pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

02:10:358 (2) - whistle on start? clap is enough for me
02:12:278 (4,6) - ^
02:24:758 - kiai toggle should be here owo where is my kiai line..

wcx's Normal:

-tick rate 1?

01:36:758 (4) - new combo
02:24:758 (4) - ^

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3)
01:36:758 (4) - new combo

Collab:

01:29:558 - add note? not necessary I think
01:42:998 (2) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? this is on purpose

Taiko: Fine

Nice map~ -w-

SamiPale wrote:

Hello, request from Mei_coN
以下是我的意见，歌词部分是我觉得必须改的

[Easy]
01:15:638(1) - spinner有点别扭，换成别的或者延长到下小节第一拍
高难都有人一起collab了做低难认真点嘛 X，这个还好吧..还是不改了 认真点么..我有苦说不出啊

[KPY]
S:C2大声点

[Collab]
00:16:118 to 00:27:638 - 建议将这里每小节的第三拍取消掉，一般来说一三拍clap都是为了推向高潮而用的，这里是个过渡期所以不建议使用（而且背景音24拍也有的较小声的类似鼓点音）第二次被这么吐槽了 好吧我弄掉
01:00:758(1) - clap? OK
01:07:958(5,6) - 觉得这里default finish效果要比clap舒服，clap换成finish然后在(5)的尾巴加个clap同意
02:00:278(T) - 意义不明的降音量？要降的话还是多几条线渐降比较好忘了怎么出的错啦 我好像是有单独下线减FINISH音的怎么都没了
02:23:558(7) - remove clap? X，这个CLAP感觉挺必要

[Lyric]
由于日本汉字基本没简体字，所以下面涉及到简体转繁体的建议改回去，假名汉字的互换就随意了
11.png 錆付いた心 音も无い世界 --> 錆びついた心 音もない世界
16.png 一人っきりで泣く后ろ姿 --> ひとりきりで泣く後ろ姿
34.png 35.png 冗談みたい / な毎日 <--这样分割比较好，みたい是一个完整的助动词
42.png 梦に落ちるの --> 夢に落ちるの
43.png 44.png 第二句的「すぐに」唱的时候是在第一句显示的时间里的，建议改到43.png中
46.png 二人 --> ふたり
51.png 无邪気な顔 --> 無邪気な顔
74.png 思いを残するの --> 思いを残すの (残す是五段动词没有サ变动词的原型)

参考用booklet http://puu.sh/5iGy

[StoryBoard]
Foreground sb\lyric\712.png 目测没fade效果,move效果也出错了 基本全重制了

总体氛围营造得很不错，star

xykbear wrote:

《论尼姆芙和王长喜》
AoI渣电脑表示SB载入其卡无比啊～
个人意见：osb文件里的数值最好整理一下，小数点后面太多位了 ..不会弄 有区别吗= =

[Collab]
00:16:118 (1) - 感觉用finish效果更好 2个FINISH不太好了
00:26:678 (5) - 折返的锚点上移一格，然后曲线锚点左移一格 哎好吧
00:31:478 (10) - 右移一格嗯
00:38:678 (7,1) - 上移+左移一格嗯
00:52:118 (11) - 最后一个锚点下移两格
02:12:038 (2) - 最后一个锚点下移一格
02:33:398 (3) - 左移一格 这几个没区别啦= =不要了

[easy]
00:22:838 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish
00:38:198 (5) - ^
01:28:118 (5) - ^
01:44:438 (1) - 最开始加finish 没想加那么多的..
02:24:758 (1,2,3,4) - 每个白线上都加finish 已经有FINISH了吧
02:37:238 (3) - 去掉这个点，从02:36:998开始做一个1/2往返滑条 不要把 我在跟鼓点 这里变VOCAL会很笨

·最后膜拜各位神mapper，中秋节快乐(●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

pieguy1372 wrote:

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3) //no
01:36:758 (4) - new combo //k

SamiPale wrote:

[KPY]
S:C2大声点 //現在很ok阿.

xykbear wrote:

[KPY]
将难度名改成“KPY's Hard”，与前面的保持一致 //為甚麼不考慮於後面一致?難道collab可以說成Insane's collab?
00:18:758 (2) - 第三个锚点右移+上移一格 沒開grid
00:21:398 (4) - new combo,为了把来回跳进行区分开来 //可
00:22:598 (1) - 是不是没开GS？直线不水平了 一直沒開
01:17:318 (1) - 将折返上的finish改到开头的红线上，曲子背景音的敲锣是在这个位置的 可
01:29:078 (3) - finish //X
02:01:718 (4) - finish //X

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

kanpakyin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

Didn't! I have already told Nymph_ to fix something via tencent QQ

Kawayi Rika wrote:

神MAPPER Nymph_ 也做这个曲子了啊~膜拜一下~

一些小建议~~


[Collab]

00:27:638 (1) - Start point add finish. didn't sound good for me
00:38:918 (8) - Overlap here? 00:39:158 (1) it is on purpose, I am pretty sure
00:54:998 (3,5,1) - add finish.
01:25:238 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:32:918 (3) - ^ I think maybe too loud.


[wcx]

00:27:638 (5) - add finish.
02:00:278 (4,5,6) - ^
02:01:718 (1) - Start point Remove finish.
02:15:638 (6,7,8,1) - With the above.

nice job give star~

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
一些建議:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
控制一下combo,最好3-5...在easy里弄6或者8的combo很奇怪的 = =还好啦

[wcx's Normal]
00:24:278 (x) - add a note with clap.
最好也控制下combo.

[KPY]
01:17:318 (1) - 這之后拉個spinner會比較好
02:29:558 (1,2) - finish怎麼沒有了?建議補上
02:37:958 (7) - 這之后像easy,normal那樣拉個spinner做結尾會比較好

[Collab]
00:25:718 (3) - 這箭頭感覺有點遮啊,換個方向吧 我觉得还行啊 完全没读图障碍
00:56:438 (3,4,5) - 我覺得(4,5)沒有被覆蓋得很好确实呢 弄了
00:58:118 (x) - 加個note?不是很乐意
00:58:358 (T) - 這后面的4根綠線貌似都沒用嗯 以前换音效分不清了
01:02:198 (5,6,7) - 我覺得(6,7)沒有被覆蓋得很好嗯 弄了
01:09:518 (1) - 應該是后面的紅線開始我觉得也是 但是玩起来蓝线舒服
01:29:558 (x) - 加個有clap的note?嗯 我一直这么想 不管COLLAB同意不同意了。。

禮物
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Rukarioman wrote:

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable. Alright.k
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that? Change a bit about the combo and it's more easy to read.
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them. I want to follow the SB colour here.However too many modder mention about this so I decided to fix it.

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
01:19:718 - Add in a break here or add some mapping. A little bit too long no mapping. add a break here

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable.
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that?
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them.

Collab:
- Same about Tick Rate as above.
00:37:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Those two triples and that stream don't really fit imo. I don't hear anything in the music that calls for this. Meicon changed here to 4 notes and sliders
00:47:078 (1,2,3,4) - These notes placed in a place where no music actually plays seems a bit odd. Maybe remove them? Meicon said it is ok.
00:55:478 (5,1) - Man this anti-jump felt really weird imo. move the notes further then
01:26:198 (3) - Imo this would flow better if it was horizontally flipped. K

Megurine Luka wrote:

:roll: 晚了不好意思，自古红蓝咳咳咳

[General]
应该，大概，没有
除了collab里标注名字的图片略小，字体略不清晰以外，建议字体描边加粗，投影的扩散减小 ..我只是想让名片存在感变低..如果可以的话 我想再小点的..

[Easy]

00:26:678 (2) - http://puu.sh/6g9A 这样？
00:34:358 (2) - 1 gird up 还好啦
01:02:198 (3) - 换成一个circle？嗯
01:26:198 (4) - 好像太flat了一点._. ._.
总体给我的感觉就是一直在顺时针绕圈，可以多一点变化？= =新人不挑剔这些的

[王长喜神mapper]
01:16:598 (2,3) - 向下错开来一点点？
音效很好ww
不过就是最后的fin音感觉很不和谐;_;

[KPY]
00:27:158 (3) - 有点丑;_;
01:22:358 (3) - slider声音轻的有点突然
02:15:158 (1,2,3,4) - 突然没有鼓点了有点奇怪
fin音同wcx

[Collab]
01:29:078 (5) - nazi, 左移 。。。把4右移做对称好了


其他没啥问题的感觉
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Breeze wrote:

General

1. 你文件夹里有2个osb文件,删掉Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_),osb 啊 soga 看见了
   [attachment=1:efed7]0.jpg[/attachment:efed7]
2. Title不是And I'm Home? wiki上查到是大写的 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eri_Kitamura, 不过E姐之前rank的这歌是小写的, 谁知道呢...= =为了避免麻烦呗 既然E姐已经RANK了 我就跟着用一样的名字好了
   [attachment=0:efed7]1.jpg[/attachment:efed7]

SB

1. 实际上Ring01和Ring02只要一个灰度的图片就够了 (同理bule和red其实也只要一个灰度图片就可以的), 脚本可以改颜色的
   

   _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

   
   easing:【缓冲】
   0 - none【没有缓冲】
   1 - start fast and slow down【开始快结束慢】
   2 - start slow and speed up【开始慢结束快】
   starttime, endtime: 【开始,结束时间】
   r1, g1, b1: 启动时动画元件的颜色
   r2, g2, b2: 结束时动画元件的颜色
   下次可以试试, 这次不想改我倒是无所谓, 只是怕后面会有喷的这个前几天膜姐说了我才知道。。不过还是试用过 下次再用好了

Easy

1. 00:39:158 (5) - 这里不加finish?
2. 01:07:958 (3) - ^, 如果要加的话去掉whistle更好这样感觉有些乱啦 我更喜欢135W
3. 01:09:878 (4) - ^
4. 01:11:798 (1) - finish?
5. 01:44:438 (1) - 去whistle加finish?嗯

Collab

1. 作为最难难度, 不AR+1么? AR8我测试ACC会高很多lol, 当然可能只是我个人感觉确实。。AR8好打点
2. 00:39:158 (1) - 不加finish? 感觉音量大的话减一些音量如何?嗯 减音量加一个好了
3. 00:44:678 (2) - ^
4. 01:01:958 (4) - ^
5. 01:11:798 (1) - ^
6. 01:49:958 (4) - ^加了1个..妹控的部分他不想加 就保持这样吧
7. 01:54:038 (1) - 这里取消New combo吧, 前面那单独一个combo看着挺奇怪的嗯 弄掉了
8. 02:16:118 (3) - 这里忘加clap了么忘了。。

nice map, star

Breeze wrote:

SB漏写了点东西: 凡是Fcode后面有像0.001562476这种的最好都改成0
并未完全消失但是肉眼不可见的淡出会增加SB load, 小问题, 最好还是改改
no kudos

Breeze wrote:

wcx's Normal

1. 00:34:598 (1) - 这个slider真心听着奇怪, 00:34:358开始, 同样地方结束感觉好得多
   this slider is following vocal , I think it is fine
2. 00:39:878 (1) - 这里听着也不怎么顺, 不如降低点音量, 比如降到30%左右?
   don't know witch object you pointed out... if you mean the claps , they sound well to me 0.0
3. 00:57:158 (1), 00:59:078 (2) - ^ ^
4. 01:07:958 (1) - 去掉clap感觉更好, 单独的clap和finish混合听着也感觉很不顺
   seems kinda odd , but I tried remove the clap , it sound empty here , so I keep it for now
5. 01:45:158 (1), 01:47:078 (2) - 降低音量?
6. 02:02:438 (1), 02:04:358 (2) - ^
7. 02:17:798 (1), 02:19:718 (2) - ^
   uh.. I think this claps are fine.. they are just a bit louder than the music and not noisy..
8. 02:31:238 (8) - 这里不加finish?
   too noisy if add finish here , so I add a volume down finish here

Breeze wrote:

KPY

1. HDR-1, 这个比后面那个星数更高的collab还高,真心略高了, 中间有些地方稍微掉1,2个或者slider掉尾很容易挂掉 //Fixed sth.
2. 00:29:558 (3) - 咦为什么这里finish, 听着挺奇怪的 //晤操作
3. 00:31:478 (4) - 不如这里加finish, 音量40%左右 //可
4. 01:22:838 (3) - 这里你忘加clap了吧 //恩..
5. 01:48:998 (5) - 这个重叠略难读, 不知道是不是只有我这么觉得 //還好啊...
6. 02:30:038 (2), 02:30:998 (2) - spacing略远了 //現在1/4 跳很正常..
7. 没break么?(・∀・) //大丈夫!

Taiko

1. 01:19:358 - 这里加个d如何
2. 01:38:678 (359) - 改d, 这个D感觉有点突然 //在遊戲裏面還好..
3. 01:55:958 (424) - 改k, 也是感觉有点突然了//大kat是會比較好聽的..這個diff也不算難,所以是acceptable的!

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by Nymph~

general issue:

Music is quite loud and covered the drum sound. Try to make it louder.

Suggestions:

00:02:678 - a d sound is clearly heard in the music so d here //ok.
01:11:558 - kdk k D seems nice? //I still thing d is much better.
01:56:918 - d would fit the vocal better? //k
02:31:358 - kddk sounds more smoothly to the coming patterns //No sorry.

kanpakyin wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by Nymph~

general issue:

Music is quite loud and covered the drum sound. Try to make it louder.

Suggestions:

00:02:678 - a d sound is clearly heard in the music so d here //ok.
01:11:558 - kdk k D seems nice? //I still thing d is much better.
01:56:918 - d would fit the vocal better? //k
02:31:358 - kddk sounds more smoothly to the coming patterns //No sorry.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\Ring.png",320,240
C,0,143798,144756,255,0,255
M,0,143796,,213,294
F,0,143796,143916,0.312,0.614
S,0,143796,143916,0.344,0.521
F,0,143916,144756,0.614,0
S,0,143916,144756,0.521,0.6719998

SPOILER

ATTACH[Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph).osb]

SPOILER

1. Offset should be 758, since that's where the music starts, and the pulses in the menu have to follow it from there.
2. As for title, the name should be "And I'm home", with uppercase "A" - that's what Mal.net says, so correct me if I'm wrong.
   
   MAL.net

   
   If you have a source of more trust to confirm your title, please add it to your response to this post.
   Ok, let's keep it the same as the ranked version.

1. 02:27:638 (4) - This being here makes the spacing a little inconsistent in the combo. Move it one grid down.

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok, since the bubble count is sooo big, I'm starting to check some bubbles.
Btw this image was awesome. Such a pity that you didn't use it for the bg:

SPOILER

lol actually I like mine better~

[General]

1. Offset should be 758, since that's where the music starts, and the pulses in the menu have to follow it from there. fixed!
2. As for title, the name should be "And I'm home", with uppercase "A" - that's what Mal.net says, so correct me if I'm wrong.
   
   MAL.net

   
   actually I think keeping the same title as the ranked map is fine~
   If you have a source of more trust to confirm your title, please add it to your response to this post.
   Ok, let's keep it the same as the ranked version.

Since that's enough reason to pop this, I'll just say something REALLY nazi, please don't hate me ~ :3

[Easy]

1. 02:27:638 (4) - This being here makes the spacing a little inconsistent in the combo. Move it one grid down.

nice catch! fixed!

I'm popping this for now, just fix that and I'll rebubble.