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Hirano Aya - OPEN THE GATE

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Dino99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月8日 at 下午 09:49:13

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: OPEN THE GATE
Source: Fairy Tail
Tags: Lucy Heartfilia Character Song
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6033kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.43 stars, 414 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 621 notes)
  3. Normal (2.62 stars, 254 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - OPEN THE GATE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st map~

Thank Bobo for BG

Hope you like it~

Enjoy!!!
Bobo_old
God Lucy's head looks small in this pic. ._.

Wow this is really good. :)
I really like this. ^^

-Normal-

03:03:899 - Add a clap :>
03:17:024 - ^
03:53:350 - This combo looks a little confusing for a Normal D:

-Hard-

02:12:807 - I'd move this combo down so it doesn't overlap the previous combo.
03:00:149 - I'd change this to a clap.
03:00:384 - ^

-Insane-

Change to 1/4 snapping.

The BG seems to be a snapshot from the anime, I'd change it to something with a better quality.
This perhaps? Idk...

00:22:304 - Add a note \:D/
00:22:773 - Delete this note if you made the change above.
02:48:548 - Add a note.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then move this slider 2 ticks forward.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then add a note here.
02:49:017 - If you made the 3 changes above, delete this note.
02:49:134 - If you made the 4 changes above, delete this note as well.
Here, this should help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136477
04:17:724 - Add the finish sound.

Great map bro ^^
Staaaar~
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

God Lucy's head looks small in this pic. ._.

Wow this is really good. :)
I really like this. ^^

-Normal-

03:03:899 - Add a clap :>
03:17:024 - ^
03:53:350 - This combo looks a little confusing for a Normal D:

-Hard-

02:12:807 - I'd move this combo down so it doesn't overlap the previous combo.
03:00:149 - I'd change this to a clap.
03:00:384 - ^

-Insane-

Change to 1/4 snapping.

The BG seems to be a snapshot from the anime, I'd change it to something with a better quality.
This perhaps? Idk...

00:22:304 - Add a note \:D/
00:22:773 - Delete this note if you made the change above.
02:48:548 - Add a note.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then move this slider 2 ticks forward.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then add a note here.
02:49:017 - If you made the 3 changes above, delete this note.
02:49:134 - If you made the 4 changes above, delete this note as well.
Here, this should help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136477
04:17:724 - Add the finish sound.

Great map bro ^^
Staaaar~
Thank you :) I will try it!!
AIR315
Insane血扣的有點快.... :(

圖有一點亮,不過還可以接受:)

我覺得大致上做的很好

而且歌也很好聽

有ranked的水準了~~

希望可以早點被ranked

8-)

;)

:D

starrrrrrrrrrrr ~~~ :)
rinon2004
:) :) :) :)
HARD有点稍微简单了哦~
背景图也希望能改进~
整体感觉还是不错的~
rinon2004
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
星星给你了~ 记得改进~~!
要加油喔!
Topic Starter
Dino99

rinon2004 wrote:

:) :) :) :)
HARD有点稍微简单了哦~
背景图也希望能改进~
整体感觉还是不错的~
謝謝 :):)
Topic Starter
Dino99

AIR315 wrote:

Insane血扣的有點快.... :(

圖有一點亮,不過還可以接受:)

我覺得大致上做的很好

而且歌也很好聽

有ranked的水準了~~

希望可以早點被ranked

8-)

;)

:D

starrrrrrrrrrrr ~~~ :)
3Q :)
Peace_old_1
Add tags ''Lucy''

nice map~ :)



Your message is too short.
command6104
嗨嗨!
我又來了~
從你做NORMAL一直玩到INSANE呢~
不錯XDD
趕快被RANKED吧!
這樣我才有分數XDD :D :D :D :D
kenchenk
做的不錯!!!
hard難易度調高一點就感覺很好了
希望你能早日被官方認證
DeeN
request by mapper in mp

first

不要给无用的帖子kds

TO ALL DIFF
你的绿线都偏掉了 修正一下

<Normal>
除了有些silder造型不美以外没发觉什么大问题了

<Hard>

00:25:234 - add a note?

01:26:872 (5) - 拉到后面一根红线?

01:52:183 - add a note?

01:53:121 - ^

<Insane>

00:25:234 (1,2) - why jump?

01:51:480 (1,2,3,4) - 试着这样摆如何?(use roate 90 > or <)



go go/

另外你还需要一个easy diff :3
Topic Starter
Dino99

DeeN wrote:

request by mapper in mp

first

不要给无用的帖子kds

TO ALL DIFF
你的绿线都偏掉了 修正一下

<Normal>
除了有些silder造型不美以外没发觉什么大问题了

<Hard>

00:25:234 - add a note?

01:26:872 (5) - 拉到后面一根红线?

01:52:183 - add a note?

01:53:121 - ^

<Insane>

00:25:234 (1,2) - why jump?

01:51:480 (1,2,3,4) - 试着这样摆如何?(use roate 90 > or <)

[attachment=0:841d5]1.jpg[/attachment:841d5]

go go/

另外你还需要一个easy diff :3
謝指教 :)
spboxer3
22:58 <spboxer3> : 00:17:734 (1,1) - 這兩個重疊
22:58 <spboxer3> : Normal
22:59 <spboxer3> : 00:23:359 (1) - 這不好看
22:59 <spboxer3> : 00:24:765 (2) - ^
23:00 <spboxer3> : 00:45:858 (1,2,3) - 額 這我不知道怎麼吐槽...反正不好就對了:(
23:01 <12BARRY21> : :((
23:01 <spboxer3> : 01:36:481 (1,2,3,4) - 這節奏不適合放在normal
23:01 <12BARRY21> : :((
23:01 <spboxer3> : 01:49:605 (4,5) - ...也是複製的阿
23:01 <12BARRY21> : 挖勒:((
23:02 <spboxer3> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140921 嘗試下這種排法吧
23:02 <12BARRY21> : OK
23:02 <spboxer3> : 02:21:479 (1,2,3) - 恩 不建議這樣
23:03 <spboxer3> : 02:23:823 - 你可以在這排個spinner但是不要Break time
23:04 <12BARRY21> : 原來我做這麼爛阿........:(
23:04 <spboxer3> : 不是爛 你的是09年的 程度:((
23:05 <12BARRY21> : = =ㄆㄆ
23:05 <spboxer3> : 節奏大致上是正確的 但是排法需要多琢磨
-----------------------------------中間省略---------------------------------------
23:20 <spboxer3> : 好~那我幫你看摟
23:21 <12BARRY21> : 恩:))
23:21 <spboxer3> : 00:09:062 (3,4,6,7) - 對秤吧 會好看些
23:21 <12BARRY21> : 恩
23:22 <spboxer3> : 00:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - 轉的角度要對 這看起來並沒有做的很好((這位置啦
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - 這位置建議http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140934
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:25:234 (1,2) - 這跳太遠了
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:39:764 (3,1,2) - 這之間的間距 不好
23:27 <spboxer3> : 00:44:919 (5,6) - 蓋到HP條了
23:27 <spboxer3> : 00:56:404 (4,5) - 間距
23:28 <spboxer3> : 01:15:153 (9,10,1,2) - 正方形排好一點
23:29 <12BARRY21> : :O
23:31 <spboxer3> : 01:47:145 (5,7) - 蓋住了 不是很好
23:34 <spboxer3> : 03:07:767 (5,7) - ^
23:34 <12BARRY21> : OK
23:35 <spboxer3> : 04:16:787 (2) - 聲音小聲些
23:36 <spboxer3> : 確實 你做的比你哥哥好些...
23:36 <12BARRY21> : .....
23:36 <spboxer3> : 但是你的map還是有蠻多地方要改的>_>
23:36 <12BARRY21> : >///<

IRC mod~~~
Breeze
Please give kudos to the modder who help you improving your map only
sirjuyt
加油 ~
IRC Mod :D
log
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 你好~~@@
19:04 <sirjuyt> : hi ~
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 請問可以幫我modding......嗎>///<??
19:05 <sirjuyt> : 0 0 好阿
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔 貼
19:05 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35338
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 這

19:18 <sirjuyt> : 那我從normal開始講好了:D
19:18 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:19 <sirjuyt> : 前面你用了0.5x的綠線
19:19 <12BARRY21> : 恩...
19:20 <sirjuyt> : 然後distance也會跟著減半
19:20 <12BARRY21> : 對阿0.0...
19:21 <sirjuyt> : 所以願意的話把這裡DS調大一點?
19:22 <12BARRY21> : ..........恩......
19:26 <sirjuyt> : 好了?
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 等等0.0
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 剛接電話 = =
19:26 <12BARRY21> : SOR:((
19:26 <sirjuyt> : lol 嗯嗯
19:29 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:29 <12BARRY21> : 好摟
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 00:24:765 (2) -
19:30 <sirjuyt> : 這個頭改whistle? 這樣對到音效
19:30 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 好了
19:31 <sirjuyt> : 00:49:139 (6) - clap?
19:32 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:33 <sirjuyt> : 01:08:357 (3) - 這段有一個想法:3
19:33 <12BARRY21> : 恩?
19:34 <sirjuyt> : slider折返加clap
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 可以問你一件事嗎.........??
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 先說吧. .?
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 就是有可以一次動全部綠線的....選項嗎??
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 能全部移動一定量是行的
19:36 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:37 <sirjuyt> : timing setup 點一條綠線之後 在ctrl選擇其他條綠線
19:37 <12BARRY21> : 我看喔
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 謝摟
19:39 <12BARRY21> : 繼續八:))
19:39 <sirjuyt> : 嗯 剛剛說到折返加clap那裏
19:40 <sirjuyt> : 頭的clap阿 怎麼沒了
19:40 <12BARRY21> : !!
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔...
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 這樣嗎?
19:42 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯 o o
19:42 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:43 <sirjuyt> : 01:10:232 (2) - 然後把這個頭的clap去掉 這樣就有一個模式了
19:43 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:44 <12BARRY21> : 好了
(下略)
Topic Starter
Dino99

sirjuyt wrote:

加油 ~
IRC Mod :D
log
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 你好~~@@
19:04 <sirjuyt> : hi ~
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 請問可以幫我modding......嗎>///<??
19:05 <sirjuyt> : 0 0 好阿
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔 貼
19:05 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35338
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 這

19:18 <sirjuyt> : 那我從normal開始講好了:D
19:18 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:19 <sirjuyt> : 前面你用了0.5x的綠線
19:19 <12BARRY21> : 恩...
19:20 <sirjuyt> : 然後distance也會跟著減半
19:20 <12BARRY21> : 對阿0.0...
19:21 <sirjuyt> : 所以願意的話把這裡DS調大一點?
19:22 <12BARRY21> : ..........恩......
19:26 <sirjuyt> : 好了?
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 等等0.0
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 剛接電話 = =
19:26 <12BARRY21> : SOR:((
19:26 <sirjuyt> : lol 嗯嗯
19:29 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:29 <12BARRY21> : 好摟
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 00:24:765 (2) -
19:30 <sirjuyt> : 這個頭改whistle? 這樣對到音效
19:30 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 好了
19:31 <sirjuyt> : 00:49:139 (6) - clap?
19:32 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:33 <sirjuyt> : 01:08:357 (3) - 這段有一個想法:3
19:33 <12BARRY21> : 恩?
19:34 <sirjuyt> : slider折返加clap
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 可以問你一件事嗎.........??
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 先說吧. .?
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 就是有可以一次動全部綠線的....選項嗎??
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 能全部移動一定量是行的
19:36 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:37 <sirjuyt> : timing setup 點一條綠線之後 在ctrl選擇其他條綠線
19:37 <12BARRY21> : 我看喔
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 謝摟
19:39 <12BARRY21> : 繼續八:))
19:39 <sirjuyt> : 嗯 剛剛說到折返加clap那裏
19:40 <sirjuyt> : 頭的clap阿 怎麼沒了
19:40 <12BARRY21> : !!
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔...
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 這樣嗎?
19:42 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯 o o
19:42 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:43 <sirjuyt> : 01:10:232 (2) - 然後把這個頭的clap去掉 這樣就有一個模式了
19:43 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:44 <12BARRY21> : 好了
(下略)
謝謝你摟~~~~ :) :D ;)
Deye
很好的圖,不過還是覺得你的hard和insane簡單了......你的hard其實也就相當於normal+,可能還要差一點;而你的insane貌似就是你目前的hard加大了間距和slider速度......大膽的往裡加串吧,沒關係的!(誤

一個小建議:不一定要左右對稱,也不一定要橫平豎直,有時候隨意擺放效果也很不錯,玩著好玩的關鍵是----玩著順手
個人喜歡點對稱,這個東西看自己喜好了,自己覺得玩起來順手,其實也就差不多了.

我的建議是你可以盡可能的加難你的insane,hard可以加大一些間距,沒有問題.
insane加難不是指加更多的跳或者更快的slider,現在你目前的速度就蠻合適,你可以試著去加串到裏面,這樣玩起來趣味也很足.

[General]

offset:865

[Normal]

01:36:481 (1,2,3,4)這裡不如跟著唱調走.兩種方式---
簡單的:01:36:481~01:37:184; 01:37:418~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 分別設三個slider.
稍難的:01:36:481; 01:37:418 設置兩個note, 01:36:715~01:37:184; 01:37:653~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 設置三個slider.
01:39:293 (6)折返slider到01:39:762結束.
01:40:231 (1)add a note, new combo.
01:40:699 (1)remove new combo.
02:57:103 (1,2,3,4)同01:36:481.

[Hard]

01:19:606 (7)這個note距離上一個稍遠,故意為之么?
01:52:183 (2,3)remove note, 將後面的slider提前到note位置, 并折返一次, 試試看.
03:12:805 (2,3,4)同上.

[Insane]

00:47:967 (1~8)可以適當加大一點間距,滿有趣的.
01:52:418 (3,4)完全重疊不是特別好的一個做法,適當錯開一些,難度不差,卻可以不遮擋.
03:38:117 (5)這個slider折返一下,試試看.
節奏很棒的難度.

好吧,我承認之前和別人的mod搞混了...
Mura_77
因为只看了Insane难度所以就只给I难度提点建议

00:30:858 和 00:31:561 这两个Slider能否稍微圆润一点XD

00:35:311到01:06:248稍微空缺有点大,希望增加少许notes&sliders,详细如下:
"Notes:
00:36:717; 00:38:592; 00:46:795; 00:51:717; 00:53:592; 00:59:217;
Slider
01:02:498 的 note 希望替换成 slider "
mjw5150
as your req~

[General]
每个难度的绿线都没对齐呐
01:24:528 - preview point放在这试试?

[Normal]
音效方面 加clap的地方可以参照下Insane的(有些该加的地方没加
01:21:481 (1) - 在01:24:294结束?
02:42:103 (1) - 在02:44:916结束?

[Hard]
音效方面同normal
00:30:272 (5) - 左移1格?
01:23:747 (2) - 移到01:23:708
01:17:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议用统一的spacing~
02:44:369 (2) - 移到02:44:330
03:42:101 (3) - 移下1格?
03:55:225 (8) - 在03:55:694结束 然后在03:56:163加个note?

[Insane]
00:35:077 - 加个note?
00:38:241 - ^
00:40:702 (1) - 提前1/4?(换到00:40:585
00:41:874 (1) - 上移1格?
00:49:608 - 加finish
00:50:076 - 加clap
00:51:951 - ^
00:53:826 - ^
00:55:701 (1) - 提前1/4?
00:55:701 - 加clap
00:57:576 - ^
00:59:451 - ^
01:01:326 - ^
01:03:201 - ^
01:05:076 - ^
01:05:779 - ^
00:50:076 - 01:06:482 这部分都可以在2、4白线上加clap呐~
01:13:161 (3) - 加clap然后移除后面4的clap?
01:14:450 - 加clap
01:16:325 - ^
01:20:075 - ^
01:21:481 - new combo?
01:26:872 - 加个note?
01:36:715 - newcombo?
02:10:698 - 加个note?
02:13:862 - ^
02:21:245 (1,2,3) - 都往下移1格?
02:27:104 - 02:32:494 这部分没加clap 还是故意不加的?(建议在这部分的第四
根白线上加上clap~
02:47:494 - 加个note?
03:45:734 - ^
03:49:366 - ^
03:59:444 (2) - 移下1格?
04:16:787 - 这里没必要用1/8吧?

star~
Topic Starter
Dino99

mjw5150 wrote:

as your req~

[General]
每个难度的绿线都没对齐呐
01:24:528 - preview point放在这试试?

[Normal]
音效方面 加clap的地方可以参照下Insane的(有些该加的地方没加
01:21:481 (1) - 在01:24:294结束?
02:42:103 (1) - 在02:44:916结束?

[Hard]
音效方面同normal
00:30:272 (5) - 左移1格?
01:23:747 (2) - 移到01:23:708
01:17:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议用统一的spacing~
02:44:369 (2) - 移到02:44:330
03:42:101 (3) - 移下1格?
03:55:225 (8) - 在03:55:694结束 然后在03:56:163加个note?

[Insane]
00:35:077 - 加个note?
00:38:241 - ^
00:40:702 (1) - 提前1/4?(换到00:40:585
00:41:874 (1) - 上移1格?
00:49:608 - 加finish
00:50:076 - 加clap
00:51:951 - ^
00:53:826 - ^
00:55:701 (1) - 提前1/4?
00:55:701 - 加clap
00:57:576 - ^
00:59:451 - ^
01:01:326 - ^
01:03:201 - ^
01:05:076 - ^
01:05:779 - ^
00:50:076 - 01:06:482 这部分都可以在2、4白线上加clap呐~
01:13:161 (3) - 加clap然后移除后面4的clap?
01:14:450 - 加clap
01:16:325 - ^
01:20:075 - ^
01:21:481 - new combo?
01:26:872 - 加个note?
01:36:715 - newcombo?
02:10:698 - 加个note?
02:13:862 - ^
02:21:245 (1,2,3) - 都往下移1格?
02:27:104 - 02:32:494 这部分没加clap 还是故意不加的?(建议在这部分的第四
根白线上加上clap~
02:47:494 - 加个note?
03:45:734 - ^
03:49:366 - ^
03:59:444 (2) - 移下1格?
04:16:787 - 这里没必要用1/8吧?

star~
謝謝你摟~~~@@
Topic Starter
Dino99

Dr_dy wrote:

很好的圖,不過還是覺得你的hard和insane簡單了......你的hard其實也就相當於normal+,可能還要差一點;而你的insane貌似就是你目前的hard加大了間距和slider速度......大膽的往裡加串吧,沒關係的!(誤

一個小建議:不一定要左右對稱,也不一定要橫平豎直,有時候隨意擺放效果也很不錯,玩著好玩的關鍵是----玩著順手
個人喜歡點對稱,這個東西看自己喜好了,自己覺得玩起來順手,其實也就差不多了.

我的建議是你可以盡可能的加難你的insane,hard可以加大一些間距,沒有問題.
insane加難不是指加更多的跳或者更快的slider,現在你目前的速度就蠻合適,你可以試著去加串到裏面,這樣玩起來趣味也很足.

[General]

offset:865

[Normal]

01:36:481 (1,2,3,4)這裡不如跟著唱調走.兩種方式---
簡單的:01:36:481~01:37:184; 01:37:418~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 分別設三個slider.
稍難的:01:36:481; 01:37:418 設置兩個note, 01:36:715~01:37:184; 01:37:653~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 設置三個slider.
01:39:293 (6)折返slider到01:39:762結束.
01:40:231 (1)add a note, new combo.
01:40:699 (1)remove new combo.
02:57:103 (1,2,3,4)同01:36:481.

[Hard]

01:19:606 (7)這個note距離上一個稍遠,故意為之么?
01:52:183 (2,3)remove note, 將後面的slider提前到note位置, 并折返一次, 試試看.
03:12:805 (2,3,4)同上.

[Insane]

00:47:967 (1~8)可以適當加大一點間距,滿有趣的.
01:52:418 (3,4)完全重疊不是特別好的一個做法,適當錯開一些,難度不差,卻可以不遮擋.
03:38:117 (5)這個slider折返一下,試試看.
節奏很棒的難度.

好吧,我承認之前和別人的mod搞混了...
:)謝謝摟~~~
Deye
不知道你改了什么,感觉整个节奏都乱掉了.

好像连bpm都改动了?
Topic Starter
Dino99

Dr_dy wrote:

不知道你改了什么,感觉整个节奏都乱掉了.

好像连bpm都改动了?
有改歌...因為碼率的關西 :( ~~但現在都弄好了@@ 應該沒問題了吧~~~>///<
Lissette
Timing
BPM: 128.00
Offset: 828 ms (+16ms to your current)
After changing timing: Re-snap all notes, snap kiai-times (start/end), re-insert break-times, check with AIMod (Shift+Ctrl+A) to see if anything is in order.

Insane
00:40:671 (1) - if this anti-jump is on purpose, doesn't fit at all, if is not, then be careful linking combos between each other. You have to making a good transition from a combo to the next one.
00:46:062 (4) - the jump doesn't fit, specially because makes me think this note 00:46:999 (6) is a jump too, so threw me off a little bit.
01:23:328 (1,2,3) - make them same space between them, is a minor thing, but i noticed while playing.
02:43:953 (5) - new combo
03:38:093 (5) - add reverse? If you do, fix spacing
whistles are too loud, in my opinion

Hard
00:19:561 (4) - new combo
00:21:670 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:670 (1) - new combo
01:24:011 (3,4) - fix little spacing
03:12:054 (1) - make it 1/4 longer and move 03:12:991 (2,3,4) - 1/2 beat

Normal
00:11:124 (1) - remove and place note at 00:11:592 -
00:17:686 (1) - to near from the spinner's end for the normal (there are some more like this, consider fixing them too)
01:36:433 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit
02:30:806 (2) - this is confusing for a normal diff, lay this slider in another place
02:57:055 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit
03:53:302 (1,2,3,4) - i think for a normal diff is better if you do this http://puu.sh/5BAs
03:58:927 (4,5,6) - i didn't like this, sounds a bit weird
04:00:861 (1) - start it at 04:01:036 -

Take a star~
Topic Starter
Dino99

Lissette wrote:

Timing
BPM: 128.00
Offset: 828 ms (+16ms to your current)
After changing timing: Re-snap all notes, snap kiai-times (start/end), re-insert break-times, check with AIMod (Shift+Ctrl+A) to see if anything is in order.

Insane
00:40:671 (1) - if this anti-jump is on purpose, doesn't fit at all, if is not, then be careful linking combos between each other. You have to making a good transition from a combo to the next one.
00:46:062 (4) - the jump doesn't fit, specially because makes me think this note 00:46:999 (6) is a jump too, so threw me off a little bit.
01:23:328 (1,2,3) - make them same space between them, is a minor thing, but i noticed while playing.
02:43:953 (5) - new combo
03:38:093 (5) - add reverse? If you do, fix spacing
whistles are too loud, in my opinion

Hard
00:19:561 (4) - new combo
00:21:670 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:670 (1) - new combo
01:24:011 (3,4) - fix little spacing
03:12:054 (1) - make it 1/4 longer and move 03:12:991 (2,3,4) - 1/2 beat

Normal
00:11:124 (1) - remove and place note at 00:11:592 -
00:17:686 (1) - to near from the spinner's end for the normal (there are some more like this, consider fixing them too)
01:36:433 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit
02:30:806 (2) - this is confusing for a normal diff, lay this slider in another place
02:57:055 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit
03:53:302 (1,2,3,4) - i think for a normal diff is better if you do this http://puu.sh/5BAs
03:58:927 (4,5,6) - i didn't like this, sounds a bit weird
04:00:861 (1) - start it at 04:01:036 -

Take a star~
thank you for modding :)
Bobo_old
Thought I'd remod this :3

All BGs must be 1024 x 768 pixels.

-Normal-

00:52:624 - 1 grid down.
00:56:374 - ^
02:28:718 - Add a note.
02:30:593 - Horizontal flip the convo.
03:36:453 - Delete new combo.
03:38:328 - ^
03:43:953 - ^

-Hard-

00:25:203 - Move this back 2 ticks, make it 2 ticks shorter.
00:25:906 - Add a note.
01:18:992 - Not distance snapped.
02:23:796 - This doesnt seem timed.
03:12:078 - +1 Repeat.

-Insane-

EVERY note in this diff is not snapped.
All you gotta do to fix this is highlight every note, press K, then J.
Fixed :D

00:28:249 - Add a note.
03:31:999 - Antijump.
04:16:765 - Finish hitsound on the last repeat.

Nice, gotten better since I last modded.
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Thought I'd remod this :3

All BGs must be 1024 x 768 pixels.

-Normal-

00:52:624 - 1 grid down.
00:56:374 - ^
02:28:718 - Add a note.
02:30:593 - Horizontal flip the convo.
03:36:453 - Delete new combo.
03:38:328 - ^
03:43:953 - ^

-Hard-

00:25:203 - Move this back 2 ticks, make it 2 ticks shorter.
00:25:906 - Add a note.
01:18:992 - Not distance snapped.
02:23:796 - This doesnt seem timed.
03:12:078 - +1 Repeat.

-Insane-

EVERY note in this diff is not snapped.
All you gotta do to fix this is highlight every note, press K, then J.
Fixed :D

00:28:249 - Add a note.
03:31:999 - Antijump.
04:16:765 - Finish hitsound on the last repeat.

Nice, gotten better since I last modded.
Thank you~ @@ I have fixed some:p
Kurai
General
  1. You should user 0.75x instead of 0.50x for your slider speed change because 0.50x feels so slow and unintuitives. 0.75x would be perfect ! (Don't forget that you will have to remake all your sliders)
  2. Your kiai sections are not correctly snapped, you have to resnap them.
  3. Add "Heartfilia" because the charcater's name is "Lucy Heartfilia"
Normal
  1. HP drain rate 4 and Overall difficulty 4 are kinda high for this difficulty. Consider reducing them to 3.
  2. 00:32:937 - Add a spinner which ends at 00:34:578 ?
  3. 01:03:171 - Add a note and add a spinner at 01:03:874 which ends at 01:05:281 ?
  4. 02:23:796 - Add a note and add a spinner at 02:24:499 which ends at 02:25:906 ?
  5. 00:01:999 - Add a note here, it looks weird if you don't start the map at where the music start.
  6. 04:15:828 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/4, Otherwise it ends earlier than it should.
Hard
  1. The background image has a very bad quality, try to get a better one please.
  2. 00:23:328 (4) - I think you need a new combo here
  3. 03:12:781 - As the pattern follow the vocal, add a note here
  4. 03:13:718 - Same as above
  5. 03:37:390 (2) - Add a whistle ? :3
  6. 03:59:890 (3) - This slider is too early. You should move it 1/2 later
  7. 04:15:124 (4) - It's not a good idea to make this slider "wiggle". In this case it's confusing.
Insane
  1. 00:06:453 (4) - Add a finish at the beginning
  2. 00:08:328 (1) - Add a finish
  3. 00:12:078 (4) - Add a finish
  4. 01:13:249 (4) - This clap doesn't sound right at all, remove the clap on this circle and add a clap on 01:12:781 (2)'s end and on 01:13:132 (3). It will sound much better.
  5. 02:31:062 (7) - Add a whistle on the reverse
You made a great job with this map ! ~
Sanzenin Nagi
图作的不错 :)
insane的03:10:320 (3) - 03:10:671 (5) - 03:11:257 (8) - 03:11:609 (10) - 调成clap比较好
900+连都不是很高分 最好把一些silder改成连打吧 :)
S h i o n
Hi,12BARRY21~ (Request in game)

General
- Add 'Character song' into tag.
- Try to add a clap on every heacy beats. (We can simply define them as 2nd and 4th white lines,but there still exists exceptional cases where is quite of course.)And you should apply a specific system to your hitsound.
- Your timing section are not exactly IN the lines.Maybe the reason is that you've changed your offset.Select them like this:
SPOILER
Giive the difference offset in 'Move selected offsets by:',and then move.(No need to move a red line.)

Normal
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4) - Confuuuusing stacks to a normal diff.You seems to have tooooo many stacks in this normal diff.It is quite hard for beginners to recognize.
00:17:703 (1) - Soon for recovery time.
(00:35:281 (1) - Such time is at least,I think.)
01:23:328 (7) - Useless green line.
02:42:078 (1) - Toooooo long spinner.
03:48:640 (2) - Also stack,triccccky!!

Hard
00:28:718 (1,2) -A fast slider(1) and then wait one beat for (2) ? Kinda tricy.
(02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.)
01:18:054 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use slider instead and rearrange.Confusing to a hard diff.
02:23:796 (6) - new combo here please
02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.
03:47:703 (1) - Kinda soon for recovery time.Maybe you can just place it in the center of the area
04:02:703 (1) - ^

Insane
00:12:781 (6) - Curve it.For sake of flow.
01:10:085 (2) - You'd better remove this note because it plays really aaaaawkward.
01:12:781 (2,3) - Uncomfortable arrangement.Actually , the arrangement of your insane diff feels so, many times.
01:14:890 (7,8,9) - ^
01:20:749 (3) - Really strange to jump,just follow its former spacing.
01:27:078 (1) - Place this note 1/2 in advance,then it will play better,not so awkward than it was.
04:16:765 (2) - Terribly noisy.

That's all.

You have basic skills of mapping but still quite much work(espeacially on design) to do for 1st ranking.

Anyway,good luck.
Strawberry
request by mapper in game

来晚了不好意思 :3

[General]
可以把normal难度名改成easy
[Timing]
有几个绿线看上去没有对齐
比如 00:17:703 -
00:34:578 -
01:23:328 -
02:10:203 -
……
建议每个diff都检查一下


[Insane]
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里摆成直线不太美观?
00:28:484 - remove nc
00:28:953 - add nc
01:19:578 - ^
01:20:281 - remove nc
01:47:703 - add nc
01:48:874 - remove nc
01:49:578 - add nc

02:50:749 - 加一个circle?
03:00:124 - remove nc
03:00:828 - add nc
03:51:453 - ^
03:52:624 - remove nc
03:53:328 - add nc
03:55:203 - ^
03:56:374 - remove nc
03:56:374 - add nc

04:00:802 (11) - 这个note不在线上 可以把spinner往后一格然后把这个它移到线上 或者删除
04:01:999 - spinner在这里结束如何?然后在04:02:234 - 加一个circle

[Hard]
ar+1打起来更舒服些 毕竟是hard有点难度也比较好
01:31:062 - add nc
04:12:078 - ^


[Normal]
铺面没什么问题 音效不太懂:D 就不多嘴了 :)

祝早日rank XD
Topic Starter
Dino99

Sanzenin Nagi wrote:

图作的不错 :)
insane的03:10:320 (3) - 03:10:671 (5) - 03:11:257 (8) - 03:11:609 (10) - 调成clap比较好
900+连都不是很高分 最好把一些silder改成连打吧 :)
Thank you^^
Topic Starter
Dino99

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,12BARRY21~ (Request in game)

General
- Add 'Character song' into tag.
- Try to add a clap on every heacy beats. (We can simply define them as 2nd and 4th white lines,but there still exists exceptional cases where is quite of course.)And you should apply a specific system to your hitsound.
- Your timing section are not exactly IN the lines.Maybe the reason is that you've changed your offset.Select them like this:
SPOILER
Giive the difference offset in 'Move selected offsets by:',and then move.(No need to move a red line.)

Normal
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4) - Confuuuusing stacks to a normal diff.You seems to have tooooo many stacks in this normal diff.It is quite hard for beginners to recognize.
00:17:703 (1) - Soon for recovery time.
(00:35:281 (1) - Such time is at least,I think.)
01:23:328 (7) - Useless green line.
02:42:078 (1) - Toooooo long spinner.
03:48:640 (2) - Also stack,triccccky!!

Hard
00:28:718 (1,2) -A fast slider(1) and then wait one beat for (2) ? Kinda tricy.
(02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.)
01:18:054 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use slider instead and rearrange.Confusing to a hard diff.
02:23:796 (6) - new combo here please
02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.
03:47:703 (1) - Kinda soon for recovery time.Maybe you can just place it in the center of the area
04:02:703 (1) - ^

Insane
00:12:781 (6) - Curve it.For sake of flow.
01:10:085 (2) - You'd better remove this note because it plays really aaaaawkward.
01:12:781 (2,3) - Uncomfortable arrangement.Actually , the arrangement of your insane diff feels so, many times.
01:14:890 (7,8,9) - ^
01:20:749 (3) - Really strange to jump,just follow its former spacing.
01:27:078 (1) - Place this note 1/2 in advance,then it will play better,not so awkward than it was.
04:16:765 (2) - Terribly noisy.

That's all.

You have basic skills of mapping but still quite much work(espeacially on design) to do for 1st ranking.

Anyway,good luck.
Thank you for modding^^
Topic Starter
Dino99

Strawberry wrote:

request by mapper in game

来晚了不好意思 :3

[General]
可以把normal难度名改成easy
[Timing]
有几个绿线看上去没有对齐
比如 00:17:703 -
00:34:578 -
01:23:328 -
02:10:203 -
……
建议每个diff都检查一下


[Insane]
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里摆成直线不太美观?
00:28:484 - remove nc
00:28:953 - add nc
01:19:578 - ^
01:20:281 - remove nc
01:47:703 - add nc
01:48:874 - remove nc
01:49:578 - add nc

02:50:749 - 加一个circle?
03:00:124 - remove nc
03:00:828 - add nc
03:51:453 - ^
03:52:624 - remove nc
03:53:328 - add nc
03:55:203 - ^
03:56:374 - remove nc
03:56:374 - add nc

04:00:802 (11) - 这个note不在线上 可以把spinner往后一格然后把这个它移到线上 或者删除
04:01:999 - spinner在这里结束如何?然后在04:02:234 - 加一个circle

[Hard]
ar+1打起来更舒服些 毕竟是hard有点难度也比较好
01:31:062 - add nc
04:12:078 - ^


[Normal]
铺面没什么问题 音效不太懂:D 就不多嘴了 :)

祝早日rank XD
謝謝摟^^ fixed
Kurai
Rechecking ~

Normal
  1. Hitsounds : (I think this difficulty needs more work with hitsounds. These are just suggestion, if you disagree, you don't have to fix.)
    1. 00:20:046 - Add clap
    2. 00:20:984 (2) - Remove whistle ; Add clap
    3. 00:21:921 - Add clap
    4. 00:23:796 - Add clap
    5. 00:24:734 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    6. 00:25:671 - Add clap
    7. 00:27:546 - Add clap
    8. 00:28:484 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    9. 00:29:421 - Add clap
    10. 00:30:359 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    11. 00:31:296 - Add clap
    12. 00:31:999 - Add clap
    13. 00:35:515 (2) - Add whistle
    14. 00:37:390 (2) - Add whistle
    15. 00:39:265 (2) - Add whistle
    16. 00:40:671 - Add whistle
    17. 00:42:546 - Add whistle
    18. 00:44:421 - Add whistle
    19. 00:45:828 - Remove clap ; Add whistle
    20. 00:50:046 - Add clap
    21. 00:51:921 - Add clap
    22. 00:53:796 - Add clap
    23. 00:55:671 - Add clap
    24. 00:57:078 - Add whistle
    25. 00:57:546 - Add clap
    26. 00:59:421 - Add clap
    27. 01:00:828 - Add whistle
    28. 01:01:296 - Add clap
    29. 01:01:999 - Add whistle
    30. 01:03:171 (4) - Add clap
    31. 01:10:203 - Add whistle
    32. 01:13:484 - Add clap
    33. 01:14:421 - Add clap
    34. 01:16:296 - Add clap
    35. 01:18:171 - Add clap
    36. 01:18:640 - Add whistle
    37. 01:19:578 - Add whistle
    38. 01:20:046 (4) - Add clap
    39. 01:33:171 - Add clap
    40. 01:35:046 - Add clap
    41. 01:39:265 - Add clap
    42. 01:45:828 (2) - Add finish
    43. 01:49:109 (2,3) - Add claps
    44. 02:11:140 - Add whistle
    45. 02:13:015 - Add whistle
    46. 02:14:890 (2) - Add whistle
    47. 02:16:296 - Add clap
    48. 02:17:703 - Add whistle
    49. 02:18:171 - Add clap
    50. 02:19:578 - Add whistle
    51. 02:20:046 (5) - Add clap
    52. 02:21:921 - Add clap
    53. 02:22:156 (2) - Add whisles (On the whole slider)
    54. 02:23:796 (4) - Add clap
    55. 02:24:265 (5) - Add whistle
    56. 02:30:828 - Add whistle
    57. 02:32:234 - Add whistle
    58. 02:34:109 - Add clap
    59. 02:35:046 - Add clap
    60. 02:36:921 - Add clap
    61. 02:38:328 - Add whistle
    62. 02:38:796 (2) - Add clap
    63. 02:39:265 (4) - Add whistle
    64. 02:40:203 - Add whistle
    65. 02:46:296 - Add clap
    66. 02:48:171 - Add clap
    67. 02:49:578 - Add finish
    68. 02:50:046 - Add clap
    69. 02:51:921 - Add clap
    70. 02:53:796 - Add clap
    71. 02:55:671 - Add clap
    72. 02:57:546 - Add clap
    73. 02:59:187 - Add clap
    74. 03:01:296 - Add clap
    75. 03:03:171 - Add clap
    76. 03:05:046 - Add clap
    77. 03:06:921 (4) - Add clap
    78. 03:10:203 - Add finish
    79. 03:10:671 - Add clap
    80. 03:12:546 - Add clap
    81. 03:34:578 (1,1,1) - Add whistles
    82. 03:43:953 - Add finish
    83. 03:48:171 - Add clap
    84. 03:50:046 - Add clap
    85. 03:51:921 - Add clap
    86. 03:53:679 - Add clap
    87. 03:55:203 - Remove clap ; Add finish
    88. 03:55:671 - Add clap
    89. 03:57:546 - Add clap
    90. 04:03:171 - Add clap
    91. 04:05:046 - Add clap
    92. 04:06:921 - Add clap
    93. 04:08:796 - Add clap
    94. 04:10:203 - Add clap
    95. 04:12:546 - Add clap
  2. 00:42:546 (2) - Remove the reverse of this slider, it don't sounds well and it's not needed.
Hard
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. I think you have understood what I wanted to do with claps in Normal, so try to do something like what I did in Normal with claps in this difficulty (even if hitsounds are better in this difficulty, you can improve them !).
    2. 00:06:453 - Add finish
    3. 04:17:234 - Remove clap, it's not needed here and it sounds ugly.
  2. 03:02:937 - You need a note here to follow the music
  3. Please, try to get a background with a better quality
Insane
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. 01:13:484 (1,2) - Add claps
Work on your hitsounds and call me back after. I will do another recheck :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

Rechecking ~

Normal
  1. Hitsounds : (I think this difficulty needs more work with hitsounds. These are just suggestion, if you disagree, you don't have to fix.)
    1. 00:20:046 - Add clap
    2. 00:20:984 (2) - Remove whistle ; Add clap
    3. 00:21:921 - Add clap
    4. 00:23:796 - Add clap
    5. 00:24:734 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    6. 00:25:671 - Add clap
    7. 00:27:546 - Add clap
    8. 00:28:484 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    9. 00:29:421 - Add clap
    10. 00:30:359 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    11. 00:31:296 - Add clap
    12. 00:31:999 - Add clap
    13. 00:35:515 (2) - Add whistle
    14. 00:37:390 (2) - Add whistle
    15. 00:39:265 (2) - Add whistle
    16. 00:40:671 - Add whistle
    17. 00:42:546 - Add whistle
    18. 00:44:421 - Add whistle
    19. 00:45:828 - Remove clap ; Add whistle
    20. 00:50:046 - Add clap
    21. 00:51:921 - Add clap
    22. 00:53:796 - Add clap
    23. 00:55:671 - Add clap
    24. 00:57:078 - Add whistle
    25. 00:57:546 - Add clap
    26. 00:59:421 - Add clap
    27. 01:00:828 - Add whistle
    28. 01:01:296 - Add clap
    29. 01:01:999 - Add whistle
    30. 01:03:171 (4) - Add clap
    31. 01:10:203 - Add whistle
    32. 01:13:484 - Add clap
    33. 01:14:421 - Add clap
    34. 01:16:296 - Add clap
    35. 01:18:171 - Add clap
    36. 01:18:640 - Add whistle
    37. 01:19:578 - Add whistle
    38. 01:20:046 (4) - Add clap
    39. 01:33:171 - Add clap
    40. 01:35:046 - Add clap
    41. 01:39:265 - Add clap
    42. 01:45:828 (2) - Add finish
    43. 01:49:109 (2,3) - Add claps
    44. 02:11:140 - Add whistle
    45. 02:13:015 - Add whistle
    46. 02:14:890 (2) - Add whistle
    47. 02:16:296 - Add clap
    48. 02:17:703 - Add whistle
    49. 02:18:171 - Add clap
    50. 02:19:578 - Add whistle
    51. 02:20:046 (5) - Add clap
    52. 02:21:921 - Add clap
    53. 02:22:156 (2) - Add whisles (On the whole slider)
    54. 02:23:796 (4) - Add clap
    55. 02:24:265 (5) - Add whistle
    56. 02:30:828 - Add whistle
    57. 02:32:234 - Add whistle
    58. 02:34:109 - Add clap
    59. 02:35:046 - Add clap
    60. 02:36:921 - Add clap
    61. 02:38:328 - Add whistle
    62. 02:38:796 (2) - Add clap
    63. 02:39:265 (4) - Add whistle
    64. 02:40:203 - Add whistle
    65. 02:46:296 - Add clap
    66. 02:48:171 - Add clap
    67. 02:49:578 - Add finish
    68. 02:50:046 - Add clap
    69. 02:51:921 - Add clap
    70. 02:53:796 - Add clap
    71. 02:55:671 - Add clap
    72. 02:57:546 - Add clap
    73. 02:59:187 - Add clap
    74. 03:01:296 - Add clap
    75. 03:03:171 - Add clap
    76. 03:05:046 - Add clap
    77. 03:06:921 (4) - Add clap
    78. 03:10:203 - Add finish
    79. 03:10:671 - Add clap
    80. 03:12:546 - Add clap
    81. 03:34:578 (1,1,1) - Add whistles
    82. 03:43:953 - Add finish
    83. 03:48:171 - Add clap
    84. 03:50:046 - Add clap
    85. 03:51:921 - Add clap
    86. 03:53:679 - Add clap
    87. 03:55:203 - Remove clap ; Add finish
    88. 03:55:671 - Add clap
    89. 03:57:546 - Add clap
    90. 04:03:171 - Add clap
    91. 04:05:046 - Add clap
    92. 04:06:921 - Add clap
    93. 04:08:796 - Add clap
    94. 04:10:203 - Add clap
    95. 04:12:546 - Add clap
  2. 00:42:546 (2) - Remove the reverse of this slider, it don't sounds well and it's not needed.
Hard
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. I think you have understood what I wanted to do with claps in Normal, so try to do something like what I did in Normal with claps in this difficulty (even if hitsounds are better in this difficulty, you can improve them !).
    2. 00:06:453 - Add finish
    3. 04:17:234 - Remove clap, it's not needed here and it sounds ugly.
  2. 03:02:937 - You need a note here to follow the music
  3. Please, try to get a background with a better quality
Insane
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. 01:13:484 (1,2) - Add claps
Work on your hitsounds and call me back after. I will do another recheck :)
Reallly thank you for recheak^^ I have fixed the BG and some suggestion of you :D .......I have used the new hitsounds in clap @@ Because I think it 's better than before :)
Kurai
You did a great job with hitsounds, it's so much better now <3
Here is your well-deserved bubble ! :3

Bubbled ~
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

You did a great job with hitsounds, it's so much better now <3
Here is your well-deserved bubble ! :3

Bubbled ~
Thank you :) :D
Kurai
Don't upload your map when it is bubbled xD
whymeman
Couldn't find any serious issues in the mapset. Good job and here's your rank. Keep up the good work.
Topic Starter
Dino99

whymeman wrote:

Couldn't find any serious issues in the mapset. Good job and here's your rank. Keep up the good work.
Thank you^^
Bobo_old
Congrats! \:D/
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Congrats! \:D/
Thanks~ :D
Kurai
Congratz on your first rank :3
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

Congratz on your first rank :3
Thank you :D
xierbaliti
恭喜第一张图rank \:D/
似乎来晚了XD
PsychoSkill
Congratz! (:

Fairy Tail ftw XD
Topic Starter
Dino99

xierbaliti wrote:

恭喜第一张图rank \:D/
似乎来晚了XD
謝啦@@
Topic Starter
Dino99

PsychoSkill wrote:

Congratz! (:

Fairy Tail ftw XD
:D :)
IkkiMinami
:) :)
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