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Hirano Aya - OPEN THE GATE

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Dino99
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Topic Starter
Dino99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月8日 at 下午 09:49:13

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: OPEN THE GATE
Source: Fairy Tail
Tags: Lucy Heartfilia Character Song
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6033kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.43 stars, 414 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 621 notes)
  3. Normal (2.62 stars, 254 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - OPEN THE GATE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st map~

Thank Bobo for BG

Hope you like it~

Enjoy!!!
Last edited by Dino99 , edited 107 times in total.
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
God Lucy's head looks small in this pic. ._.

Wow this is really good. :)
I really like this. ^^

-Normal-

03:03:899 - Add a clap :>
03:17:024 - ^
03:53:350 - This combo looks a little confusing for a Normal D:

-Hard-

02:12:807 - I'd move this combo down so it doesn't overlap the previous combo.
03:00:149 - I'd change this to a clap.
03:00:384 - ^

-Insane-

Change to 1/4 snapping.

The BG seems to be a snapshot from the anime, I'd change it to something with a better quality.
This perhaps? Idk...

00:22:304 - Add a note \:D/
00:22:773 - Delete this note if you made the change above.
02:48:548 - Add a note.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then move this slider 2 ticks forward.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then add a note here.
02:49:017 - If you made the 3 changes above, delete this note.
02:49:134 - If you made the 4 changes above, delete this note as well.
Here, this should help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136477
04:17:724 - Add the finish sound.

Great map bro ^^
Staaaar~
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Dino99

Bobo wrote:

God Lucy's head looks small in this pic. ._.

Wow this is really good. :)
I really like this. ^^

-Normal-

03:03:899 - Add a clap :>
03:17:024 - ^
03:53:350 - This combo looks a little confusing for a Normal D:

-Hard-

02:12:807 - I'd move this combo down so it doesn't overlap the previous combo.
03:00:149 - I'd change this to a clap.
03:00:384 - ^

-Insane-

Change to 1/4 snapping.

The BG seems to be a snapshot from the anime, I'd change it to something with a better quality.
This perhaps? Idk...

00:22:304 - Add a note \:D/
00:22:773 - Delete this note if you made the change above.
02:48:548 - Add a note.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then move this slider 2 ticks forward.
02:48:665 - If you made that change then add a note here.
02:49:017 - If you made the 3 changes above, delete this note.
02:49:134 - If you made the 4 changes above, delete this note as well.
Here, this should help: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/136477
04:17:724 - Add the finish sound.

Great map bro ^^
Staaaar~
Thank you :) I will try it!!
AIR315
645 posts
Joined May 2011
AIR315
Insane血扣的有點快.... :(

圖有一點亮，不過還可以接受:)

我覺得大致上做的很好

而且歌也很好聽

有ranked的水準了~~

希望可以早點被ranked

8-)

;)

:D

starrrrrrrrrrrr ~~~ :)
rinon2004
2 posts
Joined July 2009
rinon2004
:) :) :) :)
HARD有点稍微简单了哦~
背景图也希望能改进~
整体感觉还是不错的~
rinon2004
2 posts
Joined July 2009
rinon2004
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
星星给你了~ 记得改进~~！
要加油喔！
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Dino99

rinon2004 wrote:

:) :) :) :)
HARD有点稍微简单了哦~
背景图也希望能改进~
整体感觉还是不错的~
謝謝 :) 恩 :)
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Dino99

AIR315 wrote:

Insane血扣的有點快.... :(

圖有一點亮，不過還可以接受:)

我覺得大致上做的很好

而且歌也很好聽

有ranked的水準了~~

希望可以早點被ranked

8-)

;)

:D

starrrrrrrrrrrr ~~~ :)
3Q :)
Peace_old_1
83 posts
Joined May 2011
Peace_old_1
Add tags ''Lucy''

nice map~ :)



Your message is too short.
command6104
18 posts
Joined May 2009
command6104
嗨嗨!
我又來了~
從你做NORMAL一直玩到INSANE呢~
不錯XDD
趕快被RANKED吧!
這樣我才有分數XDD :D :D :D :D
kenchenk
1 post
Joined August 2011
kenchenk
做的不錯!!!
hard難易度調高一點就感覺很好了
希望你能早日被官方認證
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
request by mapper in mp

first

不要给无用的帖子kds

TO ALL DIFF
你的绿线都偏掉了 修正一下

<Normal>
除了有些silder造型不美以外没发觉什么大问题了

<Hard>

00:25:234 - add a note?

01:26:872 (5) - 拉到后面一根红线？

01:52:183 - add a note?

01:53:121 - ^

<Insane>

00:25:234 (1,2) - why jump?

01:51:480 (1,2,3,4) - 试着这样摆如何？（use roate 90 > or <)



go go/

另外你还需要一个easy diff :3
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Dino99

DeeN wrote:

request by mapper in mp

first

不要给无用的帖子kds

TO ALL DIFF
你的绿线都偏掉了 修正一下

<Normal>
除了有些silder造型不美以外没发觉什么大问题了

<Hard>

00:25:234 - add a note?

01:26:872 (5) - 拉到后面一根红线？

01:52:183 - add a note?

01:53:121 - ^

<Insane>

00:25:234 (1,2) - why jump?

01:51:480 (1,2,3,4) - 试着这样摆如何？（use roate 90 > or <)

[attachment=0:841d5]1.jpg[/attachment:841d5]

go go/

另外你还需要一个easy diff :3
謝指教 :)
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
22:58 <spboxer3> : 00:17:734 (1,1) - 這兩個重疊
22:58 <spboxer3> : Normal
22:59 <spboxer3> : 00:23:359 (1) - 這不好看
22:59 <spboxer3> : 00:24:765 (2) - ^
23:00 <spboxer3> : 00:45:858 (1,2,3) - 額 這我不知道怎麼吐槽...反正不好就對了:(
23:01 <12BARRY21> : :((
23:01 <spboxer3> : 01:36:481 (1,2,3,4) - 這節奏不適合放在normal
23:01 <12BARRY21> : :((
23:01 <spboxer3> : 01:49:605 (4,5) - ...也是複製的阿
23:01 <12BARRY21> : 挖勒:((
23:02 <spboxer3> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140921 嘗試下這種排法吧
23:02 <12BARRY21> : OK
23:02 <spboxer3> : 02:21:479 (1,2,3) - 恩 不建議這樣
23:03 <spboxer3> : 02:23:823 - 你可以在這排個spinner但是不要Break time
23:04 <12BARRY21> : 原來我做這麼爛阿........:(
23:04 <spboxer3> : 不是爛 你的是09年的 程度:((
23:05 <12BARRY21> : = =ㄆㄆ
23:05 <spboxer3> : 節奏大致上是正確的 但是排法需要多琢磨
-----------------------------------中間省略---------------------------------------
23:20 <spboxer3> : 好~那我幫你看摟
23:21 <12BARRY21> : 恩:))
23:21 <spboxer3> : 00:09:062 (3,4,6,7) - 對秤吧 會好看些
23:21 <12BARRY21> : 恩
23:22 <spboxer3> : 00:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - 轉的角度要對 這看起來並沒有做的很好((這位置啦
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:11:406 (1,2,3,4) - 這位置建議http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140934
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:25:234 (1,2) - 這跳太遠了
23:26 <spboxer3> : 00:39:764 (3,1,2) - 這之間的間距 不好
23:27 <spboxer3> : 00:44:919 (5,6) - 蓋到HP條了
23:27 <spboxer3> : 00:56:404 (4,5) - 間距
23:28 <spboxer3> : 01:15:153 (9,10,1,2) - 正方形排好一點
23:29 <12BARRY21> : :O
23:31 <spboxer3> : 01:47:145 (5,7) - 蓋住了 不是很好
23:34 <spboxer3> : 03:07:767 (5,7) - ^
23:34 <12BARRY21> : OK
23:35 <spboxer3> : 04:16:787 (2) - 聲音小聲些
23:36 <spboxer3> : 確實 你做的比你哥哥好些...
23:36 <12BARRY21> : .....
23:36 <spboxer3> : 但是你的map還是有蠻多地方要改的>_>
23:36 <12BARRY21> : >///<

IRC mod~~~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Please give kudos to the modder who help you improving your map only
sirjuyt
172 posts
Joined October 2010
sirjuyt
加油 ~
IRC Mod :D
log
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 你好~~@@
19:04 <sirjuyt> : hi ~
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 請問可以幫我modding......嗎>///<??
19:05 <sirjuyt> : 0 0 好阿
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔 貼
19:05 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35338
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 這
…
19:18 <sirjuyt> : 那我從normal開始講好了:D
19:18 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:19 <sirjuyt> : 前面你用了0.5x的綠線
19:19 <12BARRY21> : 恩...
19:20 <sirjuyt> : 然後distance也會跟著減半
19:20 <12BARRY21> : 對阿0.0...
19:21 <sirjuyt> : 所以願意的話把這裡DS調大一點?
19:22 <12BARRY21> : ..........恩......
19:26 <sirjuyt> : 好了?
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 等等0.0
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 剛接電話 = =
19:26 <12BARRY21> : SOR:((
19:26 <sirjuyt> : lol 嗯嗯
19:29 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:29 <12BARRY21> : 好摟
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 00:24:765 (2) -
19:30 <sirjuyt> : 這個頭改whistle? 這樣對到音效
19:30 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 好了
19:31 <sirjuyt> : 00:49:139 (6) - clap?
19:32 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:33 <sirjuyt> : 01:08:357 (3) - 這段有一個想法:3
19:33 <12BARRY21> : 恩?
19:34 <sirjuyt> : slider折返加clap
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 可以問你一件事嗎.........??
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 先說吧. .?
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 就是有可以一次動全部綠線的....選項嗎??
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 能全部移動一定量是行的
19:36 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:37 <sirjuyt> : timing setup 點一條綠線之後 在ctrl選擇其他條綠線
19:37 <12BARRY21> : 我看喔
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 謝摟
19:39 <12BARRY21> : 繼續八:))
19:39 <sirjuyt> : 嗯 剛剛說到折返加clap那裏
19:40 <sirjuyt> : 頭的clap阿 怎麼沒了
19:40 <12BARRY21> : !!
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔...
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 這樣嗎?
19:42 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯 o o
19:42 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:43 <sirjuyt> : 01:10:232 (2) - 然後把這個頭的clap去掉 這樣就有一個模式了
19:43 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:44 <12BARRY21> : 好了
(下略)
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Dino99

sirjuyt wrote:

加油 ~
IRC Mod :D
log
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 你好~~@@
19:04 <sirjuyt> : hi ~
19:04 <12BARRY21> : 請問可以幫我modding......嗎>///<??
19:05 <sirjuyt> : 0 0 好阿
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔 貼
19:05 <12BARRY21> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35338
19:05 <12BARRY21> : 這
…
19:18 <sirjuyt> : 那我從normal開始講好了:D
19:18 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:19 <sirjuyt> : 前面你用了0.5x的綠線
19:19 <12BARRY21> : 恩...
19:20 <sirjuyt> : 然後distance也會跟著減半
19:20 <12BARRY21> : 對阿0.0...
19:21 <sirjuyt> : 所以願意的話把這裡DS調大一點?
19:22 <12BARRY21> : ..........恩......
19:26 <sirjuyt> : 好了?
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 等等0.0
19:26 <12BARRY21> : 剛接電話 = =
19:26 <12BARRY21> : SOR:((
19:26 <sirjuyt> : lol 嗯嗯
19:29 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:29 <12BARRY21> : 好摟
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯
19:29 <sirjuyt> : 00:24:765 (2) -
19:30 <sirjuyt> : 這個頭改whistle? 這樣對到音效
19:30 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:31 <12BARRY21> : 好了
19:31 <sirjuyt> : 00:49:139 (6) - clap?
19:32 <12BARRY21> : OK
19:33 <sirjuyt> : 01:08:357 (3) - 這段有一個想法:3
19:33 <12BARRY21> : 恩?
19:34 <sirjuyt> : slider折返加clap
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 可以問你一件事嗎.........??
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 先說吧. .?
19:35 <12BARRY21> : 就是有可以一次動全部綠線的....選項嗎??
19:35 <sirjuyt> : 能全部移動一定量是行的
19:36 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:37 <sirjuyt> : timing setup 點一條綠線之後 在ctrl選擇其他條綠線
19:37 <12BARRY21> : 我看喔
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 恩恩
19:38 <12BARRY21> : 謝摟
19:39 <12BARRY21> : 繼續八:))
19:39 <sirjuyt> : 嗯 剛剛說到折返加clap那裏
19:40 <sirjuyt> : 頭的clap阿 怎麼沒了
19:40 <12BARRY21> : !!
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 等等喔...
19:41 <12BARRY21> : 這樣嗎?
19:42 <sirjuyt> : 嗯嗯 o o
19:42 <12BARRY21> : 恩
19:43 <sirjuyt> : 01:10:232 (2) - 然後把這個頭的clap去掉 這樣就有一個模式了
19:43 <12BARRY21> : 我看看喔
19:44 <12BARRY21> : 好了
(下略)
謝謝你摟~~~~ :) :D ;)
Deye
163 posts
Joined August 2009
Deye
很好的圖,不過還是覺得你的hard和insane簡單了......你的hard其實也就相當於normal+,可能還要差一點;而你的insane貌似就是你目前的hard加大了間距和slider速度......大膽的往裡加串吧,沒關係的!(誤

一個小建議:不一定要左右對稱,也不一定要橫平豎直,有時候隨意擺放效果也很不錯,玩著好玩的關鍵是----玩著順手
個人喜歡點對稱,這個東西看自己喜好了,自己覺得玩起來順手,其實也就差不多了.

我的建議是你可以盡可能的加難你的insane,hard可以加大一些間距,沒有問題.
insane加難不是指加更多的跳或者更快的slider,現在你目前的速度就蠻合適,你可以試著去加串到裏面,這樣玩起來趣味也很足.

[General]

offset:865

[Normal]

01:36:481 (1,2,3,4)這裡不如跟著唱調走.兩種方式---
簡單的:01:36:481~01:37:184; 01:37:418~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 分別設三個slider.
稍難的:01:36:481; 01:37:418 設置兩個note, 01:36:715~01:37:184; 01:37:653~01:38:121; 01:38:356~01:38:824 設置三個slider.
01:39:293 (6)折返slider到01:39:762結束.
01:40:231 (1)add a note, new combo.
01:40:699 (1)remove new combo.
02:57:103 (1,2,3,4)同01:36:481.

[Hard]

01:19:606 (7)這個note距離上一個稍遠,故意為之么?
01:52:183 (2,3)remove note, 將後面的slider提前到note位置, 并折返一次, 試試看.
03:12:805 (2,3,4)同上.

[Insane]

00:47:967 (1~8)可以適當加大一點間距,滿有趣的.
01:52:418 (3,4)完全重疊不是特別好的一個做法,適當錯開一些,難度不差,卻可以不遮擋.
03:38:117 (5)這個slider折返一下,試試看.
節奏很棒的難度.

好吧,我承認之前和別人的mod搞混了...
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Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Mura_77
因为只看了Insane难度所以就只给I难度提点建议

00:30:858 和 00:31:561 这两个Slider能否稍微圆润一点XD

00:35:311到01:06:248稍微空缺有点大,希望增加少许notes&sliders,详细如下:
"Notes:
00:36:717; 00:38:592; 00:46:795; 00:51:717; 00:53:592; 00:59:217;
Slider
01:02:498 的 note 希望替换成 slider "
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
mjw5150
as your req~

[General]
每个难度的绿线都没对齐呐
01:24:528 - preview point放在这试试?

[Normal]
音效方面 加clap的地方可以参照下Insane的(有些该加的地方没加
01:21:481 (1) - 在01:24:294结束?
02:42:103 (1) - 在02:44:916结束?

[Hard]
音效方面同normal
00:30:272 (5) - 左移1格?
01:23:747 (2) - 移到01:23:708
01:17:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议用统一的spacing~
02:44:369 (2) - 移到02:44:330
03:42:101 (3) - 移下1格?
03:55:225 (8) - 在03:55:694结束 然后在03:56:163加个note?

[Insane]
00:35:077 - 加个note?
00:38:241 - ^
00:40:702 (1) - 提前1/4?(换到00:40:585
00:41:874 (1) - 上移1格?
00:49:608 - 加finish
00:50:076 - 加clap
00:51:951 - ^
00:53:826 - ^
00:55:701 (1) - 提前1/4?
00:55:701 - 加clap
00:57:576 - ^
00:59:451 - ^
01:01:326 - ^
01:03:201 - ^
01:05:076 - ^
01:05:779 - ^
00:50:076 - 01:06:482 这部分都可以在2、4白线上加clap呐~
01:13:161 (3) - 加clap然后移除后面4的clap?
01:14:450 - 加clap
01:16:325 - ^
01:20:075 - ^
01:21:481 - new combo?
01:26:872 - 加个note?
01:36:715 - newcombo?
02:10:698 - 加个note?
02:13:862 - ^
02:21:245 (1,2,3) - 都往下移1格?
02:27:104 - 02:32:494 这部分没加clap 还是故意不加的?(建议在这部分的第四
根白线上加上clap~
02:47:494 - 加个note?
03:45:734 - ^
03:49:366 - ^
03:59:444 (2) - 移下1格?
04:16:787 - 这里没必要用1/8吧?

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