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Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Thought I'd remod this :3

All BGs must be 1024 x 768 pixels.

-Normal-

00:52:624 - 1 grid down.
00:56:374 - ^
02:28:718 - Add a note.
02:30:593 - Horizontal flip the convo.
03:36:453 - Delete new combo.
03:38:328 - ^
03:43:953 - ^

-Hard-

00:25:203 - Move this back 2 ticks, make it 2 ticks shorter.
00:25:906 - Add a note.
01:18:992 - Not distance snapped.
02:23:796 - This doesnt seem timed.
03:12:078 - +1 Repeat.

-Insane-

EVERY note in this diff is not snapped.
All you gotta do to fix this is highlight every note, press K, then J.
Fixed :D

00:28:249 - Add a note.
03:31:999 - Antijump.
04:16:765 - Finish hitsound on the last repeat.

Nice, gotten better since I last modded.
Thank you~ @@ I have fixed some:p
Kurai
General
  1. You should user 0.75x instead of 0.50x for your slider speed change because 0.50x feels so slow and unintuitives. 0.75x would be perfect ! (Don't forget that you will have to remake all your sliders)
  2. Your kiai sections are not correctly snapped, you have to resnap them.
  3. Add "Heartfilia" because the charcater's name is "Lucy Heartfilia"
Normal
  1. HP drain rate 4 and Overall difficulty 4 are kinda high for this difficulty. Consider reducing them to 3.
  2. 00:32:937 - Add a spinner which ends at 00:34:578 ?
  3. 01:03:171 - Add a note and add a spinner at 01:03:874 which ends at 01:05:281 ?
  4. 02:23:796 - Add a note and add a spinner at 02:24:499 which ends at 02:25:906 ?
  5. 00:01:999 - Add a note here, it looks weird if you don't start the map at where the music start.
  6. 04:15:828 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/4, Otherwise it ends earlier than it should.
Hard
  1. The background image has a very bad quality, try to get a better one please.
  2. 00:23:328 (4) - I think you need a new combo here
  3. 03:12:781 - As the pattern follow the vocal, add a note here
  4. 03:13:718 - Same as above
  5. 03:37:390 (2) - Add a whistle ? :3
  6. 03:59:890 (3) - This slider is too early. You should move it 1/2 later
  7. 04:15:124 (4) - It's not a good idea to make this slider "wiggle". In this case it's confusing.
Insane
  1. 00:06:453 (4) - Add a finish at the beginning
  2. 00:08:328 (1) - Add a finish
  3. 00:12:078 (4) - Add a finish
  4. 01:13:249 (4) - This clap doesn't sound right at all, remove the clap on this circle and add a clap on 01:12:781 (2)'s end and on 01:13:132 (3). It will sound much better.
  5. 02:31:062 (7) - Add a whistle on the reverse
You made a great job with this map ! ~
Sanzenin Nagi
图作的不错 :)
insane的03:10:320 (3) - 03:10:671 (5) - 03:11:257 (8) - 03:11:609 (10) - 调成clap比较好
900+连都不是很高分 最好把一些silder改成连打吧 :)
S h i o n
Hi,12BARRY21~ (Request in game)

General
- Add 'Character song' into tag.
- Try to add a clap on every heacy beats. (We can simply define them as 2nd and 4th white lines,but there still exists exceptional cases where is quite of course.)And you should apply a specific system to your hitsound.
- Your timing section are not exactly IN the lines.Maybe the reason is that you've changed your offset.Select them like this:
SPOILER
Giive the difference offset in 'Move selected offsets by:',and then move.(No need to move a red line.)

Normal
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4) - Confuuuusing stacks to a normal diff.You seems to have tooooo many stacks in this normal diff.It is quite hard for beginners to recognize.
00:17:703 (1) - Soon for recovery time.
(00:35:281 (1) - Such time is at least,I think.)
01:23:328 (7) - Useless green line.
02:42:078 (1) - Toooooo long spinner.
03:48:640 (2) - Also stack,triccccky!!

Hard
00:28:718 (1,2) -A fast slider(1) and then wait one beat for (2) ? Kinda tricy.
(02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.)
01:18:054 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use slider instead and rearrange.Confusing to a hard diff.
02:23:796 (6) - new combo here please
02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.
03:47:703 (1) - Kinda soon for recovery time.Maybe you can just place it in the center of the area
04:02:703 (1) - ^

Insane
00:12:781 (6) - Curve it.For sake of flow.
01:10:085 (2) - You'd better remove this note because it plays really aaaaawkward.
01:12:781 (2,3) - Uncomfortable arrangement.Actually , the arrangement of your insane diff feels so, many times.
01:14:890 (7,8,9) - ^
01:20:749 (3) - Really strange to jump,just follow its former spacing.
01:27:078 (1) - Place this note 1/2 in advance,then it will play better,not so awkward than it was.
04:16:765 (2) - Terribly noisy.

That's all.

You have basic skills of mapping but still quite much work(espeacially on design) to do for 1st ranking.

Anyway,good luck.
Strawberry
request by mapper in game

来晚了不好意思 :3

[General]
可以把normal难度名改成easy
[Timing]
有几个绿线看上去没有对齐
比如 00:17:703 -
00:34:578 -
01:23:328 -
02:10:203 -
……
建议每个diff都检查一下


[Insane]
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里摆成直线不太美观?
00:28:484 - remove nc
00:28:953 - add nc
01:19:578 - ^
01:20:281 - remove nc
01:47:703 - add nc
01:48:874 - remove nc
01:49:578 - add nc

02:50:749 - 加一个circle?
03:00:124 - remove nc
03:00:828 - add nc
03:51:453 - ^
03:52:624 - remove nc
03:53:328 - add nc
03:55:203 - ^
03:56:374 - remove nc
03:56:374 - add nc

04:00:802 (11) - 这个note不在线上 可以把spinner往后一格然后把这个它移到线上 或者删除
04:01:999 - spinner在这里结束如何?然后在04:02:234 - 加一个circle

[Hard]
ar+1打起来更舒服些 毕竟是hard有点难度也比较好
01:31:062 - add nc
04:12:078 - ^


[Normal]
铺面没什么问题 音效不太懂:D 就不多嘴了 :)

祝早日rank XD
Topic Starter
Dino99

Sanzenin Nagi wrote:

图作的不错 :)
insane的03:10:320 (3) - 03:10:671 (5) - 03:11:257 (8) - 03:11:609 (10) - 调成clap比较好
900+连都不是很高分 最好把一些silder改成连打吧 :)
Thank you^^
Topic Starter
Dino99

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,12BARRY21~ (Request in game)

General
- Add 'Character song' into tag.
- Try to add a clap on every heacy beats. (We can simply define them as 2nd and 4th white lines,but there still exists exceptional cases where is quite of course.)And you should apply a specific system to your hitsound.
- Your timing section are not exactly IN the lines.Maybe the reason is that you've changed your offset.Select them like this:
SPOILER
Giive the difference offset in 'Move selected offsets by:',and then move.(No need to move a red line.)

Normal
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4) - Confuuuusing stacks to a normal diff.You seems to have tooooo many stacks in this normal diff.It is quite hard for beginners to recognize.
00:17:703 (1) - Soon for recovery time.
(00:35:281 (1) - Such time is at least,I think.)
01:23:328 (7) - Useless green line.
02:42:078 (1) - Toooooo long spinner.
03:48:640 (2) - Also stack,triccccky!!

Hard
00:28:718 (1,2) -A fast slider(1) and then wait one beat for (2) ? Kinda tricy.
(02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.)
01:18:054 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use slider instead and rearrange.Confusing to a hard diff.
02:23:796 (6) - new combo here please
02:56:843 (1,2) - Here is just okay.
03:47:703 (1) - Kinda soon for recovery time.Maybe you can just place it in the center of the area
04:02:703 (1) - ^

Insane
00:12:781 (6) - Curve it.For sake of flow.
01:10:085 (2) - You'd better remove this note because it plays really aaaaawkward.
01:12:781 (2,3) - Uncomfortable arrangement.Actually , the arrangement of your insane diff feels so, many times.
01:14:890 (7,8,9) - ^
01:20:749 (3) - Really strange to jump,just follow its former spacing.
01:27:078 (1) - Place this note 1/2 in advance,then it will play better,not so awkward than it was.
04:16:765 (2) - Terribly noisy.

That's all.

You have basic skills of mapping but still quite much work(espeacially on design) to do for 1st ranking.

Anyway,good luck.
Thank you for modding^^
Topic Starter
Dino99

Strawberry wrote:

request by mapper in game

来晚了不好意思 :3

[General]
可以把normal难度名改成easy
[Timing]
有几个绿线看上去没有对齐
比如 00:17:703 -
00:34:578 -
01:23:328 -
02:10:203 -
……
建议每个diff都检查一下


[Insane]
00:01:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里摆成直线不太美观?
00:28:484 - remove nc
00:28:953 - add nc
01:19:578 - ^
01:20:281 - remove nc
01:47:703 - add nc
01:48:874 - remove nc
01:49:578 - add nc

02:50:749 - 加一个circle?
03:00:124 - remove nc
03:00:828 - add nc
03:51:453 - ^
03:52:624 - remove nc
03:53:328 - add nc
03:55:203 - ^
03:56:374 - remove nc
03:56:374 - add nc

04:00:802 (11) - 这个note不在线上 可以把spinner往后一格然后把这个它移到线上 或者删除
04:01:999 - spinner在这里结束如何?然后在04:02:234 - 加一个circle

[Hard]
ar+1打起来更舒服些 毕竟是hard有点难度也比较好
01:31:062 - add nc
04:12:078 - ^


[Normal]
铺面没什么问题 音效不太懂:D 就不多嘴了 :)

祝早日rank XD
謝謝摟^^ fixed
Kurai
Rechecking ~

Normal
  1. Hitsounds : (I think this difficulty needs more work with hitsounds. These are just suggestion, if you disagree, you don't have to fix.)
    1. 00:20:046 - Add clap
    2. 00:20:984 (2) - Remove whistle ; Add clap
    3. 00:21:921 - Add clap
    4. 00:23:796 - Add clap
    5. 00:24:734 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    6. 00:25:671 - Add clap
    7. 00:27:546 - Add clap
    8. 00:28:484 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    9. 00:29:421 - Add clap
    10. 00:30:359 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    11. 00:31:296 - Add clap
    12. 00:31:999 - Add clap
    13. 00:35:515 (2) - Add whistle
    14. 00:37:390 (2) - Add whistle
    15. 00:39:265 (2) - Add whistle
    16. 00:40:671 - Add whistle
    17. 00:42:546 - Add whistle
    18. 00:44:421 - Add whistle
    19. 00:45:828 - Remove clap ; Add whistle
    20. 00:50:046 - Add clap
    21. 00:51:921 - Add clap
    22. 00:53:796 - Add clap
    23. 00:55:671 - Add clap
    24. 00:57:078 - Add whistle
    25. 00:57:546 - Add clap
    26. 00:59:421 - Add clap
    27. 01:00:828 - Add whistle
    28. 01:01:296 - Add clap
    29. 01:01:999 - Add whistle
    30. 01:03:171 (4) - Add clap
    31. 01:10:203 - Add whistle
    32. 01:13:484 - Add clap
    33. 01:14:421 - Add clap
    34. 01:16:296 - Add clap
    35. 01:18:171 - Add clap
    36. 01:18:640 - Add whistle
    37. 01:19:578 - Add whistle
    38. 01:20:046 (4) - Add clap
    39. 01:33:171 - Add clap
    40. 01:35:046 - Add clap
    41. 01:39:265 - Add clap
    42. 01:45:828 (2) - Add finish
    43. 01:49:109 (2,3) - Add claps
    44. 02:11:140 - Add whistle
    45. 02:13:015 - Add whistle
    46. 02:14:890 (2) - Add whistle
    47. 02:16:296 - Add clap
    48. 02:17:703 - Add whistle
    49. 02:18:171 - Add clap
    50. 02:19:578 - Add whistle
    51. 02:20:046 (5) - Add clap
    52. 02:21:921 - Add clap
    53. 02:22:156 (2) - Add whisles (On the whole slider)
    54. 02:23:796 (4) - Add clap
    55. 02:24:265 (5) - Add whistle
    56. 02:30:828 - Add whistle
    57. 02:32:234 - Add whistle
    58. 02:34:109 - Add clap
    59. 02:35:046 - Add clap
    60. 02:36:921 - Add clap
    61. 02:38:328 - Add whistle
    62. 02:38:796 (2) - Add clap
    63. 02:39:265 (4) - Add whistle
    64. 02:40:203 - Add whistle
    65. 02:46:296 - Add clap
    66. 02:48:171 - Add clap
    67. 02:49:578 - Add finish
    68. 02:50:046 - Add clap
    69. 02:51:921 - Add clap
    70. 02:53:796 - Add clap
    71. 02:55:671 - Add clap
    72. 02:57:546 - Add clap
    73. 02:59:187 - Add clap
    74. 03:01:296 - Add clap
    75. 03:03:171 - Add clap
    76. 03:05:046 - Add clap
    77. 03:06:921 (4) - Add clap
    78. 03:10:203 - Add finish
    79. 03:10:671 - Add clap
    80. 03:12:546 - Add clap
    81. 03:34:578 (1,1,1) - Add whistles
    82. 03:43:953 - Add finish
    83. 03:48:171 - Add clap
    84. 03:50:046 - Add clap
    85. 03:51:921 - Add clap
    86. 03:53:679 - Add clap
    87. 03:55:203 - Remove clap ; Add finish
    88. 03:55:671 - Add clap
    89. 03:57:546 - Add clap
    90. 04:03:171 - Add clap
    91. 04:05:046 - Add clap
    92. 04:06:921 - Add clap
    93. 04:08:796 - Add clap
    94. 04:10:203 - Add clap
    95. 04:12:546 - Add clap
  2. 00:42:546 (2) - Remove the reverse of this slider, it don't sounds well and it's not needed.
Hard
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. I think you have understood what I wanted to do with claps in Normal, so try to do something like what I did in Normal with claps in this difficulty (even if hitsounds are better in this difficulty, you can improve them !).
    2. 00:06:453 - Add finish
    3. 04:17:234 - Remove clap, it's not needed here and it sounds ugly.
  2. 03:02:937 - You need a note here to follow the music
  3. Please, try to get a background with a better quality
Insane
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. 01:13:484 (1,2) - Add claps
Work on your hitsounds and call me back after. I will do another recheck :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

Rechecking ~

Normal
  1. Hitsounds : (I think this difficulty needs more work with hitsounds. These are just suggestion, if you disagree, you don't have to fix.)
    1. 00:20:046 - Add clap
    2. 00:20:984 (2) - Remove whistle ; Add clap
    3. 00:21:921 - Add clap
    4. 00:23:796 - Add clap
    5. 00:24:734 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    6. 00:25:671 - Add clap
    7. 00:27:546 - Add clap
    8. 00:28:484 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    9. 00:29:421 - Add clap
    10. 00:30:359 - Remove whistle ; add clap
    11. 00:31:296 - Add clap
    12. 00:31:999 - Add clap
    13. 00:35:515 (2) - Add whistle
    14. 00:37:390 (2) - Add whistle
    15. 00:39:265 (2) - Add whistle
    16. 00:40:671 - Add whistle
    17. 00:42:546 - Add whistle
    18. 00:44:421 - Add whistle
    19. 00:45:828 - Remove clap ; Add whistle
    20. 00:50:046 - Add clap
    21. 00:51:921 - Add clap
    22. 00:53:796 - Add clap
    23. 00:55:671 - Add clap
    24. 00:57:078 - Add whistle
    25. 00:57:546 - Add clap
    26. 00:59:421 - Add clap
    27. 01:00:828 - Add whistle
    28. 01:01:296 - Add clap
    29. 01:01:999 - Add whistle
    30. 01:03:171 (4) - Add clap
    31. 01:10:203 - Add whistle
    32. 01:13:484 - Add clap
    33. 01:14:421 - Add clap
    34. 01:16:296 - Add clap
    35. 01:18:171 - Add clap
    36. 01:18:640 - Add whistle
    37. 01:19:578 - Add whistle
    38. 01:20:046 (4) - Add clap
    39. 01:33:171 - Add clap
    40. 01:35:046 - Add clap
    41. 01:39:265 - Add clap
    42. 01:45:828 (2) - Add finish
    43. 01:49:109 (2,3) - Add claps
    44. 02:11:140 - Add whistle
    45. 02:13:015 - Add whistle
    46. 02:14:890 (2) - Add whistle
    47. 02:16:296 - Add clap
    48. 02:17:703 - Add whistle
    49. 02:18:171 - Add clap
    50. 02:19:578 - Add whistle
    51. 02:20:046 (5) - Add clap
    52. 02:21:921 - Add clap
    53. 02:22:156 (2) - Add whisles (On the whole slider)
    54. 02:23:796 (4) - Add clap
    55. 02:24:265 (5) - Add whistle
    56. 02:30:828 - Add whistle
    57. 02:32:234 - Add whistle
    58. 02:34:109 - Add clap
    59. 02:35:046 - Add clap
    60. 02:36:921 - Add clap
    61. 02:38:328 - Add whistle
    62. 02:38:796 (2) - Add clap
    63. 02:39:265 (4) - Add whistle
    64. 02:40:203 - Add whistle
    65. 02:46:296 - Add clap
    66. 02:48:171 - Add clap
    67. 02:49:578 - Add finish
    68. 02:50:046 - Add clap
    69. 02:51:921 - Add clap
    70. 02:53:796 - Add clap
    71. 02:55:671 - Add clap
    72. 02:57:546 - Add clap
    73. 02:59:187 - Add clap
    74. 03:01:296 - Add clap
    75. 03:03:171 - Add clap
    76. 03:05:046 - Add clap
    77. 03:06:921 (4) - Add clap
    78. 03:10:203 - Add finish
    79. 03:10:671 - Add clap
    80. 03:12:546 - Add clap
    81. 03:34:578 (1,1,1) - Add whistles
    82. 03:43:953 - Add finish
    83. 03:48:171 - Add clap
    84. 03:50:046 - Add clap
    85. 03:51:921 - Add clap
    86. 03:53:679 - Add clap
    87. 03:55:203 - Remove clap ; Add finish
    88. 03:55:671 - Add clap
    89. 03:57:546 - Add clap
    90. 04:03:171 - Add clap
    91. 04:05:046 - Add clap
    92. 04:06:921 - Add clap
    93. 04:08:796 - Add clap
    94. 04:10:203 - Add clap
    95. 04:12:546 - Add clap
  2. 00:42:546 (2) - Remove the reverse of this slider, it don't sounds well and it's not needed.
Hard
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. I think you have understood what I wanted to do with claps in Normal, so try to do something like what I did in Normal with claps in this difficulty (even if hitsounds are better in this difficulty, you can improve them !).
    2. 00:06:453 - Add finish
    3. 04:17:234 - Remove clap, it's not needed here and it sounds ugly.
  2. 03:02:937 - You need a note here to follow the music
  3. Please, try to get a background with a better quality
Insane
  1. Hitsounds :
    1. 01:13:484 (1,2) - Add claps
Work on your hitsounds and call me back after. I will do another recheck :)
Reallly thank you for recheak^^ I have fixed the BG and some suggestion of you :D .......I have used the new hitsounds in clap @@ Because I think it 's better than before :)
Kurai
You did a great job with hitsounds, it's so much better now <3
Here is your well-deserved bubble ! :3

Bubbled ~
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

You did a great job with hitsounds, it's so much better now <3
Here is your well-deserved bubble ! :3

Bubbled ~
Thank you :) :D
Kurai
Don't upload your map when it is bubbled xD
whymeman
Couldn't find any serious issues in the mapset. Good job and here's your rank. Keep up the good work.
Topic Starter
Dino99

whymeman wrote:

Couldn't find any serious issues in the mapset. Good job and here's your rank. Keep up the good work.
Thank you^^
Bobo_old
Congrats! \:D/
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

Congrats! \:D/
Thanks~ :D
Kurai
Congratz on your first rank :3
Topic Starter
Dino99

KuraiPettan wrote:

Congratz on your first rank :3
Thank you :D
xierbaliti
恭喜第一张图rank \:D/
似乎来晚了XD
PsychoSkill
Congratz! (:

Fairy Tail ftw XD
Topic Starter
Dino99

xierbaliti wrote:

恭喜第一张图rank \:D/
似乎来晚了XD
謝啦@@
Topic Starter
Dino99

PsychoSkill wrote:

Congratz! (:

Fairy Tail ftw XD
:D :)
IkkiMinami
:) :)
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