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Lilyanna's Normal
- 00:18:355 (2) - (Just a personal taste) I don't like how this slider looks actually. I would move waypoints in this way to give a better aesthetic impact: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9000530 fixed
- 00:28:460 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with previous parts, add it here 00:29:723 (3) - and remove from 00:30:986 (1) -. Apply the same for the next part 00:38:565 (1) - as well fixed all
- 00:40:302 (4) - I have been honestly felt a little confused here with this rhythm: the white tick on the middle of this slider should be clickable because there should be a normal sampleset with whistle on it for consistency. Provide to fix this to have a better consistency and a better rhythm impact while playing it i think it should be fine here the sliders are build up for the vocal
- 01:05:091 (1) - I would add a finish here with a lower volume to emphasize a little the clash in the cymbals you can clearly hear from the music added
- (Unique line for Comboing) 01:10:144 (4) - Add NC for consistency (because this section 01:08:881 (1,2,3) - must have 3 elements like you did for 01:07:618 (1,2,3) - ) and remove it from 01:11:407 (1) - and add it on 01:12:670 (3) - instead, then remove it from 01:13:934 (1) - and add it on 01:15:197 (3) - and remove from 01:16:302 (1) - yes fixed all the nc xdd
- Good map
Good job to all of you guys, I liked this mapset and I hope my mod will help you to improve it more.
Good luck on the rank!
I hope shira notice me ♥
osu file format v14
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Title:Re:TrymenT
TitleUnicode:Re:TrymenT
Artist:Hotaru Murasaki
ArtistUnicode:紫咲ほたる
Creator:Shiratoi
Version:Lilyanna's Normal
Source:Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
Tags:eroge visual novel relief 甘利紗陽 saya amari Shin'ainaru Anata e レリーフ DeaR YoU retryment miu yuu game op rask opening nevo yamicchi lince cosmico foxygrandpa ultima fox lilyanna time capsule
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