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Megurine Luka
:roll: 晚了不好意思,自古红蓝咳咳咳

[General]
应该,大概,没有
除了collab里标注名字的图片略小,字体略不清晰以外,建议字体描边加粗,投影的扩散减小

[Easy]

00:26:678 (2) - http://puu.sh/6g9A 这样?
00:34:358 (2) - 1 gird up
01:02:198 (3) - 换成一个circle?
01:26:198 (4) - 好像太flat了一点._.
总体给我的感觉就是一直在顺时针绕圈,可以多一点变化?

[王长喜神mapper]
01:16:598 (2,3) - 向下错开来一点点?
音效很好ww
不过就是最后的fin音感觉很不和谐;_;

[KPY]
00:27:158 (3) - 有点丑;_;
01:22:358 (3) - slider声音轻的有点突然
02:15:158 (1,2,3,4) - 突然没有鼓点了有点奇怪
fin音同wcx

[Collab]
01:29:078 (5) - nazi, 左移


其他没啥问题的感觉
> <
Topic Starter
Nymph

Megurine Luka wrote:

:roll: 晚了不好意思,自古红蓝咳咳咳

[General]
应该,大概,没有
除了collab里标注名字的图片略小,字体略不清晰以外,建议字体描边加粗,投影的扩散减小 ..我只是想让名片存在感变低..如果可以的话 我想再小点的..

[Easy]

00:26:678 (2) - http://puu.sh/6g9A 这样?
00:34:358 (2) - 1 gird up 还好啦
01:02:198 (3) - 换成一个circle?
01:26:198 (4) - 好像太flat了一点._. ._.
总体给我的感觉就是一直在顺时针绕圈,可以多一点变化?= =新人不挑剔这些的

[王长喜神mapper]
01:16:598 (2,3) - 向下错开来一点点?
音效很好ww
不过就是最后的fin音感觉很不和谐;_;

[KPY]
00:27:158 (3) - 有点丑;_;
01:22:358 (3) - slider声音轻的有点突然
02:15:158 (1,2,3,4) - 突然没有鼓点了有点奇怪
fin音同wcx

[Collab]
01:29:078 (5) - nazi, 左移 。。。把4右移做对称好了


其他没啥问题的感觉
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液 谢LUKA姐~
Anshi_old
后排围观。。 红蓝最喜欢了
Breeze

General

  1. 你文件夹里有2个osb文件,删掉Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_),osb
  2. Title不是And I'm Home? wiki上查到是大写的 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eri_Kitamura, 不过E姐之前rank的这歌是小写的, 谁知道呢...

SB

  1. 实际上Ring01和Ring02只要一个灰度的图片就够了 (同理bule和red其实也只要一个灰度图片就可以的), 脚本可以改颜色的
    _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

    easing:【缓冲】
    0 - none【没有缓冲】
    1 - start fast and slow down【开始快结束慢】
    2 - start slow and speed up【开始慢结束快】
    starttime, endtime: 【开始,结束时间】
    r1, g1, b1: 启动时动画元件的颜色
    r2, g2, b2: 结束时动画元件的颜色
    下次可以试试, 这次不想改我倒是无所谓, 只是怕后面会有喷的

Easy

  1. 00:39:158 (5) - 这里不加finish?
  2. 01:07:958 (3) - ^, 如果要加的话去掉whistle更好
  3. 01:09:878 (4) - ^
  4. 01:11:798 (1) - finish?
  5. 01:44:438 (1) - 去whistle加finish?

wcx's Normal

  1. 00:34:598 (1) - 这个slider真心听着奇怪, 00:34:358开始, 同样地方结束感觉好得多
  2. 00:39:878 (1) - 这里听着也不怎么顺, 不如降低点音量, 比如降到30%左右?
  3. 00:57:158 (1), 00:59:078 (2) - ^
  4. 01:07:958 (1) - 去掉clap感觉更好, 单独的clap和finish混合听着也感觉很不顺
  5. 01:45:158 (1), 01:47:078 (2) - 降低音量?
  6. 02:02:438 (1), 02:04:358 (2) - ^
  7. 02:17:798 (1), 02:19:718 (2) - ^
  8. 02:31:238 (8) - 这里不加finish?

KPY

  1. HDR-1, 这个比后面那个星数更高的collab还高,真心略高了, 中间有些地方稍微掉1,2个或者slider掉尾很容易挂掉
  2. 00:29:558 (3) - 咦为什么这里finish, 听着挺奇怪的
  3. 00:31:478 (4) - 不如这里加finish, 音量40%左右
  4. 01:22:838 (3) - 这里你忘加clap了吧
  5. 01:48:998 (5) - 这个重叠略难读, 不知道是不是只有我这么觉得
  6. 02:30:038 (2), 02:30:998 (2) - spacing略远了
  7. 没break么?(・∀・)

Collab

  1. 作为最难难度, 不AR+1么? AR8我测试ACC会高很多lol, 当然可能只是我个人感觉
  2. 00:39:158 (1) - 不加finish? 感觉音量大的话减一些音量如何?
  3. 00:44:678 (2) - ^
  4. 01:01:958 (4) - ^
  5. 01:11:798 (1) - ^
  6. 01:49:958 (4) - ^
  7. 01:54:038 (1) - 这里取消New combo吧, 前面那单独一个combo看着挺奇怪的
  8. 02:16:118 (3) - 这里忘加clap了么

Taiko

  1. 01:19:358 - 这里加个d如何
  2. 01:38:678 (359) - 改d, 这个D感觉有点突然
  3. 01:55:958 (424) - 改k, 也是感觉有点突然了

nice map, star

Breeze
SB漏写了点东西: 凡是Fcode后面有像0.001562476这种的最好都改成0
并未完全消失但是肉眼不可见的淡出会增加SB load, 小问题, 最好还是改改
no kudos
Topic Starter
Nymph

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. 你文件夹里有2个osb文件,删掉Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_),osb 啊 soga 看见了
    [attachment=1:efed7]0.jpg[/attachment:efed7]
  2. Title不是And I'm Home? wiki上查到是大写的 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eri_Kitamura, 不过E姐之前rank的这歌是小写的, 谁知道呢...= =为了避免麻烦呗 既然E姐已经RANK了 我就跟着用一样的名字好了
    [attachment=0:efed7]1.jpg[/attachment:efed7]

SB

  1. 实际上Ring01和Ring02只要一个灰度的图片就够了 (同理bule和red其实也只要一个灰度图片就可以的), 脚本可以改颜色的
    _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

    easing:【缓冲】
    0 - none【没有缓冲】
    1 - start fast and slow down【开始快结束慢】
    2 - start slow and speed up【开始慢结束快】
    starttime, endtime: 【开始,结束时间】
    r1, g1, b1: 启动时动画元件的颜色
    r2, g2, b2: 结束时动画元件的颜色
    下次可以试试, 这次不想改我倒是无所谓, 只是怕后面会有喷的这个前几天膜姐说了我才知道。。不过还是试用过 下次再用好了

Easy

  1. 00:39:158 (5) - 这里不加finish?
  2. 01:07:958 (3) - ^, 如果要加的话去掉whistle更好这样感觉有些乱啦 我更喜欢135W
  3. 01:09:878 (4) - ^
  4. 01:11:798 (1) - finish?
  5. 01:44:438 (1) - 去whistle加finish?

Collab

  1. 作为最难难度, 不AR+1么? AR8我测试ACC会高很多lol, 当然可能只是我个人感觉确实。。AR8好打点
  2. 00:39:158 (1) - 不加finish? 感觉音量大的话减一些音量如何?嗯 减音量加一个好了
  3. 00:44:678 (2) - ^
  4. 01:01:958 (4) - ^
  5. 01:11:798 (1) - ^
  6. 01:49:958 (4) - ^加了1个..妹控的部分他不想加 就保持这样吧
  7. 01:54:038 (1) - 这里取消New combo吧, 前面那单独一个combo看着挺奇怪的嗯 弄掉了
  8. 02:16:118 (3) - 这里忘加clap了么忘了。。

nice map, star
谢了清风~坐等WCX和KPY回复
Topic Starter
Nymph

Breeze wrote:

SB漏写了点东西: 凡是Fcode后面有像0.001562476这种的最好都改成0
并未完全消失但是肉眼不可见的淡出会增加SB load, 小问题, 最好还是改改
no kudos
啊 这样 我看看
wcx19911123

Breeze wrote:

wcx's Normal

  1. 00:34:598 (1) - 这个slider真心听着奇怪, 00:34:358开始, 同样地方结束感觉好得多
    this slider is following vocal , I think it is fine
  2. 00:39:878 (1) - 这里听着也不怎么顺, 不如降低点音量, 比如降到30%左右?
    don't know witch object you pointed out... if you mean the claps , they sound well to me 0.0
  3. 00:57:158 (1), 00:59:078 (2) - ^ ^
  4. 01:07:958 (1) - 去掉clap感觉更好, 单独的clap和finish混合听着也感觉很不顺
    seems kinda odd , but I tried remove the clap , it sound empty here , so I keep it for now
  5. 01:45:158 (1), 01:47:078 (2) - 降低音量?
  6. 02:02:438 (1), 02:04:358 (2) - ^
  7. 02:17:798 (1), 02:19:718 (2) - ^
    uh.. I think this claps are fine.. they are just a bit louder than the music and not noisy..
  8. 02:31:238 (8) - 这里不加finish?
    too noisy if add finish here , so I add a volume down finish here
Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph) [wcx's Normal].osu
kanpakyin

Breeze wrote:

KPY

  1. HDR-1, 这个比后面那个星数更高的collab还高,真心略高了, 中间有些地方稍微掉1,2个或者slider掉尾很容易挂掉 //Fixed sth.
  2. 00:29:558 (3) - 咦为什么这里finish, 听着挺奇怪的 //晤操作
  3. 00:31:478 (4) - 不如这里加finish, 音量40%左右 //可
  4. 01:22:838 (3) - 这里你忘加clap了吧 //恩..
  5. 01:48:998 (5) - 这个重叠略难读, 不知道是不是只有我这么觉得 //還好啊...
  6. 02:30:038 (2), 02:30:998 (2) - spacing略远了 //現在1/4 跳很正常..
  7. 没break么?(・∀・) //大丈夫!

Taiko

  1. 01:19:358 - 这里加个d如何
  2. 01:38:678 (359) - 改d, 这个D感觉有点突然 //在遊戲裏面還好..
  3. 01:55:958 (424) - 改k, 也是感觉有点突然了//大kat是會比較好聽的..這個diff也不算難,所以是acceptable的!
Here then.

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph) [KPY].osu

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph) [Taiko].osu
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested by Nymph~

general issue:

Music is quite loud and covered the drum sound. Try to make it louder.

Suggestions:

00:02:678 - a d sound is clearly heard in the music so d here
01:11:558 - kdk k D seems nice?
01:56:918 - d would fit the vocal better?
02:31:358 - kddk sounds more smoothly to the coming patterns

well made one I don't see any big problem [and due to the regular k placement lol]

8.5/10, don't need kd
KayeSara
奉命回帖
baka‘s taiko 毫无mod可言 :?
kanpakyin

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by Nymph~

general issue:

Music is quite loud and covered the drum sound. Try to make it louder.

Suggestions:

00:02:678 - a d sound is clearly heard in the music so d here //ok.
01:11:558 - kdk k D seems nice? //I still thing d is much better.
01:56:918 - d would fit the vocal better? //k
02:31:358 - kddk sounds more smoothly to the coming patterns //No sorry.
Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph) [Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Nymph
all updated~
wmfchris

kanpakyin wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by Nymph~

general issue:

Music is quite loud and covered the drum sound. Try to make it louder.

Suggestions:

00:02:678 - a d sound is clearly heard in the music so d here //ok.
01:11:558 - kdk k D seems nice? //I still thing d is much better.
01:56:918 - d would fit the vocal better? //k
02:31:358 - kddk sounds more smoothly to the coming patterns //No sorry.
think, bakakpy
Topic Starter
Nymph
噗 bakakpy 拼写错误.....
Breeze
我觉得还是有必要把SB修一下
换成灰度图片可以节约50kb大小, 还是不少了
不用你自己做我帮你调整好了
下载后放进文件夹里,然后把Blue, Red, Ring01, Ring02都可以删掉了
如果都颜色还不太满意可以再自己改下代码
我都写在对应元件代码的第一行的
比如ring的
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\Ring.png",320,240
C,0,143798,144756,255,0,255
M,0,143796,,213,294
F,0,143796,143916,0.312,0.614
S,0,143796,143916,0.344,0.521
F,0,143916,144756,0.614,0
S,0,143916,144756,0.521,0.6719998
把红色那部分改成你想要的颜色RGB值就行, 我是用PS习惯吸取的你原来的颜色来写的代码, 不过还是会有些偏差

弄完这个我就可以泡了
SPOILER
ATTACH[Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph).osb]


EDIT: SB fixed, then I have no problem with bubble this map



Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph).osb
Topic Starter
Nymph
sb fixed~ updated~

(话说这效果真是一样.... 研究一下膜姐的代码好了
Kotone
lol nothing here
btw nice map
Shiki
ignore this plz <(_ _)>

nice map~
narakucrimson
Ok, since the bubble count is sooo big, I'm starting to check some bubbles.
Btw this image was awesome. Such a pity that you didn't use it for the bg:

[General]
  1. Offset should be 758, since that's where the music starts, and the pulses in the menu have to follow it from there.
  2. As for title, the name should be "And I'm home", with uppercase "A" - that's what Mal.net says, so correct me if I'm wrong.
    If you have a source of more trust to confirm your title, please add it to your response to this post.

    Ok, let's keep it the same as the ranked version.
Since that's enough reason to pop this, I'll just say something REALLY nazi, please don't hate me ~ :3

[Easy]
  1. 02:27:638 (4) - This being here makes the spacing a little inconsistent in the combo. Move it one grid down.
I'm popping this for now, just fix that and I'll rebubble.
Topic Starter
Nymph

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok, since the bubble count is sooo big, I'm starting to check some bubbles.
Btw this image was awesome. Such a pity that you didn't use it for the bg:
lol actually I like mine better~

[General]
  1. Offset should be 758, since that's where the music starts, and the pulses in the menu have to follow it from there. fixed!
  2. As for title, the name should be "And I'm home", with uppercase "A" - that's what Mal.net says, so correct me if I'm wrong.
    actually I think keeping the same title as the ranked map is fine~
    If you have a source of more trust to confirm your title, please add it to your response to this post.

    Ok, let's keep it the same as the ranked version.
Since that's enough reason to pop this, I'll just say something REALLY nazi, please don't hate me ~ :3

[Easy]
  1. 02:27:638 (4) - This being here makes the spacing a little inconsistent in the combo. Move it one grid down.
nice catch! fixed!

I'm popping this for now, just fix that and I'll rebubble.

thanks~
narakucrimson
Ok then, after a quick check:

Rebubbled~
Topic Starter
Nymph

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok then, after a quick check:

Rebubbled~
thanks naraku~
Sun Rainbow
要到什么时候才可以RANK呢???等不住等不住了啦!!!
Sun Rainbow

JoJo wrote:

穷得叮当响=。= 于是只能先占着茅坑不扔星了。。 穷得叮当响=。= 我也是呢……
喔,差点忘了=。= 膜拜下妮姆芙GOD MAPPER >///////////<
我也穷,不然我多投几颗星星下去~
妮姆芙妮姆芙妮姆芙妮姆芙妮姆芙~
Megurine Luka
艹怎么还没rank...
Sun Rainbow
等不及了啊!!!!
eveless
about the title, the correct one is and I'm home (I have watched ep9 again...)

so my version is wrong.
Breeze

goodbye wrote:

about the title, the correct one is and I'm home (I have watched ep9 again...)

so my version is wrong.
Nymph
If you have fixed title, feel free to call me back for a re-bubble
Topic Starter
Nymph
still not sure....cuz narakucrimson gave a different title.
so keeping current title I think.
eveless

Nymph wrote:

still not sure....cuz narakucrimson gave a different title.
so keeping current title I think.



wiki is wrong
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks E姐~ I will fix the title later.
Andrea
[Collab]

00:47:078 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these notes, they don't follow anything and this is also considered overmapping to me.
01:09:518 (1) - This should start on the next tick.
01:17:078 (1,2) - Kinda unexpected jump.


Also yeah, don't forget to change the title.
Topic Starter
Nymph

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Collab]

00:47:078 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these notes, they don't follow anything and this is also considered overmapping to me.
01:09:518 (1) - This should start on the next tick. fixed
01:17:078 (1,2) - Kinda unexpected jump.[/color] move them nearer then~

Also yeah, don't forget to change the title. title changed~
thanks Andrea~
Andrea
Looks good now.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks Andrea TvT~
Kawayi Rika
一个个RANK 让我新手围观 T_T

快教我RANK 吧 ~

Congratulations ~ :)
Megurine Luka

Kawayi Rika wrote:

一个个RANK 让我新手围观 T_T

快教我RANK 吧 ~

Congratulations ~ :)
Colin Hou
果然2012要来了(抖
wcx19911123
我恨妮姆芙神mapper
Kotone
Congratz baka
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks mina~
Anshi_old
恭喜啊 0 0 :)
JoJo
这不科学!! @ @
S h i o n

JoJo wrote:

这不科学!! @ @
KayeSara

JoJo wrote:

这不科学!! @ @
明明感觉昨天才写的Happy Ranking >_>
Topic Starter
Nymph
楼上的笨蛋们……
Breeze
卧槽瞎, 你妹夫
好基情
Topic Starter
Nymph
……微风你节操掉了一地
hoLysoup
又一張~!!
快教我!
xxdeathx
this song is so sweet and sad ;) ;(

nymph from heaven's lost property?
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