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Sinnoh wrote:

I'll just nm since Maridius said he'd return later
i'm gonna fall asleep soon so bear with me if stuff doesn't make sense or looks lazy/informal

General
soft-hitwhistle2 is really annoying in the opening section
00:22:144 (1) - why is there a hitnormal every 2/1 when there is no music to back it up miss listen this section
01:20:565 (2,3,4) - what is the whistle following, there are no distinct sounds that I can piece together to make sense of
hitsounding is really questionable to me on the low intensity sections tbh me myself don't really see the hitsound (softset2) section as a problem. Eventhough theres no lineup for notes to be hsed it will better to rearrage the instrumental flow (music) and place hs on where it should be as long it consistent and fit. Evenso if this count as an unranked issue ofc I will fix it, but as long I hsing I never hear one so cmiiw. Actually I could just say "its my style" but what can this trash mapper say tho :)
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57039
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Re:TrymenT
TitleUnicode:Re:TrymenT
Artist:Hotaru Murasaki
ArtistUnicode:紫咲ほたる
Creator:Shiratoi
Version:Resonance
Source:Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
Tags:eroge visual novel relief 甘利紗陽 saya amari Shin'ainaru Anata e レリーフ DeaR YoU retryment miu yuu game op rask opening nevo yamicchi lince cosmico foxygrandpa ultima fox lilyanna time capsule
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posted
updated
posted

MaridiuS wrote:

Hey from my queue (lol)



[Foxy fox's Insane]
  1. 00:01:934 (1,3) - You know what would be veryyyy sweet? If you introduced the SV reducement on 1/1 notes on this kind of patterns done like 00:57:512 (1,2,3) - but without the overlap. It could prepare the players really well to what will be waiting for them. Of course will take a little bit of your effort to remap if you agree. I mean it feels late when the gimmick gets introduced more than halfway of the song. Aight yea
  2. 00:17:091 (1,3) - Making them stack seems really confusing, you should have them partially overlap like 00:17:565 (3,5) - , it would look better, play better and suit the section too.Cleaned up this section
  3. 00:49:302 (4) - Might want a NC here.Ok
  4. 00:50:881 (4) - Uhm it seems that there is a really deep drum on this sliderend, and I highly suggest making it clickable, preferably a 1/2 slider. Follows vocals
  5. 00:52:301 (4) - Nothing important on this note, it shouldn't be mapped actively, either empty or sliderend. Drums tho
  6. 00:59:091 (2,3,4) - I admit that 120 degree sliders look good, but (4) is a different layer, two vocal hits, and shouldn't be grouped with the other two sliders which follow piano. Different layers should be mapped differently. 01:01:618 (2,3,4) - same here The 120's follow the piano that come up in pairs of 3
  7. 01:11:249 - Seems completely out of place and consistent with nothing for this to be empty. Strongly advise in making the previous circle a slider or giving a note here. Ok
  8. 01:12:512 - Here it is okay because the intensity of the vocals has dropped and the background noise. What's more (1) is now given much bigger spacing.
  9. 01:14:565 (3) - Should be made into two circles to be consistent jumps like 01:13:302 (1,2,1,2) - I don't like having jumps here especially since it leads into a triple,
    it just doesnt feel right tbh.
  10. 01:15:197 (3) - NC here, not here 01:15:039 (1) - Fix
  11. 01:15:670 (5) - seems a bit offscreen, moving it up is a good idea since it touches the timing bar. Moved up xd



Yeah just a few more mods and I'll come back on my own accord.

Sinnoh wrote:

I'll just nm since Maridius said he'd return later
i'm gonna fall asleep soon so bear with me if stuff doesn't make sense or looks lazy/informal


foxfox
00:01:934 (1) - SV is a bit high, I think it would be better to match the second half after kiai which is similar in tone Ehhhhhh its slow enough honestly.
00:11:723 (1,1) - lmao dabbbbbbbbbb
ok general issue is aesthetics are really questionable in many places. I don't think I can really explain it well, things like 00:14:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:17:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:18:670 (3,4,5,6,7) - I remapped those parts they were ugly
like
00:01:934 (1,3) - 00:06:986 (1,3) - These look nice
00:22:460 (2,4) - 00:24:986 (2,4) - These do not Subjective :dab:

01:10:460 (2) - 01:11:091 (4) - these could be slightly faster sv to build on the low sv of vocal I don't wanna go too crazy on the sv changes and they play fine as is tbh
01:15:670 (5) - This is too close to offscreen for comfort, can you move it in a bit Fixxx

Really not too interested in this set regardless of whether Maridius was, sorry~
Thank u guys!!!


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[General]

  1. @timecapsule and everyone else. Last time i modded think it was done with me having hitsounds off lol, so sinnoh adressed it and time capsule said something like "miss listen to the section" meaning that he will remove the 2/1 hitnormals on the peaceful section, checking back I don't see them removed. And I also agree with Sinnoh that they sound misplaced tbh, in like all maps.
  2. I think having drum sampleset claps should fit this section more 00:32:565 - in all maps 00:16:302 (4,6) - if they sound like this. Hm I'll just put on how my hitsound sounds on drum-hitclaps, think that you'll understand. The section is way too peaceful and the snares are toned down strongly, the current snare is just too loud compared to anything else. https://www.dropbox.com/s/nh8a9o5kistff ... p.wav?dl=0
  3. I redownloaded the diff and foxy fox diff is kill, no mp3 lol, also no preview time.
  4. Liliyanna didn't answer sinnoh mod




[Resonance]
  1. 00:52:460 (1) - compared to 00:49:934 (1) - should be a slider in order to emphasize the increasment of intensity and the violin that appears on the red tick.


[lince]
  1. 00:44:091 (4,5,6) - Hm this spacing is big for no apparent reason, https://i.imgur.com/QcqTNil.png making a square should fit much better relating aesthetics and intensity.
  2. Lince wrote:

    00:58:302 (4) - I'm sorry but it's sliderend sounds way too important and impactful for it to be mapped like that. It is a strong vocal together with a drum hit and should without doubt in my eyes be mapped actively (aka being clickable). 01:00:039 (1) - same for this. 01:00:828 (3) - and also kinda for this. i don't really agree with this one, While the vocals are important, im following a different rhythm that i made up, and i thinks that the emphasis is good enough already, if people keeps complaining about this i'll just change
    ~You will have to present some stronger arguments to why the rhythm is viable and not just say "I made it up" so we can more easily come to a compromise further more, modders in the future could better understand and maybe learn something.

  3. Lince wrote:

    01:15:670 (1) - I strongly advise emphasizing this with spacing, way too loud and noticeable to be given generic spacing like random vocals. When there's a note this big it should be noticeable different in the map compared to other filler stuff. I don't think so at all, i want to keep the blankets clear for now
    ~https://i.imgur.com/9I71dIa.jpg This also seems like clear blankets except now the strong sound was emphasized ¯\_(ツ)_/¯.



[Nevo]
  1. 01:00:039 (1,2,3) - You said that you fixed all, but I said that if you were to make 00:57:512 (1) - a slider, so should it be done in the former link for consistency and for the purpose of emphasizing the downbeat.
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Sinnoh wrote:

lilyanna
00:45:986 (2,3,4,5,1) - This is way too dense for a normal, too many 1/2 sliders. I think replacing 00:45:986 (2) - with a circle solves this well
00:54:355 (4,5) - Rhythm a bit inconsistent, not sure why it's using 1/2 sliders when 00:52:776 (2) - is very similar and also has strong sound on its tail.
both fixed

MaridiuS wrote:

[General]

  1. @timecapsule and everyone else. Last time i modded think it was done with me having hitsounds off lol, so sinnoh adressed it and time capsule said something like "miss listen to the section" meaning that he will remove the 2/1 hitnormals on the peaceful section, checking back I don't see them removed. And I also agree with Sinnoh that they sound misplaced tbh, in like all maps. whoops ill ask him about it
  2. I think having drum sampleset claps should fit this section more 00:32:565 - in all maps 00:16:302 (4,6) - if they sound like this. Hm I'll just put on how my hitsound sounds on drum-hitclaps, think that you'll understand. The section is way too peaceful and the snares are toned down strongly, the current snare is just too loud compared to anything else. https://www.dropbox.com/s/nh8a9o5kistff ... p.wav?dl=0
  3. I redownloaded the diff and foxy fox diff is kill, no mp3 lol, also no preview time. mp3 seems fine to me but fixed preview point
  4. Liliyanna didn't answer sinnoh mod yup


[Resonance]
  1. 00:52:460 (1) - compared to 00:49:934 (1) - should be a slider in order to emphasize the increasment of intensity and the violin that appears on the red tick. idk i really think the pause gives players more emphasis on the next note, it also divides the section up nicely


[Nevo]
  1. 01:00:039 (1,2,3) - You said that you fixed all, but I said that if you were to make 00:57:512 (1) - a slider, so should it be done in the former link for consistency and for the purpose of emphasizing the downbeat.
everything else applied ty!!

Lince Cosmico wrote:

MaridiuS wrote:

[lince]
  1. 00:44:091 (4,5,6) - Hm this spacing is big for no apparent reason, https://i.imgur.com/QcqTNil.png making a square should fit much better relating aesthetics and intensity. ok changed
  2. 00:58:302 (4) - ~You will have to present some stronger arguments to why the rhythm is viable and not just say "I made it up" so we can more easily come to a compromise further more, modders in the future could better understand and maybe learn something. It's just that i don't know how to explain myself,
    but I'm pretty sure that my rhythm choise isn't bad, while it doesn't fits the vocals at all, it emphasize with the kick sound at the background, that is pretty much notorious while playing. Not more than the voice, but since it plays good, and it emphasizes something notorious in-gameplay. I'm keeping this pattern


  3. 01:15:670 (1) - ~https://i.imgur.com/9I71dIa.jpg This also seems like clear blankets except now the strong sound was emphasized ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Sorry on this one, but I feel that 01:15:197 (1,2) - is already emphasizing the spacing i want. while 01:15:670 (1,2) - are not doing it, they are still emphasizing enough the feeling I want to give while playing, also, take in mind that the spacing on 01:15:986 (2,3) - is higher because i wanted to give more emphasis to the main sounds as The First (01:15:197 - ) and The Last (01:16:302 - )
Thanks
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Alright yea since time capsule is ded I cleaned up the hitsounds in the start and in the end

they should be less annoying and more fitting
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00:54:986 - add finish on all diffs here.
00:20:249 - finish on all diffs here

lilyanna, maybe 00:55:065 (1) - snap start on red tick, giving space to new player is always good.

normal-hitclap seems to be unusued so delete that.

zzz
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@shira feel free to modified the hs as your prefence, get some net issues recently so ye sry late rply
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MaridiuS wrote:

00:54:986 - add finish on all diffs here.
00:20:249 - finish on all diffs here

lilyanna, maybe 00:55:065 (1) - snap start on red tick, giving space to new player is always good.

normal-hitclap seems to be unusued so delete that.

zzz
applied all
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Eroge was a mistake.
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MaridiuS wrote:

Eroge was a mistake.
everything was a mistake.
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:^)
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rank ples
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please push
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Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) -
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Lilyanna
  1. Try AR 4.5. It would give players a better bridge for the hard diff
  2. 00:43:460 (2) - rhythm suggestion ~ https://i.imgur.com/GneTy1v.png
  3. 01:05:091 (1,2) - It would be nice if you could use different structure here compared to 01:03:828 (3,4) . Because the music between these 2 pairs of sliders is very different
  4. 01:15:197 (1,2) - What do you think of something like this? https://i.imgur.com/YSUbT5T.png It would be a nice increase in object density especially since it's higher here in the easy
  5. 01:26:407 (1) - If you end this on circle 2 it would better reflect the vocals. It would also lower the object density which would be nice for the calm part
  6. 01:27:828 (1) - end on white tick

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod)

Yammichi
  1. 00:14:249 (6) - You know what would be really cool, if you stacked this on top of 00:14:565 (1) -
  2. 00:19:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I find this pattern a bit weird because it almost starts playing like a stack by the time you get to 6. Idk if that was your intended effect
  3. 00:52:144 (9) - same as 00:14:249 (6) if you turned 9 into a circle
  4. 01:11:407 (1,1,1) - why didn't you adopt the same SV and spacing as before? I don't really feel the song is becoming less intense here
  5. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (3,4) -

2 Furries Foxes
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end?
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too

Wew I'm finally near the end, guess I'll use an edgier colour
  1. xd nothing to say
[]Popping for the AR spread I mentioned in Hard and the slider structure thingy I stated in Easy

Call me back when everyone has replied. I've modded like 20 maps of this song this year jesus
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Kisses wrote:

2 Furries Foxes i will end u
  1. 00:43:618 (3) - If you're going to map this beat then hitsound it
  2. 00:57:986 (3) - Because this SV change is so drastic I would prefer an NC here as it came way out the blue for me. Add NC where else this applies
Fixed both thank uuu

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268,136,73618,5,8,0:0:0:0:
485,170,73776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,303,73934,6,0,P|303:286|231:301,1,100,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,215,74249,2,0,P|111:217|158:201,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,47,74565,2,0,L|273:145,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,303,74881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
450,185,75039,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,181,75118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
511,176,75197,5,12,0:0:0:0:
341,287,75355,2,0,P|283:276|216:294,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,364,75670,2,0,P|145:375|212:357,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,202,75986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,296,76144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,383,76302,6,0,P|266:332|280:257,1,119.999996337891,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,221,76776,2,0,L|449:227,3,50,2|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,162,77091,2,0,L|176:168,3,50,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,86,77407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,87,77486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,88,77565,1,2,0:0:0:0:
441,90,77644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,92,77723,6,0,L|481:152,2,50,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,163,78197,2,0,L|380:269,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,164,78670,2,0,L|271:114,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,142,78986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,252,79302,5,2,0:0:0:0:
353,97,79618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,142,79934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,193,80249,6,0,L|423:189,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,281,80723,2,0,P|277:266|206:274,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,185,81197,2,0,P|166:205|151:221,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,322,81512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,186,81828,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,159,82144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,322,82460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,82776,6,0,L|223:62,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,137,83249,2,0,P|329:178|336:241,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,235,83723,2,0,P|416:193|420:167,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,198,84039,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,305,84355,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,137,84670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
503,198,84986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,270,85302,6,0,L|252:266,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,167,85776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,167,85934,2,0,L|144:180,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,137,86407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,137,86565,2,0,P|67:186|71:246,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,343,87197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,281,87828,6,0,B|251:244|256:330|371:282,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,289,88776,2,0,L|339:219,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,172,89091,5,0,0:0:0:0:
437,317,89407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,172,89723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,238,90039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,334,90355,6,0,P|291:320|221:357,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,285,91618,6,0,P|236:271|306:308,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,235,92881,6,0,B|376:200|430:192|430:192|331:198|330:135|333:130|333:125|318:52|212:45|175:125|255:173|275:134,1,400,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Kisses wrote:

Nev0
  1. 00:43:302 (3) - NC pattern could be optimised for better readability. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9783974
  2. 01:07:302 (1) - Not many ppl are going to read this as a 3/4 slider because of the spacing and that the shape makes it look smaller than it actually is
  3. 01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah look who's too cool for 1,2,1,2 NCs pssh I used all my 1 2 ideas on yubi :^)
  4. 01:29:407 - I'm a bit sceptical why you didn't map this piano note when you mapped 01:29:723 (2,3)
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - end on white tick . It's really ambiguous how this ends on the red tick as you have such big spacing between 01:32:881 (1) in combination with the fact you ended the previous slider on the white tick too


Call me back when everyone has replied. I've modded like 20 maps of this song this year jesus
Applied all
https://puu.sh/yIaGQ/58aac93b94.zip
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Kisses wrote:

Whose ever Extra is above the first Insane, it's 5 am
  1. 00:21:512 (1) - mute the slider end? ok
  2. 00:56:881 (2) - NC ok
  3. 00:57:355 (3) - You sure you don't want a mini stream or something? feels anti climatic to have a slider + circle to map this kind of noise in an extra nah i just want to follow vocals at this point

im lince the noname
Call me back when everyone has replied. I've modded like 20 maps of this song this year jesus
annie here's the .osu http://puu.sh/yIyey/8645a5bda4.osu
don't forget to change my diffname into Chekito's Extra love u
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Kisses wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:42:355 (1,2) - Don't structure objects like this in Easies. Where the head 2 starts behind 1. It's extremely hard for a beginner to pick and read especially since the rhythm is somewhat ambiguous too.
  2. 00:42:355 (1) - concerning the rhythm above, how about this? https://i.imgur.com/dQcwiQk.png
  3. 00:44:881 (1) - ^
  4. 00:56:091 (2) - same as 00:42:355 (1,2) concerning structure
  5. 00:57:197 (3) - Deleting this would create a nice pause/break before the kiai and would in turn add more emphasis to the start of the chorus
  6. 01:15:197 (1) - Rhythm suggestion ~ More emphatic and flows better imho https://i.imgur.com/DbkPi9F.png
  7. 01:25:302 (1) - If you make this into a 2/1 reverse slider it would reflect the vocals a lot more. I had a feeling you want to portray the vocals with the way you mapped 01:22:776 (1,2,3) - but i was following piano for the examples
  8. 01:30:355 (1) - Suggestion to make 4/1 reverse ~

Hard
  1. AR 7. So the current gap between normal and hard is AR 4 and AR 8. Normally I'm not one to fuss about this but the gap between the ability to sight read is huge and 8 isn't really that necessary for this diff
  2. 00:37:302 (1) - Spacing feels a tad too high to say this is still the calm part. 1.8 DS is good enough for you?
  3. 00:40:776 (4) - Ok definitenly this one. Unlike above there is not really much to emphasis in the song
  4. 01:27:512 - Circle here would play nicely piano and such
  5. 01:31:618 (1) - NC not neccessary
  6. 01:29:091 (1,2,3,4) - Just my opinion as a mapper but I'm not really feeling this back and forth structure. I feel like a more linear pattern with lower spacing would be more appropriate (wew subjective modding with no explanation, great BN mod) i liek itttt
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