:05:149 (3) - How about change this kick into a circle ( a slider + a circle ). not necessary
02:50:749 (8) - If I map this, I may make it a slower SV D: . it's fine as it is imo
03:49:892 (4,5) - St...stack? oops, thanks, fixed
04:24:777 (3,4) - Stack 4 on 04:23:920 (2). fixed
04:38:577 (6,5) - St...stack? fixed

This map is really good.
I think it can be ranked already . Thanks, but I need some mods/SP anyway before ranking
GL.

1. 00:35:235 (16,1) - The spacing change here is a bit drastic, and I find nothing in the song that justifies this sudden change. I find it really uncomfortable to play, so you should reduce it. Same goes for the spacing increases on all the other kiai entrances as well.
2. 01:08:406 (3,4,5,6) - Minor, but you could change this pattern so that (3) is directly in the centre of this triangle.
3. 01:12:863 (2,3) - Even though these notes are far apart from each other and probably won't be noticed in gameplay, I think you should still stack these for the sake of having a strong structure.
4. 01:16:806 (4,5,6) - Likewise, I feel like you should clean this triangle up a bit. It looks lopsided at the moment.
5. 01:42:177 (6) - The head of this slider is missing a whistle, and which I can notice clearly during gameplay. Therefore I would change the sampleset on this note so it can be heard.
6. 02:22:292 (1,2,3,4) - These definitely deserve more emphasis so you should space them out more. It'll also help strengthen the contrast even more from the calm section that just passed.
7. 03:50:063 (1,2,3,4) - Either decrease the spacing of (1,2) or increase the spacing of (3,4); because the sounds that (3,4) is on are a lot stronger and higher pitched, so again you should express this through the map.
8. 04:24:863 (4,5,6,7,8) - I can hear the sounds you've been mapping to here, but I don't think it's a good idea. This is a really intense part of the song with the loud 1/4 melody overshadowing it, so I don't think leaving 1/2 gaps in the gameplay is a good way to emphasise these. Same goes for 04:26:406 (5,6) - .
9. 04:28:635 (2,3,4,5) - More on these kinds of rhythms - I just didn't find them as fun to play compared to the patterns and rhythms on the kiai before and after. This is due to a mixture of low spacing and general rhythm awkwardness, so I would find a better way to express all of these.
10. 04:41:492 (4,5,6,7) - I don't like how you've chosen to completely overlap these sliders, as it'll easily cause players to misread. I would adjust the pattern so that they're not overlapping or partially overlapping, as it'll be much easier for the player to notice the notes. This happens again at 04:52:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .

-Faded- wrote:

Hey, m4m from my queue!

[Cycle Hit!]

1. 00:35:235 (16,1) - The spacing change here is a bit drastic, and I find nothing in the song that justifies this sudden change. I find it really uncomfortable to play, so you should reduce it. Same goes for the spacing increases on all the other kiai entrances as well. okay, reduced spacing so it follows the stream progression correctly instead of a brutal increase
2. 01:08:406 (3,4,5,6) - Minor, but you could change this pattern so that (3) is directly in the centre of this triangle. actually, it's lined up this way, so I don't really want to change it's structure, would be a bit pointless https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8957706
3. 01:12:863 (2,3) - Even though these notes are far apart from each other and probably won't be noticed in gameplay, I think you should still stack these for the sake of having a strong structure. sure, fixed
4. 01:16:806 (4,5,6) - Likewise, I feel like you should clean this triangle up a bit. It looks lopsided at the moment. it looks uneven because im progressively reducing spacing here to fit the song
5. 01:42:177 (6) - The head of this slider is missing a whistle, and which I can notice clearly during gameplay. Therefore I would change the sampleset on this note so it can be heard. there's not a missing whistle here, it's audible actually
6. 02:22:292 (1,2,3,4) - These definitely deserve more emphasis so you should space them out more. It'll also help strengthen the contrast even more from the calm section that just passed. okay
7. 03:50:063 (1,2,3,4) - Either decrease the spacing of (1,2) or increase the spacing of (3,4); because the sounds that (3,4) is on are a lot stronger and higher pitched, so again you should express this through the map. fixed
8. 04:24:863 (4,5,6,7,8) - I can hear the sounds you've been mapping to here, but I don't think it's a good idea. This is a really intense part of the song with the loud 1/4 melody overshadowing it, so I don't think leaving 1/2 gaps in the gameplay is a good way to emphasise these. Same goes for 04:26:406 (5,6) - . changed for the first one, the second seems fine imo, as the 1/4 melody behind sounds less overshadowing
9. 04:28:635 (2,3,4,5) - More on these kinds of rhythms - I just didn't find them as fun to play compared to the patterns and rhythms on the kiai before and after. This is due to a mixture of low spacing and general rhythm awkwardness, so I would find a better way to express all of these. I don't really understand what do you mean, I don't find any other way to express them correctly anyway
10. 04:41:492 (4,5,6,7) - I don't like how you've chosen to completely overlap these sliders, as it'll easily cause players to misread. I would adjust the pattern so that they're not overlapping or partially overlapping, as it'll be much easier for the player to notice the notes. This happens again at 04:52:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . I think there's enough time to read these except for the first ones, espescially at that AR, so, I moved a bit the first sliders so it don't overlap perfectly to improve readability a bit

This is all I have to say. This was a really nice map, I had fun playing it and the flow was on point. I hope to see it ranked, so good luck with this!

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:

euh oui en fait petit mod pour le poto

K A S A I

00:01:035 (1,4) - Could try to blanket this fixed
00:07:892 (1) - This doesn't overlap the same way with 00:07:206 (4,5) - that are symmetrical, perhaps a straight line would fit better ? c'est pour donner un semblant de flow circulaire visuel en quelque sorte, enfin, meme si ça se joue pareil, ça aura pas le meme effet avec un slider droit éwi
00:09:949 - Could raise volume a bit/add hitsounds for the transition ok
00:20:063 (5,3) - pa tré bo /
00:30:349 (5,6,7) - I think this would flow better if it was placed before 00:30:006 (2,3,4) - true, fixed
00:43:892 (2,2) - doesn't blanket prefectly but meh, w/e fxied
00:57:606 (1,3,5) - you could maybe try to stack all of these ok
01:46:292 (6,1) - pa tré bo /
02:30:520 (1,2,3) - If you follow the same logic as the previous buildups, this should be identical to 02:29:149 (1,2,3) - , not ctrl+H-ed oui

chuis un peu fatigué quand même, du coup c'est rapide et pas très utile
mais bon ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Bonne chance !

Worminator wrote:

Status: Waiting for Shiirn's free mod

Shiirn wrote:

Worminators wrote:

Status: Waiting for Shiirn's free mod I knew it

02:07:892 (4) - random normalwhistle sliderslide? no wub here or anything to fit it yes, my bad, fixed

I'm personally really, really, really not a fan of the skipstreams (such as these) as i feel they never actually fit any point in the map, they seem to just be there to add difficulty and look cool. There are a couple spots where they may work, but you never use them there, instead sporadically sprinkling them all over.

It'd take a serious restructuring of the map to change that in any way, so I'm sure you'd rather not do that. Other than that rather unfitting issue, map is alright. Good structure and good patterns, but kind of plain and uninspired. A very good result for a relatively new mapper, mind you, I'm just a crotchety old fuck who's impossible to please. Good luck with your future maps.

Lama Poluna wrote:

Sorry but

Artist: DJ Genki / かめりあ / C-Show
Romanised Artist: DJ Genki / Camellia / C-Show
Tags: Kasai Harcores 葛西ハーコーズ

Stupid RC says: Tracks created by composers belonging to doujin circles should list the circle's name as the main composer. The sole exception to this is when a composer of a given circle is well-known enough by their own name. In this case, their own composer name may be used instead.