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Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home

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Topic Starter
Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月5日 at 20:08:03

Artist: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura
Title: and I'm home
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: Nymph_ wowaka Kyouko Sakura Sayaka Miki Mei_coN wcx19911123 kanpakyin
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5527kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.87 stars, 356 notes)
  2. Easy (1.13 stars, 113 notes)
  3. KPY (4.77 stars, 358 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.92 stars, 597 notes)
  5. wcx's Normal (2.82 stars, 178 notes)
Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Nymph's 11th map~
and I'm Home by Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura~
from Puella Magi Madoka Magica~
SB by me: 100%
Collab by me and Mei_coN: 100%.
Easy by me: 100%.
Normal by wcx19911123: 100%.
KPY by kanpakyin: 100%.
Taiko by kanpakyin added.
Thanks for Breeze's sb help~
Mei_coN
沙发是我的
\妮姆芙/ \妮姆芙/ \妮姆芙/ \妮姆芙/
ArzatoRx
我好善良留沙发 :roll:

Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
Nymph
:| ...都是BAKA呢

SPOILER
字数补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁
subarasikibuta
不是吧……已经这么慢了……star(手机回字数真是太麻烦了……够了没……还没够……应该差不多了吧)
wcx19911123
沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢

guest mod is gogogo

[General]
tags : Mei_coN wcx19911123

[Collab]
00:17:076 - this clap is very odd imo , I perfer 24clap ._.
00:18:996 - ^ (ignored following same claps)
00:21:396 (3,1) - jump ?
00:38:916 (1) - http://puu.sh/52a2
00:46:116 (3,4,5) - timing section :
46116,-100,4,2,1,48,0,0
46356,-100,4,2,1,59,0,0
46596,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
47076,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
then delete 00:47:556 - this timing section
00:53:076 (2) - touch the bar
00:55:476 (5,1) - this spacing down is very odd and confusing
01:17:076 (1,2) - spacing smaller plz
01:28:956 - add note
01:51:396 - same as 00:46:116 (3,4,5)
01:59:556 - add note
02:09:276 - ^
02:23:556 - remove clap or volume down

here is my diff
pay attention to this : my diff is based on only this 2 hitsounds in the folder , you can use other hitsounds but don't affect my diff , I don't want to hear anything different in my diff which is using only the 2 hitsounds

Download: Aoi Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - And I'm Home (Nymph_) [wcx's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Nymph
.....................

手机党凑什么热闹...
Bad_Baka HT OwO
妮姆芙你这个傲娇S 才发现Q版的红毛和蓝毛旁边还会附属mapperID
Topic Starter
Nymph
自重你个魂淡 8-)

SPOILER
补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁
Bad_Baka HT OwO
一看这SB就知道是你做的···你的风格我太清楚了XDDDD
笨蛋妮姆芙XDDDD
JoJo
穷得叮当响=。= 于是只能先占着茅坑不扔星了。。

喔,差点忘了=。= 膜拜下妮姆芙GOD MAPPER >///////////<
Topic Starter
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢沙发呢

guest mod is gogogo

[General]
tags : Mei_coN wcx19911123 added

[Collab]
00:17:076 - this clap is very odd imo , I perfer 24clap ._.
00:18:996 - ^ (ignored following same claps) X
00:21:396 (3,1) - jump ? ok
00:38:916 (1) - http://puu.sh/52a2
00:46:116 (3,4,5) - timing section : agreed -10. last one didn't change.
46116,-100,4,2,1,48,0,0
46356,-100,4,2,1,59,0,0
46596,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
47076,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
then delete 00:47:556 - this timing section
00:53:076 (2) - touch the bar seems ok
00:55:476 (5,1) - this spacing down is very odd and confusing I don't think so
01:17:076 (1,2) - spacing smaller plz
01:28:956 - add note
01:51:396 - same as 00:46:116 (3,4,5) agreed. fixed.
01:59:556 - add note
02:09:276 - ^
02:23:556 - remove clap or volume down volumn down but still keep the clap, seems necessary

here is my diff
pay attention to this : my diff is based on only this 2 hitsounds in the folder , you can use other hitsounds but don't affect my diff , I don't want to hear anything different in my diff which is using only the 2 hitsounds
英语帝你好
kanpakyin
求Guest (OSU Taiko都可以)
這歌大愛,還有加 wowaka to tag
KayeSara

OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!
Topic Starter
Nymph

KayeSara wrote:


OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!
..........................................................................................
JoJo
Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper (趴

  • Red-You must fix it.
    Blue-You'd better to fix it.
    ●Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  • ●清风说StackLeniency要统一呢=。= 虽然我不是很确定~

    Breeze wrote:

    koubou的StackLeniency是0.3而其他2个难度是0.5,这是不允许的,请保持一致
[长喜神mapper早 0.0]
  • 等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@
    ●虽然不是很必要,但是和其他难度统一一下combo color?
    ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系?
    ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。
[KPY超级卖萌Hentai]
  • 乃用了5种不同速度的slider,而且你肯定不肯改,所以急需自重100次。
    ●01:11:798 (1) - KIAI在这里结束。
    ●02:26:558 (1,2) - (超级nazi)快点叠好点魂淡!!
    ●02:38:078 (x) - 不像其他难度加个spinner?
[妮姆芙姥爷与他的好基友]
  • Oh no... 356个note没有snap。= =
    ●01:02:558 (6,7) - 可以叠更好~
    ●01:11:798 (x) - KIAI在这里结束。
[Storyboard]
  • ●White.jpg分了好多代码写,其实完全可以写在一起=。=
    ●Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\lyric\53.png",320,240
    F,0,120276,120756,0,1
    M,0,120276,127956,195,309,254,309
    F,0,120756,127476,1
    F,0,127476,127956,1,0.00800003
你们都那么触让我这个渣滓情何以堪~ TwT Rebubbled! ★ミ
Topic Starter
Nymph

JoJo wrote:

Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper (趴 出门自重100次去= =

  • Red-You must fix it.
    Blue-You'd better to fix it.
    ●Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  • ●清风说StackLeniency要统一呢=。= 虽然我不是很确定~

    Breeze wrote:

    koubou的StackLeniency是0.3而其他2个难度是0.5,这是不允许的,请保持一致
鬼畜MAPPER KPY魂淡为什么你的重叠率是0.3...

[长喜神mapper早 0.0]
  • 等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@ 改了OFFSET忘RESNAP了...搞定
    ●虽然不是很必要,但是和其他难度统一一下combo color?
    ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系?
    ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。
[KPY超级卖萌Hentai]
  • 乃用了5种不同速度的slider,而且你肯定不肯改,所以急需自重100次。
    ●01:11:798 (1) - KIAI在这里结束。
    ●02:26:558 (1,2) - (超级nazi)快点叠好点魂淡!!
    ●02:38:078 (x) - 不像其他难度加个spinner?
[妮姆芙姥爷与他的好基友]
  • Oh no... 356个note没有snap。= =这个也忘了..
    ●01:02:558 (6,7) - 可以叠更好~ 拽了一下
    ●01:11:798 (x) - KIAI在这里结束。好吧
[Storyboard]
  • ●White.jpg分了好多代码写,其实完全可以写在一起=。= ...看不懂 一会问你..
    ●Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\lyric\53.png",320,240
    F,0,120276,120756,0,1
    M,0,120276,127956,195,309,254,309
    F,0,120756,127476,1
    F,0,127476,127956,1,0.00800003
你们都那么触让我这个渣滓情何以堪~ TwT Rebubbled! ★ミ
:|
kanpakyin
Post subject: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home

:|

will fix the mod and give you a Taiko diff later
Raging Bull
Weee. Just another annoying suggestion by me. Maybe instead of KPY, you can put what difficulty it is too? (KPY's Insane) ? That and it would look more consistent in your naming with wcx's normal.
Topic Starter
Nymph

Raging Bull wrote:

Weee. Just another annoying suggestion by me. Maybe instead of KPY, you can put what difficulty it is too? (KPY's Insane) ? That and it would look more consistent in your naming with wcx's normal.
Actually I have to say that KPY's diff is harder than a hard, but still not difficult as an insane. So I think it is fine.
Anyway KPY himself want this diff name, so I would like to keep it.
Thanks for suggestion!
Raging Bull
Oh okay then. Well then...Have a star. I bother you too much :3
Kanon
我发现我MOD速度有够慢的 :o
General
我觉得soft normal-hit和 soft whistle 声音降低一点比较好,因为这歌本身CLAP声很重,在加上自己加的hitsound, 歌本身听起来会有点混乱。

王长喜
你用来调节音量的绿线居然用了这么多,不蛋疼么
tick rate 2 就为了几个tick换CLAP 真的好么,要是我宁愿换排列,C1 Tick一直听着很蛋疼啊
combo colour跟其他diff统一。。
01:36:758 和后面这跟绿线 4%的音量差距没人能听出来吧
01:43:958 ^ 和后面2根
01:50:678 ^
02:15:636 (6) - new combo? 这里+的话 后面你自己看着改
其他没了,我就是来吐槽你这个神MAPPER的

KPY
soft whilstle听起来声音大了
Slider速度变化太多,超过3种,虽然我觉得只要玩起来没问题就好,但是
01:16:358 (1,1) - 这里我觉得效果不好,所以还是建议改掉
00:59:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里换成slider或者NOTE用相等的间距更好一点?因为我感觉这里的vocal不是很适合用这样的2个一堆的排列
01:22:358 (3,4,5) - 这里跳很容易打错节拍,我觉得这里不要放跳比较好?
01:36:038 (1,2,3) - ^
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - 这里不要spam new combo比较好,confusing
02:24:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议这里改掉,听起来爽,玩起来很不爽,一般打图遇到这样的排列我就直接傻了 好吧我弱
02:30:998 (2) - 开头 clap?
结尾不放个转盘么 嘛 这个可加可不加

collab
01:42:876 (2) - 这个不如去掉? 有点怪玩起来。。
02:07:238 这里很明显感觉缺了个音 +NOTE?
前面高潮部分放了不少3连 后面反倒没了?
02:24:758 这里开始学王长喜多放一些finish 难度在提高点我觉得比较好
这个diff我个人觉得是最好的 玩起来有点像死里路的图

kpy的diff是Hard的话。。为什么和collab的难度差不多 难度分布在调整下比较好

star KUDO白赚了 :( 拍飞~

EDIT : STACK 那个不用每个diff都一样。。我刚问人的
Topic Starter
Nymph

Raging Bull wrote:

Oh okay then. Well then...Have a star. I bother you too much :3
It is OK :P you are just giving suggestion you think it will helps, that is totally a good thing :3
and thanks for star~
kanpakyin
我首先說說,現在超過3種slider speed是可以的,原因自己看aha,而且市面上也有不少超過3種slider speed得作品,所以不改

Kanon wrote:

KPY
soft whilstle听起来声音大了 還好
01:16:358 (1,1) - 这里我觉得效果不好,所以还是建议改掉 這個還好啊,跟著音樂漸快
00:59:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里换成slider或者NOTE用相等的间距更好一点?因为我感觉这里的vocal不是很适合用这样的2个一堆的排列 個人持保留意見
01:22:358 (3,4,5) - 这里跳很容易打错节拍,我觉得这里不要放跳比较好?
01:36:038 (1,2,3) - ^ 這個不了..後面是鼓點,跳起來還好
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - 这里不要spam new combo比较好,confusing 不加才confused呢,顏色再跟SB.
02:24:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议这里改掉,听起来爽,玩起来很不爽,一般打图遇到这样的排列我就直接傻了 好吧我弱 你叒那你肯定打不到NR的圖,沒有明確的原因去修改,所以保留
02:30:998 (2) - 开头 clap?加了就難聽了
结尾不放个转盘么 嘛 这个可加可不加不放

kpy的diff是Hard的话。。为什么和collab的难度差不多 难度分布在调整下比较好 接近Insane的H
To bakaJo:Only fixed the nazi stuff

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_) [KPY].osu

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_) [Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Nymph

Kanon wrote:

我发现我MOD速度有够慢的 :o
General
我觉得soft normal-hit和 soft whistle 声音降低一点比较好,因为这歌本身CLAP声很重,在加上自己加的hitsound, 歌本身听起来会有点混乱。normal hit和whistle我个人觉得还好 clap声我倒是觉得很重..一直在种绿线砍CLAP的音量

王长喜
你用来调节音量的绿线居然用了这么多,不蛋疼么
tick rate 2 就为了几个tick换CLAP 真的好么,要是我宁愿换排列,C1 Tick一直听着很蛋疼啊
combo colour跟其他diff统一。。
01:36:758 和后面这跟绿线 4%的音量差距没人能听出来吧
01:43:958 ^ 和后面2根
01:50:678 ^
02:15:636 (6) - new combo? 这里+的话 后面你自己看着改
其他没了,我就是来吐槽你这个神MAPPER的

KPY
soft whilstle听起来声音大了
Slider速度变化太多,超过3种,虽然我觉得只要玩起来没问题就好,但是
01:16:358 (1,1) - 这里我觉得效果不好,所以还是建议改掉
00:59:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里换成slider或者NOTE用相等的间距更好一点?因为我感觉这里的vocal不是很适合用这样的2个一堆的排列
01:22:358 (3,4,5) - 这里跳很容易打错节拍,我觉得这里不要放跳比较好?
01:36:038 (1,2,3) - ^
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - 这里不要spam new combo比较好,confusing
02:24:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议这里改掉,听起来爽,玩起来很不爽,一般打图遇到这样的排列我就直接傻了 好吧我弱
02:30:998 (2) - 开头 clap?
结尾不放个转盘么 嘛 这个可加可不加

collab
01:42:876 (2) - 这个不如去掉? 有点怪玩起来。。嗯 好吧
02:07:238 这里很明显感觉缺了个音 +NOTE?等妹控看看
前面高潮部分放了不少3连 后面反倒没了?。。开始跳了
02:24:758 这里开始学王长喜多放一些finish 难度在提高点我觉得比较好这里全程白线CLAP 在氛围上我觉得还可以 长喜那我倒是觉得很吵.. 难度确实想提高过..但是我鬼畜不起来..(死
这个diff我个人觉得是最好的 玩起来有点像死里路的图

kpy的diff是Hard的话。。为什么和collab的难度差不多 难度分布在调整下比较好 反正2个都像HARD 就这样吧..

star KUDO白赚了 :( 拍飞~

EDIT : STACK 那个不用每个diff都一样。。我刚问人的 soga ROGER
JoJo
@kanpakyin
KIAI最好改一下,至少所有难度要统一,我听下来是比较赞同wcx的设定
Topic Starter
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

Subject: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home

JoJo wrote:

Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper妮姆芙

[长喜渣mapper早 0.0]
  • 等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@
    ●虽然不是很必要,但是和其他难度统一一下combo color?
    ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系?
    ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。
发pm前先膜拜下神mapper妮姆芙
后面两句我ign了,前面个两句你看着办0.0
叫你懒 我就贴出来 看你怎么办

后面两句吗 第一个0.75 SPACING 大丈夫
第二个BT我支持去掉 以保持SB亮度一致 后面的BT我也去掉了


EDIT: FIXED KPY'S KIAI TIME FROM JOJO'S MOD
KanaRin

KayeSara wrote:


OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!
Topic Starter
Nymph

KanaRin wrote:

KayeSara wrote:


OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!
..................................... 噗 都是BAKA呢
Raging Bull


Good map! Ranked! Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Nymph

Raging Bull wrote:



Good map! Ranked! Congratulations!

:(
Kotone
unranked because you are god mapper
my message is too long.
B r e e z e_old
hummmmmm Nice Map and Nice 基佬


RERANKED!!
Sun Rainbow
本来说我也要一个GEUST的,但是怕我自己技术不好,所以嘛……
Raging Bull
KPY:
01:57:878 (4,5,6,7) - This looks like one ugly overlap. Mind if you change it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/142014
02:29:558 (1,2) - ^ I would like it better if you stack slider ends together. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/142017
02:30:518 (1,2) - ^
Anyways no kds if Kanpakyin uses mod.
DeadAlready
:3 Current Priority: +7
所以說讓不會mod的我來扔第八顆星吧\:D/(被打)
Topic Starter
Nymph

quintitem wrote:

:3 Current Priority: +7
所以說讓不會mod的我來扔第八顆星吧\:D/(被打)
噗 五条姐激萌 ..
Magicphoenix
Wow !! ranked in 3 days >_< really fast
so jealous of Nymph_ .. congrats !!

(joke lol = = to make up for it, i will it mod later 8D )
pieguyn
Easy:

02:10:358 (2) - whistle on start?
02:12:278 (4,6) - ^
02:24:758 - kiai toggle should be here owo

wcx's Normal:

-tick rate 1?

01:36:758 (4) - new combo
02:24:758 (4) - ^

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3)
01:36:758 (4) - new combo

Collab:

01:29:558 - add note?
01:42:998 (2) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider?

Taiko: Fine

Nice map~ -w-
SamiPale
Hello, request from Mei_coN
以下是我的意见,歌词部分是我觉得必须改的

[Easy]
01:15:638(1) - spinner有点别扭,换成别的或者延长到下小节第一拍
高难都有人一起collab了做低难认真点嘛 :roll:

[KPY]
S:C2大声点

[Collab]
00:16:118 to 00:27:638 - 建议将这里每小节的第三拍取消掉,一般来说一三拍clap都是为了推向高潮而用的,这里是个过渡期所以不建议使用(而且背景音24拍也有的较小声的类似鼓点音)
01:00:758(1) - clap?
01:07:958(5,6) - 觉得这里default finish效果要比clap舒服,clap换成finish然后在(5)的尾巴加个clap
02:00:278(T) - 意义不明的降音量?要降的话还是多几条线渐降比较好
02:23:558(7) - remove clap?

[Lyric]
由于日本汉字基本没简体字,所以下面涉及到简体转繁体的建议改回去,假名汉字的互换就随意了
11.png 錆付いた心 音も无い世界 --> 錆びついた心 音もない世界
16.png 一人っきりで泣く后ろ姿 --> ひとりきりで泣く後ろ姿
34.png 35.png 冗談みたい / な毎日 <--这样分割比较好,みたい是一个完整的助动词
42.png 梦に落ちるの --> 夢に落ちるの
43.png 44.png 第二句的「すぐに」唱的时候是在第一句显示的时间里的,建议改到43.png中
46.png 二人 --> ふたり
51.png 无邪気な顔 --> 無邪気な顔
74.png 思いを残するの --> 思いを残すの (残す是五段动词没有サ变动词的原型)

参考用booklet http://puu.sh/5iGy

[StoryBoard]
Foreground sb\lyric\712.png 目测没fade效果,move效果也出错了

总体氛围营造得很不错,star
Topic Starter
Nymph

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

02:10:358 (2) - whistle on start? clap is enough for me
02:12:278 (4,6) - ^
02:24:758 - kiai toggle should be here owo :o where is my kiai line..

wcx's Normal:

-tick rate 1?

01:36:758 (4) - new combo
02:24:758 (4) - ^

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3)
01:36:758 (4) - new combo

Collab:

01:29:558 - add note? not necessary I think
01:42:998 (2) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? this is on purpose

Taiko: Fine

Nice map~ -w-
thanks~

SamiPale wrote:

Hello, request from Mei_coN
以下是我的意见,歌词部分是我觉得必须改的

[Easy]
01:15:638(1) - spinner有点别扭,换成别的或者延长到下小节第一拍
高难都有人一起collab了做低难认真点嘛 :roll: X,这个还好吧..还是不改了 认真点么..我有苦说不出啊

[KPY]
S:C2大声点

[Collab]
00:16:118 to 00:27:638 - 建议将这里每小节的第三拍取消掉,一般来说一三拍clap都是为了推向高潮而用的,这里是个过渡期所以不建议使用(而且背景音24拍也有的较小声的类似鼓点音)第二次被这么吐槽了 好吧我弄掉
01:00:758(1) - clap? OK
01:07:958(5,6) - 觉得这里default finish效果要比clap舒服,clap换成finish然后在(5)的尾巴加个clap同意
02:00:278(T) - 意义不明的降音量?要降的话还是多几条线渐降比较好忘了怎么出的错啦 我好像是有单独下线减FINISH音的怎么都没了
02:23:558(7) - remove clap? X,这个CLAP感觉挺必要

[Lyric]
由于日本汉字基本没简体字,所以下面涉及到简体转繁体的建议改回去,假名汉字的互换就随意了
11.png 錆付いた心 音も无い世界 --> 錆びついた心 音もない世界
16.png 一人っきりで泣く后ろ姿 --> ひとりきりで泣く後ろ姿
34.png 35.png 冗談みたい / な毎日 <--这样分割比较好,みたい是一个完整的助动词
42.png 梦に落ちるの --> 夢に落ちるの
43.png 44.png 第二句的「すぐに」唱的时候是在第一句显示的时间里的,建议改到43.png中
46.png 二人 --> ふたり
51.png 无邪気な顔 --> 無邪気な顔
74.png 思いを残するの --> 思いを残すの (残す是五段动词没有サ变动词的原型)

参考用booklet http://puu.sh/5iGy

[StoryBoard]
Foreground sb\lyric\712.png 目测没fade效果,move效果也出错了 基本全重制了

总体氛围营造得很不错,star

谢了~ :P
AoiX
《论尼姆芙和王长喜》
AoI渣电脑表示SB载入其卡无比啊~
个人意见:osb文件里的数值最好整理一下,小数点后面太多位了

[Collab]
00:16:118 (1) - 感觉用finish效果更好
00:26:678 (5) - 折返的锚点上移一格,然后曲线锚点左移一格
00:31:478 (10) - 右移一格
00:38:678 (7,1) - 上移+左移一格
00:52:118 (11) - 最后一个锚点下移两格
02:12:038 (2) - 最后一个锚点下移一格
02:33:398 (3) - 左移一格

[KPY]
将难度名改成“KPY's Hard”,与前面的保持一致
00:18:758 (2) - 第三个锚点右移+上移一格
00:21:398 (4) - new combo,为了把来回跳进行区分开来
00:22:598 (1) - 是不是没开GS?直线不水平了
01:17:318 (1) - 将折返上的finish改到开头的红线上,曲子背景音的敲锣是在这个位置的
01:29:078 (3) - finish
02:01:718 (4) - finish

[王长喜]
00:19:958 (1) - 第三个锚点上移一格
//种草本领还是一流啊~

[easy]
00:22:838 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish
00:38:198 (5) - ^
01:28:118 (5) - ^
01:44:438 (1) - 最开始加finish
02:24:758 (1,2,3,4) - 每个白线上都加finish
02:37:238 (3) - 去掉这个点,从02:36:998开始做一个1/2往返滑条

·最后膜拜各位神mapper,中秋节快乐(●'◡'●)ノ♥
Topic Starter
Nymph

xykbear wrote:

《论尼姆芙和王长喜》
AoI渣电脑表示SB载入其卡无比啊~
个人意见:osb文件里的数值最好整理一下,小数点后面太多位了 ..不会弄 有区别吗= =

[Collab]
00:16:118 (1) - 感觉用finish效果更好 2个FINISH不太好了
00:26:678 (5) - 折返的锚点上移一格,然后曲线锚点左移一格 哎好吧
00:31:478 (10) - 右移一格
00:38:678 (7,1) - 上移+左移一格
00:52:118 (11) - 最后一个锚点下移两格
02:12:038 (2) - 最后一个锚点下移一格
02:33:398 (3) - 左移一格 这几个没区别啦= =不要了

[easy]
00:22:838 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish
00:38:198 (5) - ^
01:28:118 (5) - ^
01:44:438 (1) - 最开始加finish 没想加那么多的..
02:24:758 (1,2,3,4) - 每个白线上都加finish 已经有FINISH了吧
02:37:238 (3) - 去掉这个点,从02:36:998开始做一个1/2往返滑条 不要把 我在跟鼓点 这里变VOCAL会很笨

·最后膜拜各位神mapper,中秋节快乐(●'◡'●)ノ♥
KUDO当月饼给你..不要说我小气
kanpakyin

pieguy1372 wrote:

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3) //no
01:36:758 (4) - new combo //k

SamiPale wrote:

[KPY]
S:C2大声点 //現在很ok阿.

xykbear wrote:

[KPY]
将难度名改成“KPY's Hard”,与前面的保持一致 //為甚麼不考慮於後面一致?難道collab可以說成Insane's collab?
00:18:758 (2) - 第三个锚点右移+上移一格 沒開grid
00:21:398 (4) - new combo,为了把来回跳进行区分开来 //可
00:22:598 (1) - 是不是没开GS?直线不水平了 一直沒開
01:17:318 (1) - 将折返上的finish改到开头的红线上,曲子背景音的敲锣是在这个位置的
01:29:078 (3) - finish //X
02:01:718 (4) - finish //X
O/

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_) [KPY].osu
Raging Bull
:( You skipped mine.

Too short
My message is too short.
kanpakyin

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short
My message is too short.
Didn't! I have already told Nymph_ to fix something via tencent QQ
DarkEmerl
I love this song, and I love this map, too. I'll mod it properly once I get the time.

And for some reason it won't let me star this map, but I will once it works.
Topic Starter
Nymph

kanpakyin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short
My message is too short.
Didn't! I have already told Nymph_ to fix something via tencent QQ
Raging Bull's mod is fixed long time ago by me, KPY and I discussed it on QQ, sorry for I forgotten to reply what we fixed :o
Kawayi Rika
神MAPPER Nymph_ 也做这个曲子了啊~膜拜一下~

一些小建议~~


[Collab]

00:27:638 (1) - Start point add finish.
00:38:918 (8) - Overlap here? 00:39:158 (1)
00:54:998 (3,5,1) - add finish.
01:25:238 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:32:918 (3) - ^


[wcx]

00:27:638 (5) - add finish.
02:00:278 (4,5,6) - ^
02:01:718 (1) - Start point Remove finish.
02:15:638 (6,7,8,1) - With the above.

nice job give star~ :)
JauiPlaY
hi~
一些建議:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
控制一下combo,最好3-5...在easy里弄6或者8的combo很奇怪的

[wcx's Normal]
00:24:278 (x) - add a note with clap.
最好也控制下combo.

[KPY]
01:17:318 (1) - 這之后拉個spinner會比較好
02:29:558 (1,2) - finish怎麼沒有了?建議補上
02:37:958 (7) - 這之后像easy,normal那樣拉個spinner做結尾會比較好

[Collab]
00:25:718 (3) - 這箭頭感覺有點遮啊,換個方向吧
00:56:438 (3,4,5) - 我覺得(4,5)沒有被覆蓋得很好
00:58:118 (x) - 加個note?
00:58:358 (T) - 這后面的4根綠線貌似都沒用
01:02:198 (5,6,7) - 我覺得(6,7)沒有被覆蓋得很好
01:09:518 (1) - 應該是后面的紅線開始
01:29:558 (x) - 加個有clap的note?

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