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00:55:804 (2,3,4) - This could be add whistle for song contrast(as imitate song sounds)
00:56:594 (2,3,4) - Another here and
00:56:989 (2,3,4) - Here,it is your choice too
00:57:877 (2) - Instead of shorting this as 1/2 slider-kick,can you just used 1/4 . I guess it would never affect song so much. Add some space after this note.
00:58:469 (3) - If you tend to do so
01:32:613 (2) - Repeat like you does in 01:28:864 (1,2,3) - looks more comfortable (not make player tired confused with changed pattern)
Why not shape it like this image: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8908345
Overall are good for this one,since you ask for this one. You got it.
If you ask for Cup,I don't need to look at it because I don't to messed the arts
00:55:804 (2,3,4) - This could be add whistle for song contrast(as imitate song sounds)
00:56:594 (2,3,4) - Another here and
00:56:989 (2,3,4) - Here,it is your choice too
00:57:877 (2) - Instead of shorting this as 1/2 slider-kick,can you just used 1/4 . I guess it would never affect song so much. Add some space after this note.
00:58:469 (3) - If you tend to do so
01:32:613 (2) - Repeat like you does in 01:28:864 (1,2,3) - looks more comfortable (not make player tired confused with changed pattern)
Why not shape it like this image: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8908345
Overall are good for this one,since you ask for this one. You got it.
If you ask for Cup,I don't need to look at it because I don't to messed the arts